Rick: *kills wife* Rick: Meh Rick: *sees body parts of someone at the front door* Rick: Okay... Rick: *realises his sons is probs dead* Rick: Eh. Sad. Rick: *finds dead kitty* Rick: THIS HAS GONE TOO FAR!!!!!
The part that threw me off was that he said it was cold enough to freeze body parts solid, yet he was able to dig a grave for his cat effortlessly. I'm guessing the author has never tried to dig a hole in frozen tundra before. Great narration as always.
So if rick is so angry abt the cat adrenaline and anger and insanity plus cutting logs with that particular saw this man has to be really strong so this dude could probably easily put a shovel through frozen ground
You Better Not Run You Better Not Hide You Better Not Pale I'm Tell In You Why Santa Claws Is Hunting You Down He Knows When Your Sleeping He Knows When Your MasterBating So Be Good For Goodness Sake Santa Clause Is Hunting You Down
I loved how u read and express your voice for the part of the story that is getting to climax point I really like how u raise your voice when the character is getting sad or angry.
I liked the metaphor about the garbage disposal being a "hungry monster" underneath the sink. Vincent V, you truly know how to use idioms and personifications in your work.
I must say, this was a very good story. Good word selection, good imagery, and a very interesting end. Creepypastas are either about realistic horrors, or the supernatural. I like how the author convinces the audience that it is a realistic story, but then changes it at the last minute to add power to their work. It was disturbing, but very well done.
I'm beginning to suspect that quite a few horror writers- Oh, wait, hang on. I just saw the author. I'm beginning to suspect that Vincent has some... issues with women.
+ShootingStarNeo Meh, I'd have to disagree with that. I can think of two of Mr. Cava's stories off the top of my head that might strike that chord, and while in one case it's made brutally obvious how despicable the narrator character is and in this one, we have to question how reliable he is (in terms of remembering his interactions with his wife), in both cases the murderer got his comeuppance. I can see where you're coming from, though. I have run into one CP writer whom I shall not name who seems to have serious issues with women, but I just don't think it's fair to assume that's a common theme. I'd also like to point out that "woman as victim" is an age old trope in horror, and while that may change slowly, change doesn't happen overnight. I'm not trying to defend the author so much on this one (like I said, the trope, if classic, is getting old), but I do feel it's necessary to keep hold of perspective.
If I were married to someone that controlling, I'd probably have lost my shit, too. I doubt I'd have killed my spouse in that case, but still. Being told "I'm putting my foot down" about _everything_ would piss me off.
This was so sick and sadistic, terrifyingly terrific, so disgustingly disturbing, people should be real proud they listened to it! Fuck, I can't stop rhyming. Really though, this was a truly magnificent creepypasta, so scarring and scaring, even I feel myself tensing. I don't get scared and even I'm disgusted.
He also tried to convince his wife to get an abortion, in the first place. Kinda contradictory to try and convince your wife to abort her baby, then kill her two weeks before the baby is due, and yet say the baby didn’t deserve to die. I’m not sure the author considered that before writing it.
7:55 in and this is ALREADY a masterpiece! Cava ALWAYS fucking delivers! I'm this guys new fanboy... for real, when I get my next paycheck I'm going nuts on his merch... Also, MCP, your narrations are getting better ;) much easier to decipher, I like your new pace. Also, I like the new music at the beginning. This whole post just made my boxer briefs wet =D
I made a nice song. I am late but idc. There was once a poor lady who lived in the woods And had a son yet unborn She had put her foot down, With a cat from a pound, And this was truly the last straw. So she smiles with her neck now, Laying alone in the woods, The cold winter air, An unblinking stare, And a forced smile carved in her neck. Now, the child was yet unseen, But his eyes, They truly were green. He was ripped from his home, Left all alone, Yet his smile was still and serene, Yes, his smile still and serene. So, a man, he stands all alone, Alone with his old house and home, May Felix come back, That old, dirty cat, Back to this lonely home, Yes, back to this old house and home. Where the crazy man lives all alone, Where the murderer lives all alone. Is shit, I know.
Nooooooooo not the cat not Felix why Felix THE KILLER WILL PAY EVERYONE WHO DID ANYTHING TO THE CAT WILL DIE I DONT CARE ABOUT RICK OR THE WIFE OR THE SON YOU KILL A ANIMAL YOUR A SICKO I DONT CARE IF I DIED THE CAT NEEDS MORE REVENGE THEN WHAT RICK DID
Most babies are born with blue eyes that change over time, and even if they are born with a slightly different color, it changes over time and a 1yr old will have different eyes than when he was just born... The pasta wasn't bad, but simple bullshit like this just pisses me off, it shows the author made zero research before writing
+Vincent Vena Cava There was no explanation how the child appeared as a full grown man or lost the eye and ear and even if we take that into consideration, why wouldn't Rick question the size of the eyeball when he later found out it wasn't his wife's? A baby's eyeball is smaller than an adult's. inb4 "he was crazy/scared, so it didn't cross his mind"; wouldn't that be convenient?
+xUsako ...I'm going to say the eyeball was adult-sized, and the baby was adult-sized when he tore it out. Guessing that the process of speed-mutating into an ogreman is what broke him out of the womb, in the first place. Otherwise, all the stalking stuff gets a little... Like, I'm imagining a vengeful zombie baby crawling up to the patio, popping put an eye, and then waddling off into the woods for more mischief and shenanigans, tripping over it's umbilical cord once or twice. It's... Not very scary. A bit cute, to be honest. I guess that's a thing, though: describing the umbilical cord hanging down around Monster Mash's legs like rope was a nice bit of imagery, but maybe not the most scientifically accurate aspect of the mystery hulking undead demon baby's anatomy. Like, the umbilical cord isn't exactly part of the body. Especially in a cold winter forest, the cord would probably wither and fall off by itself in like a minute. Demon baby might have a big outie belly button, at best. I mean, even if it stayed attached, for whatever reason, it would be more like a weird fleshy string a few inches long. So hah! Take that, completely unexplained magical processes that don't make a material difference to the story! One minor detail doesn't make sense!
4 minutes in and the character was still standing in front of the door when he first came in. I didn't even realize it was 4 minutes, this is good writing.
3 minutes into Felix and chill and he gives you the eye
Invallie this needs soo many more likes
Lmaoo
get this to 666 likes
The deserves to be the top comment 😂
@@MaureenMurphy_
"He grew to love the cat, the cat grew to tolerate him"
Best description of human-cat relationship
Roses are red
Thorns are prickly
may I say...
That escalated quickly.
My Christmas wish is that you all have a Ho Ho Horrible Holiday! BWAH HAHA! Hope you all enjoy this little tale I wrote.
thank you . you are my fav. author. thanks for all you do
Haha. Thank you. Keep reading. Its only gonna get better.
Vincent Vena Cava you replied. Thank you for making my christams wish come true. Merry Christmas sir
+Vincent Vena Cava What story's are you planing in the future?
+Hunter Edwards Like a billion awesome ones...follow me @vincentvenacava on Twitter for news.
Rick: *kills wife*
Rick: Meh
Rick: *sees body parts of someone at the front door*
Rick: Okay...
Rick: *realises his sons is probs dead*
Rick: Eh. Sad.
Rick: *finds dead kitty*
Rick: THIS HAS GONE TOO FAR!!!!!
y u spoil
*me
Why would you spoil it
"probably dead"
Lolololol 🤣🤣🤣🤣
His dramatic pauses are perfect “the mushy looking red and white ball... was actually a mushy looking red and white ball.” Genius 👏
The part that threw me off was that he said it was cold enough to freeze body parts solid, yet he was able to dig a grave for his cat effortlessly. I'm guessing the author has never tried to dig a hole in frozen tundra before.
Great narration as always.
I once dug a grave on one of the coldest days ever for a pet hamster. It took lots of muscle but easy enough.
So if rick is so angry abt the cat adrenaline and anger and insanity plus cutting logs with that particular saw this man has to be really strong so this dude could probably easily put a shovel through frozen ground
Well that was a lovely father, son reunion.
Finds out that the wife died: "Interesting"
Finds out Felix died: "WHY!? HE WAS INNOCENT"
Yeah, WHY THE FURRY BBY KID !!
I laughed when the wife dies.
I cried when Felix died
I...love...CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATS😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I CRIED
Miss Bunny Me too!
I thought that this was over as a short twist thing like "IT WAS A HUMAN EYE, AHHH!" But I realized I was only like 5 minutes in.
OH GOD THERE IS SO MUCH MORE!! Hahahahahahahaah oh geez..
Cj MarbleBean me too😂
Did you not even check the run time? ._.
I thought it was the main charactrs body parts, he just got messy with his rusty saw work
Who else thought the stalker was going to be Santa?
right here! when he said the man looked 250 pounds and the sleigh bells were in the background...
You Better Not Run
You Better Not Hide
You Better Not Pale I'm Tell In You Why
Santa Claws Is Hunting You Down
He Knows When Your Sleeping
He Knows When Your MasterBating
So Be Good For Goodness Sake
Santa Clause Is Hunting You Down
When I Heard About The EyeBall I Was Like R.I.P Felix Then I Heard It Was His Wife I Was Like Phew
+Lisa and Tom and then then black white blonde........ and red. you were like noooooooooo
I honestly was thinking Santa then I thought it was the Krampus
Whenever I see "by Vincent V Cava" I always get excited. Their writing is both magnificent and horrific!
Humans die: "oh my."
Cat dies: NO NOT THE POOR KITTY WHO WOULD DO SUCH A CRUEL THING?! *sob*
His palms are sweaty
knees weak, arms are heavy
there's vomit on the sweater already
moms spaghetti
Pepto Bismo*
A HUMAN PEZ DESPENSER OMFG I DIED
I think Vincent has used that one a few times
I love Vincent V. Cava stories, he writes the best creepypastas!
"Nearly headless? How can you be nearly headless?"
Your head is half cut off.
+steezywerb I got that reference
+MikazukiNomiko I feel like most people did but Mr. Cosmic was trying to be pretentious and clever :)
I thought you were being serious. So, explaining something is pretentious?
k
+steezywerb lol indeed xD
Vincent V. Cava's word choice is very detailed and his stories has mind-blowing plot twists. His creepypastas are amazing!
Was just headed to bed until I saw "by Vincent V Cava".
I loved how u read and express your voice for the part of the story that is getting to climax point I really like how u raise your voice when the character is getting sad or angry.
The whole “baby’s ghost comes back as a huge, mute man” is slaying absolute Friday the 13th
I liked the metaphor about the garbage disposal being a "hungry monster" underneath the sink. Vincent V, you truly know how to use idioms and personifications in your work.
don't be upsetti! have some spaghetti!
I lost my seious face.
Hahaha. Dying. 😂😂
No
I have many regrettis. I will never forgettis....
NYEH HEH HEHHHH
Another great tale from V.V.C.
Never fails to deliver quality pastas.
But why- or how did the baby turn into a fully grown man?!
+Le Llort ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) You sound like Markiplier. XD
vengeful unborn spirit
That's my question :/
I think the Dood went crazy and killed himself
+Darklovefly hehe. I see.
This creepypasta has THE MOST plot twists I have ever seen.
Nice job, Vincent! I really enjoyed this one.
omg that is so good writing, congrats to vincent V cava and for mrcreepypasta for the reading!
I must say, this was a very good story. Good word selection, good imagery, and a very interesting end. Creepypastas are either about realistic horrors, or the supernatural. I like how the author convinces the audience that it is a realistic story, but then changes it at the last minute to add power to their work. It was disturbing, but very well done.
the saddest part of this was the dead cat.
Cava writes the best stories.
R.I.P. Kitty Felix 🐈 Did anyone else feel worse for Felix more than the wife? 😿
Yep
This guy has the weirdest thought process
this terrified me to he honest also props to Vincent for being so detailed and amazing.
ALSO THAT PLOT TWIST AT THE END JFC
I'm beginning to suspect that quite a few horror writers-
Oh, wait, hang on. I just saw the author.
I'm beginning to suspect that Vincent has some... issues with women.
yeah...
Horror story that involves a woman = sexist writer.
k
***** in a lot of his stories there is something wrong with a women. I just meant it as a joke though.
Feminism at work....
+ShootingStarNeo Meh, I'd have to disagree with that. I can think of two of Mr. Cava's stories off the top of my head that might strike that chord, and while in one case it's made brutally obvious how despicable the narrator character is and in this one, we have to question how reliable he is (in terms of remembering his interactions with his wife), in both cases the murderer got his comeuppance.
I can see where you're coming from, though. I have run into one CP writer whom I shall not name who seems to have serious issues with women, but I just don't think it's fair to assume that's a common theme.
I'd also like to point out that "woman as victim" is an age old trope in horror, and while that may change slowly, change doesn't happen overnight. I'm not trying to defend the author so much on this one (like I said, the trope, if classic, is getting old), but I do feel it's necessary to keep hold of perspective.
Beutifully narrated. Awesome reading man. Respect
If I were married to someone that controlling, I'd probably have lost my shit, too. I doubt I'd have killed my spouse in that case, but still. Being told "I'm putting my foot down" about _everything_ would piss me off.
That's why people leave if I killed every man that controlled me three life sentences
+trish s who let you out of the kitchen ?
+Gavlick Apthesycerski Who let you out of the basement?
Don't demean women like that, have your mother thought you anything?
Brad White I was totally completely serious
Gavlick Apthesycerski well that's your problem, what do you have against with women, we would be nothing without women.
Its been awhile since I heard a story this good. I had to keep pausing so I could remind myself to breath. Phew that's some good narration 👍🏻
This was so sick and sadistic, terrifyingly terrific, so disgustingly disturbing, people should be real proud they listened to it!
Fuck, I can't stop rhyming.
Really though, this was a truly magnificent creepypasta, so scarring and scaring, even I feel myself tensing. I don't get scared and even I'm disgusted.
Amazing story and incredibly well narrated. :)
Thank you so much for all these wonderful videos this year, pal.
Am I The Only One The Clicked On This Because Of The Cat..?
Nope, and I hated that it died ...
yes
No
Nah, I Did Too. 🌝
Actually I came here for the cat image too 😊
It's a botchling?
+iiHasCookies Witcher Four Confirmed!
Woah mind blown!
I'm here.
Gerralt Was to late...
Maybe, but they don't usually grow that fast. Nice witcher reference by the way
Vincent V Cava always writes great stories.
They grow up so fast! "Tear"
His voice is really soothing >O<
I'd listen to it to soothe me and make me fall asleep IF he didn't always read extremely creepy stories.
"His son didn't deserve to die before he was born"
By killing the mother, he killed his son
He also tried to convince his wife to get an abortion, in the first place.
Kinda contradictory to try and convince your wife to abort her baby, then kill her two weeks before the baby is due, and yet say the baby didn’t deserve to die.
I’m not sure the author considered that before writing it.
The thumbnail of the kitty is so cute.
7:55 in and this is ALREADY a masterpiece! Cava ALWAYS fucking delivers! I'm this guys new fanboy... for real, when I get my next paycheck I'm going nuts on his merch...
Also, MCP, your narrations are getting better ;) much easier to decipher, I like your new pace. Also, I like the new music at the beginning. This whole post just made my boxer briefs wet =D
What do you think of it now?
well narrated I applaud you every video
Knees weak
Arms are heavy
Just killed my wife
I guess I’ll make some spaghetti
I love the way this is written. Like you think you've heard the last twist and it's wrapping up but no. Nothing can prepare you.
"He had green eyes just like Melanie" *dies of sadness*
"Christmas With the Crips: A Holiday Trap Boy Musical" That's hilarious
perfect timing just laying down to bed :)
I like when Vincent does his own stuff, truly great original horror tale!
:,) Kids...They grow up so fast...
This is a good creepypasta; one of my favourites.
"It all ends so violently I know, my sweet pareidolia"
I love vincent v cava's writings so much
Video starts at 0:00. You can thank me later.
"thank you"
Militant Pacifist Thanks
I just love Vincent Cava's works.
i was hoping for something better.
Your icon matches that comment lol
Though, yeah...bizarre twist.
Agreed. Fantastic build up, but a disappointingly irrational twist. I guess some fresh ideas were needed.
+Hazey Redeyes He should make it more of a down line at the ends.
+Nek klik Your face tells me so.
It was wild and I liked it but it went on too long.
Hey Mrcreepypasta! i love your vids! keep up the awsome work!
I made a nice song. I am late but idc.
There was once a poor lady who lived in the woods
And had a son yet unborn
She had put her foot down,
With a cat from a pound,
And this was truly the last straw.
So she smiles with her neck now,
Laying alone in the woods,
The cold winter air,
An unblinking stare,
And a forced smile carved in her neck.
Now, the child was yet unseen,
But his eyes,
They truly were green.
He was ripped from his home,
Left all alone,
Yet his smile was still and serene,
Yes, his smile still and serene.
So, a man, he stands all alone,
Alone with his old house and home,
May Felix come back,
That old, dirty cat,
Back to this lonely home,
Yes, back to this old house and home.
Where the crazy man lives all alone,
Where the murderer lives all alone.
Is shit, I know.
"He has gone too far!" Me: * *immediately laughs* *
NOT THE CAT WHY THE CAT???? ;-;
@@NewhomeStudios ..
1 year ago me was dumb lmao
@@NewhomeStudios lol
Vincent V Cava is my favorite creepy pasta writers.
not the cat :'(
Vincent V. Cava is goals
NUUUUUU KITTY ;-;
My favorite story!!! This reminds me of Kira Yoshikage somehow haha
My wife said: " that was weird... I mean it's genetically improbable for a calico to be a male."
Would have to be xxy and would be very small
That thumbnail is too adorable for it to be used for a CreepyPasta.
That Black Ops 1 background music! Paredolia from shangri la
+Ryan Mcclintic I made it a point to look through the comments to see if anyone else recognized the song
Well u found someone who does
+Ryan Mcclintic YES! Thank you!
I'm not the only one
I'm not the only one
best creepy pasta ive heard in a very very long time!
Nooooooooo not the cat not Felix why Felix THE KILLER WILL PAY EVERYONE WHO DID ANYTHING TO THE CAT WILL DIE I DONT CARE ABOUT RICK OR THE WIFE OR THE SON YOU KILL A ANIMAL YOUR A SICKO I DONT CARE IF I DIED THE CAT NEEDS MORE REVENGE THEN WHAT RICK DID
The music at the start, paradoilia or something, the call of duty easter egg song, so many memories from the peasant life
POOR FELIX OMFG ;-;
Also do you think Rick named his son Carl
Jayden Daryls Caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarl!
Vincent V Cava seems to be taking over the horror industry xD
And the moral of the story is..."Having a baby, is not the way to save a relationship".
Intense. Well done, Vincent. Cant wait to hear more.
HI
Hehe I got munchies like a mofo man i can sure eat twinkie dog
ye
+Twinkie Doge Now that's a big twinkie!
yus
+Twinkie Doge I am going to find you and eat you! Om nom nom nom!
A pretty good creepypasta! "A human pes dispenser" was something i thought id never hear in a cp xD
booo!!!...
did I scare you?
😖😱
You did scare me just a little bit I did a little poops
+Keroshie Maro I cracked my monitor.
+Nicole♡Levi don't look inside!!!
I'm not even safe in the comments anymore 😣
This 1 never gets old...
Click bate for kitten lovers.
Idk why but this is hands down my favorite story he has read
Most babies are born with blue eyes that change over time, and even if they are born with a slightly different color, it changes over time and a 1yr old will have different eyes than when he was just born...
The pasta wasn't bad, but simple bullshit like this just pisses me off, it shows the author made zero research before writing
But the child was a fully grown man when his eye was taken...not a baby.
+Holly Anne Yes, thank you for clarifying that, Holly. I think someone wasn't paying too much attention.😉
+Vincent Vena Cava There was no explanation how the child appeared as a full grown man or lost the eye and ear and even if we take that into consideration, why wouldn't Rick question the size of the eyeball when he later found out it wasn't his wife's? A baby's eyeball is smaller than an adult's.
inb4 "he was crazy/scared, so it didn't cross his mind"; wouldn't that be convenient?
+xUsako ...I'm going to say the eyeball was adult-sized, and the baby was adult-sized when he tore it out. Guessing that the process of speed-mutating into an ogreman is what broke him out of the womb, in the first place. Otherwise, all the stalking stuff gets a little... Like, I'm imagining a vengeful zombie baby crawling up to the patio, popping put an eye, and then waddling off into the woods for more mischief and shenanigans, tripping over it's umbilical cord once or twice. It's... Not very scary. A bit cute, to be honest.
I guess that's a thing, though: describing the umbilical cord hanging down around Monster Mash's legs like rope was a nice bit of imagery, but maybe not the most scientifically accurate aspect of the mystery hulking undead demon baby's anatomy. Like, the umbilical cord isn't exactly part of the body. Especially in a cold winter forest, the cord would probably wither and fall off by itself in like a minute. Demon baby might have a big outie belly button, at best. I mean, even if it stayed attached, for whatever reason, it would be more like a weird fleshy string a few inches long. So hah! Take that, completely unexplained magical processes that don't make a material difference to the story! One minor detail doesn't make sense!
Thank you for this wonderful story, the imagery in this one was absolutely fantastic, top notch as usual :)
Seeing that this was a Cava story, I knew that it would have some sort twist to the ending. I wasn't expecting a twist of such grand scale.
I think the wife kind of deserved it. She did come off as controlling and a slight bit manipulative. That's kind of abusive.
Sτεεmy♥Μυsταrd You right but she was Pregnant and He could have left her...
Yeah, that's what I was thinking. Abusive wife and his psyche cracked from the abuse.
well now ain't that a twisted Christmas story. I liked it. great job.
Yay a new story by Vincent!
New favorite creepypasta, right here.
ah yes, the John Wick treatment
Had to re visit this old pasta funny memories of listening wid the missus lol .
A truly Grimy pasta.
And yes it's Vincent V Cava
Blessing
I love how I'm watching creepypasta's and swoozie is in the recommendations
NICE! Pareidolia in the background! YES.
So I made it my mission to find the people that know the song but you guys multiply the further I scroll down
4 minutes in and the character was still standing in front of the door when he first came in. I didn't even realize it was 4 minutes, this is good writing.
The imagery for the garbage disposal was top notch 👌🏾
That was a pretty good story! :) I thought the stalker might be Santa hilariously. Strange ending
*sees 40 minute upload. Buckles in for the ride*
wowsers, good, good work as pre usual my friend.