Good Lord! The one story which I predicted that the Good Doctor wouldn't narrate... he actually narrates! Then... THEN!... you guys comment that you actually like the story! WTF is wrong with you folks? LOL! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story... I guess? Cheers! T_D
TD; everyone here is addicted to your writing! The only problem is, we are an insatiable bunch😅. When you put out quality stories like this one, all we can do is clamor for sequels!💛🙏🏼 "Moar!!"😂z
TD, you are an incredibly talented author bro. I can’t wait to hear or read more of your brilliance. I love visualizing every little detail like an awesome movie playing in my minds eye I just can’t take my eyes off of. I’m in the works of making a channel here to narrate horror stories as well however I honestly think no one else could have given your masterpiece of a story a better narration then The Doctor 🙌🏼
@cole curtis Yes!!! Exactly. I've loved the gunslinger and two towers ever since I read them 30 years ago. I was so excited for that movie. What a disappointment 😞
This was the most badass deadpool story i have ever heard hands down. Omg it didn't even occur to me until parker said "im your friendly neighborhood" holy crap
I know in thought it was a monster story till that even then I wasn't sure till he checked...tough are we sure it's DP and hit Deathstroke they have the same last game and this one isn't cracking jokes
@@megagundamva2694 same here. When the realization hit me my jaw dropped. And that is a fair point but i feel like the mr. Pool leans more torwards deadpool. It could be an alternate universe where he doesn't get the mutant gene and therefore doesn't go insane
@@triflingbadger7989I also thought he could be Deadpool, but Deadpool isn't a "villain" so I did a Google search and found Deathstroke real name Slade Joseph Wilson. Based on the Wikipedia page his talents and training coupled with who his adversaries are I think Deathstroke is a better fit for Mr Pool. en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deathstroke#:~:text=Deathstroke%20(Slade%20Joseph%20Wilson)%20is,books%20published%20by%20DC%20Comics.
Taxi Dancer stories are my personal favorite, just finished relistening to the marines in ancient Rome, a second part to that or a continuation of the navy seal stories would be great.
@@DrCreepen lol if anyone can do it Doc it's you 😜 Seriously though boss don't overstretch yourself. We are all always happy to have anything you can get to 👍👍
Thanks. To The man, the myth the legend The Good Dr⚕️ Thanks for keeping my insomniac mind occupied for a good bit ❤ I hope you and your loved ones enjoyed your weekend? I really enjoyed this one especially the twist at the end. I appreciate your narration as always. Blessings to you and yours from across the pond, Scotland. 🙏⚔️🏴⚔️🌹
Awsome story! Did NOT see that coming at the end, let me tell ya that much. Great narration, as well, which I have come to expect from my favorite doctor. The Doctor is in, and will see you now...
This just had chills running throughout my body…wowwwww what execution! I’m not a superhero-type story fan at all (I know a lot of people will throw shade at me for that and I accept it), but wow…this came in like a cryptid type story and came out as a superhuman story. Splendid work Doctor. One of my favorites that I’ve heard you tell thus far without question
It's good. I haven't even gotten more than 1 minute in, heard you say Taxi Dancer, and hit like immediately. That's my level of confidence in this combination.
I always start a story when I get home from the nights I work until midnight. Start a new story and roll my night joint and sit on my porch while I get spooky. Then head to bead with a headphone in to not bother my other half and finish the story in the morning. You have quickly become my favorite. Over CGS. Over Creepypod. Top notch narration good doctor. Top. Notch.
"Are we the baddies?" (a la Mitchell and Webb) I suspected that the "creature" was that nerd kid; however, I had no idea that he was a "good guy" and that Pool's employers were the evil ones. And so, apparently, was Pool, as he was only in it for the money. An Alfred Hitchcock twist if ever I saw one. An excellent story, Taxi Dancer; and an excellent narration by our Dear Doctor. Thank you both very much!
This is awesome! I love the subtle hints in the storytelling and the reveal at the end plus the blending I think is safe to say without spoilers. Beautifully written and superbly narrated! Than you
Thank you Taxi Dancer this was an outstanding story, I look forward to more Thank you good Dr for another excellent choice and another excellent narration
@Taxi dancer and @Dr. Creepen THIS WAS AN AMAZING SPINOFF!!! Could you imagine if this was made into a Marvel/DC coop movie and all the Marvel and DC fans losing their minds over it!!??!! Could you imagine if it was filmed as a monster slasher, having this suspence and reveal at the very end!?! Like if all the trailers portrayed the main character as a good guy fighting monsters, without revealing in any way how the story ends?!? IT WOULD BE EPIC!!! Taxi dancer, you did something incredible here!! I really hope thia gets used as a script for a movie!
Hahaha I knew it! As soon as he thought the "creature" had a sense it was in danger, I thought, imagine it's Spiderman he's after. LOL! And then that ending really shined the light on what had happened in the past, and what what was going to happen in the future, too. This story was truly a unique perspective on some popular comic book franchises. Well done.
Now that was a cool story . Hell I guess he's going to take out the whole Justice League. Then what , the Avengers? Excellent story Dr. Creepen indeed . Keep it up .
The hints were subtle but that's what made them amazing. "This one may be from a different universe than the aquatic one." Because Aquaman and Spider-Man are from the DC and Marvel universes!
Whoa, whoa...he just shot SPIDER-MAN?! Daaaang. Interesting idea. Got a chuckle out of "She looks Israeli to me," because we know why. :) That ending was awesome!
Spidey!! Noooo!!! LOL! A great story with a great twist. So, many name drops in this story. Loved it. Too bad the current MCU/DCEU can't come up with anything half as good as this and they've got tons of material to work with.
I love stories about creatures of the night! I'm snuggled in and started listening, but thought I better pause it so I can feed the algorithm and say, "Hi Doc!" Ok... Back to the story. Hope you're having a fantastic week!🤗💜🕷
I knew the detail of the kid with the brown hair would come back in play. I never dreamed it was Peter Parker! This dude killed some of my fav Superheros. 😡
Whoa,whoa whoa. So this guy was working for The Joker and Petrova was Harley Quinn. He hunted and killed Thor,AquaMan, And Spider-Man. Now his next target is BatMan. (Major D.C.-Marvel Crossover). Great story from beginning to end.
The second I heard Fisk law firm and the hells kitchen name drop and the description of the creature in black I knew what I was getting into....blew my mind when it came into fruition as a marvel creepypasta
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Good Lord! The one story which I predicted that the Good Doctor wouldn't narrate... he actually narrates! Then... THEN!... you guys comment that you actually like the story! WTF is wrong with you folks? LOL! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story... I guess? Cheers! T_D
TD; everyone here is addicted to your writing! The only problem is, we are an insatiable bunch😅. When you put out quality stories like this one, all we can do is clamor for sequels!💛🙏🏼 "Moar!!"😂z
Dude I love your work.
It's a damn shame we don't hear more.
I honestly wish I had your insight and creativity.
Long make you stories continue
*May
I'm suing you for breaking my ribs from laughing.
TD, you are an incredibly talented author bro. I can’t wait to hear or read more of your brilliance. I love visualizing every little detail like an awesome movie playing in my minds eye I just can’t take my eyes off of. I’m in the works of making a channel here to narrate horror stories as well however I honestly think no one else could have given your masterpiece of a story a better narration then The Doctor 🙌🏼
Loved it!!!
I knew something was up with the name Fisk...thought it was just an Easter egg. So gooooood!
The Man in Black fled across the desert and the Gunslinger followed.
Why couldn't that movie have been better
@@kenwinger7989 cause they always screw up the books made into movies🙄😕
@@kenwinger7989 Idris did a wonderful job with what he had to work with script wise
@cole curtis Yes!!! Exactly. I've loved the gunslinger and two towers ever since I read them 30 years ago. I was so excited for that movie. What a disappointment 😞
Brilliant books fuck the movie could have been soooo good if they just followed the books. Brillant cast and crew shit script..
That dude blasted spiderman. Excellent story and narration as always.
And torched aquaman lol
@@scrappydoo7887 I didn’t put that together till now lol
I couldnt help but chuckle at the realization and the guy's one liner afterwards. Like dude you literally asked him who he was lmao
I was thinking this the minute he mentioned the eyes I was like wait a second is he tracking Peter
That dude was Wade Wilson aka DEADPOOL
This was the most badass deadpool story i have ever heard hands down. Omg it didn't even occur to me until parker said "im your friendly neighborhood" holy crap
I know in thought it was a monster story till that even then I wasn't sure till he checked...tough are we sure it's DP and hit Deathstroke they have the same last game and this one isn't cracking jokes
@@megagundamva2694 same here. When the realization hit me my jaw dropped. And that is a fair point but i feel like the mr. Pool leans more torwards deadpool. It could be an alternate universe where he doesn't get the mutant gene and therefore doesn't go insane
@@triflingbadger7989I also thought he could be Deadpool, but Deadpool isn't a "villain" so I did a Google search and found Deathstroke real name
Slade Joseph Wilson.
Based on the Wikipedia page his talents and training coupled with who his adversaries are I think Deathstroke is a better fit for Mr Pool.
en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deathstroke#:~:text=Deathstroke%20(Slade%20Joseph%20Wilson)%20is,books%20published%20by%20DC%20Comics.
Ikr? That "I'm your friendly neighborhood...", turned everything around in a split second.. bravo! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
@@triflingbadger7989 possible
The extreme attention to detail the accuracy in description of weapons and tactics, make this a delight.
Sending Love ❤️....Julian..Are you single? ❤️🥰
Too bad the author can’t write dialogue.
My jaw was on the floor when the pieces came together
Timing is everything. Thank you more than you know. Xoxo
Hi 👋
Taxi Dancer stories are my personal favorite, just finished relistening to the marines in ancient Rome, a second part to that or a continuation of the navy seal stories would be great.
Absolutly love taxi Dancer's stories. Wasn't there a part 2 to the space marines story?
There is and I haven't gotten round to doing it yet because it's 3 hours long!
@@DrCreepen lol if anyone can do it Doc it's you 😜
Seriously though boss don't overstretch yourself. We are all always happy to have anything you can get to 👍👍
@Dr. Creepen 3 hours you might be able to split it to 3 1 hour sections, better for the algorithm and you could combine it later.
Thanks. To The man, the myth the legend The Good Dr⚕️ Thanks for keeping my insomniac mind occupied for a good bit ❤ I hope you and your loved ones enjoyed your weekend? I really enjoyed this one especially the twist at the end. I appreciate your narration as always. Blessings to you and yours from across the pond, Scotland. 🙏⚔️🏴⚔️🌹
Very kind of you!
Awsome story! Did NOT see that coming at the end, let me tell ya that much. Great narration, as well, which I have come to expect from my favorite doctor.
The Doctor is in, and will see you now...
Excellent story! I had a feeling it was the nerd, but the Spider-Man part threw me for a loop. Loved it! Keep em coming Doc. 😱
Great story. Taking out super heros. Waiting on the next chapter. Writing and reading top shelf
Hell’s Kitchen? Fisk? I fully expected Daredevil to show up in this story.😂
Definitely did not appreciate the writer's story, but Dr. Creepen always narrates stories excellently.
This just had chills running throughout my body…wowwwww what execution! I’m not a superhero-type story fan at all (I know a lot of people will throw shade at me for that and I accept it), but wow…this came in like a cryptid type story and came out as a superhuman story. Splendid work Doctor. One of my favorites that I’ve heard you tell thus far without question
Hands down one of my favorite authors the Great Taxi Dancer and the best narrator the good Doctor I hope you are feeling better.
It's good. I haven't even gotten more than 1 minute in, heard you say Taxi Dancer, and hit like immediately. That's my level of confidence in this combination.
For sure 👍 taxi is one of the very best story writers I've have seen on UA-cam as a whole that has consistently written great stories
Good Doctor, as always you never disappoint. Taxi Dancer, thank you for an amazing story!
Holy shit! What a ride!
Thank you for all you do, your such a great narrator, you help relax my mind at night and put me to sleep 👍🏻👏🏻💕
Sending Love ❤️...Brandy...Are you single? 🥰
Wow, thank you!
Just tuned in! Thankyou Dr! Great timing! 😊
Hello 👋
Wonderful!
The gears in my brain are throwing sparks! Bravo 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽
I always start a story when I get home from the nights I work until midnight. Start a new story and roll my night joint and sit on my porch while I get spooky. Then head to bead with a headphone in to not bother my other half and finish the story in the morning. You have quickly become my favorite. Over CGS. Over Creepypod. Top notch narration good doctor. Top. Notch.
BEST TWIST EVER !!
Thank you for this amazing story !!
Absolutely loved it !!!
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
"Are we the baddies?"
(a la Mitchell and Webb)
I suspected that the "creature" was that nerd kid; however, I had no idea that he was a "good guy" and that Pool's employers were the evil ones. And so, apparently, was Pool, as he was only in it for the money. An Alfred Hitchcock twist if ever I saw one.
An excellent story, Taxi Dancer; and an excellent narration by our Dear Doctor. Thank you both very much!
This is awesome! I love the subtle hints in the storytelling and the reveal at the end plus the blending I think is safe to say without spoilers.
Beautifully written and superbly narrated! Than you
Thank you Taxi Dancer this was an outstanding story, I look forward to more
Thank you good Dr for another excellent choice and another excellent narration
Our pleasure!
This made me smile and snort and I really needed it today! Thx!
@Taxi dancer and @Dr. Creepen THIS WAS AN AMAZING SPINOFF!!!
Could you imagine if this was made into a Marvel/DC coop movie and all the Marvel and DC fans losing their minds over it!!??!! Could you imagine if it was filmed as a monster slasher, having this suspence and reveal at the very end!?! Like if all the trailers portrayed the main character as a good guy fighting monsters, without revealing in any way how the story ends?!? IT WOULD BE EPIC!!! Taxi dancer, you did something incredible here!! I really hope thia gets used as a script for a movie!
Great story! Thank you Dr Creepen and the Author.
The Legion of Doom has been busy I see. Amazing story Doc!!
Hahaha I knew it! As soon as he thought the "creature" had a sense it was in danger, I thought, imagine it's Spiderman he's after. LOL! And then that ending really shined the light on what had happened in the past, and what what was going to happen in the future, too. This story was truly a unique perspective on some popular comic book franchises. Well done.
That... Was... Hilarious.
I did not expect this to turn into a marvel/DC villain introduction.
Please give us more of his stories!! This was so good!
I hope one day one of these 1 hour long horror stories get animated with you narrating over it. That would be so awesome!
Nooo way bro killed Spidey🤯, what the heck they sending him after the justice league🤯🫣😀, Awesome!!
Great story would like more of this needs more parts for sure cheers doc
This was phenomenal! Reminds me of the Clancy's splinter cell books.. My absolute favorite.. Please tell this author, MORE!
THANKS
HAHA! Brilliant :D Now I need to hear it again with the new perspective in mind :D Love it!
Great twist💯 Really didn't anticipate that. Fantastic narration 🤙
I really enjoyed this one. Will definitely be listening to part 2.😊
Now that was a cool story . Hell I guess he's going to take out the whole Justice League. Then what , the Avengers? Excellent story Dr. Creepen indeed . Keep it up .
Oh my that was yummy! Like a superhero/cryptid version of Wicked! Thank both you and the author for a very satisfying bedtime treat!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Way cool twist, would love to see the continuing of this story!
Very nice twist. Thanks for sharing this with us. More please.
That was a awesome story I hope it's a series great reading as always
I hope so too!
Oh, that was simply brilliant, I've been waiting for years for someone to smash that spider-nerd, lol.
Hey doc, been a while since i had my dose from you. Glad to see your stories are as interesting as they were when i subbed keep it up!😊
Great story with an awesome twist that i didn’t see coming!
5 million for one cryptid! The Winchesters would be pissed...
Definitely going to be following this. I love story’s where they follow the bad guys that win. Definitely was shocked that this was Spider-Man
The hints were subtle but that's what made them amazing. "This one may be from a different universe than the aquatic one." Because Aquaman and Spider-Man are from the DC and Marvel universes!
Omg I got to hear more of this story ASAP it's going to kill me until it drops😂😂😂 and as always great job doc
This one sounds like its gonna be good - cant wait. Been waiting for a good story all day.. thanks!
Hope you enjoy it!
He kills Spider-Man! Oh Lord have mercy!😂😂
Beautifully imagined and delivered
Wow I hope this becomes a series I'd love to hear more thank you Dr great job
I hope so too!
"The dolphins were once hostile to me."
Me: DOLPHONS?! What did you do to piss dolphins off?! 😂🤣😂🤣
Drink - check, time for some bedtime listening
Omg hahahahahaha that ending 😂
I can't breath. Hahahahaha
My ribs are breaking. Help.
Was not expecting my favorite superhero to be the "cryptid." What a weird twist
Omg! Death to the avengers!! Excellent narration, you made me love this! Seriously the best avengers story ever!!
He's killing off my superheroes! I don't know about this I'm really struggling here.😂😂😂
Oooh Tony Stark is gonna get you now! Great story!
Awesome story- I fell asleep so had to start over this morning.
Hope you enjoyed it!
@@DrCreepen you bet I did!
LOL, Well that was a big ol' plot twist. Wow. Cheers Doc, thanks for the great stories as always.
Whoa, whoa...he just shot SPIDER-MAN?! Daaaang. Interesting idea. Got a chuckle out of "She looks Israeli to me," because we know why. :) That ending was awesome!
Ok the idea that spandex types are cryptic is cool. But yeah that dude would have been toast,period. Good alternative story.
We need more of this series 🤙
I can tell this will be a series and I can’t wait lol. Loved it.
Omg that ending hahahahahahaha. When I heard the lawfirm name 'Fisk' I was suspicious!
Spidey!! Noooo!!! LOL! A great story with a great twist. So, many name drops in this story. Loved it. Too bad the current MCU/DCEU can't come up with anything half as good as this and they've got tons of material to work with.
I was definitely not expecting the way this story ended. Very interesting indeed.
YOU GOT ME DR CREEPEN 😂😂😂😂 I LOVE IT!!
I just have the old Spider-Man theme going in my head the whole time I am listening to this.
Bravo sir Bravo
I never thought I would hear a story like that one based on tha MCU+DCCU
I love stories about creatures of the night! I'm snuggled in and started listening, but thought I better pause it so I can feed the algorithm and say, "Hi Doc!" Ok... Back to the story. Hope you're having a fantastic week!🤗💜🕷
You are in for a treat!!
Well that was certainly a heck of a plot twist
Slade Wilson? 😂 Good twist.
Absolutely Mind BLOWING 🎉
Great story! Loved the ending!😂
Just listened. I really liked it Doc ♥️♥️♥️♥️😎🇦🇺✌️
Quite a twist. Very, very good.
That was an interesting twist on the present narrative. 👍
oooh, i love the noir vibe. EDIT: oh ok wow dang. oh man. this one is perfect for you, Dr. Creepen.
Cheers 😊 looking forward to this!
I knew the detail of the kid with the brown hair would come back in play. I never dreamed it was Peter Parker! This dude killed some of my fav Superheros. 😡
Whoa,whoa whoa. So this guy was working for The Joker and Petrova was Harley Quinn. He hunted and killed Thor,AquaMan, And Spider-Man. Now his next target is BatMan. (Major D.C.-Marvel Crossover). Great story from beginning to end.
Just tuning in thanks for yet another tale... I'm sorry to stray off topic but quick question.. any chance we'll be getting more of worst hotel?
The second I heard Fisk law firm and the hells kitchen name drop and the description of the creature in black I knew what I was getting into....blew my mind when it came into fruition as a marvel creepypasta
That was a really good twist! Great job narrating my friend! Thank you! 🕷
Thank you kindly!
Love when they throw true facts about our shady government into these stories 😅
Oh, no! Poor Mary Jane!
Best story ever I listen to everything story from everyone that is my favorite one I will tell everyone about you and the story
Your welcome
J&J
Great twist ending, fun story👍
Dead Pool and Harley Quinn. Bad guys taking out the god guys. LMAO.
Dead pool VS everyone....😂
Batman gonna kicc his ass tho...
❤ love the twist at the end very clever
That was wow. Im very confused at who i'm wanting to win. fantastic writing and great naration
This isn't fiction.
☝🏾😳
THIS.
Is a TRUE STORY.
Written under the guise of fiction.
There's more to this than people realize.