9 TIPS PARA MAGPAIYAK NG READERS | How to Make Your Readers Cry
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- Опубліковано 29 сер 2024
- Paano nga ba magpaiyak ng mga readers? We all want to feel that satisfaction that we are an effective writer. Sa video na ito ay ibahahagi ko sa inyo ang 9 writing tips kung paano ma-evoke ang emotions ng inyong mga readers.
The purpose of this video is to avoid the stereotype mindset, "Gusto kong magpaiyak ng readers kaya papatay ako ng character", because YOU CAN MAKE A READERS CRY THRU YOUR STORY NOT JUST BY ONLY KILLING A CHARACTER.
Watch this video until the end to find out the secrets!
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Hello, guys!! Ang daming early birds! 'Yung mga tips na nabanggit ko rito ay proven and tested ko na sa story ko na Wake Up, Dreamers (bawal spoiler), 'yung story na iniyakan ng mga readers ko kahit wala pang ending hehe. Sana makatulong itong video na 'to sa inyo. Baka naman!!! Hahaha.
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Thank you ate Demdem ♥️
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Hi ate Demi. Can I ask kung saan poba pwede mag edit ng Chapters?
Thank you ate demi it really helps!
"Don't just randomly kill characters"
Attack on titan: "hehe character ded"
As a big fan of Attack on Titan, I don't think Isayama sensei is just randomly picking a character to die. Kumbaga his way of killing minor/major characters ay way to show the viewers the inevitable casualties of war.
@@TalesofDemi Good point, It just seems funny for me when the character dies pretty often. Btw, I love the series and I'm not attacking it in anyway.
Still mad at gabi tho
@@miyokaida AHAHAHAHAHAHA walang move-on2 dito
I really love ate demi's background a lots of book and ofcourse There's Jesus💚☁✨
Thank you!
'papatay ako ng Characters'
sicario join the group
There's no specific way para makapag paiyak ng isang reader. Hindi ang pagpatay ng character ang solution doon. Hindi naman kasi lahat ng characters na pinapatay, nakakaiyak na. Lalo na kapag napaka- unnecessary ng isang pagkamatay ng character. Just simply express urself through ur character's voice. Isapuso mo lang yung mga sinusulat mo. Kapag kasi nanggagaling sa puso mo, the reader can feel a lot of emotions in just a simple words.Yung tipong feel mo yung goosebumps kahit sa simpleng salita lang. That's how a writer express herself through writing.
Tysm for this advice! I'm writing my 2nd book on Wattpad and I'm having a hard time🤍
Basta nauna ng umiyak ang writer matik na yan madadamay na ang mga readers, niyahaha 😅😂
I need this girl to be my teacher, she explains all in detailed!!! Love this!
Happy to help!
"Hindi totoo Yung mga fictional character"
Ouch ate demi nasampal ako Ng katotohanan
HAHHA 👉😞👈
Ilag namn pero natamaan padin
Suggest content: how to make a conflict thank youuu ateee
i'm currently writing a story, i finished the whole plot, like it's all planned out, the problem was how i was going to deliver it as the chapters go on.
thank you for this, ate demi 😭🥺
same sis. 😭
Hala same.. Yung feeling na you can't break down your plot in to a good scene or phrases.. 🤦♀️
Panoorin mo po yung isa pang vlog ni Ate about sa story frame ata yung tawah don
Unti-untiin niyo lang po yung scene. zdi niyo po mamalayan na nagawa niyo na pala 💖
Start ka magsulat ng mga few sentences,
“He came back, and there was a greedy look in his eyes now which ought to have alarmed her, but did not.”
(I got that line from Peter Pan)
So the next thing you would do, gagawa ka na naman ng another sentence. Pwedeng previous or ahead ng line na ‘yan. It would be easy since you have your outline.
True po sa Wake Up, Dreamers parang nakarelate ako kay Garnet huhu one of my fave inspired series 🤧😍
THANK YOU!
"Playing with their emotions"
Ouch gege
Gulat din ako eh Hahahha
"don't just randomly kill characters."
me: **intense sweating** hehe... I'll just pretend I didn't hear that.. *kills of character with ease*
When ate demi said "Alam naman natin na hindi totoo ang mga fictional character."
Opo!Tama na!Alam ko na huhu:
Lol, wanna make readers cry?
Punch them
HAHAHA lol may digital punch na ba?
Ghost • 1 month ago Siguro HAHAHAHA
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Hi po atee, I have a suggestion: How to narrate a story better.
Di ko po kasi ma express sa words ng maayos yung mga naiisip ko, ang dami kong naiisip na plots pero nasasayang lang dahil hanggang outlines lang kaya kong gawin. May tips ka po ba sa oag na-narrate?
i need this badly :
Same.. I wanna know din.
noted!
waaaah thank you ateee
omygod, waitingggg
Vlog suggestion: How to make your readers laugh
Thank you po sa mga helpful vlogs niyoooooo
siguro pag Teacher ka po, magiging paborito ka ng mga students hshshshs. Detailed talaga yung pag explain po per topic.
Whenever i lose hope or feel insecure about my writing, dito talaga ako pumupunta e HAHAHA and then the next thing i know, i'm writing again. You're an inspiration ate Demi, thank youuu❤
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When ate demi said "huwag mong pagkatiwalaan yung mga ganitong ngiti ng mga writers, iiyak ka dito. " I laugh to the max that my mother start giving me suspicious look HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
Sa So, This is Youth talaga kahit walang na- *toot* don, napaiyak ako huhu super gandaaa 😍 akala ko si Goldy maaano pero hindi naman mwehehe 😂
HEHEEHEHE dibaaa
LEGIT TOH ATE DEMI.
grabe yung iyak ko sa STIY graduation huhuhu sobrang nakakaiyak yung kantahan nila at award para kay golda. ito ang libro na gusto kong bilhin sa susunod( ˘ ³˘)♥
yes huhu ಥ_ಥ lalo na sa last few chaps kahit (SPOILER!!!) nung bumibili si Golda ng kabaong ಥ_ಥ
@@otmjk4061 2ruth tapos sinabayan pa ng kanta nila na forever young aaaaaaaack am not crying, ur crying(╥﹏╥)
Nung nakita ko yung title ng vid sa notif napanganga ako HAHA
ANU YUN SI SIC HUHU 😭
I didn’t skip ads🤧 and the last one had me a 5mins!! But it’s alright for u ateeee🥺❤️
Im a kid And I really want to make a story even tho in just my dream! Thx po in the advice!😊
Ate Demi, pwede po bang magtanong, gusto ko lang po malaman kung gaano katagal bago sumikat yung story ng mga aspriring writers palang? Base on your experience po before bago ka naging published author. Thank you po! Sana masagot❤️
Hi, feeling close ako, sorry, but for me ang kailangan ay unique and also promotion na rin ng story
Thank you, Ate Dems! Hahah. Actually, pumatay din ako ng characters hindi dahil para iyakin yunb readers pero call iyon ng plot hihi.
Thanks ulit, Ate. Kasi kailangan talaga namin ito lalo na ko sa susunod kong novel. 💖
Best of luck!
At first,balak ko talagang pumatay ng main character ko sa story na ginagawa ko but after i watch this, may mas better akong naisip na plot. Thanks ate dem
I’m currently writing a story,I need this! Thank you so much for inspiring and helping me!!!
This really helps me a lot, coz my ongoing story is kinda tragic. Medyo bloody at brutal🙄. Pero doon tlga mag grogrow ang isang character. Just like Naruto. Medyo mahirap eemphasize ang death ng isang character, sana magkaroon ng Video like this in the near future 😁😁😁
A month ago I've read the Wake Up Dreamers and it inspires me a lot and yeah I also cried because my boyfriend died and it's no other than Cole the weirdo,but I still love you ate Demi hahaha :>
I've learned a lot po ate demi. Thank you for your aspiring words. Nakakadagdag po kayo ng confidence na makapagsulat ang ibang tao.😊💖
Request ko po ate na video po kung paano hindi tamading magsulat. Kasi ako po minsan lagi-lagi po akong tinatamad pag nagsusulat tapos ang dami ko pa pong naiisip na stories na susulatin pa. Hehehe. I hope you can help me!😊
Walang anuman!
Binge watching ate Demi's writing tips. At syempre hindi ako nagsskip ng ads kasi sobrang deserve niya iyoooon dahil napakarami niyang natuturo sa mga viewers.
Can I suggest ate? Hehehe, pwede po tips kung paano tapusin ang isang story? Some writers are just good on prologue but not on epilogue 😂✌️
"alam naman naten hindi totoo ang mga fictional character ang mga fictional worlds"
awts gege iyq✨
Guys let's support Ate Demi! Let's watch her videos, learn from it and do not skip ads😉
Am I the only one aspiring writer who doesn't want to kill a character in the story ? I just like it to have a confusing,heavy and will make you question yourself about it .
When ate Demi started talking about 'relatable charac.' First thing that comes to my mind is Wake Up, Dreamers. I really relate in the 4 of them and I think that's one of the reasons why I cried, but of course it's also because she's a really great writer. Lovelots!!!
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yun talaga yon eh 👉😩
HAHAHAHAHA ang cute!
Parang di ko kayang pumatay ng characters. Imagine, napamahal ka na sa kanila, ilang months mo sila nadevelop lalo na yung character's arc nila.😭😭😭 I really can't.
You're right po Ate Dhemyyyy huhu! Kasi ako as a reader, I'm wondering why always crying while reading Nicholas Sparks stories (int'l author) as in kahit nakakakilig ang scene ang sarap lang talaga umiyak hahahaahhah baka baliw na ako nitoooo
Na-immune na po talaga ako sa tragic HAHAHAHAHA chareng
natawa ako sa t-shirt HAHAHAHA yes you're my favourite writer. i badly need this
hahahaha totoo ba, thank you!!
l open my Yt app, because l wanted to read story in youtube. So, one of your videos show up in my “UA-cam home” and it looks interesting, and i click it. It’s not just interesting it’s very helpful. I didn’t expect that all your videos will guide me to write a better story.
Natawa ako bigla sa "Ako 'yung teacher na hindi nababayaran" HAHAHAHAHAHA
PROLOGUE pa lang ako pero pinatay ko na agad ang ANTAGONIST kaya masaya na ang kwento wala ng kalaban. 🤣
omg I need thisss HAHAHAHA thank you so much ate demi!
You're welcome!!!
Sa mga story ni AnakniRizal na nabasa ko.. hindi lang niya tinouch ang puso ko kinuha pa ang bahagi ng puso ko.😭🤣☺️
after watching this, ginanahan ako mag update sa AU na ginagawa ko ^•^
Wahhh ate Demi thanks for this video!! I was planning to make a tragic story yet I don't know how to make readers cry... thanks po huhuhuhu😭💗
Sana nakatulong!
I can relate on what Ate Demi says about killing the character doesn’t mean nakakaiyak na siya because I am a romance tragic writer and not all of my readers cry some just felt sad.
The point that ate Demi say that "fiction was not real" actually, it's make us cry😭
Badly, we fell inlove in a fictional character 😭
Kaya minsan pinakasalan mo na lang sa imagination mo yung fictional character kasi hindi sila totoo sa totoong buhay 😂😂
EARLY ULIII FKDKLDNENE
ala pang 3minutes as video natamaan na agad-
ngayon tingnan natin kung gagana ba ang tips ni ate demi o hindi
Hala, mukhang maraming gustong sumunid sa yapak ni Sicario. Lmaoooo~
Pero speaking of the group, Ate Demi, suuuper dami kong natutunan doon. Thank you poooo🤧
I really like how you explain Ate Demi. Effective talaga lahat ng tips niyo tapos madali lang maintindihan ng lahat.
Pwede na pang merch Yung t-shirt
Yup, merch talaga itu hehehehe.
@@TalesofDemi san available ate?
Thank you teacher Demi, nanood ulit ako ng videos mo about writing and now my idea na namang pumapasok ng kaalaman sa utak ko 😊😊😅 thanks a lot
Pamahalin mo muna yung mga readers sa main characters at sa ibang Characters at pag parang alam mo na pwede mo na sila biglain. Just my thoughts
tip #9 is my first goal sa pagsusulat ❤❤❤ thank you ate demi!
No probS!
mygaasshshhsjs!
Wake up! Dreamers grabe ang iyak ko ditooo.. Nakaka inspired talaga.. Love love ate Demiii
Tanggalin sa mindset ang pagpatay ng character*
I remember kuya Sic Santos.
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Si Ate Demi yung kilala kong wattpad writer na ang goal ay magparami ng magagaling na published author. Thanks for your brilliant contents. Maraming aspiring writers na natututo sa inyo. Thank you so much❤️
Para sa mga susunod na henerasyon! :)
Thanks ate demi for this makakatulong to sa upcoming stories ko
Suggest: How to make/write story description hehehe, medyo nahihirapan kasi ako dito mwehihihi
LAHAT PO NG TIPS NA NARINIG KO SA INYO AY GINAGAWA KO PO ATE DEMI.....PRAMIS PO...NATUTUWA PO AKO KASI DI KO PA PO TO NAPAPANOOD PERO GINAGAWA KO NA PO😭💞YUNG THEME PO NG SINUSULAT KO IS LOVING YOURSELF AND FRIENDSHIP PO.😊💞 IM WRITING MY STORY PO FOR THOSE WHO HAVE THIS PROBLEM ABOUT THEIR PHYSICAL APPEARAANCE ATE DEMI💞😭😊
Hello ate demi I want to request po sana. Kasi hanggang ngayon nahihirapan parin po ako pano mag-introduce ng mga characters in right way. Thank you po, PADAYON
Thank you for this Ate Demi! Isa ka talaga sa nag-inspire at patuloy na nag-iinspire sa akin magsulat. ❤🥺
Walang anuman!
May skl ako as a reader. Lagi kong sinasabi na one's death shouldn't be the basis ng pagiging isang "greAt bOOk" pati yung isang book, di kailangan ng death para lang magiging nakakaiyak. TBH, MINSAN INSTEAD NA MALUNGKOT KA, YOU'LL BE ANNOYED LANG KASE SOBRANG SUDDEN NG DEATH AT NAGMUKHANG SININGIT LANG.
After stressing myself last year, reading almost hundred and twenty novels hahahahahaga. I realised na wala yan sa death o sa kung ano pa man. If it made u feel something, to the point na feeling mo nasa mismong story ka, witness ka sa character, AAAAAHHHHHH YEESSS.
Naiiyak ako dahil sa frustration mostly about sa personality ng characters. Unfairness din katulad nung sa TKAM hahaha. And also, too much joy, nakakaiyak din.
Ayon lang naman skl.
For me,,, nasa way yun ng pagsulat sa story.(｡・//ε//・｡) Yung nalilipat emotions ng characters sa 'yo and such haha.
Ate Demi: Kaya mong magpaiyak ng walang pinapatay na character.
Cole: okay lang ako. okay lang talaga
Love you ate:))
Thankyou sa mga tips ate demiii!!! Stay safe always, loveyou♥
Welcome! Stay safe din!
kung magpaiyak ako ng story ay hindi naman ko pinatay ang character kundi ang past ng isang character ko
Papatay ako ng mga character.
Unang pumasok sa isip ko si SIC!
Hindi man totoo ang mga fictional characters pero totoo ang feelings natin. Waaahhhh legittt
Ate demi spoiling us with her tips and videos,, we stan thank you master🧡
**her HEHEEH WELCOME
Tales of Demi hala nagkamali HAHAHAH epekto ng online class jk , salamat master
I WILL DO ATE DEMI ALL THE TIPS...MAY HALO NA PO KASING DRAMA YUNG SINUSULAT KO PO NGAYON...ROMCOM PO KASI GENRE KO KASO KAILANGAN MAHALUAN NG DRAMA 😭😊💞 LEADING LADY KO PO MADAMING WEAKNESS AT FLAWS...😊💞
Pwede kang magpa-iyak ng readers ng hindi pumapatay ng characters👏
The best killer: OwwSic HAHAHA char po.😂
Omg i really need this to my new story ... Thank you ate demi.
i want to marry a fictional character because i love him. love is a feeling right? so it will be real? 🤩
Malapit ko na po mabili ang wake up, dreamers. Matagal ko na pong gusto mabasa 🤧🤧 kaya lang kulang pa coins ko. Excited na akong basahin yun.
Habang pinapanood ko 'to naglalaro sa isip ko yung TPT Trology kasi ganitong ganito yung ginawa ni Ate Demi kaya hindi na ako magtataka kung bakit sa tinagal tagal nang panahon na nabasa ko na siya, meron parin yung impact nito sakin, like nanatili siya. At yung mga bagong stories ni Ate Dems are very close to reality in a light and soft way na maaabsorb nang lahat bata man o matanda. Okay napahaba na haha. Thank you Ate Demi and as always God Bless to all!
OH NO I FEEL LIKE I WANT TO WRITE RIGHT NOW! THANKS FOR THIS! IT WILL HELP ME ALOT❤️
Tamang tama nasa masakit na chapter na ako HAHAHAHAHAHA thanks po!
Yung feeling na kailangan kong patayin yung isang character ko pero ang sakit hahaha!. Minahal ko e.
grabe ate demi, nung unang nood ko ng isang vlog mo ay 1k pa lang sub mo, pero mas lumalaki na ngayon ang family natin! yehey, we did it! congrats, ate demi! btw, thank you for ur wonderful topic!! u don't know how it helps a lot. ♥️
Thank you!!
omg, ur always welcome ate demiiii!! 🤗
Hinintay ko talaga ko. Thank you ate Demi, sana makatulong to saming mga aspiring writer
Hopefully!
Request lang po, how to make a beautiful plot twist?
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Salamat dito favorite naming writer charr 😉 kayamanang binahagi mo, kagamitang makakatulong sa tulad ko'ng aspiring writer din na maraming gustong ipakita sa lahat na sumasalamin sa buhay dito sa mundong ibabaw. Again salamat paboritong writer namin na may natamis na ngiti, mala perlas na mata at mala anghel na diwa sa katawang lupa ☺
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Yung sa may bandang kanan ni Ate Demi 😆😆
It's raining updates from authorrrs!
Ayaw ko sana magsulat ng story na nakakaiyak pero parang nagdalawang isip po tuloy ako hehe.
Thank you Ate Demi! 💖
I love the shirt Haha thank you ate Demi alam ko na ngayon kung pano magpaiyak ng reader ❤️
Thank you haha! Now you know XD
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Highly appreciated!
SI ORANGE UNG IMPOSTOOOOORRR joke lang EARLY SQUAD! Thank you ate Demi!
hahaha eyyy early squad
Omayyy, i love thissssss... I'm a tragic writer haha. Baka naman, Heartttt haha
Haha pag tragic writer matik pumapatay yan xD
Oo pero hindi abuso Haha! Waaahhh Thank you for noticing me Ate Demiiii!🥺
ano po name niyo sa watty?
Im inspiring writing at sobrang dami ko pong natutunan sa inyo pinaiiponan ko po mabili yung books niyo😊
Sobrang nakakatulong ate tragic and romance po kasi ang genre ko salamat ate demiiii,
Andami ko talagang natututunan sa Author na to.Worth it to stan 💕
Doon palang sa hindi totoo yung mga fictional characters nakakaiyak na. Huhu.
Mamaya ko na ‘to papanoorin dahil maliligo muna ako.Nandito lang ako para sa maagang attendance hahaha
HAHAHA i see what u did there
Play with their emotions. Yown oh.
Saving this for the future, HAHAHA
Super hinintay ko to ateee!! Goodluck and Godbless ate demi💕
Thanks!