Spice Up Your Character's Backstory | Character Detail

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  • Writing character detail can be tricky! After we've decided on the fundamental elements of our characters, we can turn those into character detail. Mix details and reveal them at the right time to create compelling characters!
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 52

  • @Swagge21
    @Swagge21 4 роки тому +32

    "Don't be Ragu" is going to be stamped on every single writing journal of mine from here on out

  • @marceline_achlys354
    @marceline_achlys354 4 роки тому +24

    watching this video led me to a good three hours session of character building, and I hadn't even watched half of it yet. Merci beaucoup!

  • @Victoura56
    @Victoura56 4 роки тому +4

    As a culinary student/writer, this speaks to me deeply.

  • @waltbraley6479
    @waltbraley6479 4 роки тому +16

    I freakin love this. I am instantly adopting this metaphor. I'm already thinking about how the plot of my last script is chicken nuggets and the main character is honey mustard lol.

  • @Redbeardflynn
    @Redbeardflynn 3 роки тому +2

    Great video. I tend to think of research in writing like an iceberg. So much of what I do research will never end up in the book because no one needs to read 3 pages on wheat life cycles, but the sense that my character *knows* the wheat life cycle with tidbits here and there which may only be a tiny percentage is so important to make it feel real.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  3 роки тому +1

      I feel this. One of the reasons I like to do a bunch of research and planning up front is to keep myself from getting tripped up. Before I started doing that, every time I had a research based question, it would interrupt my writing and make it harder to get words on the page.

  • @thesleepydot
    @thesleepydot 4 роки тому +4

    I searched for a camfire review, accidentally clicked on this then stayed, because the advice is fire.

  • @joeblackstock9262
    @joeblackstock9262 4 роки тому +8

    This video has inspired me to try sauce, thank you Eli

  • @theletterwynn
    @theletterwynn 4 роки тому +7

    I've struggled with writing characters that incorporate stuff I don't have much experience with and don't know where to begin. Now I do. Thanks for the video!

  • @TheWhitemeister
    @TheWhitemeister 4 роки тому +7

    very nice video, i have the same olive oil. going to use some of the olive oil in the novel i am writing

  • @LHA_1978
    @LHA_1978 3 роки тому +3

    Ok, that just made me hungry. lol And now I want some homemade pasta sauce!

  • @ARandomWorld
    @ARandomWorld 4 роки тому +4

    Yo this is rad

  • @mysterymammal
    @mysterymammal 4 роки тому +5

    So cool! Love this!

  • @LeonUnity
    @LeonUnity 4 роки тому +6

    I'm going to put a link to this video on the video I'm putting out on Thursday all about character building, this is some good stuff.

  • @ZoneTitan
    @ZoneTitan 4 роки тому +2

    Amazing video. This is probably the best use of analogy in under 10 mins to describe everything I've learned about character creation the past 2 decades. I applaud you good sir, kudos to you and your sharp wit! P.S. Just bought Campfire Pro because I loved the video, which led me to look up your app. Amazing piece of software. Cheers!

  • @WatercolorHeart
    @WatercolorHeart 4 роки тому +5

    How does this only have 5 likes?

  • @darkprinceofdorne
    @darkprinceofdorne 4 роки тому +5

    These videos are so, so good

  • @thebathroomcowboy2742
    @thebathroomcowboy2742 4 роки тому +2

    Oh yea, gimme that sauce boss.

  • @thejayshow3903
    @thejayshow3903 4 роки тому +3

    This was a great video! I love that analogy! Character's can be so complex and dimensional if we give them the chance! You've earned a subscriber!

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +1

      Glad you enjoyed the video! I was pretty proud of the analogy (and the sauce which was delicious)

  • @bnaggy
    @bnaggy 4 роки тому +3

    sauce jar creds ^_^

  • @Johann.vStaden
    @Johann.vStaden 3 роки тому +2

    Loved this video! Great choice to use "sauce" as a metaphor for characters... Thank you!

  • @andythornton6371
    @andythornton6371 4 роки тому +5

    CIAO IM PASQUALE. WELCOME TO MY KITCHEN

  • @durendalarcas8209
    @durendalarcas8209 2 роки тому +1

    My favorite sauce is Buffalo Sauce. ;)

  • @mischarowe
    @mischarowe 3 роки тому +1

    This has made me hungry.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  3 роки тому

      The actual point of this video is to get people cooking 🍝

    • @LHA_1978
      @LHA_1978 3 роки тому

      @@AroundTheCampfire I knew it! lol

  • @shadowscribe
    @shadowscribe 4 роки тому +3

    And now I'm hungry

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +4

      Okay so here's what you wanna do: Saute some pancetta in your saucepot until all the fat is rendered out. Remove pancetta bits and leave rendered fat. Saute up some onions and mushrooms in the pancetta fat with a little extra olive oil. Adding a little salt will help the mushrooms and onions release their liquids and saute faster. Once your veggies are nice and soft, clear some space in the center of the pot. In the empty space, put some tomato paste (~1 tbsp), red chili flake, 4 crushed cloves of garlic, and a healthy squeeze of anchovy paste (or 2 chovies, this won't make the sauce fishy, don't worry). Stir that around and let it cook for a minute before stirring the glob of paste into the veggies and adding the pancetta back. Let that saute for another minute. You can add dry spices here like oregano, basil. Whatever you want. Now add two large cans of San Marzano tomatoes and one can of water. I blend my tomatoes before adding, but you don't have to if you like it chunky. Add some salt and ~2 tbsp of sugar to the sauce and let it simmer for ~1.5 - 2 hours. I like to melt a couple tablespoons of butter in towards the end, and then BOOM. SAUCE. I've been making a lot of pizzas with this sauce during the quarantine. 10/10 recommend.

  • @candidshadowcollections6670
    @candidshadowcollections6670 4 роки тому +2

    Great writing tips, but as an italian you gave me an ulcer xD

  • @newguy7209
    @newguy7209 4 роки тому +6

    Lolz You were hungry when you came up with the script for this, weren't you...

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +5

      Sometimes you gotta find a way to finagle making half a gallon of delicious sauce into your UA-cam scripts 🤷‍♀️

  • @PaddyANS
    @PaddyANS 4 роки тому +1

    You're a freaking strange guy, but this is awesome! :D Thanks for this metaphor, staying in my head.
    I should have researched about storytelling, character developement and things like that, before i had half of my book done... :'D
    a year passed since than and now i am done. Not sure, what it is :D
    Its like a white wine with peach-taste, combined with spicy soljanka and 80%chokolate as dessert. Not bad, but strange. i think.. maby.

  • @thegamingtrek7462
    @thegamingtrek7462 3 роки тому +1

    Why am I so hungry now?

  • @Roguedeus
    @Roguedeus 4 роки тому +1

    Non-Social does not mean Anti-Social... /sigh
    Great work btw.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +1

      Thanks! Sorry if I got the definition wrong. What's the distinction?

    • @Roguedeus
      @Roguedeus 4 роки тому

      @@AroundTheCampfire anti-social is cruelty and criminal tendencies, where non-social, or asocial, is distant and introverted.
      Thanks for engaging.

  • @moondowntheface6282
    @moondowntheface6282 4 роки тому +1

    Following Cliches doesn't make a character bland

    • @LHA_1978
      @LHA_1978 3 роки тому +1

      I think he means following JUST the clichés without adding anything different or interesting can make bland characters.

  • @sarathyouandI
    @sarathyouandI 4 роки тому

    Please reduce the background music

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +1

      I've reduced the background music level in recent videos. Check out the newest one and see if you think the background music is still too loud: ua-cam.com/video/opaVjyrLl9U/v-deo.html

  • @StorytellerAJ
    @StorytellerAJ 2 роки тому +1

    Prego is superior to Ragu

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  2 роки тому

      I am traumatized by the countless meals growing up that were just ragu, spaghetti, and hamburger meat. Never again.

  • @Wellshem
    @Wellshem 2 роки тому +1

    Characters are sus?