SAMPUNG UTOS NG PAGSUSULAT NG KWENTO | 10 Commandments of Writing a Story (Writing Tips #5)

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  • @TalesofDemi
    @TalesofDemi  4 роки тому +49

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    • @hirsm5304
      @hirsm5304 4 роки тому

      Can I ask Can you write A oneshot story?

    • @kingjohnwomanizer777
      @kingjohnwomanizer777 3 роки тому

      Ate paano PO mag latag NG thrill sa isang story doon PO kasi ako talagang nahihirapan

    • @bryanabanilla3965
      @bryanabanilla3965 3 роки тому

      Pwede magpatulong? May gagawin sana akong kwento

  • @plazs9405
    @plazs9405 4 роки тому +78

    "Don't Plagiarize!"
    True! But also keep in mind that 'nothings original.'
    Dont stress yourself out too much. We can't avoid similarities. As long as were confident that we are the AUTHOR of the story, we can publicly post or publish it.
    Dontchawori!

  • @jizzasterrr6185
    @jizzasterrr6185 4 роки тому +153

    10 Commandments of writing
    1. Thou shall not plagiarize
    2. Thou shall kill the cliches,be brave to be different
    3. Thou shall not stop reading
    4. Thou shall edit your work
    5. Thou shall have a goal
    6. Thou shall write what you love
    7. Thou shall not kill the characters needlessly
    8. Thou shall focus, avoid distractions
    9. Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story
    10. Thou shall be professional
    Sinulat ko pa yan sa notebook ko HAAHAHAHA

    • @jizzasterrr6185
      @jizzasterrr6185 3 роки тому

      Ay hala naka 74 akong likes hahahah

    • @jizzasterrr6185
      @jizzasterrr6185 3 роки тому

      @@akotosinatoynamahalnamahal6633 yung pinakalive na love nilang character no? Hahaha

    • @misspetmalu501
      @misspetmalu501 3 роки тому +2

      Deserve nito ng heart ni Ate Demi. Yass!

    • @jizzasterrr6185
      @jizzasterrr6185 3 роки тому

      @@misspetmalu501 yhieee

    • @peachykim8085
      @peachykim8085 3 роки тому

      Tinamaan talaga ako sa 8 at 9

  • @Angelinasisi
    @Angelinasisi 4 роки тому +49

    Relate naman po doon sa after a months, mapapasabi ka na lang ng “ay, sinulat ko ‘to?” HAHAHAHA 😂

  • @kristalt.7404
    @kristalt.7404 4 роки тому +142

    Attendance tayo, guys!
    *Demistics say present*
    ↓ ✋💜😂

  • @charmainecubacub
    @charmainecubacub 4 роки тому +118

    Ate Demi: 8th commandment "Thou shall focus and avoid distractions".
    Me: aray
    Ate Demi: 9th commandment, "Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story.
    Me: *died*
    lol

  • @kayceee_8697
    @kayceee_8697 3 роки тому +15

    When ate Demi said "walang mali kung ang goal mo ay maging sikat." It touch my heart. Kase parang nakakuha ako ng support. Thank you po.

  • @mailuvstbz
    @mailuvstbz 4 роки тому +29

    Proud for being part of Demistics!

  • @Jasmin-rd7oc
    @Jasmin-rd7oc 4 роки тому +10

    Totoo yung sa editing AHAHA! Lols, natatawa na lang ako sa sinulat ko almost 3 years ago? I'm actually thankful na may mga nagbasa noon AHAHA

  • @maxsh545
    @maxsh545 4 роки тому +78

    Ate Demi:"Andito na naman ang iyong paboritong writer."
    Me: Luh pano mo nahulaan yun?

  • @johnvincentlazo8272
    @johnvincentlazo8272 4 роки тому +9

    2 years ago I started writing the first 8 chapters of my story, in that time super proud ako sa sarili ko dahil finally hindi na lang pang prologue at chapter 1 ang inabot. Then, dahil sa busy sa school, I decided to stop.
    This quarantine, since wala namang ginagawa , finally natapos ko na ang story na matagal ko nang ninanais. Pero ang experience ko sa editing phase ay nakakastress at nakakatuwa, especially sa first 8 chapters na sinulat ko. Ang awkward ng mga pinagsasasabi ko roon!!😄😄In the end iniba ko lahat.
    SKL, dahil natatawa talaga ako sa experience kong iyon.

  • @jay.hayabuza013
    @jay.hayabuza013 4 роки тому +25

    "Thou shall edit your work."
    Madugo talaga sa madugo 😂
    Mula sa kalakihan hanggang kaliit-liitan gagalawin 😂
    Developmental, line, copy, proofreading 😂😂😂
    May apo na eyebags ko di pa ako tapos mag-edit 😂😂😂

  • @francianah
    @francianah 4 роки тому +19

    "Wag papatay ng character dahil trip mo lang" tinamaan si kuya sekaryo dun pati baboy pinatay🙄🤣

  • @Nix_life
    @Nix_life 2 роки тому

    Yes Tama, dahil kapag magsusulat ka ng story na hindi mo naman gusto, merong chance na mawawalan ka ng gana na ipagpatuloy ang pagsulat sa nobela nayun.

  • @alienated8116
    @alienated8116 4 роки тому +14

    "Kung ayaw mong maging published author, edi wag mo na lang i-edit." HAHAHAHAAA

  • @queenrhae
    @queenrhae 4 роки тому

    Yung binabasa kong author, madaming on-goings pero lahat natatapos. Kahit matagal pero natatapos! Sana all ❤❤

  • @generinemaegonzales1833
    @generinemaegonzales1833 4 роки тому +19

    Ate Demi: "Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story."
    Me: "I considered myself as one of them actually. Two stories ongoing and one draft. HAHA."

  • @taiga9856
    @taiga9856 4 роки тому +3

    Jenna Moreci ng Pinas! ❤️❤️❤️

  • @gayleskye
    @gayleskye 2 роки тому

    BAT PARANG MAS GUSTO KO MALAMAN SKIN CARE NI ATE DEMI, CHARROT! THIS IS A VERY BIG HELP, ESPECIALLY SA MGA BEGINNERS HIHI

  • @jellreydeemacadaya7077
    @jellreydeemacadaya7077 3 роки тому +1

    Whoahh,I've read your stories in wattpaaad!

  • @nilayadnika8614
    @nilayadnika8614 4 роки тому

    ..distraction at hanggang sa simula hindi na tinatapos ang story..the best enemy of mine😅

  • @allaboutkpop6134
    @allaboutkpop6134 4 роки тому +1

    I really love your contents

  • @Nix_life
    @Nix_life 2 роки тому +1

    Ang Dami kung tawa sa EDITING na part hahaha nabitawan ko tuloy ang Plato na hinihugasan HAHAH, totoo nga yunh editing relate😭😸🖤🖤🖤

  • @gulfkanawut8326
    @gulfkanawut8326 3 роки тому +4

    Don't be a copy. Be a trendsetter instead. Padayon, manunulat! ❤️

  • @elbamarie
    @elbamarie 4 роки тому

    nagka-goosebumps ako sa 7th commandment (thou shall not kill the characters needlessly). naalala ko ang salamisim.

  • @cruhcrum2862
    @cruhcrum2862 4 роки тому +9

    "Isulat mo kung ano yung mahal mo, kahit 'di ka mahal isulat mo."~ dito ako tinamaan😃👈

  • @keyelesaricaforte4842
    @keyelesaricaforte4842 3 роки тому

    Because of you ate Demi parang mas na inspire pa talaga akong magsulat😘😍

  • @dar8085
    @dar8085 4 роки тому

    Marami na akong ideas HAHAHAHHAHA Ewan ko pero palaging maabot yung panibagong ideas

  • @roxanndorothyfaithperez6111
    @roxanndorothyfaithperez6111 4 роки тому

    Ofcourse!! TPT it is. Very mind blowing story hahahaha. Grabe, nung binasa ko to hindi ko tinigilan kasi hindi sya predictable!

  • @luxzeusvillacruel5094
    @luxzeusvillacruel5094 4 роки тому +3

    Ako lang ba 'yong pinaka-fave part ang editing? BWAHAHA.

  • @bsce-ariascharryletteb.7721
    @bsce-ariascharryletteb.7721 4 роки тому

    Hi ate! I'm a writer from wattpad. Undiscovered po ako. Dami ko pong natutunan sa inyo. I love you po! Thank you for all your tips. I learned so much🖤

  • @Rosinemmon
    @Rosinemmon 4 роки тому +1

    As an aspiring writer, this is so relatable af. Thank you ate demii for this vlog take care po

  • @niceone296
    @niceone296 4 роки тому

    Not gonna skip the ads.

  • @carmelaalexa7628
    @carmelaalexa7628 3 роки тому

    I actually don't read her story, but now? I'm reading it, she's worth to stan🖐🏻😭

  • @gwenjosephineautentico2912
    @gwenjosephineautentico2912 4 роки тому +1

    Can't wait to read her books ❤

  • @vrccrd
    @vrccrd 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you ate Demiii!! Keep writing and more stories to come!! Love you.

  • @pamsmith6701
    @pamsmith6701 4 роки тому

    Ang ganda ng boses mo ate yung malumanay lang talagang makikinig ka.

  • @MAFUYUSIMP
    @MAFUYUSIMP 3 роки тому +1

    7. Thou shall not kill the characters needlessly
    8. Thou shall focus, avoid distractions
    9. Thou shall write and finish what you started before beginning a new story
    AVOID DISTRACTIONS :D

  • @sincerelycielo
    @sincerelycielo 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you for this, Ate Demi! It'll surely help me a lot since I'm an aspiring writer po and currently writing my story ❤️

  • @ssemdesselb7343
    @ssemdesselb7343 4 роки тому

    Minsan ko na pinagdudahan iyon kakayanan ko sa pagsusulat pero dahil sa video na ito,nabubuhayan ako ng loob.Salamat po Author...

    • @TalesofDemi
      @TalesofDemi  4 роки тому +1

      You're welcome! Good luck sa writing journey. :)

  • @_aleckss3407
    @_aleckss3407 4 роки тому

    Pag si ate demi ang teacher ko!! Hindi ako aantukin, gising akooo buonggg period!!

  • @magiemagic1927
    @magiemagic1927 3 роки тому

    Salamat sa ideas very helpful siya

  • @francianah
    @francianah 4 роки тому

    Unang beses lang ako nanood ng video ni ate demi pero nawili talaga ko manood, halos di nako makagawa ng story dahil sa video's niya HAHAHAHA

  • @dhanaorigenes3292
    @dhanaorigenes3292 3 роки тому

    been watching all your vlog's

  • @amelisasinama9568
    @amelisasinama9568 2 місяці тому

    Nakaka inspired naman kayo ❤ pwede kaya Ako mag simu mag sulat

  • @rainnueva6657
    @rainnueva6657 4 роки тому

    Salamat po sa lahat ng utos. 😘😘
    Pa request nga po kung paano ang tamang pag pili ng accurate words para sa pagsusulat

  • @Bunnyzai
    @Bunnyzai 3 роки тому

    Thanks ate Demi for this, sapol na sapol Ako

  • @hffmanfirefly8670
    @hffmanfirefly8670 4 роки тому

    Editing is life! 😍😍

  • @gwycatalla
    @gwycatalla 4 роки тому +1

    I really love your vlogs ate demi,nakakamotivate♥️

  • @andeng1463
    @andeng1463 4 роки тому

    Gusto kopo kasing matuto Ng paggawa Kaya manood muna po ako Ng paano gumawa at Kung anong role po thankful po ako dahail napanood ko din po ito

  • @valkyrie22291
    @valkyrie22291 3 місяці тому

    pwede naman pong habang nasa chapter pa lang, ayusin na agad o kaya ay iproofread na. para sa next chapter ay ok na ang previous chapter para less editing.

  • @iryhope3041
    @iryhope3041 4 роки тому

    Hi ate Demi! Nagsusulat ako ng story sa wattpad and luckily, wala naman akong nilabag sa sampung utos. Yey!

  • @generinemaegonzales1833
    @generinemaegonzales1833 4 роки тому +10

    Ate Demi: "Thou shall not kill the characters needlessly"
    Me: So, considered po ba ang pagpatay ng character sa isang crime scene? HAHA

  • @nunezcyrilledelmary
    @nunezcyrilledelmary 4 роки тому +1

    Nung sa pumapatay na may pumasok sa isip ko eh! Sya tlg ehh!

  • @aroundtheworldtv1671
    @aroundtheworldtv1671 4 роки тому

    Tama nga po idol, nakakatamad talaga magsulat.

  • @kamillejasminecruz1247
    @kamillejasminecruz1247 3 роки тому

    noted ate demi.❤️

  • @maemae8108
    @maemae8108 4 роки тому +3

    Thank youu po ate demiii! Dami ko nanaman pong natutunan sayo ♥

  • @rynleigh1841
    @rynleigh1841 4 роки тому +1

    Maraming salamat sa mga words of wisdom mo miss demi! Lovelots! 💕

  • @Joy-pe9ul
    @Joy-pe9ul 4 роки тому +1

    Like agad pagkaview kahit 'di pa napapanuod, hahaha! Basta si Ate Demi.

  • @sheenaera1388
    @sheenaera1388 4 роки тому

    Hello po! Naka-relate po ako sa 6, dahil hindi ko po natapos ang story ko dahil nakadepende po ako sa plots ng ibang authors. So as of now, I already done my story that i LOVE. Going through the second story!

  • @julieannjumadiao9297
    @julieannjumadiao9297 4 роки тому

    Thank you for sharing your knowledge. It helps a lot.

  • @solfelichu31
    @solfelichu31 4 роки тому +3

    Tinamaan ako pero thank you po!❤️ Dami nanaman pong natutunan.✨ Inspiration narin po kita sa pagsusulat huhu.

  • @reycaaaaqt25
    @reycaaaaqt25 4 роки тому

    Hahaha natamaan talaga ako dito pero at the same time very helpful 'tong vlog na'to so thankyou po for making this video it inspired me hehe

  • @lucenamariveles6351
    @lucenamariveles6351 4 роки тому

    Dami kong natutunan Sa t'wing pinapanuod ko ang mga videos mo, ate. Labyuu po.

  • @laurenzeexo
    @laurenzeexo 4 роки тому

    Isa talaga yung series ng TPT sa pinaka unique para sakin!!! Mula sa concept, plot, hanggang sa writing style niyo ate demi❤ Ang daming ibang story na nagaya ng iba yung concept pero wala pa akong nakikitang story na kapareho ng feels ng TPT 🥺💕

    • @TalesofDemi
      @TalesofDemi  4 роки тому +1

      THANK YOU!!!

    • @laurenzeexo
      @laurenzeexo 4 роки тому

      @@TalesofDemi omg nireplyan ako ng favorite author ko huhu 😍😍😍❤

  • @gwenjosephineautentico2912
    @gwenjosephineautentico2912 4 роки тому

    Ka inggitttt... Dami niyang booksss.

  • @amayah7770
    @amayah7770 2 роки тому

    Hindi ko alam kung ako lang ba pero na experience nyo na rin bang magsulat ng sad story tapos kapag nakita mo na yung reaction ng readers mapapatanong ka nalang
    "Bakit sila naiiyak?". " sinukat ko ba talaga to?". "Luh bat nila nagustuhan" haha

  • @ilyrics686
    @ilyrics686 3 роки тому

    3rd commandment
    unang una po sa lahat wala po talaga akong gusto di ko gi nusto na maging writer ako peru nung sumali ako sa isang group page sa fb ng spoken word poetry basa lang ako ng basa hanggang sa umabot sa point na bakit di nalang ako nag sulat in 1st commnandment di naman as in nilabag ko kasi kumuha lang naman ako ng idea para maka start ako and para sakin nagsimula ang lahat sa pagbabasa
    thank you
    i hope mapansin mo

  • @Joy-pe9ul
    @Joy-pe9ul 4 роки тому +29

    Plagiarist is not a Writ-ooops! hehehe!

  • @jhonkevincaniet1791
    @jhonkevincaniet1791 Рік тому

    thanks for this ❤️

  • @johnrogerdelacruz2217
    @johnrogerdelacruz2217 4 роки тому

    I had read your story "The Peculiar's Tale" years ago. Sarap lang balikan ng feeling! :) inspired na ko magsulat. Thanks sa advices!

    • @TalesofDemi
      @TalesofDemi  4 роки тому

      Thank you! Good luck sa pagsusulat! :)

  • @shanicem.7605
    @shanicem.7605 4 роки тому +8

    Atee, pano po ba gumaw ng outline??

  • @karyllealfonso4904
    @karyllealfonso4904 4 роки тому

    I love Demiiiiiiiiii❤️

  • @jedrikfelipe5569
    @jedrikfelipe5569 4 роки тому

    Thou shall edit your work...
    I agree, Mahirap at para sa akin...Nakakatamad! Jusko!

  • @shanemaquirang5563
    @shanemaquirang5563 4 роки тому

    Sobrang relatable huhu, idol ko talaga si ate Demi!

  • @frenchfries6300
    @frenchfries6300 4 роки тому +11

    Ate demi: Kung hindi mo mahal, iwanan mo.
    Yess tama tama! HAHAHAHA kapag di mo na mahal, iwanan mo na lang kesa yung magchicheat ka pa.

  • @christeljesbonotan5744
    @christeljesbonotan5744 4 роки тому

    Hello po. New writer po sa wattpad, and these commandments just help me understand along with ur explanations po... Thank you Ate Demiiii

  • @johnrheyadriano4691
    @johnrheyadriano4691 Рік тому

    Thank you for sharing lods 😁

  • @selimwarrior1152
    @selimwarrior1152 4 роки тому +1

    Iyong sa editing talaga. Same ate, nakakastress nga hahaha

  • @micromediastar
    @micromediastar 2 роки тому

    Thank you po

  • @mikaelaangelacepillo1061
    @mikaelaangelacepillo1061 3 роки тому

    yes poooo, true po yung rule no. 3. aaaaaa

  • @sunoo982
    @sunoo982 3 роки тому

    "kapag di mo mahal iwanan mo!"

  • @Lovelywintercat
    @Lovelywintercat 3 місяці тому

    Nag babalik SI Me 2024🎉 Tama napo ate Demi😭 tagos na tagos sakin huhuhu

  • @quenceldecastro887
    @quenceldecastro887 3 роки тому

    HAHHAHA Ate Demi! Ang cute niyo dun sa part na "HALA ganto ung uso eto yung isusulat ko" HAHHAHA yung hala talaga tapos may pa hands gesture ang cutee

  • @kendijamco4839
    @kendijamco4839 4 роки тому +1

    Hewwo
    If you have time can you please make a video addressing Simultaneous Reading/Writing. Like how to manage reading/writing multiple books at once and is it effective in some ways ore another? 😊

  • @amiyang3346
    @amiyang3346 4 роки тому +5

    8:50 “Kapag hindi mo mahal, iwanan mo.” HAHAHAHA

  • @markyleleng3815
    @markyleleng3815 3 роки тому

    Wow nice idol

  • @larahllaguno1166
    @larahllaguno1166 3 роки тому

    Hehe laking tulong nito sakin 😅😅🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • @bryseu99
    @bryseu99 4 роки тому

    sapul na sapul sa number 9, gosh. ang sarap magpalamon sa lupa.

  • @foreseenematics
    @foreseenematics 4 роки тому

    Thankyou for this, Ate Demi!

  • @avegailbatinga1690
    @avegailbatinga1690 4 роки тому +2

    Thank you sa mga advice ate demi kahit di ako writer 😂 malay mo maisipan ko rin mag sulat. char hahahaha

  • @jadetrinidad807
    @jadetrinidad807 3 роки тому

    Thank you po!!!!

  • @shemarishjimenez36
    @shemarishjimenez36 4 роки тому

    I can really relate in fifth commandment

  • @aan2506
    @aan2506 3 роки тому

    Lt ung kung ano maimagine mo ayun isusulat mo pero pag dating sa pag tataype na ng mga line sa story natatamad kana sa totoo lang ayan ung unang experience kosa pagsusulat tapos ngayon napagtanto kosa sarili kona hanggang reader nlang tlga ako pero pilit gawa ako ng story🤦🏻‍♀️😌

  • @deurim38
    @deurim38 4 роки тому +1

    Ily atee demiii,proud Demystic hereee

  • @girlmagnifique6590
    @girlmagnifique6590 3 роки тому

    In Our Church, We Learned bout "Repent and Change, but in Our "Daily Life," well, in My POV, "Fix Ur Mistakes. "

  • @jennareighnjavier3960
    @jennareighnjavier3960 4 роки тому

    SALAMAT ATE PABORITO TALAGA KITAAAAAA 😄🧡

  • @angelagamayon9828
    @angelagamayon9828 3 роки тому

    muntik na akong tamaan sa pagpatay ng characters HAHAAHHAHA. buti nalang may reason pagpapatay ko sa isang caharacter ko.

  • @mogolprincessashleyb.5569
    @mogolprincessashleyb.5569 4 роки тому

    Waahhh atee demi ouch! natatamaan ako sa 8 na utos eh... Hehe!

  • @jakemontenes9599
    @jakemontenes9599 3 роки тому

    As a spiring writer natatawa ako sa mga ginawa ko kailangan ko nang ayusin Ang sarili ko hahaha