I Created a MANGA in 1 WEEK with ZERO EXPERIENCE... PART TWO

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  • Опубліковано 23 гру 2024

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  • @halioweens
    @halioweens  4 місяці тому +5

    working on a larger project! new video sometime in the next week (hopefully) this one is going to be longer and a more complex one. I will post updates on the patreon until the video is released

  • @milyrockz
    @milyrockz 4 місяці тому +25

    i hope you continue this! when you revealed you were drawing the main character stabbing himself next i was super surprised and the storyline seems great already!

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +7

      thanks a lot! the story has a lot of potential things i need to work on for the future :)

  • @landoncarey8084
    @landoncarey8084 4 місяці тому +22

    Love to see these manga making videos. I enjoy these videos documenting their experience with making manga. These videos like yours gives me motivation to continue working on my own comic. Keep it up

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +2

      thanks so much :) do your best!!

  • @Telkkinzzz-art
    @Telkkinzzz-art 4 місяці тому +13

    Yoo I really like your progress on manga making I can see how much work your doing and one thing I wanna suggest is when you drew the mc stabbing himself you should use a slight down angle, the camera looking at the mc face as he shows movement into stabbing himself where then you use the silhouette and in small three panels can be done so it wouldn’t take no space up but show urgency and the same things but with more flare, use more dynamic angles down top top down views to make people make intriegued and what I learned in a digital design class is when you make your panels flow into eachother like a “s” or a “z” for manga then it will attract more attention, I do manga pages but I haven’t post much manga panels ngl😭 i do post on my instagram though and im gonna post my manga panels on there

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      that's a great suggestion, i definitely need to learn to use more dynamic angles and poses, i'm honestly just scared to LMAO, i'll definitely try it with the next project though :)

    • @Telkkinzzz-art
      @Telkkinzzz-art 4 місяці тому +1

      @@halioweens since your having trouble can I help? I have tons of material and ways to practice since I had the same problem and I like helping out and I helped another person that also is trying to do manga which he is improving
      😭yeah I definitely understand that it gets so confusing and then you don’t know where you start had me where I was practicing body and perspective for a good bit would only make a page every so often at the time lol💀 but definitely keep going with your manga panels as it will improve so much, now I don’t need to use references when making manga panels now and takes a hour to make four draft pages for inking

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      @@Telkkinzzz-art for now ill see if i can figure it out by myself but if i cant ill let you know LOL and thats great to hear

    • @Telkkinzzz-art
      @Telkkinzzz-art 4 місяці тому

      @@halioweens ohh alright nice I hope you achieve making a manga I believe you can

  • @themangaculture
    @themangaculture 4 місяці тому +7

    Man this channel is underrated. Don't stop! And I have a suggestion to make your manga better: show the full shot more often. You have really good medium and close shots, but you're lacking on the scale and backgrounds. However, I can't really say much because you made it in a week, which is very impressive, so it doesn't really matter. Also, can you give yourself a bit longer to make a manga for the next challenge? Like two weeks or a month? Just a suggestion. Anyways I subbed instantly because I really like your type of content

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +2

      i really appreciate that! and yeah i noticed myself doing that too, definitely planning on more wide shots for the next project. As for the time period i give myself, it's usually tough to work on something for a longer period of time due to wanting to get content out there for you guys whilst also leaving room for other things i have going on :(

  • @gakuseimuto
    @gakuseimuto 4 місяці тому +8

    This is pretty cool, keep it up!

  • @doctordavid264
    @doctordavid264 4 місяці тому +7

    Wait what? I thought you were a big UA-cam until you said your subscribers. Amazing work man, you'll be famous soon

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      that's so kind, thank you a lot :)

  • @derivoid
    @derivoid 3 місяці тому +1

    Hey there! Just recently found out about this video. The art was really spectacular, and I hope you can continue doing more chapters for this. One suggestion I had was that the progression for this chapter felt a little too paced, and I think that another page/panel with just a calm moment between the two drinking and the main character announcing he poisoned him would make it a little bit more fluent since I feel like the panel jumps into the action a little bit too quick in a narrative perspective. Otherwise, everythings great man! You get my full gratitude.

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      yeah i agree it could've used another few panels but i was trying to reach a deadline and it was my first time doing something like this so i definitely gotta cut myself some slack :') and thanks for the kind words and support!!

  • @wmidlanimation
    @wmidlanimation 4 місяці тому +7

    Youre so good at this, and i also believe you can put out a weekly webtoon and actually make it

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +3

      that would be a lot of work but it seems super interesting and fun :) the only issue is i'm still a student so it's not possible at the moment :(

  • @whitefanglisted
    @whitefanglisted Місяць тому

    The thing is that why i subscribed you is your videos keeps me motivated to continue my own manga and trust the process ✌🏻

  • @RetroAdventurer-k3m
    @RetroAdventurer-k3m 4 місяці тому +3

    Wow I really like your art!!

  • @bethany.00
    @bethany.00 4 місяці тому +1

    This is amazing! I love the concept and the art I can't wait to see future projects😎

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      thanks a lot! :) that's greatly appreciated

  • @w.ax3ll396
    @w.ax3ll396 4 місяці тому +2

    Honestly this is amazing the work really feels professional, the voice over is great and of course the art is also amazing of course!!! Keep going i am sure you are going to blow up real soon

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      Thank you so much :) glad you enjoyed it!

  • @sydney2816
    @sydney2816 4 місяці тому +7

    insane work 🤯

  • @cautiousraven5427
    @cautiousraven5427 4 місяці тому +1

    I've made a manga myself so it's cool to see someone else's process
    Good work!

  • @mairakkadead
    @mairakkadead 4 місяці тому +1

    You gotta continue this! You got a new subscriber

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      thanks so much :') it's greatly appreciated

  • @Hydra_tayiou
    @Hydra_tayiou 4 місяці тому +1

    I love this series

  • @maddytee
    @maddytee 4 місяці тому +2

    23rd comment, also really
    Cool video looking forward to episode 3!

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      glad you enjoyed it! :)

  • @limpaika
    @limpaika 4 місяці тому +3

    10:45 I can't bro-😭🙏 Im subbing meed more of your humour lol

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      hahaha appreciate the sub :))

  • @vergil2107
    @vergil2107 4 місяці тому +2

    hi wassup its me again i really loveur work and i want to improve it by looking at ur art it really inspires me to want to create manga

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      Thank you so much! you should do it!

    • @limpaika
      @limpaika 4 місяці тому

      Fr bro

  • @okinawakor
    @okinawakor 4 місяці тому +5

    IF U DO IT AGAIN TAHT MEANS U HJAVE EXPERIENCE

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      NOT REALLY SINCE THIS IS THE SECOND PART OF ME LEARNING ☹️

  • @AltAccountHandle
    @AltAccountHandle 4 місяці тому +2

    I think you should use real life poses as references that way the characters look more life like

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      definitely trying to work on that to make them more realistic :)

  • @SURVIVEDCHANNEL
    @SURVIVEDCHANNEL 4 місяці тому +3

    if you improved your anatomy and perspective your manga would be amazing! keep going, it's actually very brave to expose yourself like that when you are still a beginner artist, all the respect

  • @YB-91
    @YB-91 2 місяці тому

    this is like re zero, re zero is peak, therefore, this is peak🗣🔥

  • @kakashi69816
    @kakashi69816 4 місяці тому +1

    This is actually insane ... It makes me wanna try it. So, I got some questions - How and from where did you learnt this? And what's the application you are using for it? And how much time do you think it takes to learn?

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      i've been drawing for as long as i can remember but i only really made good progress a couple years back when i kept consistently practicing the anime/manga art style since that what was felt easiest and most comfortable for me. It can be achieved with lots of time and patience, drawing isn't easy and even now i struggle with it pretty often, but you can achieve anything you put your mind to :) as for the program it's called clipstudio paint

    • @kakashi69816
      @kakashi69816 4 місяці тому

      @@halioweens Arigato Gozaimasu.

  • @ookami5329
    @ookami5329 3 місяці тому +3

    using ai, and using random copyrighted images from google are both wrong, but the image from google is more risky for you legally. Make sure you use royalty free images, and preferably, for manga, ones that dont require attribution

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому +1

      eh i've decided to go the route of doing neither, don't think either is a good option at this point and i prefer to avoid people getting upset about it anyways

    • @ookami5329
      @ookami5329 3 місяці тому +1

      @@halioweens ai wouldn’t be a bad tool for random background images if it weren’t for the copyright/theft issue, but even if that would get sorted out idk if the bad association will ever disappear, so going for hand drawn is a good idea. That also has the added bonus of making you better at starting backgrounds

  • @Homecatboy
    @Homecatboy 2 місяці тому

    HIIIIII
    It’s me again. My name for Dorian is Kanama. (Kaw-nah-maa) :)

  • @cinderanimations9935
    @cinderanimations9935 2 місяці тому

    Hey imma lil late but as another artist who makes comics and stuff you don’t have to prove you can draw it yourself you can use the ai it helps with production and the professionals do it anyway. Ofc it’s important to still practice and learn how to do it on ur own but you get what I’m saying

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  2 місяці тому +1

      thanks for the feedback :) I decided to just not use it anymore so it's okay

    • @cinderanimations9935
      @cinderanimations9935 2 місяці тому

      @@halioweens ok as long as you’re happy. I just got so upset when I heard you were getting those types of comments 😭

  • @baghead101
    @baghead101 4 місяці тому +1

    W project

  • @obaraksennahoj7191
    @obaraksennahoj7191 3 місяці тому

    I just came here to say, the moment you do something once, you can't say you've done it again, with no experience😅

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      it's a two part video, but i get what ur saying, the actual concept though was with zero experience and it was split into two videos sooooo technically 😎

    • @obaraksennahoj7191
      @obaraksennahoj7191 3 місяці тому

      @@halioweens Yeah... I really should watch the video before sharing my dumb opinion😅. I love following your journey

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      @@obaraksennahoj7191 LOL NO it's not dumb I was just trying to clear my name and the title haha, thanks for wataching the video :) its greatly appreciated

  • @Obsyrizz
    @Obsyrizz 4 місяці тому +3

    what version did you buy of Clip Studio paint

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +2

      just standard pro edition, pretty sure it's around 25$ for a lifetime copy

    • @Obsyrizz
      @Obsyrizz 4 місяці тому

      @@halioweens

  • @Aswin-kun
    @Aswin-kun 4 місяці тому +1

    Teach us how to frame plsss

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      i'll mention it in the next video! :)

  • @jamesnotjam9391
    @jamesnotjam9391 4 місяці тому +2

    When i read the 5th page i skipped the frame with dead cap straight to the speech bubble. It was good idea to put bright moon in the frame, but still picture feels vague.

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      that's understandable but i think i gave it enough of a tense build up... i also made sure to include dialogue and other things insinuating it was his death.

  • @laurenhua3549
    @laurenhua3549 3 місяці тому

    What app do you use to create your this manga?

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      clipstudio!

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      came back to this comment to say there's a huge sale happening currently for it if you're interested! it's in my
      description :)

  • @raymondkatika7113
    @raymondkatika7113 4 місяці тому +2

    Yoh😅

  • @DAN1Nflowers
    @DAN1Nflowers 3 місяці тому +2

    Hii! Just here to tell you that the reason why people didn't like u using ai is because ai uses other artists work to create that image (works which are copyrighted) and manga creators generally take their own pictures/ use copyright free pics! :#

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      ofc i understand why, I was just experimenting and learning is all!

  • @AnnasHassan-u3p
    @AnnasHassan-u3p 3 місяці тому

    Buddy how do you make a manga with no experience twice 😂 nice vid tho

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  3 місяці тому

      it's cause it's the second part of the video 😞

  • @Obsyrizz
    @Obsyrizz 4 місяці тому +2

    First

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      W first comment

    • @Obsyrizz
      @Obsyrizz 4 місяці тому +1

      @@halioweens W UA-camr

  • @gekidakagregory9358
    @gekidakagregory9358 4 місяці тому

    "I created a MANGA in 1 WEEK with NO Experience except for the last time which I did that exact thing so title is a straight up lie"

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +1

      it's almost like it's a series about me learning from zero experience LOLLL

    • @gekidakagregory9358
      @gekidakagregory9358 4 місяці тому

      @@halioweens but you do have experience

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      @@gekidakagregory9358 in making a manga? i do not :L

  • @corneliusbinklefredickbear9936
    @corneliusbinklefredickbear9936 4 місяці тому

    So just trace

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому +2

      bro has never drawn in his life

    • @nekorina9011
      @nekorina9011 4 місяці тому +2

      @@halioweens when it comes to props or environments, a lot of pros DO trace, though. I had a professor who works in storyboarding and has done a lot of work for diff companies, and that's what he did + suggested us to do since storyboards also have to be done pretty quickly.
      You don't need to trace over images too - you can do it over models for environments, too.

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      @@nekorina9011 thank you! some people that don't draw tend to think the methods that are used by artists isn't artistic LOL

  • @Ryjiiinngg
    @Ryjiiinngg 4 місяці тому +1

    This is pretty good! You got a twitter my guy?

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  4 місяці тому

      not yet! most likely making one once i drop the next video :)

  • @I.Bslayin
    @I.Bslayin 2 місяці тому

    Do you have an instagram

    • @halioweens
      @halioweens  2 місяці тому

      @@I.Bslayin not yet! but i have twitter @halio_art :)

  • @hastaloscojonesdelosapagones
    @hastaloscojonesdelosapagones 2 місяці тому +1

    Mi hermano usa la inteligencia artificial si te ahorra tiempo de trabajo, no le hagas caso a los llorones en los comentarios, en fin buen trabajo.