Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!

Поділитися
Вставка
  • Опубліковано 6 чер 2024
  • Step back into the pitch meeting and revisit the completely factual accurate conversation that led to Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting - Revisited!! Complete with commentary from Ryan George who is now several years older!
    Subscribe for more Pitch Meetings: / @pitchmeetings
    Check Out These Other Videos:
    Rebel Moon Pitch Meeting
    • Rebel Moon: Part One P...
    Aquaman and the Lost Kingdom Pitch Meeting
    • Aquaman and the Lost K...
    00:00 Spider-Man: Homecoming Pitch Meeting
    04:50 Revisiting
    07:00 Rewriting
    09:52 Question Time!
    Our Website
    screenrant.com/
  • Розваги

КОМЕНТАРІ • 1,5 тис.

  • @MyBiPolarBearMax
    @MyBiPolarBearMax 21 день тому +1921

    When Ryan does the voices during the re-writes i always think “man, he does such a good impression of those guys!”

    • @andrasbiro3007
      @andrasbiro3007 21 день тому +145

      Yeah, he probably could do the whole thing alone.

    • @Marwolaeth01
      @Marwolaeth01 21 день тому +82

      I legit found myself impressed at how well he performed as Producer guy. Then 10 seconds later I figured it out.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 21 день тому +27

      Amen! I loved the "Yeah, yeah, yeah!" and the "So you have a movie for me?" It was great.

    • @GizmoFromPizmo
      @GizmoFromPizmo 21 день тому +15

      Right! Redoing the voices is TIGHT!

    • @SchrijverMarcel
      @SchrijverMarcel 21 день тому +4

      Same!

  • @saadrashid2754
    @saadrashid2754 21 день тому +1231

    "If you make a mistake, people will point it out"
    Ryan George

  • @strawbarry7834
    @strawbarry7834 21 день тому +427

    Every time I watch Ryan edit his google docs, it feels like watching a master wood-worker restore an old piece of furniture. It's fascinating to watch and see the growth that has occurred over the years.

    • @ConeJellos
      @ConeJellos 21 день тому +3

      Calm down.

    • @Hexen_Wulf
      @Hexen_Wulf 21 день тому +20

      ​@@ConeJellos Uh oh, it's the comment police.

    • @JonathanChase
      @JonathanChase 21 день тому

      @@Hexen_Wulf ACAB includes the comment police.

    • @rompsteelwarofthering6490
      @rompsteelwarofthering6490 20 днів тому +1

      For real, I couldn't believe how good his new draft was, just on the spot like that.

    • @Paladin_HGWT57
      @Paladin_HGWT57 20 днів тому +2

      Oh, master woodworkers are tight!

  • @men3Z
    @men3Z 21 день тому +101

    Doing the voices during the rewrite makes that section soooo much better. Makes it more like he’s adding new jokes to experience, not just typing in a Google Doc

  • @reflactor
    @reflactor 21 день тому +526

    Watching you edit your script in real time is like watching a great magic trick, seeing pure comedy come to life instantly. Please keep this segment in all your revisits!

    • @antoy384
      @antoy384 21 день тому +8

      See, the filming, the image and editing aren’t necessary, just film yourself writing and we’re all laughing already.

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 21 день тому

      @@antoy384 Good to know!

    • @sarthakkhare9843
      @sarthakkhare9843 21 день тому +5

      Ikr?? It also shows just how much better he's gotten at this and how naturally it comes to him

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 16 днів тому

      FOR REAAAAAL

  • @Yattayatta
    @Yattayatta 21 день тому +383

    google doc segment is brilliant, it provides an opportunity for jokes that didn't make it or that were thought of later, while giving an insight into the process and how you have improved at the same time.

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 21 день тому +17

      It is also a great resource for people who want to learn writing

    • @geraldhornsby
      @geraldhornsby 21 день тому +13

      And one thing it does is show how much the writing, the acting and editing has improved. The Google Docs section is wonderful.

    • @burnacco
      @burnacco 16 днів тому

      ABSOLUTELY

  • @stallone8811
    @stallone8811 21 день тому +142

    "if you make a mistake, people WILL point it out" - says a guy who points out mistakes and inconsistencies for a living
    -Regards, People

    • @lonesurvivor8828
      @lonesurvivor8828 18 днів тому +1

      😂

    • @necron4306
      @necron4306 14 днів тому +3

      So youre pointing out the mistake he did by saying that?

    • @cristonsloan
      @cristonsloan 13 днів тому +2

      @@necron4306 🤣🤣

    • @stallone8811
      @stallone8811 12 днів тому +2

      @@necron4306 pointing out the irony yes xD
      I love Ryan though!

    • @marcsequence
      @marcsequence 5 днів тому +1

      @@stallone8811oh pointing out the irony is TIGHT!

  • @MatthewTheWanderer
    @MatthewTheWanderer 21 день тому +36

    I find it totally awesome that Ryan does everything on this channel by himself. The acting, the writing, the editing, the filming. Really impressive! And he keeps getting better.

  • @luisbollain6553
    @luisbollain6553 21 день тому +919

    The "F**k you message" to Sony in the rewriting section caught me off guard 😂😂😂

    • @Kristjan_N
      @Kristjan_N 21 день тому +17

      yeah, seems Ryan likes Helldivers. :D

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 21 день тому +7

      Very appropriate i'd say

    • @BCD10
      @BCD10 21 день тому +8

      Ryan makes me laugh out loud in every video he does, that got me good

    • @RedGuy-wy2gg
      @RedGuy-wy2gg 21 день тому +3

      Subverting expectations, making people laugh since 1998000 BC

    • @pz7510
      @pz7510 21 день тому

      this, and it should have been followed up with a Bat Man joke somehow

  • @a.r.e.j.1693
    @a.r.e.j.1693 21 день тому +850

    The Birdman joke was brilliant, you're right to be proud of it.

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 21 день тому +8

      I don't get it
      Edit: just got to the part where he explained it

    • @MaceDeMarco2010
      @MaceDeMarco2010 21 день тому +17

      @@tokagekithey cast Michael Keaton (Batman) as a Birdman.
      Edit: never mind, got it wrong.

    • @FruitMonger360
      @FruitMonger360 21 день тому +4

      At first I thought he was referring to Chris ´Birdman’ Andersen and I thought that was a really obscure reference.

    • @theotakux5959
      @theotakux5959 21 день тому +12

      I'm still proud of the laughs I got at my local theater when, at the end of the movie, I stood up and proclaimed I enjoyed "Spider-Man vs Batman"...
      Also surprised how many people didn't get the Birdman reference. It won Best Picture!

    • @tokageki
      @tokageki 21 день тому

      @@theotakux5959 I've actually never watched it, or even heard about it til til now.

  • @SR-zp4je
    @SR-zp4je 21 день тому +29

    Ryan’s like ‘nah nah nah sister, you ain’t getting me to no secondary location’

  • @22coinstar
    @22coinstar 21 день тому +12

    Watching every pitch meeting and then watching every one again revisited is TIGHT

  • @Pseudowolf
    @Pseudowolf 21 день тому +78

    I like watching these older ones and seeing how Producer Guy and Writer Guy got more and more unhinged over time. They’re generally calmer and more restrained in the earlier ones.

  • @jxchamb
    @jxchamb 21 день тому +153

    I think you underestimate how much fun the Google docs editing scenes are. Really enjoy it.

  • @MrDLYouTube
    @MrDLYouTube 21 день тому +10

    Who is this guy? His impressions of Writer Guy and Producer Guy is spot on! Good work!

    • @MijmerMopper
      @MijmerMopper 4 дні тому

      You don't know? Its Ryan from the thing you where watching at some point 2 weeks ago.

  • @rileymosman2808
    @rileymosman2808 21 день тому +8

    Love the rewrites, we basically get 2 for one pitch meetings. A fresh and evolved take.

  • @arthurcoser
    @arthurcoser 21 день тому +186

    Love the google docking, it's like an extra pitch meeting

    • @Szokynyovics
      @Szokynyovics 21 день тому +5

      It is so good to witness how the magic happens.

    • @tomaszpiotrowski4569
      @tomaszpiotrowski4569 21 день тому +1

      yeah yeah yeah

    • @ursidae97
      @ursidae97 21 день тому +8

      I love docking with Ryan

    • @Secretgeek2012
      @Secretgeek2012 21 день тому +3

      ​@@ursidae97Go take a cold shower! 😂

    • @Liennie
      @Liennie 21 день тому +7

      Docking with Ryan is TIGHT!

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 21 день тому +205

    "Ryan, I am DYING--"
    *Oh no!*
    "--to know..."
    *Oh, okay.*
    😂😂😂

    • @davewhitmore1958
      @davewhitmore1958 21 день тому +8

      Ryan is concerned about us, as we are concerned for him!

    • @jelita_
      @jelita_ 21 день тому +8

      The comedic timing is really important 🤣

    • @matthewlang737
      @matthewlang737 20 днів тому +2

      God, that moment was gold 😂

  • @geraldhornsby
    @geraldhornsby 21 день тому +6

    Showing how you would rewrite these old Pitch Meetings is TIGHT!

  • @christophereric4
    @christophereric4 21 день тому +4

    omg this “live re-writing” format is sooo much more work for him than previous ‘Revisited’ videos.. but ITS SO 👏 GOOD 👏

  • @a_witcher94
    @a_witcher94 21 день тому +79

    i love the google doc sections so much i am at the point where i wish you would re-do your older pitch meetings .. that obelisk joke is tight!

    • @ChristofferLund
      @ChristofferLund 21 день тому +3

      He could have a patreon or paid tier here where he posts remakes

  • @aaaro88
    @aaaro88 21 день тому +57

    I like that you shifted from just you talking to over-exagering the character voices you use in later episodes. This made them a lot more interesting.

  • @kingsleycy3450
    @kingsleycy3450 21 день тому +10

    I think it reflects a lot of evolution if both you and the fans can see an old pitch meeting, and figure out how current you would make it snappier

  • @parsival
    @parsival 19 днів тому +3

    What these revisits make me realise is that I think it would be really fun to watch if you did a "remastered" of old pitch meetings, where you go back and remake the old pitch meetings with everything you've learned since, just to see how different and similar things would be.

  • @conwarlock3537
    @conwarlock3537 21 день тому +245

    "A bird man, I can work with that." Recently watched that movie, now I understand that reference. Or, to put it in other words: He said the thing!!!

  • @jacksonanderson8203
    @jacksonanderson8203 21 день тому +126

    After you've been doing these revisited pitch meetings for a while, you should revisit a revisited one

    • @johmyh14
      @johmyh14 21 день тому +13

      That's super easy, barely an inconvenience.

    • @donrol93
      @donrol93 21 день тому +7

      Revisiting a revisited is tight!

    • @Tfaonc
      @Tfaonc 21 день тому +15

      It would need to be the pitch for Inception. Revisit the revisited Inception pitch meeting.

    • @PeamThePanda
      @PeamThePanda 21 день тому +4

      Spider-Man: Homecoming REVISTED - Revisited again: Visited once more; we're doing another one PART 2

    • @cruz1ale
      @cruz1ale 21 день тому +2

      live editing the live editing: "In this part of the video I wouldn't have scrolled all the way down to the third paragraph, I would've just skipped that"

  • @castlestar454
    @castlestar454 21 день тому +1

    This is my favourite rewrite section you've done! I think it really showed how you think things through. Got an insight into your mind... In a non-creepy way

  • @darwinism8181
    @darwinism8181 21 день тому +1

    Thank you for taking charge with the doccing, I'm new to this so I appreciate having a confident, experienced person show me how it's done. Truly a gentleman.

  • @dietotaku
    @dietotaku 21 день тому +31

    I LOVE the changes, especially Producer Guy shoehorning Iron Man in because "people like Iron Man," classic!

  • @lorelim
    @lorelim 21 день тому +94

    7:17 You can't just suddenly say the movie came out 8 years ago, you're gonna hurt my feelings.

    • @hedganian
      @hedganian 21 день тому +18

      Friends don't tell friends that the 1990s were more than a decade ago.

    • @EmperorSeth
      @EmperorSeth 21 день тому +2

      If it makes you feel better, it was more like seven years ago!

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 21 день тому

      ​@@hedganian more than two decades ago*

    • @theonlyron
      @theonlyron 21 день тому

      @potato5813 So, still more than a decade ago

    • @potato5813
      @potato5813 20 днів тому

      @@theonlyron yeah, but it's a lot more impactful to say two or even three decades than just one

  • @BlandoGaming
    @BlandoGaming 21 день тому +1

    I love the insight into your though process the Google doc section gives us. Plus it's like an extra mini-pitch meeting as you're doing it! Thanks for all the laughs and I hope you and your family are well.

  • @WesleyWhiteside
    @WesleyWhiteside 21 день тому +2

    Love these pitch meetings and revisits. It gives a satisfying conclusion to older videos that didn't have all the catch phrases and mannerisms mastered yet.
    Have you thought of doing more Pitch Meetings for TV shows? One of my favorites is Friends. It would be great to revisit classic shows, maybe even some old cartoons with ridiculous premises like Tale Spin or Johnny Bravo.

  • @Briansgate
    @Briansgate 21 день тому +86

    seems like Producer Guy and Writer guy grew up and chilled out a little.

    • @xsanguine8
      @xsanguine8 21 день тому +11

      I think it was due to that Dollar Sign stroke Producer Guy had, they both decided to take it a little easier after that.

  • @Resh1477
    @Resh1477 21 день тому +40

    "Iron Man comes to save the day."
    "Is it smart for Spider-Man to always rely on Iron Man to do that?"
    "Why not? It's not like Iron Man is going away anytime soon. I mean, he's not going to die. That would be crazy."
    "Oh right, that WOULD be crazy."

  • @Jeremy-lv8zc
    @Jeremy-lv8zc 20 днів тому

    My dude, you are absolutely my favorite UA-camr. Thank you so very much for all the laughs…and more than a few poignant insights into flicks I love.

  • @k1ng5urfer
    @k1ng5urfer 20 днів тому +1

    i really do enjoy the revisions! thank you for making them a regular addition!

  • @bramverhees755
    @bramverhees755 21 день тому +20

    I’m really liking the Google Doc portion. It’s actually kind of educational for me as I want improve my writing. Accidental learning!

  • @kyled.7748
    @kyled.7748 21 день тому +29

    I love these google doc segments. Its far more educational than it has any right to be lol

  • @MissSagittarian
    @MissSagittarian 7 днів тому

    I really love these revisits. It's so interesting to see how your writing style has changed and developed.

  • @TEMINIX
    @TEMINIX 21 день тому

    I love seeing how your writing has come so far. Seeing you write a Pitch Meeting is awesome.

  • @moiseulpasmoi
    @moiseulpasmoi 21 день тому +19

    Congrats on you being a dad and thank you for still banging out this videos

  • @emanuelgomez4891
    @emanuelgomez4891 21 день тому +33

    "Coz i have seen movies" , hahahahaha GOLD right there. xD

  • @MenacingBanjo
    @MenacingBanjo 20 днів тому

    Watching your re-writing was an absolute joy. It was magical to see you bring new life to the script.

  • @Kraidismyspiritanimal
    @Kraidismyspiritanimal 19 днів тому

    Comparing this to your newest Rebel Moon 2 pitch meeting, you've definitely got your formula on point. It's nice to see the evolution of your characters, voices and witty remarks. Great channel!

  • @shlemmon24
    @shlemmon24 21 день тому +16

    Love the MJ drawing with the red hair 😂

  • @rockdalianninja1056
    @rockdalianninja1056 21 день тому +63

    Before I finish the video, “I’ll be so disappointed if you don’t draw Michael Jordan from the epic space jam”.
    After the video. “I was not disappointed, you are good at the comedy and I’m good at seeing the punchline.”

  • @Christopher-gv8yc
    @Christopher-gv8yc 20 днів тому

    I really enjoy your "Revisited" series. It is very interesting to hear your thought process in hindsight. Please keep doing what you do and I will keep watching!!!!

  • @hmmmm2824
    @hmmmm2824 21 день тому +19

    I'm genuinely impressed by the drawings Ryan makes

    • @FightingCamel22
      @FightingCamel22 21 день тому +2

      And the logical explanation as to what he drew

  • @TherealGethmeister
    @TherealGethmeister 21 день тому +22

    Please do a pitch meeting for a muppet Christmas carol (or any muppets movie)

  • @eduardolago7562
    @eduardolago7562 21 день тому

    You’re the best, man! You always crack me up! Hope to continue seeing you in many years to come. Congrats on being a father, I wish your daughter all the best, beautiful things in life!!

  • @VladZer0
    @VladZer0 21 день тому

    These videos are great, I used to rewatch pitch meetings over and over and is kinda the same but with new content. I think these videos are getting better and better.

  • @KingRbyt
    @KingRbyt 21 день тому +40

    Revisiting Pitch Meetings Are Tight
    And Clicking on this was super easy barely an inconvenience

  • @joels5150
    @joels5150 21 день тому +61

    The mistake of having Peter’s love interest falling from a tower…not because it doesn’t happen (again), but because the Washington Monument is actually an Obelisk, not a tower. 😂
    Still my favorite bit from this Pitch Meeting.

  • @timopper5488
    @timopper5488 21 день тому

    Not only does this “revisit” transport me back seven years in time to when you made the original video, roughly 2-3 years before I discovered you on UA-cam (yes, it was I who discovered you!), but it also gives me added value in the form of your self-critique. And I’m really glad that you pointed out your mispronunciation of the word “debris” so that I didn’t have to mock you mercilessly for it. Very kind of ya!

  • @thomasauer9370
    @thomasauer9370 21 день тому +37

    1:52 that birdman reference had me dying 🤣

  • @Mohammed-dy6xb
    @Mohammed-dy6xb 21 день тому +6

    No matter how many times you revisit a pitch meeting...... never fails to make me laugh !!
    But for Ryan(s) ...its barely an inconvenience !!
    Thank you for spreading so much joy ⭐

  • @allyb3241
    @allyb3241 21 день тому

    I just love these revisits soooo much!!! Keep up the great work!!

  • @Moewenfels
    @Moewenfels 21 день тому +1

    Your google doc-ing is fantastic.
    Even you nonchalantly talking about it and doing that "But people like Iron Man" had me ROARING. That and the extremely interesting insight of course.
    Thank you SO much for making these Mr. Ryan. Mr. George. Mr.. R.. Ge.. Mr. Pitch Meeting.

  • @JarethGT
    @JarethGT 21 день тому +6

    Love that you started doing the editing thing in these, it's cool seeing your writing process

  • @Kranitoko
    @Kranitoko 21 день тому +22

    Spider-Man is the epitome of doing a backflip, snapping the bad guys neck and saving the day.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 21 день тому

      Do you mean "snapping the bad guys' necks"...? My autocorrect loves surprising me with "corrections" that are actually typos that I don't notice until I've hit Send...

    • @Kranitoko
      @Kranitoko 21 день тому +1

      @@realbadger fixed.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 21 день тому +1

      @@realbadger No, he doesn’t. He means “…snapping the bad guy’s neck…” You misplaced the apostrophe and added a plural. Also, you mean “…surprising me…” not “…surprising my…” and you capitalised “…send…” but here it should remain uncapitalised.
      Grammar Police, I know, but hey, I’m thorough.

    • @realbadger
      @realbadger 21 день тому +1

      @jeromevaleska2014 He corrected it. I'd thought it was bad guys plural (hence the correct placement of the apostrophe, as I suspected Next could sound like "necks" being misheard.

    • @jeromevaleska2014
      @jeromevaleska2014 21 день тому +1

      @@realbadger Haha, fair enough. Now what of the rest of the flaws I called out in your reply?

  • @cristonsloan
    @cristonsloan 13 днів тому

    I feel like your re-writes section is improving as you go along, the way you are leaning more into doing the voices and almost acting it out, so that we get a good idea of how it would go if it were the actual pitch meeting. Which is really Meta, since the section that currently is improving is dealing with how you would improve the past content. Absolutely love it! I can envision you taking it even further, so that it almost becomes a remake of the first Pitch Meeting. I mean, remakes are all the rage, right?

  • @njalthemighty5378
    @njalthemighty5378 21 день тому

    I luv these re-writes, it really shows off your talent and process.

  • @justinn8541
    @justinn8541 21 день тому +24

    Commenting on the previous content is tight.

    • @remylebeau34
      @remylebeau34 21 день тому

      and its super easy, barely an inconvenience.

  • @Toto-95
    @Toto-95 21 день тому +8

    Oof the difference in quality then and now on that one is HUGE !
    Honestly just even the tone and acting, the then video is awkward it's very "i just started". Now it's very "overacted" for comedy but in a good way and it works wayyyy better ! like the "Oh my God..." intonation you do now is way better !

    • @dietotaku
      @dietotaku 21 день тому +2

      definitely, comedy needs a bit of melodrama to work and Ryan has got that down to an exact science!

  • @TeamWestAnna
    @TeamWestAnna 20 днів тому +1

    Hey Ryan, I love the clean setup you're rocking now! Your lighting and new mic is *chef's kiss* 🤌

  • @coffeebot3000
    @coffeebot3000 21 день тому

    I love the rewrite part. Your little readings of it is the icing on the cake.

  • @dronix6624
    @dronix6624 21 день тому +9

    OMG IS THAT RYAN FROM THE THING IM CURRENTLY WATCHING????

  • @rachelrasmussen1101
    @rachelrasmussen1101 21 день тому +7

    That MJ is amazing

  • @AllAxcess8427
    @AllAxcess8427 21 день тому

    I love these so much! Something magical about seeing it done and hearing it at the same time ^^ Thank you Ryan for doing these you wonderful person you 😋

  • @greylotus1
    @greylotus1 14 днів тому

    I really enjoy this new format of editing the old scripts. Awesome way to add even more depth to this series!

  • @aurora2670
    @aurora2670 21 день тому +12

    Omg ive been trying to figure out where i knew you from! Your ryan george from the thing im currently watching!!!

  • @Syraks
    @Syraks 21 день тому +6

    Screenwriter Guy: .......... **** you.
    😂😂😂

  • @danielwright3688
    @danielwright3688 21 день тому

    Love your videos. I really enjoy the sincerity of the revisited stuff!

  • @Sherif-the-Watcher
    @Sherif-the-Watcher 21 день тому

    Ryan, your videos are a real piece of work
    In fact, WORKS OF ART

  • @fernandesdamian
    @fernandesdamian 21 день тому +6

    Love your videos! Still waiting patiently for a malignant pitch meeting

    • @aidanyelsma7762
      @aidanyelsma7762 21 день тому +2

      I want a pitch meeting for The Room that ends with the producer guy kicking screenwriter guy out of his office because it sounds terrible and the screenwriter guy replying with “Screw you! I’ll just make it myself!”

  • @sharky582
    @sharky582 21 день тому +3

    I like the addition of Producer Guy forcing Iron Man into the script, studio notes are much more fitting for him and not for Writer Guy.

  • @BaseStation
    @BaseStation 21 день тому

    Love the rewrite section! I mean… I love your whole video. But I especially love the rewrite portion.

  • @_grumpytoad
    @_grumpytoad 21 день тому

    Love these re-visits and the re-write sections. It's fun to see how you would expand the dialogue and add more jokes. ☺

  • @lucideandre
    @lucideandre 21 день тому +8

    The thing with Ned seems…odd to me.
    Like, him not having the best social awareness doesn’t clash with him being amazing at computer stuff. He’s more of a stereotype if anything, of a socially unaware nerd

  • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
    @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 21 день тому +8

    Popped in my Head…you need to do a pitch meeting for the movie ARMAGEDDON!!

    • @Qmeister044
      @Qmeister044 21 день тому +2

      Armageddon and Deep Impact and keep getting the two confused.

    • @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad
      @Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad 21 день тому +1

      @@Qmeister044 yes lol they would be great movies to pitch meeting because of how impossible they were haha

    • @planetofthegapes
      @planetofthegapes 20 днів тому +1

      @@Entertainment-Gaming-Grandad The same as The Core, which I don't think he's done... question mark?

  • @Psychs_IVXX
    @Psychs_IVXX 18 днів тому

    its so cool watching your script writing process in this video

  • @pacorka9943
    @pacorka9943 21 день тому

    The Google Docs section of these videos are the BEST! Literally a short comedy writing lesson and I get the euphoria of seeing your jokes come to life in front of my eyes/ears!

  • @3v1l73ddy
    @3v1l73ddy 21 день тому +4

    I actually really liked the slower pace of the washington monument joke in the original. Sometimes newer pitch meetings can be painfully fast paced.

  • @cylondorado4582
    @cylondorado4582 21 день тому +10

    Is it bad that I want him to do Schindler’s List just so I can hear him say, “[Anything that happened in the movie] is TIGHT!”?

    • @PompeySomerstown
      @PompeySomerstown 21 день тому +1

      Yes. Especially if it's "little girls in red"

  • @IsThatDrak
    @IsThatDrak 21 день тому

    i still would love to see these reshot one day, glad to see you revisiting old work

  • @Anduz001
    @Anduz001 21 день тому

    Once you've done enough of these, I'd love a 2.0 or "Pitch Meeting: Redo" series, where you rerecord these with the updated scripts. Easy for you and it brings them up to date. Love your work Ryan!

  • @Marwolaeth01
    @Marwolaeth01 21 день тому +6

    The tower joke definitely needed tightening up, hehehehe, but listening to it first time around my main criticism of it would be explaining the joke too much.
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower. Oh but you like the idea? Oh yeah I like the tower fall again thing."
    Without a full rework I think it should have simply been:
    "To make our film better than the old movies we'll have her fall from a different tower. It's a mistake. Is it? Yes it's an obelisk not a tower."
    I feel in your later Pitch Meeting's you have learned to trust the audience a bit more to get the joke.

  • @boyeatsworld-vr9ci
    @boyeatsworld-vr9ci 21 день тому +7

    Accurately calling writing lazy is not a sin.

  • @edibleapeman
    @edibleapeman 21 день тому

    Just chiming in as a fellow writer to say I deeply appreciate those google doc sections. I love hearing your progression as you grow to understand your characters better. Thanks for all the fish, guy.

  • @codenamefulcrum3584
    @codenamefulcrum3584 21 день тому +2

    Why did the camera keep moving back and forth? That was a bit distracting... Great video as always though!! The rewrite was amazing. I love that you added that section

  • @jimmypopjr
    @jimmypopjr 21 день тому +15

    Ryan - would you ever consider doing Pitch Meetings for famous/popular songs? Could be a lot of great material there.

    • @usernametaken748
      @usernametaken748 21 день тому

      Some of his sketches on his personal channel @RyanGeorge are basically that. ua-cam.com/video/1QPdQ5TPCMo/v-deo.html

  • @graduator14
    @graduator14 21 день тому +20

    Hi Ryan, please do a Pitch Meeting for The Room l! I've been asking for 4 years!
    I would say wow wow wow..........
    Wow!

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 21 день тому +3

      room is already a parody of itself, would be hard to make into pich meeting, imho.

    • @NickChad
      @NickChad 21 день тому

      @@imomedvidekplus, since the guy who starred in it also paid for it, wrote it, and directed it the pitch meeting would just be one guy pitching the movie to himself. Can you imagine?

    • @imomedvidek
      @imomedvidek 21 день тому

      @@NickChad I imagine that pitch for The Room, was just Tommy Wiseau jerking off while yelling random parts of the script.

    • @graduator14
      @graduator14 20 днів тому

      @@NickChad That would be quite meta!

  • @WAMTAT
    @WAMTAT 21 день тому

    I absolutely love getting a gimpse into the creative process

  • @TibTobTom
    @TibTobTom 15 днів тому

    Hey Ryan!!
    Thanks so much for creating a series that has given me and my family a bunch of great laughs over the past few years.
    I wanted to ask, what inspired the deep voiced *_OOOOUUHHHs_* that have become a staple of the Pitch Meetings series?
    Thanks and congrats on the baby!

  • @4plus20isHappy
    @4plus20isHappy 21 день тому +9

    “Game pitches would be TIGHT!”

    • @JoeyGBean
      @JoeyGBean 21 день тому +4

      i agree! i just don't think he has time to play games with his new daughter

    • @sexydictator3241
      @sexydictator3241 21 день тому

      ​@@JoeyGBeanhis wife could do them, maybe? 😄

    • @bestintheband5114
      @bestintheband5114 21 день тому +3

      @JoeyGBean actually I feel like he could play the games without his daughter, she's probably not old enough to play yet
      (It's a joke, don't worship me)

    • @4plus20isHappy
      @4plus20isHappy 21 день тому +1

      @@JoeyGBean All the more reason. “Isn’t it nearly impossible to afford a kid these days?”

    • @BFedie518
      @BFedie518 21 день тому +2

      He's talked about the video game pitch meetings before. They would simply take too long to make. TV shows are already pushing it.
      They would be fun to see though.

  • @QBnoYouko
    @QBnoYouko 21 день тому

    I'm enjoying the Google Doc rewrite segments. Even when you're editing it as you go, you still act it out and it's just as hilarious!

  • @jasona3418
    @jasona3418 21 день тому

    Hey Ryan! Love your content, I always give a thumbs up even before watching cause I know I’ll like the video!
    My question is: is there a movie for which you did a pitch meeting that you can’t help but love, even though it has a ton of plot holes?

  • @T05H18A1037
    @T05H18A1037 17 днів тому

    I just read your channel description and went, “Oh, new episodes released every Thursday is TIGHT!” 😁

  • @danieldavis7784
    @danieldavis7784 21 день тому

    The "OH" in front of the really reply to the super easy barely an inconvenience is nice!

  • @CalebByRamen
    @CalebByRamen 21 день тому

    I love these Revisited Pitch Meetings! Well done Ryan