Hi everyone! It's been 2 years since we started this UA-cam channel + launched this agency to help kids get into colleges. So far, we've helped more than 70+ students from all across the world and every background imaginable get into every single Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you'd like your essay by us, just visit our website! www.elevated.school/editmyessay
I learned about problem solution ratio where solution should be at least 50%, make unique flow. punctuation, ending should be cohesive, use full circle effect, connecting the beginning
Hi Kevin, I can't the comment to reply under this video so I am putting it here only, I hope you will notice. It helped me to learn the importance of balancing PROBLEMS and SOLUTIONS aspects in my essays, using specific and unique details, crafting a distinctive voice, connecting the beginning and ending to emphasize core themes and keywords, demonstrating intellectual curiosity and personal growth, and providing context for acronyms. This is I think I learned from this video.
Honestly this was a really great video! As a student who goes to an extremely small school, (we only have 5 students in the senior class) this helps me a lot especially since classes are no longer taken seriously either. Thank you for lending a hand unto others who are not as bright as you are. It makes me want to push for a better experience. Thank you.
I love these walkthroughs! Unfortunately, didn't have enough time to submit for this post, but I'm eagerly waiting for the next free :) personal essay post, and definitely will be seeking you out for supplementals and such. Thanks for all you do ❤
Hi Kevin!! I'm an international student and I've been struggling to put together my Common App essay, but your videos are SO helpful!. This particular video really helped me understand the problem I had with the eureka problem and the problem-solution ratio. Your advice on how to end the essay was really helpful as well and I will definitely implant it in my essay. I would love to hear your input and take on my essay! I'm pretty proud of how it turned out but given the fact I have no one to help me with my application (it's not very common to apply to US universities where I live), it would be extremely helpful if you could take a look at my essay
Hi friends! It's happening again! From now until September 28th, we will be reviewing YOUR supplemental and UC essays for free! Send them to essay@elevated.school with the subject line "UA-cam Review" for a chance to have your essay analyzed on our channel! If you are comfortable having me workshop your common app essay in a UA-cam video, I would be more than happy to do it completely free for you (we will anonymize your names of course!)! 😊😊😊
hey Kevin, these essay videos are my absolute favourite! You've mentioned dfferent templates throughout the video ('wheather, or ' template, 'double problem solution' ). D'you have separate videos or resoures available for that?
And here's a link to our ElevatEd Common App Essay Rubric! docs.google.com/document/d/1OwMn1stiiTYa7mfcd8TyQelO4RvlCjpmILU0yt3Hk4c/edit#heading=h.k0us0raxnhq7
Are you open to reviewing non-common app essays in the next video? I have a 350 word UC essay that I'd like to email over if you are accepting other essay types!
Hey can you help me with my common app essay? I am Internationa student. English is not my first language so I am not able to frame my essay. your help will be highly appreciated.
Hi everyone! It's been 2 years since we started this UA-cam channel + launched this agency to help kids get into colleges. So far, we've helped more than 70+ students from all across the world and every background imaginable get into every single Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you'd like your essay by us, just visit our website! www.elevated.school/editmyessay
I learned about problem solution ratio where solution should be at least 50%, make unique flow. punctuation, ending should be cohesive, use full circle effect, connecting the beginning
I learned to write sentences that only YOU could write.
Hi Kevin, I can't the comment to reply under this video so I am putting it here only, I hope you will notice. It helped me to learn the importance of balancing PROBLEMS and SOLUTIONS aspects in my essays, using specific and unique details, crafting a distinctive voice, connecting the beginning and ending to emphasize core themes and keywords, demonstrating intellectual curiosity and personal growth, and providing context for acronyms. This is I think I learned from this video.
Honestly this was a really great video!
As a student who goes to an extremely small school, (we only have 5 students in the senior class) this helps me a lot especially since classes are no longer taken seriously either.
Thank you for lending a hand unto others who are not as bright as you are. It makes me want to push for a better experience. Thank you.
I don't know what to write in my essay 😭 it's so overwhelming
Real
I love these walkthroughs! Unfortunately, didn't have enough time to submit for this post, but I'm eagerly waiting for the next free :) personal essay post, and definitely will be seeking you out for supplementals and such. Thanks for all you do ❤
Hi Kevin!! I'm an international student and I've been struggling to put together my Common App essay, but your videos are SO helpful!. This particular video really helped me understand the problem I had with the eureka problem and the problem-solution ratio. Your advice on how to end the essay was really helpful as well and I will definitely implant it in my essay. I would love to hear your input and take on my essay! I'm pretty proud of how it turned out but given the fact I have no one to help me with my application (it's not very common to apply to US universities where I live), it would be extremely helpful if you could take a look at my essay
Hi friends! It's happening again! From now until September 28th, we will be reviewing YOUR supplemental and UC essays for free! Send them to essay@elevated.school with the subject line "UA-cam Review" for a chance to have your essay analyzed on our channel! If you are comfortable having me workshop your common app essay in a UA-cam video, I would be more than happy to do it completely free for you (we will anonymize your names of course!)! 😊😊😊
This is, once again, extremely helpful. Thank you!
I’ve always told my students your responsibility as a writer is to make the reader either laugh, cry, or go hmmmmmm
Should it be funny the whole time how do you make it a balance of humour and seriousness
@@ibrahimali1282 Usually if you can end with a Giggle, that is all it takes.
hey Kevin, these essay videos are my absolute favourite! You've mentioned dfferent templates throughout the video ('wheather, or ' template, 'double problem solution' ). D'you have separate videos or resoures available for that?
best concept ever!! please do more. I hope I could be more helpful
And here's a link to our ElevatEd Common App Essay Rubric!
docs.google.com/document/d/1OwMn1stiiTYa7mfcd8TyQelO4RvlCjpmILU0yt3Hk4c/edit#heading=h.k0us0raxnhq7
Thank you for this! The p/s ratio 😀. How do you know that you’re writing on a good problem?
Hi Kevin,
Is it fine to use contractions( Should've, I'd, would've etc....) in our personal statement?
Yes totally!
Are you open to reviewing non-common app essays in the next video? I have a 350 word UC essay that I'd like to email over if you are accepting other essay types!
Yes great idea! For the next video I'll open it up to UC essays :)
Hey can you help me with my common app essay? I am Internationa student. English is not my first language so I am not able to frame my essay. your help will be highly appreciated.
Please let us know when there will be a part 3 to be ready!!
Part 3 is coming out on Sunday, September 24th! :)
thankyou so much!!!@@elevatedschool
Hey I’m really stressed about my essay and I feel that it’s not good is there any chance you could look at mine
Hey ik I'm just a random person but I'll review your essay and offer feedback if you want! I like reading ppls essays lol
@@infinitiesoup wait do you actually review essays?
@@radhasingh7358yeah I do! I just do it for fun though, nothing serious (though I have been told I'm good at it lol)
Is it me or did he just break danced through the break
What would you rate the second essay/10?
How can I submit my essay ?
Will announce again later in a community post! The next deadline to submit essays for us to review will be in late September!
Will u be reviewing the essays other people sent you?
Yes! I'll be doing it later this month!
How can I submit my essay?
Will announce again later in a community post! The next deadline to submit essays for us to review will be in late September!