AQA Hate For Me This: How To Pre Plan Q5 & Guarantee 50% Of Your GCSE

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  • @hamzaishy
    @hamzaishy Місяць тому +52

    who is here 1 day before the exam tryna memorise a whole story 😂😂

  • @zuuzunaasir9061
    @zuuzunaasir9061 2 місяці тому +84

    Kill me I don’t want to do English language 😭😭

    • @user-yk3ko1hg8w
      @user-yk3ko1hg8w 2 місяці тому +1

      poscode ples

    • @um4lik398
      @um4lik398 2 місяці тому +7

      Better than lit paper 2

    • @boss22
      @boss22 Місяць тому

      gimme a time and a place, happy to help

  • @anverybigidiot6482
    @anverybigidiot6482 2 місяці тому +7

    I was searching story ideas literally yesterday, thankyou so muchh

  • @finleycolucci7143
    @finleycolucci7143 3 місяці тому +24

    carrying my english

  • @y45vlogzz
    @y45vlogzz 3 місяці тому +15

    This is gonna be Fire 🔥 you already know it. MR everything english is on smoke

    • @Turabmalik7
      @Turabmalik7 2 місяці тому +1

      Chachi boy is back with shafaqat

    • @lathusan10
      @lathusan10 2 місяці тому

      Bro is on smoke

  • @testchannel-ko1sh
    @testchannel-ko1sh 2 місяці тому +2

    You actually made english language so easy i got a 6 in my first mocks and a 9 in the next

  • @JERIMIAH0ZENDIAH-db3gy
    @JERIMIAH0ZENDIAH-db3gy 2 місяці тому +4

    thank you sir!!

  • @melonblade3749
    @melonblade3749 2 місяці тому

    This is gonna be fire 😫😩😩😩😩

  • @Rubyyyyyyyy-ov3vy
    @Rubyyyyyyyy-ov3vy 3 місяці тому

    Pretty sure it will help us thanks for the support sir 😊❤😊

  • @purple833
    @purple833 2 місяці тому +2

    i have my english language mock tomorrow and i already know this is going to boost my grade by miles. Thankyou!

    • @purple833
      @purple833 2 місяці тому

      Thankyouu🫶

    • @AnikaAni-no8og
      @AnikaAni-no8og 2 місяці тому

      WHAT WAS THE PICTURE OR QUESTION?😭 PLEASE LEMME KNOW I HAVE MINE TODAY

  • @aleshakhan3109
    @aleshakhan3109 Місяць тому +3

    im using this tmr, thank you so much

  • @Fatima.2413
    @Fatima.2413 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank you sir

  • @s1lence214
    @s1lence214 2 місяці тому

    i actually really like the prison break and the amazon package. ty for the idea

  • @Achieve_Success.
    @Achieve_Success. 2 місяці тому

    Ty bro ur a legend 🎉🎉🎉

  • @user-cr2fr5vp8n
    @user-cr2fr5vp8n 2 місяці тому +3

    Can you do a prediction for GCSE question 5 please.

  • @Lonleybee8
    @Lonleybee8 2 місяці тому +10

    We rlly need the lit predictions so we can stary preping . Some ppl say its either kingship or betrayal for MACBETH?

    • @heyy1
      @heyy1 2 місяці тому +1

      I read something saying high chance it could be on supernatural?

  • @user-ts3px9yv9v
    @user-ts3px9yv9v 2 місяці тому +8

    Sir please can you give your predictions of the inspector calls question so we can turn our focus slightly to the focus of the question. Please it’ll be a huge help thank you ❤

    • @INeedGooderGrades
      @INeedGooderGrades 2 місяці тому

      ur so lucky aqa gives two questions and u choose according to one that suits you best

  • @IceCube-tn8px
    @IceCube-tn8px 2 місяці тому +2

    I almost always use a story relating to death or mythology. The two are very closely linked, and its very easy to get in lots of metaphors.

    • @pixz3484
      @pixz3484 2 місяці тому

      What types of metaphors have you used for these?

    • @IceCube-tn8px
      @IceCube-tn8px 2 місяці тому +1

      @@pixz3484 just metaphors for stuff dying. Stuff like
      -The sun setting
      -A final leaf falling of a branch
      -Walking down a hill

    • @INeedGooderGrades
      @INeedGooderGrades 2 місяці тому

      @@IceCube-tn8px thats not flipping metaphors they are literal things that happen.

    • @IceCube-tn8px
      @IceCube-tn8px 2 місяці тому

      @@INeedGooderGrades The sun setting is the end of the day, representative of the end of someone's life.
      The final leaf falling off a branch may represent the final part of someone's life.
      Walking down / up a hill on a journey somewhere could represent their ascent or descent into heaven or hell.
      I used these on my last mock and got 22/24 for content.

    • @INeedGooderGrades
      @INeedGooderGrades 2 місяці тому

      @@IceCube-tn8px .... grade 9 story nice and if u do well on all the other prior questions on that paper you potentially secured yourself a grade 8-9

  • @johannrodrigues4712
    @johannrodrigues4712 2 місяці тому +1

    "you have been sent to hell" was hella funny 😆

  • @fadilanajm68
    @fadilanajm68 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank u so much for the videos it’s really helpful😊😊😊😊

  • @strophosgaming5998
    @strophosgaming5998 2 місяці тому

    MR everything english pls make a video on the book "Heroes" we are doing it in Wales and I am so screwed for it thank you

  • @1bbys
    @1bbys 2 місяці тому +23

    1) Use Mr Everything English’s plot
    2) Tell ChatGPT to create a story with the plot with the markscheme - adapt the story to make it yours
    3)Memorise it

    • @purple833
      @purple833 2 місяці тому

      Lmao ur so smart

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому +8

      😮

    • @lightning5615
      @lightning5615 2 місяці тому

      @@MrEverythingEnglish Sir do you think thats a good idea

    • @random.vids4
      @random.vids4 2 місяці тому +7

      That’s exactly what i did, now i have the perfect story for my exam, just need to memorize it by heart and hope the question matches my story

    • @ShockRoadTo1K
      @ShockRoadTo1K 2 місяці тому

      @@random.vids4share your story with us

  • @h.h4567
    @h.h4567 2 місяці тому

    anyone know which one of these is the best?

  • @nintenvlogz
    @nintenvlogz 2 місяці тому +1

    I love you

  • @mysticfire6601
    @mysticfire6601 2 місяці тому +1

    I do eduqas for English if anyone has any predictions for AIC , JH and Macbeth would be greatly appreciated

  • @jacobbrowning1433
    @jacobbrowning1433 2 місяці тому

    This goes cold

  • @dansilvington7005
    @dansilvington7005 2 місяці тому

    Brother I love you.

  • @tracysgladrags4135
    @tracysgladrags4135 2 місяці тому +1

    Hello Mr Everything, have you any advice on DAFOREST for paper 1, on question 5,

    • @yakov3160
      @yakov3160 Місяць тому

      DAFOREST is for q5 paper 2 only. You must use each letter and meaning of the words and implement it to your story

  • @BobPotato-so1ol
    @BobPotato-so1ol 2 місяці тому +1

    what about the thugshaker question

  • @ElenaKaheh-ip4bq
    @ElenaKaheh-ip4bq 2 місяці тому

    Hi Sir, so If I use one of these stories for question 5, and other people do the same thing, wouldn’t this be plagiarism?

  • @mayalj4791
    @mayalj4791 2 місяці тому

    @MrEverythingEnglish I have read that a couple of times in the past both questions have been descriptions? What shall we do if that happens?

  • @M1A198-xp3bf
    @M1A198-xp3bf Місяць тому +1

    Hi sir in English language I used ur priest story :) very helpful literally was cooking

    • @AliAdeelGaming
      @AliAdeelGaming Місяць тому

      What was the question on for language paper 1 question 5

    • @M1A198-xp3bf
      @M1A198-xp3bf Місяць тому

      @@AliAdeelGaming write about a disagreement

    • @AliAdeelGaming
      @AliAdeelGaming Місяць тому

      @@M1A198-xp3bf how did you link the priest story? I’m thinking of using the Netflix and war one because I love language of warfare so I’m thinking how I would link it.

    • @M1A198-xp3bf
      @M1A198-xp3bf Місяць тому

      @@AliAdeelGaming I wrote about the disagreement with God and angel and if the priest should go heaven or hell.

    • @AliAdeelGaming
      @AliAdeelGaming Місяць тому

      @@M1A198-xp3bf Nice! I’m sure you did amazing

  • @olixina1309
    @olixina1309 Місяць тому +2

    my teachers were talking about how apparently two years ago loads of students used a similar story from youtube and they all failed 💀💀💀🌚

  • @user-wu4fw8ql4c
    @user-wu4fw8ql4c 2 місяці тому

    is there a video for descriptive writing

  • @Esa_H
    @Esa_H 2 місяці тому +2

    Hi sir I was just wondering about the plagiarism as although you said it is fine to take inspiration my teacher has told us that if the marker thinks that it’s a rehearsed story that they will award 0 marks

    • @joblesstuesday3295
      @joblesstuesday3295 Місяць тому

      that’s false!

    • @cutiechai
      @cutiechai Місяць тому

      How the hell will they know it’s rehearsed? Only if u write a random story that’s not on the askin

  • @Rubyyyyyyyy-ov3vy
    @Rubyyyyyyyy-ov3vy 3 місяці тому +1

    4 dayyysss that’s lonngggggg 😂😂😂

  • @stradache
    @stradache 2 місяці тому +3

    Hello sir i hope you are doing well. I just want to ask can I take a story from online and write that in my exam?

    • @Dhmr_
      @Dhmr_ 2 місяці тому +3

      If they recognise its copied ur finished

    • @kkxsbhffhm-rs8ib
      @kkxsbhffhm-rs8ib 2 місяці тому

      @@Dhmr_what if you change the wording of the whole thing but obvs its the same plot?

    • @sportscommentaries4396
      @sportscommentaries4396 2 місяці тому +1

      @@kkxsbhffhm-rs8ibyes thats ok, as long as you don’t copy directly from it, for example, you could write about a student getting invited to a school of magic, just changing it all around a bit, your just using an idea. You can also use quotes from your poems, for example, when i did my mocks, i wrote a story where somebody died at the end, and i wrote “all smiles stopped together.”

    • @JessicaMason-mk4pf
      @JessicaMason-mk4pf 2 місяці тому

      Well he said you can use the idea of it but you cannot copy the writers work

    • @Menar-ZB
      @Menar-ZB 2 місяці тому +1

      Nooo! That's plagiarism: copying somebody's else work.
      You can use the idea but not copying 50% of the context of the story.

  • @AnasAli-dl5gp
    @AnasAli-dl5gp 2 місяці тому

    Is it guaranteed. I can use these 8 stories?

  • @llllllllllp
    @llllllllllp 3 місяці тому +3

    4 days 😫

  • @fiddylmao
    @fiddylmao 2 місяці тому +1

    i have an english language exam tomorrow the timing could not have been better 🙏🙏🙏 saviour

  • @Martyrdomministries
    @Martyrdomministries Місяць тому +1

    great English advice , sketchy theology

  • @suspicious_eggg
    @suspicious_eggg Місяць тому

    hi

  • @rabaromer6374
    @rabaromer6374 2 місяці тому +1

    Is it going to fit Edexcel as well please?

  • @HarmanKahlon-xz3lm
    @HarmanKahlon-xz3lm 2 місяці тому +1

    Can anyone explain me what is effect like how to explain it ??

    • @purple833
      @purple833 2 місяці тому +1

      effect on the reader? like if it evokes a strong feeling of something e.g empathy, sorrow. A good word to use is visceral - an intense feeling. You could go on to explain how this feeling helps the reader relate to the narrator's situation and what it enlightens the reader to.

    • @HarmanKahlon-xz3lm
      @HarmanKahlon-xz3lm 2 місяці тому

      @@purple833 can u give me example ?

    • @haithamkhan4782
      @haithamkhan4782 2 місяці тому

      @@HarmanKahlon-xz3lm he's already made a vid on it check it out

  • @lolzer340
    @lolzer340 2 місяці тому

    WILL THIS WORK FOR EDEXCEL

  • @MillionaireHub827
    @MillionaireHub827 2 місяці тому

    is it definite that the story option will come up on question 5. Please help.

    • @mattyyyyyyyy
      @mattyyyyyyyy 2 місяці тому

      yes there is always going to be the option to write a story

    • @MillionaireHub827
      @MillionaireHub827 2 місяці тому

      @@mattyyyyyyyy thank you but if the story option is about a picture how do i write about it. E.G if the picture was a boy in his room and it said write a story about him

    • @mattyyyyyyyy
      @mattyyyyyyyy 2 місяці тому

      @@MillionaireHub827 it will tell you wha to write about when it says 'or write a story about...'

    • @MillionaireHub827
      @MillionaireHub827 2 місяці тому

      @@mattyyyyyyyy yes but if i have memorised a story how can i adapt it to a picture

    • @mattyyyyyyyy
      @mattyyyyyyyy 2 місяці тому

      @@MillionaireHub827 just adapt it but thats why the guy in the vid made 8 so if the one you made doesn't match the pic at all then you have a good idea of a few back up stories. Does that sort of make sense?

  • @Harmy147
    @Harmy147 2 місяці тому +2

    I'm in year 9 and idk why I'm even watching this lol.

    • @laxmikantakar5049
      @laxmikantakar5049 2 місяці тому +2

      I'm in year 8- but like I'm average at English so ig get better-?

    • @mk.1uppp284
      @mk.1uppp284 2 місяці тому +2

      @@laxmikantakar5049 u would prolly get grade 9 if u grind rn till gcses lol u wont regret it im in year 11 and im getting 3s and 2s im cooked🤣

    • @yoyoyoyovanessaa
      @yoyoyoyovanessaa 2 місяці тому

      @@mk.1uppp284real 🙏🙏

    • @dianneherelols8280
      @dianneherelols8280 2 місяці тому +1

      pls start revising the moment u go into yr 10 even if its only little and often trust me bro ur yr11 self will thank u for it

  • @MassiveMinorityMuncher-P.O.P
    @MassiveMinorityMuncher-P.O.P 2 місяці тому

    Boutto go from a 3 to a 6 watch me

  • @snraza313
    @snraza313 2 місяці тому +34

    can you oil up sir

  • @familyguyeditz
    @familyguyeditz 2 місяці тому

    If everyone does this answer will the examiner marking the same story for everyone not give anyone a 7-9 who wrote it

  • @prozain4296
    @prozain4296 Місяць тому

    Or just write about a person sitting on a bench, waiting for a girl to come

  • @BroccoliJam
    @BroccoliJam 2 місяці тому

    sir, please do igcse edexcel top 10 quotes of mice and men!

  • @R3dStr1pes
    @R3dStr1pes 2 місяці тому

    AQA Hate For Me This

  • @nameinprogress1319
    @nameinprogress1319 2 місяці тому

    sorry bro you misspelt your title

  • @adilmurtaza9038
    @adilmurtaza9038 Місяць тому

    is this paper 1 or 2

  • @Chris-bl6ir
    @Chris-bl6ir Місяць тому

    Mr everything English because he know he can’t fit the protest plot into the 2023 plot which is about animal, so he just skipped it what a man

  • @user-tp7dd6gi6c
    @user-tp7dd6gi6c 2 місяці тому

    but apparently if we all use a same story again there will be penalties according to aqa

    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  2 місяці тому +1

      Is it so? Please do send where you read this fake news 💀 😅✌️

  • @z0y4._
    @z0y4._ 2 місяці тому +4

    demon slayer reference??

  • @darthyoda4934
    @darthyoda4934 2 місяці тому

    My English teacher said don’t use the priest story

    • @ethantaylor525
      @ethantaylor525 2 місяці тому +1

      Please I want to know why they said that because I just written a full priest story😢

    • @oxi8229
      @oxi8229 2 місяці тому

      @@ethantaylor525because a thousands of people used it in a previous year. And they all got plagiarised for having the same story

    • @INeedGooderGrades
      @INeedGooderGrades 2 місяці тому

      @@ethantaylor525 because most chapter stories are real life scenarios like fictio and non - fiction its best to write non - fiction stories nothing including supernaturals like witches and aliens and robots and stuff

    • @ethantaylor525
      @ethantaylor525 2 місяці тому

      @@INeedGooderGrades what are you waffling about

    • @swaggyramen
      @swaggyramen Місяць тому

      @@ethantaylor525foreal their English teacher is tapped

  • @zainabiqbal5744
    @zainabiqbal5744 2 місяці тому

    Does it have to be about a priest

  • @user-xd2rv5fd9w
    @user-xd2rv5fd9w 2 місяці тому +1

    edexel

  • @abdullahicade7488
    @abdullahicade7488 2 місяці тому +4

    this will be ez i will do dragon ball story

    • @Achieve_Success.
      @Achieve_Success. 2 місяці тому

      loll, dont call the protagonist goku or kakarot tho

    • @khadijah3222
      @khadijah3222 2 місяці тому

      im doing a naruto pain story

  • @animelove3772
    @animelove3772 Місяць тому

    i cooked

  • @Hassan-xu8rn
    @Hassan-xu8rn 2 місяці тому

    poo reem