IELTS Writing Task 1: Line graph (6) | Cambridge 19 - Sample Answer

Welcome to my IELTS Writing Task 1 series! In this video, I analyze a line graph from the latest IELTS past papers (IELTS Academic 19, Cambridge). Learn how to structure your response and use appropriate vocabulary with a model answer.
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0:00 introduction
0:27 understand the statement
1:23 understand the data and plan
5:00 paraphrase
5:36 overview
6:20 sample
8:01 vocabulary (lexis)
9:57 organization

[@ieltstimeZ]

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[@ngochanbui7099]

Your videos are so helpful. Thank you for your effort!!!

[@ieltstimeZ]

Glad you find them useful.

[@travellife3020]

Thanks sir

[@alexzhang5252]

Thanks for selflessly taking the time to write up this Band-9-level essay. BTW, have you ever taken the IELTS exam?

[@ieltstimeZ]

Thanks for your kind words! I've practiced with countless mock tests and will soon be taking the real ones. I'll definitely share my results with you afterward!

[@thangvuinh6872]

6:53 I think Musical performances were introduced in 2010, because there were no participants in 2005

[@ieltstimeZ]

I understand your point, but the trend started from that year, indicating no participants initially and increasing over time.

[@rohini12393]

"I find writing tasks quite difficult. I aim to get a 6 band score in my real test. On UA-cam, I mostly find videos about 9 band writing structures, which are too advanced for me. Can you please upload some videos aimed at 6 band score learners? I'm not very good at IELTS or English, if you will upload upload videos focusing to the basic learnes then this would really helpful for me also other basic students😊

[@ieltstimeZ]

I know what you mean. The most important thing for you is to understand the test format and structure. It's crucial to know how to write a discussion or opinion essay, including the dos and don'ts, and how to answer the question effectively.
Remember, vocabulary is only 25% of the total score. One tip is to copy and paste some of the sample essays into ChatGPT and ask it to simplify the language for you. This can help make the content more accessible and easier to understand.
I'll also work on creating videos focused on learners aiming for a 6-band score. Thank you for your feedback!

[@user-de3gb7ft2b]

Introduction is copied from chat gpt😷

[@ieltstimeZ]

Thanks for the feedback! You can read the rest on GPT; why bother? I'll keep creating content that actually helps people. 😷