Build Characters From the Bottom Up | Tony Stark & Iron Man

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  • How do you write characters? Stories start with characters, and characters start with wants and needs. Learn how to write a character from the ground up by designing the plot and character together using want and need.
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 51

  • @lorenzoblanco9069
    @lorenzoblanco9069 3 роки тому +11

    "The main character's need is the theme of the story." Brilliant definition. Thanks and keep up the good work.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  3 роки тому

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

    • @nikkinewbie6014
      @nikkinewbie6014 Рік тому +1

      Yes. Two years later discovering your channel. Good stuff. This is a profound concise sentence that I can appreciate as someone learning craft. I can see that it’s absolutely essential to understand this to properly craft a story.

  • @Swagge21
    @Swagge21 4 роки тому +42

    b99-era Andy Samberg as a writing instructor is all I’ve ever wanted

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  4 роки тому +18

      No one has ever seen Mr. Samberg and me in the same room at the same time. Probably a coincidence though...

  • @Ostsol
    @Ostsol 4 роки тому +16

    The "want-need" pair is probably something that aspiring writers know intuitively, but unless they've taken some courses or studied writing theory, it's probably not something they think about explicitly. Thinking on my own writing, when I get stuck it's because I've not addressed the protagonists' wants and needs.

    • @nikkinewbie6014
      @nikkinewbie6014 Рік тому

      100% correct that it’s something I intuited but I hadn’t quite connected the dots in this way. A lot of emphasis is put on the want but not as much is put on the need.
      The concept absolutely speaks to the human condition as we often want things or think we do but we don’t look our lives objectively enough to recognize that what we want is often not what we need and even contrary to what we need.

  • @SwagXMcNasty
    @SwagXMcNasty 4 роки тому +13

    love this, the blooper at the end sent me

  • @andythornton6371
    @andythornton6371 4 роки тому +10

    That’s what I call good content babey. Loved this

  • @gormauslander
    @gormauslander 3 роки тому +1

    Now I need to wrote a story with neither characters nor plot

  • @thehighervolume7126
    @thehighervolume7126 4 роки тому +4

    This is the best channel I've come across both writing and personality of teaching. I'm glad I stumbled upon one of your ads!

  • @joeblackstock9262
    @joeblackstock9262 4 роки тому +6

    I agree,

  • @TheWhitemeister
    @TheWhitemeister 4 роки тому +6

    Very nice video, well made and very helpful it will help me write good characters for my novel I am writing

  • @bnaggy
    @bnaggy 4 роки тому +7

    Love this guy

  • @wocalich340
    @wocalich340 3 роки тому +2

    Here from the Reedsy webinar that ended just now!

  • @austinmcclendon6877
    @austinmcclendon6877 3 роки тому +1

    I went to school with you...You’re doing a great job! Keep up the fantastic work!!!

  • @dinsfire8489
    @dinsfire8489 2 роки тому +1

    this is one of the best vids on the subject. thanks y'all

  • @BlueSky-uf6oy
    @BlueSky-uf6oy 2 роки тому

    Do you have any other character examples built from this method?
    Even though Iron Man didn’t die, the fact he was willing to sacrifice himself for the greater good is satisfactory, in my opinion. This demonstration of a change to a more heroic attitude completes his arc of earning redemption, developing humility, and absolving his guilt.
    Sure, sequels are always inevitable, but even without business and from a pure writing standpoint, not dying at the end allows this character future opportunity to grow and develop in new ways.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  2 роки тому +1

      The funny thing is that even with Tony Stark, his flaw stays the same. The issues manifest in different ways, but ego is deeply rooted in his character. In Iron Man 2 for example, there is the entire plot about Tony not wanting anyone else to have his tech. In the end though, he only saves the day with help from War Machine. In that same way, he needed to overcome his ego to take the day. Only in this case, it's a bit more flimsy, but Iron Man 2 isn't anywhere near as tight as Iron Man 1 narratively speaking.
      As for another example that isn't Tony, there are plenty out there. In the Stormlight Archive, Kaladin needs to overcome his depression to get what he wants, to help people. In Star Wars, Luke needs to learn to trust the force in order to destroy the Death Star. Luke's flaw isn't as glaring as Tony Stark's, but they establish early in A New Hope that he thinks the Force is hogwash. That's still a flaw in the narrative sense.
      Hope that helps!

  • @waltbraley6479
    @waltbraley6479 4 роки тому +17

    Awesome video. I definitely feel like this approach is vital for character. It did spoil Iron Man though cause I haven't seen it yet :/

  • @shadowscribe
    @shadowscribe 4 роки тому +3

    Nice video with helpful guidance and good choice of example.

  • @jasonlouro9051
    @jasonlouro9051 4 роки тому +3

    Great video Levi!

  • @movealongjon
    @movealongjon 4 роки тому +3

    Liked, subbed, impressed. Great work and breakdown!

  • @RuthMolenaar
    @RuthMolenaar 4 роки тому +2

    amazing teaching style!! I LOVE this!

  • @infinitydesigns4077
    @infinitydesigns4077 3 роки тому +1

    This is great content. Look forward to more!

  • @murdokdracul
    @murdokdracul 4 роки тому +2

    Wow, thanks for doing this!

  • @chazzle3459
    @chazzle3459 3 роки тому +1

    This covered exactly what I'm trying to work through with my novel, thank you!

  • @rosieo5875
    @rosieo5875 4 роки тому +1

    Great video, thank you!
    It did upset me that I didn't notice before now that they use the wrong version of "reins" on that Forbes cover, though (2:42)

  • @katnisspotterholmes5206
    @katnisspotterholmes5206 4 роки тому +2

    Is it just me or is he act very similar to Dr. Daniel Jackson from Stargate?🤔
    I'm learning a lot with these videos😊 Thanks a lot!

  • @Thrashochist
    @Thrashochist 3 роки тому

    Any tips for giving a character a strong "wan't" beyond "survive" if the meat of the story (or at least the beginning) involves running away from deadly pursuers?
    My story in a nutshell is a fantasy story where the protagonist finds out she's the illegitimate daughter of an emperor overthrown before her birth and most politicians want her dead so she doesn't pose a threat to their political power.

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  3 роки тому +1

      Wants that go beyond fundamental stuff like survival can really come from anywhere! Like in your story, it seems like your main character wants to live a normal life. Or she can want to destroy those politicians. Those two different wants are going to give you WILDLY different character traits and propel the story in different ways.

  • @savilaboba
    @savilaboba 4 роки тому +1

    Almost 1k subs :=

  • @StarStriker-pk1zy
    @StarStriker-pk1zy 4 роки тому

    All I herd was that you were riding Iron man

  • @jacobdickert4236
    @jacobdickert4236 4 роки тому +5

    :)

  • @Omegaroth666
    @Omegaroth666 2 роки тому +1

    Jebediah Lolz

    • @AroundTheCampfire
      @AroundTheCampfire  2 роки тому +1

      I had literally just watched the movie 3 times. No clue how I did that lol

  • @Byron_Hill
    @Byron_Hill 4 роки тому +3

    notice me senpai
    Great video 👌