The supernatural monsters always have a fun feel to their horrors, but the human ones.... have a real disgust factor to them. And the villains of this tale are no exception....
@@poomop3750 Idk. I think humans end up being generic too. A lot of monsters in stories are pretty unique, but the human antagonists tend to be more cliche in my opinion. And with a monster it's scary because it's something otherworldly that doesn't really exist. Stories like this are usually a bit more anger inducing than fear inducing. Again, just my opinion tho. There are definitely some really good stories with human antagonists, they just tend to be based off of others more often than not.
@danielthemaniel7934 See thats the thing with monsters, you can only have so many "the creature had 4 arms and was starving covered in blood and screaming" type creatures before it gets old. Would it be scary to be in that situation? Heck yes it would be. But is it scary to read or listen to? Not really in my opinion. The unknowable is a good tool in literature when its used correctly, unfortunately many aspiring writers and 14 year olds on reddit don't use it well.
I can definitely see why some wouldn't like this one but as for me I absolutely loved it! Like watching a movie but better seeing as the good Doctor read it! Go Amy!
Sometimes a story comes along that just seems to get it. It is well written. Very strong. Thank you for sharing. I'm sending each person who reads this comment so much love
This was an spin tingling reminder of what happened to me without the death and gore but lured, fooled, robbed, beaten, ziptied, kidnapped, but they got sloppy and I waited till the odds got even...
Sure, and I’m billy badass, I totally go talking about the traumatic things that have happened to me pretending that I’m a badass and totally “got even”.
@@aaronsmith5947 I mean yeah, most victims don't go broadcasting themselves you know on account of it being a horrible thing to go through that they'd never try to paint in a positive light. Shame that people like them think its something cool to pretend to have experienced.
I have to say I’m so glad that I stuck with this story. I loved the ending! Believe it or not this actually made me have not so good dreams! Thank you for sharing!
The thing that got me about this story, is the fact that stuff like this actually happens. Far too often too. Some people are absolutely sick. With that said though, this was a very intense story and your narration had me hooked
Having a young daughter situation like this keeps me awake at night. My fear turns to anger. There are men capable of this everywhere, women just don't understand how dangerous men can be. For a father,husband grandfather, brother any man who would die before seeing any woman he loves ever hurt, this is pure terror. The only advice to give is make your stand and fight when you have your chance and go for the eyes.
@@thaLikeButton1. Fewer than men, when considering prison 2. Fewer than the number of false accusations 3. Not everything has to be about women. What kind of person can't hear a factual statement about men's issues without spaszing out about women's issues?
@@SeanWinters 1. I never took a factual statement about men and made it about women, you took a factual statement about women and made it about men 2. I know you pulled that statistic out your ass 3. You're only concerned with "men get falsely accused blah blah", and I know. Everyone knows it happens. It's happened to me. But that has nothing to do with anything, it's just a horror story. Go touch grass or something
This one was really hard to get through, but in a good way. Very well written with a mostly satisfying ending (I kinda wish the dudes had each suffered much more). However, still a great story and narration. Thank you as always!!
Thank you Good Doc! I can handle stories like this one as long as little children are not involved. Really enjoy the longer stories like this as they are great to fall asleep to. ❤
Well then. I think the antagonists probably should have suffered more than they did, but that's only because I'm a vengeful bitch, lol. Very good story as always!
Yeah he definitely did deserve more but she was in no position the actually be able to do anything she was not only outnumbered but she was outmatched on physical strength too Also the main antagonist also has "crazy strength" and "crazy endurance" like the guy was still both calm and super strong after being thrown down 24 steep stairs
My brother and I were driving in the Nevada desert when we came upon a car wreck, two cars tangled together and people sitting in the dark on the side of the road. We had to drive miles to get them help and it’s pretty barren out there, we both have that surreal feeling about it like it was a dream 28 years later.
Awesomr story and narration. It malkes my night when i see you post a story your soothing voice helps me relax since im going through alot right now. Thank you Doctor Creepen❤❤
It wasn't bad by any means, it's just I listen to these stories for paranormal and super-natural content. This was basically "Last House on the Left" and "I Spit on Your Grave." Unfortunately by the time I realized this I was aldready in to deep.
I’ve been alive a long long time - too long some might argue - and I’ve had cars break down on the side of the road more times than I’d care to guess. Every single time I’ve gotten out and popped the hood. And you know how many times that’s resulted in me making a few judicious adjustments and heading off on my way ? Not one damn time. I frankly don’t know why I bother. I only mention it because I bet a discouraging number of people who’ve slogged through this post share my perfect score. Nice story Doc. Like a cross between Deliverance and Henry - Portrait Of A Serial Killer. Just the sort of yarn to soothe my bubbling moon juices.
I’ll make a note to everyone: if you ever find yourself in a kidnapping situation, and have any access to the driver, do all you can to wreck the vehicle. Kick the transmission shifter, steering wheel, anything that makes the vehicle go wild. Do Whatever it takes. And if/when you crash, it’s always going to be better than what was coming.
This kind of story boils my blood. Me and some close friends stumbled across a scenario like this but we ended up stopping it....the good old fashioned way. Luckily we stopped it before either of the girls were fully...well you know. I do often think about how that situation would have gone if we hadn't gotten there when we did. Small town police didn't even detain us for whooping those guys a$$es.
Its a very sad fact that a huge percentage of women & girls have experienced some form of sexual assault at some time in their lives, myself included. Most do not report it. This story was exceptionally well written and as always... narrated to perfection. Thanks, Doc 💜
Wow…she went really off the rails!!! I can see why you don’t do them very often, however it was a phenomenal tale with great narration as always. She truly let her inner demon take hold of that situation
I’ve heard this story before from one of the many horror stories channels. Except hearing what you thought about this is something I was curious to hear.
By the end I was kicking, clawing & stabbing those monsters along with her. It felt good that she won, sorry for her friend. I think we’ve all known guys who in our imaginations could’ve behaved like that if the circumstances were right & thank goodness never got to find out if we were fight. Anyway I felt good at the end & agree with the Dr, it was well worth the listen.
I’m only at 23:46 and my blood pressure is going sky high. I’m going to have to take a break for a bit and calm down. These types I have purposely gone after to teach them that they cannot do this shit. And then showed them why. Consequences can come in so many ways…
#904-✅👍 If you find your self in a headlock being dragged backwards.. don't try to get arms off, grab his legs and trip him. Natural reflexes will make them let go! ✌️🎯😉✅
Stories like this make me somewhat irrationally angry, I know it’s a fictional story but I still get this feeling of rage not being able to kick the shit outta the frat boys for suck acts. I may need a therapist. Lol
This one is more realistic than the usual (in that vile, opportunistic predators take advantage of people in tough situations) but the attempt at a slight supernatural ending was out of place. Not much fun, but the narration itself was excellent as always!
But it wasn't actually supernatural. He wouldn't have died if he were actually some evil spirit. He was just a not-quite-dead-yet evil human. His voice sounded demonic because of the liquid in his throat and mouth and his vocal chords being severed.
There is NOTHING _"domestic violence"_ about this, it's flat out *murderous assault* by deranged psychopaths. Conflating the two helps the psychopaths out IMMENSELY.
Such a shame Peter never stood up for himself and the girls despite having many windows opened. He was young and confused but was old enough to make his own decisions. He lived as Keaton's slave and would die as Keaton's slave.
You were right Dr., I can’t listen anymore. I suppose as it’s had such a profound effect on me that it is well written. Like an actor who plays a role so well that you end up hating the actor and not the character. It’s just blood boiling.
Ladies, please buy a handgun to protect yourself. When your mouth saying "no leave me alone" isn't enough, 9mm jacketed hollow points say "No" quite a bit harder.
I understand the need for a content warning but I will say that, in my opinion, horror is at its best when it's still able to disturb you. I'm not talking about SHOCK factor like Hollywood does with gore and trying to pass it off as horror, I mean genuinely disturbed or creeped out. When I was listening to this story I just imagined the absolute hopelessness those girls felt. They had no choice but to climb into that creepy car hoping for help and as the story plays out you are on the edge of your seat knowing what's coming but hoping it doesn't. I could feel their hopelessness the whole story and it had me genuinely disturbed and creeped out, that is what I consider good horror writing.
The supernatural monsters always have a fun feel to their horrors, but the human ones.... have a real disgust factor to them. And the villains of this tale are no exception....
Honestly stories with real humans instead of a generic monster are always the best
Wonderful explanation I personally just call it awesome
@@poomop3750 Idk. I think humans end up being generic too. A lot of monsters in stories are pretty unique, but the human antagonists tend to be more cliche in my opinion. And with a monster it's scary because it's something otherworldly that doesn't really exist. Stories like this are usually a bit more anger inducing than fear inducing. Again, just my opinion tho. There are definitely some really good stories with human antagonists, they just tend to be based off of others more often than not.
@danielthemaniel7934 See thats the thing with monsters, you can only have so many "the creature had 4 arms and was starving covered in blood and screaming" type creatures before it gets old. Would it be scary to be in that situation? Heck yes it would be. But is it scary to read or listen to? Not really in my opinion. The unknowable is a good tool in literature when its used correctly, unfortunately many aspiring writers and 14 year olds on reddit don't use it well.
No, these slime bags are the lowest form of discust and it's really disgusting there real people like, ,, that makes me sad
Man that was something else. Gotta listen to a werewolf pasta now can't have that be the last story of the night
I can definitely see why some wouldn't like this one but as for me I absolutely loved it! Like watching a movie but better seeing as the good Doctor read it! Go Amy!
It was so satisfying to hear every time she injured one of those guys, amazing feeling!
Sometimes a story comes along that just seems to get it. It is well written. Very strong. Thank you for sharing. I'm sending each person who reads this comment so much love
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This was an spin tingling reminder of what happened to me without the death and gore but lured, fooled, robbed, beaten, ziptied, kidnapped, but they got sloppy and I waited till the odds got even...
Sure, and I’m billy badass, I totally go talking about the traumatic things that have happened to me pretending that I’m a badass and totally “got even”.
@@acewmd.Seeing how they didnt contest it means your probably right
@@aaronsmith5947 I mean yeah, most victims don't go broadcasting themselves you know on account of it being a horrible thing to go through that they'd never try to paint in a positive light.
Shame that people like them think its something cool to pretend to have experienced.
Were you buggered?
People can be even more terrifying then any monster.... That was disturbing, and excellent !!!!
The Title is fitting and yes, I'm a survivor, but this was a good story.❤ I'm thankful for Dr. C's community to be on the road with me.
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Horrible bastards + two teen girls + alcohol + multi-tools = the sh1t has got real in the field! Thank you for narrating this story, Doctor Creepen!
I think the human monsters are so much scarier than all of the other types of monsters! Creepy tale Doctor!
I have to say I’m so glad that I stuck with this story. I loved the ending! Believe it or not this actually made me have not so good dreams! Thank you for sharing!
The thing that got me about this story, is the fact that stuff like this actually happens. Far too often too. Some people are absolutely sick. With that said though, this was a very intense story and your narration had me hooked
Having a young daughter situation like this keeps me awake at night. My fear turns to anger. There are men capable of this everywhere, women just don't understand how dangerous men can be. For a father,husband grandfather, brother any man who would die before seeing any woman he loves ever hurt, this is pure terror. The only advice to give is make your stand and fight when you have your chance and go for the eyes.
Imagine how many times guys get falsely accused of this?
@@SeanWinters yeah? That's completely beside the point. Imagine all the women this really happens to
@@thaLikeButton1. Fewer than men, when considering prison
2. Fewer than the number of false accusations
3. Not everything has to be about women. What kind of person can't hear a factual statement about men's issues without spaszing out about women's issues?
@@SeanWinters 1. I never took a factual statement about men and made it about women, you took a factual statement about women and made it about men
2. I know you pulled that statistic out your ass
3. You're only concerned with "men get falsely accused blah blah", and I know. Everyone knows it happens. It's happened to me. But that has nothing to do with anything, it's just a horror story. Go touch grass or something
This one was really hard to get through, but in a good way. Very well written with a mostly satisfying ending (I kinda wish the dudes had each suffered much more). However, still a great story and narration. Thank you as always!!
Thank you Good Doc! I can handle stories like this one as long as little children are not involved. Really enjoy the longer stories like this as they are great to fall asleep to. ❤
Well then. I think the antagonists probably should have suffered more than they did, but that's only because I'm a vengeful bitch, lol. Very good story as always!
Yeah he definitely did deserve more but she was in no position the actually be able to do anything she was not only outnumbered but she was outmatched on physical strength too
Also the main antagonist also has "crazy strength" and "crazy endurance" like the guy was still both calm and super strong after being thrown down 24 steep stairs
I always have faith in the good Doctor,he never fails to bring us all such great content!
Ooee this sounds like another good one, I'll save this for later. Thanks dear Dr.
Greetings from Netherland
A full hour with Dr. Creepen makes my night 🌉😘
Sending Love ❤️...Cadillac...Are you single? 😊❤️
My brother and I were driving in the Nevada desert when we came upon a car wreck, two cars tangled together and people sitting in the dark on the side of the road. We had to drive miles to get them help and it’s pretty barren out there, we both have that surreal feeling about it like it was a dream 28 years later.
Thank you for the warning! PTSD sucks. I still adore horror, and especially appreciate creators and publishers who give us the heads up!
Love the Go-Pro driving down the road.
Thank you Dr Creepen. Loved this one.🖤
Creepy and Morbid are two different things... I miss the Creepy... 👍👍👍
Peter's final moments would've been filled with excruciating pain if it were up to me
Awesomr story and narration. It malkes my night when i see you post a story your soothing voice helps me relax since im going through alot right now. Thank you Doctor Creepen❤❤
All I want to say is: the moment it ended, I felt like I had just woken up from somebody else's nightmare.
Great story, Thank You, Dr. ❤
Hey Doc! Bit late with this one but loved it! Hope you and yours are having a fantastic holiday weekend!! 😃🌹✨
It wasn't bad by any means, it's just I listen to these stories for paranormal and super-natural content. This was basically "Last House on the Left" and "I Spit on Your Grave." Unfortunately by the time I realized this I was aldready in to deep.
I’ve been alive a long long time - too long some might argue - and I’ve had cars break down on the side of the road more times than I’d care to guess. Every single time I’ve gotten out and popped the hood. And you know how many times that’s resulted in me making a few judicious adjustments and heading off on my way ? Not one damn time. I frankly don’t know why I bother. I only mention it because I bet a discouraging number of people who’ve slogged through this post share my perfect score. Nice story Doc. Like a cross between Deliverance and Henry - Portrait Of A Serial Killer. Just the sort of yarn to soothe my bubbling moon juices.
I’ll make a note to everyone: if you ever find yourself in a kidnapping situation, and have any access to the driver, do all you can to wreck the vehicle. Kick the transmission shifter, steering wheel, anything that makes the vehicle go wild. Do Whatever it takes. And if/when you crash, it’s always going to be better than what was coming.
Perfect timing doc as usual same as always best bedtime stories to end the day appreciate all you work
Loved it! Thanks Dr Creepen : )
Thank you good Dr this is one of the most well written tales you've brought to us, my thanks and compliments to the author as well
This kind of story boils my blood. Me and some close friends stumbled across a scenario like this but we ended up stopping it....the good old fashioned way. Luckily we stopped it before either of the girls were fully...well you know. I do often think about how that situation would have gone if we hadn't gotten there when we did. Small town police didn't even detain us for whooping those guys a$$es.
Its a very sad fact that a huge percentage of women & girls have experienced some form of sexual assault at some time in their lives, myself included. Most do not report it.
This story was exceptionally well written and as always... narrated to perfection.
Thanks, Doc 💜
Just like boys and men.
Greetings from Netherland
And that's why you should never look at or talk to them.
Always love your voice, and videos my guy!
Hell ya !! That was great. Thanks Doc
Really enjoyed this one. Kinda had a for sure feeling of how it would play out though the second those guys showed up lol
This story got my blood boiling I hate cowardly disgusting men such these glad they got what was coming to them great story doc
Excellent job! A bit different then what I'm used to from you but still good.
Greetings from Netherland
Love the long vids, it is what I fall asleep too. 💖
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Ok that was excellent! thankyou x
Does anyone else get the feeling that the Doc has read this one before? He’s the only reader I listen to and I’m 95% sure I’ve heard this before.
A fair comeuppance eh Dr.? Great story, thank you.
Wow…she went really off the rails!!! I can see why you don’t do them very often, however it was a phenomenal tale with great narration as always. She truly let her inner demon take hold of that situation
I’ve heard this story before from one of the many horror stories channels. Except hearing what you thought about this is something I was curious to hear.
By the end I was kicking, clawing & stabbing those monsters along with her. It felt good that she won, sorry for her friend. I think we’ve all known guys who in our imaginations could’ve behaved like that if the circumstances were right & thank goodness never got to find out if we were fight. Anyway I felt good at the end & agree with the Dr, it was well worth the listen.
Sending Love ❤️...Carol...Are you single??😊❤️
To use your words: "Wow, wow, wow!"
As a triple a member myself I wasn't ready to hear them mentioned in a horror story, let alone one narrated by the good doctor 😂
Thank you 🙏🏻 DR ✔️🖤
Alright, let’s see what the doctor’s ordered.
Not sure I can stomach this one
Couldn't hang Doc.
Had an overwhelming desire to dispatch the lot of them. Only kidding...
So they called 911 when the car broke down. That's a new 1 on me
Once I heard her name, I knew she would be the "final girl" 🤸🏼♀️🤸🏼♀️
The seriel killer and more realistic story's are way more frightening then any make believe Halloween creatures!
Yyaaayyy, she got away from those crazy guys!
I’m only at 23:46 and my blood pressure is going sky high. I’m going to have to take a break for a bit and calm down. These types I have purposely gone after to teach them that they cannot do this shit. And then showed them why. Consequences can come in so many ways…
Very well written, love a final girl moment.
OOOHHH I LOVE U DR CREEPEN!!!!
Twisted. But damn. Good
#904-✅👍
If you find your self in a headlock being dragged backwards.. don't try to get arms off, grab his legs and trip him. Natural reflexes will make them let go!
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I wish all your stories were posted on Spotify :)
OK - a technical critique. 16 minutes in and it doesn't grab me.
That was Awesome!
Soon as they said forget the multi tool in the beginning I was thinking chekov's gun lol.
Stories like this make me somewhat irrationally angry, I know it’s a fictional story but I still get this feeling of rage not being able to kick the shit outta the frat boys for suck acts. I may need a therapist. Lol
That was disturbing.
Whoop Whoop homie
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This one is more realistic than the usual (in that vile, opportunistic predators take advantage of people in tough situations) but the attempt at a slight supernatural ending was out of place. Not much fun, but the narration itself was excellent as always!
I saw it as less supernatural and more that the guy was just bat shit crazy
But it wasn't actually supernatural. He wouldn't have died if he were actually some evil spirit. He was just a not-quite-dead-yet evil human. His voice sounded demonic because of the liquid in his throat and mouth and his vocal chords being severed.
There is NOTHING _"domestic violence"_ about this, it's flat out *murderous assault* by deranged psychopaths. Conflating the two helps the psychopaths out IMMENSELY.
Cheers 😍
Such a shame Peter never stood up for himself and the girls despite having many windows opened. He was young and confused but was old enough to make his own decisions. He lived as Keaton's slave and would die as Keaton's slave.
Close to home.
I like the purple highlights in the video the purple is my favorite
That was intense!!!!
Great. I'm a "Julie" who is about to pull off on an hour long drive at night. Should be extra interesting !
Sorry! I hope all will be OK.
You were right Dr., I can’t listen anymore. I suppose as it’s had such a profound effect on me that it is well written. Like an actor who plays a role so well that you end up hating the actor and not the character. It’s just blood boiling.
Never get into a car with people you don't know or people you don't trust.
The boys all got off a little too easy if you ask me.
Hey doc, how are you?
Will this one be on spotify? I can't find some stories there to listen while working (driving)
Loved it 😍
I was kind of hoping for a little more of an epilogue but a good story
It's been a hard day. I need you my Doc ❤
Reminds me a little bit of I Spit on Your Grave
Love you, Doc😘
Sweetness 🎧
Phenomenal story the feeling of helplessness was immense i was very happy when she just left peter to die instead of helping him
Dr. Creepen I'm going to tickle your leg if i ever get the opportunity to give you a car ride!!
I hope you don't mind!!
Not a fan of these. I’m a survivor myself. I keep waiting for a skinwalker to pop out and do away with the sleaze balls.
I understand.
Peter had the chance to save them, he could have sped up when the cop car passed so it would have pulled them over. Instead he didn't do anything
Magical ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Exactamundo Ray!!!!!
I like it when bad people get what they deserve
1st! 🤗🤣✌️Thanks Dr. Creepen, you're the Best!!! 🧡💚💙💜💔✝️☮️ Excellent, Excellent Story! 🥰
GREAT STORY I WISH THEY WOULD ALL END LIKE THAT❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
Echoes of Last House on the Left...
Ladies, please buy a handgun to protect yourself. When your mouth saying "no leave me alone" isn't enough, 9mm jacketed hollow points say "No" quite a bit harder.
I understand the need for a content warning but I will say that, in my opinion, horror is at its best when it's still able to disturb you. I'm not talking about SHOCK factor like Hollywood does with gore and trying to pass it off as horror, I mean genuinely disturbed or creeped out. When I was listening to this story I just imagined the absolute hopelessness those girls felt. They had no choice but to climb into that creepy car hoping for help and as the story plays out you are on the edge of your seat knowing what's coming but hoping it doesn't. I could feel their hopelessness the whole story and it had me genuinely disturbed and creeped out, that is what I consider good horror writing.