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  • @WetCanoot
    @WetCanoot 5 років тому +920

    Fun fact! That green photo of the hunched over guy is actually a hilarious photo of a drunk guy that shit his pants :D

    • @sethmillan8627
      @sethmillan8627 5 років тому +102

      Ethan Smith I can never take this image seriously now. Thank you for the chuckles.

    • @FIRSTNAMELASTNAME-zt4kf
      @FIRSTNAMELASTNAME-zt4kf 5 років тому +52

      Great youve ruined this story for me 😂

    • @dahut95
      @dahut95 5 років тому +3

      @@sethmillan8627 what it 72

    • @savy8295
      @savy8295 5 років тому +7

      That's maker it less scary

    • @sethmillan8627
      @sethmillan8627 5 років тому +5

      Jaime Bond what?

  • @pixelized_cloudz7802
    @pixelized_cloudz7802 3 роки тому +425

    When he screamed “HE JUST SPRANG TOWARDS THE HOUSE! HE’S BANDING ON THE DOOR!”, I jumped and I absolutely loved how it set the scene and he put so much emotion into it.

    • @scorchia932
      @scorchia932 2 роки тому +23

      I was half asleep at that point, let's just say I soon woke up 😂😂

    • @SubcribeMinecraftNOW
      @SubcribeMinecraftNOW 2 роки тому +9

      That was enough to trigger anyone's fight or flight reaction

    • @crispgeneral3462
      @crispgeneral3462 Рік тому +5

      So true I got severe goosebumps

    • @Annihilation_Studios
      @Annihilation_Studios 5 місяців тому

      ​@FrancisE.Dec.Esquire Mr creepypasta is not gas station jack. They're just good friends that work on the gas station series together

    • @michaelstrickland6964
      @michaelstrickland6964 3 місяці тому

      I love that these are posts being written and the “author” wrote it out

  • @leaflikesfrogs1624
    @leaflikesfrogs1624 5 років тому +453

    “When I heard the first bangs on the front door-“*upbeat ad starts playing*

    • @Knitmur
      @Knitmur 5 років тому +3

      I noticed that too xD

    • @marmalademagnus4174
      @marmalademagnus4174 4 роки тому +6

      them damn salesmen 🙄

    • @SabbyNeko
      @SabbyNeko 4 роки тому +6

      RAID: SHADOW LEGENDS

    • @omnicrunch
      @omnicrunch 4 роки тому +3

      the Raid: Shadow Legends ads now brought to your home, personally, mosly between 1 AM - 5 AM, in your house, I mean basement...

    • @kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151
      @kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 роки тому

      They’re selling death. It’s free! Only costs you your life!

  • @shroomyk
    @shroomyk 5 років тому +1359

    Who the heck microwaves a frozen pizza? That's what ovens are for, you madman.

    • @rosesluckrideart
      @rosesluckrideart 5 років тому +60

      What an absolute mad lad

    • @greywalker505
      @greywalker505 5 років тому +43

      What a *deviant!*

    • @justintimely6921
      @justintimely6921 5 років тому +28

      I do

    • @cadenceclark3026
      @cadenceclark3026 5 років тому +37

      Yeah, that’s the focal point of this story. Sure 😂

    • @decaf4450
      @decaf4450 5 років тому +17

      accidentally microwaving a pizza will burn it to a crisp, sadly I've experienced this more than once

  • @Hi-uv7nn
    @Hi-uv7nn 5 років тому +270

    “And I opened the door” he’s very smart

    • @sadisticgirl_
      @sadisticgirl_ 4 роки тому +15

      Surprisingly that technique worked better than closing it lol

    • @ldzbeats5128
      @ldzbeats5128 3 роки тому +1

      What an intellectual 😂

  • @alecs5394
    @alecs5394 5 років тому +2648

    oh those sneaky little Jehovah's Witnesses

    • @moviegirlaka
      @moviegirlaka 5 років тому +22

      🤣

    • @ToyBonnieRabbit1987
      @ToyBonnieRabbit1987 5 років тому +16

      Lmao

    • @adamethridge7824
      @adamethridge7824 5 років тому +7

      Alexei Jp nah general Mattis!

    • @alecs5394
      @alecs5394 5 років тому +41

      "What keeps you awake at night? Nothing. I keep others awake at night"
      - General "Mad dog" Mattis

    • @shibby7667
      @shibby7667 5 років тому +8

      Yo foreal why u have to make fun of them

  • @JudithLight84
    @JudithLight84 5 років тому +215

    "The damned step creaked louder than a step ever has in the history of stairs!" I don't know why but this made me laugh

    • @blackoceancreativeuniverse
      @blackoceancreativeuniverse 4 роки тому +5

      please check out "an Illustrated History of Stairs" in the "things you need knees for" section of you local ibrary!

    • @Mgrom-r7c
      @Mgrom-r7c 2 роки тому +1

      This reminds me of, “the strawiest straw man ever made of straw”

  • @colemarie9262
    @colemarie9262 5 років тому +624

    FYI for anyone watching- you don’t need any evidence to report an incident to the police, or to file a report really. And it’s a stupid idea not to in a situation like this- if the person was to break in at a later date there is a record of you reporting them, and that helps. If they break into a neighborhood home and hurt someone, you’re a witness, and that report proves that you saw the person when you say you did prior to knowing there was a crime, making you more legitimate as a witness.
    In any case, in real life, you can easily report this kind of stuff.
    (Side note- It’s not the same thing as snitching on kids smoking pot in the park, your home safety is a whole different ballgame.)

    • @grubbybum3614
      @grubbybum3614 4 роки тому +33

      But I really wanna snitch on those kids doing the mariwana.

    • @swaglevi4315
      @swaglevi4315 4 роки тому +10

      @@grubbybum3614 No bad

    • @TheGoatkage
      @TheGoatkage 4 роки тому +14

      I agree you don’t need evidence to file a report but if you got evidence, that makes it likely for the police to show up quicker and more cautious/concerned about your situation.

    • @Bleep831
      @Bleep831 4 роки тому +11

      Those meddling kids who keep taking weed in the park.

    • @HugoGojibiter
      @HugoGojibiter 4 роки тому +9

      In fairness, the dude in the story wasn’t being hesitant because he didn’t think he could report it without evidence, he just figured they wouldn’t take it seriously. And I imagine that would be the case a lot of the time

  • @LR-yc9gm
    @LR-yc9gm 4 роки тому +92

    “When i heard the knock on the door, i could tell that ... Door Dash has the restaurants you crave at your fingertips” was a well-placed ad.

    • @RedOnly
      @RedOnly 2 роки тому +3

      A year later........ A total wine and more jingle 🤣🤣

    • @SimplySimulated
      @SimplySimulated 3 дні тому

      Now it's a political ad for the lady vice-president.

  • @micheleberg4922
    @micheleberg4922 5 років тому +464

    45:58 it mouthed “my house now boy”

    • @adamethridge7824
      @adamethridge7824 5 років тому +17

      Jorden Berg maybe but these ppl need to teach him the mean of sacrifice couple of claymores would fix this problem right up we got a Kong in the wire

    • @SenkaBandit
      @SenkaBandit 5 років тому +6

      Adam Ethridge don’t forget to add some kapkan traps and frost traps

    • @jeanniebosch3628
      @jeanniebosch3628 5 років тому +7

      It really said...FINDERS KEEPERS!!!

    • @grace-4072
      @grace-4072 4 роки тому +3

      i accidentally pressed the timestamp
      and now i gotta find where i was 😂

    • @ChapoChaos
      @ChapoChaos 3 роки тому +1

      I’m imagining Arthur Morgan saying that

  • @IsaiahMemes
    @IsaiahMemes 5 років тому +836

    It's LeBron james he just wants to give you a Sprite cranberry

    • @mrroy678
      @mrroy678 4 роки тому +10

      Ima let him I now gimmie that sprite cranberry

    • @arkhane2495
      @arkhane2495 4 роки тому +6

      I'm thinking of that creepy sprite cranberry game

    • @joshuayoung6683
      @joshuayoung6683 4 роки тому

      @@mrroy678 0

    • @DragonSlayer-cp4qz
      @DragonSlayer-cp4qz 3 роки тому +1

      No no no no no NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOO AHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOO

    • @Goober_gobbler
      @Goober_gobbler 3 роки тому +1

      The fact there is a comment on this from 2 weeks ago.

  • @spicybiscuit5530
    @spicybiscuit5530 5 років тому +494

    45:58 "It's free real estate"

    • @TheInstinctWithinV2
      @TheInstinctWithinV2 5 років тому +5

      Omg yes! 😆

    • @9bang88
      @9bang88 5 років тому +3

      Spicy Biscuit the wink wonk he does only makes it better

    • @abbinormal407
      @abbinormal407 5 років тому +10

      ...take your thumbs-up and go.

  • @ridanaushad3376
    @ridanaushad3376 4 роки тому +231

    Everyone's Gangsta until he puts frozen pizza in *the microwave*

    • @spottiestbeef7791
      @spottiestbeef7791 3 роки тому +2

      I do it

    • @sugarrush9875
      @sugarrush9875 3 роки тому +1

      Depends on what kinda frozen pizza
      If its microwaveable, eh
      If it isnt, excuse me what the f u c k

    • @justaduck3615
      @justaduck3615 3 роки тому +2

      @@sugarrush9875 The real question is how he managed to fit a whole ass pizza in his microwave.

    • @sugarrush9875
      @sugarrush9875 3 роки тому

      @@justaduck3615 When I say microwavable i mean the small pizzas meant for microwaves:>

    • @nonamenotrace4333
      @nonamenotrace4333 3 роки тому +1

      Microwave oven maybe?

  • @cactusskin
    @cactusskin 5 років тому +673

    when you try to ignore the mormans knocking at your door

    • @dkro9634
      @dkro9634 5 років тому +4

      Stephen Fierro Jehovahs witnesses?

    • @Sienisota
      @Sienisota 4 роки тому +4

      No Mormons on my area, but oh, when the Jehovah's Witnesses come knocking... I suppose the difference is similar to Skinwalkers, Rakes and Wendigos... non-existent...

    • @jackheissler3121
      @jackheissler3121 4 роки тому +1

      They summon a demon

    • @kiralonely1307
      @kiralonely1307 3 роки тому

      @@Sienisota At best, very minimal. Technicalities moreso than any real differences. Most people will take them to be synonymous somewhat lol ^^;;
      analogy is very accurate tho lol

  • @AshWont
    @AshWont 5 років тому +472

    It's just nosferatu chill lol all he wants to do is Flicker your lights

    • @The_Wallflower
      @The_Wallflower 4 роки тому +18

      Nosfuratoooooooo

    • @ragmenel
      @ragmenel 4 роки тому +7

      I love this community

    • @llogiesagh_1023
      @llogiesagh_1023 4 роки тому

      What is a nosferatu

    • @BunPlus11
      @BunPlus11 4 роки тому +8

      @@llogiesagh_1023 he's from a old scary movie (I think) and they had a spongebob episode where he appeared flickering the lights

    • @BunPlus11
      @BunPlus11 4 роки тому +1

      @@ragmenel me to

  • @runningwolfpup1293
    @runningwolfpup1293 5 років тому +156

    This is like the fourth time I've listened to this, and because of the way that you narrate it, it never gets old. This is probably one of my favorites of your stories.

    • @Saiyan_Goku
      @Saiyan_Goku 4 роки тому +2

      Hollyleaf killer of blonde edgelord yo can you explain the ending to me?

    • @humanbean6672
      @humanbean6672 4 роки тому +5

      yes!! this and tales from the gas station are my favourites

    • @youtubeconnollyfamily
      @youtubeconnollyfamily 3 роки тому +1

      My favorite is my friend visited a alternate reality. But this one is definitely in my top five

    • @zeshanmushtaq5520
      @zeshanmushtaq5520 3 роки тому +1

      Hey, man I love this story, do you know any similar to this in nature / storytelling

    • @MySomberNights
      @MySomberNights 2 роки тому +1

      The wendigo/skin walker stories are always a treat.

  • @centaurus5597
    @centaurus5597 5 років тому +672

    Everybody gangsta until the
    £¥€¶∆ start walkin'.

    • @snekysnek3976
      @snekysnek3976 4 роки тому +5

      HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    • @kathk7439
      @kathk7439 4 роки тому +4

      HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    • @connor_bell
      @connor_bell 4 роки тому +3

      HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    • @yheti3584
      @yheti3584 4 роки тому +2

      HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    • @banfive1682
      @banfive1682 4 роки тому +2

      HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

  • @ShootingStarNeo
    @ShootingStarNeo 5 років тому +351

    "Oh yes I'm sure this will be a lovely little bedtime story to see me off to sleep," I said, for some reason, probably exhaustion.
    I'm a fool. I am Boo Boo, the Fool, it is me.

    • @booboobeebee6423
      @booboobeebee6423 4 роки тому +3

      No I'm booboo the fool. Same story

    • @bog_witch.official5151
      @bog_witch.official5151 3 роки тому +2

      Yeah I did it too. It's now four am and I'm regretting my choices.

    • @Ashekier
      @Ashekier 3 роки тому +4

      We are all foolish enough to listen to this at the darkest hours of the night. But I am the only one who lies in the comfort and protection of a blanket fort

    • @bog_witch.official5151
      @bog_witch.official5151 3 роки тому +6

      @@Ashekier wow subtle flex

    • @Idolstarcynder
      @Idolstarcynder 3 роки тому

      Iggy, is that you?

  • @bralynnethomas9170
    @bralynnethomas9170 5 років тому +364

    Every time I listen to these stories I feel like someone is behind me

    • @GhostRider747
      @GhostRider747 5 років тому +1

      Bralynne Thomas same

    • @C-13770
      @C-13770 5 років тому +7

      I am

    • @autumnc3531
      @autumnc3531 5 років тому +3

      Soon as I read this comment I had to look over my shoulder.

    • @C-13770
      @C-13770 5 років тому +1

      @@bralynnethomas9170 who was that to?

    • @bralynnethomas9170
      @bralynnethomas9170 5 років тому

      U

  • @lsbullen8444
    @lsbullen8444 5 років тому +160

    I don’t know how people can be disappointed in that ending. It leaves room for you to interpret it how you like.
    For me he is obviously trapped in the basement in his dreams, he still lives a life away from the house, but all his dreams are in that basement, with others that have found themselves in the same situation.
    As for the creature, perhaps it was trying to help him all along. It knows about the things in the basement so it try’s to scare people away before it’s too late. It was injured by something to be bleeding, it is the only thing keeping whatever is causing the horror in the basement, in the basement.

    • @ChihuahuainaTrenchcoat
      @ChihuahuainaTrenchcoat 5 років тому +17

      Interesting take

    • @j-dawg4774
      @j-dawg4774 2 роки тому +29

      That actually makes sense and honestly makes me feel better, I was like "The dude made the smartest decision I've ever heard in any creepypasta: He got the heck out of there despite not knowing what was going on, he wanted to live out his years with his wife instead of being a victem to whatever horrors were in the basement"

    • @NailHeavenAshford
      @NailHeavenAshford 2 роки тому +15

      It’s probably bleeding because it smashed a door in with its bare hands.

    • @twilightsparkle75
      @twilightsparkle75 Рік тому +3

      @@NailHeavenAshford nah it doesnt say bloody scratches along the door. i figured it started to bleed when the screech happened

    • @twilightsparkle75
      @twilightsparkle75 Рік тому +2

      what confused me about the end was he said "i wake up in the basement"

  • @realdaggerman105
    @realdaggerman105 4 роки тому +53

    ‘I don’t know what to do anymore’ *ominous nothingness noise*
    Ad: EaRs FeElInG bLoCkEd?

  • @pabloborroto4692
    @pabloborroto4692 5 років тому +824

    Finally a story in which the police arent completely incompetent
    Like really even in some of the good ones the police dosent help mostly because people seem to not realize that some investigations can go on for decades without any real or mayor progress, it can be frustrating sometimes but at least here the police ACTUALLY does the best they can, its made better since the writer dosent imply that it all they did

    • @arksurvivor7372
      @arksurvivor7372 5 років тому +28

      I agree I love it when a Police team actually tries stuff and it fails over there being no police involvement (Unless it's something like the story is from the view of a child and they didn't call the police)

    • @gman3664
      @gman3664 5 років тому +10

      More of a stereotype than incompetence

    • @MajinMist603
      @MajinMist603 5 років тому +1

      At this point were I see that it is at my door step trying to get in is the time to move a few states away maybe country's

    • @greywalker505
      @greywalker505 5 років тому +26

      And it ups the tension when the police is actually competent and does everything they’re supposed to, but the case still stumps them.

    • @johnblake5688
      @johnblake5688 5 років тому +9

      yeah, this story's pretty unrealistic in that regard

  • @xpikapeltx22
    @xpikapeltx22 5 років тому +144

    The voice acting was spot on. Appreciate the audible horror.

    • @pasteldreams5413
      @pasteldreams5413 4 роки тому +2

      MrCreepyPasta is the king of voice acting >:)

    • @xavierhernandez-dones4497
      @xavierhernandez-dones4497 3 роки тому +2

      @@pasteldreams5413 so is it like a team who does the voice acting or only him? If only him, the voice acting is incredible for a single person

    • @brotherhoodofsteelsoldier1356
      @brotherhoodofsteelsoldier1356 3 роки тому

      @@xavierhernandez-dones4497 it’s only him

  • @NotA3xCombo
    @NotA3xCombo 5 років тому +42

    It all started with the Pizza.

  • @pippo17173
    @pippo17173 5 років тому +253

    Ugh is my daughter making milk shakes again? Goddamn boys.

    • @greywalker505
      @greywalker505 5 років тому +20

      Normally I would facepalm and cringe, but that’s actually pretty funny.

    • @cameronangel1013
      @cameronangel1013 4 роки тому +13

      Knew something brought him to the damn yard

    • @Chronicler9
      @Chronicler9 3 роки тому +6

      i LOVE that this comment exists and that I saw it (and that there's a whole generation that won't even know what the heck it means). Thank you, kind @AnimeWolfgamer

  • @christopherhancock1723
    @christopherhancock1723 5 років тому +371

    This channel is so much fun to listen to, the stories on here feel so much more creepy and scary than the predictable stuff Hollywood produces these days.

    • @Kezz00
      @Kezz00 5 років тому +8

      Well then, watch Mr.nightmare, Creepsmcpasta, Unit #522, and Lets read. at least my favorites haha you've probably heard of them though.

    • @d0p3l
      @d0p3l 5 років тому

      ofc this guy is a gentile

    • @youtubeconnollyfamily
      @youtubeconnollyfamily 3 роки тому

      Kelv mr creeps is better.. but hey that’s just my opinion

    • @youtubeconnollyfamily
      @youtubeconnollyfamily 3 роки тому

      I listen to this channel and Mr. creeps. They are both the best...creeps loads videos every single day

    • @youtubeconnollyfamily
      @youtubeconnollyfamily 3 роки тому

      If you have not listen to “my friend has visited a alternate reality“ from this person make sure you do. To me it’s the best pasta story of all time

  • @quake1650
    @quake1650 5 років тому +30

    "SCP-096 HAS BEEN SUCCESSFULLY CONTAINED"

    • @-Samus-Aran-
      @-Samus-Aran- 4 роки тому

      What story is this a reference to? I'm interested in hearing it if it's related to this one

    • @TheManBehindTheSlaughter6669
      @TheManBehindTheSlaughter6669 4 роки тому

      @@-Samus-Aran- you don't know about SCP-096 aka shyguy?

    • @dathmach8745
      @dathmach8745 3 роки тому

      @@-Samus-Aran- The SCP foundation is a whole other thing

  • @omega_acxd
    @omega_acxd 5 років тому +32

    "I SMELL PENNIES"

  • @matchboxcharm9290
    @matchboxcharm9290 5 років тому +17

    This is the best reading I’ve ever heard in my life the panic in his voice before when the guy comes in the house

  • @gevontoledo9188
    @gevontoledo9188 5 років тому +143

    It’s October, time for his channel to blow up

  • @ssnakebbite.
    @ssnakebbite. 4 роки тому +15

    this one genuinely creeped me out!! and after nearly 6 or 7 years of listening to creepypastas, it gets gradually harder and harder to get scared. this narration, story and background music really is a work of art. thank you :)

  • @amandahuddleston7070
    @amandahuddleston7070 5 років тому +15

    This is one of the ones that terrify me.

  • @ltu_domo3860
    @ltu_domo3860 5 років тому +64

    help there is a tall shaved man in my yard please help!!!!!!!

    • @midnightgaming4100
      @midnightgaming4100 4 роки тому +2

      Frank Wilcox yo chill it’s just Johnny sins here to lay the pipe

    • @kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151
      @kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 роки тому

      Is he wearing a suit?

    • @kiralonely1307
      @kiralonely1307 3 роки тому

      at least he shaved before showing up
      maybe that's just what bigfoot looks like when he shaves and gets all dressed up to impress.

  • @victoriadalsoren4255
    @victoriadalsoren4255 5 років тому +32

    Scariest part of this is microwaving a frozen pizza. 🤢

  • @casualnobody8557
    @casualnobody8557 5 років тому +11

    Okay, uh, the bit where he ran at the door? That actually got me. >_

  • @rangelancer3776
    @rangelancer3776 5 років тому +117

    Chin chin has returned.

  • @dorklardent.
    @dorklardent. 4 роки тому +25

    I love how he mentions only once that he has a son and this thing never puts him in any danger

  • @LibraGamesUnlimited
    @LibraGamesUnlimited 5 років тому +19

    I actually thought that maybe the 'creature' was a guy with his vocal cords cut trying to warn the couple about bad people in the basement, maybe looking for something hidden in there they were trying to steal or something. Boy was I wrong. :)

  • @nicholasmorgan7609
    @nicholasmorgan7609 5 років тому +163

    The ending felt rushed, like he didn't know how to end it. Bad enough when that happens with regular creepypasta but a MAJOR disappointment on a series. Also, what happened to their son?

    • @JRMAV1
      @JRMAV1 5 років тому +17

      Nicholas Morgan Don’t remember them having a son? Where time wise is he?

    • @nicholasmorgan7609
      @nicholasmorgan7609 5 років тому +33

      @@JRMAV1 It's in part one, when the narrator mentions he gets home long after his wife and the son, but it might have been "the Sun" and I misunderstood

    • @Coffeebean1985
      @Coffeebean1985 5 років тому +11

      He did great, do a better version of it and show him how it is done if it bothers you so much.

    • @lukesanroman3494
      @lukesanroman3494 5 років тому +14

      Nicholas Morgan It was "Sun" I think

    • @copper589
      @copper589 5 років тому +31

      You're not the only one, I was wondering where their child was this whole story till this comment

  • @shoelaces9857
    @shoelaces9857 5 років тому +24

    I love how much emotion you put in these, I can feel the fear, sadness, and awful sounds throughout it. Man, your so talented! Gives me chills

  • @iamzesty
    @iamzesty 5 років тому +14

    The dude in the backyard description sounds like The Rake.

  • @skyenellums308
    @skyenellums308 5 років тому +25

    Can we get both this story and “my friend has been living in an alternate reality” on the podcast as well? I don’t have the means to listen to these stories on UA-cam while at work and that’s basically where I live lol

  • @dantecaputo2629
    @dantecaputo2629 4 роки тому +7

    The twist is it’s just a really dedicated Amazon delivery man with really bad social anxiety.

  • @PortgasDAce-us3dg
    @PortgasDAce-us3dg 5 років тому +243

    45:55 he mouthed "it's all oger now"

  • @Mrfritz590
    @Mrfritz590 5 років тому +26

    Deliberately bad story summation: the world's weirdest home security system.

  • @AsherIsLame
    @AsherIsLame 5 років тому +61

    I looked back at my phone to the second picture and looked away immediately then looked back picked up my phone and said "THANKS FOR THE FECKIN NIGHTMARES" then I typed this comment

  • @megamovieman101
    @megamovieman101 4 роки тому +22

    I really liked the story until the weird ending. I was all for this couple having a happy ending and escaping, but there's too much that just isn't addressed. The police covering everything up, the tall man, the voices in the basement (I assume they're the voices of people who lived in the house before but who knows?), and the game cameras. But it did a very good job of building tension throughout, and I really bought into the relationship between the couple.

    • @michaelh9649
      @michaelh9649 2 роки тому +1

      Was looking for this exact comment. You’re spot on. Waaay too much was left unresolved.

    • @brennanclegg315
      @brennanclegg315 2 роки тому +5

      Part of it being unresolved showed the true fear going on

    • @brennanclegg315
      @brennanclegg315 2 роки тому +5

      It’s kind of like the movie the thing, the less you know about the monster, the more terrifying it is

    • @bigbrohybrid
      @bigbrohybrid Рік тому +3

      I personally think that a shadow of everyone who lived in that house gets created each time the homeowner and family moves out. That OP and his wife actually did leave and move on to build a new life together but their fear and trauma manifested selves were not so lucky. The second OP said “Last night I woke up in the basement-“ him and his wife had completely expelled their trauma 100% and had moved on 400+ miles away, but the leftovers had nowhere else to be other than the place where they were first made….. In that creepy house they were made to fear. It’s just my interpretation. A type of spirit in middle-eastern folklore I’ve heard about are Daevas and this story reminds me of those.

  • @JasonDevil06
    @JasonDevil06 4 роки тому +5

    Bald, tall, skinny, strong enough to break down a door and made some kind of chant with a broken voice and shrieks
    It definitely sounded like a Wendigo

  • @matthewtynan6562
    @matthewtynan6562 5 років тому +10

    Wow just wow, you sir have a very great talent for story telling. Multiple times in this story I felt dread come over me and was actually unsettled. Well done sir well done indeed

  • @pleasedepositfivecoins7858
    @pleasedepositfivecoins7858 5 років тому +93

    roses are red,
    violets are blue,
    spoopy season is coming soon,
    this channel is gonna get hella views

    • @mmmm69420
      @mmmm69420 5 років тому +2

      "Spoopy season" ahahaha

    • @sethmillan8627
      @sethmillan8627 5 років тому

      RexyArts That didn’t rhyme, but it was still funny.

    • @snekysnek3976
      @snekysnek3976 4 роки тому +1

      IS SPOOKY SEASON BOIS!!!!!!!!!!

    • @starlightassassin5592
      @starlightassassin5592 4 роки тому

      That was one great of a ryme! If only had the time to make my own, that would be neat for me.

  • @weaponisedfarts1382
    @weaponisedfarts1382 5 років тому +18

    I feel that this story was ended too quickly. There's still a lot to explore, the basement, the creature itself, and what was on the game cameras.

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 10 місяців тому

      Super late, but sometimes leaving some things up to the readers imagination is better than overexplaining everything.

    • @weaponisedfarts1382
      @weaponisedfarts1382 10 місяців тому

      @@oren1305 True.

  • @nataliecameron
    @nataliecameron 4 роки тому +8

    This had the same spooky vibes as "I'm a 911 operator, and I just had the most terrifying call"

  • @omallie360
    @omallie360 4 роки тому +6

    I gotta to say ... I just LOVVVVVEEEE the way you read. The others seem to use some online reader or smthg cuz their sentences always sound continual, the emotions don't match the stories, it's refreshing get hear that some ppl do still talk with punctuation and all that, lol.

  • @Snoozing.inky69
    @Snoozing.inky69 4 роки тому +7

    I've listened to so many creepypastas I've become almost numb to the "scary" parts of the stories. THIS ONE HOWEVER!!! IT WILL ALWAYS GET ME! PART 2'S ENDING!!!! I love it so much

  • @darkoFNFN
    @darkoFNFN 4 роки тому +4

    I usually like scary stories but this scared the shit out of me!

    • @darkoFNFN
      @darkoFNFN 4 роки тому

      Lesi PlaysHacks Yoo sup dude

  • @jackdecheck7660
    @jackdecheck7660 5 років тому +5

    Dude I was listening at update 3 with the picture of the rake and right when the detective says he didn’t leave I saw the rakes behind the rake and SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME

  • @lezloart4597
    @lezloart4597 5 років тому +27

    I just wanna say your voice is amazing 🖤

  • @norrix5122
    @norrix5122 5 років тому +13

    This is by far my favorite channel for creepypasta. 10/10 have already told all of my friends

  • @rebeccaspookyduran7864
    @rebeccaspookyduran7864 5 років тому +23

    25:29 OH GOD DONT LET THE RAKE IN!
    you startled me with that sudden outburst! 😅

  • @duffinthemuffin5792
    @duffinthemuffin5792 4 роки тому +3

    This creepypasta I could never really forget for some reason

    • @Terf1988
      @Terf1988 4 роки тому

      This and SearchAndRescue's works were great

  • @MrsGerardWayForever
    @MrsGerardWayForever 5 років тому +5

    This is what idubbbz must feel like tracking all those squirrels

  • @goetiancalamity1158
    @goetiancalamity1158 5 років тому +27

    I thought the opening was Havana XD

  • @infestedribcage
    @infestedribcage 4 роки тому +5

    i’m lucky i have insomnia and don’t have to fall asleep to my imagination after listening to this... maybe having my eyes open would be scarier but, i don’t know, sleeping to the thought of someone lurking around my home does not sit well in the pit of my stomach

  • @wolfe-6786
    @wolfe-6786 5 років тому +41

    I could only think of one thing this whole time. JUST MOVE OUT??

    • @MisterAcker
      @MisterAcker 5 років тому +1

      We never leave

    • @AshleyAshleyAshley395
      @AshleyAshleyAshley395 5 років тому +2

      I’ve been thinking the same thing for the last 26 minutes and 24 seconds. Why are you still there. Fuck the cameras and police. JUST MOVE !!!

    • @Hi-uv7nn
      @Hi-uv7nn 5 років тому +1

      missashleyowens ikr it’s not like you have any friends in that area anyway

    • @lKlynI
      @lKlynI 4 роки тому +3

      Well think realistically. It’s not so easy to just up and leave.

    • @sadisticgirl_
      @sadisticgirl_ 4 роки тому +1

      @@lKlynI it's also not easy to get murdered by a creature

  • @colbanjohnson5086
    @colbanjohnson5086 4 роки тому +3

    When he panicked saying it was running at the door followed by the banging, despite knowing something like that would happen I still got goosebumps

  • @etcetera1995
    @etcetera1995 5 років тому +9

    Oof, it's been a long time since I was actually shaken by something in a story, but the sudden shouting about the banging on the door? *Ooh.*

  • @nebular97
    @nebular97 11 днів тому

    5 years later and this is still one of my favorite stories, I would absolutely love to hear a version of this from the police's perspective

  • @tarawilliams1858
    @tarawilliams1858 4 роки тому +7

    So as I turn into my own driveway we get to the "we will never leave leaveleave neverleave..." officially creepedthefck out. I listen to an obscene amount of Creepypasta and this one line has got to be the freakiest line I've heard yet.
    (Also, the loudest stair in the history of stairs one of the funniest. It's all about balance.😉)

  • @miseryworld_8677
    @miseryworld_8677 5 років тому +5

    The entire beginning is my life.

  • @SuppaDuppayee
    @SuppaDuppayee 5 років тому +11

    Wait.... I thought this man was a normal thing to see?...

  • @ghettobitch1348
    @ghettobitch1348 5 років тому +1

    i fucking love how you really get into the characters of the stories.

  • @cloroxisrelevant3614
    @cloroxisrelevant3614 5 років тому +34

    i sleep to these. i lovegetting lost in a story anf letting it slowly seep inyo my dreams.

    • @bianca4210
      @bianca4210 5 років тому +1

      Clorox Is Relevant Finally someone understands

    • @tonycalzone3517
      @tonycalzone3517 5 років тому +2

      Bro same

    • @just_going_mads
      @just_going_mads 5 років тому

      You can fall asleep while listening to these, but commenting whilst asleep is pretty ill advised. But you do you.

  • @moviegirlaka
    @moviegirlaka 5 років тому +47

    Did he just repeated a line twice? And when is he going to do more cooking with MCP?

    • @J2982able
      @J2982able 5 років тому +24

      He does these recordings in one continuous take, without edits. If he doesn't feel a specific line's delivery, he re-does it. You're not crazy.

    • @C-13770
      @C-13770 5 років тому +4

      He did it twice.

    • @Miss_Eldritch
      @Miss_Eldritch 5 років тому

      @@J2982able that isn't true, you can notice when he breathes it cuts sometimes

    • @deutsch-amerikanisch8281
      @deutsch-amerikanisch8281 5 років тому +2

      @@Miss_Eldritch What he meant to say is MCP records without stoping, and then comes in after and removes the parts he doesn't like. During this recording he repated a line he didn't like and forgot to cut it out of the final product.

  • @Safactamas
    @Safactamas 5 років тому +40

    Wasn't a fan of the ending but great horror story tho
    do more like this please

  • @Elite04232
    @Elite04232 4 роки тому +1

    I swear to god every single time a ad breaks into the video, it completely wakes me up and it runs the mood.

  • @kaiwyatt8465
    @kaiwyatt8465 4 роки тому +2

    No matter how many times i listen to this story, I still get chills. MrCreepyPasta is the greatest story teller ever.

  • @isaacalsop4209
    @isaacalsop4209 5 років тому +22

    Damn thirty seconds in and you've made me hungry.

  • @dario.162
    @dario.162 5 років тому +258

    Don’t do it im a virgin

    • @cadenceclark3026
      @cadenceclark3026 5 років тому +3

      . Fat mood

    • @JaseyStudios
      @JaseyStudios 5 років тому

      69.. nice

    • @lampmb1580
      @lampmb1580 4 роки тому +2

      Your pic is too good for this post

    • @swordscar6278
      @swordscar6278 4 роки тому +1

      not after he is done with you

    • @nelliesilvers1210
      @nelliesilvers1210 4 роки тому +2

      That'll be the worse thing to say..make them want it more. 'No Entry' signs are enticing and inviting to some😈

  • @valentine_val5945
    @valentine_val5945 4 роки тому +4

    Sir, you got a rake. No doubt about it

    • @ep3389
      @ep3389 3 роки тому

      It's fake, if this was real he would have all the vids on here

    • @valentine_val5945
      @valentine_val5945 3 роки тому

      @@ep3389 you dont think i know that? Of course its fake.

    • @ep3389
      @ep3389 3 роки тому

      @@valentine_val5945 no doubt about it

  • @decagonibuswastaken7503
    @decagonibuswastaken7503 5 років тому +5

    I was watching this at 3 in the morning, very spoopy. Then ads hit and Phil Swift shows me flex tape. 10/10 would flex tape again

  • @luisroman9294
    @luisroman9294 5 років тому +8

    Love your narrations MCP, cant wait for more Tales from The Gas Station! Definitely wasn't expecting it to sprang towards the house that actually had me shaking!

  • @GreyhawkTheAngry
    @GreyhawkTheAngry 4 роки тому +3

    Sometimes these stories frustrate me when they don't tell what was going on. I get the whole "it wouldn't be as scary/interesting/dramatic/etc as you imagined it to be" trope, but I feel that too many creepy pastas rely to heavily on that.

  • @kieransmith9616
    @kieransmith9616 2 роки тому +1

    it's kinda neat that there's some outtakes not edited out, like I can hear him finding different ways to read the lines

  • @crumbledcookie27
    @crumbledcookie27 3 роки тому +2

    25:21 my heart jumped into my goddamn throat, you caught me off guard good sir
    also can i just say i love how you put actual emotion into your voice, its like im hearing the person who went through the experience tell the story to me themselves. i love how you narrate, it pulls me into the story so much better than the other narrators who sound like they just got back from their weekly insomniacs meeting, keep it up!

  • @mustardman6104
    @mustardman6104 4 роки тому +4

    “We’re selling the house”
    -good ending

  • @tessa8175
    @tessa8175 5 років тому +4

    Ooof 🤭 when ever I listen to mrcreepypasta I turn on the lights I feel like someone is watching me

    • @decagonibuswastaken7503
      @decagonibuswastaken7503 5 років тому +1

      If ya turn on the lights then everything knows your there. If you turn them off you cannot see them coming

  • @sasorispupet
    @sasorispupet 4 роки тому +2

    If this is a new rake story, i'm loving it.

  • @Cheshire_Ace
    @Cheshire_Ace 4 роки тому +2

    These are the creepypasta's that scare me b/c you can easily put your self in to these situations

  • @pinksprinkless2532
    @pinksprinkless2532 4 роки тому +6

    Mother: Lock the doors when I'm out, okay?
    Me: Yeah yeah, sure.
    Me: *listens to this creepypasta*
    Mary: never leave. we never leave. we. never. leave leave never leave.
    Me: well shit
    Me: *locks doors*

  • @minecraft-hz6bo
    @minecraft-hz6bo 5 років тому +3

    thank you mrcreepypasta, very cool!

  • @nadiyashahid3650
    @nadiyashahid3650 4 роки тому +1

    Climax of the second part......Amazing!!!

  • @Gagirl-82
    @Gagirl-82 2 роки тому +1

    Wow. I’ve had this in my playlist for a while and finally listened to it. I absolutely loved it. It was so creepy and suspenseful. Thanks MCP for the great narration and thanks to the author ✍️

  • @fearadin
    @fearadin 5 років тому +1

    Loved this series Mr.Creepypasta!!

  • @pizzadeeya
    @pizzadeeya 4 роки тому +3

    Mrcreepypasta should be the next narrator for Forensic Files. He has that soothing tone to his voice like Peter Thomas did.

  • @rebeccaspookyduran7864
    @rebeccaspookyduran7864 5 років тому +2

    I love rake stories. They gotta be some of my favorites. They are probably the few that really freak me out. Those and David Paulides Missing 411.

  • @gma_x4lucky91
    @gma_x4lucky91 4 роки тому

    I truly love the way you read/ present each story. You are my favorite one to listen to on Creepy pasta.

  • @okluminous566
    @okluminous566 5 років тому +61

    Im just gonna take a guess before the story ends
    The man is the old owner’s husband
    EDIT: Disappointing :(

  • @insertyourfeelingshere8106
    @insertyourfeelingshere8106 5 років тому +13

    This has gotta be the 4th time I’ve heard this story and each time it’s bye a different person

  • @JezebelIsHongry
    @JezebelIsHongry 4 роки тому +1

    I mean the thing scared him so much he and Mary completely forgot they even had a son.

  • @alexhearn8083
    @alexhearn8083 4 роки тому

    This by far is one of the scariest stories by your channel the music alone gave me goosebumps well done.