"Dating Game" | CreepyPasta Storytime

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  • @danwilliams1989
    @danwilliams1989 10 років тому +755

    Suddenly, the single life isn't looking so terrible.

  • @iv.brianna
    @iv.brianna 9 років тому +257

    The ending. I personally loved the story, had me on the edge of my seat threw almost of it. But seriously, after what she told him before her death, and his near death, why would he date a girl the looks just like her? Like, come on, do you even want to live the rest of your life?

    • @alextainter7978
      @alextainter7978 9 років тому +11

      Kitkatclaw Bri Technically, you can't not live the rest of your life...

    • @iv.brianna
      @iv.brianna 9 років тому +4

      Some Guy True.

    • @SLYDEADFOX
      @SLYDEADFOX 9 років тому +2

      True

    • @derpro8125
      @derpro8125 9 років тому +21

      +This is My Name Okay. It's been well established that he's not very bright.

    • @nicholerice1102
      @nicholerice1102 9 років тому +4

      for real huh 😂😭😭😭

  • @murdoxxed
    @murdoxxed 7 років тому +52

    "The traumatic experiences of watching your friends get married, have children, and live the American dream"
    wow what kind of friends do you have?

  • @bigantspawn1223
    @bigantspawn1223 9 років тому +103

    This pasta had so much potential. The beginning and rising action was great, but I feel the gore was excessive and the end was both rushed and very cliché. This would have made for a great setup of a much longer and more thought out piece. 6/10

  • @un-capital3666
    @un-capital3666 9 років тому +73

    I kind of predicted the twist as soon as it was mentioned that she didn't want him in the basement.

    • @DreadMew
      @DreadMew 9 років тому +10

      I thought it was going bad when he married the woman after just 7 months, when she dident want him in the basement thats it! Nope outa there

    • @mcrainbowoeslak1603
      @mcrainbowoeslak1603 8 років тому +5

      Just imagine if the one behind all this was the girl who's number he lost at first.

  • @georgeszweden9497
    @georgeszweden9497 9 років тому +104

    In the beginning i was confused if it was a creepypasta or my life.

    • @stephting3176
      @stephting3176 4 роки тому +1

      If thats the case, then your life is a creepy pasta 😉 (kidding)

  • @mauvnoelful
    @mauvnoelful 10 років тому +49

    22:30 and this is when little jimmy knew he done married a serial killer

  • @Hexi_Geee
    @Hexi_Geee 8 років тому +26

    anyone else felt heart broken when he describes the 8 year old, and hearing the baby cry?

  • @Extremehalofan16
    @Extremehalofan16 10 років тому +711

    You worked at Burger King? Was her name... *Wendy?*

    • @Flamefollower
      @Flamefollower 10 років тому +13

      I see what you did there. :P

    • @lcyanicamccloud8729
      @lcyanicamccloud8729 10 років тому +6

      the lesbian-ness in this story is beautiful.Thank you.^-^ (not an insult i swear.)

    • @HunteR-uc7nv
      @HunteR-uc7nv 10 років тому +1

      uhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuuhhhhh

    • @lcyanicamccloud8729
      @lcyanicamccloud8729 10 років тому +1

      because the wife say "she" by accident

    • @ayingchanda
      @ayingchanda 10 років тому +2

      LOL!!!!!!!! what a nice joke, please make more.

  • @Shnapper
    @Shnapper 10 років тому +322

    This is a classic pasta.
    Pure GOLD.
    Fuck I love old creepy pastas

  • @FearTheHiddenSouls
    @FearTheHiddenSouls 11 років тому +14

    This was probably one of the hardest creepypastas I have ever finished because I hate those whole "You know your fucked but you get to listen to every little detail about it until you turn around" kind of stories.

  • @CreepsSpaghett
    @CreepsSpaghett 4 роки тому +13

    It’s been already 4 years and 2 months since I listened to this Creepypasta, it was also the first Creepypasta narration I’ve listened from MCP and in English, I always will love this story

  • @DoctorHorror
    @DoctorHorror 9 років тому +48

    Amazing! Loved the video. Appreciate you taking the time to create it and sharing with us.

    • @franciscomelendez7678
      @franciscomelendez7678 9 років тому +3

      Doctor Horror I love your videos :D

    • @AngelRuiz-xq2ie
      @AngelRuiz-xq2ie 9 років тому +3

      Doctor Horror Whoa, Doctor Horror! Whats up man? Keep it up with your channel. Doin great!! Love your vids!!

    • @jkt4810
      @jkt4810 6 років тому +1

      I love your videos 😍

  • @a_flying_mobula6062
    @a_flying_mobula6062 6 років тому +17

    I had my headphones listening to this story and near the end after she says turn around my mom walks through the door i never got so damned scared in my life

  • @Zombae030
    @Zombae030 4 роки тому +24

    This story always made me sad but i listened to it now as a new mother I practically bawled my eyes out with the baby. 😭

  • @OrderOfMagnitude1
    @OrderOfMagnitude1 10 років тому +101

    (SPOILER)
    Can I ask why noone cares about the husband getting murdered in the most brutal way possible? Why is her killing the kids the only horrible thing? And before you say, 'he probably had it coming' or something to that effect, you do realise she gets off on murder right? The whole leukaemia story was bogus, used just to lure the main character in. Her previous husband was just as innocent as her kids...

    • @davidb8523
      @davidb8523 4 роки тому +18

      I dont think its that nobody cares but when you hear someone murder a baby or even a child for fun that kinda just takes the forefront of your mind(even though this isnt real)

    • @Dizz2K7
      @Dizz2K7 3 роки тому +6

      We've always been expendable. We have more or less two main functions, and they aren't exclusive to just us, so if we can't do it, just find someone else. Even the way this is written is set up to make the death of the men seem insignificant.

    • @michaela.754
      @michaela.754 3 роки тому +4

      Because the murder of humans is bad. The murder of innocent humans is worse.

    • @OrderOfMagnitude1
      @OrderOfMagnitude1 3 роки тому +2

      @@michaela.754 I wrote this 6 years ago so I can't remember the video but wasn't the husband innocent? Or are you saying all adult humans are less than innocent, thus it's not as bad if they're murdered?

    • @Chronicler9
      @Chronicler9 3 роки тому +1

      @@OrderOfMagnitude1 A lot of people tend to believe that second opinion.

  • @imkaminski31
    @imkaminski31 10 років тому +34

    4 days sober from my meth habit...Welp, time to try speed dating

  • @SammySinglewide
    @SammySinglewide 9 років тому +42

    Omg "two runny eggs nailed to a wall"

  • @enp82003
    @enp82003 10 років тому +297

    But but.... did he make the hamburgers?

  • @SkeeterRx
    @SkeeterRx 9 років тому +122

    this whole situation could've been avoided if dude just went to a public library and us their computers...js

    • @Nitroxity
      @Nitroxity 8 років тому +2

      +Bellicose He still would've been married to that psychopath.

    • @somnus5280
      @somnus5280 8 років тому +17

      It also could've been avoided if he dated the first girl. Always save your numbers before you close your phone

    • @squishyharms4427
      @squishyharms4427 8 років тому +1

      +KillStreakKnight she couldve been phsyco to you never know

    • @squishyharms4427
      @squishyharms4427 8 років тому +2

      +KillStreakKnight but she had his number to since she didnt text ir call she clearly wasnt really interested

    • @somnus5280
      @somnus5280 8 років тому

      Harmony's Updatesound maybe

  • @maybellpotter6709
    @maybellpotter6709 11 років тому +6

    This is one of my favorite creepypasta's simply cause of how good the narration is and the story itself

  • @jesseb9864
    @jesseb9864 10 років тому +42

    Hmm, dark wavy hair. Green eyes. Kind of reminds me of a girl I used to date. I believe she was a serial killer? Oh well, I'm gonna put that behind me and pretend I won't die :D

  • @EpicFail2388
    @EpicFail2388 10 років тому +28

    The modified video can b easily explained, most serial killers aren't just nuts, they are borderline genius and psycho, thus the excessive planning. So clearly she's a hacker and made the video bfor he found it and had a device to cut the power to his laptop noing he'd check everywhere for another, she made the flower pot key obvious on purpose so he wood check, so instead of going to the store she waited and watched outside for her moment, it's her house so clearly she's got a few seCrete enterances in and out to keep quiet, so she waited either in the basement and crept upstairs after him or snuck upstairs ahead of him and waited for the "turn around" to pop out, so clearly after she left she used a secret entrance to make her video in the basement right after she'd left then slipped out and cut the power on him, watched thru the window then climbed in after he headed upstairs and listened and waited, like I sed just cuz she's crazy Don't make her dumb, good example of that in the joker from batman, very smart cuz of his unique gadgets and schemes yet he's nuts cuz he's totally bat shit crazy with undefined mental illnesses lol

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX 3 роки тому +1

      Most are boardline genius?Brah common we need references

    • @BotBoy-un3pz
      @BotBoy-un3pz 2 роки тому +2

      I think you're vastly overestimating the author's ability to write a creepypasta

  • @Pikajame
    @Pikajame 10 років тому +47

    Did anyone else laugh when he said two Jehovah witnesses basically saved him? LMAOOO

  • @batfreeze56
    @batfreeze56 11 років тому +20

    That ending, was amazing!

  • @Lavawaffles
    @Lavawaffles 2 роки тому +11

    This one's ended killed it for me. (Pun intended) you knew right after she said "minion" the same thing was gonna happen all over again

  • @jbillraptor4382
    @jbillraptor4382 8 років тому +21

    Speed-dating events, that was your first mistake.

  • @taylorbivens8546
    @taylorbivens8546 9 років тому +289

    How the hell did MrCreepyPasta find this picture of my kids??? It was kept safe in my scrapbook.

  • @BullofCrete
    @BullofCrete 9 років тому +12

    You can tell this Pasta is actually fake.
    I mean, 'left hand'? The chances of that are astronomical.

  • @muttfacemcderp980
    @muttfacemcderp980 10 років тому +11

    I have to admit, when it came to the kids I lowered the volume >.>
    Great job by the way, love your readings.

  • @deadgrlart
    @deadgrlart 10 років тому +120

    Why'd you have to describe her to look like my aunt. Why.

    • @KillerDragain
      @KillerDragain 9 років тому +1

      Sfx Queen Why'd he have to describe her like me? o-o

    • @Cuggaconroyfan30001
      @Cuggaconroyfan30001 9 років тому +1

      KillerDragain is it bad that I like I Want this to happen to me? just saying

    • @KillerDragain
      @KillerDragain 9 років тому +1

      Cuggaconroyfan30001 What look like the chick that killed 3 people or to have your wife kill 3 people and you be the next?

    • @foultarnished0101
      @foultarnished0101 9 років тому +4

      Sfx Queen Why.avi

    • @sleepyghostboy4638
      @sleepyghostboy4638 9 років тому

      Sfx Queen she doesn't look like mine, but she gives off that "auntie sweetie" vibe

  • @reddeath707
    @reddeath707 Рік тому +1

    This is one I came back to every once in a while, not sure why it's stayed entertaining for so long.

  • @alexsantiago2482
    @alexsantiago2482 10 років тому +67

    Mother of god -slowly takes off sun glasses-

    • @iDontCareApple
      @iDontCareApple 10 років тому +14

      Didn't know that the mother of God owned a pair of sunglasses.

    • @cleoreavey3176
      @cleoreavey3176 10 років тому

      lol

    • @PieALaMode
      @PieALaMode 10 років тому

      The115Archetype She tries to keep up with the times.

  • @KawaiiPewPew
    @KawaiiPewPew 11 років тому +29

    Speed dating is now out of my option to find a good girl

  • @LesboNerd
    @LesboNerd 11 років тому +47

    ASIDE FROM HER SUSPICIOUSLY NEVER LETTING ME GO NEAR THE BASEMENT SHE HAD NO FAULT.

  • @AjPuj
    @AjPuj 10 років тому +125

    Still a better love story than Twilight.

    • @Uncoordinatedrooster
      @Uncoordinatedrooster 10 років тому +5

      Any story is a better love story than twilight

    • @AjPuj
      @AjPuj 10 років тому

      Uncoordinatedrooster
      well, technically no. Romeo and Juliet is indeed the only story out there that's worse than Twilight. For all intents and purposes, Edward and Bella DO, in fact, have more chemistry than R and J because they at least talk about the stuff that's going on.

    • @SirNippie
      @SirNippie 10 років тому

      AjPuj Romeo and Juliet date back to Shakespearean times. Where arranged marriage and 'love at first sight' were more common. It's not fair to compare R & J to Trashlight.

    • @kyliedavis2706
      @kyliedavis2706 10 років тому +3

      Seriously, are you all going to argue over Twilight and Romeo & Juliet? Some people actually LIKE Twilight, so can you not talk trash about it? And Romeo and Juliet is good, but it takes place over literally a couple of days. They're all dead by the end of it. That's not really a love story.

    • @mackenziefron646
      @mackenziefron646 7 років тому

      +Kylie Davis
      You see love, that's the beauty of the internet. People can say what they want and you can chose to either read it or not, if someone wants to talk trash about something, simply ignore it.

  • @itzsal5739
    @itzsal5739 3 роки тому +19

    This was one of the first creepypastas I ever listened to. Still creeps me out. I feel like creepypastas these days don't go as dark as the old ones used to

    • @WALKUREX
      @WALKUREX 3 роки тому +8

      They do just that narrators don't want to do them for fear of
      1-monetization
      2-getting cancelled for saying fEgit or whatever "offensive" word.

    • @Streifen1911
      @Streifen1911 3 роки тому +4

      yeah youtube has gotten so soft. it’s a damn adventure to find darker ones. it’s so rare

  • @PandaQuinnAtTheDisco
    @PandaQuinnAtTheDisco 8 років тому +70

    This story did have its cliches, however I can admit this one scared the living hell out of me. Most of the others are just interesting... this one was just.... *on a whole new level of fucked up*. Excuse me while I use my holy water ear drops for this one.

  • @HyoKoibito
    @HyoKoibito 10 років тому +34

    moral of the story is: Never go to a dating game. Just meet someone in real life

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 10 років тому +2

      And don't marry someone who seems too perfect, especially after only knowing them for a few months…

    • @nietvantoepassing9058
      @nietvantoepassing9058 10 років тому +3

      and never enter a locked basement

    • @HyoKoibito
      @HyoKoibito 10 років тому +2

      ***** or wonder around someone elses

    • @nietvantoepassing9058
      @nietvantoepassing9058 10 років тому

      Hyo Koibito well said

    • @HyoKoibito
      @HyoKoibito 10 років тому

      ***** thank you

  • @HiSanai
    @HiSanai Рік тому

    Fav Creepypasta vid of all time
    literally have watched ur vids more times than I can count, so glad theyre still up.
    your dedication to your channel after coming back 12 yrs later is admirable, the constant uploads and YT lives. just here trying to pay forward yrs of silent appreciation. Not much but maybe when in another 12 yrs when im 32 I can donate more lmao
    hope you are doing well and taking care of yourself

  • @samanthac319
    @samanthac319 10 років тому +319

    ALL THE SINGLE LADIES PUT YOUR HANDS UP

    • @ChibiThekitty
      @ChibiThekitty 9 років тому +7

      //rAISES EVERYTHING

    • @samanthac319
      @samanthac319 9 років тому

      Lol

    • @samanthac319
      @samanthac319 9 років тому +2

      Cause im slim shady tYes im the real slim shady

    • @WatkinsStudios
      @WatkinsStudios 9 років тому +5

      All you other slim shadys are just imatating (spelt wrong)

    • @devinflener8640
      @devinflener8640 9 років тому +1

      Watkins Studios so wont the real slim shady please stand up, please stand up

  • @Symbie
    @Symbie 9 років тому +89

    It's getting intense

    • @laurentiugaal8960
      @laurentiugaal8960 9 років тому +2

      Slendy... we meet again.
      After my failiure on 8 pages (simply cause the fatass of a character could'nt sprint for more than 2 seconds) and my failiure on the arrival (no comment)I figured you'd come back for more.

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie 9 років тому

      ;)

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie 9 років тому +3

      I may suck but swallow.. All of it

    • @AtomBombMommy
      @AtomBombMommy 9 років тому

      Slender Man slendyyyyxxDDDD

    • @Symbie
      @Symbie 9 років тому

      Shh

  • @justinburgy3707
    @justinburgy3707 11 років тому +14

    addicted to your vids!! XD

  • @RYMAN1321
    @RYMAN1321 8 років тому +1

    This is by far the most scary, unsettling, and disturbing creepy pasta story I have EVER heard. It stayed with me for days. No other creepy pasta has done that.

  • @BlackIris95
    @BlackIris95 11 років тому +49

    I think I'll just stay single.

    • @sonofodin1636
      @sonofodin1636 11 років тому +1

      or if you get a gf hire some surveillance in the basement?

    • @dalegag5671
      @dalegag5671 11 років тому +1

      dylan alter Or just get a house with out a basement and a attic

    • @sonofodin1636
      @sonofodin1636 11 років тому +2

      Elisha Seaman good point

    • @masako8980
      @masako8980 9 місяців тому

      Did you?

    • @BlackIris95
      @BlackIris95 9 місяців тому

      @@masako8980 Unfortunately so

  • @metallicafreakinroks
    @metallicafreakinroks 11 років тому +8

    I'd run away from the apartment as fast as I could when I got a quarter into the first video.

  • @kyleetime
    @kyleetime 10 років тому +92

    _This is why I will never, ever speed date..._

    • @ramiburghal4406
      @ramiburghal4406 10 років тому

      ر

    • @gvd72
      @gvd72 10 років тому +6

      Or date at all...

    • @grimreaper1551
      @grimreaper1551 10 років тому

      your profile pic matches the comment and i also like it

    • @deseanjames3966
      @deseanjames3966 10 років тому

      What do u mean by that

    • @500Diegoperez
      @500Diegoperez 10 років тому +2

      thats the reason why I WILL speed date.... imagine that type women in bed...... damn. HAHAHA *no disrespect to the ladies reading this*

  • @goryparodiesproductions6561
    @goryparodiesproductions6561 10 років тому +6

    20:05 - Tasty juice... drink it, then convert it to pee!

  • @destinyangelique3095
    @destinyangelique3095 11 років тому +9

    I watched it while I was constipated on the toilet and the scary part just cleared it right out of me so I would just like to thank u lol Shannon and des

  • @TheThugnificant
    @TheThugnificant Рік тому +4

    Oh, I hadn't realized I already heard this long ago (probably when it came out) until it got to the basement videos.

  • @ayingchanda
    @ayingchanda 10 років тому +50

    This is such a sad story about a virgin man :(

  • @plsmorecats
    @plsmorecats 10 років тому +2

    12:25 "Damn, there's no computers in the house. Wait! There was that one flower pot that my wife wouldn't let me near! I should go check it for computers!" That's how the scene went, I guess.

  • @Drakon_Minaka
    @Drakon_Minaka 9 років тому +9

    "I close my phone on accident and realized I never saved her number,so it was lost forever. For the love of-"
    I was dying XD

  • @rinmolton3660
    @rinmolton3660 9 років тому +65

    moral of the story: don't use windows

  • @jadenfoglia7295
    @jadenfoglia7295 11 років тому +12

    at 14:00 i was like nope. nope nope nope nope nope nope.fuck this i am OUT of here

  • @ATaadp23
    @ATaadp23 10 років тому +2

    18:35 it originally said "I DESERVED THIS" but MrCreepyPasta's version made it more evil, sinister, and brutal

  • @OreoCinima
    @OreoCinima 10 років тому +47

    Single life seems pretty OK now

  • @MiguelHernandez-ui8cd
    @MiguelHernandez-ui8cd 10 років тому +17

    This protagonist has to be the most unlikeable of any creepy pasta I've ever heard

  • @TheCTD123
    @TheCTD123 10 років тому +18

    0:51 story of my life LOL

    • @SOULMAN641
      @SOULMAN641 3 місяці тому

      You and me both 😂

  • @seattlegirl14
    @seattlegirl14 10 років тому +1

    Definition of insanity: Doing the same thing over and over, expecting different results.

  • @killer13324
    @killer13324 11 років тому +56

    all this is doing is giving me torture ideas to use on pedophiles.

    • @BobJones-vg3iw
      @BobJones-vg3iw 11 років тому +4

      Want more to torture ideas? Look up the origin of laughing jack.

    • @khaliquefields4861
      @khaliquefields4861 10 років тому

      a little extreme don't you think?

    • @killer13324
      @killer13324 10 років тому +1

      not when it comes to child molesters when the subject of them comes up i get extremely sadistic and on a primal level i enjoy it. is that bad?

    • @khaliquefields4861
      @khaliquefields4861 10 років тому +4

      killer13324 yes that's very bad. do you even hear yourself? you enjoy the thought of torturing child molesters? If you think that someone doing something disgusting and illegal gives you free reign to do the most inhuman, ghastly things to them then you're just as sick. it doesn't matter what motive you hide behind.

    • @killer13324
      @killer13324 10 років тому +1

      khalique fields actually molesting a child is an inhuman act. the torture would be retribution. ***** that's assuming the pain doesn't kill them by putting them into shock or cardiac arrest.

  • @pearachu5363
    @pearachu5363 10 років тому +6

    "Being 32 and single is no laughing matter" *sister laughs hysterically in other room*

  • @VickiDickey56
    @VickiDickey56 10 років тому +95

    CAUSE MAMA IM IN LOVE WITH A CRIMINAL!!!!

  • @halfasleepvampire7545
    @halfasleepvampire7545 8 років тому +2

    Hard to believe that so much time has passed since this was first posted :) this was the one of the very first stories my brother and I listened to when we started to truly get into creepy pasta. We were about 12 years old (we're twins). So much time has passed. My brother and I are still avid readers and listeners. I even write some of my own. Ahh... memories...

  • @mwalker3868
    @mwalker3868 10 років тому +15

    WHY?! WHY WOULD SOMEONE MAKE THIS MORBID AND TWISTED STORY?! IT'S AMAZING, BUT A BABY AND CHILD?! I CAN UNDERSTAND IF SHE KILLED THE HUSBAND AND ONLY THE HUSBAND, BUT THOSE THINGS CAME OUT OF YOU, AND YOU KILLED THEM?! I'M SO DONE.

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 10 років тому

      James Frost SEEEEEEEE

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 10 років тому

      Renike2012 What even?

    • @animeirl5265
      @animeirl5265 10 років тому

      lol to much creepy pasta? never heard a dead baby joke? THEY ARENT REAL PEOPLE!!!

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 10 років тому

      anime irl Shut up. No one likes you. Oh, and Too*

    • @mwalker3868
      @mwalker3868 10 років тому

      Renike2012 Well dang sorry i just hate it when people say it's not real. I wanna believe it's real so shut up.

  • @jakestanfield1762
    @jakestanfield1762 11 років тому +39

    am i the only one that hears hm repeat himself alot

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 11 років тому +8

      When you say it like that, it sounds like it isn't obvious.

    • @jakestanfield1762
      @jakestanfield1762 11 років тому

      well...... i guess so ya :P

    • @mksabourinable
      @mksabourinable 11 років тому +6

      jacob stanfield you try reading aloud for half an hour straight without any mistakes

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 11 років тому +8

      Kate I understand that. He's bound to make mistakes, but can't he just edit them out?

    • @mksabourinable
      @mksabourinable 11 років тому +1

      Kimi FW Yea I've wondered that too...

  • @tlb963
    @tlb963 11 років тому +32

    I'm disgusted by my left hand too

  • @Lilindey
    @Lilindey 8 років тому +1

    Your voice is gold. It's perfect, your tone made me laugh so much :D

  • @moonymonster
    @moonymonster 6 років тому +3

    Why approach the basement WHEN YOU CAN BUY A NEW COMPUTER

  • @carluwu2331
    @carluwu2331 9 років тому +22

    *DUDE WHAT'S WRONG WITH WORKING IN BURGER KING*

    • @nocturnalchicken5722
      @nocturnalchicken5722 9 років тому

      EXACTLY

    • @carluwu2331
      @carluwu2331 9 років тому +2

      Giada G. I'm not being stupid it's just a simple comment I made, I don't need your criticism

    • @carluwu2331
      @carluwu2331 9 років тому +3

      Giada G. OooooOOOooohhhHHhhHHHhhHHh okey~ Now dat you've given ur reasons i feel sorry
      \(°ロ°)/ Sorryyyyy

    • @dickrichardjohnson6931
      @dickrichardjohnson6931 9 років тому +2

      I work at pizza hut

    • @XThexXTank
      @XThexXTank 9 років тому +1

      +miles prower same shit lol

  • @Alanspiderkipz
    @Alanspiderkipz 4 роки тому +13

    God damn that was edgy I hope the author moved on to make other creepypastas that didn't rely on "UMMM I AM EVIL I WATCH CP HERES TWENTY SENTENCES DESCRIBING CHILDREN GETTING MURDERED TO SHOW U THAT I AM SO EVIL AND SO COOL!!!!"

  • @breannaroth5572
    @breannaroth5572 8 років тому +2

    This is one of my favorite creepypastas!

  • @prosecutorgodot3166
    @prosecutorgodot3166 10 років тому +30

    The last video is impossible, if it (WHY.avi) was modified an HOUR ago before he found the Laptop, then how the HELL would she know that he would look at it, and how could she have exactly planned in the video to where she says "Turn Around". Still, good story, but it's impossible.

    • @epiccheeseify
      @epiccheeseify 10 років тому +5

      Because everything in a creepypasta is believable

    • @prosecutorgodot3166
      @prosecutorgodot3166 10 років тому

      Whatever man.

    • @tirionsaikano2006
      @tirionsaikano2006 10 років тому +20

      i think she was some kind of monster disguised as a human with supernatural demonic powers

    • @banki121
      @banki121 10 років тому +4

      i agree with kano 3 lethal injections fk that shet if i was him no dating nothing id live in a bomb shelter house.

    • @Bringm3hop3
      @Bringm3hop3 10 років тому +6

      Maybe she modified it everyday because she did say "I knew you would find out" the whole turn around could have just been her luck on being there at the right time

  • @mayuthekitsune3306
    @mayuthekitsune3306 7 років тому +4

    Ok with the first few lines I cant shake that this is a creepypasta about a incel

  • @ivyluna3057
    @ivyluna3057 10 років тому +23

    "smelled like a flower garden designed by martha stewart" dont talk to me of you you dont say this first

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 10 років тому +4

      That'd be quite the compliment… 'You smell so good, Martha Stewart must have designed you herself..'

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 10 років тому

      ***** It would be a weird compliment…

    • @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective
      @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective 9 років тому +1

      +Ivy Luna Pretty hilarious when you consider the guy was working for BURGER king. As for the chick...ain't got nothing on you Luna ;-)

  • @zerronyx1362
    @zerronyx1362 8 років тому +1

    i've been looking for this for years! thanks for this video!

  • @sonicpride1
    @sonicpride1 10 років тому +4

    0:00 - 1:03 too much info man..... ene

  • @dakota754
    @dakota754 10 років тому +32

    Nicely read but if you make a mistake while reading why not just use simple audio editing to fix it.

    • @FergmanAndWhatnot
      @FergmanAndWhatnot 10 років тому +51

      I always viewed it as him attempting to make it more immersive, as if this event had actually happened to him, so I kinda like it.

    • @StackerRox
      @StackerRox 10 років тому +5

      I agree with Fiji :)

  • @posey9573
    @posey9573 10 років тому +19

    ..Was carving that sentence into the kid seriously something this story needed?

    • @Michael-ck7lv
      @Michael-ck7lv 10 років тому +4

      Yes.

    • @elijahgodbey1100
      @elijahgodbey1100 10 років тому +4

      Ohh yes indeed

    • @mranderson509
      @mranderson509 10 років тому +5

      No I'm of the opinion carving something so hateful into a small child wasn't
      needed, the guy clearly over shot his try for shock factor.

    • @andweoop3254
      @andweoop3254 10 років тому +1

      Mr.CreepyPasta

    • @sootheater
      @sootheater 9 років тому +1

      Posey The scene was horrible. I don't even want to visualize that stuff in fiction

  • @nataliebruner3843
    @nataliebruner3843 7 років тому

    this is one of THE BEST creepypastas ever.

  • @jamesmcnamara649
    @jamesmcnamara649 9 років тому +6

    Anyone notice he said "some of them quite low cut" twice lol

  • @welcometotheinternetfam4245
    @welcometotheinternetfam4245 11 років тому +6

    Thats what you get for forgetting to save numbers and also asking a girl to marry you in a half a year.

  • @blaxican_jv8145
    @blaxican_jv8145 8 років тому +24

    did anyone else hear the word "crippling depression " dank meme lord

  • @sameehiharris2321
    @sameehiharris2321 10 років тому +1

    THIS WAS FREAKIN AWSOME.

  • @anatefcan13
    @anatefcan13 10 років тому +4

    Beautiful wife, nice house, well-paying job: "Fine."
    Weird shit involving Child Torture pops up on the laptop: "Well, I'm-a gonna go live in a van down by the river, later nerds." *Jumps out window, IMMEDIATELY*

  • @PumaLyn
    @PumaLyn 5 років тому +4

    26:22 she survived the first 3 lethal injections?!🤔😂😂😂😂😂😂

  • @mirandabarrett8987
    @mirandabarrett8987 9 років тому +58

    The only use for Jehovah's Witnesses

    • @FlorianEagox
      @FlorianEagox 5 років тому +8

      This story was written by the watchtower society to recruit new members.

    • @Pixy335
      @Pixy335 4 роки тому

      Yeah, nobody expected them here.

    • @lonewolfbadassery
      @lonewolfbadassery 4 роки тому +1

      @@Pixy335 like a certain inquisition?

    • @Pixy335
      @Pixy335 4 роки тому

      Of course

    • @lonewolfbadassery
      @lonewolfbadassery 4 роки тому

      @@Pixy335 who was that for?

  • @barkbark479
    @barkbark479 5 років тому +4

    Dude this one is pretty weak but I remember watching this when it was first posted and oh man the nostalgia

  • @fl1bble
    @fl1bble 11 років тому +4

    the music at 23:30 what is that called? What song? It's beautiful and you use it in a lot of your videos

    • @ultrabyssal
      @ultrabyssal 11 років тому +3

      The song is called Something's Wrong. It's by someone on UA-cam called myuuji

    • @fl1bble
      @fl1bble 11 років тому

      thanks

  • @WobblesandBean
    @WobblesandBean 11 років тому +22

    At first I thought "Oh god, this guy is a broke, shallow, overweight loser who objectifies women, has insultingly harsh double-standards and we're supposed to root for him?" But then he surprised me. He grew as a person. He became successful, driven, kind, and a lot more mature.
    That's good writing. He went from despicable to genuinely sympathetic.

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade 11 років тому

      Dagmar the Bomb
      Any chance he might be Rodney Alcala?

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade 11 років тому +1

      Mitchell Bobo
      First of all Rodney Alcala aka the Dating Game Serial Killer did in fact go on the Dating Game TV Show. > en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rodney_Alcala
      Second of all you might want to get your stories straight before you show the internet just how much of a misogynistic little man-b###h you are.

    • @smotnick
      @smotnick 10 років тому +1

      suzukablade Wow. That's really something. Back then employers didn't do background checks. And getting on the Dating Game!!! A movie could be made of him!

    • @suzukablade
      @suzukablade 10 років тому

      I don't know about movies but I do know that they made a few documentaries and it got a lot of press coverage at the time. Also a quick double check of his timeline shows that he was on the show some time in the middle of his spree. So that would be before his murders went on record and that might explain how he got on the show.

    • @kingBPP1947
      @kingBPP1947 10 років тому +4

      How did the character objectify women? Because he looked at their boobs? He commented on their low cut dresses? What were the harsh double standards?

  • @saramarra5307
    @saramarra5307 9 років тому +5

    just wow... seriously the most f***ed up creepypasta iv'e heard in a long time!

  • @pastelsunset
    @pastelsunset 7 років тому +2

    Well
    First good twist I've seen in a creepypasta

  • @smoshfan439
    @smoshfan439 9 років тому +7

    she survived not 1, not 2, but 3 lethal injections. That alone is scary af. flat out inhuman.

    • @haileylannr
      @haileylannr 8 років тому +1

      Maybe she was possessed... How would she know he needed a computer and his would not work, and then make the video right then and post it right then. I make no sense but maybe she was possessed

    • @phantomtail2270
      @phantomtail2270 5 років тому

      Or the author’s attempt to make it extra spooky

    • @RYMAN1321
      @RYMAN1321 4 роки тому

      In real life, they can't give it again because it's considered an act of God.

  • @iamveryloser
    @iamveryloser 11 років тому +7

    The original version is worse, the video with the baby?? Yea, she grabs the baby b the legs, and hit;s his head against the wall forcing it to explode.

  • @gracehoffman3734
    @gracehoffman3734 9 років тому +3

    "my left hand"
    this for some reason made me start laughing, and I was like "why the frick am I laughing?! it's not THAT funny!"

  • @a_flying_mobula6062
    @a_flying_mobula6062 5 років тому +1

    Listening to this while your sleeping give you some crazy ass dreams

  • @XxUndeadFilmsxX
    @XxUndeadFilmsxX 11 років тому +5

    Is it bad i listen to these to help me sleep?

  • @shadowcalloway2154
    @shadowcalloway2154 11 років тому +5

    Your narrations are the best do another slender man one plz

  • @Marmonery
    @Marmonery 10 років тому +10

    Dude! WTF! I'd call the police after the first video!

  • @dylanr.l.6685
    @dylanr.l.6685 10 років тому

    Ah jeez this story made me dizzy, but in a kinda good way. It swayed my emotions.
    Damn good job MrCreeps :)