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    03:40 Reporting
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 161

  • @robertah2353
    @robertah2353 2 роки тому +125

    You are actually a legend! I followed the advice you gave in this video and I got 70% in my reflective essay assignment for my masters which is a distinction!! I am so happy and grateful to you!

    • @robertah2353
      @robertah2353 Рік тому +1

      @@rosemarywacera2576 thank you 🥺

    • @DrAminaYonis
      @DrAminaYonis  Рік тому +8

      Oh amazing! Well done you :)

    • @ladyd3217
      @ladyd3217 Рік тому +1

      Where do u study? For us 70% is a C

    • @robertah2353
      @robertah2353 Рік тому +11

      @@ladyd3217 I live in England, and over here for University courses 70% is the mark for a 1st (undergrad) or a distinction (post grad). It sounds easy but 70% is a hard mark to get

    • @iLove0atmeaI
      @iLove0atmeaI Рік тому +1

      @@ladyd3217 What

  • @MM-kz1kk
    @MM-kz1kk 2 роки тому +62

    Wow, after a few years on absence from studies and back learning this will be instrumental for my next essay.
    3:45 Reporting
    5:00 Responding
    6:00 Relating
    7:00 Reasoning
    8:40 Reconstructing
    What mistakes people do:
    1/ don’t include literature, skills, wider reasoning
    2/ missing future plan to manage such situations differently
    3/ insufficient takeaway from reflecting
    Great work and I have subscribed and will review what other areas of value can be earned. Keep up the good work inshallah

  • @venomambombuende4259
    @venomambombuende4259 2 роки тому +6

    highly appreciated.for a period of time, I have been blaming the lectures and tutors. But after watching this video, I get to understand that I was missing the most significant aspect of reflective thinking and writing.

  • @TelzAll
    @TelzAll Рік тому +20

    hi i wanted to let you know that your steps for writing a SOP for grad school helped me tremendously and i was accepted to brooklyn college this fall. im currentyly wrapping up my first semester and i just wanted to let you know that it is because of you i am here and i am so grateful for the help.
    you are truly a wise and kind woman and im so happy i found your videos because you helped me feel less overwhelmed and lost

  • @lucymcdonald1575
    @lucymcdonald1575 2 роки тому +18

    I found this so helpful! When I am in a science degree and am so used to traditional academic papers, I panic. I am in my fourth year and have not done a reflection in a long time, let alone a reflection at a fourth-year university level! Also, if you are reading this and have not used The Page Doctor for your work, it is worth every single cent!

  • @verlainen6995
    @verlainen6995 Рік тому +9

    You're doing a great job diversifying the face of academia. Your channel is awesome. Thanks for all the time you put into it.

  • @maliamalis6389
    @maliamalis6389 3 роки тому +107

    This is scary I’m currently doing a reflective essay and this pops up 😂

  • @aygulsalekhova7184
    @aygulsalekhova7184 Рік тому +8

    This was incredibly helpful for me today, thanks a lot. Very short, clear and practical. I'm sad that I watched it this late, already wrote a few messy reflective essays :D

  • @drjagannathsharmaphdmphmcs8071
    @drjagannathsharmaphdmphmcs8071 2 роки тому +6

    very clear and constructive. I found useful for the format of structure Reporting/describing, Responding, Relating to past experience, Reasoning with backing literature and Reconstruction usefulness in futute. Well presented, thank you.

  • @daniellaboateng
    @daniellaboateng Рік тому +3

    This will be useful because I am doing a reflection 1800 word essay which is due on the 10th of January.

  • @youtubecommentator6757
    @youtubecommentator6757 2 роки тому +5

    Thanks alot sister. This is so helpful. I'm currently doing my masters in Graphic design part time and I'm struggling with the theory side of things so this is perfect and gives me so much confidence going foward

  • @PhoebeJones
    @PhoebeJones 3 роки тому +13

    This came just at the right time!!! Your content is always so helpful!

  • @mamefosua
    @mamefosua 3 роки тому +10

    You could teach my tutor a thing or two about explaining this to students. Thank you so much for this. I'm not a fan of reflective essay mostly because I get everything jumbled up. This is a big help.

  • @clairecross5381
    @clairecross5381 Рік тому +2

    i am literally rewatching and stopping after each section as i write reflective essays for uni. You are a legend, thank you so much for this video it is saving me so much stress. ☺

  • @nydiaquintanilla2764
    @nydiaquintanilla2764 26 днів тому

    yes thank you so much !! going to write my first reflective essay ❤

  • @TheLilis87
    @TheLilis87 Рік тому +1

    you don't know how much you have helped me with the video. may Allah reward your sadaqah for sharing your knowledge

  • @user-oj6nv1mz1c
    @user-oj6nv1mz1c 8 місяців тому +1

    Thank 😢 you , I got the full marks 15/15 that was one of the assignments
    Really you saved me, really appreciate your effort

  • @osmandegelleh4532
    @osmandegelleh4532 3 роки тому +4

    Thank you for this: Describing, Responding, Relating, Reasoning and Reconstructing!

  • @rgcol
    @rgcol 3 місяці тому

    Thankyou! You have been my guide for academic writing and assignments for the past two years!

  • @Sh0rtClipz-o9
    @Sh0rtClipz-o9 Рік тому +2

    Love the way you explain reflective essay,it really does help me start my writing

  • @MM-kz1kk
    @MM-kz1kk 2 роки тому +3

    Thank you and got it! Some serious editing but message delivered on a silver platter!! Provides immediate relief to the seeker…hey am I becoming reflective now :) great content and wish you much success in return of your assistance. Ameen 🤲 🙏

  • @roshanakvalizadeh2395
    @roshanakvalizadeh2395 3 роки тому +5

    Omg i just submitted my reflective assignment.. bit happy i was on the right track but im always really weak on these assignments

    • @amanbains247
      @amanbains247 3 роки тому

      What types of article we can use for reflective journal means what happened ? Please reply because i. Have an assignment

  • @OiOi-kk5ti
    @OiOi-kk5ti 3 роки тому +5

    I have a reflective report to submit next month. So, thank you! This is going to be helpful. :))

  • @maryaazam6152
    @maryaazam6152 Рік тому +1

    I want to hug you for giving such a wonderful explanation

  • @willizokhae8974
    @willizokhae8974 7 місяців тому

    And 2 years later this is still useful. thank you

  • @deanna6742
    @deanna6742 2 роки тому +1

    This video is a life saver. I didn't even know where to start

  • @tshiamobahumi
    @tshiamobahumi 2 місяці тому

    This is absolutely perfect, thank you so much for helping us. I needed this 😅😅❤

  • @richellek3614
    @richellek3614 Рік тому +1

    You explained this so clearly and finally helped me understand what the "reasoning" section is! thank you so much!

  • @zazajapheth9977
    @zazajapheth9977 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you. This helps me alot especially first year in University. I would gladly send my reflective essay for proof reading. thanks

  • @WilmMyburgh
    @WilmMyburgh 9 місяців тому +1

    Thank you, Dr Yonis, your video has been extremely helpful!

  • @sopenbarua4149
    @sopenbarua4149 9 місяців тому +1

    Vary well explained doctor. It is really helpful for me for my academic reflective writing. Thanks.

  • @vinsukakannangara5389
    @vinsukakannangara5389 9 місяців тому +2

    If possible could you make a new video on this Dr Amina, preferably showcasing how to use AI tools, and maybe a practical example or sample essay?

  • @ngirinshutiines8456
    @ngirinshutiines8456 Рік тому +1

    This video is detailed, and I hope it is really going to help me to write my reflective essay; however, it would be really great if in your next youtube video, you add a sample of what you are talking about. Thank you

  • @rares-ciprianroman8166
    @rares-ciprianroman8166 10 місяців тому +1

    Excellent presentation of the topic, you are very articulate, and you present the topic in a simple but at the same time complete way. Thank you, I really appreciate your work!!!

  • @kbdk295
    @kbdk295 2 роки тому +2

    Thank you for this! Really helped me sort things out as simple as detailed as possible.

  • @allihz
    @allihz Рік тому +1

    Thank you sm!! I love how you explain everything concisely yet clearly :)

    • @DrAminaYonis
      @DrAminaYonis  Рік тому

      You're welcome! Thank you for watching :)

  • @katerinaangelina3366
    @katerinaangelina3366 Рік тому +1

    thank you so much for this video! I'm using this video as the main structure for my reflective essay and I'll come back if I remember to say what grade I got in it :)

  • @JJPlayzzzz918
    @JJPlayzzzz918 3 роки тому +3

    Very interesting what you are saying will take it on broad

  • @PissYellowTeeth
    @PissYellowTeeth Рік тому +1

    Thanks girl, this is exactly what I needed. This is a really good guideline

  • @isma.clouds
    @isma.clouds Рік тому +1

    Thank you for this informative video, this is the 3rd video i watched to prepare my writing and i feel like it is the one with the most information
    Have a blessed day and may God keep you blessed
    Kind regards
    A fellow UA-camr

  • @lukef6078
    @lukef6078 Рік тому

    Thankyou this video was recommended by Univeristy of Cumrbia staff. Simple and to the point.

  • @maui_wowie_9991
    @maui_wowie_9991 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you for this content! This so helpful in writing my reflection essay.

  • @bigshedstudios1893
    @bigshedstudios1893 Місяць тому

    thank you, great advice!

  • @uatdks803
    @uatdks803 7 місяців тому

    thank you for a very comprehensive talk

  • @lauraalerorose
    @lauraalerorose Рік тому +1

    This was very helpful, thank you 😊.

  • @user-zv8kt6fe2q
    @user-zv8kt6fe2q Рік тому +1

    This is amazing!!! Thank you so much

  • @ath1460
    @ath1460 3 роки тому +1

    I am glad I found this. Very helpful. Thank you

  • @joseroyal877
    @joseroyal877 2 роки тому

    I just bumped into this video. It's informative and very well presented. Thank you.

  • @younganddeterminedproject7243
    @younganddeterminedproject7243 Рік тому +1

    This is fantastic thank you.

  • @emilytaylor2440
    @emilytaylor2440 Рік тому

    This was extremely beneficial for me in writing my TA reflection paper thanks!!!!

  • @OwenWai
    @OwenWai Рік тому

    Thank you for this video. It really helped me with my essay.

  • @brimmedhathoe4392
    @brimmedhathoe4392 4 місяці тому

    this is actually helpful! instantly subscribed, thank you!

  • @marieslittlekitchen1020
    @marieslittlekitchen1020 Рік тому

    Just what I was looking for. You've now a new subscriber.

  • @Carehubsoundandmusic
    @Carehubsoundandmusic 2 роки тому +1

    Love your videos. They’re very educational 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • @aliabodid2044
    @aliabodid2044 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much Drs.Amina

  • @gracestyles4824
    @gracestyles4824 2 роки тому +1

    Love this. So helpful 🫶🏾

  • @LUIShtRUIZht
    @LUIShtRUIZht 2 роки тому

    I loved it ! thank you ! you are a great communicator

  • @barryoldham5270
    @barryoldham5270 Рік тому

    great video and really helps to make sense of this subject

  • @user-qc2zx6vs7y
    @user-qc2zx6vs7y 6 місяців тому

    Great 5 point plan for a reflective essay.

  • @xasankaamil8975
    @xasankaamil8975 3 роки тому

    Mansha alah
    Dr.amina great ,know this is what I am going to write know and I am get your message
    Thanks keep going

  • @MMostafaEid81
    @MMostafaEid81 2 роки тому +1

    There is a mistake @6:05 the third part is relating...Amina you made a mistake by saying responding instead of relating... but overall thank you for your video .. great work

  • @sharonmusee673
    @sharonmusee673 5 місяців тому

    This is very very helpful! Instantly subscribed

  • @merton2023
    @merton2023 Рік тому

    You are my academic guiding angel

  • @bellaenu6652
    @bellaenu6652 2 роки тому +7

    I love this model as it seems like it would be appropriate for the essay I’m about to write. But I wonder if I would implement it in each paragraph as suppose to the overall essay. Any advice would be helpful 🙏🏾

  • @jaredmoney647
    @jaredmoney647 Рік тому

    This is amazing! Thank you is very much!
    Thank you

  • @benjamintaylor5413
    @benjamintaylor5413 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much!

  • @janetokunola1347
    @janetokunola1347 2 роки тому

    thank you Dr Amina this is very useful.

  • @safiafarah3547
    @safiafarah3547 2 роки тому

    Dr. Amina
    Thank you.

  • @sarahmansfield8997
    @sarahmansfield8997 2 роки тому

    excellent well done very simply and easy to apply

  • @tector929
    @tector929 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much!!! This helped me so much!

  • @gislenaabreu9451
    @gislenaabreu9451 3 роки тому +1

    So so useful , thank you !!

  • @Barbzthegreat
    @Barbzthegreat 2 роки тому

    This is highly informative. Thank you so much for this video.

  • @doaahassan9187
    @doaahassan9187 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks for this helpful video

  • @nusratjahan3705
    @nusratjahan3705 Рік тому

    Jazakallah Khairan Sister🌺

  • @TheMcdomino
    @TheMcdomino Рік тому

    Thank you 😊 I found this video very helpful.

  • @these_slow_stories
    @these_slow_stories Рік тому

    This is such a great video thank you.

  • @dennis79ism
    @dennis79ism 2 роки тому

    excellent explanation.thank you

  • @sabinaa4020
    @sabinaa4020 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much! Very helpful!

  • @journalearth8379
    @journalearth8379 Рік тому

    Thank you so much, that now makes perfect sense :)

  • @Awale252
    @Awale252 Рік тому

    Asc
    Walashey Qali Shukran.
    Run ahaantii wan ka faa'iday casharadaada.
    Waxan jeclaan lahaa inan si gaara u sheekeysano adoo raali ah.
    Mahadsanid Walashey qali

  • @saramirabi1485
    @saramirabi1485 3 місяці тому

    This is great thanks for information details, is there any paper that you recommend in the context of reflection?

  • @marieshino2472
    @marieshino2472 7 місяців тому

    Could you please present a concrete example or essay on critical reflection research?

  • @lilyolaniran6381
    @lilyolaniran6381 2 роки тому

    very helpful. thank you so much. If you can talk a little slowly, following through is a lot easier for a viewer like me. But overall this is great.

  • @daviniaheadman2217
    @daviniaheadman2217 2 роки тому

    Brilliant, just Brilliant, thank you so much, 🙏

  • @adekaleadeola5271
    @adekaleadeola5271 Рік тому

    Really helpful. Thank you

  • @joseroyal877
    @joseroyal877 7 місяців тому

    How about when writing a reflective essay for a thesis? Do I reflect on the entire research experience or can I select a part of it that I found exciting?

  • @charliekp2294
    @charliekp2294 Місяць тому

    thanks for the video!
    would I cover all five R's when addressing one particular point (for example: first day on an internship)?

  • @laraandrews9710
    @laraandrews9710 Рік тому

    Excellent explanation 🎉

  • @matnick6553
    @matnick6553 2 роки тому

    "Relating" was the third part but not "Responding", as you've mentioned in the video)

  • @louisamay6547
    @louisamay6547 3 роки тому +2

    Would you say it is easier to get higher marks in a reflective essay than in a standard essay? Trying to decide between two modules for my final year based on the assessment style!

  • @gaiadepietro7734
    @gaiadepietro7734 3 роки тому +1

    Does anyone know if this structure should be used for each paragraph or if this is the order the paragraphs should be in?

  • @yasinmohamed3933
    @yasinmohamed3933 Рік тому

    thank you i really appreciate it❤❤

  • @aubreysmith2302
    @aubreysmith2302 Рік тому

    Habibi, Thank you for this 🙏🏽

  • @dmc3036
    @dmc3036 3 роки тому

    Cheers Doc. Spot on...

  • @saliasonie2827
    @saliasonie2827 Рік тому

    I really enjoyed your lecture, and hope to connect with you someday for help on my ENG 150 course.

  • @Rosiehoang6212
    @Rosiehoang6212 Рік тому

    Thank you so much❤

  • @vyocodm
    @vyocodm 3 роки тому

    Thank you i learnt alot from this video

  • @yewanderuthbokinni1624
    @yewanderuthbokinni1624 2 роки тому

    Super helpful. Thanks

  • @danieleze_
    @danieleze_ 2 роки тому

    Thank you Dr. This was really helpful. May Allah bless you.

  • @Bluecollarjoe6B9
    @Bluecollarjoe6B9 3 місяці тому

    Can I use the word “I” in an academic reflective essay?