Fantastic Four (2015) Pitch Meeting - Revisited!

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  • Step back into the pitch meeting and revisit the completely factual accurate conversation that led to Fan4stic! Complete with commentary from Ryan George who is now several years older!
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  • @gtro4520
    @gtro4520 Місяць тому +2930

    I will never not call this film "Fant-Four-Stic" 😂

    • @somerandolad
      @somerandolad Місяць тому +96

      Neither will I. It's what the movie is called, after all.

    • @caesar7734
      @caesar7734 Місяць тому +25

      Chris Stuckmann refers to it as that

    • @BronzeBoy520
      @BronzeBoy520 Місяць тому +15

      Me too, god intended me to diss this film as Fan4stic.

    • @LuisSierra42
      @LuisSierra42 Місяць тому +18

      @@caesar7734 Ah, yes, when Chris was a real critic

    • @ereini0n
      @ereini0n Місяць тому +3

      Same

  • @squireturnbolt
    @squireturnbolt Місяць тому +1177

    I imagine Ryan's last pitch meeting being where Producer Guy asks "So you have a movie for me?" and then proceeds to sit there for 15 minutes in complete silence waiting for Scriptwriter Guy to show up, only to remember he finally fired him.

    • @Tonyhouse1168
      @Tonyhouse1168 Місяць тому +86

      Way to break my heart

    • @AprehamLincoln
      @AprehamLincoln Місяць тому +155

      "So you have a movie for me?"
      "No sir, I don't!"
      END

    • @Hykje
      @Hykje Місяць тому +78

      "Do you have a movie for me?"
      "No -I'm just here to tell you to clean out your office. The company is on the brink of bankruptcy because of you and they are kicking you out."

    • @xCCflierx
      @xCCflierx Місяць тому +10

      ​@@Hykjethe green being an abandoned warehouse

    • @multi-florum
      @multi-florum Місяць тому +17

      just a video of chat gpt generating a script with no people in the room.

  • @mundochis
    @mundochis Місяць тому +71

    Exit strategy ideas:
    1. A gritty reboot of this channel
    2. Pitch Meeting: The Motion Picture
    3. Pitch Meeting: The Motion Picture Pitch Meeting

  • @WesleyWhiteside
    @WesleyWhiteside Місяць тому +92

    As a writer, I actually really enjoyed watching you edit your script. It would be cool to see an older draft from a classic Pitch Meeting and see how it changed before you shot it.

    • @bucketofsunshine6366
      @bucketofsunshine6366 Місяць тому +3

      Agreed. And since I spend ages writing and editing google docs, it's a nice change to see someone else’s process.

    • @bestintheband5114
      @bestintheband5114 Місяць тому +1

      Agreed (also I was your 69th like)

  • @Joseph-ow6zg
    @Joseph-ow6zg Місяць тому +949

    As someone who also struggles with enjoying the taste of chocolate and then eating it, learning you have the same condition hit hard. Stay strong Ryan 💪

    • @andrewwashere82
      @andrewwashere82 Місяць тому +23

      Likewise, although mine isn't as severe. I only crave dark chocolate.

    • @CorruptDB
      @CorruptDB Місяць тому +29

      I'm like a chocoholic, only I drink booze instead of eat chocolate.

    • @yurisei6732
      @yurisei6732 Місяць тому +18

      I have recently been able to partly overcome my condition by switching to dark chocolate, which is more expensive, so I eat less of it.

    • @PizzaHutCEO
      @PizzaHutCEO Місяць тому +9

      I gave up sweets for lent. There is a cure, stay strong my brothers!

    • @MatthewTheWanderer
      @MatthewTheWanderer Місяць тому +10

      I think he looks better now than he did then

  • @HarbingerH
    @HarbingerH Місяць тому +675

    As a writer, I really appreciated seeing how you edit your script to your updated standards

    • @LaneMaxfield
      @LaneMaxfield Місяць тому +8

      Ditto!

    • @jennifere.pergola598
      @jennifere.pergola598 Місяць тому +6

      I was going to post almost the exact same comment! 😆 Glad I saw yours first!

    • @Script-MD
      @Script-MD Місяць тому +2

      love it

    • @MKDumas1981
      @MKDumas1981 Місяць тому +1

      Xerox.

    • @astrel1275
      @astrel1275 Місяць тому +5

      I will... *counts comments* sixth this? big agree, i mean

  • @SpongeBathBill
    @SpongeBathBill Місяць тому +134

    The editing was NOT boring, it was an awesome window into your creative process and I'd love to see more 😄 And not to look a gift horse in the mouth, but it might even be cool if you re-dubbed a few lines and played them over stills from the original?
    You could even play them back-to-back with the original snippet, for comparison. Like, "So here's the original again... (15-second snippet) And here's how it would sound with these edits (10-second redub) Do you see how much better that flows?"
    I realise it would be extra work, but just an idea for you! And thank you for these Revisited episodes, I enjoy them at least as much as the vanilla episodes.

    • @bernier42
      @bernier42 Місяць тому +1

      I think you got your wish!

    • @SpongeBathBill
      @SpongeBathBill Місяць тому +1

      @bernier42 heck yeah! 😂

  • @bioplay3287
    @bioplay3287 Місяць тому +144

    "But for now, this is still what brings me the most joy, so I'm going to keep doing it until that's no longer the case."
    I'm sure it brings all of us great joy to hear that, Ryan.

  • @elijahfox1929
    @elijahfox1929 Місяць тому +1061

    I’d actually been very curious about scripts and stuff so this was very interesting and I enjoyed it. Congrats on having being a dad soon.

    • @Xandycane
      @Xandycane Місяць тому +15

      I enjoyed it too. It was enlightening to see how he approaches editing.

    • @bestintheband5114
      @bestintheband5114 Місяць тому +9

      Yeah definitely keep it going Ryan!

    • @Grasslander
      @Grasslander Місяць тому +8

      I understand. I have always been very curious about ice cream, so it's pretty much the same thing.

    • @drphot6050
      @drphot6050 Місяць тому +1

      Same here... I was the kid that wanted the Director's Cuts of films.

  • @peterzerfass4609
    @peterzerfass4609 Місяць тому +440

    "I didn't have 'unclear', yet, in my arsenal"
    ...yup...Ryan definitely weaponized that word.

    • @nikhil6704
      @nikhil6704 Місяць тому +16

      Weirdly unclear is also an anagram for nuclear

    • @aceloco817
      @aceloco817 Місяць тому +4

      ​@@nikhil6704 🤯

    • @alveolate
      @alveolate Місяць тому

      im gonna need you to get all the way off of my back on that one

  • @jasonkempton5222
    @jasonkempton5222 Місяць тому +37

    The google doc editing is riveting. I don't mean engrossing, more like physically watching someone install rivets. When there is a re-visit of a re-visit and there is a play-by-play of what should have been talked about, that will be perfect entertainment.

    • @garysmith3037
      @garysmith3037 Місяць тому +1

      So, this is your review of Ryan's riveting re-visit re-editing?

  • @WobblyBits_X
    @WobblyBits_X Місяць тому +32

    I'm so glad you've turned your mic around now. I no longer have to reverse the audio to understand what you're saying.

  • @user-gn2nw3np2z
    @user-gn2nw3np2z Місяць тому +317

    "You can burn out on something you love and still love it" Good lord thank you for that validation Ryan.

    • @Martin_Gark
      @Martin_Gark Місяць тому +12

      I love how honest and down to earth Ryan is

    • @d4slaimless
      @d4slaimless Місяць тому +8

      It is a wrong quote. He said "You can burn out doing something you love even though you lucky to be doing it".

    • @CheekClapper69420
      @CheekClapper69420 Місяць тому

      me with alcohol lolz

    • @NekoRyuukiChan
      @NekoRyuukiChan Місяць тому +4

      Also known as “everyone who works in theatre or entertainment in general”. Some jobs or communities take advantage of your passion, and it’s hard learning that you have to disassociate a bit from something you care about so much.

    • @user-gn2nw3np2z
      @user-gn2nw3np2z Місяць тому

      Yep 21 years in the film biz for me.

  • @twickertoo
    @twickertoo Місяць тому +264

    As someone who lived through the ‘90s, I actually really appreciated the “So this takes place in the ‘90s?”/“No, 2007” bit 🙂 I’m glad it wasn’t trimmed in the original 🙂

    • @feathero3
      @feathero3 Місяць тому +4

      Same!

    • @courtney-ray
      @courtney-ray Місяць тому +1

      Same

    • @danzen6246
      @danzen6246 Місяць тому +1

      Hope he does a Damsel p pitch meeting

    • @doc-holliday-
      @doc-holliday- Місяць тому +3

      Yea it puts it even more into perspective when you realize 2007 is just 7 years before this movie released. N64s and giant clunky PCs weren't the current items lol

  • @PanSpaceman
    @PanSpaceman Місяць тому +15

    I wouldn't call it clap-and-cheer entertaining but I'd say it was very neat seeing you edit your old script because it gives insight into how you approach the final product (and obviously people enjoy the final product). It also highlights that in your revisiting you felt the "you said 'do do'" part was untouchable and perfect as is.

  • @SizzIsNotAHumanBeing
    @SizzIsNotAHumanBeing Місяць тому +4

    I *LOVED* the writing breakdown.
    With how funny these come out I never have a chance to remember how much talent and skill is required thru all the laughter 😂
    I hope I’m not the only one but I’m definitely wanting more writing breakdowns

  • @maxbracegirdle9990
    @maxbracegirdle9990 Місяць тому +341

    I think the joke about what year it is with the technology the characters use was the funniest one in this script, so im glad you didn't cut that one

    • @pg2826
      @pg2826 Місяць тому +19

      Yea I would keep it in too

    • @naamadossantossilva4736
      @naamadossantossilva4736 Місяць тому +8

      Well,it is proof of a blatant lack of care.

    • @EdgarRoock
      @EdgarRoock Місяць тому +9

      Just imagine how many other great jokes Ryan must have cut for pacing over those years.

  • @GizmoFromPizmo
    @GizmoFromPizmo Місяць тому +119

    The line about it being only 2007 was a very funny line. The setup was perfect, "So, it was in the 1990s?" I cracked up when you said, "No, 2007."

  • @ketanvaghela7001
    @ketanvaghela7001 Місяць тому +15

    just so you know Ryan, your work is also getting mentioned in other youtube channels (not at all related to comedy too!).
    I recently saw the super easy barely inconvenience reference in a physics channel. and it's so wholesome!
    Love your work man. ❤

  • @Danyko33
    @Danyko33 Місяць тому +6

    Watching you "correct" your script is actually both interesting and helpful to know what the thought process is behind each line, how to deliver as much as possible in the least amount of time, and not to repeat already said things.

  • @adrianvanleeuwen
    @adrianvanleeuwen Місяць тому +138

    Ryan's delivery has come a long way since his original pitch meetings. His faster comic pace and funny quips and trademark lines would develop very well over the years to their greatness now!

    • @CharlesFerraro
      @CharlesFerraro Місяць тому +7

      Yeah his acting skills have increased or he’s more comfortable in front of the camera (prob both).

    • @alveolate
      @alveolate Місяць тому +5

      yea he's a lot more expressive now and it comes across as confidence too

  • @reanamet1901
    @reanamet1901 Місяць тому +177

    I quite liked the "touching up the old script" part.

    • @laseede17
      @laseede17 Місяць тому +6

      Me too! Maybe a little too fast and, in honor of the movie, not much payoff. It would've been good to make a quick edit of how the new scene would be compared to the old one.

    • @billby
      @billby Місяць тому +1

      I also liked it and I want to help bump up this comment for visibility. So I'm leaving a reply here...too...Because I enjoyed the "touching up of the old script" part.
      Well. My work here is done, I suppose.

    • @apollohateshisdayjob9606
      @apollohateshisdayjob9606 Місяць тому +3

      ​@@laseede17I liked the addition, but I think doing a quick edit (I'm guessing you mean something like a producer guy short) to show us how it would look may undermine a bit of why he's doing Revisited, since it's supposed to be an easy quick video to give more breathing room for his main videos.
      I think editing the DOC is a good middle ground, since it's more visual and specific than him vaguely saying what scene he would want to improve.

    • @fatrunner
      @fatrunner Місяць тому +1

      Touching up in front of others is tight!

  • @jtenos
    @jtenos Місяць тому +11

    I’m glad this still brings you joy because it definitely does for all of us. Entertaining, and also a real service - there have been many movies that I just am not ever going to watch, but I appreciate a 5 minute plot summary to validate my decision.

  • @Ellicess
    @Ellicess Місяць тому +10

    Loved the script editing section! It’s really interesting to see behind the scenes stuff like that and get pointers 😁

  • @pm-5565
    @pm-5565 Місяць тому +127

    The de-aging VFX on this pitch are uncanny

  • @LindyWithAWhy
    @LindyWithAWhy Місяць тому +217

    Telling the difference between older Pitch Meetings and newer ones?
    Super easy, barely an inconvenience.

  • @Aryan-dr5ix
    @Aryan-dr5ix Місяць тому +3

    "I can't be expected to know basic things"
    I'm gonna use this. Thank you👍🏼

  • @noahlondon8005
    @noahlondon8005 Місяць тому +3

    RYAN...PLEASE DON'T LEAVE. Your Pitch Meetings are epic and unique. I've found myself literally in tears laughing at them. I often search for pitch meetings for some movies that deserve them. Keep em coming 🙂

  • @andrewcox4166
    @andrewcox4166 Місяць тому +238

    I really like the rewrite bits here! Wasn’t boring at all - actually not even an inconvenience. There are few channels with videos under ten minutes that I bother with but you do excellent work and it’s been fun watching you go back over the older material and update it. Keep up the great work man!

    • @llarmstrong783
      @llarmstrong783 Місяць тому +1

      It was an inconvenience, but just barely 😊

  • @kartoffelkuchen1992
    @kartoffelkuchen1992 Місяць тому +76

    Who else would love for Ryan to reshoot a pitch meeting during one of these where he keeps the dialogue exactly the same and has the new energy and delivery?

    • @appletree3541
      @appletree3541 Місяць тому +15

      I was thinking it would be fun to see him redo a script and record it without having looked at what he did a decade ago
      And then compare

    • @RosaMartinez-fg4ku
      @RosaMartinez-fg4ku Місяць тому +3

      That sounds like a great idea!

    • @Mokeman17
      @Mokeman17 Місяць тому +2

      That would be really fun to watch

    • @nerdin8or
      @nerdin8or Місяць тому +2

      Or just record the edited script he made so we can see how it improved!

    • @DerDerAdventures
      @DerDerAdventures Місяць тому

      This

  • @Ephilias
    @Ephilias Місяць тому +4

    As a writer, I love seeing you edit your scripts! If your audience find it boring, why are they even watching revisited Pitch Meetings?

  • @lordfly88
    @lordfly88 Місяць тому +2

    The best part of this was hearing that there is no end in sight for pitch meetings 😀

  • @khayakhumalo6116
    @khayakhumalo6116 Місяць тому +65

    "You can't expect me to know basic things" is my new saying 😂

  • @GiovanniFrancioso
    @GiovanniFrancioso Місяць тому +61

    I'm just glad to know that the writers strike did not affect pitch meeting at all. Screenwriter guy has taken Hollywood to a new level

  • @bRianizzle
    @bRianizzle Місяць тому +4

    Been enjoying your "bonus material" format. Watched the whole video, and I'm glad you didn't cut any of it.

  • @jimmy685
    @jimmy685 Місяць тому +2

    The was the best time I've spent watching someone edit a doc. Thank you sir!

  • @TimmyM
    @TimmyM Місяць тому +21

    Revisiting your old Google doc is TIGHT

  • @JJ_R
    @JJ_R Місяць тому +291

    This Pitch Meeting was fantastic, not fant4stick, so it’s automatically better!

    • @Tautolonaut
      @Tautolonaut Місяць тому +13

      The Pitch Meeting was in fact fanfivestic

  • @AdventuringAndre
    @AdventuringAndre Місяць тому

    Have been watching your videos for years, they bring me and my friends lots of joy! I say “super easy, barely an inconvenience” unironically at work all the time. Thanks for bringing your humor to life with these videos!

  • @uclakirk
    @uclakirk Місяць тому +2

    I’ve always really enjoyed a well-timed “wow”.

  • @Jonathan_Collins
    @Jonathan_Collins Місяць тому +279

    Johnny got fire powers because fire got in his suit, Ben turns into the thing because rocks got in his suit, Reed gets all stretchy because he was wearing a condom. Makes as much sense as the rest of this movie.

    • @gtdc4685
      @gtdc4685 Місяць тому +6

      💀☠️

    • @HurricaneDDragon
      @HurricaneDDragon Місяць тому +39

      And Sue gained her powers because she actually just happens to be a wizard. 🤣

    • @blarghblarghblargh
      @blarghblarghblargh Місяць тому

      Sue gets her invisibility powers because shes a woman and should have been in the kitchen

    • @Grasslander
      @Grasslander Місяць тому +22

      And Susan was blowing bubblegum bubbles, I guess

    • @mori1bund
      @mori1bund Місяць тому +1

      I also want those stretchy powers!
      From now on I'm gonna wear *always* a condom, in case some green stuff comes along to give me powers.

  • @IronDino
    @IronDino Місяць тому +77

    I actually really like the the bit by bit breakdown of the Doc.

  • @robnhood007
    @robnhood007 Місяць тому

    LOVE learning about your process! That's my favorite part of the revisited series.

  • @Fwuzeem
    @Fwuzeem Місяць тому

    Love this revisited stuff. Thanks for letting us in on the document, really useful to see

  • @RyanFloom
    @RyanFloom Місяць тому +74

    Watching the old pitch meetings is cool to see how far Ryan has come with finding his footing for these. They sound a bit more serious in the past and are even funnier now with how he makes them talk

  • @TheLivingThanos
    @TheLivingThanos Місяць тому +176

    I thank Ryan for bringing attention to the Eating Chocolate and other Sweet Stuff syndrome.
    Most people don't know what this is and thus can't understand us.
    Truly One of the Best UA-camr of our generation 😢😢

    • @attiasprouse682
      @attiasprouse682 Місяць тому +13

      Right now the only treatment for it is to eat chocolate & other sweet stuff.

    • @GLJosh
      @GLJosh Місяць тому +10

      ECOSS Syndrome is a thing that no one talks about and really needs to be amplified.

    • @davidheuser2119
      @davidheuser2119 Місяць тому +12

      I have a similar issue where my body doesn't produce beer, so I have to drink it almost daily.

    • @TheLivingThanos
      @TheLivingThanos Місяць тому +7

      @@davidheuser2119 I thank you for coming out to everyone in public

    • @newtpondskipper
      @newtpondskipper Місяць тому +4

      Hit my wife out of nowhere. People need to realize how serious this is.

  • @whitewalker9862
    @whitewalker9862 Місяць тому +2

    I'm sorry Ryan. No exit strategy for you. I'm so addicted to Pitch Meetings for years that I can't imagine not having it anymore. Hopefully you'll do this forever.

  • @stevenpecksen2901
    @stevenpecksen2901 Місяць тому

    I really enjoyed the editing segment! Thank you for taking us on that journey and showing us a peek into your process! (said the aspiring writer)

  • @jeffhidalgo6037
    @jeffhidalgo6037 Місяць тому +182

    Some kind words for the algorithm prior to enjoying this revist! These have quickly become my favorite pitches!

  • @johnjsal
    @johnjsal Місяць тому +17

    It will always fascinate me to see someone, especially a writer, artist, musician, etc., not only explain their work but also show how they actually create it.

  • @DreadedVikingPenguin
    @DreadedVikingPenguin Місяць тому

    Loved the editing honestly. Interesting to see the thought process.

  • @LCaaroe
    @LCaaroe Місяць тому

    I watch these Revisited to hear you comment on your old videos and what you think about it. This was really interesting, hope you do more of it

  • @IsaacZylstra
    @IsaacZylstra Місяць тому +24

    It's really good to know that Pitch Meeting brings you a lot of joy. It seems like the kind of thing that could feel really repetitive and grindy to do, so it's nice to know that you have fun with it.

  • @jaybberwocky
    @jaybberwocky Місяць тому +32

    I'm always amazed by how sedate you are in these earlier videos. The writer guy and producer guy we see in the current pitch meetings look like they've been corrupted by an Eldritch horror with those rictus grins and I love it.

  • @y3s.1234
    @y3s.1234 Місяць тому +30

    Have you ever thought about not just ‘revisiting’ your pitches but also redoing them, with tweaked scripts? Also you are the one UA-camr that has never failed to make me laugh and brighten my day, so i thank you for 4 years of that :)

  • @PaulBuck7d
    @PaulBuck7d Місяць тому

    Love the script editing. It's so cool to see how you've grown and changed.

  • @alastairmcleod5089
    @alastairmcleod5089 Місяць тому +27

    The script editing is cool, do it again on another revisited!

  • @balancedboys
    @balancedboys Місяць тому +61

    You say "it's boring" but actually it is very insightful for new writers/content creators. To check and cut down their work before moving on to the next step is valuable! It will literally stop postproduction headaches from happening, especially after you've already shared it with the world. And it's good to see that practice done by a well-seasoned content creator such as yourself. So take note creatives! This is a great gift that Ryan is giving with these "Revisited" videos. Thank you, sir!

  • @tabishhayat1522
    @tabishhayat1522 Місяць тому

    Really liked the editing the Google Doc parts, it provides great insight into the writing process, loved it ♥

  • @HisVirusness
    @HisVirusness Місяць тому +1

    I just want you to know, I was on the edge of my seat while you were editing that document. Riveting!

  • @kylemccormack1785
    @kylemccormack1785 Місяць тому +25

    I really liked seeing the script and how you might change it years later, doesn't need to be in every single "revisited" or you can always keep it fairly brief, but it's not boring the way you did it as a small part of the video like you did here.

  • @xpgamer6781
    @xpgamer6781 Місяць тому +114

    Truly one of the movies of all time.

    • @policerthought5649
      @policerthought5649 Місяць тому +12

      It definitely had actors and writing that were.

    • @Cedsoncole
      @Cedsoncole Місяць тому +1

      Zoomer alert

    • @Kanyewestbiggestfan123
      @Kanyewestbiggestfan123 Місяць тому +5

      @@policerthought5649 it was shot in a such a way

    • @HMNCLunar
      @HMNCLunar Місяць тому +3

      ​@@CedsoncoleTruly one of the jokes of all time

    • @Erickhetfield
      @Erickhetfield Місяць тому +1

      This joke is not old at all.

  • @fishingbyte
    @fishingbyte Місяць тому

    This was really cool! Loving the revisited pitch meetings and your new ideas!

  • @johnnyblue07
    @johnnyblue07 Місяць тому +2

    Hey Ryan. You probably won't read this, but I really did enjoy your rewrite segment. It wasn't boring at all. I like listening to your thought process and seeing older scripts get the gold standard we've come to know and love. I hope you keep doing these script rewrites for the revisited episodes.
    P.S. There's no shame in indulging in some chocs. Parenting is tough. Adulting is tough. Life is tough. Get your chocs on. I'll send you even more chocs if I could. :)

  • @MyBiPolarBearMax
    @MyBiPolarBearMax Місяць тому +90

    I suffer from the same affliction, Ryan.
    Solidarity ✊

    • @aaronmccullers384
      @aaronmccullers384 Місяць тому +3

      As a fellow viticm I will join you in solidarity ✊

    • @nhmooytis7058
      @nhmooytis7058 Місяць тому

      I just enjoy food. But I cook healthy ingredients so I’ve actually lost 100 pounds since 2015!

  • @stevedenny7887
    @stevedenny7887 Місяць тому +48

    As someone who enjoys writing and the creative process, I have to say the part where you went through the script and highlighted the changes you would make was extremely engaging. I enjoy getting to peer into someone else's thought process behind their creative decisions; it's always interesting to see what thoughts go into the decisions that are ultimately made, so please keep doing this in future "Revisited" videos.

  • @j.b.5422
    @j.b.5422 Місяць тому

    It's gonna be fun to see your revisitings evolve just as much as the actual pitch meetings did!

  • @tomtripp5417
    @tomtripp5417 Місяць тому +1

    I actually really enjoyed watching the script editing. Watching parts of the process feels like the extra stuff you watch when you can’t be bothered to get up and change the dvd

  • @mwndjddjdhdbbf8408
    @mwndjddjdhdbbf8408 Місяць тому +55

    The editing process is very interesting, you should definitely keep it in.

  • @crazycubedude
    @crazycubedude Місяць тому +28

    THANK YOU FOR THE BEHIND THE SCENES WRITING BIT! As a content creator myself it's always nice to see how someone else does things that you like to watch. So thank you for that. You are an inspiration that videos can be made.

  • @luckycoinflip6203
    @luckycoinflip6203 Місяць тому

    As someone who just took a screenwriting class, I love this. Keep showing us your edits!

  • @CubFlanagan
    @CubFlanagan Місяць тому

    I enjoyed the script editing, please do more of that! I like seeing how creators refine their process(es?).

  • @IcEc0Ld92
    @IcEc0Ld92 Місяць тому +9

    LOVED the “script rewrite” portion

  • @gnbman
    @gnbman Місяць тому +11

    I enjoyed the script edits.
    And you know what else I enjoy? The idea of you doing Pitch Meetings for the rest of the Superman films. Don't forget Supergirl!

  • @DaedrinMolkre
    @DaedrinMolkre Місяць тому

    Definitely would like to see more of you re-editing your scripts. The entire time I watched that pitch meeting, I was thinking about how different it feels from your modern style, so seeing you actually go in and think about how you'd do it today was very interesting to me.

  • @stoneylonesome7
    @stoneylonesome7 Місяць тому

    I watch the revisited Pitch Meetings to see all the interesting behind-the-scenes stuff you add in the end. I also like to see your drawings, that's fun.

  • @jakebeach8308
    @jakebeach8308 Місяць тому +9

    I really like the idea of watching you revise older pitch meetings with your standards and experience of today. That'd be fun.

  • @marvdick-underwood
    @marvdick-underwood Місяць тому +53

    Inb4 he draws something related to the 1982 film
    EDIT: Ryan, the bts of scriptwriting was not boring. But editing, screenplay/scriptwriting & practical effects are my favourite part of cinema

    • @MusicoftheDamned
      @MusicoftheDamned Місяць тому

      I was expecting that the same, and even though he didn't do it, I wouldn't mind if he actually covered the 1982 _The Thing_ movie.

  • @therealmrboo9962
    @therealmrboo9962 Місяць тому

    I loved watching you edit your script! Would very much enjoy seeing you do it in future revisits

  • @CassandrasChaos
    @CassandrasChaos Місяць тому +1

    Really enjoyed that script editing. As an aspiring writer it's super exciting to see someone so accomplished go back to their earlier work and refine it. Would honestly watch a video of you just fully going through the process of how you write these scripts/editing them or just other forms of video that could be great white noise as I work on my own writing.

  • @hagros93
    @hagros93 Місяць тому +35

    I found the analysis of what you'd do differently with the script now really interesting! I think it fits the concept of doing Revisited videos really well and I'd love to see it again

    • @matthiasdoineau8543
      @matthiasdoineau8543 Місяць тому

      Loved this analysis too even though it's not what I'm looking for here, maybe a separate format for those would be better? Either way I'm here for it.

  • @Linda_Potato
    @Linda_Potato Місяць тому +22

    QUESTION:
    Have you ever considered just remaking some of your older pitch meetings? New script, new jokes, new Ryan?
    I'm certain many of us would love it! Especially with the really big franchises.
    Thank you for all your work!

  • @tomprizeman2511
    @tomprizeman2511 Місяць тому

    Loved the script edit, haven’t watched many these re-visiteds but will be back to see more script edits!

  • @GoodBoyGoneDad
    @GoodBoyGoneDad Місяць тому

    I really liked the editing bit. It's neat to see how you have grown and evolved as a scriptwriter and storyteller.

  • @TRPLD
    @TRPLD Місяць тому +4

    I am so glad you opened up about your chocolate addiction. Finally I feel heard and seen! Thank you from the bottom of my heart! :-*

  • @raikohtv93
    @raikohtv93 Місяць тому +11

    This Pitch Meeting has one of my favorite endings in the series. I just love the way they point at each other and laugh after the "fantastic".

  • @StevieWicks
    @StevieWicks Місяць тому

    It's such a strong premise and your execution is only getting better, I'm fine if ya never stop.

  • @brianabroberg3814
    @brianabroberg3814 Місяць тому

    I like this format of revisited-- the Google doc was not boring at all. I liked having a more concrete understanding of your thought process. Thanks for sharing it with us!

  • @MrHumm3lz
    @MrHumm3lz Місяць тому +7

    So cool to be invited into the process and how you've improved the technique over the years!

  • @edibleapeman2
    @edibleapeman2 Місяць тому +5

    As a writer and depression magnet, I deeply appreciated a peek into your writing and editing process.

  • @Zakkleberg
    @Zakkleberg Місяць тому

    I loved seeing the editing of the script. Seeing the creative process is interesting to me and I would genuinely like to see more of that

  • @shanesparks9888
    @shanesparks9888 Місяць тому

    I appreciated all of it, including the editing, thanks!

  • @pedrokenzo4670
    @pedrokenzo4670 Місяць тому +10

    I loved the re-scripting bit! It is so great to get an insight into your writing process!

  • @alexmarquez6341
    @alexmarquez6341 Місяць тому +9

    HOLY LINE-EDITING RYAN!
    I loved the script editing!

  • @rmcclure21
    @rmcclure21 Місяць тому +1

    So seeing as I’m watching this to procrastinate from doing some editing myself, I’m gonna need you to get ALLLLL the way off my back about what I should be doing right now. Please depart my back at your earliest convenience.
    But yes, love your content and the editing was far from boring! Keep up the great work!

  • @honestinsincerity2270
    @honestinsincerity2270 Місяць тому

    Actually really love taking a peek behind the curtains here. Please do more!

  • @TheGokuButton
    @TheGokuButton Місяць тому +12

    Everybody take a moment to appreciate Ryan still enjoys making these pitch meetings! I thought after all this time you might resent or hate doing these but it turns out it’s super easy, barely an inconvenience

  • @Rembreiker_lychec9257
    @Rembreiker_lychec9257 Місяць тому +85

    It's really funny that Trank correctly identified the correct writer in Slater, but couldn't identify that he wasn't the right director.

    • @alex.g7317
      @alex.g7317 Місяць тому +4

      Who’s Trank?
      Edit: I know who Trank is now.

    • @goblinounours
      @goblinounours Місяць тому +1

      @@alex.g7317Fan4stic was directed by Josh Trank, who co-wrote the screenplay with Jeremy Slater and Simon Kinberg.
      Brought to you by the power of Google!

    • @jeffdroog
      @jeffdroog Місяць тому +2

      Wrong universe bud lol

    • @TheRealNormanBates
      @TheRealNormanBates Місяць тому +4

      @@goblinounourshe also did *Chronicle,* which I thought was a really good movie.
      In a weird way, I always saw *Chronicle* as “Superman Begins.” The 3 characters are in a way Id, Ego and Superego. The ship they find has that “crystalline Christmas ornament” look from Donner’s film, and I took it as “a baby wouldn’t survive the trip, but what if the ship contained the essence of Krypton and beamed the Kryptonian into the natives, who would already be acclimated to the environment”? The ending even has an homage to *Superman II* with DeHane throwing a bus at “Superman” (whose actor has the black hair and blue shirt). In the end, the sole survivor is flying to a Buddhist temple to learn meditation and emotional control, to essentially become Superman.

    • @bjchit
      @bjchit Місяць тому +2

      @@alex.g7317 Josh Trank, director of the Fant 4 Stick.

  • @MAL8916
    @MAL8916 Місяць тому

    The script editing process was very interesting. Would love to see that come back in future revisited videos!

  • @Auctarius23
    @Auctarius23 Місяць тому

    This look at your script was amazing, I’d love to see more of those