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  • Опубліковано 12 вер 2013
  • A little bit of an extra creepy pasta to wish everyone a happy Friday the 13th
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  • @junjustjun.6252
    @junjustjun.6252 8 років тому +465

    "You guys don't know how to party"- Goatman

  • @RRConghaile
    @RRConghaile 8 років тому +414

    And we're all just like "fucking nope!"
    Best line ever written.

    • @asurashadow1658
      @asurashadow1658 8 років тому +4

      Nope best line is the end of the burnage series on Maplecreepypastas channel. Mcp didnt finishebthe series.

    • @LordSaboLP
      @LordSaboLP 2 роки тому +2

      What??? Why?

    • @illosovic
      @illosovic 3 місяці тому +1

      ​@@LordSaboLPbecause he was 10 years old at the time of writing the comment

    • @jrichhaze
      @jrichhaze 2 місяці тому +1

      Used by Jordan Peele in "Nope" ...black cowboys in his case. Expression naturally instilled in black boys and girls. I dig it, its perfect for certain scenarios

  • @donaldtrumpselbow8142
    @donaldtrumpselbow8142 4 роки тому +475

    Even 9 years later, I keep on coming back to this story, it’s just too good

  • @august4476
    @august4476 8 років тому +595

    One of my favorite creepypastas simply because the monster isn't absolutely generic, and because it seems a bit more like something a teenage kid would write while trying to recall his story. If that makes sense ._.

    • @LilKISSman
      @LilKISSman 8 років тому +35

      Yeah it has a sort of realism about it

    • @daveed2589
      @daveed2589 8 років тому +19

      And it's actually scary, unlike that slenderman bullshit.

    • @mactruccsmacktruck1176
      @mactruccsmacktruck1176 8 років тому +4

      +Cloudy Inversions pretty sure this was a greentext creepypasta

    • @mactruccsmacktruck1176
      @mactruccsmacktruck1176 8 років тому +1

      Cloudy Inversions I dont even see what I did there, even with my all seeing eye

    • @mactruccsmacktruck1176
      @mactruccsmacktruck1176 8 років тому

      Cloudy Inversions oh ok

  • @millipede8602
    @millipede8602 4 роки тому +353

    The fact that the author gave the creature a voice comparable to an animal being taught to "talk" instead of a cliche demonic voice or some crap like that is Soooo creative and creepy. It could also imply that it's repeating the voice of someone it could have terrorized in the past. Such good clever writing

    • @Charlottedapup
      @Charlottedapup 3 роки тому +5

      It didn’t work for me, I just imagine husky’s doing that talking noise and Cats making that scared “noooo nooo nooo!” It’s kind of like is Freddy Krueger had a very high pitch voice as if he only breathes helium.

    • @Dustiferr
      @Dustiferr 2 роки тому +2

      This is a true story.

    • @Chronicler9
      @Chronicler9 2 роки тому +7

      It's written well-enough and believably enough that I'm willing to accept it being a possible true story. I've experienced enough of my own creepy or abstractly weird sht to not brush that off. Moreover, the "creature" behaves very legit unlike many cliches. If it's not a "true story" it's certainly a possible one in my world.

    • @yomama629
      @yomama629 2 роки тому +4

      It's basically implied in this story and outright stated in other skinwalker/goatman stories based on this one that the creature repeats things it heard people say, like a parrot mimicking human speech. Pretty brilliant indeed, a really creative and creepy idea

    • @pupp3tStudios
      @pupp3tStudios Рік тому +7

      Its dialogue is taken directly from the campers, I think.
      The beginning of the story has a group come back and slamming on the door "Lemme the F in, stop playin'!"
      Now the Goatman comes in. Repeating that same phrase.

  • @RelativelyBest
    @RelativelyBest Рік тому +136

    I like how the goatman doesn't really do anything to them. He just wanted to hang out, eat human food and sleep indoors.

    • @piggpen
      @piggpen 10 місяців тому +17

      Dude just wanted to chill and everyone freaks out

    • @jacobwalsh1478
      @jacobwalsh1478 9 місяців тому +14

      ​@piggpen he even tried to socialize with them by mimicking their language

  • @LegalVampire
    @LegalVampire 7 років тому +1117

    This is GOOD story writing, THIS is how you write a scary story. Fear of the unknown and things we can understand is everything. The 'thing' (goatman) in this story never once poses a real threat, but the elements of the unknown are what makes this one of the creepiest stories of all time - Is it a threat? Is it human? What does it want? What does it look like? - we don't know, and the unknown and things that are slightly 'off' are everything

    • @shivvermist3115
      @shivvermist3115 6 років тому +24

      That is exactly what I thought because that is the definition of scary and the exact reason people feel the drive to explore because what we don't know scares the everliving shit out of us (notice the reference to the popular phrase)

    • @carifoo2001
      @carifoo2001 6 років тому +15

      I love this type of thing. it definitely reminds me of that doctor who episode with the thing on the train possessing that woman. they didn't know anything about it, and that's what made it terrifying.

    • @nerogeckoterror8434
      @nerogeckoterror8434 6 років тому +2

      bunny no,is not

    • @greatgallade
      @greatgallade 5 років тому +5

      While it's a good story it sounds like the writer is too sparatic, repeative as all hell. Doesn't give any detail out of the area we just are boom there.
      I guess it's the who "untrustworthy" narrator style of writing.

    • @thepeanutgallery9980
      @thepeanutgallery9980 5 років тому +15

      My favorite detail about this one is the way it’s written. It feels like it was actually written by an average American teenager that’s just genuinely afraid of what happens to him and trying to tell us about it.

  • @vividfiber6668
    @vividfiber6668 Рік тому +147

    To date. This is the scariest creepypasta he's ever narrated. I feel legit fear because of this.

  • @xaayer
    @xaayer 10 років тому +709

    To everyone concerned about the over-abundant swearing, it is actually necessary. At first I hated it and thought it was the author's juvenile attempt to make the story sound intense, but as I listed to it more and more I realized something. A lot of people point out that the author is a graduate of college but is remembering something from the edge of his childhood (he was 16). And already swearing is a mainstay of our culture. Everyone swears like his right here. So there's that point.
    But here's the second point that really got me and really made me realize just who deep a writer this person actually is. The swearing actually enhances the story and adds depth to the goatman. How? What does the goatman say when he finally speaks? "Let me the fuck in. Stop. Fucking. Playing." It was mimicking them. It sat with them and learned how they spoke. It had no cadence because it was literally like an animal or young child repeating what it has heard adults or other people say in an attempt to fit in or belong.
    Can you just imagine this story from the goatman's perspective? He is an amalgamation of monster and human alone in the woods. When these guys go camping out there, he blends in when he can and has "friends". The animals in the wood don't like him because he's an abomination, so he blends with the people to know what it's like to belong. To feel community.
    The reason he was at first standing with his back to them was because he wanted to see how their faces look, to nail down what someone their age would look like. He wasn't freaking them out at first, he was there watching and learning and developing the personas he would use when he'd join them. He never talked before that moment because he couldn't talk. He didn't know how to. If he said the wrong thing or spoke with words common from a different point in time, he probably would have given himself away much sooner. So he only spoke when felt it absolutely necessary and when he was sure he could pass as one of them.
    He tried to adopt Kira's person but couldn't fully and started heaving, whether out of nervousness or out of something else, I can't say. But he really tried. Then, when Reese is there and the goatman tries to get in, Reese actually manages to shoot the thing. From out perspective that is a good thing and it starts giving off unholy screams, but from it's perspective?
    "They shot me. My friends shot me"
    Then it snuck in, again trying to blend, and managed to sleep with them again, every so often doing the heaving thing and again it could be out of child-like excitement or something else such as it trying to keep control of the disguise. Then it walked all the way back tot he house, trying it's best to stay blended and make the most of its last few moments with it's new "friends" then, when only Tanner knew who the goatman was and they looked each other in the eye, was it a threat of don't come back or was like like looking into a pet's eye or a stranger hoping you will return?
    I know it's so easy to write this off as a well-written creepypasta with a bit too much swearing in it, but if you think about it... it could be a deeper story about the goatman actually being a tragic creepypasta figure wanting to be human but never able to be.

    • @DerrickRG
      @DerrickRG 10 років тому +4

      ***** Don't know how to kill something? You put a bullet right between the eyes. Stop being dumb.

    • @angieraley4368
      @angieraley4368 6 років тому +59

      This is a very interesting concept, to say the least. I think its somewhat plausible with the goatman trying to blend in with them, but Im sure he had some other motives besides being "accepted", dont you think? But the whole idea about him trying to befriend them could work. 👌

    • @angrytwxgaming8423
      @angrytwxgaming8423 5 років тому +14

      I hadn't thought of it this way. It just wanted to belong

    • @thepeanutgallery9980
      @thepeanutgallery9980 5 років тому +15

      I’ve always viewed skinwalkers as, like, predators, that take advantage of human social nature, so I tend to view its actions as more like that of a juvenile predator just engaging in experimental behavior. Not yet old enough to hunt, and still clearly bad at blending in, using young humans as practice in a kind of animalistic playful style.

    • @yeah5992
      @yeah5992 5 років тому +5

      I mean it is a green text

  • @Valchrist1313
    @Valchrist1313 10 років тому +189

    So if the Goatman stinks, that means he's probably in rut. When a male goat goes 'in rut' it's the start of his mating cycle. He pisses on himself and tries to get as smelly as possible (for some reason). Neutered goats don't do this.
    Anyway, I figure this is a sure sign that the Goatman was looking for a mate.
    That would certainly explain the stunned look on the face of the girl on the road side.

    • @daveletterman8682
      @daveletterman8682 9 років тому +45

      your comment just made this pasta even creepier for me.

    • @SubjectIlluminant
      @SubjectIlluminant 9 років тому +26

      OH GOD. Can you picture that? Actually don't picture that, but oh God!!! ;-;

    • @daveletterman8682
      @daveletterman8682 9 років тому +20

      ***** Idk I'm just picturing a mutated monster/shapeshifter creepin around in the woods trying to fuck people.

    • @SubjectIlluminant
      @SubjectIlluminant 9 років тому +4

      Dave Letterman Don't forget the monster is a prostitute. XD

    • @MegaMackproductions
      @MegaMackproductions 9 років тому +4

      by peeing on himself hes covering himself in his scent/testosterone. it attracts mates

  • @Emper0rH0rde
    @Emper0rH0rde 8 років тому +119

    Here's what I think was going on. The creature is fully sentient, and had no intention of actually harming the kids. They were in his territory, and he wanted them to leave, so he messed with them until they were too scared to stick around anymore. If the creature wanted to hurt them, he would have, because he had the opportunity to do just that, several times, but he didn't.

    • @trippfields279
      @trippfields279 8 років тому +61

      or you know, he could have just wanted free booze and hotdogs

    • @hmantribe
      @hmantribe 8 років тому +13

      +Tripp Fields this guy knows whats up

    • @Troklie
      @Troklie 8 років тому

      Yeeeaaah the creature doesn't exist. It's just a story

    • @trippfields279
      @trippfields279 8 років тому +32

      BradSings woooow, thank you for that important insight o wise one

    • @UnderTheTableGremlin
      @UnderTheTableGremlin 8 років тому +10

      +BradSings no shit, Sherlock

  • @taylorbivens8546
    @taylorbivens8546 8 років тому +503

    Enough is enough! I have had it with all these mutha' fuckin' goatmen, in this mutha' fuckin' trailer!!

  • @marshallf8459
    @marshallf8459 9 років тому +617

    Dude there's just something about this story man this is my 4th time listening to it and it still scares me more than any other creepy pasta

    • @TaggerW1lson
      @TaggerW1lson 9 років тому +21

      Marshall F Same, this is like my favorite creepypasta

    • @kylesgirlfriend2
      @kylesgirlfriend2 9 років тому +41

      Even though he does say 'Fuck' a lot it makes it realistic. Like a scared teenager is retelling this story to his friends. Which I really like about the story

    • @daveed2589
      @daveed2589 8 років тому +33

      I'd love to see this made into a movie, or at least a 30 minute short film.

    • @raquelsparrow6486
      @raquelsparrow6486 8 років тому +4

      +Marshall F Same!!!

    • @brockwhittaker7561
      @brockwhittaker7561 8 років тому +10

      +Marshall F This is the only creepypasta that has scared me so far and ive listened to like 100 good ones

  • @kaseymoore6388
    @kaseymoore6388 Рік тому +51

    Definitely keep coming back to this version. It just sounds so much more like a homie telling you a terrifying account.

    • @xaayer
      @xaayer Рік тому +7

      Yes, and with the thunder and rain in the background, the ambient fire. It sounds like everyone was telling ghost stories around a campfire and one of your buddies that is usually the jokester of the group sobers up and tells a harrowing true account of something that happened to them.

  • @hareemqureshi822
    @hareemqureshi822 6 років тому +142

    This could make a good horror movie/short film. Like it's one of the few times not knowing the characters that well would benefit you. The characters in the story didn't know each other that well which is why the Goatman managed to get into the group unnoticed. So if you threw all 12 characters at once and only paid attention to the main character you could easily slip in another person without the audience noticing. It would be hard, but if done write you'd have something pretty creepy.

    • @Ryan-hj8il
      @Ryan-hj8il 5 років тому +14

      I absolutely agree, but if someone adapted this story to film (which should be done) whoever is heading the project needs to really understand the story they are dealing with. They cannot underestimate it. This is one the best creepypasta out there, and any adaption below excellent would be a travesty.
      Nothing but a 1 to 1 recreation, that not only tells the original story but enhances it. No creative license allowed tbh. Translate *everything* from the story to the screen with no exceptions. Every minor detail needs to be included, there's no excuse to leave anything out.
      If done well, I absolutely agree. It could be an awesome ensemble project. Get some good teen actors; fuck yah, that sounds rad.
      I am just paranoid af that an "official" adaption of this creepypasta is going to be made (and people eat it up) but it will be underwhelming. Like people want to see Channel Zero tackle this story, but I am highly skeptical they could pull it off that would be to this story's standards.

    • @retroreina400
      @retroreina400 3 роки тому +1

      @@Ryan-hj8il There actually was a short film called Weirdo I think on Vimeo that is an adaptation of this. I don’t remember how good it was but I remember enjoying it.

  • @bridie1824
    @bridie1824 9 років тому +403

    Should re-name this "Anasi's Fucking Goatman story"

    • @daveed2589
      @daveed2589 9 років тому +6

      Fucking anasazi's goddamn goat story

    • @bridie1824
      @bridie1824 9 років тому +6

      stalfos slayer I would watch the fucking shit out of that x)

    • @rugilockk2708
      @rugilockk2708 9 років тому +3

      stalfos slayer Hot damn, that's the fucking shit... I mean that's fucking rad!!

    • @bridie1824
      @bridie1824 9 років тому +5

      God I love what is becoming of this post :')

    • @rugilockk2708
      @rugilockk2708 9 років тому +3

      ***** More like Anasi's goddamn motherfucking tale of the Goatman!

  • @corpselight7989
    @corpselight7989 9 років тому +153

    This one actually sent chills up my spine the whole way through. When I was a teenager, I visited some cousins in their mountain home in the forests. I remember them sternly telling me NEVER to go outside after dark, even between the house and the garage (which had been converted into an entertainment room or guest house. Me and the cousins slept in the garage, because they firmly believed we shouldn't head back after dark, and it had been storming.
    What's crazy is that there are legit weird animals out there that make that 'dog trying to talk' noise that we were hearing. I personally thought it was just the echoes of a donkey warped a bit by echoes in the mountains, but they kept saying otherwise. That made me so nervous , I was triple checking the locks and covering the windows.
    I am notably superstitious, but in the ghost sense... But that place really made me question myself.

    • @casey5990
      @casey5990 5 років тому

      Where what area is this in????

    • @vividfiber6668
      @vividfiber6668 Рік тому +3

      From an area near the rez in idaho. That's a skinboy

  • @moobin2699
    @moobin2699 10 років тому +42

    "Eventually, we get BIG ASS STICKS!"
    Best qoute 2014.

    • @itsyaboymaaaa
      @itsyaboymaaaa 10 років тому +4

      'Murica

    • @hvxor6442
      @hvxor6442 9 років тому

      I second this

    • @kristenstanley7268
      @kristenstanley7268 6 років тому

      It 2017 now BOI.

    • @moobin2699
      @moobin2699 Місяць тому

      ​@kristenstanley7268 2024 at this point, still find myself returning to this story from time to time

  • @dentroth9896
    @dentroth9896 7 років тому +365

    i really like this one, i could listen to it over and over again and still be surprised .

    • @ericleonardjr
      @ericleonardjr 7 років тому +15

      foreal bro this the third time I listened to it and was still on the edge of my seat

    • @carlosv6630
      @carlosv6630 7 років тому +7

      eric leonard this is my 10th time lol

    • @ericleonardjr
      @ericleonardjr 7 років тому +6

      Marco polo my 5th time now😂

    • @---nobody---
      @---nobody--- 7 років тому +10

      Seriously! I love this story!! It will always scare me every time I listen to it.

    • @echoesforeternity
      @echoesforeternity 7 років тому +16

      Me too, it's extremely well written.

  • @JP-pl6xh
    @JP-pl6xh Рік тому +21

    The nostalgia from this story is unmatched

  • @tigerlily3081
    @tigerlily3081 9 років тому +642

    Someone should make this into a movie

    • @ambernichole3730
      @ambernichole3730 9 років тому +3

      Yeah I would probably be Kira.

    • @sgtvip3r26
      @sgtvip3r26 9 років тому +4

      Amber Howle i'd be the one who learns about the goatman (the one with the villager room mate claming that it was in his woods)

    • @whosrealerrr294
      @whosrealerrr294 9 років тому +1

      I'll be the younger cousin

    • @UnderTheTableGremlin
      @UnderTheTableGremlin 9 років тому +31

      I'll be the Goatman

    • @gamezharks
      @gamezharks 9 років тому +12

      TigerLily i'll be your stuntman

  • @alexandercampbell5136
    @alexandercampbell5136 8 років тому +107

    Honestly, it kinda sounds like this monster just wanted to hang out (in all seriousness). think about it! all that it did was sneak into the group and stay there with them. It didn't really hurt anyone. It didn't really do anything ether, aside from acting really freaky and screwing with them occasionally. They where more freaked out by the fact that it existed then anything else. I think it just wanted to have fun with the people in its woods.

    • @Garangus
      @Garangus 5 років тому +3

      "have fun". Hmmmmmmmm

    • @itwastimeforthomastoleaven1919
      @itwastimeforthomastoleaven1919 5 років тому +10

      “FUCK YOU TOO GUYS, I DIDN’T WANNA PARTY ANYWAYS!”

    • @semi8515
      @semi8515 4 роки тому +3

      Bruh it's a demon. Demons hate humans. They like to creep the shit out of humans. Goatman likes to creep around, he want's to get people 1 by 1 to go into the woods with him so he can then eat them up alive.

    • @Roachh2877
      @Roachh2877 3 роки тому +4

      @@semi8515
      I think you're referring to a different story.

    • @semi8515
      @semi8515 3 роки тому

      @@Roachh2877 No, im talking about the same goatman in this story. Theres alot of stories about him and most of them tell the same thing about him and what he does. Listen to "It was something creeping around in woods at the south of seattle if anyone wants to look around". Listen or read that. Its about the same goatman as this story.

  • @sashawolfson3602
    @sashawolfson3602 8 років тому +271

    *Calming Down, Listening to the Story*
    *Rifle Shot Sound*
    *Flinched* Oh!.....Shit That Scared me!😮

    • @mahoganyeclipse3909
      @mahoganyeclipse3909 8 років тому +2

      When that happened, I had my volume up most the way so when those rifle shots happened, they were so goddamn loud I nearly jumped out of my skin.

    • @sashawolfson3602
      @sashawolfson3602 8 років тому

      Mahogany Eclipse True

    • @user-um5qc2bb7j
      @user-um5qc2bb7j 7 років тому +1

      I was listening to it with my friend and she jumped, that's what really scared me 😂😂

    • @azelfie1041
      @azelfie1041 7 років тому +3

      Lol, yeah happened to me.

    • @sicklymet
      @sicklymet 7 років тому

      Neko Lelouch yep

  • @echoesforeternity
    @echoesforeternity 7 років тому +220

    We need a movie adaptation of this.

    • @Lotus__OW
      @Lotus__OW 5 років тому +7

      Preach

    • @counter8595
      @counter8595 5 років тому +8

      I would like to be an actor in it haha

    • @Wtfisahandle01
      @Wtfisahandle01 5 років тому +2

      There’s like a homemade movie of this but sorry I don’t have the link , but I do remember watchin it

    • @professionalghost138
      @professionalghost138 5 років тому

      Hey there's a short film adaption called 'weirdo' and also me and my friends (we are a small rubbish film group) are also wanting to adapt it.

    • @suspishashley7372
      @suspishashley7372 5 років тому

      I'm currently making a short film about this

  • @uncleball78
    @uncleball78 9 років тому +40

    I feel sorry for the goatman. I think he was just lonely. If you are the only goatman, who do you hang with? Do you go to the goatman bar outside of town and pick up goatgirls? No. That's why he disguised himself as one of them. To feel like part of the group.

    • @michaelbarton2549
      @michaelbarton2549 9 років тому +1

      Shane Ericson That thing can try me when i have a Remington pointed at it's head.

  • @datalt7873
    @datalt7873 9 років тому +585

    One of the best stories I have listened to.

    • @darksoulsnstuff6850
      @darksoulsnstuff6850 9 років тому +2

      *heard :)

    • @datalt7873
      @datalt7873 9 років тому +7

      DarkSoulsNStuff You forgot the period. ):

    • @tommyv997
      @tommyv997 9 років тому +6

      DarkSoulsNStuff *heard.

    • @creepypastacraft
      @creepypastacraft 9 років тому +5

      Me to this creeped me out to the point of camping:nope sleeping:nope living:nope

    • @nicolewale888
      @nicolewale888 9 років тому +2

      DarkSoulsNStuff or, just *listened to.

  • @horrorclassicman98
    @horrorclassicman98 9 років тому +80

    heres a fun drinking game, take a shot every time a "FUCK" is dropped :)

  • @hobocat_7
    @hobocat_7 7 років тому +650

    so this is from the humans' perspective in goat simulator right? XD

  • @moonadoo1006
    @moonadoo1006 Рік тому +16

    I foundly remember listening to this on the way home after school during 5-8 grade its been many years since then and I miss those days.

  • @NychusX
    @NychusX 9 років тому +63

    Despite the overused cursing I think this is one of the scariest pastas on here. This had me petrified a year ago and it's set me on edge just now even though it's daylight and I'm wide awake.

    • @greatgallade
      @greatgallade 5 років тому +1

      Not really even when I was 16 this wasn't scary. 5 years ago it sounded like shit and even now

    • @dylansmith5206
      @dylansmith5206 4 роки тому

      Might I recommend not playing a drinking game every time MCP says fucking/fuck when reading this story. You'd be dead in 2 minuets.

    • @im.9648
      @im.9648 4 роки тому +10

      (Yes I know this is a 4yo comment but I’m replying anyways) I personally think the swearing is a nice touch. My friends and I definitely talk like this, it sounds a bit odd in a creepypasta but that’s because you’re expecting more of a professional story. The swearing gives it the vibe of a 16 year old at a campfire telling his friends this story. It adds realism, imo.

    • @seductivegopnik2580
      @seductivegopnik2580 4 роки тому +3

      @@im.9648 It's good writing, is what it is, ironically enough compared to how many are criticizing it.

    • @steeveewuzzheer1992
      @steeveewuzzheer1992 3 роки тому +3

      The cursing thing is a hallmark of 4chan type narrative storytelling; this story is originally from /x/. Additionally, it’s from the perspective of a young man, who probably cusses a lot.

  • @fredo5454
    @fredo5454 8 років тому +59

    this would be a great ass movie

    • @floorballskillz3123
      @floorballskillz3123 8 років тому +10

      Honestly yes lol goat man movie would be better than any of this shit they make today

  • @zachmontminy
    @zachmontminy Рік тому +18

    This version is so good. Idk why he ever bothered to do a newer reading of this story.

  • @tanmang42
    @tanmang42 9 років тому +66

    That was one of the best creepy pastas I've ever heard...

  • @Vile_Oreo
    @Vile_Oreo 10 років тому +29

    The thing about this story is, the goatman didn't actually kill or even hurt anyone. It just acted a little creepy and hung out with them a bit. Sure this story is very creepy and disturbing but the goatman might not have even had any malicious intent; he might've just wanted to hang out a bit. The cooked blood smell might've just been from an injury or it could've been someone else cooking in the distance. Still an awesome story. I like how Mrcreepypasta changes his voice and vocabulary to suit the story, hell, read the story "the black cat" and notice a huge difference in delivery.

  • @wajcat
    @wajcat 2 роки тому +10

    Genuinely one of the most harrowing stories I've ever heard/read. Even terrified other people by telling it to them on camping trips. It's the way the story doesn't go straight up too outlandish and everything that the creature does you can relate to the fear the characters feel.

  • @baileyandlacimsp7053
    @baileyandlacimsp7053 8 років тому +19

    "We stopped shitting bricks."
    Okay I'm dying of laughter.

  • @wanderingrandomer
    @wanderingrandomer 9 років тому +170

    This guy had a lot of fucks to give!

    • @lemonhscott7667
      @lemonhscott7667 9 років тому +1

      Wouldn't you? Wouldn't... You?

    • @goldeevee3429
      @goldeevee3429 9 років тому

      Trevor Scott ...i smell a homestuck.

    • @bigwickjimformthes
      @bigwickjimformthes 9 років тому

      Trevor Scott homestuck for the win

    • @Digitizeddragon
      @Digitizeddragon 9 років тому +2

      WanderingRandomer If this story had no f$%$S it would have been under 20 minutes LOL.

    • @daveed2589
      @daveed2589 9 років тому

      Ugh, fucking homestuck.

  • @xxhowisuxx
    @xxhowisuxx 10 років тому +59

    To those that complain about the fact that the author curses a lot in the story, remember. This shit is written by someone who's between the ages of 14-21, and it is supposed to seriously bother him. So...he did a pretty good job of capturing the age group.

    • @NerdySabbath
      @NerdySabbath 10 років тому +3

      ***** I disagree, these stories are told typically from the protagonist (Usually the victim) point of view. This was a believable take on teens which benefits the story. Funny enough its usually the super well spoken & articulate storys that are coming from teen to even kid narratives that takes me out of the immersion

    • @enthiegavoir5955
      @enthiegavoir5955 10 років тому

      I almost feel ashamed to be 15 right now.....

    • @illosovic
      @illosovic 3 місяці тому

      WAAY over did it though, like it's a 30 year old's take on how they think a 14 year old would talk

  • @nevancampos8075
    @nevancampos8075 8 років тому +345

    this story > slenderman, jack the killer, and laughing jack

  • @blackfrancis8900
    @blackfrancis8900 6 років тому +6

    The part with the creature making noises and the writer describing it as like the videos of cats talking is the most memorable part of any Creepypasta I've ever heard. It's what brought me back years later to listen to this again.

  • @KaizerRolls
    @KaizerRolls 10 років тому +14

    literally one of the scariest ones i've ever heard

  • @dare_challenge_a_god1536
    @dare_challenge_a_god1536 9 років тому +74

    I went to olive garden and ordered creepypasta.

  • @albertohinojosa3300
    @albertohinojosa3300 8 років тому +263

    The Goat man actually is an Amish story, originated early on the XX century, allegedly a couple that "got busy" before marriage, therefore committing a sin, the baby they had was born as a half-goat half-human hybrid, they kept that thing a secret, until the mother, who loved her baby, decided to take hin to the church and the community was like "Yo', that nigga ain't normal" they tried to escape, but the baby tan to the forest, becoming later a Goat man, and I dunno, that's what I've heard.

    • @jarodmhenderson
      @jarodmhenderson 8 років тому +20

      +Alberto Hinojosa thats actually a decent backstory. It enhances my imaginative belief that it wasnt a threat and only wanted to be friendly and accepted. And it screaming at the end was it crying

    • @albertohinojosa3300
      @albertohinojosa3300 8 років тому +2

      +JaRod H (Jrock-Malik) At least someone appreciates my Research.

    • @floorballskillz3123
      @floorballskillz3123 8 років тому +62

      "Yo that nigga ain't normal" 😂😂😂

    • @Xbalanque84
      @Xbalanque84 8 років тому +14

      +Alberto Hinojosa Closer to the origin story of the Jersey Devil.

    • @albertohinojosa3300
      @albertohinojosa3300 8 років тому +1

      +Xbalanque84 Yup

  • @xXDragonCartoonsXx
    @xXDragonCartoonsXx 2 роки тому +12

    this is one of my all-time favorite creepypastas

  • @MoonThrust
    @MoonThrust 10 років тому +55

    "We get big ass sticks" Lol wut? The way he had said that made me fall off my chair somehow.

    • @itsyaboymaaaa
      @itsyaboymaaaa 10 років тому +23

      'Murica

    • @EdwardCullen0496
      @EdwardCullen0496 9 років тому +4

      Marty! Yup, only in 'Murica do you take on freaky ass shape shifters with some big ass sticks.

    • @louiscrespo1280
      @louiscrespo1280 9 років тому

      Marty! native american territory not brit

  • @frostyy4208
    @frostyy4208 Рік тому +7

    the best creepypasta til this day 💯🙌🏻

  • @MythicByrd
    @MythicByrd 8 років тому +110

    "Make s'mores, drink, kiss on the girls."
    Is that what people call it these days? Kiss on the girls?

    • @panned-cake1801
      @panned-cake1801 8 років тому +25

      The goatman kissed on the girls
      As well y'all'll didn't notice that

    • @theshadyknight5662
      @theshadyknight5662 3 роки тому +1

      Panned-Cake think the goat man was pretending to be a girl

    • @Admiral_Jezza
      @Admiral_Jezza 3 роки тому +9

      One of them might've kissed the goatman lol.

    • @iamdeath5297
      @iamdeath5297 3 роки тому +3

      Goatman got lucky that night guess you can sayhe was "horny"

    • @charlescornish8759
      @charlescornish8759 3 роки тому

      @@iamdeath5297 hehe.nice

  • @jakejohnson7056
    @jakejohnson7056 Рік тому +5

    Lowkey my favorite story

  • @valeriaaguirre9491
    @valeriaaguirre9491 10 років тому +214

    "Here's my story… 16 I'm black"
    😂😂

    • @22446688881010
      @22446688881010 9 років тому +88

      If you live in the South, that's a horror story in and of itself. haha

    • @SakuraShade
      @SakuraShade 9 років тому +25

      FUCKIN POLICE COMING STRAIGHT FROM THE UNDERGROUND 😎

    • @charlottemund684
      @charlottemund684 9 років тому +2

      T, I'm not the only person who realizes it!

    • @overrev982
      @overrev982 9 років тому +11

      Polar Wolf fuck the police* .....

    • @johngaray7185
      @johngaray7185 9 років тому +2

      Katsuo Higashi feark the police driving up my drive way

  • @dominickjordan3052
    @dominickjordan3052 4 роки тому +9

    I love how he makes this story seem so real, with the edge in his tone of voice.

  • @GodsRighthandman
    @GodsRighthandman Рік тому +5

    The way he uses his voice and emotions on each line is what MAKES this

  • @bizichyld
    @bizichyld 2 роки тому +8

    Call me crazy but I love listening to these stories late at night as I’m drifting off to sleep. I can’t stand any of the other creepy pasta channels. MCP just does unmatched narration. I tip my hat to you, sir.

  • @georgeodonnell6231
    @georgeodonnell6231 10 років тому +118

    It's MANBEARPIG

  • @foxallliam
    @foxallliam 10 років тому +76

    Thats an incredible story. I love the massive plot twist at the end. Great job!

    • @greaserchickwhogames
      @greaserchickwhogames 10 років тому +6

      *reading comments while listening to the story*
      *sees this*
      PLOT TWIST?!

    • @foxallliam
      @foxallliam 10 років тому +2

      yeah when it turns out the goatman was with them all along

    • @greaserchickwhogames
      @greaserchickwhogames 10 років тому +17

      Maybe the Goat Man is everyone. Everyone is the Goat Man, me Goat Man, you Goat Man.
      Goat Man is Goat Man.

    • @foxallliam
      @foxallliam 10 років тому +1

      yeah

    • @gav8558
      @gav8558 10 років тому +5

      greaserchickwhogames
      goatmanception?

  • @spookydonutghosthouse8483
    @spookydonutghosthouse8483 2 роки тому +4

    This narration! He sounds legitimately terrified!

  • @PlatipuseKing
    @PlatipuseKing 8 років тому +49

    Where did these stories go.. what happened to the classic style of pasta, everyone writes things so differently now. I mean I'll always love creepypastas but the newer ones just don't have the same vibe. Tell me somebody agrees

    • @ericleonardjr
      @ericleonardjr 7 років тому

      I feel u man

    • @MiniTStark
      @MiniTStark 4 роки тому

      Tell me about it! Like, SIREN HEAD? Are you kidding? A STICK FIGURE with a SIREN as a head like come on!!

    • @spookydonutghosthouse8483
      @spookydonutghosthouse8483 2 роки тому

      @@MiniTStark Siren Head isn't even a Creepypasta character though. It's a Trevor Hendersen character.

  • @TheNintendoProducts
    @TheNintendoProducts 10 років тому +50

    So it's a 100% peaceful monster that just likes to fuck with you? Sounds like a cool guy.

    • @shockjockey2875
      @shockjockey2875 10 років тому +22

      I wouldn't say that it's 100% peaceful. It didn't attack because the "prey" might have either been too strong or in a too big group.

    • @thegalaxygamer6642
      @thegalaxygamer6642 10 років тому

      I wish I could meet him

    • @thegalaxygamer6642
      @thegalaxygamer6642 10 років тому

      ShockJockey287 I get it IS a goat man but he is trying to joke about but then he gets aggressive and that's when his goat part have tried to take over and start to take people and start to scary them because for his goat part they were in his territory and when your in a animal's territory they get agressive

    • @AngelusAnsell
      @AngelusAnsell 9 років тому +1

      All false. TheNintendoProducts had it right, it is more or less peaceful. If you recall the description, it likes to "torment" people. Not torture, not eat, not main, not kill. Torment. Just arbitrarily fuck with basically. So in short...it's a creature that loves to terrify and freak out people, but aside from that it's basically harmless.

    • @JayPuma186
      @JayPuma186 9 років тому +5

      The Goatman is a hard-core troll.

  • @EksaStelmere
    @EksaStelmere 5 років тому +11

    >>Dude tells his dad there's some animal in the woods, not a monster.
    My boy, more people need this foresight.

  • @CasualMMAFan
    @CasualMMAFan Рік тому +3

    My cousin Seth showed me this video when he stayed over one night. This story has always creeped me out, this is my second time coming back to it in years, have no idea why I thought about this until now

  • @thereelweebakira2960
    @thereelweebakira2960 7 років тому +26

    Its been over a year i think since ive heard of this exact type of story. Nothing fucking beats this.

    • @echoesforeternity
      @echoesforeternity 7 років тому +1

      True that. :)

    • @metalshadowthehedgehog3006
      @metalshadowthehedgehog3006 7 років тому +1

      Do you like video game creepypastas? Godzilla nes and snow on mt silver are butting heads in my mind...If not then the only real competition is candle cove (All of like 8 episodes feed beautifully into eachother to sew the story and each pasta was made by someone different yet they dont go against eachothers story. It cant be replicated. I think this is my secondfavorite overall and I have been reading these since 2009

  • @MegaBleedman
    @MegaBleedman 7 років тому +24

    You should call this The Fucking Anasi's Goatman Story.

    • @glitchy1324
      @glitchy1324 7 років тому +9

      Anasi's fucking goat man fucking story FUCK

  • @kylesgirlfriend2
    @kylesgirlfriend2 4 роки тому +9

    Honestly a timeless classic. Still as scary in 2020 as it was back in 2013

  • @GHOSTSYDE
    @GHOSTSYDE Рік тому +2

    I know I'm late to the party I have seen the thumbnail on this story sooo many times but never bothered to click on it. I been a Creepypasta fan as a kid and I can get very picky with stories. But this is my first time listening to this. I am in awe I was on edge I'm actually happy I listened to this

  • @Brandons_Mag
    @Brandons_Mag 2 роки тому +3

    This is still my favorite creepypasta

  • @deadisbetter6177
    @deadisbetter6177 10 років тому +44

    That was a fantastic story! It was one of the first in awhile that has really creeped me out. As I like to go camping a lot, I'll remember to count the people :D

  • @antblake1030
    @antblake1030 Рік тому +3

    This is one of a very small handful of stories that my friend and I found ourselves holding onto each other during. This is one of THE BEST creepypastas ever written.

  • @Mooxieclang
    @Mooxieclang 2 роки тому +6

    Old creepypastas hit different

  • @yungblud2000
    @yungblud2000 10 років тому +47

    question; why the fuck are there no goat simulator jokes???

    • @shockjockey2875
      @shockjockey2875 10 років тому +1

      Because there is no connection to goats whatsoever, except for the name "Goatman".

    • @yungblud2000
      @yungblud2000 10 років тому +10

      ShockJockey287 it's enough, trust me, it's enough

    • @mattdisagoat9196
      @mattdisagoat9196 6 років тому

      ShockJockey287 except for the little fact that his head is a goat head

  • @Sunrae117
    @Sunrae117 10 років тому +56

    Rule one of the Goatman, no one talks about te Goatman.....

    • @serpentfamily
      @serpentfamily 10 років тому +5

      u just talked about da Goatman!!!

    • @Sunrae117
      @Sunrae117 10 років тому +4

      O know......I broak rule one of the Goat man....

    • @serpentfamily
      @serpentfamily 10 років тому +5

      So did i...
      We must hide... 0_0

    • @AceroxMC
      @AceroxMC 10 років тому

      Darcnuss Serpent
      w-whats rule #2? 0_0

    • @serpentfamily
      @serpentfamily 10 років тому

      Never talk to the target of the Goatman.

  • @boatmandemonic7994
    @boatmandemonic7994 2 роки тому +2

    9 years later and this story still gives me chills. Especially the “let me the fuck in. Stop fucking playing.” part. Side note: I love to listen to this story to help me sleep when I have trouble sleeping.

  • @---nobody---
    @---nobody--- 7 років тому +20

    This will always be an amazing story and a great narration of it. It's so scary, and I've listened to it multiple times already but it's still good and creepy every time.

  • @annabanana4703
    @annabanana4703 10 років тому +56

    This acctually scared me, and I NEVER get scared.

  • @sabbathofsin
    @sabbathofsin 7 років тому +30

    This is literally awesome, I've listened to it so many times and it never gets old.

  • @thedrucifix9830
    @thedrucifix9830 2 роки тому +2

    forever my favorite narrated creepypasta of all time. The way it's written makes it so raw and believable. And of course the actual creepiness of it- imagining it talking to them from outside the door in one of those weird ass cat / dog "voices" is fucking terrifying. From someone who's been listening/reading creepypasta for over a decade now, 10/10. Favorite creepypasta by the best and OG creepypasta narrator (And this video in particular is the very best version 👌)

  • @violentdreams96
    @violentdreams96 3 місяці тому +1

    I love the writing in this story. It sounds so organic and real. This is how Creepypastas should be written.

  • @Jackxismine
    @Jackxismine 10 років тому +34

    Well fuck, I'm going camping with a group of my friends in a few weeks, I can't just back down and look like a wimp. The damn goatman is going to be on my mind all the time now :I

    • @frighttoujours4667
      @frighttoujours4667 10 років тому +9

      Than tell this to them and make it even

    • @Jackxismine
      @Jackxismine 10 років тому +8

      CreepyPastasForever Will do :I

    • @johnathanyoung100
      @johnathanyoung100 10 років тому +12

      relax im sure he just wants some hot dogs and a beer

    • @xXSmileDip360Xx
      @xXSmileDip360Xx 10 років тому +1

      i saw this a year ago and i was scared as shit to camp for a while but I'm good now

    • @stewyv.8943
      @stewyv.8943 10 років тому +3

      I live in calafornia and we have a forest a 30 mins from here..........fuck

  • @caecilliidae
    @caecilliidae 10 років тому +17

    This is one of the best CreepyPastas I've read in YEARS.

    • @JohnnyCogs
      @JohnnyCogs 10 років тому +2

      But you didn't read it LEL.

    • @caecilliidae
      @caecilliidae 10 років тому +3

      get out

    • @ZAMBIES102
      @ZAMBIES102 10 років тому

      Trystan Peery
      he has a point

    • @caecilliidae
      @caecilliidae 10 років тому

      Mark Barry and i still miraculously don't care

    • @JohnnyCogs
      @JohnnyCogs 10 років тому

      Ooh look at how cool and edgy I am telling people I don't care what they say. UA-cam is a public website, people can say what they want, shut the fuck up now.

  • @vx_ixa1461
    @vx_ixa1461 8 років тому +2

    This still gives me goosebumps. I use to work overnight at a super target and I remember one day I was assigned to work in the toy section alone throughout the night (it's a big store). The toy section was located on the opposite side at the end of the store from were everyone else worked. Since I knew that no one was going to come and check up on me, I decided to listen to this and other creepypasta stories while I worked. Bad idea, gave me goosebumps and I kept looking behind me and checking the end of the ails to see if anyone was there, the worst place was the corners.

  • @patricbateman5104
    @patricbateman5104 2 роки тому +2

    This story will never fail to make me shook

  • @echoesforeternity
    @echoesforeternity 8 років тому +22

    Time to read all the comments.

  • @timplunkett7066
    @timplunkett7066 10 років тому +4

    "Head of a goat, shapeshift, terrorize people." Satan?

  • @WolfyKon_Studios
    @WolfyKon_Studios Рік тому +4

    I grew up listening to this so now this has a weird nostalgia feelin to it and I love it so much

  • @mattvohs2493
    @mattvohs2493 6 років тому +9

    This is why I go camping armed to the teeth.

  • @jakeespinoza5436
    @jakeespinoza5436 8 років тому +64

    I hope the people complaining about swearing realize this story was from 4chan, hence the extreme swearing.

    • @Digitalhunny
      @Digitalhunny 6 років тому +26

      AND in REAL life people in high stress situations DO sure as hell swear.
      Studies have been done that PROVE swearing HELPS relieve pain & stress MORE so then fake swear words.
      Look it up.

  • @TsunTzu
    @TsunTzu 8 років тому +7

    ...Who in fuck's name FALLS ASLEEP during something like this? No, man.
    You're awake until dawn, no question.

    • @briarcypress50
      @briarcypress50 4 роки тому

      Unless you're a sicko like me and you throw on a six hour long creepypasta /specifically/ so you're able to sleep 😂

  • @allshallparish5235
    @allshallparish5235 2 роки тому +2

    Found this 7 years ago. Still to this day my favorite Creepypasta.

  • @c.o7993
    @c.o7993 6 років тому +2

    This is literally the only story that puts me on edge I shouldn't be listening to this alone

  • @notdevilskettle9135
    @notdevilskettle9135 8 років тому +8

    It wouldn't have been as scary unless they talked about the packs of brats in such detail

  • @Blackasnight426
    @Blackasnight426 9 років тому +76

    ...but who was cabin!?

    • @ContinuumGamer1
      @ContinuumGamer1 9 років тому +2

      hahahahahaha!

    • @ContinuumGamer1
      @ContinuumGamer1 9 років тому +4

      Exactly! We need to find out! Maybe it's an object of some sort... NO. That would be to obvious.

    • @Blackasnight426
      @Blackasnight426 9 років тому

      Actually I do know the story but just part of it..maybe you can find the rest. It starts like this: "Cabin was a beautiful girl who lived in the woods. She had no problem letting people inside her so they called her "Cabin". Cabin lived in the woods for a great majority of her life but know nothing really of morals and therefore did whatever she felt like doing. However, the "windigo" protected Cabin and watched over her, and tried to kill any that came near her but..."that's all I know.

    • @ContinuumGamer1
      @ContinuumGamer1 9 років тому

      Haha that's a good one.

    • @Blackasnight426
      @Blackasnight426 9 років тому +1

      I wish I knew the end though.

  • @gabehickey2627
    @gabehickey2627 15 годин тому +1

    I couldn’t help but laugh when he said “It just stood there for 15 minutes saying let me the fuck in” 🤣😭

  • @megamovieman101
    @megamovieman101 4 роки тому +4

    Despite the extreme overuse of f-bombs, this is a really good story, I felt genuine suspense the whole time, and the reactions were believable. No one made any dumb decisions that would be too dumb for real life.

  • @DeathTheKidVideos
    @DeathTheKidVideos 9 років тому +8

    And we're all like "FUCKIN' NOPE!". LMAO.

  • @katekolton7820
    @katekolton7820 9 років тому +11

    "We get big ass sticks" I'm dying xD

  • @spinepile4106
    @spinepile4106 7 років тому +4

    I've listened to this story several times. I love the fast paced story telling and the amazing detail.

  • @IAmStrongAndLovely
    @IAmStrongAndLovely 4 роки тому +3

    It's been 6 years but this is still my favorite story to come back to. It's stuck with me since the minute I heard the narrator, and it's the reason I listen to creepy stories and subreddits.

  • @zgSH4DOW
    @zgSH4DOW 10 років тому +14

    The only thing I got from this story was "F-Bomb"

  • @thatonegoth.9458
    @thatonegoth.9458 6 років тому +3

    I still remember when this was uploaded & it's still my favorite story to this day.

  • @Puddlethumper
    @Puddlethumper 8 років тому +29

    I wonder how many of those rake and skinwalker stories would have ended differently if they'd just offered the damn thing a brat and a beer....

    • @j9405
      @j9405 5 років тому

      😂💯

  • @ReverbYT
    @ReverbYT 8 років тому +20

    9:56 WHADAFUKIZRONG

  • @thegoldenkarp5006
    @thegoldenkarp5006 9 років тому +36

    I love these kinds of creepypasta. Does anybody have any suggestions of stories with a similar vibe?

    • @maciekx10
      @maciekx10 9 років тому

      Green Team If you found any please recomend some

    • @llowballs
      @llowballs 9 років тому

      +maciekx10 search on funnyjunk piss your pants 1...its a comp of great creepy goatman stories

    • @TwofoldEthics
      @TwofoldEthics 9 років тому +2

      Huntsville Camping Trip kinda reminds me of this

    • @thegoldenkarp5006
      @thegoldenkarp5006 8 років тому

      Gypsy Romanii Thanks dude, I'll check it out. :)

    • @Wtfisahandle01
      @Wtfisahandle01 8 років тому +1

      +CreepyQuantum I fuckin love the showers, badass stories