best way to *compare* lines - ielts writing task 1 line graph
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When writing about an ielts writing task 1 line graph, not only do we need to describe the trends, but also we need make comparisons where necessary. In this video, I share exactly how you can compare two lines.
Here's the graph used in this video:
The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 overview paragraph
03:24 details paragraph 1
07:01 details paragraph 2
09:03 introductory paragraph
10:04 entire essay+key takeaways
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The line graph illustrates how many shops were opened and closed in one country between 2011 and 2018. Overall, closures and openings of shops experienced fluctuations in the 7-year period.
Looking more in detail, In 2011, 8500 of shops were opened and in the consecutive year, this rate saw a sharp decrease to below 4000 shops. Between 2012 and 2014, the gradual increase can be seen. In 2013, exactly 5000 new shops were opened and this went up to 6000 shops in 2014. Moreover, between 2014 and 2015, about 2000 shop were closed. There was no change between 2015 and 2017, in terms of number of shops with 4000 shops. Also, another 1000 shop were opened at the end of 2018.
Approximately 6500 new shops were closed and this rate swings between 6000 to 7300 shops until 2014. After 2014, number of shops that opened saw a huge decrease in 2015 and a big leap to roughly 5000 shops in 2016. Finally, after 2016, closing shops stayed stable with about 5000 shops until 2018.
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The comparison is crucial because it makes complex sentences
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Please share more videos regarding ielits academic task1
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You're welcome. 😊 You can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
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thank you. is it possible to detail closures and openings in separate paragraphs? is it important to compare?
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@@sekhonjatt324 The next video may be on listening. I don't recommend using templates in writing though.
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Would you kindly upload the samples written on books 1-5 later on?
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Please make more videos of complex line graphs.
Hi, you can read line graph essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/line-graph/
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Thanks for the suggestion. Will try after I finish the writing tasks in IELTS 17.
Could u check it please: The line graph highlights information about how many outlets was opened and closed over a seven-year period between 2011 and 2018.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is, that the number of closed and opened shops fluctuated over a period in question. The level of new shops was the highest at the beginning, and it was at least by the end of period.
There was popular to open shops in 2011 and it accounted for 8500, where this figure was more 2000 than the level of closures which made up 6500. In 2012, entrepreneurs launched twice less shops compared with the previous year, likewise openings outlets saw a decline by 500. The number of new outlets rose steadily by 2000 between 2012 and 2014, while the closures saw a fluctuation between 6000 and just under 7000.
The number of closed shops hit a bottom at 500 in 2015, hence the openings experienced a decrease and levelled off at 4000 until 2017. The level of closed outlets improved, by overtaking the rate of new shops at the level of just over 5000 in 2016. After that, the closures was almost unchanged by the end of period.
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Hi Lilie, is this overview correct?
Although there were large fluctiations, overall, the number of shops that opened and the number that closed both declined during this period.
Ma'am!!! please tell about how to improve grammar?? Because I am deeply concerned about it
helloo, thank you for this video its really useful, however i have a question on how we use the net opening. in other context if its not about shop closure , will the word turn into "net____" (the blank filled in with other context we are talking about) for ex : "net ice cream shop" does it work this way teacher? . my second question is , what if like when we want to compare the openings with closings but the opening number is smaller than closings number? is negative answer alright? ex: -2000 net openings.
Thank you in advance teacher.
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@Lielielelts please how do i use net when writing task 1or is there any words to replace it. also thanks for the teaching❤
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Dear Lilie, when we use “at” with figures when we do not need? I can not get it. Could you please give an explanation?🙏
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Hello, where can I find the video referring to increase and decrease trend,
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can you provide more insight about task2 ?? Im very new to writing essay. and lack of vocabulary in various topic. plz make us a video
The next video will be on discuss both views. Meanwhile, feel free to read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Thank you so much. Your video is very useful. However, Could you explain about "after a steep drop down to 4000 in 2012"? I can't understand why a word "down" follow behind a Noun (drop)?
I can't explain. It just can be used like that. Here is another example: a significant increase up to 87%
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Actually, ielts is my last hope to change my life, but i don’t know how to improve my score, going overseas for study was my dream but now it’s become goal.
I have visited your website for the writing tasks. Yet, may I ask whether there are samples written based on books 1-5?
Sorry, there aren't.
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Great writing skills, I benefited from watching but how can I improve my writing to this level?
You can read my essays: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Mam please make videos on reading
Will try! Thanks for the suggestion.😊
How we will know that we should compare them or just give individual details
teacher can you tell me in paragraph 1 why we tell about trends of closings first, can we tell trends of opening first ?
Yes, you can describe openings first.
Mam please make a separate video for tabular chart🙏
Will try. For now, you can read table essays here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/
Mam it doesn't access..
Me also not access to this site mam, they said you need to request to site owner for access
Hi can u plz do a video on tables
Will try in the future. For now, you can read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/
Am writing my IELTS on 13 October thank you for well explained videos. But I still find it hard to write task one on my own yet I find it easier when am watching videos. How can i improve my writing?
Hey, thanks for the kind remarks! ☺Could you be more specific about the challenges you face?
@@LilieIELTS i find it more interesting watching you explaining how to write an Introduction Overall, and the body but when I have I question to start writing on my own I seem not to know what write and where to start I dnt know if it's lack of courage or what
I feel you. Perhaps, you can try to write the overview first. I often find it difficult to paraphrase introductory text.. So I write the overview and details paragraphs first.
@@LilieIELTS thank you so much let me start using your technic
Can we use "figure for" instead "number of", tks u so much !
Yes, 'figure' works.
Hello, when describing a line graph, can I use the words like "accounted for" or "made up" ?
That really depends on the context.
After a step dropped down or after a steep drop down.
Which one is correct?
Pls explain.
Hi, it should be "steep", not "step". Please check their meanings in the dictionary.
i don't really understand the net openings part, could someone explain it to me pls?
Can you give speaking classes because in speaking I got 5.5 score in ilets
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Mam Is it ok if we write overview in the last of task 1 or is it necessary to write it just after the introduction.
Hi, yes, you can write in the last paragraph.
Thank you mam ❤
in overview can i write dates? or add numbers?
if not then why in Cambridge solution this was not discouraged?
Hi, we can add dates but not numbers.
@@LilieIELTS ok thanks a lot
Mam can you plz explain net opening mentioned in detail paragraph 2 8:22
net openings = total number of shops opened - total number of shops closed.
is it even real to write such report in just 20 minutes 🤯 I am not good at analyzing numbers or thinking logically at all. I am more of a philosophical and creative person. It is so difficult for me. I just panic when I see these charts and tables. But still your videos are helping me a lot. Thank you very much!
Yes, it's possible. Some people can finish task 1 in 15mins.
I am practicing with your tutorials, hopefully I will also learn to write fast🙂. Many thanks @@LilieIELTS
Should we put a number or date in the overview?
Don't include numbers but dates are fine.
Conclusion part isn’t included; or do we have to not write it in task1?
Hi, for task 1, we write an overview, not a conclusion.
How can you confirm that the same shops opened which were initialed in blue small circles in your video
Timestamp please.
3.0 to 3.09
How can you say the same shops in a particular area will be opened, something it might be another shop will be opened.
That’s my question
"Openings" doesn't mean the same shops open. It means that a NEW store, restaurant, etc. starts doing business. I hope I've cleared your confusion.😊
dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/opening
Tomorrow is my IELTS test
Watching the video just before exam day
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Your ideas deny whatevet other professional IELTS instructors say. I don't know, may be, the ones who are evaluating IELTS and give score, do not know as much as you.
Please, speaking quite slowly, it’s hard to understand 😑
I slowed down in newer videos.
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