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I believe they're essentially the same-they all ask for your opinion. To aim for a higher band score, it's important to cover both sides of the argument. Using phrases like 'on one hand' and 'on the other hand' helps to clearly present both perspectives in your writing. In this video, I focused on just one side for simplicity.

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Well done! You answered the question and provided relevant support. Although I’m not a certified examiner, I would rate this as a 6+. Suggestions for Improvement: Improve Cohesion in the Introduction: Instead of saying, “In the following paragraphs, I will try to discuss the causes and supporting arguments before reaching a logical conclusion,” you can directly answer the question to make your essay more cohesive. For example, you could say, “In my point of view, this is a positive trend because…” Focus on Key Points: Your first body paragraph contains many ideas, all of which are relevant but too condensed. Focus on two main points and develop them in more detail for better clarity and impact. Expand on the Negative Aspect: The second part of your argument discussing the negatives of home ownership is a bit brief. To maintain balance, develop this section further by elaborating on the potential downsides. Summarize Both Sides in the Conclusion: In your conclusion, briefly summarize both the positive and negative aspects to provide a balanced wrap-up of your essay. Great job overall! Keep it up!

I’m not a certified examiner, but I would rate your writing around a 6+, as you have successfully described the main features, provided details with appropriate vocabulary and grammar, and made relevant comparisons. To achieve a higher score, you could work on refining your sentence structure, using more precise vocabulary, and improving coherence with better linking words. Here are some specific suggestions: Clarify Phrasing: Instead of saying, "the first category includes the personnel who went to a café," you could say, "the first category is residents who visited cafés." Correct Terms: Replace 'personnel' with 'residents'. Enhance Data Presentation: Use phrases like 'in comparison' or 'respectively' to link data points more cohesively and clearly. Refine Comparisons: For example, clarify the rankings by stating, "Instant coffee was the leading choice in Adelaide, with 50% of residents, unlike in the other cities where visiting cafés was more popular." Keep up the good work!

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This essay covers both sides of the argument, which could place it at a higher band score. However, the final score depends on factors like task achievement, structure, vocabulary, and grammar. If you’re aiming for a lower score, you might want to use simpler sentences.

This essay covers both sides of the argument, which could place it at a higher band score. However, the final score depends on factors like task achievement, structure, vocabulary, and grammar. If you’re aiming for a lower score, you might want to use simpler sentences.

This essay is well-organized and covers both sides of the argument, which is good for a higher score like 7.5. However, the final score depends on how well it meets all the criteria, like being clear, and using good vocabulary and grammar. It looks like it could be a 7.5, but a more detailed review would be needed to be sure.

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Yes, I did answer the question in the video! It’s about a time I had to rush to get a birthday gift for my friend. If you have any more questions or need more info, just let me know!

Yes, it’s correct to compare the two charts in your essay. For example, as the ownership of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners increased dramatically from 1920 to 2019, the number of hours spent on housework declined sharply over the same period.

I can see why it might look like an advantage/disadvantage essay, since both types explore different views. But in a discussion essay, the main goal is to discuss two sides of an argument and often find a balanced conclusion. On the other hand, an advantage/disadvantage essay usually just looks at the pros and cons of one topic. Hope this helps clear things up!

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Thanks for your comment! You’re right that 'exactly 4,000' is better than 'about 4,000.' Even though small wording changes don’t usually affect the overall evaluation much, I appreciate your feedback!

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Well done! It is a good essay. -Overview: You need to be more specific and mention some of the highlights of the chart without mentioning the numbers. Details: Your description of the changes is good, but try to be more precise. For example, clearly mention how shop openings decreased from 8,500 to 4,000 in 2012, then rose to 6,100 in 2014 before falling to 3,000 in 2018. For closures, detail the drop to below 1,000 in 2015 and the rise to 5,100 in 2016. Keep up the good work!

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@@JahedHassanKhan You're welcome! Please note that I’m not a certified examiner, so I can't give you an exact score. However, based on my understanding, your response would likely fall between Band 6.0 and 6.5. Strengths: Your organization is clear, and you’ve done a good job of describing the overall trends. You’ve also used a range of vocabulary and some complex sentences, which is great to see. Areas for Improvement: To reach a higher band, focus on improving the accuracy of your grammar and word choice. Additionally, try to be more concise and precise in your explanations and aim for more variety in your sentence structures. Keep up the good work-you're definitely on the right track!

Thank you for your question! You can talk about the 1920 layout in one paragraph and today’s map in another, but it's often better to compare the two maps together. This way, you can show the changes and differences more clearly, which is important for the IELTS exam. By comparing the maps, you can use more varied language and show a better understanding of the task. Both methods can work, but comparing usually gives a stronger answer.

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I wrote two disadvantages to better support my opinion. It's not a must, but it helps develop your thoughts. Just make sure to mention both the advantages and disadvantages and clearly state your opinion.

Mentioning the current map in the first paragraph and then describing the changes later is one way of writing this type of essay. Personally, I am not a fan of that approach. I prefer pointing out what there is first and then describing the changes, like "the factories east of the roundabout will give way to housing blocks..." or "the road south of the central roundabout will undergo..."

Sure, but not many watched this type of content. It seems most viewers prefer other topics. However, I'll still make more videos on complex sentences and grammar for those interested.

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Please clarify what you mean by 'task 13'.

Please clarify what you mean by 'task 13'.

Please clarify what you mean by 'task 13'.