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Thanks Ethan. As always clear and directie, but so warm in its tone. I know you value that. It was great meeting you long ago and also talking with your team. We have begun some wok with the low hanging fruit available for schools this last summer. We are hoping to get some insight about those numbers. Hannah was also instrumental in giving us valuable information ain order to scale things for our school. Please tell them Valley Christian High School in San Jose appreciates all the team does. Let us know how we may be able to help and pass the word on.
"My Everyday Life with an Economist Monk" is my personal essay topic. Focus: curiosity+ resilience/peace+ leadership I chose it because I'm volunteering in ISKCON, and my mentor there is a monk who was previously an economist/banker. I've learned a lot from him. Should I write about this? Also, please give me tips for my essay.
Hello, collegeessayguy! In my personal statement I am writing about how versatile I am. Long story short, my essay is like "I hate to be second, I understood that I am second because I have too much activities, but I also understand that it is much important to love your hobbies than become number 1 in them" is this idea and structure ok? Thanks in advance
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
Hi there! That personal statement isn't available on our website/channel yet. If you'd like to watch a video where I analyze 2 other awesome personal statements, head here: ua-cam.com/video/na-0ybN46nI/v-deo.html
Hey!! @collegeessayguy, my essay topic is about scars and my obsession with perfection but how I found acceptance and voice through my speech club but you said that speech is one of the more common topics. Help me here
Yes, it's somewhat common to write about speech/debate and how it's helped you "find your voice". If you're going to write about speech/debate, could it be possible to make some more uncommon connections? Try brainstorming some more!
@@Collegeessayguy Thank you....I watched some more of your videos and I was able to find another topic with an uncommon yet captivating theme using your brainstorming exercises. . Thank you!!!, your videos gave me the courage to scrap the first topic and try again. I'm really confident with the essay I have now.
International student here, would it still be a mistake if I am using my activities in my college essay even if they are very unique coming from my country?
You will likely have other opportunities to discuss your extracurriculars in the Activities List and in any supplemental essays that ask you to elaborate on one of your activities. For these reasons, I'd suggest writing your personal statement on something other than an extracurricular activity, even if it is somewhat uncommon.
Hello college essay guy. I wrote a narrative essay that started with a bird I had and I related my qualities with it. People I showed told me to improve the ending so where can I show you to review my essay for me?
Hi there! Thanks for writing in. We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support: 1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching 2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses Happy writing, CEG Team
As the founder of a CS Club from a less privileged area, I faced numerous challenges in establishing the club. Do you think it's a good idea to write essays about my experiences and submit them to Ivy League schools, highlighting my perseverance and determination in overcoming obstacles to pursue my passion for computer science?
Feels a bit generic since perseverance being underprivileged has been done so many times and your personal statement doesn't have to be about your major.
hey collemgeessasyguy, " in my essay i want to writting about my life journey that how was my motherhood and how i grow my baby boy and how i manage everything like my baby as well with my study though i became mother in my very early age and i struggled and finally how i discovery new myself and what was my moto to overcame Everything and what i learn from my past experience" and this essasy will be all about 'my self growth and a new self discovery ' I want to know is this topic is okay for my essay??
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
Hello, Mr. College guy 🙏 I am a raising undergraduate student in Ethiopia. In the lights of what you said in this video, I'm intending to write about my nationality which is submissively attacked and hatred by the leading political party regarding the challenges I could face due to it. Could this approach ever found uncommon?
Hi. Im writing my essay about embracing change through some activities i did in my gap year ie the different skills, values and interests i discovered while embracing the concept of 'change'. Is that okay? What do you think, please?
Hello college essay guy. In my personal statement i'm writting about how an insult in front of the mass changed my academic life. Am I in a right track?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?" If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
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Thanks for making this video-lots of gems here to pass on. You are such a helpful resource for coaches working with students!
Glad it was helpful!
Thanks Ethan. As always clear and directie, but so warm in its tone. I know you value that. It was great meeting you long ago and also talking with your team. We have begun some wok with the low hanging fruit available for schools this last summer. We are hoping to get some insight about those numbers. Hannah was also instrumental in giving us valuable information ain order to scale things for our school. Please tell them Valley Christian High School in San Jose appreciates all the team does. Let us know how we may be able to help and pass the word on.
"My Everyday Life with an Economist Monk" is my personal essay topic.
Focus: curiosity+ resilience/peace+ leadership
I chose it because I'm volunteering in ISKCON, and my mentor there is a monk who was previously an economist/banker. I've learned a lot from him. Should I write about this? Also, please give me tips for my essay.
Hello, collegeessayguy! In my personal statement I am writing about how versatile I am. Long story short, my essay is like "I hate to be second, I understood that I am second because I have too much activities, but I also understand that it is much important to love your hobbies than become number 1 in them" is this idea and structure ok? Thanks in advance
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
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Hi, where can I get personal statement of that girl who wrote about plants and bisness
Hi there! That personal statement isn't available on our website/channel yet. If you'd like to watch a video where I analyze 2 other awesome personal statements, head here: ua-cam.com/video/na-0ybN46nI/v-deo.html
Hey!! @collegeessayguy, my essay topic is about scars and my obsession with perfection but how I found acceptance and voice through my speech club but you said that speech is one of the more common topics. Help me here
Yes, it's somewhat common to write about speech/debate and how it's helped you "find your voice". If you're going to write about speech/debate, could it be possible to make some more uncommon connections? Try brainstorming some more!
@@Collegeessayguy Thank you....I watched some more of your videos and I was able to find another topic with an uncommon yet captivating theme using your brainstorming exercises. . Thank you!!!, your videos gave me the courage to scrap the first topic and try again. I'm really confident with the essay I have now.
International student here, would it still be a mistake if I am using my activities in my college essay even if they are very unique coming from my country?
You will likely have other opportunities to discuss your extracurriculars in the Activities List and in any supplemental essays that ask you to elaborate on one of your activities. For these reasons, I'd suggest writing your personal statement on something other than an extracurricular activity, even if it is somewhat uncommon.
Hello college essay guy. I wrote a narrative essay that started with a bird I had and I related my qualities with it. People I showed told me to improve the ending so where can I show you to review my essay for me?
Hi there! Thanks for writing in.
We have a few options for getting 1:1 college essay support:
1.) If you're looking for 1-on-1 help with your college application and essays, please submit a request form at this link and our team will be in touch with you soon to share more details about our 1:1 support and how to schedule a call to learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-coaching
2.) If our packages are out of range, we are offering asynchronous reviews of college essays/applications with our Complete Application Review service, which you can learn more about and sign up for here: students.collegeessayguy.com/complete-application-review
Lastly, we always have free and pay-what-you-can courses. We recommend starting with our two signature essay courses here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
Happy writing,
CEG Team
As the founder of a CS Club from a less privileged area, I faced numerous challenges in establishing the club. Do you think it's a good idea to write essays about my experiences and submit them to Ivy League schools, highlighting my perseverance and determination in overcoming obstacles to pursue my passion for computer science?
Feels a bit generic since perseverance being underprivileged has been done so many times and your personal statement doesn't have to be about your major.
This sounds like a good topic for an "Extracurricular activity" supplemental prompt!
hey collemgeessasyguy, " in my essay i want to writting about my life journey that how was my motherhood and how i grow my baby boy and how i manage everything like my baby as well with my study though i became mother in my very early age and i struggled and finally how i discovery new myself and what was my moto to overcame Everything and what i learn from my past experience" and this essasy will be all about 'my self growth and a new self discovery '
I want to know is this topic is okay for my essay??
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
Hi Ethan, can I share my personal statement with you? Is it possible?
Hello, Mr. College guy 🙏 I am a raising undergraduate student in Ethiopia. In the lights of what you said in this video, I'm intending to write about my nationality which is submissively attacked and hatred by the leading political party regarding the challenges I could face due to it. Could this approach ever found uncommon?
It might be somewhat common, but as long as you're highlighting YOUR experiences and growth, it could work as a topic.
Hi. Im writing my essay about embracing change through some activities i did in my gap year ie the different skills, values and interests i discovered while embracing the concept of 'change'. Is that okay? What do you think, please?
Sounds like that topic could work!
Hello college essay guy. In my personal statement i'm writting about how an insult in front of the mass changed my academic life. Am I in a right track?
That topic could work! A good question to ask yourself is: "Does this topic demonstrate the skills, qualities, values, and interests I offer the school as an incoming student?"
If yes, then start outlining and writing your first drafts. If no, go back to brainstorming!
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Would you consider Art to be a common extracurricular topic?
Without question
It can be somewhat common, yes.
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