@@ABorderPrince stories are more successful when we have characters that we can relate to. I'm no better than the worst meatbag guardsman in the entire galaxy against a 'Nid.
We can survive anything you throw at us MON-KEIGH!!!! Soon the entire galaxy will be our hunting grounds and your primitive species will be our play things!!!!!
idk man, I think its tonally better for his story to end here. a nameless man who just wanted to do what he could before he died, no matter if anyone is alive to remember him. losses some of that mystique if hes saved.
one of the more interesting stories. this is what i expect from a astartes, not a commissar. this 1 human warrior was OP for a short period of time and it was acceptable. i somewhat grow tired of whole astartes chapters getting destroyed to the last man and the elite of the elite of the elite getting captured and tortured or something stupid like that, astartes are introduced as 8-10 foot tall super captain Americas in thousand pound mecha-suits and ive yet to see [or hear] many stories of such feats...
The greatest advantages a man posseses in 40k is that all of humanity's enemies will grossly underestimate him and fail to foresee our complete and utter lack of complacency due to the fact that at any moment we can die in a million different grisly ways and with that our edge never dulls. Furthermore and most importantly is our will which is capable of being strong enough to withstand the worst agonies the universe can throw at us and then some cause after all the true soul of mankind is one etched with endless hardship and misery..
these stories are getting better by each episode, who says grimdark is not fun, there is power in acceptance of demise and power is sweet like nothing else... grimdark offers that freedom and... it... is... absolutely amazing... and the way you narrate them is even more lively... excellent work...
Gotta say, I've been enjoying your readings a great deal lately. Though the quality has gotten a bit better, this is still my favorite story. Thank you for what you do!
Been going through your expansive library of works.. So good!!! I’m happy to see how your found a calling for narrative works. You’re quite gifted!! Proud to be a supporter of your channel for a while now. Thank you!
Thank you for these. Your really good. Maybe just slow down a little bit. Like your not in a hurry , especially during heavy conversations. Then Speed up during fast action description. Your great even if I'm wrong... Thanks for taking the time to do these, great accents.
TY again ABP , so far every story has been really interesting from this book. May I ask you 1 question though ? Hovv many chapters/stories vvill there be ? As I think every listener vvill agree if theres a story you find unappealing the majority of us vvont mnd if you gloss over it vv/anotherstory plus it can cut dovvn on your vvorkload. TY again for the excellent narration & this particular story vvas really great .
Wow he killed at witchslut with nothing but his fists and got rewarded by torture? truly they want to make the dark eldar as dislikable as possible dont they? Really wished Commoragh would be overrun by Nurgle deamons (as Slaanesh would be quick a death or too pleasurable) and the dark eldar just get mutilated and deformed as they slowly died horrible deaths....would be the first time i would root for chaos
Liked it, but a shame about the ending. I was waiting for him to go down in a blaze of glory, taking out a couple hundred drukhari scum with him or something. Oh well, still a good story.
I'm gonna be honest I couldn't finish the story from the shear incompetence involved in this writer. A comisar walking off homunculus(THE premiere torturers of 40K) poison on top of an defeating an elite wych broke my SoD. No real research was done on the writers part.
Well commissars are the premiere badasses of 40k so if the commissars is special enough he could do it, look at yarrick for example, he killed a huge ork warboss on melee, so why wouldn't this commissar be able to kill a homunculi?
I can easily see Ciaphas Cain or Gaunt or Yarrick pulling off similar feats, and Inquisitor Eisenhorn was able to survive and fight for a long time despite a deadly deldar poison. Commissars, Inquisitors and such are often unreasonably tough.
The symbolism in Warhammer that has to do with occult knowledge & things alike is no coincidence. The names especially & just the Warhammer world is so hand in hand with this, if people only knew. I mean, just go through the names, places & so on. But then look into the meaning of these names & so on, then you'll see what i mean. Take care folks
Apologies for the accents in advance lol 😝
So long as you aren't doing Zeentch demons we cool. T-they aren't in this book are they?
lol
the question is, how can you do all of that all by yourself... thumbs up...
The accent is what makes it ! Otherwise you're just another bloke from anywhere mate.
Huh?! You did an amazing job!! Never apologize, ever again.
Guardsmen are really some hard men. I enjoy hearing about them even more than space marines.
defo adds somthing
@@ABorderPrince stories are more successful when we have characters that we can relate to. I'm no better than the worst meatbag guardsman in the entire galaxy against a 'Nid.
This commissar was secretly sly marbo in disguise.
He escapes a few minutes later unscathed because sly marbo can fly space ship even without limbs
hahaha
Got to love a Story where dark Eldars get there A***es kicked!
well kind of
@Esben M except when that wych turns her other "talents" on you?
I hate the dark Eldar, the Salamanders should have dropped exterminatus nukes on Commoragh before exit.
this is true
We can survive anything you throw at us MON-KEIGH!!!! Soon the entire galaxy will be our hunting grounds and your primitive species will be our play things!!!!!
@@ethanvallance3437 plaything? In your pants, foul xeno abomination!
would have been too swift of a death....would prefer if Commoragh got invaded by slaaneshi demons instead
@@dinocha0s may their suffering never end...
The best short ive ever read..i wish it continues..its kinda left open 4 him 2 get saved
cheers
idk man, I think its tonally better for his story to end here. a nameless man who just wanted to do what he could before he died, no matter if anyone is alive to remember him.
losses some of that mystique if hes saved.
Xenos purging at its best....... character voices bring the story to life. great job.
Sick love a good comissar
one of the more interesting stories. this is what i expect from a astartes, not a commissar. this 1 human warrior was OP for a short period of time and it was acceptable. i somewhat grow tired of whole astartes chapters getting destroyed to the last man and the elite of the elite of the elite getting captured and tortured or something stupid like that, astartes are introduced as 8-10 foot tall super captain Americas in thousand pound mecha-suits and ive yet to see [or hear] many stories of such feats...
they concentrate on making them human lately tbh. the blades of democles audiobook is pretty good though for awsome astates stuff against tau.
@@ABorderPrince yeah but i expect that against the tau... they cant even fight in melee... lol.
@@darrianweathington1923 captain general kitten's hatred intensifies.
No matter the page no matter how many times I've heard this...best story n best narration. Von Klaus lives
The greatest advantages a man posseses in 40k is that all of humanity's enemies will grossly underestimate him and fail to foresee our complete and utter lack of complacency due to the fact that at any moment we can die in a million different grisly ways and with that our edge never dulls. Furthermore and most importantly is our will which is capable of being strong enough to withstand the worst agonies the universe can throw at us and then some cause after all the true soul of mankind is one etched with endless hardship and misery..
these stories are getting better by each episode, who says grimdark is not fun, there is power in acceptance of demise and power is sweet like nothing else... grimdark offers that freedom and... it... is... absolutely amazing... and the way you narrate them is even more lively... excellent work...
cheers!
Not much of a grimdark story once he starts Ramboing dark eldar on the way to escape.
I’ve read this and listened to this many times.
awesome!
only my 3rd time
@@mykelengieza7057 bruh I think I'll follow suit
Gotta say, I've been enjoying your readings a great deal lately. Though the quality has gotten a bit better, this is still my favorite story. Thank you for what you do!
cheers!
Thank you
thanks!
Really cool story.
one of my absolute favourites still
Been going through your expansive library of works..
So good!!!
I’m happy to see how your found a calling for narrative works. You’re quite gifted!!
Proud to be a supporter of your channel for a while now.
Thank you!
These audio narrations that you do, are amazing. You have right voice for the job 👍
thank you
Brilliant
32:37 your American accent expert love it man
perfection
Thanks man! Super good job. Much appreciated
thanls!
Commissar breaks out of prison
*gets thrown back in*
Superjail theme plays:
ua-cam.com/video/yIpdc9xji4w/v-deo.html
lol
I'm surprised he didn't grant the Emperor's mercy to a certain someone in the very beginning.
Also, good job on the American accent.
lol cheers
Thank you for what you do & putting this on here for people like myself who just cant get enough Warhammer lore. Great content brother... well done.
Fabulous work as always. Love a good dark eldar story.
I go in phases of my Warhammer interests 1 space marines 2 emperor3 inquisitors 4 dark eldar thank you for all your work in this
This is one of my favorites
Keep up the outstanding work ABP 👍👍
thanks man the stories coming up are longer and take more time
Thank you , Prince .
That was GREAT. Thanks
Interesting story, as always eldar are either op or punching bags lmao they should have thrown an avatar of khaine for the comissar to strangle
Loved it, and loved the accents. Well done!
cheers man
Thank you for these. Your really good. Maybe just slow down a little bit. Like your not in a hurry , especially during heavy conversations. Then Speed up during fast action description. Your great even if I'm wrong... Thanks for taking the time to do these, great accents.
cheers man, this is one of earlier ones i did i think i have improved a little as we go along
Badass to the end awesome
Wow!!! What a story!
Fantastic reading!
thank you sir
That was really excellent, I will say though your flow between pages be better.
yeah happens somtimes
This is a cool story! But it's kind of funny how these guys can run thru dark eldar like cannon fodder 😅
Thank you for these
I though dark eldar keep exceptional warriors for the fighting pits? I'd love to see commisar vs astartes
The commissar knows the real down fall was hiring the same general contractor to build that crappy gantry and the factory with inadequate supports
Fantastic stuff dude
thanks man more coming regularly remeber to subscribe
Very cool story bro
When “a border prince” speaks I listen and obey!
For such a manly voice you can pull off a convincing female.
Well done sir love your work
LOL
@Adolf Hitler lol I said convincing didn’t break the flow. Didn’t say great learn to read =)
@Adolf Hitler what’s up with the name anyway?
@Adolf Hitler lol fair point
None but the emperor will remember a commisars duty fulfilled.
Your American accent is on point my guy. God damn it was strange hearing it from you. Rock on brother
Still best story and reciting 😍
sounds like that dark eldar shoulda hired that commisar instead of trying to kill em
TY again ABP , so far every story has been really interesting from this book. May I ask you 1 question though ? Hovv many chapters/stories vvill there be ? As I think every listener vvill agree if theres a story you find unappealing the majority of us vvont mnd if you gloss over it vv/anotherstory plus it can cut dovvn on your vvorkload. TY again for the excellent narration & this particular story vvas really great .
ahh yeah maybe will be leaving out a few not sure really just picking out the ones i like first and then ill see
nobody fucks with a commissar, not even if he is unarmed
is true
Wow he killed at witchslut with nothing but his fists and got rewarded by torture?
truly they want to make the dark eldar as dislikable as possible dont they?
Really wished Commoragh would be overrun by Nurgle deamons (as Slaanesh would be quick a death or too pleasurable) and the dark eldar just get mutilated and deformed as they slowly died horrible deaths....would be the first time i would root for chaos
Wow you really hate dark eldar
Yet you have a sororitas body pillow curious
What happened to the commissar? And where were they in the end?
dead, and i believe fighting it out ina part of the city
Fantastisk
You are a great voice actor
Your the best!!
WE ARE SPARTACUS
Gigachad Commissar.
John gramaticus made an appearance.
lol
Drukhari so petty
Liked it, but a shame about the ending. I was waiting for him to go down in a blaze of glory, taking out a couple hundred drukhari scum with him or something. Oh well, still a good story.
Question - any other audio narrations by ABorderPrince featuring the Dark Eldar?
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I'm gonna be honest I couldn't finish the story from the shear incompetence involved in this writer. A comisar walking off homunculus(THE premiere torturers of 40K) poison on top of an defeating an elite wych broke my SoD. No real research was done on the writers part.
thats fair, some of the old sotries is a bit off ill admit but that does offer some scope for weird stuff they dont do much of anymore
Well commissars are the premiere badasses of 40k so if the commissars is special enough he could do it, look at yarrick for example, he killed a huge ork warboss on melee, so why wouldn't this commissar be able to kill a homunculi?
I can easily see Ciaphas Cain or Gaunt or Yarrick pulling off similar feats, and Inquisitor Eisenhorn was able to survive and fight for a long time despite a deadly deldar poison. Commissars, Inquisitors and such are often unreasonably tough.
The symbolism in Warhammer that has to do with occult knowledge & things alike is no coincidence. The names especially & just the Warhammer world is so hand in hand with this, if people only knew. I mean, just go through the names, places & so on. But then look into the meaning of these names & so on, then you'll see what i mean. Take care folks
Wow, there is almost as much bullshit in this story as there is in the post Gathering storm lore.