"The Cave" by Archfeared/Ethan I
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- Опубліковано 28 чер 2013
- The BIG Creepy Pasta reboot I was talking about. so BIG in fact that I'm not going to even label it as a reboot. it's just THE CAVE
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I have gotten so use to hearing your voice I can't listen to anyone else reading a Creepy pasta.
I know right!
I thought I was the only one Lol
There's always more people like you...like us! =D
Totes..
Hahaha so trve
"It cut me. I'm running for my life. " Oh well, let's stop and write that on the wall LOL
Lol XD so fucking true
If he carved that into the cave wouldn't it take at least a few minutes to do a carving? Or did he have a jackhammer or some shit
Daniel Robinson He wrote it in his blood...
no I think he said it was carved
Dakota Peewee He used a pencil
NEVER, EVER do what that guy did to his friend's ankle.
Under no circumstances.
That guy could have just caused a painful but common ankle break to rise to the level of an eventual amputation of the foot.
Just never take anything like advice from creepypastas actually.
I winced so hard when I heard that part 😭
Plot Twist: The room was filled with natural gasses causing hallucinations and other oddities. The world exploding around him was the flare gun igniting the gas-
....Yeah. THat's definitely it. o-o
GASP
but then wouldnt the lighting of the previous flares set a gass explosion off long before they reached the Jackals den. if im correct flares are open flames and would have exploded if there was gas.
+Rob Mick WHY DID YOU HAVE TO COMMENT!?
It could have been a denser gas. For example, how hot air rises, and cool air sinks? Since they were walking at a slope doing downwards, that could be a possible solution.
Actually that makes a lot of sense
Anyone else realize how badass you'd have to be to do this??
Or stupid
Ashley must really hate his parents.
lolol
Maybe they're Evil Dead fans
Comes across not one but three warnings.......but by all means......proceed.😕😑😑
lolm8
ShesaBeast THEELioness My thoughts exactly 😂😂
"If you haven't noticed, I'm a stickler for safety"
"Hey Gary's leg snapped off, the flares don't work, and all the walls say 'LEAVE THIS CAVE' should we maybe go back for today?"
"NUPE"
That guy was eat up with stupid. After the first warning, I would be out!
@@chriscanfly6386 in all these cave stories they find cave paintings and then keep going, if I found cave paintings I'd be going to the news and cashing in my check
They probably should've used flashlights with flares as a back up.
Ken Lumen that’s what I thought; “wouldn’t it be a good idea to bring flashlights?”
It's certainly less wasteful
"Take him to the hospital and give him these pain killers" Yea its a bring your own medicine hospital
Yes dumb asses Ashley can be a guy's name
LOL
Asian Cheat Codes he said if he wakes up on the trip to the hospital, he didn’t say give it to him when he makes it to the hospital
ChrisCanFly dumb af comment
@@aprilleerose yep
As i said when i heard The Gods Mouth, "THIS IS WHY YOU DON'T GO INTO CAVES KIDDIES!"
+Dawn Speed XD
I've tried listening to this 3 times but keep falling asleep. His voice is so damn relaxing
Shit, I would've left when dude messed his ankle up. "Well, let's pack it up y'all! Lol
This sort of reminds me of the movie The Decent.
Ohh I thought of that too!!!
SAAAME :D
That poor little girl at the beginning DX so gross!
I was pissed off at that movie.... Tailor said nothing scarier since ALIEN.... BULLFUCKING SHIT. ok movie imo but not what promised
YES!!!!
That bone cracking noise sent a shiver down my spine.
I compleatly misheard that as "The Jackle waves." Now I've just got visions of this horrible monster sitting in the darkness, waving at cavers like "Helloooooo! Gonna nom your souls!"
And, I'm sorry? Terrible things happened when this guy went climbing in the Andies? Terrible thing? Is this guy fucking jinxed or something?!
Hahaha now i can imagine that ! 😂
"Would you like a tour of my lair before I nom you? It's really cosy! Hey, can I get you a cup of tea?" 😂
3:25 "Flares out everybody." You turned into Vince Vaughn for a second there.
I love when the author is suddenly able to just automatically know how to beat the immortal enemy
I mean it makes sense. I'd have done the same thing except I'd have pictured an inferno.
You cannot grasp the true form of The Jackal's attack! One of the best stories/creepy pastas You've done.
I grasped it and violated it with my mind on a conceptual level.
lol... "should we help him?" "NO. We already walked down some stairs. were like already 20 feet inside this cave. we cant go back." the fuck man. why even write in the characters if you throw them out a sentence later.
his name is ashley? tell him that his keys are behind his parents dresser
FAK. He's dead. we're all doomed
i forgot what that was a reference to.
@@gigaswardblade7261 The Evil Dead Series main protagonist is named Ashley "Ash" Williams.
I find it odd that I cannot find any comments saying how absolutely amazing this story is. It is truly amazing and read extremely well. Thank you for the upload
This was actually the first creepypasta I ever heard. I listen to them a lot and I've written a few as well, this story is pretty special to me.
+Rylin S which ones did you right?
Nikko99 I just mostly keep them to myself.
Rylin S aw too bad :( but sound awesome none the less
The ending is something Michael Bay would do.
Vivian Kuhn *explodes a random gas station*
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*.....GOD DAMMIT GOOGLE*
why no flash lights.
i want a second part to this.
The jackel lives mwahaha!
I want one too!!!
Lawliet L meanwhile people still don't understand then ending 3 years on
Lawliet L part two authorities head to the cave after everyone else got out to find the aftermaths of a explosion
Been a while since I listened to this. It's still epic. I'd love for a movie to be made, but they'd only make the Jackal look ridiculous. Like a big CGI blur or something. It would be impossible to properly capture the sheer impossibility of it. Perhaps if it's never actually shown...just a tendril wrapped around Ashley or something, like the tentacles from "The Mist" that killed the bag boy. Leave it up to the imagination.
For some reason though, I picture it as a Morbolo from Final Fantasy, albeit sort of squiggly, like its flesh is wriggling. No clue where the image came from though.
I love the ending. Sure, it's vague, but it's supposed to be. I'd like to think that he killed it at the cost of his own life...and that the ones who never crossed the gate made it out alive. The Jackal would gladly lie to fill the guy with despair. Maybe it makes them taste better. Like salting the meat, as Pennywise once put it.
TheBlues32 the crack noise scared the shi* outta me
PrinceOfBones everyone plz sub to my channel
TheBlues32 I agree, I really would love to see this awesome story made into a thriller/action movie.
+TheBlues32 When he said "the world exploded around me" all i could think of is that the flare ignited the room since it was full of flammable gas of some sort.
TheBlues32 I imagine the Jackal as that main creature from Where The Wild Things Are, but with a smaller head and wider shoulders. Also, it would have longer hair and hair that covered its eyes and it would always have two or three keys hanging around its neck with twine instead of chain like on necklaces.
Great pasta,would be a epic movie
This was really great. Lol the only thing that startled me were the sound FX tho
what a sad story i wish keep on hear this but this is good story
Jack Skellington what ?
This video
Not going to lie, this started out good, but ended up cringe af.
Totally agree
Super hero creepypasta
They brought flares into a cave instead of torches, it made no sense from the start
Would've been better if he tricked the Jackal into letting him escape or something, instead it just turned into this bullshit power fantasy where some average Joe managed to kill an all powerful Eldritch entity with a *flare gun*
I wouldn't go as far as to call it a creepypasta, but GOD DAMN, this was a spectacular story!
Anyone using flares for lighting up a cave is an ideal candidate for natural selection.
I think that was the single most entertaining, terrifying, and overall best story I've ever heard. Your voice is very complimenting as well, and I love it. (No seriously, I really like your voice dude. Its perfect for this and you know when and how to act according to the story. You're very talented) and usually something like this would leave me wanting to know more but I know exactly enough to be satisfied.
DAMMMM DAT BONE CRACKING SOUND.
"The world Exploded around me"
Me: Have Fun!
okay want o cookie
yes i would love a cookie, TO GO WITH THE EXPLOSIVES!
lol oatmeal or chocolate chip
i like the chocolate chip please, SO I CAN EAT IT WHILE I DIE!
lol
What makes him great is his honesty. He doesnt cut out all the failed parts. He just tries again.
Oh that cracking sound was music to my ears... Awh yes, I'm not sure how many times I've replayed it...
Does anyone else wish he would pronounce gesture right
Yes
clayton lee it kills me inside a little bit.
clayton lee guess-terr
clayton lee I'm glad somebody finally said something about that!
It might be an accent thing. 🤷🏽♀️
This should be a movie
hmm good thinking
There is a movie called "The Cave", the plot is some-similar.
if all creepypastas where recorded, the redbox would skyrocket.
Mr. Creepypasta this is by far one of my favorite stories you tell. I can honestly say I was sucked into the story and very creeped out towards the end. Great story
i remember when i first heard your amazing narration of this one. Absolutely satisfying and such an awesome creepypasta. Id say this is to be among the hall of fame. Cant say how much i appreciate this one you did.
When this began, I thought of the film The Decent.
Leah Lawton Yeah... had the same thought
Funny right?
Leah Lawton Funny and creepy at the same time :D
Just a little XD
But the ending of the creepypasta disappointed me a little though... How about you?
@ 26:40 "This Is My Cave" = Shrek "This Is My Swamp"
lol #ihatehashtags #itsallogrenow #hopefullynotrealhashtags
Its all ogre now ; p.
EpicPcGamer Uinted #hashtag
Also, that's what I thought when I first heard this. :b
"We each had 30 flares and they only lit a small area around us."
Gee, ever heard of something called a flashlight? Or, idk, a head lamp? Y'know, so you can have your hands free to climb down into a cave?
Just come back for a listen - This was the first creepypasta I ever heard. And it's what got me hooked.
Ashley's a guy...?
Ashley Williams: AKA Ash: Hero of the Evil Dead films.
Back in the 1900s, Ashley was a male name.
Kim can also he used as a male name though not as common.
He's just that fabulous :o
I have a family member, male, named Marion, if you can believe that. There are SO many names that used to belong to men primarily- Vivian (up till about 1933), Pearl (common till 1910), Sandy, Ruth, Patsy, Margaret, Lindsey, Carol, Whitney.... There are even more that I simply don't understand HOW a parent could name a boy. Like Allison and Ruby, June, Clair, and Annie. Weird, huh?
www.disneybaby.com/blog/25-names-that-used-to-be-boy-names/#slide9
Am I crazy or does anyone else really want to go spelunking (with proper equipment) after listening to this? Really want to gather a group of friends right now and just dive right in.
You just wanna lure me in so you can devour me.
Tommie Vargas Shhhhhhhh you'll scare the tastier morsels away
Chase Dodson D:
Yes
must be white
Undeniably one of your best, despite the flubs. And what a rarity for a creepypasta to have some close to a happy ending.
I've not heard your stories until today and after seeing the "Jr." I was optimistic. I have listened to a lot of others Reddit etc. but YOU are by far the BEST one and I'll listen to your stories from now on! You are very good! The music in the background, the excitement in your voice climbing with anticipation!, it really grabs you into the story! It's great! Keep up the good work man! Xoxo Amber ;)
The poor editing really killed this great narration. The dude is killing it, but the failure to edit out off-takes and repeating lines ruins the vibe and continuity. Bummer.
blah blah blah
The jackle thingy sounds like a big ugly bear.
IKR
actually, a jackal is sorta like a dog
Yeah I knew that, and I was like "Jackal? ISn't that a type of wild dog? Eh."
Rachel aitken yeessss
TornTheHedgehog when they said the jackal, I have expected Bruce Willis to appear.
Love this one! Can't wait to see what I
I adore this story. Keep on writing, truly! :)
Spelunky creepypasta!
Brother and sister can't be identical twins.
STORY RUINED!1
Yes they can. It's not exactly 'identical' but they're born in the same way as other twins.
No. Identical twins are from the same egg, they are genetically identical.
"Regular" twins can be brother and sister, since they are not genetically identical.
AnomalyINC omg either write a better story move on or stfu if you're up in knots about that then you mustn't have much of a life smh.,...
Dlorenzo680 whooosh
AnomalyINC transgender
Love this one can't wait to see what's different
Oh my gosh a reboot of the cave. Love you mcp you're the best.
This kind of bored me but at the same time I found myself unable to leave the video
IKR lol
ive heard you mispronounce this in a lot of readings, so its getting probably not an accident, but the word "gesture" has a soft g, like "giraffe" or "mirage". D: its a minor thing but i thought youd like to know
PK Boal I just realized how long ago this was. Oh jeez.
This is a favorite of mine, very glad that was re-uploaded, not that the first was had any errors...I just like it more now.
One of my favorites mrcreepypasta!
Before i started listening to this story i thought it was based off the movie the descent
I thought it was based off The Cave. It was a pretty good movie for my standards lol
This is my cave. = Initiate phase one. And anyone who gets this is awesome.
There are many like it but this one is mine.
This was an amazing story with a very strange feel. Not like most I can say.
And the reading was pretty good also, yes there were just a few mess ups, but really pulled you in.
I love imagery and this had plenty of it, even though it was shrouded in darkness.
Great pick creepypasta
best creepy pasta ive heard ina long time bravo.
I've had days like that.
My name's Alex... i don't remember this... but I DO remember Ashley.
wow my name is Alex and i have a friend named Ashley too!
Gray Fawx~ You remember Ashley, Kansas?
No.
what if i told you my name is ashley and i have a friend named alex
my god
You, my good man, are an excellent story teller!
dude that was probaly one of the best creepypastas that i've heard so far. good job bro ;)
In 2006 I was a homeless crackhead. I got caught mBating in the bathroom of a library. Dark days
reminds me of the Movie 'The Pyramid'
This is my fave mr.creepypasata era
I forgot how much u miss your early work
WHY DIDN'T THEY JUST LEAVE AFTER THINGS GOT EERIE!?
Because they need to follow horror clichés
At least in real life people will do that
Every time I think of the creature I think of a deathclaw from Fallout
Oh yeah
I like to imagine that the reason why the story ends with the "world exploding" around the Narratir js not a random and strange way to describe his death but that the Jackal is the Primordial god of fear that has existed since man has, explaining the csveman writings and the planet explodes because its existsnce is integral to the earth surviving, something the protagonist fails to understand ensuing in the world blowing up.
MrCreepyPasta has such good emotion when he reads, and his voice fits the mood perfectly. Plus, he pauses at just the right time for a long enough time to have a good effect, and time for the listeners to process what is going on in the story. :)
is it a sequel of fender woods
no it isn't, different author :(
no their was no carvings in the fenter woods cave and their were no chains in this cave the jackel was in some sort of prison unlike the fenter woods creature witch roamed freely the jackel talks the fenter woods creature didn't the fenter woods creature was outside durring the day the jackel was fatal hurt at the thought of light the jakel can read thoughts the fenter woods creature cant but i can see how you would confuse them they are both great story's and the both need a part 2
As Above, So Below, anybody? = 3 =
If you had seen the movie, you would know exactly of what I speak. XD
+Cathy Shepard This reminds me of a handful of different movies. Is "As Above, So Below" good? I heard it landed on some top ten lists.
and beyond so I imagine?
Ever seen Cloverfield? BWP? Grave Encounters?
johnwayne87 as weird as it sounds, marble Hornets is one of the best horror... things... I've seen in years
This story was way ahead of its time
What? is that it? no part 2? i want to know what happened!
"Everything exploded" ...he caused the Big Bang...
Stupid
Cave writing says "Go back, The jackle wakes"
Fuck it, lets fo forward
Thats white people in horror movies/storys
+Dark Reaper (Evan) I would never do that, i'd probably spray paint some creepy stuff on the wall like the bad omen symbol that native americans use, and constantly write don't go down don't go down in red paint, just for the lulz
Lovecraftian themes, but with a modern twist. A faint glimmer of hope against an impossibly horrific entity. A thing beyond our comprehension, not designed specifically to scare us, but as something lurking beyond the further frontier of our world. A creative monster that isn't another bloody Slenderman/Rake clone!
This is, by a long shot, in my top three on this channel.
i love the cave series, you get pretty invested in it after a few, especially when you narrate it.
hehe ashley is a girls name
+cheeriomartinez Have you ever SEEN Evil Dead (1981)?
you dont fuck with ash. or his god damned boomstick.
+cheeriomartinez Actually the name Ashley was a name originally exclusive to boys but now, it's presently used as a unisex name.
+Argylle Lucrest yassss evil dead
THE MORE YOU KNOW! *RAINBOW IN DISTANCE*
What's up with you repeating sentences when u read?
He corrects himself.
Sometimes I've heard it with the exact same words repeated.. No changes
I guess he wants to change the emphasis or maybe stumbles while reading the next word. Idk. But he repeats cus he messed up.
He might loose his place for a second and have to catch himself, it's not really that big of a deal, I hardly notice.
Or it cord be the way the story is, a lot of times he repeats the sentence when he was describing something and it kinda gave a sense of realism in my opinion like hearing a story from a disaster Survivor as they recalled what happened
I love this story. Really well done again MCP Love it and Love you
What's the variation of moonlight sonata played at the very beginning called?
sounds like the bedrock mist lol
Lol yeah I made a huge cavern at one time and got lost in there and tried to dig my way up but found a lot of lava. there was no means of escape I tried to go left I tried to go right. the mist made it impossible to find my direction. And yes I did not have a map or a compass.
No! Hopefully you didn't have diamonds!
+Brett Strongquill lol mine craft 😂
I found tons but I didn't want to die so I left em and when I died and came back I only found a few before i got lost again....
Brett Strongquill Oh no! That sucks, there is a limited supply of diamonds
Isn't "Ashley" a girl's name??
velalance
yes it is a cool name... but not for.. males.. x_x
velalance I never even knew that hahaa
never knew it was a unisex name
There's this early 00s popstar who has the name of Ashley Parker Angel.
Mysticsloth If you think it can't be cool on a male, watch The Evil Dead. It's pretty groovy.
Yog Sothoth When I think 'Groovy' I think of the Evil Dead PS1 game when I would make the menu SFX go GroovyGroovyGrooGroovyGroovy Groovy... lol
Well done... Another great one! 😎
way to go mrcreepypasta, you made the freakin world blow up
I WROTE THIS!!!!! IN 4TH GRADE I WROTE THE JACKLE'S CAVE AND MY TEACHER READ IT ALOUD THE CLASS MY NAME IS ETHAN TOO! OMG OMG OMG
no shhhhh youre name is frodo. go back to throwing rings in volcanos
no my real name is ethan I swear, I wrote this
I invoke rule 30 of the Internet. Tits or the GTFO! In this situation meaning Provide proof or shut it. :)
it wasn't as detailed and it was on bluexephos video so don't blame me.
Ethan McDaniel so yeah
it's like a mix of The Descent and Blair Witch Project..
Blair witch 2 is coming out now! I'm so excited! I loved the first one
F34R Talon Blair Witch 2 came out in 2000. This upcoming film is blair witch 3.
yes ik but the book of shadows blair witch 2 wasnt very good
i think thats what it is called XD
F34R Talon It was great, actually
That was AWESOME!
Incredible story!
Fake
You don't say???
U do know that all of these r fake.there not supposed to be real😂
Harmoni Smith *facedesk*
Harmoni Smith *facepalm*
Harmoni Smith Facewall
Wtf is up with the staggered stutter type non-sense where you repeat the same thing you just said, it bothered me so much I had to stop listening. Please stop that, it's horrible and very unprofessional
SometimesTurtle I'm sure it wasn't intentional. He probably just missed it in editing.
Jamie Marie Yeah, I just figured he would want to know how actually negatively it impacted my enjoyment of the video, as I loved the actual stories but the repeating was killing me after the 15th time, lol.
SometimesTurtle omg, you're disappointed?! Everyone stop the presses! This guys disappointed! Jackass
One of my favorite stories
Holy this was really good, now i know why i love creepypastas