do you make *irrelevant* comparisons in a line graph? - ielts writing task 1
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- Опубліковано 11 лип 2024
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IELTS Writing Task 1 asks us to make comparisons where relevant. But do you make irrelevant comparisons? Watch the video to find out!
Here's the line graph used in this video:
The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 overview paragraph
03:04 details paragraph 1
07:44 details paragraph 2
08:33 details paragraph 3
09:47 introductory paragraph
11:17 entire essay+key takeaways
Hi Lily, thank u for making all these wonderful videos. I watched many of them and got band 7 in writing. Those tips are really helpful!🎉
Wonderful news and congratulations!? Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?
@@LilieIELTS Look how careless I was😅I spelt your name wrong:)) The task 2 question is(am just paraphrasing cause I can’t remember the exactly same words) : Many people think nowadays students no longer need to finish school before 18. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this.
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Woooow, that's truly amazing. Congratulations!👏Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?
@@LilieIELTS Sure, I don't exactly remember the question but it's something along the lines of "Nowadays, since everything is accessible through the internet, there is no need for museums and art galleries anymore"
@@LilieIELTS by the way, thank you so much for acknowledging my accomplishment! (It's also my biggest one lol)
I'm sure I'll have bigger ones in the future.😊
@@LilieIELTSplease make a video explaining his/her Ielts writing task 2.
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Wow, thank you!😊
Thanks for your sharing, but I have a wonder. When you described about the figures of refrigerators, why did you omit the data from 2000. I think it should be included. I hope that you respond me soon.
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Thanks for your great video!
Glad you liked it!😊
Can I say that, the numbers of hours spent on housework Hovered between 1960 and 2019. but of course I cannot say that the number essentially unchanged at this period?
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Thanks for ur information!
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Thanks a lot for good explanation
my pleasure!😊
Hi Ms. Lilie,
I truly appreciate the time you invest in sharing a wealth of knowledge and providing valuable feedback. I would like to inquire about a learning strategy for the writing test. Typically, after watching your videos, I rewrite the essays two or three times and make small notes of new vocabulary. However, I often find that when I attempt to write again the next day, I struggle to remember the exact structure. Could you kindly provide some suggestions to help me overcome this issue?
Thankyou !
i wouldn't remember new knowledge the next day either. i practice a lot, i wrote all the essays on my website.
U said dip can you please tell me a another synonym?
What's the difference between IELTS 16 and IELTS 17?? are these versions different?
Thank you
Hey lilie, nice to see you again. In the graph below - household = washing clothes, preparing meals, cleaning, is it important or not?
No, that's not important. They're just explaining what "housework" means, in case you don't know the word.
Okay thanks!.. 😊👍
The chart below shows the changes in the ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent during housework in households in one country between 1920 and 1990. The chart illustrates the proportions of households with electrical devices and the number of weekly hours spent on household chores per household in a specific country from 1920 to 2019. 对吗
Hi,thanks for your lessons!
Can you check the essays i write.If you agree,how can i send them to you?by email or..?
Thanks for the vedio. 👍
thanks for watching!
Thank you very much. Your speed is now moderate.
Haha, thanks for letting me know.
Can I say that "with ownership reaching 40% of total house holds"
Such a great and helpful lesson again. But I do wonder why you use past simple not past perfect with "By 2019". Looking forward your detailed response ❤
You're welcome. Both can be used with "by 2019", but I wanted my tenses to be consistent. That's why I used the past simple throughout the entire essay. 😊
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Thanks 😊
What band score may I get if I follow your tips and write a line graph in this pattern ( also please say about the rest of the graphs and essays)? I am sorry if it sounds rude.
Lilie, please reply to my question, my exam is on the 21st of October and I am very stressed about writing module
Thanks for your video. I have learned at school that I must not omit the word "the percentage" throughtout the essay like you did and replace by "the proportion" or "the rate". After watching this video, I was confused. Please help me how to use these words flexibly or how we can omit it in a better way. Thank you once again ^^
Hi, I used ownership. It can mean the percentage of people owning something. Check out here: ludwig.guru/s/ownership+increased+%25
Hi Lilie, thanks for your videos, they're great help. In one of your video you mentioned that we should use past perfect tense with "by"(by 2019) but in this video you used with past simple tense. "This number then rose to about 75% by 2019". I am little bit confused. Could you please explain the difference? Thanks.
Both are correct but 'by' is better.
Thanks for your answer@@LilieIELTS But I think I couldn’t explain well.
In one video you used ‘by+date’ with ‘PAST PERFECT TENSE’ => “ The way families spent their income had changed significantly by 2018”
In same video you also mention that if we want to use “PAST SIMPLE TENSE” then we should change by to in. => “ The way families spent their income changed significantly IN 2018”
In this video ‘by+date’ used with ‘PAST SIMPLE TENSE’ => “This number then rose to about 75% by 2019”.
So the question is which TENSE should be used with “by + date”? Thanks in advance :)
@@deryabalkc9706 You can use "by" with either the past simple or the past perfect but the past perfect is better. That is to say, the two sentences below are both correct but the second one is better.
1. The way families spent their income CHANGED significantly BY 2018.
2. The way families spent their income HAD CHANGED significantly BY 2018.
why did you put plural on washing machines instead of washing machine of 3 .... I am confused
You need to use 'washing machines' or 'the wash machine' because 'machine' is countable.
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Thank you so much for these amazing videos, I got a 7.0 in writing only because of your videos.
That's great news. You did an amazing job. What was your task 2 question?
@@LilieIELTS some people think only certain wild animals should be protected, while others say all wild animals need protection.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
@@or05012 That's a hard one. Thanks for sharing.
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Glad I could help!😊
Hi lilie, id like to ask about the words usage “with that of” on the overview paragraph. Why do we use “that of”? Why dont we write “with refrigerators having the greatest growth”. Thank you
Hi, "that" refers to ownership. refrigerators didn't have the greatest growth. Ownership of refrigerators did.
@@LilieIELTS i see. Youve been very helpful! I watched all your videos. God bless u :)
Thank you for your support.😊
Hi, I have a question 'amount' is also uncountable noun, why should we use 'the' before it.
'Amount' is countable.
thanks
Nice
you explained everything so simply!
how can we manage our time in the writing part, between task 1 and task 2????????
Hi, I'm not sure what you mean by "between task 1 and task 2" but I spend 15 min on task 1.
@@LilieIELTS what I meant was how much time should we spend on each task, thanks for replying
Hi Lilie I'd like to ask about why "in a country" should be beside households for the introduction? Im not quite sure. Thank you btw:))
Hi, this is because, in the original text, "in one country" modifies "households".
@@LilieIELTS could you explain what you mean please🥺
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Hi! Has anyone taken the academic paper based? Do they give you an extra time to transfer your essay to the test paper? And if so, how many minutes would it be. Thanks.
Oh btw! Loving your vids. It gets easier to plan out the essay with your tips in the shortest possible time. I'm just hoping i will not get the three images type of prompt.
Hi, there is no such extra time. Everything needs to be done in an hour.
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Relating to the washing machine can I describe increase from 1920 to 1960 and then say that the number reached a plateau that lasted from 1960 to 2010 except for one small dip in 1980
You can but don't you think it's important to point out that washing machines were the most common appliances in 1920?
@@LilieIELTS first, thanks alot for your time. second, yes of course I want to point out that point and then describe the increase from 1960 to 2010
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what band did you get in your writings?
7
Ma'am in introduction you told not to write (in a country) after electrical appliances but in final paragraph of introduction it is again written there . Can you pls confirm whether it is correct or not
Hi Deepak, where did I use "in a country" after "electrical appliances"? Time stamp please.
Ma'am time=11:17, second line of introduction. But if I am writing something wrong then may be I am confused somewhere but pls correct me because your video are amazing and I am understanding very clearly each and every point 😍
@@DeepakSingh-dl6tm Sorry about the error. Here's the correct version: www.ieltsessaybank.com/changes-in-ownership-of-electrical-appliances/
Thnku ❤️
Vacuum cleaner is touching the line of 100% right ?can you pls clear me on that line.
Ownership of vacuum cleaners reached 100%. what's your concern?
Oh okay okay got it , if you haven’t reply me I won’t have re watch and clear my doubts by self. Thanks for the reply ❤you are awesome👑
only two paragraphs are preferred in ielts test so its not good
What many words does it contain ??
193.
www.ieltsessaybank.com/changes-in-ownership-of-electrical-appliances/
The video is just brilliant , but I think not THE average , but AN average family
Hi, both the average family and an average family are correct expressions but it's better to use the average family here because the average family is a statistical concept, something we read about when journalists and statisticians wish to talk about typical characteristics.
Shouldn’t we write conclusion?
No, in task 1 we write an overview instead.
in one video you emphasize that we should not use '' the proportion of..V, while that of...V'', instead we should use '' the proportion of...V, while the proportion of...V''( paralell) but in this video you use'' overall, ownership of...V, with that of...V''. Can you explain the difference...
'ownership' and 'proportion' are two different words
@@LilieIELTS thank you💕
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how did you knew that there is no causal relationship between the two graphs. I don't agree with you.
maym plz the question you have solved is very useful but please explain it in nepali not all nepali people will watch likes and increase it will be easy for us to read and understand
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It is impossible to hep all people in the world, so government should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Undoubtedly, it is a valuable thing for each and every people to assist the person in lives. However, some masses says that it is unfeasible to assist all masses in the planet, so administration must in their own nation. In my perspective, I am partially agree with both the given argument and explicate some points in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are the predominant reasons behind the statement. Firstly, every people know who is the leader of the society and they go to them for requesting to help us. To explain it, many governments provides a lots of facility in the world like, shopping malls, jobs , education, hospitality system. In other word's, myriad regimes do not know about the future of every people what they want in the lives. However, they provide some facility which is suited to the people and which is not, so some people go to the advocates to asking to do help of us and the wrote a complaint and contributes to their own society people. For example, in co-vid 19, many masses are sitting free at home, and government put lockdown on these days and the people who lives at home they do not have any work some poor families go to the advocate office to provide some food and education facility to us.
On the other hand, there are the some of the reason's that authority must ought to be help of other world people. To illustrate it, if administration help both the world, so they easily make a tight relationship among both the people parts of the society, nor they contribute half half money which is provided by the authority, so it is also a beneficial for them. In others world, if people are going to occur the problem of the diseases, so they provided same facility in one hospital and they can distribute the funds to the people.
To recapitulate, although authority should focus on the same on their world when they are happier with them, so they can make some descion with their people, and then they can go for some actions for helping to cover the problems.
It is arequest to check this task according to the idp please out 6 what band score i have or is this out of topic or on please give proper evaluations ...
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Ur too fast
I slowed down in my newer videos.😊
You English isn’t clear
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