Using AI, Chat GPT To Write A Grade 9 GCSE Story (Sorry AQA)
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who else waffled in lit paper 1 (we are so cooked)
Macbeth was so easy
ACC messed me up cuz of the extract
@@simarindersingh1001even tho i liked the macbeth question more i still feel like i rushed it so i liked the essay i wrote for ACC even tho i hated the extract. welp either way im cooked
@@lem.9605 same
AQA will hunt this man
Let's keep him safe
That Macbeth question was very good to analyse! Not so much on A Christmas Carol though.
It was easy for ACC
@@M1A198-xp3bf The question wasn't too difficult, but the extract left me at a state of bewilderment
@@RohanW_should’ve written about how the way they treated the corpse showed how he should’ve changed and the way he “shuddered” when hearing about them laughing abt the guys death shows redemption
@@RohanW_ I wrote about the alliteration about ha ha ha shows they joy and people who have morals don’t do this but shows how Scrooge is a bad and ignorant person
Yeah, I had to use my knowledge of the whole novella for getting marks
Paper was absolutely beautiful thank you sir for everything now full focus to paper 2 so we can get that top grade ❤️
NOW THIS IS CONTENT
I’m using this for my Q5 tomorrow
Literature paper 1 today was so easy man thanks to you
Lit paper 1 was so good sir thanks for your videos it really helped
Lit paper 1 Romeo and juliet was how does shakespear present difficulties that juliet faces. The extract was scene 2 Act 5 it was poop
Guys these are the quotes for the whole of the play/novel I used in the Romeo and Juliet and Jekyll and Hyde questions. Please tell me if they are good. “Deny thy father and refuse thy name” “hang thee, young baggage, disobedient wretch” “trampled calmly” “ape-like fury”
Those were the exact ones i use for R and J so yea u should be fine.
@@AmeliePittack ok thanks so much
OMGGGG I USED THE SAMEE DENY THY FATHER AND REFUSE THY NAMEM, HANG THEE , YOUNG BAGGAGE and ape like fury nah wtf that's d only quote I remembered and it was so hard to find quotes from the extract ffs
@AmeliePittack what did u get for your mocks ?
@mreverythingenglish Thank you so much I did AQA and we go the most easy questions Lady Macbeth as a powerful female character and how does scrooge learn lessons on life. I' hope to get an 8/9 like my mocks. You were great help during my revision. I'm so glad I got to do my exams this year in Y10 rather than next year in Y11 as we got easy questions this year. Can't thank you so much.
Wait what you guys can do that? How?
@@Starlight_2310 yeah i swear thats not possible she probably misworded it
Chatgpt is the goat, I’ve made so many stories using this 😂😂😂😂
is it alright if I did 2 quotes in each of my 2 Macbeth paragraphs, which were taken from the extract, and 1 quote from the play in aqa exam
whos here after literature paper 1 👀
not me
Me I did so bad
Me I did so bad
@@dhartiyogendra3551how? What books did you do
Me lol the lady Macbeth question was amazing so was ACC but some people got confused due to how the question was worded but it literally meant how dickens presents the transformation is Scrooge. Also the extract for acc was so bad no quotes in there
The nurse question with Juliet about her difficulties was a drag
swear tho what was that extract
@@dilshanturna4691fr wallah finally someone that gets It I hated that exam
I talked about maternal bond between nurse and Juliet in the extract I used youthful warm blood 😭 that quote
My brain had a full mental reset and I waffled about the differences in "youthful blood" between the old and young generation has caused the greatest difficulty in their clandestine marriage because new have weird sense of love blah blah old generation values such as ancient grudge blah blah shakespeare challenges fate saying natural presented obstacles were the greatest difficulty blah blah. True and pure waffle. Ofc grade boundaries have to go up because the Macbeth lot got a lady Macbeth theme. 😢😢😢
@@Divinarium1 same I didn’t know what to say then I came up with some idea and decided to write it down honestly I’ll be happy with an ok grade cuz I didn’t like either of the questions they were so bad my other text was a bit ok but it still could have been better😭😭 I was struggling and I ran out of time too
nice bro hopefull i get a good grd
You should’ve tried onomatopoeia
@Mr everything English I made a mistake I wrote about the narration of the Macbeth extract instead of the question it self so my question was ‘ in act 1:7 Macbeth is ready, convinced to kill Macbeth’ what will happen now?
sir can you please how can i fit the priest plot one into the story which is crash landing distant planet its from one of the past papers
This is me using chat gpt to make me question 5 story using the plot of me everything English
is it malpractice to memorise a chat gpt story and only slightly tweak it to match the question?
This is the future
This is the future
This is the future
This is the future
This is not the future
This is not the future
Damn , it always writes the same kinda story for everyone so it is risky
Yeah you should use it to generate ideas and different techniques and use it in your work, but i mainly use it for literature and type a quote and ask for grade 9 analysis and have been hitting 9 thanks to it
Just say what you want the story to be about and try and describe what should happen in the story and the characters in it to chat got as much as possible
they should make an app where all of the students can talk about their exams after they've done the exams cuz everywhere i go to revise people are talking about it in the chat box.🤣🤣😂.
ikr
Reddit
The student room
Grade boundaries after this video 📈📈📈
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Is better to start on question 5 in language paper 1?
mr ee recommends it so I guess so
are you sure we can just memorise answers from chatgpt cuz everyone says it will be detected by some ai software
Ik but can you?
Obviously change it up
@@s1lence214 there are things that can detect ai so don't directly copy it
Don’t worry I can tweak it up a bit but also I found a way to humanise it
how do i humanise it@@s1lence214
I used the quote take my milk for gall for lady Macbeth is it good
They said we were cooked for literature paper 1 but look at us now
Grade boundaries 😭
@@itsrelaxing3238 inshallah we are ok
Bit worried about this...
Please can anyone answer me, I’m worried about Macbeth, because it asked “how far was Lady Macbeth presented as a strong female character”. Does the “how far” bit change the outcome of my essay?? Or is it other same as explore, just worded differently
I wanted to ask the same question because I didn’t mention her change explicitly because I thought it was contradicting to the question now I am so worried and I think I am so cooked! 😭😭
@@Starlight_2310 i think we’re good if we aiming for a grade 7 MAX, I’m hoping for a 6-7 so hopefully it doesn’t matter TOO much 😭😭
Omg same I have been worrying since this afternoon😭 wrote allat about her power for nothing because we probably had to talk about her change to get the top grades but I’m only aiming for a 7 possibly an 8 so ig I’ll be fine😞
it changes it a bit you have to say to what extent so completely strong or partially. it doesnt matter now its over
Sir will using a priest story mean I might have to appeal my paper?
Sir do you offer tuition for English in year 8
Yep, everythingeducation.co.uk
Guys will I get in trouble for using chat gpt to pre plan my creative writing essay because I can’t make it up to save my life
u wont if you change it up a bit
Ive memorised it but how do I change it up effectively@@ccfary
can someone please tell me if the examiners use ai detectors😭 coz I memorized story from chat gpt and want to fit it in my q5
Idk but most likely
And you only tell me this after paper 1?
you don't write a story in paper 1...
@@4mel1axo LMAOOO WHAT WERE THEY DOING IN PAPER 1
@@simxlyzach only god knows 😭
@@4mel1axo how'd it go? cl got scammed for christmas carol
@@user-yb7kf3km5z macbeth was good christmas carol i got COOKED icl 😭 that extract was…
Guys please help. I have two questions. Is it too late to memorise a story using chat gpt or ai? And when they give me the creative writing question in language paper 1, how would the story fit with the picture or description given for Q5?
it’s not too late you still have like a week and also i wouldnt describe the picture id go with the story they give and then adjust it a bit to match your story
@@simxlyzach thx so much
@@aamaalechrish1439 yea so if I memorise the key parts is that fine?
@@baldi3161 yeah id also do past papers to adjust them all into your story, just follow the same key events and use the important language and structure techniques
@@baldi3161it’s only plagiarism if it’s 50% of someone else’s work (what AQA said anyway if that’s your exam board)
who cooked the macbeth section today?
Meeee bro that Macbeth question was beaut , Christmas Carol not so good . Did 2 1/2 quality pages on maxbeth , I knew I was gonna do worse in Acc so I did 3 1/2 but included a shit ton of context
@@sonnyjackson1149 christmas carol is where i was stuck looking at the extract but i did good on the question which speaks about the whole story
copilot is so much better for this
reminded me of drake’s diss when i saw this 😂😂
Any yr 11s, what was macbeth question
How does shakespeare present lady macbeth as a strong female character
Is Lady Macbeth a string female character
extract was prior to killing duncan about when she says "when you durst do it then you were a man" and "plucked my nipple from its boneless gums and dashed its brain out"
strong fewmale charcater 😊
@@CidDailly yuh i mean i talked about as ideas based upon the extract like her overpowering macbeth and using it to get power
I'm going to show this paragraph to my teacher, and see how much marks she would give me for this. I'll let you know how much marks she gave me for this.
(Edit: she said it doesn't make sense, because there's too much vocabulary for them to understand, she also took off to many lines and replaced them with something else, she said it wouldn't even be worth grade 6, she literally said 'no, this doesn't make sense, and with the annotations which I've done, it definitely won't get grade 9'. So its a down for AI 👎(in my teachers' opinion), but personally, I think its really good, I don't understand why she didn't like it, its most probably because she doesn't know that many words.)
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My teacher takes so long to reply or mark 😭
do u get disqualified for using ai essay plan in the exam?
theyll never know
you cannot mention it since they have no way of finding out
yes you can detect if something is written by chat gpt and exam boards know about it now
@@aaronpaulraj5544 dont they have like ai detection in the gcses
keep the method on the low boss
no point the examiners are using ai checkers for this yr
@@akeleven11_how do they copy and paste the writing on the paper with horrible handwriting onto a computer?
Get back to work