Do you make these 7 common mistakes in ielts writing task 1❓

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  • @JuditMeszaros-c7k
    @JuditMeszaros-c7k Рік тому +31

    Hi Lilie, Similarly to the previous commenter, I found your videos the most helpful, and used them a lot to improve my writing skills when preparing for my IELTS exam recently. The breakdown of the different types of writing tasks was relevant, clear, well explained, and full-round informative covering all the tiny details that can trip up a score. I was most worried about the academic writing task and I am pleased to say that I achieved 7.5 score - I am really happy with the outcome. Thank you. :)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +7

      Wooow, that's a really high score for the writing test, congratulations! And thank you so much for sharing your experience here.

  • @English_Camford
    @English_Camford Рік тому +13

    You teach students from heart not from your mouth. So caring for teaching students. You share every details inch by inch for the students. Keep helping students from different parts of the world. Wish you best of luck.
    Love from Bangladesh ❤❤❤

  • @minus2.0arts
    @minus2.0arts 10 місяців тому +4

    Thank you Lilie! Your explanation really give me epiphany on understanding how to compare data on writing task 1. I’m looking forward to watch another tips from you!

  • @raventsaini3134
    @raventsaini3134 Рік тому +14

    I've never found this much useful channel other than yours , really appreciate your efforts ❤ please keep it up 👍

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      really appreciate the kind words!😊💜

  • @Godblessme85
    @Godblessme85 Рік тому +5

    Wow! Thanks so much Lilie. This is top notch, straightforward, highly educative, informative and helpful.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Really appreciate the kind words!

  • @vyvy9239
    @vyvy9239 11 місяців тому +2

    Thanks for your great videos, Lilie. I've been watching your clips for 2 weeks before attending the test and I got 7 for writing. What you are doing is marvellous! Keep on the good work! Love from Vietnam.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  11 місяців тому +1

      Congratulations and wish you a bright future ahead!💕😊

  • @army-9390
    @army-9390 Рік тому +2

    Lilie, I don't know how to thank you for these useful videos :) They're better than other tutorials from any other channels. Other than that, I love that you always teach us something new! Not something we had already heard for thousands of times from other tutors. Thank you, thank you and thank you!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Really appreciate your kind words!😊♥

  • @_A_Nguyen_Tat_inh_N
    @_A_Nguyen_Tat_inh_N Рік тому +4

    You saved my life and I am completely appreciate your help ❤

  • @seal3897
    @seal3897 Рік тому +4

    Hi Lilie. I was very thankful that I came across your channel. I was struggling with the writing part of IELTS but watching your videos help me a lot and because of that, I already achieved the score I needed. Thank you. Keep up the good work! ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      This is great news, congratulations! Do you mind sharing your score here?

  • @GeorgeChuy
    @GeorgeChuy Рік тому +3

    From the 2nd mistake, i am finally convinced every Chinese is a mathematician.

  • @rhondagarcia2875
    @rhondagarcia2875 Рік тому +2

    I'm studying IELTS now, and your video is very helpful to me. I'm confident to get 7 points in IELTS again. Thank you.😘

  • @nimeshkarki9367
    @nimeshkarki9367 2 місяці тому +1

    You are the best teacher . Your videos are so helpful to understand varities of technique in easy way.

  • @gauravmahey6104
    @gauravmahey6104 Рік тому +1

    It was very helpful, I got to know about a new term 'Percentage Points'. Thank you very much ❤

  • @praveen5424
    @praveen5424 8 місяців тому

    you're the best ielts tutor I have ever found on UA-cam. 😊 keep doing this,

  • @种花家的麻辣兔头
    @种花家的麻辣兔头 6 місяців тому +2

    I haven’t understand the difference between “of” and “among “. Is “among” correct here? 21:23

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  6 місяців тому +1

      "Of" is way better than "among". Another example: China is the richest (country) of the five countries.

  • @kggamers7643
    @kggamers7643 Рік тому +1

    You are so underated . You should have more subscribers with the way you teach us

  • @SukhvirsinghCheema-xq9gq
    @SukhvirsinghCheema-xq9gq Рік тому

    THIS ONE OF THE BEST CHANNEL FOR WRITING

  • @avee_nash
    @avee_nash 9 місяців тому

    After wandering for a long time in search of best ielts tutorial videos on youtube, I just got one as I want.

  • @mohammadjahani9109
    @mohammadjahani9109 Рік тому +1

    Thanks Lilie, your videos are full of useful points!

  • @TaniaJerry-j6h
    @TaniaJerry-j6h Рік тому

    This was a wonderful video with much detailed description. Your efforts to make learners understand is appreciable. I FOUNFD IT REALLY HELPFUL. Love from India:)

  • @jopiesoen
    @jopiesoen Рік тому +1

    I just found this channel. Interesting materials you have there. Please keep it up!!

  • @manzolee3784
    @manzolee3784 4 місяці тому

    really helpful thank you so much

  • @sangeenalbulushi806
    @sangeenalbulushi806 7 місяців тому

    Wow you’re teaching as engineer!!! I love your teaching, those are the techniques not like what the native are teaching! I think that’s bc you’re like us international person.

  • @fidanfazilova3542
    @fidanfazilova3542 Рік тому +1

    tomorrow, i m taking the real exam. Thank you, Lilie!

  • @parhammohammadnazar8882
    @parhammohammadnazar8882 11 місяців тому

    Hi
    Thanks dear Lilie for sharing this useful video.

  • @nafisaumarova4202
    @nafisaumarova4202 Рік тому +1

    The smartest video i have ever watched 😂😅❤❤❤thanks!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      You are so kind😊

    • @nafisaumarova4202
      @nafisaumarova4202 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS let's make new videos on speaking

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      ​@@nafisaumarova4202 What challenges do you encounter in speaking? Can you be specific?

    • @nafisaumarova4202
      @nafisaumarova4202 Рік тому

      ​@@LilieIELTSi have no problem with my accent,vocab,but really stuck at part 3 and can't speak nonstop without hesitation

    • @nafisaumarova4202
      @nafisaumarova4202 Рік тому

      Are you chinese😊?

  • @mdsamadali1511
    @mdsamadali1511 Рік тому +1

    i enjoy your classes,they are so effective 🎉

  • @mohdrafi5025
    @mohdrafi5025 Рік тому

    thank you for all ur efforts and kindness teach in such a great way.
    respect and love from Afghanistan

  • @sabihabegum-ys9cu
    @sabihabegum-ys9cu Рік тому +1

    Nice to see you mam ❤.. you cannot imagine how much essential it for me before my upcoming exam.. numerous ❤❤ n thanksgiving again

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Best of luck! Don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

    • @sabihabegum-ys9cu
      @sabihabegum-ys9cu Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS surely mam.😍

  • @MdAhsan-xm5er
    @MdAhsan-xm5er 7 місяців тому

    You are going great ❤

  • @sanusahani5521
    @sanusahani5521 Рік тому +1

    Please make such videos ❤❤your videos are very effective❤

  • @alirezaalavi6068
    @alirezaalavi6068 6 місяців тому

    amazing content! thanks a lot

  • @silverlining6051
    @silverlining6051 Рік тому

    Very useful tutorial. Many thanks for sharing.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      glad that you liked it!💜😊

  • @kianahajizadeh6244
    @kianahajizadeh6244 Рік тому

    You are the best! I learnt a lot of things from you❤

  • @navsandhu9575
    @navsandhu9575 Рік тому +1

    I am from India and love your teaching style you are fabulous 🤩🤩

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      thanks for the kind words!😊

  • @MaxieAli
    @MaxieAli Рік тому +1

    I only have 2 days left to study and I wish I found your channel earlier
    #Edit after the test: I got overall of 6.5 and I needed 5
    L & S= 7 R=6.5 W=5.5, I knew nothing about task 1 and learned everything from ur videos, and your technique in R and L, really helped me. Thank you so much, I recommend your channel to all of my friends ❤️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here with us.😊

    • @MaxieAli
      @MaxieAli Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS I have finished watching most of your videos. This is the best channel I found, I'll definitely share my results with u. Thank you for everything.+ I wish you made more videos about speaking and writing task 2 vocabulay

  • @RezaHayatian
    @RezaHayatian Рік тому

    Brilliant Job🤩

  • @shantadutta8392
    @shantadutta8392 Рік тому

    May God bless you❤❤...thanks 💕💕

  • @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы
    @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы 3 місяці тому

    thank you so much!

  • @shyletbenge7506
    @shyletbenge7506 Рік тому

    Really helpful 👌 👏

  • @raisuloyon2137
    @raisuloyon2137 Рік тому

    Your videos have helped me a lot in my ielts exam. Thank you ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Glad to hear that and don't forget to come back and share your test result here when it comes out.

  • @sekhonjatt324
    @sekhonjatt324 Рік тому

    Superb very informative video thankew dear 💕god bless u ❣️lv from PUNJAB🤟🤟

  • @ayshabinte413
    @ayshabinte413 Місяць тому

    Plz make vedio writing task 2..... For how to generate ideas?? My writing level 5 but my exam is 30 November

  • @Kammydesigns
    @Kammydesigns Рік тому

    Thank you for this🥰

  • @ali1738p
    @ali1738p Рік тому

    In 5:46 part of the video 46.3 and 57.3 , these are not initial and final value. These are the percentages, so i think increase 11 percent is correct

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Ask ChatGPT if you don't believe me.😊

    • @ali1738p
      @ali1738p Рік тому

      Yep, I checked it. You’re right. Just delicate point require scrutiny. Thanks🙏

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      @@ali1738p You trust ChatGPT so much.😊

  • @michaelala4706
    @michaelala4706 Рік тому

    Exam in three hours your videos have fixed mistakes I never knew I was making

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Hope you did well and don't forget to come back and share your test result here!😊

    • @michaelala4706
      @michaelala4706 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS they rescheduled my test till next week, more time to watch more of your content I guess!

  • @michaelala4706
    @michaelala4706 Рік тому +1

    Results are Out! 8.0 in writing, overall 8.5/9

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Amazing scores and thank u so much for sharing them here!

  • @AveRegina_
    @AveRegina_ Рік тому +1

    Amazing 🙌
    I've my IELTS exam tomorrow. Please wish me luck.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Best of luck✊ and don't forget to come back and share your test result here with us.

    • @AveRegina_
      @AveRegina_ Рік тому +3

      @@LilieIELTS I got an overall 8 band and 7 or above in individual sections 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      @@AveRegina_ amazing scores, congratulations!

  • @ChathuniSellahewa-df6jy
    @ChathuniSellahewa-df6jy 10 місяців тому

    Hi lilie can u tell how we start all this vedios as beginners 😮..... Please tell me about plane

  • @stevecharles9059
    @stevecharles9059 Рік тому

    老师讲的真好,这些错误俺也有犯过,感觉就是为俺量身定做的课程😁,谢谢

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      我以前也是犯这些错误的😊

  • @arathyanu6217
    @arathyanu6217 Рік тому

    Please do make a video on Cambridge book:3 test 4 writing task 1 line graph

  • @fardinislam123
    @fardinislam123 Рік тому

    Is it's ok to write...
    Washing machines were the most common electric appliances among the three electric appliances in 1920,
    8:17*

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      No, you should use "of".

    • @fardinislam123
      @fardinislam123 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS Ok .
      By the way, your videos are really helpful. Your channel is a comprehensive package for IELTS Writing. I'm your ardent fan.
      Take love 💖

  • @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv
    @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv Рік тому

    thank you for all those points. where can I get some academic essays with model answers?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Hi, you can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

  • @saniyathakur4867
    @saniyathakur4867 Рік тому

    Thank you so much ❤❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      thanks for being the first to comment😊

  • @selfkrunal
    @selfkrunal Рік тому

    Make it video on how to read paragraphs ❤

  • @mdsamadali1511
    @mdsamadali1511 Рік тому +1

    Love from Bangladesh

  • @itsjandi536
    @itsjandi536 Рік тому

    Mam please suggest me video for task 1 variations

  • @onmy5505
    @onmy5505 Рік тому

    Greetings from Bangladesh. ❤️❤️

  • @blacksupreme5068
    @blacksupreme5068 Рік тому

    Lilli looks so gorgeous day by day 😮 wow 😮 by the way
    Thanks for your information ❤
    4th may my exam please pray for me everyone, I am so nervous 😢. Love from Bangladesh 🇧🇩

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Best of luck! Don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

  • @nimraghulam9887
    @nimraghulam9887 6 місяців тому

    Hy i wamt to ask in ielts reading if answer is habitats and if i write habitat will it be conder as wrong answer ??

  • @kaurpawan2222
    @kaurpawan2222 Рік тому

    Hi, mam please make video on complex sentences

  • @AhmedRaza-hg9zd
    @AhmedRaza-hg9zd Рік тому

    I got 6 band in writing in just 10 days. After watching u lesson videos.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      This is great news, congratulations!

  • @عبادالرحمان-ك7ب

    Hi,
    I think that we can say : increased by 11% to reach 57.3% in 2020.
    To be honest i didn't see anyone saying that we should write: it increased by 11 percentage points to 57.3%.
    However, this is my opinion.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Ask ChatGPT if you don't believe me.

  • @omjwad2661
    @omjwad2661 Рік тому +1

    🎉Hi, you said that "of" is used to compare one member to the rest of the group. But in the example of " the highest percentage of the three electrical appliances" you said it's ok to use among, too.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Yes, that's correct.

    • @omjwad2661
      @omjwad2661 Рік тому

      What I meant here is that, you warned people to use "among" where we should use of. you said if we are comparing one member to the rest of the group we shouldn't use among. while here, in this example, "the highest percentage of the three electrical appliances" you said we can use 'among" how? we are also here, comparing a one-member to the rest of the group.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      @@omjwad2661 both of and among can be used in that sentence.

  • @mexrojiddin_7o7
    @mexrojiddin_7o7 Рік тому

    Hi Liliegreetings from uzbekistan I appreciate your videos thanks for sharing this kind of videos 0:47

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      appreciate the kind words!😊

  • @AftabAnsari-ru4wo
    @AftabAnsari-ru4wo Рік тому

    Love u lilly and also love the way you teach ❤ hope i 'll score in writing 7+
    I also requested to u plz make a video about Task -2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      I'll make a task 2 video after I finish the table video I'm currently working on.😊

    • @AftabAnsari-ru4wo
      @AftabAnsari-ru4wo Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS tq u lilly from the bottom of my heart ❤️ u r so kind 😁

  • @mukithasan9324
    @mukithasan9324 10 місяців тому

    Hi ma'am I From Bangladesh i am new subscribe member to your you tube Chelan 🎉

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 Рік тому

    Hey hey hey.... Lilie i got my desire band in writing... Thank you so much for your help, without you i unable to get band in writing module. Again thanks a lot dear❤😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Wowww, congratulations! What's your score?

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 Рік тому

      L - 7
      R - 6
      W - 6.5
      S - 6.5

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      amazing scores, congratulations again!

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 Рік тому

      All credit goes to u.. Last time i stuck only in writing (5.5). But this time smacked⚡.

  • @thanhtrucnguyen9918
    @thanhtrucnguyen9918 Рік тому

    Hi Lilie. I'm confused about "The proportion of over-65s in Japan is predicted to double by 10% by 2030"". What do you mean "double by 10% by 2030"". I can't get it. Would you mind explaining it for me please? Thank you in advanced.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Hi, I used "to 10%" and not "by 10%". Here an explanation from ChatGPT:
      When you move from 5% to 10%, you are effectively increasing the value by another 5 percentage points. This is a 100% increase relative to the original value of 5%.
      To put it in another way, if you take the original value (5%) and add another 5 percentage points, you end up with 10%, which is double the original value.
      So, in this context, the percentage has doubled because you've increased it by an amount equal to the original percentage value.

    • @thanhtrucnguyen9918
      @thanhtrucnguyen9918 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS Thank you very much. Your videos are really good sources to learn IELTS writing.

  • @N_anz
    @N_anz Рік тому

    lilie ielts, thank you so much for such precious information . if you have a platform to give corrections wold have been bettter.

  • @UjjwalSingh-tn2jg
    @UjjwalSingh-tn2jg Місяць тому

    Brushing up everyone's skills

  • @tp6601
    @tp6601 Рік тому

    can you upload writing task 2 something coz my exam is nearby. Your explanation is superb thats why🙏❤️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      I've covered all types of task 2 questions. You can check them out on the playlists page: www.youtube.com/@LilieIELTS/playlists

    • @tp6601
      @tp6601 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thank you ms Lillie
      🙏❤️from Srilanka 🇱🇰

  • @christianshubham3430
    @christianshubham3430 Рік тому

    This is first time we see you in video 😅

  • @hamzashabbir1706
    @hamzashabbir1706 Рік тому

    Dear Lillie, I have a query related to IELTS answer sheet. My test was yesterday. When I filled my answer sheet I wrote
    Not given , Not Given
    Yes
    No
    True
    False
    I didn't use capital letters. Is this ok to write in this manner?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      I'm not sure if this is okay, sorry.

  • @CuongNguyen-pt7yp
    @CuongNguyen-pt7yp Рік тому

    I have watched many videos from native English teachers who are ielts examiners. But none of them use percentage points eventhough your explanation is reasonable. I am confused now and wondered if it is acceptable in a real exam. Also, can i write 5% points instead of 5 percentage points?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Only '5 percentage points' is correct. You can google 'percentage points' to learn more about it.

  • @jjyy9791
    @jjyy9791 Рік тому

    perfect

  • @danieldesalegn5386
    @danieldesalegn5386 Рік тому

    In short....You are awesome!

  • @selfkrunal
    @selfkrunal Рік тому

    Can we use the Rollercoaster word ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      what do you mean by "Rollercoaster word"?

    • @selfkrunal
      @selfkrunal Рік тому

      ​@@LilieIELTSup and down 〽️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      @@selfkrunal Yes, you can say "go up and down".

  • @christianshubham3430
    @christianshubham3430 Рік тому

    Can you make videos on reading pleaseeeeeeee

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      What problems exactly do you have with reading?

    • @christianshubham3430
      @christianshubham3430 Рік тому

      all types of reading questions. Can you give me some best strategies??

  • @amirabbasworld
    @amirabbasworld Рік тому

    too much useful words for me.

  • @anjit12
    @anjit12 Рік тому

    Can you please take online class through Zoom?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Not now, maybe in the future.😊

  • @yogeshdhakal8620
    @yogeshdhakal8620 Рік тому

    My exam is on May 9, and I am worried about my writing section :(

  • @Montage812
    @Montage812 Рік тому

    Why u are too cuteee☺️
    Love you mam🖤🖤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      why?😊

    • @Montage812
      @Montage812 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS Tysm🖤
      Aww..😋You noticed my silly mistake☺️That's mine mam🖤

  • @mdsamadali1511
    @mdsamadali1511 Рік тому

    Give us a detailed video about Map

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      check out my map playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PL5kdBcGvqFLrT507zcB74rh1pSyuhF9XK.html

  • @STEVENOTIENO-pf2fu
    @STEVENOTIENO-pf2fu Рік тому

    you are speaking too fast.

  • @maximizeyourbrain-power9451

    you said you got 8.5 three times, who gets 9.0 Band then? Injustice has been committed.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      A viewer commented that he or she got a 9 in listening!

  • @christianshubham3430
    @christianshubham3430 Рік тому

    What's your email

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      www.ieltsessaybank.com/contact/

  • @christianshubham3430
    @christianshubham3430 Рік тому

    What's your instagram?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      My IG account is private, sorry.