5 tips for finishing your essay in less than 40 min - ielts writing task 2 discuss both views

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  • @niladrimitra8956
    @niladrimitra8956 Рік тому +18

    Hey Lilie,
    Thank you for your guidance on my writing module. I discovered your channel only a week before my test and meticulously went through all of your tutorials, which was the only practice I could do. I appeared for the test on 15th July and got an overall score of 8.5, with a solid 8 in writing.
    Thanks again, and best wishes :)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Woow, you got amazing scores, congratulations! And thank you so much for sharing your experience here!

    • @gioplantasrn
      @gioplantasrn Рік тому

      does 21 days enough to practice?

    • @susannjoki7859
      @susannjoki7859 Рік тому

      😅
      A

  • @aasrithasai5574
    @aasrithasai5574 Рік тому +26

    Found your UA-cam channel just 2 days before my exam. Watched all of your writing videos. And guess what, I scored 7 bands in Writing. And secured an overall score of 7.5. Thank you so much, Lilie. To those who are preparing, I would recommend These three youtube channels- IELTS Liz( for listening tips) , IELTS ADVANTAGE(for speaking and reading) and Lilie IELTS ( for writing)

  • @omjwad2661
    @omjwad2661 2 місяці тому +1

    Hi Lillie, this is just an opinion of course you know better "I was really impressed with how you addressed the issue of losing low-paying jobs to automation in the previous essay about people who resist change . For the current essay, I think it would be great if we could maintain a similar commitment to the main idea. For instance, we could argue that forcing professionals to stay in a country where they don’t want to be will eventually lead them to leave. This approach would be consistent with how effectively you handled the main idea in the previous essay."because I think with talking about creativity and productivity could be connected to the second main idea about feeling fulfilled

  • @조바이든-r6r
    @조바이든-r6r 2 роки тому +9

    your quality of lecture is getting better and better! seems like you are growing right now!

  • @faizaa4859
    @faizaa4859 Рік тому +13

    Bro!! you made it way more easier than it actually is. I love your style of writing. Thank you :)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +4

      You're very welcome!😊

    • @manpreetbrar4327
      @manpreetbrar4327 Рік тому +2

      Not bro though don’t you here a pretty girl’s voice

  • @sodiqiyandao.9464
    @sodiqiyandao.9464 2 роки тому +25

    Hi Lilie IELTS,
    I am Sodiq Iyanda.
    I reside in Lagos State, Nigeria 🇳🇬.
    I want to specially appreciate you for your contributions to helping people ace their IELTS Exams. Your videos and expressive teachings helped me a lot.
    I aced my IELTS Academic with an overall band score of 7.
    Listening 7.5
    Reading 6.5
    Writing 7.0
    Speaking 7.0
    I didn't attend any tutorials except for the videos that I consumed.
    Thank you.
    Lots of love ❤️
    Sodiq Iyanda.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Wooooo, you did an amazing job. Congratulations!👏Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?

    • @khaffyexcel7413
      @khaffyexcel7413 2 роки тому

      Congratulations bro,can you please help me with task 2,I'm lost,if yes let me have you email

    • @sodiqiyandao.9464
      @sodiqiyandao.9464 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS I can't really recall the task again.
      Over eating (eating too much) has become rampant and not hunger.
      Discuss both sided and give your opinion.

  • @godwinochieng3022
    @godwinochieng3022 11 місяців тому +1

    Hi Lili, l no doubt like how you teach IELTS. Your writing coaching is on another level. You made me to score band 7.0 overall (L-6.5, R-6.5, W-7.5, S- 7.5)

  • @thorfinn3737
    @thorfinn3737 2 роки тому +15

    u deserve more views, all of your contents are very useful!, btw im gonna take my IELTS exam in 24 September, i'm very nervous😵

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Thank you and Good luck!!✊

  • @rafsanayan7443
    @rafsanayan7443 8 місяців тому +6

    😢😢😢most disgusting module for me is writing... I can't generate the ideas but know various structure and vocabularies. if i get 6 in writing it's enough

  • @MukhitdinT
    @MukhitdinT Рік тому +1

    your option about writing really great please keep going.

  • @akpaelizabeth9948
    @akpaelizabeth9948 9 місяців тому

    Good evening lily, i stumbled on your videos last year and they've been so helpful.
    Ill like to ask, regarding this video, is it advisable to give a positive opinion on the side you disagree with before stating the demerits.

  • @iqbal-theislander2036
    @iqbal-theislander2036 2 роки тому +4

    Hey Lille,
    I took the test on 3rd September. I did very well in writing.
    Part one was tough (Spending of five organizations in four categories each)
    It had too many information. Your idea of RANGING helped a great deal.
    Thank you for listening to your viewers

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +2

      Can't wait to hear great news from you. What was your task 2 question?

    • @iqbal-theislander2036
      @iqbal-theislander2036 2 роки тому +2

      @@LilieIELTS Some people believe that reading stories form a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children.
      To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +2

      Where are you from?

    • @iqbal-theislander2036
      @iqbal-theislander2036 2 роки тому +2

      @@LilieIELTS Bangladesh.
      Are you from Malaysia?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +3

      No, I'm from China.

  • @moodypeachx
    @moodypeachx 11 місяців тому

    Thank you lillie I had my exam last week and your videos helped me a lot ❤ btw you’re so pretty

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  11 місяців тому +1

      Hope you did well...Let me know your test result.

    • @moodypeachx
      @moodypeachx 11 місяців тому

      @@LilieIELTS I got my result Lillie got the required score of 6.5 overall with Listening 7 Reading 6 Writing 6 and Speaking 7 . Thanks a lot Lillie ❤️

  • @SuvonMart
    @SuvonMart 12 днів тому

    Love from Bangladesh 🇧🇩

  • @binhtran4777
    @binhtran4777 Рік тому

    I really love your video, this helps me a lot in IELTS Writing,❤ Thank you so much.

  • @ellarhxoxo6818
    @ellarhxoxo6818 2 роки тому +1

    I really struggling with writing task 2 and my exams is 29th of October 😭I’m so nervous and having anxiety, I just pray I ace this exams.

  • @muhammad_shujat_ali
    @muhammad_shujat_ali 2 роки тому +1

    Wonderful! Can you tell us what is stuff used for gaining Good Bands in IELTS Writing Especially in IELTS Academic?
    I mean is there any reliable source for learning wide range of vocabulary used in IELTS Writing?
    Probably,Yes! Then what is that and how to access it?
    Need Guidance!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Hi, you can read sample essays on my site and learn vocabulary in context: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

    • @dennismutuma9336
      @dennismutuma9336 6 місяців тому

      ​@@LilieIELTS0:20

  • @elenasimon4600
    @elenasimon4600 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much for sharing these useful materials.
    Could you please explain some grammatical structures that can increase our writing score?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +2

      Hi, thanks for the suggestion. I think it's more important to focus on writing error-free, idiomatic sentences than on so called complex sentences.

  • @mia66
    @mia66 Рік тому

    Thanks, Lillie! My exam is in 3 days:)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊♥

    • @mia66
      @mia66 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS Of course! hopefully they will be great 😔.

  • @Farah_Mahmud
    @Farah_Mahmud Рік тому

    Great work! ❤️

  • @NhuYNguyen-sz9dq
    @NhuYNguyen-sz9dq 2 роки тому +2

    Hi, I have a small question: is it compulsory that we explain why we agree or disagree at the end of the two body? It is so hard to write tho😢

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      I think you should at least explain why you disagree.

  • @mithilapriyangani5206
    @mithilapriyangani5206 Рік тому

    Superb..💚 Thank you so much..

  • @harpreetharpreet8
    @harpreetharpreet8 2 роки тому

    Mam plz app jldi ley ke aya kro apki videos as it is very useful for us ...can plz give some tips to improve reading bcz i cannot get gud score in reading

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      What are the challenges you face on the reading test?

  • @homayounkhan7035
    @homayounkhan7035 2 роки тому

    Hello ma'am.
    I wanted to say that the body paragraph one was not well developed for the topic sentence because your have provided one reason that how does requiring trained people to stay can avoid brain drain, which was that " with out this policy, many would have moved to other other countries " and the if clause sentence was not answering how it will avoid brain drain. It was just an advantage of the policy.
    Thank you

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 Рік тому +1

    Please madam can you make a listening video for candidates with hearing difficulties. 🙏😭. Please help

  • @kishankatrodiya8370
    @kishankatrodiya8370 2 роки тому +2

    Lilie I appreciate your efforts as well as I like to watch your videos.
    Can you please make some videos on ielts academic reading also..

  • @Bninee
    @Bninee Рік тому +1

    hi, teacher. Can u explain the grammar in sentence ' and only when a person is doing what they want can they find fulfillment in work ' for me ? why ' what they want can they find '. thanks in advanced

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Hi, the first clause starts with "only when" so the second clause needs to be inverted. That's why "can" is placed before the subject "they".

    • @Bninee
      @Bninee Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thanks so much for ur explanation ❤❤

  • @lady_sh3288
    @lady_sh3288 Рік тому

    Should we include our agreement or disagreement in both body paragraphs

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Yes, I talk about it in greater detail in this video: ua-cam.com/video/v6kYss_Mp-g/v-deo.html

  • @jaspreetsharma4048
    @jaspreetsharma4048 Рік тому

    Great work lily

  • @omjwad2661
    @omjwad2661 2 місяці тому

    What about saying that i disagree with the second viewpoint,if the main idea is that they travel only for money?

  • @kdrama._.1
    @kdrama._.1 2 роки тому

    Could please upload some ielts listening tips ?

  • @n.s4476
    @n.s4476 2 роки тому

    Thanks dear Lillie❤

  • @ahmedraihan7781
    @ahmedraihan7781 2 роки тому

    Wow 👏 amazing explanation mam

  • @zartajkhan6470
    @zartajkhan6470 Рік тому

    Hello.I am glad to see your video about writing. Please, i need help . Its difficult for me to generate idea with an example

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      ChatGPT may help. I'm going to make a video about it.

    • @dtdoantrang
      @dtdoantrang Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS I am looking forward to watching!!

  • @PriankaHowlader
    @PriankaHowlader Рік тому

    Soooo helpful❤

  • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
    @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Рік тому

    Hi teacher in your intro you only write one people argument but in other side you write directly your opinion and idea
    If we write like that in exam is this good.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Hi, please note the use of the plural term "competing views", meaning there are two different views. So I didn't present only one side of the argument.

    • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
      @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS can you check my introduction for me 🙏

  • @meegrace599
    @meegrace599 Місяць тому

    Thank You

  • @AndrewSamy-z3z
    @AndrewSamy-z3z Рік тому

    My test date is on the 18th of October, and I am a bit disappointed because I only have 1 week to be prepared. I believe that my weaknesses are in writing task 2 and speaking. Do you think I can make a big change in 7 days?

    • @AndrewSamy-z3z
      @AndrewSamy-z3z Рік тому

      By the way, I have already practiced before but I mean that only 7 days left for me to practice more.

  • @saadakhtar8634
    @saadakhtar8634 2 роки тому

    I have a question related to your answer as in Q, it mentioned only doctors and engineers, and not etc which indicates we must write the essay in the context of only these 2 professions.
    Is it right to ans generally?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      H, doctors and engineers are there to help you understand what they mean by "professionals". It doesn't matter how many professions you write.

  • @harwinderpalkaur2492
    @harwinderpalkaur2492 Рік тому

    Kindly make vedios on speaking module too

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Speaking isn't my strength. I may make listening videos though .😊

  • @dandyminn4352
    @dandyminn4352 2 роки тому

    Hi!
    Should I include the ideas of both views in my thesis statement or one which I side is enough?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Hi, please watch the introductory-paragraph section at 11:47 and the conclusion-paragraph section at 14:06.

  • @muhammadazizurrahmanashik7853

    Thanks

  • @jaylil9442
    @jaylil9442 2 роки тому

    I really like your efforts so we can write two idea in body para1 and two ideas in body para 2 in opinion essay ? Please give me some suggestion about these?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Better not. If you do that, you won't be able to fully develop your ideas.

  • @Laura-sl4ev
    @Laura-sl4ev 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you Lillie for the great video.

  • @ehsandaryadel8202
    @ehsandaryadel8202 2 роки тому +1

    Wonderful. Would it be ok if you could create a video for to what extent do you agree or disagree questions? Thank you

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Great suggestion! What challenges do you face when writing an agree-or-disagree essay?

    • @ehsandaryadel8202
      @ehsandaryadel8202 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS Basically the problem is with the phrase "to what extent" and the difference with the simple do you agree/disagree. Is it ok if I simply include reasons for my agreement or disagreement with the statement or there should be another strategy?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      They are the same except that you need to say something like "I *completely/totally* agree" if it's a to-what-extent essay.

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

    Your lessons are quite fascinating

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Appreciate the kind words!💜💜😊

  • @gorkhalegendsyt8714
    @gorkhalegendsyt8714 Рік тому

    thanks

  • @harwinderpalkaur2492
    @harwinderpalkaur2492 Рік тому

    Lilie kindly upload ur listening vedio please. I m waiting from long time to watch your vedio.

    • @harwinderpalkaur2492
      @harwinderpalkaur2492 Рік тому

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    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      I'm working on it.

  • @rohanadhikari1668
    @rohanadhikari1668 Рік тому

    Hey lilie my teacher said we can't write opinion in discussion essay's introductory paragraph can u make me clear about this?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Our opinion should be clear throughout the essay!

    • @rohanadhikari1668
      @rohanadhikari1668 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS can i write opinion on introduction?

  • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
    @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Рік тому

    I need your help can you check this for me is this good or not.
    Topic is some say children should aim to be best other " " not necessary.
    There have been competing views on whether it is mandatory for children to do their best in each and every task. In my opinion they no need to perform each tasks accurately because aim to do best always bring more stress and this approach may effect their overall growth.
    ( My first time to use this method so I request you can check). From india

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      "Mandatory" doesn't work in your paraphrase. Try this: There have been competing views on whether children should strive to be the best. Is this a discuss-both-views essay? If it is, it's best to give only one reason for the side you agree with but you provided two.

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

    Can u please do video on tables task 1 individually..

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Thanks for the suggestion. For now, you can read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/

  • @poojapunia8708
    @poojapunia8708 2 роки тому

    M just having confusion in this video can you explain it to me Mam

  • @bennph_
    @bennph_ Рік тому

    Can we state our opinions in the body paragraph?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Yes and it's necessary to do so in a discuss-both-views essay.

    • @bennph_
      @bennph_ Рік тому

      How about other types of essay?

  • @조바이든-r6r
    @조바이든-r6r 2 роки тому

    I was waiting for u

  • @rkaur2888
    @rkaur2888 2 роки тому +1

    Hi mam, 🙃
    Could give a suggestion on advantage or disadvantage essay? Should I stick to one point or describe both ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Hi, these two videos may help.
      ua-cam.com/video/DItz_lnAG78/v-deo.html
      ua-cam.com/video/c_iMuGaIXd8/v-deo.html

    • @rkaur2888
      @rkaur2888 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS thanks

    • @rkaur2888
      @rkaur2888 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS but a particular type advantage or disadvantage

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Do you mean "positive or negative development"? ua-cam.com/video/dFPVRy_siS0/v-deo.html

  • @ohidvhai5259
    @ohidvhai5259 Рік тому

    Best IELTS channel take love sister

  • @jaspreetkaursidhu2628
    @jaspreetkaursidhu2628 Рік тому

    Can we use informal words in writing ??..as brain drain Is informal word..

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      'Brain drain' is totally fine.

  • @kdrama._.1
    @kdrama._.1 2 роки тому +1

    What was your band score ?👍🏻🥰

  • @gaurisworkharel8692
    @gaurisworkharel8692 2 роки тому

    How can we write body paragraphs at exam??

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      Does this help? 😊 ua-cam.com/video/0JJHbByTYis/v-deo.html

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

    Correct me if I'm wrong but I think ma'am you have make punctuation mistake in body para 2 u write "I" capital word before comma

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      Where? Can you type the sentence for me please?

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

      You wrote in body para 2
      Since fulfilled workers are more likely to reach their full potential, I agree ( after comma I is capital

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      The pronoun "I" is always capitalized, no matter where it falls in a sentence.

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS ooh thanks

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 роки тому

      I did not know that before... it wonderful that I know my error. Appreciate your dedication towards teaching keep it up

  • @Studentlife67
    @Studentlife67 Рік тому

    I am facing problem in the opinion essay can you help me please

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Hi, you can read sample essays of this type on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/what-is-your-opinion/

  • @Myathew
    @Myathew 2 роки тому

    Can u help me with pdf for essay ma'am?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому

      What do you mean?

    • @Myathew
      @Myathew 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS Can ypu recommend me any books for IELTS writing task 2 ?Also u have some books in pdf,can u share with us?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      You can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

    • @Myathew
      @Myathew 2 роки тому

      @@LilieIELTS ❤️

    • @bikal849
      @bikal849 2 роки тому

      It is legal to write our opinion in body paragraphs I'm bit confused

  • @udochimbano3550
    @udochimbano3550 Рік тому +1

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  • @abishekthakur6552
    @abishekthakur6552 2 роки тому

    which country u belong to?

  • @gullahdon673
    @gullahdon673 6 місяців тому

    Your accent is too hard to understand