Use This Paragraph Structure- Forget The Others!

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  • @DrillFusionBeats23
    @DrillFusionBeats23 2 місяці тому +32

    Yeah could we please have Macbeth top 10 quotes please

  • @djjrjdhwbbr
    @djjrjdhwbbr 2 місяці тому +7

    This gentleman needs to be my english teacher. My mice of men exam is in 2 days and this is helping me alot!

  • @llerkisquad4495
    @llerkisquad4495 2 місяці тому +10

    Thank you, sir. Keep up the good work.

  • @DhaudGhazi
    @DhaudGhazi 2 місяці тому +5

    Is the Macbeth quote video next? And would you do any other books except from the main ones (e.g Frankenstein)

  • @micha1704
    @micha1704 2 місяці тому

    Thank you so much u explain so good thank you

  • @J6K3R
    @J6K3R 2 місяці тому +1

    Sir please may you do quotes and analysis for Frankenstein? Possibly an answer using your structure. JazakAllah sir!

  • @indiasingh6891
    @indiasingh6891 2 місяці тому +2

    Please may you do a video on the Macbeth characters!!
    thanks bro!

  • @user-ts3px9yv9v
    @user-ts3px9yv9v 2 місяці тому +2

    Sir please can you give your predictions of the inspector calls question so we can turn our focus slightly to the focus of the question. Please it’ll be a huge help thank you

  • @anna-394.
    @anna-394. 2 місяці тому

    Thank you so much

  • @shepcoccck6034
    @shepcoccck6034 2 місяці тому +1

    Thats Great! My school does The Sign of Four, and it is absolutely horrible and there's no videos to help us revise it. If you know it could you make a vid about it with quotes?

  • @Sadoo_M
    @Sadoo_M 2 місяці тому +6

    "to that I say: 'Fiddlesticks'"

  • @JERIMIAH0ZENDIAH-db3gy
    @JERIMIAH0ZENDIAH-db3gy 2 місяці тому +4

    thank you!!! life-saver!!!

  • @noureldinbalbaa8328
    @noureldinbalbaa8328 2 місяці тому +1

    Thanks sir, can you please upload the video on the best structure for a comparative essay? Thanks!

  • @Cl0udPvP
    @Cl0udPvP 2 місяці тому +7

    Awesome, I’ve been using it for over a year, yet I never knew how to actually use it properly because I thought a technique was the same as, say, an adjective, or a verb.
    9:40 I love the inspector calls reference haha

  • @jackysbin3860
    @jackysbin3860 2 місяці тому

    Was proper stressing for lit 1 tomorrow but watched 3 of your videos. Thank you bismillah may god bless you man I will do fine

  • @AlalnaMcDougall
    @AlalnaMcDougall 2 місяці тому

    Thankyou sir, please could you make a top 10 quotes blood brothers video - thanks again.

  • @Lonleybee8
    @Lonleybee8 2 місяці тому +1

    Plz can we hv predictions 4 macbeth,inspector calls,jekyll hyde,and pwr and power and conflict as there is like 2 weeks left😢

  • @PkNinja_Gaming
    @PkNinja_Gaming 2 місяці тому +7

    Sir I am struggle the language paper 1 question 3

  • @omaratbouli8066
    @omaratbouli8066 2 місяці тому

    Could you please upload a video on question 5 language paper 1

  • @masteraustin223
    @masteraustin223 2 місяці тому +1

    thanks brolo

  • @sienstra
    @sienstra 2 місяці тому

    Could you please do something about Blood Brothers please.

  • @user-mh2hl4jj5j
    @user-mh2hl4jj5j 2 місяці тому +2

    I am convinced!!!!

  • @Zayd008
    @Zayd008 2 місяці тому

    Can you please do 10 quotes for frankenstien I am struggling with it. Thank you.

  • @Plasm56.56
    @Plasm56.56 2 місяці тому

    Keep it 😊

  • @bblasb
    @bblasb 2 місяці тому

    How many of these would you realistically be able to fit in a language 8 marker? Is one paragraph/quote enough for those, or should we adjust the structure, because I doubt I could write or think fast enough to fit two. For the 20 marker, is two enough or is it better to try for three?

  • @pythonian9977
    @pythonian9977 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank you. I've noticed for Edexcel Lit paper 1 I was checking An Inspector Calls and context was 16/40 marks so does this mean context in every paragraph?

  • @KlIIua
    @KlIIua 2 місяці тому +1

    Macbeth is split into 2, right? 20 mark for extract and 20 mark for Part B. I'm doing Macbeth and Boy's don't cry.

  • @SamuelSCA2772
    @SamuelSCA2772 2 місяці тому +1

    sir can this paragraph structure apply to the edexcel exam board too?

  • @LuluNewNew
    @LuluNewNew 2 місяці тому +1

    I got grade 9 in language paper 2 in my mocks so I‘m also tryna get a 9 in lit 😭 but im gettint 6‘s

  • @momtazkhanom4336
    @momtazkhanom4336 2 місяці тому +1

    Is this the same for edexcell?

  • @zainabz6381
    @zainabz6381 2 місяці тому

    may Allah reward u gr8ly!

  • @user-wf6iy5wc1w
    @user-wf6iy5wc1w 2 місяці тому +1

    sir,does this also wok with igcse language b paper ?

  • @amymarch7351
    @amymarch7351 2 місяці тому

    Do the 4 paragraphs include an introduction and conclusion?

  • @pizzahunter3356
    @pizzahunter3356 2 місяці тому +1

    what about petatacwl?
    point, evidence, technique, analysis, technique, analysis, context, writers intention, link?

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому +1

      Why are you doing context in every single paragraph? - but yeh, ultimately do what you want.

  • @Mr-Photographer
    @Mr-Photographer 2 місяці тому

    ​​do anyone know how to write a solid effect? i can do it but mine are too basic and i don't get good marks

  • @Yousufwtf
    @Yousufwtf 2 місяці тому

    what do you write for the link? do you just copy the point? someone help.

  • @alirezafazel7142
    @alirezafazel7142 2 місяці тому

    I have a question how many PRTEZEL paragraphs do we need to use in the english lang questions

  • @AliAdeelGaming
    @AliAdeelGaming 2 місяці тому

    Does anyone know what to Iclude in a PRTEZEL paragraph on how an atmosphere of fear and loneliness is created

  • @amronyt7
    @amronyt7 2 місяці тому

    you and @thegcsemathstutor are literally the best teachers. you both have made me go from 4's to 7's in english and maths

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому

      Thanks 🙏

    • @louis863
      @louis863 2 місяці тому

      yo bro, what did u do for maths to go from 4 to 7? if i watch all the videos on the gcse maths tutor from 4-7 is that enough to go up to a 7 or do i have to do practice questoons as well? what did u do that worked well?

    • @shabnammukhtar4906
      @shabnammukhtar4906 2 місяці тому

      ​@@louis863practice questions are the best way to go and do past papers and watch walkthorughs on those papers go over your weak topics

    • @thorodinson5098
      @thorodinson5098 2 місяці тому

      @@louis863 Use maths genie and figure out what topics u need to learn and then use that to watch the gcse maths tutor and test yourself by doing the questions on mathsgenie again and work your way up the grade. Can still bang 7s if you put work ‘ don’t forget to do past papers few days before exam

  • @rayray.478
    @rayray.478 2 місяці тому

    what questions do u use pretzel for?

  • @RankethLiyanage
    @RankethLiyanage 2 місяці тому

    Sir what do you think about MMRC?

  • @bobjackin889
    @bobjackin889 2 місяці тому +1

    jazakallah khair sir i would appreciate it if you would go through how to plan and structure poem comparisons

  • @octomasprime9079
    @octomasprime9079 2 місяці тому

    Hi just a quick question, how many paragraphs of prtezel do we need for English language p1q2, q3, q4, p2q3 and q4. And do i have to do writers intentions and effect on reader, if so where ?

    • @Ultranova_6634
      @Ultranova_6634 2 місяці тому

      this video is primarily for english literature since its talking about context.

  • @flow6326
    @flow6326 2 місяці тому

    is this ok for the IGCSE CIE curriculum? Do you not need 2 quotes per paragraph?

  • @reubenmclardy
    @reubenmclardy 2 місяці тому

    are the 4 paragraphs including a thesis statement?

  • @oceana6034
    @oceana6034 2 місяці тому

    where do you write about writers intentions in prtezel

  • @danielrichardson-ql7mi
    @danielrichardson-ql7mi 2 місяці тому

    My teacher always says to never include the word “you” in a paragraph. Does it really matter that much because it gets repetitive to say “when a person” instead of “you” all the time.

  • @Fatou-eo3ky
    @Fatou-eo3ky 2 місяці тому

    Sir, how can i write for question 2 in paper 1if i don't know the meaning of the words

  • @M1A198-xp3bf
    @M1A198-xp3bf 2 місяці тому +1

    Hi I used last years quotation for Macbeth and A Christmas carol will this be fine for GCSE 2024

  • @aki-fi3gk
    @aki-fi3gk 2 місяці тому +1

    Mr Salles recommend not using paragraphs as they are too rigid but you are recommending them as an easy way to structure your answers I m not sure what to do

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому +3

      Do whatever you want- just make sure you hit ao1,2&3 hence I recommend paragraph structures.

  • @gigachadproductions6068
    @gigachadproductions6068 2 місяці тому

    sir, do we ever include the effect on the reader? or is this not needed? - thanks

  • @rix_1723
    @rix_1723 2 місяці тому

    can you not get more A01 and A02 marks by using context?

  • @xMrHulx
    @xMrHulx 2 місяці тому

    Sir PRETEZEL means only 1 quote per paragraph and my teachers told me you need quotes for marks? (Unless zooming in counts as another quote)

    • @Qjb.
      @Qjb. 2 місяці тому

      You only need 1 quote per paragraph

  • @CosmosSpace_
    @CosmosSpace_ 2 місяці тому

    sorry sir, please what do you mean by context?

  • @hayaosman2701
    @hayaosman2701 2 місяці тому +1

    Is this applicable to all exam boards

  • @mrcontentclipss
    @mrcontentclipss 2 місяці тому

    It can be used for paper 2 Q4? Thats comparison

  • @samiii1880
    @samiii1880 2 місяці тому

    wait so how many prtezel paragraphs u want us to do, because normally i just do like 3 paragraphs chronologically and like use that kind of but not really i just keep adding language analysis

    • @deadm4n881
      @deadm4n881 2 місяці тому

      He said 4 but I think if you've written 3 and you're sure that they're good and they're 3 perfect prtezel para then you're good

  • @JessicaMason-mk4pf
    @JessicaMason-mk4pf 2 місяці тому

    Hello Sir 👋

  • @deadm4n881
    @deadm4n881 2 місяці тому

    Sir can you explain Link in brief please cause I don't really get it like how am I supposed to use it in the paragraph?

    • @pink4160
      @pink4160 2 місяці тому +2

      its just to make sure you dont start waffling and you are staying consistent with your idea, so to do this linking the ending of your para w the start makes it consistent

  • @MMT1627
    @MMT1627 2 місяці тому

    Sir i swear u said u can use the PRTEZEL for PAC and Unseen poetry im confused ??

  • @reoqq3842
    @reoqq3842 2 місяці тому +15

    Could we have 10 quotes for Romeo and Juliet? JazakAllah.

    • @V----V
      @V----V 2 місяці тому +7

      Js use the ones from last year it’s still relevant today

  • @ukstudent1
    @ukstudent1 2 місяці тому

    In around 9:23 mins
    You said there's only 6 marks for context in AQA.
    But as our school does Edexcel for English, for us, Context is 16 marks, therefore, we need to write a ton of context... where do I incorporate the context into my paragraphs?

    • @hayaosman2701
      @hayaosman2701 2 місяці тому +1

      He said embed it after you first explanation :) the red asterisk in the middle

    • @ukstudent1
      @ukstudent1 2 місяці тому

      ​@@hayaosman2701 Oh okay, I understand that point.
      On the same note, he said 2 lines for 2 paragraphs, but for 15 marks, surely 2 lines for 2 paragraphs wouldn't be enough, so how much lines would I need to achieve the top marks?

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому

      2 lines? 🫤

    • @williamdarfour6053
      @williamdarfour6053 2 місяці тому

      Pls which year are you in

    • @ukstudent1
      @ukstudent1 2 місяці тому

      @@williamdarfour6053 Year 11?? Why?

  • @llllllllllp
    @llllllllllp 2 місяці тому

    Romeo Juliet grade 9 essay please

  • @Achieve_Success.
    @Achieve_Success. 2 місяці тому +1

    i got into an argument cause my teacher told us that u waffle. i told her ur the best teacher and ive learned alot from you and she called my parents for me not listening to her

    • @vaan_dex7728
      @vaan_dex7728 2 місяці тому +1

      She’s a bit strange Ay?

  • @sebastianico8143
    @sebastianico8143 2 місяці тому

    1 minute!!!

  • @nimbulus1133
    @nimbulus1133 2 місяці тому

    oh you dont know

  • @williamdarfour6053
    @williamdarfour6053 2 місяці тому

    I don't understand 😢

  • @ZumraMahboob-wk8xm
    @ZumraMahboob-wk8xm 2 місяці тому

    Why i cant watch this video

  • @ZumraMahboob-wk8xm
    @ZumraMahboob-wk8xm 2 місяці тому +1

    Wtf😂