Well its not quite right.....this is the correct sentence: "for it is the mark of an educated person to search for the same kind of clarity in each topic to the extent that the nature of the matter accepts it". (Yes...i Googled it)
Consensual non consent requires maturity. This is an debate of ideas and arguments about it. Imagine the typical edgy guys that leave that kind of comments and then they see this video. In that precise moment is when everyone suits up and acts like a gentleman.
Ah, yes, 50 Shades.... If you go to the market and head to the baking section, you're gonna find 2 bottles: 1) one labeled "Pure Vanilla Extract", and... 2) one labeled "Imitation Vanilla". The narrow gap between those two bottles is where the script for 50 Shades was written. LMAO!
That’s not true. Read the screenplay. It’s just a ploy to get a new television and he saw right through it. Watch her face flinch a little when he brings it up. These actors are incredible.
You forgot mentioning the part where she videos the entire scene in her apartment and files it away in her "blackmail closet" with the other videos. A pan shot of this reveals some names we recognize.
Wow I never realized that until you said it. But now that You said it, the waitress did seem to have some kind of urgency to her, almost annoyingly interrupting often and at critical times. But now that I think about it...that makes sense if she's seen this play out before.
The part where the guy orders coffee and refuses a coffee for the girl waa brilliant. Her face showed shock and a bit of pleasurw in being taking control of. Incredibly well acted
She nearly came when he took control of ordering coffee. Shock followed by admiration. Imagine how she'd bust an ovary if he actually did what she asked him to do. Very very intelligent acting as well as direction. 👌
I like that even though he was weirded out initially he still listened and even considered even if he realized it wasnt for him in the end. She isnt crazy, that's a very real and surprisingly common kink and it's not for everyone.
100% *THAT* is the money shot. Always keep this quote in mind. Another is: "Sign here. It's just a standard contract." "There's no such thing: Every contract was created by the person handing it to you for the sole purpose of protecting them and *not* protecting you."
@@kennethsizer6217 Yes and no. That's a trite but gross oversimplification. A contract that offers no consideration is invalid. Ideally, the contract protects both parties from misunderstandings so that both parties can get what they want. A contract is a way of mitigating risk in a deal so that both parties are satisfied.
I cannot put into words how much his choice affected me physically and mentally. I loved the quote in the comments section that @NedaGamer posted: "It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." - Aristotle Thank you for an exquisite piece.
@@thisisme5487 if an educated mind is defined by its capacity to entertain thoughts without necessarily accepting them, this openness might lead to a deeper awareness of the complexities and nuances in various situations/consequences. this heightened awareness could potentially result in a sense of regret, as the individual recognizes the consequences of different choices or perspectives - and therefore not do it. one way this might happen is when later in life these perspectives change (as they often do) and regret sets in - i shouldve done it when i had the chance
@luciusrex If you entertain ideas or thoughts without accepting them, generally, that would mean there's no influence or change in your perception or behavior, just an expansion of ideas and possibilities. I think regrets come from a place of wishing things had been done differently. It would seem that the only regrets that would come from entertaining ideas without accepting them would be if some of them were so unacceptable that you regret entertaining them. But I see what you're saying. I just feel differently
@luciusrex Although on the contrary, entertaining some of the more unacceptable ideas has helped me broaden my view and have a perspective that helps me come to term with many difficult things. Including regrets.
The cinematography on this is absolute bonkers, the casting, the acting, and the music fits really well into the scene, I absolutely love this short film but I do have a little suggestion, if the Omeleto trademark could be a liitle bit smaller I think it would be perfect because it tends to be distracting. But nonetheless, this is a premium quality short film.
Mummy and daddy always saying “Anna, why can’t you be more like Anya? She’s soooooo perfect, and you are just a piece of crap on the sole of her shoe!”
Him signing the contract and then burning it is a great message. To me, it says, "It's only human to have deviant thoughts, it's okay to be lured by temptation, but what makes a person him/herself is whether you choose to act upon it".
Not realy, it was done comedicaly but thats him having third toughts, he wants to do it, but don't think he should and his desire is constantly fighting his morals.
Exactly. That's the pure truth and only men can understand it. Girls can't phathom the thought behind it, cuz they just are not in our shoes. They never can be, like we never can be in theirs.
Everyone has had their own fantasies..but she's a stranger...and when she tells him of her fantasy he does get excited...but then he realizes the wrong in it, even tho he is aroused at the possibilities. He realizes she's been through something in her life to make her want this and even tho he wants to entertain the idea he can't do it because his morals won't let him..hence why he burns the contract..he will forever be intrigued by her tho..
She's a beautiful woman and the thought that she is giving herself to him fills him with excitement, but the manner in which she's doing it leaves him conflicted and ultimately disappointed.
I do not think it was a good deed versus bad deed in his mind as much as it was a potential legal pitfall, poor communication on her part, and lack of established trust.
@@bensweiss You nailed it. These good and bad people completely miss the point. It is the risk of man following the women fantasy. The women has no legal risk but the male is risking his whole livelihood.
This is appalling! As someone who has waited tables for years, I'm offended at how horrible that waitress was at timing. You don't just interrupt an intense discussion like that. Read the table!
TenTonNuke yet many do just that. Especially as she wanted to clear the table without giving them the bums rush. They were occupying her money maker for 20 extra minutes with no larger tip, and no more food ordered. Added their raised voices after five minutes were making other guests very uncomfortable if this was real.
Who cares ? It s only to build up some tension in this awkward situation, u don t get it . That s all u got to say about the story ? No wonder u re only a waitress .
@@gauthiermerlot5278 Dear internet dude, I'm afraid the one who doesn't get it is you. She was making a joke. And you could be the Nobel prize winner, but this "only a waitress" girl is already ahead. PS. You could be a troll and in that case, you got me in your perfectly executed trap :)
No. It's pretty dangerous to ask for it from a person she's had one date with. Neither should feel comfortable with this having only known each other for a few hours. This sort of thing requires trust. Legitimate, earned trust. Not blind trust.
@@TheSpacecraftX True. I have heard that it is not unusual for people to pay for role play partners that they don't know well either. I guess the fear of not knowing the outcome is part of the attraction. That is definitely a sign of a self destruction personality though....
This is powerful. He, in particular, is exquisite in depicting how temptation and lust build up within him, overtaking him when he signs the contract and how he eventually burns down the brainless desire that could have got him in trouble.
It’s twistedly presented that way so that the « act » versus « possible outcomes » are of unknown results. Bring in a signed « witness » to the contract and the whole situation changes.
My problem-solving reflexes kept telling me that she should join a BDSM community. People there are some of the most educated when it comes to "sexual good practices" and she'd be safe there. And I'm not sure about that childhood story, maybe she has trauma worth talking about in therapy. As for the artistic perspective, I think the writing and acting were great, it was quite a suspenseful story and slightly uncomfortable to watch. I appreciate it didn't have a dark ending.
I guess I'm the only one who saw this as a lesson in contract negotiation. You don't have to sign any contract as written but can modify it to better cover your interests.
I legit played the 'I'm a transformer that turns into this' with my friends and we'd battle and occasionally combine, but we'd just say we were and make blaster noises at each other.
True, after all her choice for a safe word just so damn risky, I mean my goodness, what if the word triggered such a lust for donuts that he left and hurried to the donut shop and binged on them to the point he died of a diabetic coma
I'm not even gonna comment on the story. Just an absolutely wonderful story, wonderfully videography, and cinematography, and an absolutely lovely execution and actors.
Plot Twist: The address she wrote down is for her twin sister's place, who she's never forgiven for taking advantage of her by the beach when they were younger.
Khalid Ali The obvious answer to your question is that “IT’S A BAD IDEA!!!!” Role playing is a lot of fun and exciting and definitely gets the juices flowing, but her proposition is too clinical and legal and not a turn on at all, (not to mention too many red flags went up for me). 🥴
I was thinking his reply should be, "Well, you've piqued my interest here, but this is definitely not a first-date activity. How about our fourth date?" Fred
Great ending: he signs then burns it Scary ending: He smiles tosses on the table and walks out. Man who was listening to their conversation picks it up, signs it, and walks out with the contract
Oh hell no. Damn you got me with that one. That's actually really good thinking. There's a channel that does sort horror films. Seems like something you'd see there.
"You only don't want to do it because you don't think you should". And why does he not think he should? Because it's wrong? Did the writer of this intentionally make her out to be this hateable? That's a pretty damn good reason to not want to do something.
not really, they guy is always going to be a risk no matter how long they have known each other or the state of the relationship. metoo has had some real and unintended consequences
The waitress did exactly what the girl asked the guy to do. He said no to the coffee. She came back and insisted, ultimately “forcing” the coffee on him.
Nah, but that defeats the point if she waits that long to ask. It would have not been as exhilarating to do it with someone she had already built a level of comfort and familiarity. She would know that the person would have a vested interest in keeping her safe, which removes the factor of a threat of danger in a sexual context. Before y'all start judging me, my ex was just like her so I have an understanding of the psychosis behind this fetish.
@@jyranechjm5766 I totally get the fantasy as is and the psyche behind it (my ex also had this exact fantasy). It’s a shame but this unfortunately is one of those fantasies that won’t and/or can’t be satisfied in 99% of the time. there’s to much risk involved for both parties.
My thoughts exactly! I was wondering why I hadn't seen either of these anywhere else. And if this was their first on-screen appearance, how fantastic they both were...
The piano soundtrack is perfect, it goes from light background music that you don't really notice, into a dramatic foreboding style effortlessly that signals the dark turn of events - bravo
Selective attention. Unless you're not talking much with your partner, you're more likely focused on the conversation in front you. That's the closest thing I've got to any sort of explanation for that lol
@@chrischris9123 Doesn't necessarily apply to everyone though. Clearly after giving it some thought, it was evil from his perspective. Part of what makes alignment systems tricky, and the human conscience so interesting.
@@Tybuscus No, he did not "clearly" think it was evil. You're putting words in his mouth. He simply didn't agree to do it, and that's the whole point of negotiating and consent. How does consent not apply to everyone?
@@chrischris9123 he doesn't simply stuff the paper in his pocket or throw it away; the man straight up burns the paper so no one can use it. Maybe not 'clearly,' but you don't need a thought bubble with "this is evil" above his head to understand he is both uncomfortable and thinks its wrong
@@Tybuscus i dont think he thought it was evil. He thought it was 1) a double standard that women can have that kind of fantasy but a man cannot because it would be seen as creepy. (even she admitted to this) and 2) that it could potentially be a very sticky situation if she were to accuse him. Men get put behind bars for much less evidence, hes not about to risk it.
@@descorchedfurnst2790 - again, it completely depends on the laws in that jurisdiction. In some places, that contract would be enough proof to protect him, as it shows that it was a two-party consensual act, especially if she does not press charges.
@@Starhawke_Gaming There's a good chance they'll just throw out the contract and any supposed consent , the woman can easily claim that she repeated the safe word "Eclaire" and he didn't stop, more than likely they would take the woman's side. Not worth the risk at all
I took a snap testimonial for my eyes only when someone requested something similar but even more bizarre. The short was amazing. Well written and perfect actors!
This is so good. 1) the politeness of the conversation, then going to darkness and back to politeness 2) The complex nature of men an women and how a woman saying yes is so much stronger than a mans will to want it 3) the cultural and political stance of this is on point with everything going on in the world and 4) the facial expressions of the guy signing to agree and then realising the ramifications of what he has signed but still wondering if he should, because she agreed. Thumbs up!
Or an ending that reveals the entire scene watched was a flash back in the man's mind ... while laying near death in a hospital ICU due to having been shot by the woman when he showed up, due to her having forgotten about her proposal
Found this channel yesterday. Filmmaking has not impacted me like this in years. The ending actually made my jaw drop. In less than 13 minutes you guys were able to create more intrigue and emotion than a full-length film can in 90. Bravo.
"It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." - Aristotle
“Happiness depends upon ourselves” - Aristotle
"Meow" - cat
Well its not quite right.....this is the correct sentence: "for it is the mark of an educated person to search for the same kind of clarity in each topic to the extent that the nature of the matter accepts it". (Yes...i Googled it)
Upnto the point. So right.
“Bigmacs are too small”. Me
When he starts burning the contract dramatically and then realizes he's just set a piece of paper on fire in the middle of a restaurant lmao.
It would have made a great ending if the sprinkler system was triggered by the smoke alarms.
Sure that was the reason? ^^
@@rinayana8531 yeah that's what i was thinking
@@OverlandOne cut to wide shot while the sprinklers go on :D
@@rinayana8531 wow.
I see, most of the audience here is pretty mature and well educated from their comments down below, which makes me happy.
My thoughts precisely!
Why shouldn't they be?
I believe most of Allen's viewers are! Not all UA-camr's but definitely Allen's viewers!
Consensual non consent requires maturity. This is an debate of ideas and arguments about it. Imagine the typical edgy guys that leave that kind of comments and then they see this video. In that precise moment is when everyone suits up and acts like a gentleman.
Heh heh. They said "down below." Heh heh.
This girl has watched 50 shades way too many times
Ah, yes, 50 Shades....
If you go to the market and head to the baking section, you're gonna find 2 bottles:
1) one labeled "Pure Vanilla Extract", and...
2) one labeled "Imitation Vanilla".
The narrow gap between those two bottles is where the script for 50 Shades was written.
LMAO!
"too"
@@djyoutubo Thank you 😂 I shall correct it just for you sir
@@bwright3943 whenever I see "to" used as "too" my inner mind pronounces it"toe." Try it! 👏🏼👍🏼
Or read story of O
It was all a plot so she didnt have to pay for dinner and leave first.
😂🤣
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I was sho thinking that at the end
YES! that's what I thought XDDDD
Sixth Echelon 😂😂😂
Homie uninstalled tinder after this excursion
XDXDXD
went home and cleaned the pipes.
Lol
Hahahaha
Hahaha
She carefully hid the actual end of her fantasy. That she stabs him as a final act cos she is a psycho. He escaped by burning the agreement;)
Much truth to that possibility. Sociopaths can be charming
That’s not true. Read the screenplay. It’s just a ploy to get a new television and he saw right through it. Watch her face flinch a little when he brings it up. These actors are incredible.
You forgot mentioning the part where she videos the entire scene in her apartment and files it away in her "blackmail closet" with the other videos. A pan shot of this reveals some names we recognize.
The waitress knows this trick of the woman. She's trying to save the man.
Wow I never realized that until you said it. But now that You said it, the waitress did seem to have some kind of urgency to her, almost annoyingly interrupting often and at critical times. But now that I think about it...that makes sense if she's seen this play out before.
@@TheGrandmaster1 Or she is the friend from the summers.
@@MiguelTavaresMAT wouldnt that be soemthing
Great spot, now I see it
Wow!!! Didn't think about that until I read your comment, but you are absolutely right.
She's just trying to lure him to her place so that she and her gang can harvest his kidneys
very likely
Val K These things happen in real life you know?
Hahaha
Indeed! I agree with you.
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The part where the guy orders coffee and refuses a coffee for the girl waa brilliant. Her face showed shock and a bit of pleasurw in being taking control of. Incredibly well acted
Yip, best part of the film. She finally got what she was asking for.
Was kinda romantic the way she reacted.
She nearly came when he took control of ordering coffee. Shock followed by admiration.
Imagine how she'd bust an ovary if he actually did what she asked him to do.
Very very intelligent acting as well as direction.
👌
Ankur Baruah calm down g 😂😂
@@drankurbaruah lmaooo
2:06 funniest part, waitress hands the guy an ENTIRE CHALKBOARD
Have you been to restaurants they do that
Happens in some restaurants.
How awkward the situation was and them him suddenly holding that huge chalkboard making it all the more absurd. Indeed hilarious.
As mentioned many times, the waitress was trying to save the guy from the situation
I like that even though he was weirded out initially he still listened and even considered even if he realized it wasnt for him in the end. She isnt crazy, that's a very real and surprisingly common kink and it's not for everyone.
It's pretty crazy to want to do this with someone you've just had your first date with. With a boyfriend sure.
@@mothgru oh for sur, there has to be some established trust
@@mothgru absolutely. Agree.
common kink but when it happens, they get all mad
@@MrTweetyhack just because i like boxing with a friend doesnt mean id enjoy getting beaten by strangers. Learn a thing about consent and trust bro.
"If there wasn't a grey area, you wouldn't need a contract" Perfect!
Exactly! When he said that it made me think of politicians and Hollywood and all the shady NDA where the victims can't speak up about the abuse.
100% *THAT* is the money shot. Always keep this quote in mind.
Another is:
"Sign here. It's just a standard contract."
"There's no such thing: Every contract was created by the person handing it to you for the sole purpose of protecting them and *not* protecting you."
@@kennethsizer6217 true
1:40 Is that true?
@@kennethsizer6217 Yes and no. That's a trite but gross oversimplification. A contract that offers no consideration is invalid. Ideally, the contract protects both parties from misunderstandings so that both parties can get what they want. A contract is a way of mitigating risk in a deal so that both parties are satisfied.
Man. It’s a good thing they have this whole conversation on camera.
agreed
Lol dude this comment deserves a million likes
Haha!! Love this comment!!
Hey i dont know what you mean can u explain ?
r/woooosh
I cannot put into words how much his choice affected me physically and mentally. I loved the quote in the comments section that @NedaGamer posted: "It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it." - Aristotle
Thank you for an exquisite piece.
ergo the educated mind is the one full of regrets. - some guy on the internets
@@luciusrex What's the connection between the educated mind in this quote and being full of regrets?
@@thisisme5487 if an educated mind is defined by its capacity to entertain thoughts without necessarily accepting them, this openness might lead to a deeper awareness of the complexities and nuances in various situations/consequences. this heightened awareness could potentially result in a sense of regret, as the individual recognizes the consequences of different choices or perspectives - and therefore not do it.
one way this might happen is when later in life these perspectives change (as they often do) and regret sets in - i shouldve done it when i had the chance
@luciusrex If you entertain ideas or thoughts without accepting them, generally, that would mean there's no influence or change in your perception or behavior, just an expansion of ideas and possibilities. I think regrets come from a place of wishing things had been done differently. It would seem that the only regrets that would come from entertaining ideas without accepting them would be if some of them were so unacceptable that you regret entertaining them.
But I see what you're saying.
I just feel differently
@luciusrex Although on the contrary, entertaining some of the more unacceptable ideas has helped me broaden my view and have a perspective that helps me come to term with many difficult things. Including regrets.
The cinematography on this is absolute bonkers, the casting, the acting, and the music fits really well into the scene, I absolutely love this short film but I do have a little suggestion, if the Omeleto trademark could be a liitle bit smaller I think it would be perfect because it tends to be distracting. But nonetheless, this is a premium quality short film.
Also, the real twist... the address she wrote down is for her twin sister who she's never forgiven for some slight when they were younger.
Was looking for this comment😂😂😂 hey twin
Mummy and daddy always saying “Anna, why can’t you be more like Anya? She’s soooooo perfect, and you are just a piece of crap on the sole of her shoe!”
Bring out the 🏆 you earned it
That was my guess.
wtf
Him signing the contract and then burning it is a great message. To me, it says, "It's only human to have deviant thoughts, it's okay to be lured by temptation, but what makes a person him/herself is whether you choose to act upon it".
what about putting it out?
Him putting it out was simply comedic relief.
Not realy, it was done comedicaly but thats him having third toughts, he wants to do it, but don't think he should and his desire is constantly fighting his morals.
DakonBlackblade2 No setting anything on fire in a restaurant in inappropriate and a fire hazard. He had to put it out.
There is no deviancy. There is only personal moral choices.
Awhhh! The power beautiful women have over men. Just leave politely , if your instincts tell you .
There's more to life.
Easier said than done.
@@gustavopramos You could go see a lot more beautiful women in the 30 years of jail you'd avoid
The best part is when he realizes his little fire is getting out of control. Very well done overall.
The best part about this comment is how it has a double meaning.
His face when he realizes that he set something on fire in a restaurant. Perfect!
It was dramatic and cool, but yeah haha it was in a restaurant
Or he just regreted burning it and actually thinking of making that choice, gotta say that ending is thought provoking...
@@Wakkiau i can relate with the guy, yes he was tempteed, but cant do it anway
@@Wakkiau nah dont think so
Yeah when you usually watch a film and they do that I wonder about similar repercussions
Her: "You only don't want to do it because you don't think you should."
Me: That's a perfectly valid reason.
AGREED.
Also me: that and I actually just don’t want to because I’m not broken in that way.
sounds like a circular statement
I died
Exactly. That's the pure truth and only men can understand it. Girls can't phathom the thought behind it, cuz they just are not in our shoes. They never can be, like we never can be in theirs.
Everyone has had their own fantasies..but she's a stranger...and when she tells him of her fantasy he does get excited...but then he realizes the wrong in it, even tho he is aroused at the possibilities. He realizes she's been through something in her life to make her want this and even tho he wants to entertain the idea he can't do it because his morals won't let him..hence why he burns the contract..he will forever be intrigued by her tho..
She's a beautiful woman and the thought that she is giving herself to him fills him with excitement, but the manner in which she's doing it leaves him conflicted and ultimately disappointed.
I do not think it was a good deed versus bad deed in his mind as much as it was a potential legal pitfall, poor communication on her part, and lack of established trust.
@@bensweiss You nailed it. These good and bad people completely miss the point. It is the risk of man following the women fantasy. The women has no legal risk but the male is risking his whole livelihood.
He is a lawyer. That is why he didn't sign the contract.
A temptation resisted is a true measure of character.
This is appalling! As someone who has waited tables for years, I'm offended at how horrible that waitress was at timing. You don't just interrupt an intense discussion like that. Read the table!
TenTonNuke yet many do just that.
Especially as she wanted to clear the table without giving them the bums rush. They were occupying her money maker for 20 extra minutes with no larger tip, and no more food ordered. Added their raised voices after five minutes were making other guests very uncomfortable if this was real.
Some films just don't do justice to the hospitality industry. Horrible film
Ha! You were a rare waitress. I have been interrupted up to 8 times during a meal.
Who cares ? It s only to build up some tension in this awkward situation, u don t get it . That s all u got to say about the story ? No wonder u re only a waitress .
@@gauthiermerlot5278 Dear internet dude, I'm afraid the one who doesn't get it is you. She was making a joke. And you could be the Nobel prize winner, but this "only a waitress" girl is already ahead.
PS. You could be a troll and in that case, you got me in your perfectly executed trap :)
I took away from this - "just because you can, does not mean you should"
i took a totally different message from this one
@@NyxInfernal well? what message did you get?
Chicken Bot
What happened to your face?
@@NyxInfernal what message did you take?
@@NyxInfernal Message please.
Remember kids: A contract is just a piece of paper.
Remember kids: money is just a piece of of paper.
I would be pretty uncomfortable with that role play selection, but it's good that she clearly knows what she wants and isn't afraid to ask for it.
No. It's pretty dangerous to ask for it from a person she's had one date with. Neither should feel comfortable with this having only known each other for a few hours. This sort of thing requires trust. Legitimate, earned trust. Not blind trust.
@@TheSpacecraftX True. I have heard that it is not unusual for people to pay for role play partners that they don't know well either. I guess the fear of not knowing the outcome is part of the attraction. That is definitely a sign of a self destruction personality though....
wow, these other people at restaurant really mind their own business. Why can't my office colleagues be like them..
🤣🤣
Exactly they were hardly whispering
🤣🤣🤣
Only in the movies...only in the movies
🤣
This is powerful. He, in particular, is exquisite in depicting how temptation and lust build up within him, overtaking him when he signs the contract and how he eventually burns down the brainless desire that could have got him in trouble.
Perfectly said.
do you mean that paper wouldn't have mean anything. legal perspective, he wouldn't be in a problem. it's just like casual tinder hookups
It’s twistedly presented that way so that the « act » versus « possible outcomes » are of unknown results. Bring in a signed « witness » to the contract and the whole situation changes.
Stavroula You seem to have a lot of insight into people. What country are you from and are you a writer or social worker?
very well acted by both, im glad he points out the obvious double standard to her....
Plot twist: It wasn’t her real signature.
It took a 12 minute and 50 second Omeleto film to finally get the hint after 40+ years of dating.
A great Admiral once said, *"It's a trap!"*
hahahah good one.
Ackbar always saving lives
@@tinamoul Not Allahu Ackbar, tho
Holup, you sayin she's a dude?
AdmiralBulldog Krappa?
They are husband and wife and this was just foreplay.
this just gets deeper
@@timm2396 that's what she said
The coments on this are gold 😂
I like this take.
or they are screen writing students.
This man is clever, love guys like this. I'd let him gag me in the alley.
ON THE FIRST DATE??? Boys, avoid Roma Roma!
@@TerryReedMiss I think that’s the joke
@@TerryReedMissat what number of dates does gaging and the rest become acceptable to you them?
Isn’t it a HUGE risk at any time?
My problem-solving reflexes kept telling me that she should join a BDSM community. People there are some of the most educated when it comes to "sexual good practices" and she'd be safe there. And I'm not sure about that childhood story, maybe she has trauma worth talking about in therapy.
As for the artistic perspective, I think the writing and acting were great, it was quite a suspenseful story and slightly uncomfortable to watch. I appreciate it didn't have a dark ending.
"Hi, I'm John Quinones and this is what would you do."
Haha nice one my friend.
😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂
“They are just a stranger, why did you decide to step in?”
That was brilliant
@@bradyrolla7447 😜👌
Imagine hearing this conversation over your shoulder while sitting behind them!
Pedro Martinez lol
Pedro Martinez you'd have a queue of guys asking if she'd like them to sign a contract too
I'd make mental notes of everything that happens, just in case I hear about them in the news and police needs more info or witnesses.
Jazz Music stops
"hey hey !! I can play the rapist if you want! choose me !! pick me !! pick me!!" :D
love it! that's the magic of well written dialogue, only 2 people having a powerful conversation, and that's in off to make you feel something.
I guess I'm the only one who saw this as a lesson in contract negotiation. You don't have to sign any contract as written but can modify it to better cover your interests.
I expected one last shot at the end where the waitress comes back to the table.
Waitress: Would you like some dessert?
Man: I'll have an éclair.
Cheesy.
Jem yes. Would have been wonderful
Ya!
Dude you should’ve written the whole story 😉
Brilliant
So rude that she kinkshamed his Transformers fetish.
Hahaha
Sup buddy......nice to see you here
out of all the comments you win
Hehe
That killed me 😂🤣
My takeaway: After many years of not even thinking about one, I now want an eclair! o_o
The plot aside... that male actor looks hella cute. Specially with those glasses.
Woody Allenish
Buddy Holly
"I would have been at the other end of the beach pretending to be optimus prime" rotflmao
I would have joined him. This would be my fantasy!
And no eclair would stop me from doing that.
I would have been catching fish.
Girl here: me too!
I legit played the 'I'm a transformer that turns into this' with my friends and we'd battle and occasionally combine, but we'd just say we were and make blaster noises at each other.
There was a voice in his head, it was saying, “Dis bish crazy”
i would do it.
@@ss-yi5cy why?
Crazy chicks are great in bed.
"Dis bish don't know about Pangea." Brain is that you?
@@Tap-a-roo yes, however they can destroy you in an instant, I know this from experience
this is just brilliant. i was on the edge of my seat trying to weigh the options myself.Great script and an even greater acting from the cast
right??! Great ending too - for the same reasons you name
Woman: "I have this awful coffee machine."
Translation: "You can spend the weekend with me but first comes a new coffee machine."
So Dad how did you meet Mom?
I laughed at your comment...
Best comment
I'm torn between laughing at your comment, or laughing at your comment and feeling bad about it 🤣
😂😂😂😂
Joker, is that you?
'It's not our abilities that define who we are, it's our choices.'
Was that Dumbledore?
... - by Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore
I totally agree.
True, after all her choice for a safe word just so damn risky, I mean my goodness, what if the word triggered such a lust for donuts that he left and hurried to the donut shop and binged on them to the point he died of a diabetic coma
I only found this channel a few days ago and I am hooked, the stories are very well written and by all means well executed, well done for sure.
I'm not even gonna comment on the story. Just an absolutely wonderful story, wonderfully videography, and cinematography, and an absolutely lovely execution and actors.
12 Minutes and easily better than fifty shades.
Glisean ikr
yep...
Ha so true
agreed.
That's not saying much
I wish this was a book and I could read exactly the thoughts that drove him to burn the contract.
Omg yesss! Would love to know that. Along with their backstories and what led them there. 👌
Well, it could be narrated. And yes, it would be interesting.
I think the ambiguity makes this great,
His facial expressions showed that he thought it was wrong imo
Me too
I love the unique, even edgy in this case, storylines you guys produce. Omelto- You guys do one hell of a job. Keep up the good work.
Plot Twist: The address she wrote down is for her twin sister's place,
who she's never forgiven for taking advantage of her by the beach when they were younger.
That would be a pretty good motivator for her actions.
the original comment is right above this bro
The whole time I’m saying, “DON’T DO IT!!!” I’m glad he’s a good listener. 🤣 Good job!
Can give me just a reason why you thought that?
Khalid Ali The obvious answer to your question is that “IT’S A BAD IDEA!!!!” Role playing is a lot of fun and exciting and definitely gets the juices flowing, but her proposition is too clinical and legal and not a turn on at all, (not to mention too many red flags went up for me). 🥴
Yes, I was also saying, "Plz, don't do it!" all the time.
@@Analysis_Paralysis What I was thinking was tell that annoying waitress to get lost so I can fully consider the situation.
I was thinking his reply should be, "Well, you've piqued my interest here, but this is definitely not a first-date activity. How about our fourth date?"
Fred
Great ending: he signs then burns it
Scary ending: He smiles tosses on the table and walks out. Man who was listening to their conversation picks it up, signs it, and walks out with the contract
Oh hell no. Damn you got me with that one. That's actually really good thinking. There's a channel that does sort horror films. Seems like something you'd see there.
And he starts singing "I have the Golden Ticket!" From Willy Wonka
LOL... classic
I thought that's how it was going to end...
Is it still scary if Mr. Bean is the man who picks it up? 🤔🤷😂
Funny how he thought far, far ahead on so much of that, but not the incidental arson at the end.
"You only don't want to do it because you don't think you should". And why does he not think he should? Because it's wrong? Did the writer of this intentionally make her out to be this hateable? That's a pretty damn good reason to not want to do something.
I thought she wanted him to buy her a new coffee machine
NepgearGo same
Haha!! I did too at first
Me too😊
Same 😂
I was thinking the same 🤣🤣🤣🤣
The whole time I'm thinking "run forrest, run"
Then leave
Forest: “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get”
Plot twist: He’s a lawyer, hence how he knows how to draft a contract.
I was thinking that 🤔👀
Where’s the plot twist? It was hinted at pretty heavily
I think that was the point, like when she said "even if you wrote it?" when I think he said it would be illegal
He put out the fire, literally and figuratively. Nice touch.
that is so dangerous. just get a boyfriend and do roleplaying in the safe way with someone you trust
@jadegirl12 Great job for missing the entire point of the story!
@@dakmarino1160 what is the point then ?
you are right.
not really, they guy is always going to be a risk no matter how long they have known each other or the state of the relationship. metoo has had some real and unintended consequences
that defeats the purpose tho doesn't it
my first question would be "how many times have you done this already?"
What if she says..."its my daily routine"
@@rationalthinker3706 "Check, please!"
may be you will find out a tunnel
I`d be more subtle. `Does this tend to work ok for you and the other party`...asked with a grin
It’s amazing that such an intimate scene like this has 30+ credits at the end.
This would definitely be worth expanding into a full-length story.
@Michael Mayo: Nope. We get it.
Ayo ......
This *is* a full-length story.
That would be just about any episode of Law & Order: Special Victims Unit. Send this video to Dick Wolf. He'll appreciate it.
It IS a full length story.
And this kids, is how I met your mother
Legen, wait for it, dary comment my friend
🤣🤣🤣
Lmfao that is priceless!!!
Ha ha ha!!!
OMG, LMFAO!
I bet he went home thinking “What the heck just happened...?”
Das right
No cursing on this Minecraft server
I bet he went home and jerked off.
CinnamonPup -.-
UltraFlare 123
The waitress did exactly what the girl asked the guy to do. He said no to the coffee. She came back and insisted, ultimately “forcing” the coffee on him.
“ This is the real difference between fantasy and reality”
… ultimately his actions backed up his words
This is a 20th date level request she’s asking
Yeah that was my thought too. Like sure, I'm down once we've been dating seriously for a year
At least once trust and compatibly has been proved. Untill hat is not be able to do it.
Nah, but that defeats the point if she waits that long to ask. It would have not been as exhilarating to do it with someone she had already built a level of comfort and familiarity. She would know that the person would have a vested interest in keeping her safe, which removes the factor of a threat of danger in a sexual context.
Before y'all start judging me, my ex was just like her so I have an understanding of the psychosis behind this fetish.
@@jyranechjm5766 I totally get the fantasy as is and the psyche behind it (my ex also had this exact fantasy). It’s a shame but this unfortunately is one of those fantasies that won’t and/or can’t be satisfied in 99% of the time.
there’s to much risk involved for both parties.
Jason Michael
My ex was like that too! I can't say I understood what was behind it though... we only dated for one night.
This is some of the best acting I've seen in a short film
My thoughts exactly! I was wondering why I hadn't seen either of these anywhere else. And if this was their first on-screen appearance, how fantastic they both were...
True!!!
Yes it's brilliant.
Is your name Oscar?
Watch two strangers at wedding reception....
Excellent work... That little game between her and friend, that happens in real life too. The writer is amazing as well as the cast and crew.
The piano soundtrack is perfect, it goes from light background music that you don't really notice, into a dramatic foreboding style effortlessly that signals the dark turn of events - bravo
how is no one around this hearing this or reacting to this conversation.
noname namename lol watafak
Neblechim it's called minding your own business
noname namename 😂😂😂
....because is a movie..
Selective attention. Unless you're not talking much with your partner, you're more likely focused on the conversation in front you.
That's the closest thing I've got to any sort of explanation for that lol
lawful good. A person who at every moment given a chance to do evil without consequence still feels the weight of wrongdoing
... But it's not wrongdoing. Nor is it evil. This type of roleplay is called consensual non-consent and the terms are clearly negotiated beforehand.
@@chrischris9123 Doesn't necessarily apply to everyone though. Clearly after giving it some thought, it was evil from his perspective. Part of what makes alignment systems tricky, and the human conscience so interesting.
@@Tybuscus No, he did not "clearly" think it was evil. You're putting words in his mouth. He simply didn't agree to do it, and that's the whole point of negotiating and consent. How does consent not apply to everyone?
@@chrischris9123 he doesn't simply stuff the paper in his pocket or throw it away; the man straight up burns the paper so no one can use it. Maybe not 'clearly,' but you don't need a thought bubble with "this is evil" above his head to understand he is both uncomfortable and thinks its wrong
@@Tybuscus i dont think he thought it was evil. He thought it was 1) a double standard that women can have that kind of fantasy but a man cannot because it would be seen as creepy. (even she admitted to this) and 2) that it could potentially be a very sticky situation if she were to accuse him. Men get put behind bars for much less evidence, hes not about to risk it.
As soon as she took out the "contract" I would be out! Peace!
Thank God he had enough sense to turn down that psycho.
Is there somebody who read hundreds of comments just like me
know more ☺️yes I did
with my mouth open in shock all the time
Comments always far more interesting than content (internet rule, not to trash on this content on any content
Yup
no, you're all alone in the world. what a special snowflake.
"Consensual non-consent" is a real thing.
Not *my* thing, but it is definitely a thing.
still go to jail for it.
not according to the law , the man will go to jail
@@descorchedfurnst2790 - again, it completely depends on the laws in that jurisdiction. In some places, that contract would be enough proof to protect him, as it shows that it was a two-party consensual act, especially if she does not press charges.
@@Starhawke_Gaming There's a good chance they'll just throw out the contract and any supposed consent , the woman can easily claim that she repeated the safe word "Eclaire" and he didn't stop, more than likely they would take the woman's side. Not worth the risk at all
@@descorchedfurnst2790 just have to record the act to avoid the risk i thnk
I love the way the audience individual is left with their own thoughts ............... a good exercise in introspection
Brilliant acting, exceptional writing , one of the best conclusions to a story ive ever seen
That is how lawyers are. Wow! He used every appropriate phrase out there, making the correction. Cheers to that!
Actually, that might have been the hottest part to me.
@@taraslavin5218 I get it.
This is very well acted
Joe Gower
**sips tea**
Yes indeed
Joe Gower
Plot twist: They weren't acting....
British actors are so real
james darby, though as to her fantasy, he was likely not stronger than her.
He was not morg, nor was he imorg.
james darby - the lady’s Australian accent came out towards the end, so.... ?
I took a snap testimonial for my eyes only when someone requested something similar but even more bizarre.
The short was amazing. Well written and perfect actors!
"You are allowed to want whatever you want". So true!
This is so good. 1) the politeness of the conversation, then going to darkness and back to politeness 2) The complex nature of men an women and how a woman saying yes is so much stronger than a mans will to want it 3) the cultural and political stance of this is on point with everything going on in the world and 4) the facial expressions of the guy signing to agree and then realising the ramifications of what he has signed but still wondering if he should, because she agreed. Thumbs up!
They're talking so loud in the restaurant gave me anxiety
She wrote the adress of her best friend, its like a form of revenge for what she did to her when they were childs
The difference between thinking, feeling and action.
The ending should have been: Thanks, this was fun. Best anniversary date we've had in years .... now dessert!
Or an ending that reveals the entire scene watched was a flash back in the man's mind ... while laying near death in a hospital ICU due to having been shot by the woman when he showed up, due to her having forgotten about her proposal
Ya that would hVe been fun
I mean yeah. I'll say this whole conversation would have been more appropriate in a longterm relationship
I was waiting for his to sign and they would have the same last name
If this happened to me, I'd probably assume I'm on an episode of What Would You Do or some other social experiment.
archit jain Chris Hansen
@@auroratipaldi-yocum7137 Why don't you have a seat over there.
@@auroratipaldi-yocum7137 Chris only gets involved with minors, so just tell him to pissoff mind his own business and go pay his taxes.
This asks more questions than it answers.
That guy is brutally honest. Honest to himSelf 🙂
Found this channel yesterday. Filmmaking has not impacted me like this in years. The ending actually made my jaw drop. In less than 13 minutes you guys were able to create more intrigue and emotion than a full-length film can in 90. Bravo.
The change in camera angles when he inverts the situation and describes it semi-sarcastically were so good
. Imagine a man carrying around a similar contract .
because women are equal.