*how* and *where* to give your opinion in discuss both these views//ielts writing task 2
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The question used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 6 Test 4 Writing Task 2.
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Essay Structure
01:12 Body Paragraph 1- Discuss Other People's Opinion
05:22 Body Paragraph 1- Give Your Opinion
07:14 Body Paragraph 2- Discuss Other People's Opinion
09:11 Body Paragraph 2- Give Your Opinion
10:21 Introductory Paragraph
11:43 Conclusion Paragraph
12:11 Key Takeaways
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Thanks for the kind words. You can also read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
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In discussion essay, it’s always good that you provide your stand at conclusion not in introduction.
No, your opinion needs to be clear throughout the entire essay.
In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨
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In writing task 2 discussion essay. If the question is "some people say its better to have single law system throughout the world but other say its should be free to make their own laws in the country " in the first body paragraph can I disagree the first point and write the disadvantages of having single law system in the world ?. Or will I loss the mark ?
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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. It says measure means plural. Do i need to write one measue or 2? Could u plz make it clear??? I Didn't see this type of question before.
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Could I ask if the score will be affected if we don't recommend IELTS format of
Introduction
Body paragraph 1
Body paragraph 2
Opinion
Conclusion
Can I say these expressions "the long-term' and "the short-run"
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Good day teacher.Can we send you our essays so that you checked and sent your feedback?
Thank you for your amazing and beneficial videos. Can you explain how to generate ideas and find examples to write in an upcoming video, please?
listening to news podcasts would help.
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But I can’t grasp ideas to explain like I am not able to generate general reasons 😢
Please ma'am, why is it that you gave only one reason when the question says reasons meaning that there should be more than one reason. Secondly, is it advisable to write 2 different reasons in a single paragraph?
Can you please answer me this question that i gave my exam today but while doing task 2 i wrote it from backside of the sheet and i realized after completing the sheet l.I didn’t have enough time so i cut the first part of answer sheet with pto and wrote the remaining answers in the next answer sheet it is valid or not could you please help me :( ?
Not valid
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This kind of question were come up on my IELTs yesterday huhu...i have a mental block on Task 2...i take my IElts here in Hong Kong.
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Hi Lilie !! I have this question about word count in ielts writing. Would you please tell me about it.
Question is : in ielts writing do they count prepositions and articles as words or not?
Yes, prepositions and articles are counted.
Plz tips listening how to improve
Can we write comfort zone
Please upload positive and negative one ( + & - are similar to agree and disagree one?)you are wonderful teacher as well as helping so many of us in free. thank you very much 🙏
Yes, the two types of questions you mentioned are the same. You can read positive-or-negative-development essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/
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the thing we disagree with should come to the 1st para? and the thing we agree should be in 2nd para??
is this the method? if not how can we decide it
please help me
Yes, that's the way to answer a discussion question.
Hi lilie i your vedios (3 vedio about discussion essay)have 3 type of introduction with 3 template waht is best
It is necessary to write article or year in the example?
Actually no, you can write from your own experience or from your daily life
can we write our opinion and main ideas in introduction?
Yes, of course.
I want to make Introductory paragraph like yours but i failed to think of two strong main idea for this question : is newspapers good for learning news or other media.
Yes, but instead of reading newspapers, I like to listen to news podcasts.
Thanks for your video, it really improved my skills.
I have exams this morning please wish me luck
Best of luck!✊
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I have a doubt that you have used risks and changes so many times, will it effects our IELTS score?
I don't think it will. I used different collocations, e.g., "make changes" and "resist change". Don't worry about repeating an individual word, especially when that word is a key word.
@@LilieIELTS Thank you very much for the reply and guidance....☺️
is it okay to write quotations in task 2?
Yes, I think it's okay.
I taking classes from an institute and they are telling me that you should give only opinion in intro and conclusion for outweigh as well your opinion essay
Hi, there are many ways to answer an outweigh question. Does the method you learned from the institute allow you to explain why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? If it does, perhaps it works too.
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Hey mam.
I have a doubt . Shouldn't we want to give examples for body para 2??
Hi, yes and there is an example in BP2. My example is super successful people and organizations. If you want, you can rephrase it to something like "take for example super successful people and organizations" or "consider super successful people and organizations".
I can’t reached the IELTS essay bank website
Why?
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Hi first of all video was usuful for me
do you have video about "positive or a negative development" ???
Sorry, I don't but you can read sample essays of that type on my website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/
i am having a hard time connecting my main gist-like topic sentences, thesis and also how do i generate ideas?
And I absolutely find your videos very helpful. Thank you so much
You're most welcome!😊
do I get band 9 by writing like this
At least an 8, I think. ☺
Should I write my introduction after body paragraphs even in the real exam please
I took the computer based tests in which I was able to write body paragraphs first. But of course an introduction should precede the body paragraphs.
@@LilieIELTS I left roughly 4-5 empty lines to write intro and wrote it later. and scored 7.5 in writing and 8 each in all other 3 modules.
@@manpreetbrar4327 Congratulations on the high scores! Did your introductory paragraph occupy all those lines? Trying to figure out if having empty lines would reduce scores.
Can you made a video on sentence formation ,mean structure which help me to get 7 band
Hi, I recommend focusing on developing your ideas. In this way, you naturally write good sentences.
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notes: all four paragraphs have to talk about our own opinion; body paragraph needs main idea; body paragraph: topic sentence includes main idea, explanation (not necessary), example, own opinion; 2:52 singular they
Take, for example...
example-led paragraph 5:10
Is it discussion essay?
yes
is it less than 250 word?
it's 282 words. www.ieltsessaybank.com/some-people-prefer-to-spend-their-lives-doing-the-same-things/
One thing is noticeable that you did not describe the introduction in a conventional way, the way you used to write for other paragraphs like chunking from question.. Why is this the case?
Hi, you can definitely break the original into chunks to paraphrase. Read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/some-people-prefer-to-spend-their-lives-doing-the-same-things/
@@LilieIELTS Yes..😊