(UPDATE about Part 2 is at the bottom of the message.) So, UA-cam finally unlocked the feature for me to pin comments (which wasn't available before, oddly enough, but okay). First of all, thank you for the feedback. Personally, I didn't expect such a reaction, that so many people would like the first part. Not to mention that the video would surpass 10k views. For me, that number was "beyond all expectations." Secondly, since I can't sit at the computer 24/7 (I still have a regular job), the continuation will be released around the 22-24th. I have already gathered the material for the video, and my brother needs to finish drawing the location for a small skirmish in the second part and continue modeling King's Landing for the third. I'll talk more about this in the next video. So, thank you for your patience, for watching, for your ratings and comments. We'll try to get the second part edited as quickly as possible. EDIT. So, a little update. I initially thought we'd be ready by August 22-24, but unfortunately, that won't be the case. The 3rd episode is fully complete, but the 4th isn't yet. The issue lies in the time it takes to render a scene made in Blender. No idea why it's taking so long (by the way, rendering the Battle of Winterfell also took a decent amount of time). You'd think that little squares running across the field wouldn't be too resource-intensive, but nope. For example, 2000 frames take ~14-18 hours to render, depending on whether the computer is doing anything else or not. The Battle of Winterfell was about 18k frames. And in the second part, there will be a small battle that is around 7,200 frames. We slightly miscalculated the release time of the video :) Anyway, sorry for the delay. The second part will be uploaded in a couple of days.
@@CineGameAV take your time, your work and life are of the utmost importance. All the fans of the books have been proven to be too patient 😂 Take 14 years if you need. I’ll still be here waiting happily. 🙏🏽
No rewrite in the last five years has had me on the edge of my seat. I love that Jon has more time training with Rhaegal, that the defenses of the castle made sense, the depiction of the past, the realization of what the Night King wanted, and the fact that you got right to the action immediately into the first episode! Thank you for taking the time and I will eagerly wait for your next upload. (I hope the two remaining dragons live)
Dude this was AMAZING! Props to you for grounding such a great project and giving us all the privilege of a better story at least so far! I am super excited for the following part. Also; I would love to have your permission to dub your video, I would love to be able to show this to many non- english speakers, and being able to hear it instead of just reading the subtitles would just sell it that much more. Best of luck, and thanks for all the hard work you put in this!
Bran and the nightking being two parts of the same being, that gave chills mate! Would have topped the Jon Snow heritage reveal, Hodor/Hold the door reveal and anything else like that I can think of. Fantastic rewrite, cant wait for more! 1st time viewer of your channel btw
I've watched countless rewrites of S8, but none like this! I loved how you leaned into the magic of it all and brought back the whole danger of Bran's powers in the first place! And the emotional beats of Bran killing his sister were crazy! Also, the art is stupendously beautiful, and I love how the voiceover is coupled with videos and images to give an audiobook feel. Amazingly done, I can't wait for the next part!
This was masterfully done in my opinion 😊 I saw an edit where Bran made himself King on the Iron Throne. Having him be the new Night King is brilliant!! 🤯😰🥶 I hope he continues the storyline and doesn't drop it
Random - but could you lost some of the other rewrites you’ve watched/read? Are they all on YT? What do you query? Running out of rewrites to watch, or waiting on updates from the creators I’ve found strictly on Yt. I’m not sure where else to look, where do ppl read fan fictions? Trying to get into it. Thanks for any insight or info!
@@maxisaev568 what is ao3? Being super genuine, have no clue which platforms to go on or what to look up. Mostly use YT & find similar videos like this creator’s.
I do like how you focussed so much on the strategic elements early to give us a sense of the battlefield. Thus allowing your storybeats to take great shape. A couple things here and there I imagine going differently, but thats natural. Great work! Looking forward to the next few parts!
Beric Dondarrion having a show down with the Night King was awesome, great way to wrap his arc and it felt set up when he had that stare down in Beyond the Wall
oh wow this was really good, the last season was disapointing and this was way better. Am looking forward to the next rewrites. Keep up the great work.
I definitely want to see how you handle the remaining episodes. Subbed as well to wait for your updates and well done to your brother for supporting you in this project! It felt though that Jon riding Rhaegal in ep1 here was a tad bit abrupt and out of nowhere and nothing was mentioned in regards to how Dany and maybe others would have reacted to it, since at this point in time nobody except for Bran actually knows the truth about his origin. Not to mention that Jon himself is nto aware of anything yet either and there may need to be some kind of push to get him to even realise that a dragon could accept him as a rider and thus start the chain reaction of questioning how it was possible. So, the fact that the only bloodline in Westeros that could ride dragons were Targaryens should have raised some eyebrows. You could ofc leave that to be addressed in detail later on, but at least some sort of prelude and/or setup for this should have been done in your version of episode 1 imho.
FINALLY someone who honors the lore, keeps to the tension... Thank you for redeeming part of what deserves to be the "lost season 8" which lost us all esp. at the end, which wasn't even interesting as fan-fiction writing by DnD.. You are really, really good with this!
I like the different strategy of the battles. And I’d liked that bran went way back in time and history. That explained a lot. But I did not like Arya being killed and I did not like Bran turning into the night king.
There will still be a bit about the "past" in parts 2 and 3. I also like these fragments, as the series left much about past events, the conflict between the Andals and the First Men, and the Night King himself off-screen.
The show definitely focused on shock factor towards the end. Like in both the books and the show the death of Ned Stark and the Red Wedding were shocking at first but when you look back on the events that led to them they absolutely make sense. Whereas towards the end the show lost sight of that
Thank you for making a defense plan for Winterfell that did not include a hopeless full on cavalry charge! Actually USING the castle walls and including them as a DEFENSE instead of having the unsullied just stand in front. Having a plan to seek out and eliminate the White Walkers with those equipped with valerian steel, such logic! What a relief
Wow... this was so interesting. I absolutely enjoyed the storyline. It makes so much more sense than what we were given to watch in the final episodes. I actually watched it to the end and really enjoyed it. 👍👍
more, in winterfell defence, i would have put 3 round ditches circleling, filled with wood, so at some point to fire them up to slow the momentum and presure on the shield wall
Suppose season 8 is better than what we originally realised. Without it, we wouldn't get these awesome rewrites. The best thing is, i think is its pretty much the only show that out there thats both universally loved and hated or disappointing simultaneously to give us this stuff to watch. i mean, what ifs are great and all but these rewrites 🔥🔥 to watch
Just wanted to tell you how incredible not only the production but your voiceover was. You have an immediate subscriber who is looking forward to the rest of these episodes!! Thank you
(UPDATE about Part 2 is at the bottom of the message.)
So, UA-cam finally unlocked the feature for me to pin comments (which wasn't available before, oddly enough, but okay).
First of all, thank you for the feedback. Personally, I didn't expect such a reaction, that so many people would like the first part. Not to mention that the video would surpass 10k views. For me, that number was "beyond all expectations."
Secondly, since I can't sit at the computer 24/7 (I still have a regular job), the continuation will be released around the 22-24th. I have already gathered the material for the video, and my brother needs to finish drawing the location for a small skirmish in the second part and continue modeling King's Landing for the third. I'll talk more about this in the next video.
So, thank you for your patience, for watching, for your ratings and comments. We'll try to get the second part edited as quickly as possible.
EDIT.
So, a little update. I initially thought we'd be ready by August 22-24, but unfortunately, that won't be the case. The 3rd episode is fully complete, but the 4th isn't yet. The issue lies in the time it takes to render a scene made in Blender. No idea why it's taking so long (by the way, rendering the Battle of Winterfell also took a decent amount of time). You'd think that little squares running across the field wouldn't be too resource-intensive, but nope. For example, 2000 frames take ~14-18 hours to render, depending on whether the computer is doing anything else or not. The Battle of Winterfell was about 18k frames. And in the second part, there will be a small battle that is around 7,200 frames. We slightly miscalculated the release time of the video :)
Anyway, sorry for the delay. The second part will be uploaded in a couple of days.
You did a much better job than D and D
@@CineGameAV take your time, your work and life are of the utmost importance.
All the fans of the books have been proven to be too patient 😂
Take 14 years if you need. I’ll still be here waiting happily. 🙏🏽
@@llamabobama true enough ;) I saw a comment somewhere that said, "don't do GRRP on now." Made me smile
No rewrite in the last five years has had me on the edge of my seat. I love that Jon has more time training with Rhaegal, that the defenses of the castle made sense, the depiction of the past, the realization of what the Night King wanted, and the fact that you got right to the action immediately into the first episode! Thank you for taking the time and I will eagerly wait for your next upload. (I hope the two remaining dragons live)
Dude this was AMAZING! Props to you for grounding such a great project and giving us all the privilege of a better story at least so far! I am super excited for the following part. Also; I would love to have your permission to dub your video, I would love to be able to show this to many non- english speakers, and being able to hear it instead of just reading the subtitles would just sell it that much more. Best of luck, and thanks for all the hard work you put in this!
Wonderful work! More please!!
Really like your video why did we not get something like this.... awesome
Amazing great job, keep it coming the story you created had me glued to the next scene. Please create more.
Bran and the nightking being two parts of the same being, that gave chills mate! Would have topped the Jon Snow heritage reveal, Hodor/Hold the door reveal and anything else like that I can think of. Fantastic rewrite, cant wait for more!
1st time viewer of your channel btw
Absolutely incredible video! One of the best alter-ending/season changes ive heard so far! Well done!
These season 8 rewrites never get old.
when it is a shit ... even stone may sound better
Please do the next 2 parts!!,❤❤😊😊
Please make part 3 and 4. This was great.
Thanks so much!! Love your rewrite!!
thank you for this! take your time on the continuation.. looking foward to it
Please make the rest thank you for this it was great
Please make the rest... i beg you😭
Loved everything about this. Awesome job!
I've watched countless rewrites of S8, but none like this! I loved how you leaned into the magic of it all and brought back the whole danger of Bran's powers in the first place! And the emotional beats of Bran killing his sister were crazy! Also, the art is stupendously beautiful, and I love how the voiceover is coupled with videos and images to give an audiobook feel. Amazingly done, I can't wait for the next part!
Also you added smart battlefield moves I never even thought of! The fires and Dothraki waves were wonderful ideas
This was masterfully done in my opinion 😊 I saw an edit where Bran made himself King on the Iron Throne. Having him be the new Night King is brilliant!! 🤯😰🥶 I hope he continues the storyline and doesn't drop it
Random - but could you lost some of the other rewrites you’ve watched/read? Are they all on YT? What do you query? Running out of rewrites to watch, or waiting on updates from the creators I’ve found strictly on Yt. I’m not sure where else to look, where do ppl read fan fictions? Trying to get into it. Thanks for any insight or info!
@@Mayday9112 I mean, fanfics obviously on ao3
@@maxisaev568 what is ao3? Being super genuine, have no clue which platforms to go on or what to look up. Mostly use YT & find similar videos like this creator’s.
This was great man. Unique and interesting and makes sense..love it
I do like how you focussed so much on the strategic elements early to give us a sense of the battlefield. Thus allowing your storybeats to take great shape.
A couple things here and there I imagine going differently, but thats natural. Great work! Looking forward to the next few parts!
Beric Dondarrion having a show down with the Night King was awesome, great way to wrap his arc and it felt set up when he had that stare down in Beyond the Wall
Im liking this version so far 😊 great work
oh wow this was really good, the last season was disapointing and this was way better. Am looking forward to the next rewrites. Keep up the great work.
This is so good! You have a great creative mind
Very interesting, and now I would like to see how you would end it. On to the next part, please.
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT!
That was amazing!!!
Please please please
KEEP GOING!
Make stories about Valyria before the doom!
You are amazing!
This is really well done and very believable. Make more.
Need more of these ASAP!!
Nice work. I enjoyed your video. I will watch the other parts.
absolutely fantastic job! knocked it outta the park! thank you for doing this.
AMAZING !! Please 🙏🏾 continue
Surprisingly well.done. I'll be watching the.next episodes. Great rewrite on the white walkers!
I’m ready for parts 2 & 3. Great job!
Fantastic! Here's hoping part 2 comes along! :)
Fascinating and more logical, engrossing and exciting than what Dan and Dave did with the actual season 8! Looking forward to the next video!
Bran timetravelling back to be stuck in the creation of the knight king makes so much sense. honor is the foreshadowing of that
Need part 3, plus i just finished the show and have been looking for something good
Amazing!!! Please continue!!!
Very interesting and a great story. Thanks
I definitely want to see how you handle the remaining episodes. Subbed as well to wait for your updates and well done to your brother for supporting you in this project! It felt though that Jon riding Rhaegal in ep1 here was a tad bit abrupt and out of nowhere and nothing was mentioned in regards to how Dany and maybe others would have reacted to it, since at this point in time nobody except for Bran actually knows the truth about his origin. Not to mention that Jon himself is nto aware of anything yet either and there may need to be some kind of push to get him to even realise that a dragon could accept him as a rider and thus start the chain reaction of questioning how it was possible. So, the fact that the only bloodline in Westeros that could ride dragons were Targaryens should have raised some eyebrows. You could ofc leave that to be addressed in detail later on, but at least some sort of prelude and/or setup for this should have been done in your version of episode 1 imho.
you added depth into the shallow original story..well done, definitely a proper plot for a game of throne
Keep going mate this is awesome 👌
Bruh...That was AWESOME! Inventive and creative. I'm glad the Al Gore Rhythm popped your vid onto my feed.
*Marvelous keep up the great work.*
really good story telling !! love it
FINALLY someone who honors the lore, keeps to the tension... Thank you for redeeming part of what deserves to be the "lost season 8" which lost us all esp. at the end, which wasn't even interesting as fan-fiction writing by DnD.. You are really, really good with this!
Fantastic work, looking forward to part 2
This!!!!! Perfect! My goodness, how great this season should have been. Please continue with your story.
The 2 part is already on the channel. I hope you like it :)
I definitely want to see what’s next!
Make the next videos please, this was great
Write the other rest😃👏💯💙👊! It’s really good and I love the story! Watching anxiously for the next episode 👏👏👏👏👏👊💙
thanks) We’re already rendering and editing. So it should be out by the weekend (at least i hope).
Man you and your brother do a wonderful job! Great 👍 work
Thank you! We definitely need it this kind of ending!
I still chuckle when i think of the scene at winterfell where they fight the dead and sams just sitting while swinging a sword
This was amazing - thank you!
Well done! I can’t wait to watch the next part.
Well done! Can’t wait for your next installment!
Very interesting! Great work!
I can’t wait to see the next videos!
I’m hooked 👍
this was incredible! Thank you!!!!!
Dude please, for the love of all that is good in this world, make 2 and 3!
This is great! 👍🏽 Thank you
Ihope you make more
Greatest rewrite I've seen until now
I like the different strategy of the battles. And I’d liked that bran went way back in time and history. That explained a lot. But I did not like Arya being killed and I did not like Bran turning into the night king.
This was AWESOME and so much better than what I watched. I need more!
Loved it look forward to hearing the rest
so much better than the original. please continue
Great job! Looking forward to the next!
Excellent work, I love how you have the cuts between the history and the battle, really ties it all together.
There will still be a bit about the "past" in parts 2 and 3. I also like these fragments, as the series left much about past events, the conflict between the Andals and the First Men, and the Night King himself off-screen.
Love this version so far!
Gonna need the next part of this ASAP!!! 😂
The show definitely focused on shock factor towards the end. Like in both the books and the show the death of Ned Stark and the Red Wedding were shocking at first but when you look back on the events that led to them they absolutely make sense. Whereas towards the end the show lost sight of that
Let's hear part 2
Waiting with baited breath for part 3, love it
We need part 2
Yeah, me too
That was fun ! when will you be publishing the next episodes? :)
Thanks! I think it’ll be around two weeks. I need to gather material for the visuals.
Bro we need the next part
This was awesome. Can’t wait for more!
You did a beautiful job!
Oh what could have been 😞 ,
And this video was awesome nice work!
Love the 1st part of this ending better than the entire season 8 , I need more !!!!
*patiently waiting for part 2*
The second part is already on the channel. I hope you like it
Please continue!!!!
Thank you for making a defense plan for Winterfell that did not include a hopeless full on cavalry charge! Actually USING the castle walls and including them as a DEFENSE instead of having the unsullied just stand in front. Having a plan to seek out and eliminate the White Walkers with those equipped with valerian steel, such logic! What a relief
Dude that was so good. Almost got goosebumps towards the end.
Please give us the rest of it, we're in suspense; anyway Great job man
Wow... this was so interesting. I absolutely enjoyed the storyline. It makes so much more sense than what we were given to watch in the final episodes. I actually watched it to the end and really enjoyed it. 👍👍
Man my man this is the greatest rewrite till now ..... loved this and wish you all the best .... We Want More
For now, it's still only in my head.
THIS was far better than what we got from the "professionals" . Bravo!!!
Speechless! More? Yes please.
more, in winterfell defence, i would have put 3 round ditches circleling, filled with wood, so at some point to fire them up to slow the momentum and presure on the shield wall
So much better than the original! Loving it so far!
This would have been so much more interesting!!! I really like these ideas, looking forward to your next episode.
Suppose season 8 is better than what we originally realised. Without it, we wouldn't get these awesome rewrites.
The best thing is, i think is its pretty much the only show that out there thats both universally loved and hated or disappointing simultaneously to give us this stuff to watch. i mean, what ifs are great and all but these rewrites 🔥🔥 to watch
Damn good stuff. Looking forward to the next two parts.
Amazing! Can't wait for part 2!!!
Thanks can't wait for next part
This video was incredible. Patiently awaiting the next!
Already uploaded :)
Would love to see how it ends
Just wanted to tell you how incredible not only the production but your voiceover was. You have an immediate subscriber who is looking forward to the rest of these episodes!! Thank you
Appreciated it!
We'll try to make it as good as we can, and as quickly as possible. But most likely, part 2 will be released in about two weeks.
Yeah this was great! I love the twist with Bran. Most importantly the Long Night wasn’t One night lol
This was super dope and I'm sure I'm not the only one that's excited to check out the next one.