Don't forget to breathe

Demo Song.
A new song of my own, the guitar is in the same tuning as The Rain Song by Jimmy Page and Led Zeppelin, but in between my attempts to play that tune this opened up more tonal possibilities for me as a novice guitar player and songwriter.
I tried some decending arpeggio double stops and a sort of barre chord intro together, married to lyrics I wrote about a life journey from the cradle to the grave (with a message in the title as we all go through our busy lives) and came up with this simple music pattern in less than 24 hours.
This was the 4th attempt of putting the words to music today and it's the one I like the best.
I hope you like it. Thank you Jimmy Page.
A Live take 22nd March 2024.

[@joseluiselvirad]

Otro buenísimo trabajo, enhorabuena una vez más desde Madrid y gracias por compartirlo, like 14

[@Robbo57]

Muchas gracias por tus amables palabras, estoy aprendiendo español muy lentamente traduciendo tus comentarios. saludos amigo. ¡Viva Madrid!

[@PeterJones-sj3uw]

The John Hiatt of hebburn....great stuff Dave

[@Robbo57]

Cheers, you're far too kind but I'll take it amigo.

[@joycebowman4184]

Great song guitar is good and words are excellent 👌👍👌

[@Robbo57]

Thank you Joyce, you're too kind, but I'll take any positive comments gratefully.

[@富九-q9t]

I love the guitar intro!

[@Robbo57]

Thank you, is the rest of it ok?

[@富九-q9t]

@@Robbo57 all is well! I accidentally searched for your work.