Story writing for PP&DT and TAT for SSB in English
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Age- 22-25 years
Characters- One female and a male dead body
Mood- Negative
Sheela is a student and daughter of a brave defence personnel. One day, she got to know that her father got martyred while serving the country. She was depressed but at the same moment, she gathered her all courage to live her life like her father, a brave soldier. She worked hard to prepare herself for defence. With a determined effort, she succeeded in the written exam and also in SSB. And then, she joined the Indian Armed force to serve the country and make her father dream come true and also lived a life like her father.
yes..nice and workable..show determination in Sheela
it may be just someone who is ill...so you can link it with some social issue like drinking or smoking and someone getting heart attack. The main character then comes in takes him to hospital and saves his life..later he embarks on a campaign to eradicate this evil from his village and succeeds after convincing men that its not good for their family and health...
talking about this same sample picture in ppdt , so, sir my doubt is to whom we make our main character that girl who is sitting next to that dead body or some other character who is not in the picture as our hero of the story.
Try to make character out of those shown in picture...but if you are not comfortable, you can introduce new character also from outside..
Never make mood negative always posidtive
@@shreemaruti2737 🤔 is it possible to say positive in this picture , don't be impractical nd dramatic
Dear All, please write a small story on the thumbnail of the video..that is the picture which you see in front, write a small story..i will then assess it tell you your mistakes...
Among all the videos on utube,I found ur most valuable,thanku sir
million thanks dear...
Sudhir was a brilliant nd energetic student of school. He lived in shimla. One day when he was came back to his school suddenly heavy rain started nd he rushed towards his house meanwhile he met with a man he was a flood official nd he told the sudhir there is likely to be a flood bcs of heavy rain which coming there nd there was some who leaving side of hill nd they were effective. On hearing this he changed his path nd immediatly rushed towards those houses nd told everybody about the flood nd help them to remove valuables, livelihood nd realise livestock by this way he save the lives of many people nd later he was awarded by village sarpanch.
N.of characters: 2, 1 male and 1 female. In the age group of 30 to 35. Male in neutral mood and female character is in negative mood.
Story: ghansi is a rural household of rajam district in Andhra Pradesh. While she is working hard to earn lively hood her husband addicted to drugs. Despite her efforts to abstain him from drugs, he consumed drugs and fell unconscious. Later she realised the drug menace in Andhra Pradesh
and joined hands with local NGOs and actively participated campaign against the illegal drug sale. Thereby she not only save her husband but also many from drug menace.
Thank you.
ok, try to show more qualities in your main character
Oh it's definitely a positive character story and you write that it's negative
Savita was a young married girl living with his husband in Varanasi. One day when his husband came from work, she saw he was suffering from severe fever. She became despaired but somehow pacified her. She immediately took him on bed, removed the upper garments. She measured fever with thermometer then brought him bread and tea. After giving this she gave him medicine and then told him to take rest. Then she brought cotton cloth dipped in cold water and put on his forehead. She assisted him whole night and prayed God to make him well. After continuous assistance, he became quite normal and she was very happy to see him.
Thank You
your story is ok..but relate to pic..he is not on the bed
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda Fine Sir.If I remove that sentence, that would be fine?
ok
Sneha is a girl studying bsc and is in final sem.He had a brother on whom whole the family was financially dependent.His brother works on a small firm and earns to provide food to his family.once snehas brother met with an accident and died.After that looking at the condition of her family sneha decided to work hard and provide a better life to her family.She passed her bsc with good percentage and applied for ias examination and worked hard and also did part time job to get some money to provide her family atleast two times a day. She qualified all stages of ias exam and become an ias.
yes, its acceptable..you can add some social things also like, if he died of road accident, she can take up awareness of road safety..
Sir plz give feedback
Sheel was a doctor in. City hospital where she found many patient isn't suffered from dangue . Even in every house each person suffered from it . She was very well aware of the sewage system of city . She wrote a letter to municipality council to proper system of sewage . In addition to this she urge for more medical staff as the cases rises .many person of low immunity lost their life She started importing medication from nearby city. . After much effort she was successful to eradicate dangue from city 😊
you have added another character..make sure that you explain what is shown in pic fully
Here we have 2 character
Plot - poor family and high rated medical expenses
1- the mother who is in her vein of sadness that her young boy ( 2nd character )died due to severe disease coz they were not in a condition to afford high medical expenses
Nw hw her life vl run , he was the only son of her mother coz her husband had died before but yet she hv to spin the wheel of her life
She knws that she yet have a daughter and nw her daughter is her 'andhe ki lathi '
She is a courageous and responsible woman she vl work hard to make her life easy and to fulfill her responsibility regarding her daughter
Life has to go anyhow
Sir plzz review my story
you dont need to write plot..
dont become philosophical,,,be practical
choose one main character...build story on him/her, show OLQs..
Age 22-25 -characters (2) one female and male - Mood (neutral ) Nandu and Arun were a married couple. They both worked at the same place, while returning home they met with an accident due to a sudden crash on getting into a pot hole. Nandu somehow survived but unfortunately Arun couldn’t survive the disaster. After all this Nandu picked herself up and decided to report the police about the pot holes in the road. The police looked into the case filed up a accident case and also sent a request for road construction. After some days roads were build in a clean shape and Nandu was happy that no more people would die because of the pot holes.
Please correct me
That's the thing i was searching for....
thanks dear,,,,hope it helps
Age 17
Priya and his husband are daily wage workers they went to UP from bihar bt train. When the reach there it was around 1 o'clock in the night so the decided to stay in station waiting room. Priya's husband was so tired that he slept there spreading the cloths the were carrying.
After some time Priya also fell asleep sitting in the corner as there was not enough space for her to lay down and sleep.
Please rate our story
Character -02
Gender - 01 male , 01 - female
Age - 20 -25
Mood -positive
Roshani is a working woman lives in mumbai with his husband . His husband is also work in a courier company . One day he went to deliver a courier and he was crashed by a car when he was passing the crossing . And he was injured . People taken him to hospital and make call his wife from his mobile and informed him about the accident. She comes to hospital but doctor said he is no more . She is depressed and pledged that she will campaign against violation of traffic rules. And the next three month accident is reduced to 20 % . Her efforts is praised everywhere . And the district admission praised her ang gave her reward..
Moral of the story is we must obey traffic rules.
Thanks in advance
idea is fine, but relate more to the picture given...just see the picture again..your story must revolve around the stimulus given..not too far outside..
Age 35-40 years
Consist of one female(_ve mood) and one male characters (neutral).
Rama is a house wife and she is well in managing things. She is an educated woman and she also manages her family savings and expenditure. One day her husband fall ill badly and started vomiting. She noticed that vomits include blood also. She immediately lie him down and cover him with blanket. She called the ambulance.She then make a lime juice for her husband assuming it may be the symptoms of food poisoning and cater her husband. She is so frightened of her husband's health. After doctors consideration the patient was found ill with food poisoning. Doctor prescribed some medicines to her and told her not to worry as he would be well soon. Rama's immediate step taken saves her husband's life. She used her knowledge and respond to the situation positively.
1.just read the picture correctly...it seems to be a poor family in hutment..
Thank you sir, next time i would consider everything correctly
Sunita was a B. Sc student from xyz college she lives in a joint family and she was elder her father do hard work for lively hood one day his father was died in road accident she was very upset and then all his courage togather and took responsibility of her family on her shoulder started part time job side by side preparing for govt exam after one year she got job in govt sector and again her family lives happily together
fine, workable..you can add another character also
Characters-one (m),one (f)
Age group-25 to 30
Mood-positive
where is full story??
May be in his copy
Ka bhaiya adha likh k chhod deve ka
It's ranveer civil
Thank you sir 😊😊😊 it's really helpful to us
all the best dear...
great to know..all the best dear
What a nice explanation sir. Thank you sir.
Rashi (40-45) female is a home maker she lost her husband when she her son was just 2 yrs old and all the responsibility of the family was left on the her shoulder she started to work in a factory and earned some money and made her to study. Her son being a brave understood his mother's problem and supported in all the work and as he grew up he took all the responsibility and now has now bought his family in stable condition. Rashi is proud of her son who had studied good and got a good job even without proper facilities to him.
its acceptable...
Very nice Sir ji...thx please provide more videos in same respect.. humble request 🙏
thanks dear..will do
6:20 sir, there is the sun, then how we assessed there was raining
Sir, should we show one quality in the story of ppdt or we should struck on one quality
1-2 qualities are fine..dont make too many
Raman is a 19 yr old class 12th student who lives in Gandhinagar with his mother seema. He belongs to a poor family. His mother works in a nearby textile industry. While due to Covid-19, factory got shut down, and his mother who is only financer got unemployment and due to which she usually remains sad...raman when he came to know about this...he immediately offers his savings to his mother and from the next day started giving tutions to children for earning. In This way...both tackles the present situation and after opening lockdown...things got normal n his mother started going to factory to continue her job.
but this guys is lying on floor?? why??
Sneha was a student of BA . She was very intelligent in academics and took participate in all others activities . On a auspicious function she decided to perform a act on social issue with her friends . She prepared and act on addiction of alcohol and drugs. In the act by a story of a women and her husband they despersed the bad affecy of drinking and in last he died due to consuption of alochol. They
Awared all the viewers .
idea is fine..but we recommend not to run away from negative stimulus..handle it as it is
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda sir please recomend your own story of every picture so that we can learn the way to handled negativity.
Two characters, 1male and 1 female, age :25-30 yrs respectively,mood +ve...
Aasha was working as a maid, was very much hardworking and self dependent lady,. Her husband Shyam, was alcoholic. Even after stopping him many tyms he didn't stop drinking. One day when she returned from her wok she found that her husband is lying on the floor unconsciously. He got a fatal heart attack. Aasha was very sad she do all his medicine and spent all the money she have. Her husband realize his mistakes and he promises Aasha that he quit drinking. And then . With the help of Ngo he start quiting drinking and also start working their. And awaring people in the small villages and help them in quiting the alcohol. And live their life happily..
PLZ give your remarks sir and friends..
show qualities of your hero..thats important..dont mix up..rest is fine
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda k sir
Sneha b.sc 3rd year student assigned a task to represent with her group in dram competition as she had lost her uncle two years back in road accident so she chosen road safety as her theme she practised a lot with her group in which her friend performed as dead man after their performance the audience started clapping and took a pledge for road safety. Sneha's group won the first prize.
ok, acceptable..make it more in story format
A girl born in poor family enters her room and sees his father lying on ground. She has came from her job and is very tiered but she wants to tell his father that her courage finally payed back and she got promotion but as she waits she sleeps while sitting a little while after her father wakesup and she tell him about her success. Which makes him very happy.
no dear...this is not correct way..give a background, then current happening and show the OLQs...what courage?? just by writing the word, doesn't mean anything..
Abhinandan panday, 22 yrs old pursuing his msc degree in maharaja sayajirao university of baroda. One day passing through a village halol he got to know that sudden earthquake came and in village one family got stuck in house he took help of his friends he called them all and also took help of villagers to take them out. He manage to take out two childrens and wife but unfortunately husband died because big piece of wall fall on his head. Abhinandan took family members to hospital and abhinandan and his friends helped the family financially and emotionally.
no, major part of your story is out of pic..focus more on whats shown in picture..idea is fine but relate it to stimulus
Hello friends picture shown to us I have percieved 2 characters 1 Male 1 female mood is positive age between 24-26years action of my story is working for the family my story goes like this- Neha who completed her graduation in b.com and thereafter got married and lived with husband and 2 daughters. His husband dead in a car accident while coming home from his office She was in deep grief but she decided to do job to ensure good education and living standard to her children but owing not having any professional skills she couldn't get any good job. Then she perused her MBA and simultaneously gave tuition classes to meet both the ends. She completed MBA and got a job in vipro IT co. as HRM .soon she established a good image among staff by her hardwork and dedication and along took care of her children and helped them in their study.
ok, try to do something for accident victims too
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda sure sir I will keep in mind your valuable suggestion thanks for that sir
all the best dear
seema was a maid and a single mother who worked in flats in an apartment for 8 hours everyday to earn money and in the remaining time she took care of her children and cooked for them.one day when she went to work in a flat where a man lived alone whose name was ram, she found that the ram was lying on the floor in a state of unconsciousness and he also had fever but she brought him to his senses without creating panic in spite of that ram was not able to take care of himself because he still had a fever so seema decided to stay with him but ram insisted her to go to the housework of others otherwise people would cut her wages but seema denied and stayed with him without thinking of her wages after few hours ram's fever subsided and he thanked her after that seema went to her home and feeds the children.
Sir whether it is needed to story around picture or we can extend it . Suppose there's scene of flood so hero assist ndrf in rescue operations and after he proceeded District authority to constitute a barrage or dam as with villager he already work started . seeing his ambition government done project completed in soon..
yes, thats fine, but major portion of your story should revolve around the picture
Character -01
Gender -male
Age -16
Mood - positive
Narendra who is a student of class 12th of district high school , begusarai . He is very intelligent student .In morning his principal announced that next Monday the nationl science congress is held at our district . He come from school and sitting On the chair and think to participate in science congress and about project . He made a project on electricity generation from plastic and other garbage . And the day is come . The jury member saw his project and selected for gold medal and praised him . And announced that national science congress gave him scholarship for his research .
Moral of story is innovative ideas is good for our society .
its fine..
Thanks sir my PSB ON 24 TH JAN 2019 . FIR INDIAN COASTGUARD . PLS GIME SOME TIPS
make sure that you read the stimulus well...focus on whats given in picture...keep your story focussed on it...remain practical and show qualities in your main character
In how many minimum words tat story can be written sir and in this portion same type ppdt mood age gender not required in beginning ?
yes, in TAT only story is required...its not words but time and meaning..you have just limited time so need to complete it..normally 4.5 minutes to a story is fine...no word limit
Thanks sir.. Keep up the good work 👍😇
million thanks dear Aakash..
Characters-2, male and female,
age group - 30 to 35 yrs
mood- negative
Ramesh and Neha were husband and wife. Ramesh was alcoholic for last 4 yrs. Neha tried her utmost effort to make Ramesh understand the consequences of drinking. She told him that alcohol damages not only his health but also the happiness and respect in the society..Ramesh didn't listen to Neha and his liver got damaged
Neha was a hardworking women she took the responsibility of her house and started working she also got Ramesh treated and he become well. He realised that his wife was right and he stop drinking.neha was very happy .
ok..better...just start story with Neha only
Raahgeer India Student's Adda thank you sir
sir I have problem in narrating the story I am not able to narrate the full story and my ssb is on 18th may
Please give me some tips
practice writing more stories...read stories of others..go to your friends and take their help..read some short story books..these will help you
Raahgeer India Student's Adda thank you sir
Sir i have a negative quality that i write every story on one quality how can i remove it please tell me
you need to understand all 15 OLQs and how to express them..and practice writing 5-6 stories in one go..you will get it then
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda sir you are a great. What is your name sir
thanks dear abhi..leave the name..i just want to help this way
Sir ,Is those 12 stories where made with that one picture?
no, all 12 are different stories on 12 different pics
Sir y always boy or men. Now girls are also wearing dress like this and hair chopped. So why can't we imagine it as girls or women?
Please respond
Very good teacher
Many many thanks
Beautiful explanation
thanks dear...all the best
Good morning sir,
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I don't understand what I do. Can u motivate me sir please 🙏
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Female
Age 23-25
Positive
Sonam is a young women of 23 her husband died of liver cancer due to his habbit of alcohol consumption, she was broken but was determined that what happened to her should not happen with anyone else, she built a sang of women who will help their husbands to quit alcohol and also motivate other women.
Is the mood correct as positive coz she is determined?
no..mood is negative as shown here...
idea of story is fine but build it like story
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda "like a story". Please elaborate on that.
Ive written this story as:
1.Introducing character.
2.What led to ploblem shown in picture.
3.What will happen in the future.
Idea is right..but here the man and lady are inside the house...you need to think of some other story. can't neglect the picture fully..please try again
talking about this same sample picture in ppdt , so, sir my doubt is to whom we make our main character that girl who is sitting next to that dead body or some other character who is not in the picture as our hero of the story.
Hi I have attended SSC tech 50. But I screened out.,but i did very well in Intelligence test, I did a good narration GD as well. But I'm not screened in. What will be my mistake...?? Out 100 IT questions I have answered 70 questions correctly
it has to be with your story..either that was out of stimulus or not giving the desired OLQ..it will be better if you can discuss the details with me.. i will then be able to point out your mistake
ok sir. In GD they grouped us into 20 peoples, half people said there are 3 characters and half people said 4 characters in their respective narration. after that in GD i raised a point that "first we have to figure out how many characters and then we can give a final conclusion to the story with out number of characters how can we give a conclusion" and i sticked to this point in whole GD. In Story i have perecived 3 characters and i cant able to complete the story. i nareted till the officer said next but cant able to narrate whole story.
thats wrong....you must never get stuck up with any point...also, you need to complete your story in the given time...
also, i could make out that your story was not up to the mark, thats why he didn't listen to it..
So work on these things..you can post me some stories so that i can check..
As picture shown to us i have seen two character one is male and another is female and there age was aprrox 45 and 50 respectivily.
One day ravi is studying in his room then a he heard a crying sound coming from its near by house he go there and seen that there is a dead body is in the floor and one women is continuously crying. Ravi asked about the reason. Women told that his husband was die due to cancer and she not having money for his cremation so ravi go to every house alone with this women and asking for donation for cremation after collecting the money cremation is done. As ravi is student and studing in college he go to a college principal for the job of the women and lastly ravi convenienced the principal forthejob for a women at last women thanking ravi for a help
ok, nicely done..you have introduced third character, which is permitted in one odd story
Sir is it necessary to show a problem in a story
no...but show some challenge..and go as per pic...if its negative, then handle it that way but in end bring out positive outcome
Sarla is a 25 year graduate student . his brother works in a company and daily goes on his company by bike .One day unfortunately sarla's brother accident and he died in accident.Sarla seeing all the situation and take help of government and road department to fit there traffic light and on road and security cameras and duty of traffic police it all will secure not only people for become injured but also road security .Sarla was praised for her work
Dear sir plz reply my story plz sir
Sir kya hua plz reply karo
ok, this is fine...add more on how did sarla did all this
Good evening. The picture shown to us. I have observed 2 characters in which 1 is female of the age of 32 and 1 is male of the age of 36. Male is in neutral mood and female is in negative mood.
Sarla is the wife of SI Arjun singh rathor who was posted in Karnataka at Vijaynagar. It is time of midnight when he was sleeping then her wife waked up and started thinking. After joining duty of the police department it was 2nd transfer for the job. Her husband is an honest police officer and always does his duty with honesty. Few hectors apprised him to live his boss,who is a big don of the area, neither they will harmed to their family but he didn't. After knowing this matter his wife is anxious about her husband. And thinking about her upcoming child. But also she knows her husband is a brave police officer. On the next day Arjun singh comes after duty and tells to his wife that the are safe and all hectors are arrested.
Thank you....
you need to read the pic correctly...it seems to be a very poor house and they are on ground...do you think an SI will sleep on ground with wife sitting on floor??
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda I will improve my misteks. Thank you so much
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda Now I'm going to write a new story. So let me proceed and tell me falts who are being done by me.
The picture shown to us. I have appeared 2 characters in which 1 was female of the age of 28 and 1 was male of the age of 32.
ACTION OF THE STORY: SHETAL IS WORRIED ABOUT HER HUSBAND'S HEALTH AND ALSO FOR HARVESTING OF THE CEREALS.
Shetal is a house wife and she is living with her husband Ram in Azad-Nagar Bihar. One day her husband got ill by hard-work in the field. She called the Doctor Shiv to treat him. The Dr. Advised to take rest and given drugs. But Shetal was anxious about harvesting of the cereals because she is alone and her husband his ill. After that she arranged the workers to harvest. She done hard work with them and carried all crops from the field.
Thank you so much.
this is better..focus on showing OLQs of your main character
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda thank you sir
Nilam and her husband ajay both were daily construction labourers living in Laxmi chowl. One day her husband fall ill and she came to know from consulting dr that he had a Pathari which needs to operated soon, cost nearly 24K. She talked about this to her neighbour. Shanker, class 12 student listened all this and next day talked her principal and requested him to allow him to raise funds from school. Principal permitted and Shanker narrated all incident in assembly and requested to all student to bring money very next day. He was able to gather 28750rs which principal handed over the amount to Nilam. Thus with this money Nilam operated her husband and he recovered in 3 weeks.
who is the hero>?? what OLQ did he show?? start story with main character
Okk sir,
Shanker, a class 12 school boy, saw that his neighbour was very sad as her husband had a stone in his stomach and health going down day by day. Theu needed 24K for operations... And so on...??
start story with main character and build on him or her
sir what about pictures showing few men playing cards and a small boy standing near
make a story on it..i will assess that
Thanku sir🙏
all the bst dear
Sir waha sbse phle konsa sa test hota h??
screening test..
nice
all the best dear
Respected Sir,
kindly review my story as I am desperate need for someone to point out my mistakes.
Sunita was doing her PHD in history. She was married to Captain Vikram Singh and had a beautiful son.One day she was informed that her husband had martyred in unprovoked firing at the LOC. She was very upset but decided to pick herself up. She took up a job in govt. college as a contractual professor. She managed to balance her job,studies and took care of her son efficiently. After completing her PHD she was offered to work as senior professor in Central University. She then funded a NGO for uplifting war widows and provided them monetary support and employment. She was very supportive of his son's decision to join defense forces to follow his father's footsteps.
Thank you in advance.
too much of drama and not relevant to stimulus..your story should be simple and strictly as per the picture given to you..
firstly make story from your day to day life...dont bring in soldiers as you have not lived their life yet...
dont bring in a tragedy if not shown...you have shown martyring of capt, but its not shown here..so seems fake story..
then you have added NGO and all stuff...its not relevant..
you need to work more on it...attempt again and send me
Don't be racist,u r spoiling Sikhs name,as Sikhs r known for their broad-mindedness,first you stayed that ngo works for war widows🙄don't u know girls go to war too and there are war husband's too.Srcondly u said she had a son.Cant there be a daughter who will join defense as her father's footsteps 😠😒Shame on men of this country
@@riyasingh2729 seems like u r so fixated with a gender.
@@riyasingh2729 there's only a single woman who is martyred during training exercise not in war, girls were not allowed for combat roles, However Airforce and Navy took initiative towards it but in army girls are still not allowed.
@@anonymousperson5731 but war husband's exist so don't be sexist🙄😒even defence chiefs said they will allow in combat soon
what is the full form of TAT ?
observation..
Thematic Apperception Test
accurate and informative
thanks a ton
Sr I wrote a story..... How can I know. Am I right and wrong please suggest me... 28 of June is my ssb at bangalore
only an assessor can tell...you can send me some stories...let me check
G8 explanation .
all the best dear
Shweta is a 35 year old homemaker woman, her husband was a labourer in a sugar Mill but he falls Ill and it caused his sudden demise, she had a 5 year old son with her, she worked hard on the same factory and gave her child proper education to make him successful in his life, being single parent was a really tough task to do but she handled it bravely, and later her son became an officer.
How many stories can be written from one picture
only one
Very good vedio sir I am very impresse to see this vedio and I determine to pass the SSB for your given ideas
Great Dear Pankaj..hope to see you clearing it..see other videos for full guidance..
Very informative
all the best dear..
The boy being poor, or a girl drowning in the lake....isn't it creating trouble and problems which is not shown in the picture??
yes, you shouldnt show something which is not shown...but i didnt get your comment..it was for what??
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda sir in a picture...
3 men are sitting under a tree(panchayat) and villagers (men and women) are sitting on the ground listening to them....
Now who is hero(to which a 19yo can relate)
Please give some idea!
Please rate our story
Character - 02
Gender - male
Age -15 to 30
Mood - positive .
Ramesh who is a boy of class 10 th of Doon school dehradun . He wants to participate in khelo india school games in the compitition of racing . He discussed to his physical teacher about his mission . Than his physical teacher planned to practice from next morning . And than ramesh practise more and more under the guidance of his teacher and the day is come of national games . And ramesh grabs a gold medal in 400 m rely race . And break the world records . So now he and his teacher is happy .
So moral of the story is practise is the only think that gives your success .
Thanks in advance..
write little more on how your hero did everything...you need to show OLQs in him..
Thanks sir
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Age 25 - 30
Character 2
Gen 1m and 1 f
Mood negative
And neutral
Anjali was a supervisor in sbi bank. She was married with aman .he was a manager in pvt company. aman was smoker and drunker and one day aman was dead due to lungs cancer than after anjali was decided to start ngo and work to aware people by harm causes of smoking and drunking it affect on your life and your children life by this anjali saves so many life and she feels happy
Pls remark sir
ok..workable
but look at the condition of house..is it like a manager's house??
exuse me how many time for stroy writing
4 and half minutes
super
all the best...
Use some hindi Words.... To make it more clear
I will translate it fully into hindi and post by tomorrow... hope that will help
Can proverbs or idoms could be used in WAT?
Tide :- time and tide wait for none.
Also, can we use taglines?
Like
Thunder :-
"Taste the thunder" was a punch line of a famous beverage company.
No, u should not use proverbs idioms etc in wat
Sir please review my story
Anand is a 19 year old engineering student and a defence aspirant. One day after his class completed he went to a shop in the city with his friends for buying some materials for his project work. When anand and his friends waiting to cross road he saw a child holding a ball in her hand with mother staying on the other side of the road. The in child's hand had rolled away to the road and the child ran behind it. At the same time a lorry is coming. Anand took the initiative and ran toward the child and pushed the child to the road side. But the lorry hitted anand and he severely injured. Friends took him to the hospital but he passed away. His mother cried on seeing her son dead body at the same time she was very proud on her son's courage.
Sir I have written the above story as a first story that came to my mind when I saw the picture. Because in ssb also we only get a few seconds to make a thread in our mind. So please analyse my story and please tell the positives and negatives in the story i have written.
normally..you dont make dead people as main characters..make story on lady or add another character..most part of your story is outside stimulus
@@RaahgeerIndiaStudentsAdda OK sir I will right an another story. Sir as I mentioned above I wrote this story as a first spark came to my mind
Aswadhi is an 19 year old BBA student. Her brother is a driver. Her brother's income was the only source for repaying loans and debts of that family. One day her brother passed away in an accident. The family got struck in his death. Tears came from aswadhi's eyes. A big question mark have came in front of her family. At that time aswadhi stood strong she decided to take her family's responsibilities on her shoulders. She started a low budget egg shell powder business which was very innovative with the help of her friends. She convinced the bank and money lender's about her family's current situation. After a few months she got a huge order from foreign for her products. She delivered it correctly. She got a big amount as profit. She payed the money to the bank and money lenders. She took her studies and business parallelly. She found an another source of income for her family and later she became a golden example of women empowerment.
Sir this is paratrooper India please review my above story and tell me if there is any mistakes.
Kindly review and suggest me how I can improve
Sujata was a home maker in a arampur village of Bhadrak district, odhisa. She lived along with his husband Sumit. One morning she was so tensed and disturbed she was weeping beside his husband. Sumit got up by listening to the sound and asked her. She told him that we were not making enough money from farming, by this we would not be able to give basic education to our child. Sumit understood it and told his wife not to worry about this. He thought over this and discussed it with the his friends they suggested him to start hasta shilp Kala and sell these stuff into the market the demand were high. They both started this and sold these things into the market now they got enough money they both were happy 😊
who is main hero?? you need to select one main character, build story on him and show his OLQs
Very nicely explained.
thanks dear
thanks a lot sir....
Welcome dear..please be free to clarify doubts, if any..
Anita was graduate student of amu Aligarh one day she was going to walk she found one men laid on road and he was unconscious . she immediate give fast aid like water on face stop passing the vehicle admitted to near by hopital and gave pris medicine from med store and inform his family member .
Sir plz check this one also.
relate to picture
Sir I have written this for that boy's picture who is sitting alone in sad mood
this is not a boy...its a lady in sombre mood..
No. Of character - 2
1 M & (1 F)
Mood -ve
Age- 35-40
Radha was an educated girl from Doda village, married to Sumit. She was living as a house wife. One day due to flue Sumit got very sick and was unable to recover. So Radha took the whole responsibility of her house and husband's care. She started teaching in a convent school to help financially and manages her house and job simultaneously. Due to her hardwork and care her husband soon got fine. And they lived a happy life together.
yes workable...but you need to read the stimulus correctly...person may be dead in some pic..its fine here
Sir pls review my story once
done
bhai first picture mein kisiko pakistan ka flag nahin dikh raha kya
Kaha h mje to ni dikh rha
Moon h usme...may b night seen ho
Samir is a young man who recently joined an MNC but is not able to make good impression in front of his boss as he didn't have innovative ideas. This bothers him a lot. One of his friends suggests him to watch videos of Dr. Vivek Bindra who is a business coach and motivational speaker.
He follows his friends advice and got a lot to learn.
Finally he got developed as an awesome business coach.
on what have to written the story?? It has to be based on the picture shown..you cant go too much outside it..this has been given to you for a purpose...
Sir my story is about the picture at 9:20.
you must read the stimulus correctly..
its not coming out as per picture..