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Wow its been a decade since this was written by the amazing author, Wow! Where has the time gone? I just finished re-listening to this video as I got a little bit into the premiere of the winning sequel fic story reading, narrowing ( pun foal'ly intended 😂, oh don't me mind me, I've just mare'ly been in the punoney mood neightly ;), honestly I don't know whats goaten in to me haha) I hope you like my attempted jokes😅 & that you can understand what I'm trying to spell pun- equine wise. 😊
Also, I recently finished an entire review take, taking apart what was the horseland 3 seasons and the next video recommended is called Ranking EVERY episode of My Little Pony, Friendship is magic, with 200+ on the thumbnail, and it's 3:43:50 minutes long. I know it's technically should be split into hrs,min's,sec's but its late, I'm not the best ay math, and honestly I can't be assed to gather the last few collective brain cells to work it out into words lol. But I sure as will probably watch it at some point like.
Unpopular-ish opinion, but i don't see anything wrong with Dash's character in this fic whatsoever. She is the element of loyalty, which how I see it makes the fanfiction all the more terrifying, someone who embodied a reliable older sister figure who wouldn't care about your death is much more scary than some random crazy person you've never met.
To be completely fair, Dash's anger only really came when she saw that Scootaloo failed, even with her help. Think about it, she put so much time and effort into making sure that Scoot never ended up here, only to have it all be for nothing. I'd be pretty pissed, too. At that point, there was really nothing Dash could've done.
rainbow: any last words? scootaloo: you have beautiful eyes. rainbow:well thank you! scootaloo pushes her in. scootaloo: TAST THE RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*listens to reading* *remembers that Pinkie tasted the rainbows at the factory in that one episode (Sonic Rainboom I think???)* Me: Huh. That's pretty terrifying.
RD: "Any last words?" Scoots: "Do you know what happens when you hit a chicken?" RD: *confused* "What?" *Chickennoises closing in from a distance* Scoots: "You done goofed"
- Any last words kid ? - " I don't even recognise your rainbow mane when you hide yourself in that mask of shame " - What the ? - "You don't even deserve those wings you bear ...." - You know what, just go away .
@@rainbowrenegade1479 In the Rainbow Factory where fears and horrors come true. In the Rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through. In the Rainbow Factory where failures pay their toll... Now I've awoken and I'm taking back control.
Alternative ending: Scootaloo disregards love and failure because friends and success are more important. She completes her test and passes, forgets about Orion and Aurora, and never has to go through the pain.
@@achillesisagamer875 it’s a tumblr thing called “ask rainbow factory scootaloo. But some dubs of it on UA-cam. Look up “Ask Rainbow factory scootaloo” and it should be one of the first videos you see.
The voice acting in this is top fucking tier. My God. I could feel the emotion, the pain, the fear, the anger in all of the voices. So professionally made and accurate. Well done Lost, and everyone else who worked on it.
Hey who wanna know how skittles are made? *twisted grin* edit: can people stop replying to this i commented this 4 years ago as an edgy 11 year old edit: its been 7 YEARS PLZ IM A GROWN MAN NOW😭😭
Here's how it goes. A pony gets slaughtered in Stalingrad; City of Blood. It then gets covered by Nikolai's Vodka. It gets into little pieces and that's how it's made.
I know how they are made, rainbow dashs pee flavors them..wait *looks on table* I'm eating skittles right now! AWHWHWHWHW!! IM EATING RAINBOW DASHS PEE!!!!!!
I feel the ending line is very powerful emotionally. Rainbow Dash: any final words? you miserable, horribal fool" Scootaloo: "You have beautiful eyes..." The fact that even in her final moments scootaloo couldn't help but quite literly look up to RD in such a way tells a lot about the two characters, as Rainbow Dash is the element of Loyalty and taught Scootaloo everything she knew probably on a moral stand base as well, it never once describes her hating RD but only being heartbroken. I think it'd be very interesting to see more from Rainbow Dashes perspective in the situation and life with the rainbow factory Edit:yes I'm looking way too deep in a my little pony creepypasta
+Ghost Gaming for the pride of the flock I believe is what dr.atmosphere more or less said in the sequel "pegasus device", the flock referring to cloudsdale, the reason they have the flight tests is to rule out what pegasi are and aren't fit to fly, and the reason they exile those who aren't deemed fit is so they wouldn't taint cloudsdale's name and pride (and after the workers at the factory needed "resources" after finding out they could kill other pegasi and extract spectra from their bodies, they had one last use for the failures,hell the flight tests existed probably long before luna was exiled to the moon)
A rainbows tale isn't quite as nice, as the story we knew of sugar and spice, but a rainbows easy once you get to know it... with the help and the magic of the PEGASUS DEVICE!
Now let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy. Far beyond that of cloudsdale mythology. It easy to misjudge that floating city. With it alurring decor
But with all great things comes a great responsibility that of Cloudsdale being weather stability, how you ask are they up to the task to which the answer is in a simple facility.
Dash: Any last words? Scootaloo:...TASTE THE RAINBOW! Dash:Nope. "Throws in" scootaloo: YOU WILL TASTE THAT RAINBOW. "Pulls in" Dash:NOOOOOOOO I DONT WANNA TASTE THE RAINBOW!!!!!!! They melt they end.
28:33 The door slamming made me jump, fall off my chair, and rip my headphones out of the headphone jack These sound effects are so good, they definitely improve the atmosphere
Very well done! Although, I always wished the original story would have had some of the foals escaping to whistleblow the factory. It just felt that with Scootaloo’s plan, Orion’s compassion and Aurora’s sacrifice that there should have been some element of a good ending. But then, I suppose it wouldn’t be a grimdark. My favorite was Dr. Atmosphere and your crazy Rainbow Dash.
am I the only one who realizes when they leave the carriage when they arrived at the rainbow factory they could've flew and left away from that place and ultimately escape their deaths
Nope, or attack and get those tasers and start beating ponies with it. But it's a story and called logic most when they see someone dressed in pure black after some guy says "I'm just handed lots of money to deliver you guys and keep quite" would say "Fuck this shit, See ya Bitches!" and take off. But they don't because. . . .plot. Usually how it goes, because plot. Also pigment can be created by taking and boiling then letting dry then crushing into dust any naturally occurring object like flowers, leaves, bugs, etc, etc. also in a world with magic why not give it to the unicorns? they raised the moon and sun before making rainbows should be easy. But. . . history of pigments aside. Yeah most would've said F-this and left who'd want to live in a racist/ego city anyway? also what happens if your a Pegasus turned alicorn and fail the test? would they kill a god like a literal god? or if two Pegasus give birth to a unicorn would they have to do like twlight where she made wings for rarity since by birth that pony is a Pegasus? More questions then answer for me
They would've simply been chased down, they're children whom failed their flight test, up against guards whom have likely had to deal with ponies trying such things beforehand.
PataponCreeper when i was a little kid I thought Rainbow Factory was an actual episode in mlp, i didnt know that it was a creepypasta, so apparently that was my first exposure to creepypasta. Yt recommended it to me i kinda got nightmares from it, but i loved it thxs yt
I've been a Brony for 4 years...and this is the first time I've experienced this fic in it's pure form . No songs No parodies Just the real thing and man was it every bit as horrifyingly entertainin' as it was made out to be It's currently 11:46PM down here in 'Straya and this was a horrible decision. So glad I made it
Dr. (Whatever his name was): Dont fall behind or my helpers will have to "motivate you" Me: Lemme guess, you want to motivate them with a *_controlled shock_* Edit after 2 years: I'm gonna be completely honest i have no recollection of this comment
24:54, "I'm one of the four Colts in this factory". A colt is a baby male horse, under the age of 5. Unless he is a giant baby, the word you meant to say was "stallions".
I'm just here thinking why the hell didn't they run away when they all failed Like they could have lived They had a chance to escape But nooooo exiling sounds cool so let's do that
Yeah and when Scootaloo went through the vent down, all the ponies in the suit were walking. So she could have just flown above them! The suits were probably too heavy to fly in anyways .
This was so damn good. Ive tried listening to any grimedark storys but never managed to listen to them all the way through. Finally been able to listen to this
I don't even remember my past, I don't remember who I used to be. I don't remember my friends of old, I don't remember my destiny. My mane is purple and my coat is orange, what I've become, I have no idea. I only know one simple thing, the name they gave me: Absentia -pegasus device by sylphstorm based of the sequel to this
Is it an actual sequel or is it a fan made sequel. Because a lot of these more famous mlp creepypastas always have a lot of fan spin offs or sequels not made by the orginal author.
This has been by far my most favorite MLP fanfic and the actors were flawless and when Orion died I had actually almost cried I would recommend this to anyone wanting to get good feels and get a great story with amazing actors
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Listening to this as I wait for the video to be uploaded!
Wow its been a decade since this was written by the amazing author, Wow! Where has the time gone?
I just finished re-listening to this video as I got a little bit into the premiere of the winning sequel fic story reading, narrowing ( pun foal'ly intended 😂, oh don't me mind me, I've just mare'ly been in the punoney mood neightly ;), honestly I don't know whats goaten in to me haha)
I hope you like my attempted jokes😅 & that you can understand what I'm trying to spell pun- equine wise. 😊
Also, I recently finished an entire review take, taking apart what was the horseland 3 seasons and the next video recommended is called
Ranking EVERY episode of My Little Pony, Friendship is magic, with 200+ on the thumbnail, and it's 3:43:50 minutes long.
I know it's technically should be split into hrs,min's,sec's but its late, I'm not the best ay math, and honestly I can't be assed to gather the last few collective brain cells to work it out into words lol.
But I sure as will probably watch it at some point like.
why is Dash always insane or killed/tortured in every fanfic??
taryn schell because reasons
taryn schell Because Rainbow Dash is the coolest
Ashlyn Raines Holy crap we have the same name aside from the "es" lol 😜
taryn schell because she's more likely to be crazy or die than the other ones not including that yellow one.
taryn schell I feel bad for her in everything she either dues or is a psychopath
Rainbow: Any final words..?
Scoot: *Gets close to Rainbows ear and whispers*
"...It's free real estate..."
inkwid whyyyy 😭😂😂😂
( Me behind RD shoots her with a *HEADSHOT* )
XDDDD YESSSSSS THANK YOU!!!!! 😂😂👌
underrated comment lmao
Js hi sshsisyizUIshsishsis
That moment when you relize the person who made the story was named aurora and the pony who's wings broke was named aurora.
I think it was their oc
0_o
My name is Aurora
Ohh, self inserts.XD
Aurora is Auroras oc
Unpopular-ish opinion, but i don't see anything wrong with Dash's character in this fic whatsoever.
She is the element of loyalty, which how I see it makes the fanfiction all the more terrifying, someone who embodied a reliable older sister figure who wouldn't care about your death is much more scary than some random crazy person you've never met.
To be completely fair, Dash's anger only really came when she saw that Scootaloo failed, even with her help. Think about it, she put so much time and effort into making sure that Scoot never ended up here, only to have it all be for nothing. I'd be pretty pissed, too. At that point, there was really nothing Dash could've done.
I even feel bad for Scootalo
I see it as Dash embracing her Dark Side fully... because she's so afraid of failure?
Who remembers the Dawn Somewhere version of Rainbow Factory? Still funny 😄
@@bleakautomaton4808 lol i watched that version first, before the actual creepypasta
rainbow: any last words?
scootaloo: you have beautiful eyes.
rainbow:well thank you!
scootaloo pushes her in.
scootaloo: TAST THE RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
High Fivers) I thought that too XD
Feel the rainbow Taste The Rainbow Skittles
Kristen Scherer lol
taste
Lol!
*listens to reading*
*remembers that Pinkie tasted the rainbows at the factory in that one episode (Sonic Rainboom I think???)*
Me: Huh. That's pretty terrifying.
omg xD
Pinkies a cannibal O_O
@@Shanty-the-Human
PiNkAmEaNa cUpCaKeS...
Did everyone forget about Cupcakes lol. Pinky is a loveable cute Cannibal lol
SAND SAND LOVE SAND .....Oh...god...cannibalism??
Maybe the give the leftover bodies to Pinkamena hehehe
Dash: Any last words? Scoot: You have your mother's eyes
LPShub yyyyaaaassssss!
LPShub
I CRIIIII 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
LPShub what duh fahk
And they were always too FUCKING CLOSE TOGETHER!!!! *Escapes and kills Dashie*
Ohmylordthankyou.
RD: "Any last words?"
Scoots: "Do you know what happens when you hit a chicken?"
RD: *confused* "What?"
*Chickennoises closing in from a distance*
Scoots: "You done goofed"
Ah, a man of culture, I see.
😂😂👁👄👁
G o o d e n d ?
I had to play a lot of Smash Bros. just to learn that
Yes UNLEASH THE CUCKOO!
RAINBOW DASH: SO ANY LAST WORDS SCOOT?
Scootaloo : I.... I shat myself.
Leaf the leafeon Yo, scootaloo. that is just weird!
I'M DYING XD
They don't wear pants...
Clean up on aisle death.
OH MY GOD!!! I’M DYING!!! XDD
this is the best one
33:35
I’ve been shook by how good the voicing is, omg. Sounds like the original rainbow dash.
What if it is?
:o yes
She's the voice actor of rainbow dash :)
@@h3llcat_01 ashleigh ball would be so proud of thelostnarrator :')
@@h3llcat_01 *DEATH*
RBD:I DID LOVE YOU!!! I THOUGHT YOU EVERYTHING I KNOW IN HOPING YOU PASS!!!YOU FAILED ME!!!
What I thought:YOU HAD ONE JOB!!!
DJ D3RPY Failure: Goddangit rainbow!
Deme taught*
HAHAHAHHAHAHA!! XD XD
"I'd rather be exiled from a place that treats ponies like this then live my whole life while others don't live theirs" -Orion.
What inspiring words.
U killed scootaloo sooo 🔪 any last words??
Wut u thought something was here?
Give me a cup of your rainbow juice
*NOW*
@@-R4B1D or draw 100
Will you get me a blow torch and some more peanut butter
fun time factory freddy
Rainbow dash: Any last words? Scoots : You have something in your teeth
Or more like “your breath stinks”
Lmao
@@toxicstar9413 but it’s true
Oop
- Any last words kid ?
- " I don't even recognise your rainbow mane when you hide yourself in that mask of shame "
- What the ?
- "You don't even deserve those wings you bear ...."
- You know what, just go away .
That song is bomb (Pegasus device)
"You Use To Be A Legend And A Righteous Mare" I Was Just Listening To That Song
@@angelicsakura4928 all of the failures help to fuel success and the bloody and visceral weather game of chess
@@TheOfficalPebbleKirishima0624 so you'll sit upon your throne and you'll roll your diamond dice then you'll send us all to die in your pegasus device
@@rainbowrenegade1479 In the Rainbow Factory where fears and horrors come true. In the Rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through. In the Rainbow Factory where failures pay their toll... Now I've awoken and I'm taking back control.
When the video ended i saw a rainbow outside my window
😱
Omg it's Scootaloo's rainbow…
...o.o...
T~T rip scoots
sally wilson lol jesus
sally wilson You aren't even a fucking pony 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
When you realize they all would’ve passed if Aurora’s wings didn’t pop out of place: 👁👄👁
Mhm
We should blame the wings
Wasn’t she the one who was mentioned to be sick at the beginning? They said it was Hoof and Wing. Maybe that affected her wings?
💀 you right
ok but who tf is aurora
I guess she's LOYAL to her job because she don't show mercy doing it
Damn bro
*doesn't
Woah-
Right so right
*insert rainbow factory theme here*
Rainbow factory
I wanna job there!
@Dubstep The Furry, remind me to avoid you.
@@ajojosreference3085 why? 😈
@Dubstep The Furry nothing against you in particular, I’d just like to keep my color where it belongs.
I finally realized the meaning of the song with scoots and the "yellow pony" about them trying to escape the rainbow factory.
Chrissy L0v3 was it the magpi pony one??
Who's the yellow pony?what happen? How? I don't watch my little pony anymore ;-;
@@chicken9372 her name is aurora, named after the person who wrote the grimdark. She isn't a cannon character in the show.
Rainbow: any last words
Scootaloo: FLINT LOCKWOOD
Cop Carl noises incoming 😆☠️
*flints food rocket comes flying in and shoots cheeseburgers at dashie*
*LINT FLOCKWOOD*
CHEESESPIDER...ATTACK!!!!
*RUNS TOWARDS RAINBOW DASH OFFICER EARL STYLE*
Ranbow Dash: Any last words,Scootalo?
Scootalo:Only one,
YOU STUPID PEGASUS, I TOUGHT YOU LOVED MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Random pegasus:What?
iNebulaz _Playz Sonic"but a Pegasus": *kicks Rainbow away*
Ohhh man! Poor little Scootaloo could've been killed. 😔
@@revaslatts8011 she was
Rainbow dash: now scootaloo, don’t touch that cactus.
Scootaloo: *touches cactus*
Rainbow dash: 39:59
How dare you !😂
Lavender Games 😂
@@bobert538 hi :)
Lavender Games hi
Asdf movie reference :D
"I tried so hard!"
AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MAAAATTTTRERRR!
Skylar Feuerborn beautiful
Skylar Feuerborn
Linkin Park :3
I sang that in my mind when I heard that.
I HAD TO FALLLL TO LOSE IT ALLLLLL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MAAAAAATTEEEEEERR
Skylar Feuerborn BSIWIDHOABSVZISLWH THATS SUCH A GOOIID SOOOOOOONG
“Any last words?”
Me: according to all laws of aviation there is no way a b-
*they murder me on the spot*
Kinda like in among us lol ( • ~ •)
@@tulikachatterjee8787 lol true XD
Thanks
“Any last words?”
Me: The fitness gram pacer test-
"Any last words?"
Me:✨We've come to talk to you about your cars extended warranty✨
"In the Rainbow Factory,where fears and horrors come true,in the Rainbow Factory,where not a single soul gets through."
*all ponies dance in the factory crying softly*
Me: Ha! Jokes on you, Rainbow Factory doesn't exist in our world!...
*Sweats nervously*
in the fun time factory where fears and horrors come true in the fun time factory where not a single soul gets through
wait lol-
@@scootalooandfuntimefreddy1195 thank you orion
Alternative ending: Scootaloo disregards love and failure because friends and success are more important. She completes her test and passes, forgets about Orion and Aurora, and never has to go through the pain.
There’s an au like that where she passes her test and works at the rainbow factory
@@Thewavedemonjackal Oh cool
@@Thewavedemonjackal where can i find this i would love to read this
@@achillesisagamer875 it’s a tumblr thing called “ask rainbow factory scootaloo. But some dubs of it on UA-cam. Look up “Ask Rainbow factory scootaloo” and it should be one of the first videos you see.
@@Thewavedemonjackal okay thank you!
Rainbow: Any last words
Scoot: Yes, taste the rainbow
Scoot throws skittles at her
Rainbow: let's use these instead
Both: YAY
XD
Lol i love this
Yes 👍 😂
Good ending
*Insert "You have beautiful eyes" joke here*
“You have beautiful eyes”
“Why thank you!”
“They remind me of my boyfriend!”
Did i loose my self up in those a-e-a-e-eyessss
RD: Any last words....
SCOOT: I ship you with applejack
RD: Fu*k you
Awwww HECK nawww dat ending!!!!
HECK. NO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
*Blurts out a bunch of cuss words*
Sugar Quill 101 CALM DOWN! CALM DOWN! DONT BREAK THAT! (Smashing noises) oh dear... WHAT!! (Throws vase at me) OOF!!!!! (Gets knocked out)
Some random 14 year old XD XD
Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep Bleep
I don't even get what happened... cliffhanger much
Sugar Quill is that amethyst star
I just realized how much Orion's hair looks like bacon
I had to say it
It is bacon.
Mr.Fox indeed
i cant unsee it.. shit
Ikr
OMG IT DOES ...... DAMNIT now im hungry for bacon
anybody else thinking of when pinkie tasted the rainbow in that one episode? 0_0
Spiiiiiiiiiiicy!!! Rd: "(chuckles) yeah rainbows aren't really known for their flavour" THEIR MEANT FOR THEIR INGREDIENTS
yes, now i know why the rainbows are so sour....
MiniKitty40 omg help
MiniKitty40 OH FUDGEEE!!!!!
MiniKitty40 yep... Very disturbed now.
The voice acting in this is top fucking tier. My God. I could feel the emotion, the pain, the fear, the anger in all of the voices. So professionally made and accurate. Well done Lost, and everyone else who worked on it.
"I...love you too.." AHHH MY HEART... it gets me every time.
Is that a reference to a blooper
Hey who wanna know how skittles are made? *twisted grin*
edit: can people stop replying to this i commented this 4 years ago as an edgy 11 year old
edit: its been 7 YEARS PLZ IM A GROWN MAN NOW😭😭
NOPE *Jetpacks away*
Yes plz (puts on skittles hat) (grabs pack of skittles)
Here's how it goes.
A pony gets slaughtered in Stalingrad; City of Blood. It then gets covered by Nikolai's Vodka. It gets into little pieces and that's how it's made.
seriously!!!! I'm eating a pack of skittles right now
I know how they are made, rainbow dashs pee flavors them..wait *looks on table* I'm eating skittles right now! AWHWHWHWHW!! IM EATING RAINBOW DASHS PEE!!!!!!
Now I don't want to know how skittles are made XD
Hehe ❤️
hahaha your really funny hahahaha
*Twisted Grin* Taste the Rainbow!!
:3
Taste the rainbow ❤️💛💚💙💜
I love how when Rainbow Dash says “Rainbows” you can just hear the unstableness in her voice. Bravo 👏 👏 👏
Rainbow dash: "Time to die!" Me: *loads gun* "Not today."
LittleMissDarkness RD: I SAID DIE, POTATO!!!!
Me: *aims at LMD with 50 cal sniper rifle on rist* not on my watch
Yep.
Asdf movie reference?! XD
dispatch, call in air support.
RD: Any last words?
Me: Your not a cool potato
RD: ....
Sugar Lemon Oh Snap!
Sugar Lemon SAVAGE!!!!
ZodiacKitten *high hooves*
*hoof bumps u*
ZodiacKitten 😎
Nothing like a good creepypasta to put you to sleep :)
I know right!! ^-^
Candi Lilz ikr! Especially if it's ur favorite one :)
Candi Lilz i know right and..... Am i the only 10 year old BOY here
Candi Lilz yes 👌👌
Openchest Yt I'm 12 o
I feel the ending line is very powerful emotionally.
Rainbow Dash: any final words? you miserable, horribal fool"
Scootaloo: "You have beautiful eyes..."
The fact that even in her final moments scootaloo couldn't help but quite literly look up to RD in such a way tells a lot about the two characters, as Rainbow Dash is the element of Loyalty and taught Scootaloo everything she knew probably on a moral stand base as well, it never once describes her hating RD but only being heartbroken. I think it'd be very interesting to see more from Rainbow Dashes perspective in the situation and life with the rainbow factory
Edit:yes I'm looking way too deep in a my little pony creepypasta
@@midwich14717 :0 I MUST DISCOVER THANK YOU INTERNET STRANGER
Scoot’s not mad, she’s just disappointed
I love how all this is just to make rainbows.))
it's not just for that (even if the other reason isn't completely justifiable)
scarlet night say it so we can call you a monster yet secretly agree
+Ghost Gaming for the pride of the flock I believe is what dr.atmosphere more or less said in the sequel "pegasus device", the flock referring to cloudsdale, the reason they have the flight tests is to rule out what pegasi are and aren't fit to fly, and the reason they exile those who aren't deemed fit is so they wouldn't taint cloudsdale's name and pride (and after the workers at the factory needed "resources" after finding out they could kill other pegasi and extract spectra from their bodies, they had one last use for the failures,hell the flight tests existed probably long before luna was exiled to the moon)
scarlet night I would agree but I don't know a lot of the things you mentioned because Im not a brony Im a proxy
Cutter Heart amd of course your profile pic is frkken pinkie pie, lol sorry i jest watched the reading of cupcake :b
A rainbows tale isn't quite as nice, as the story we knew of sugar and spice, but a rainbows easy once you get to know it... with the help and the magic of the PEGASUS DEVICE!
Fullmetal Alchemist in the rainbow factory where your fears and horrors come true in the rainbow factory where not a single soul gets through ×2
Now let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy. Far beyond that of cloudsdale mythology. It easy to misjudge that floating city. With it alurring decor
and social psycology
But with all great things comes a great responsibility that of Cloudsdale being weather stability, how you ask are they up to the task to which the answer is in a simple facility.
In the rainbow factory where your fears and horrors come true
"u have beautiful eyes"
"are you gay"
"shush"
LMAOOO
@Destiny Bujanowski LOL
@Destiny Bujanowski PLS SAME
"You degenerates"
Me: *Drv3 flashbacks*
Degenerate 𝓶𝓪𝓵𝓮𝓼
DEGENERATE MALES
I'm outta here now
@@suraimubugbearcosplay3421 GUNDHAM IS THAT YOU?!?!?!
Dash: Any last words? Scootaloo:...TASTE THE RAINBOW!
Dash:Nope. "Throws in" scootaloo: YOU WILL TASTE THAT RAINBOW.
"Pulls in" Dash:NOOOOOOOO I DONT WANNA TASTE THE RAINBOW!!!!!!!
They melt they end.
Lps Paradise skittles are made from mlp pony's confirmed
Lps Paradise helps *dash and scootaloo* nopony is going to taste da Rainbow!
you mean ^helps scootaloo and not dash because dash is terrible* Dash is going to
Hopeful The Fairy Kitten *Bitch slaps* Nopony corrects meh!!! °^°
Lps Paradise 😯😵
is it weird that Pinkie Pie tasted a rainbow in the show?
Nah
Idk
*spicy*
I believe the correct word would be disturbing!
Pinkie really “tasted the rainbow”
I wonder if it tasted like skittles
28:33
The door slamming made me jump, fall off my chair, and rip my headphones out of the headphone jack
These sound effects are so good, they definitely improve the atmosphere
When I watch that part it got interrupted by an Arby's commercial
I just hear “ smoking has consequences “
@@gvilla004437 WE HAVE THE MEATS
Very well done! Although, I always wished the original story would have had some of the foals escaping to whistleblow the factory. It just felt that with Scootaloo’s plan, Orion’s compassion and Aurora’s sacrifice that there should have been some element of a good ending. But then, I suppose it wouldn’t be a grimdark. My favorite was Dr. Atmosphere and your crazy Rainbow Dash.
my name is Aurora and when he said my name I jumped because that scared me.
Then why is your name dawn Frazier
Gabriel Christner right?
Akkio Ama i know right
She can make her username whatever she wants, it doesn’t have to be Aurora
@@adey5042 or probably because it's a kid using his dad's account
am I the only one who realizes when they leave the carriage when they arrived at the rainbow factory they could've flew and left away from that place and ultimately escape their deaths
Nope, or attack and get those tasers and start beating ponies with it. But it's a story and called logic most when they see someone dressed in pure black after some guy says "I'm just handed lots of money to deliver you guys and keep quite" would say "Fuck this shit, See ya Bitches!" and take off. But they don't because. . . .plot. Usually how it goes, because plot. Also pigment can be created by taking and boiling then letting dry then crushing into dust any naturally occurring object like flowers, leaves, bugs, etc, etc. also in a world with magic why not give it to the unicorns? they raised the moon and sun before making rainbows should be easy.
But. . . history of pigments aside. Yeah most would've said F-this and left who'd want to live in a racist/ego city anyway? also what happens if your a Pegasus turned alicorn and fail the test? would they kill a god like a literal god? or if two Pegasus give birth to a unicorn would they have to do like twlight where she made wings for rarity since by birth that pony is a Pegasus? More questions then answer for me
They would've simply been chased down, they're children whom failed their flight test, up against guards whom have likely had to deal with ponies trying such things beforehand.
Midnight Playz your right
they have tasers
Aroua couldn't have
ok, I'm not a pony fan, but I did get into The Rainbow Factory and it's sequel The Pegasus Device
can you read The Pegasus Device?
I also want her to
PD took like 3-5 hours for me to read. It would be a long video.
THERE'S A SEQUEL!!!!! SEND ME A LINK RIGHT NOW!
PataponCreeper I can relate. I don’t like MLP but I like MLP creepypasta
PataponCreeper when i was a little kid I thought Rainbow Factory was an actual episode in mlp, i didnt know that it was a creepypasta, so apparently that was my first exposure to creepypasta. Yt recommended it to me i kinda got nightmares from it, but i loved it thxs yt
Life lesson:
Eat M&M’s and not Skittles.
o h 👍
Hell ya
Contact the rainbow...Taste the rainbow!
Me: Hell naw! To the naw naw naw!
Don't eat skittles? I don't get that warning at all!
Oh no, ARE THEY MADE OF RAINBOWS TOO?!?!
I've been a Brony for 4 years...and this is the first time I've experienced this fic in it's pure form .
No songs
No parodies
Just the real thing and man was it every bit as horrifyingly entertainin' as it was made out to be
It's currently 11:46PM down here in 'Straya and this was a horrible decision.
So glad I made it
There are songs you imbecile
There actually are songs and parodies.
Me too
@@revaslatts4301We know..?
Dr. (Whatever his name was): Dont fall behind or my helpers will have to "motivate you"
Me: Lemme guess, you want to motivate them with a *_controlled shock_*
Edit after 2 years: I'm gonna be completely honest i have no recollection of this comment
Got em.
I-
Mission accomplished
Thats right we got em artoo
Trying to put a FNAF referance without us noticing
Sister Location!
Im here to WAKE YOU UP AFTER 5 YEARS hehe~
Any last words, Scootaloo?
I should have... twerked more...
Silverfox HAHAHA Lolz
I AGREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silverfox I'd ws rainbow dash
yall are nasty u like pony ass
gross
My friend: “Watcha listening to?”
Me: “My Little Pony...”
Her: “Your a little old don’t you thi- ......**slowly walks out**
crap
"GET THE FUCK ONTO THAT FEILD,BEFORE I FAIL YOU MYSELF!"I love that scene 😂
😆
😂😂😂😂😂 gotta love Guitiu
get out of mah shed!
%2 of people will get that reference
The-MehBurgers ! I did
The-MehBurgers ! the Simpsons?
Shed.mov
The-MehBurgers ! i did
Shed.mov I think
Do these places ever get health inspections XD
If canon Rainbow Dash found out about this. I can’t imagine the kind of suffering she would inflict on RF Rainbow Dash
She would sonic boom her 😁
And heres another joke
Rainbow Dash:Any last words,Scootalo?
Scootalo:Ya, Play Five Night at Freddys, Pretty good game.
iNebulaz _Playz Pinkamena: Oh Hell No! *dies in The Pegasus device*
It's scootaloo
Another joke
RD:any last words
Scootaloo:
*YA LIKE JAZZ*
@@sonofcthulu8772 That's it, I'm about to quit life!
*jumps into the Pegasus Device while blindfolded*
I like to rewatch this solely for Rainbow Dash voice. Someone really nailed it.
24:54, "I'm one of the four Colts in this factory".
A colt is a baby male horse, under the age of 5.
Unless he is a giant baby, the word you meant to say was "stallions".
I feel like I'll be correcting a lot
ShiningArmour&Luna 4ever oooh burn
That Rainbow Dash impression is spot-on
(24:48) "I'm one of the four colts"
A colt is a male horse under the age of four.
- Littleshy
There are only four boys...
i like the ammount of cursing even from the children :3
MaximumBirdage There teenagers
@@niscuits is correct you know
Theyre teens
It was just funny
I'm just here thinking why the hell didn't they run away when they all failed
Like they could have lived
They had a chance to escape
But nooooo exiling sounds cool so let's do that
Lupin Hallow
XD
Yeah and when Scootaloo went through the vent down, all the ponies in the suit were walking. So she could have just flown above them! The suits were probably too heavy to fly in anyways
.
"Fluttershy never even took her test"
Bro, fluttershy straight up said "fuq dat shiz"
She gets RD Friend privileges.
.........I read this story 2 years ago. Now i'm watching this. I'm going to have nightmares again...............dear celestia....
hahaha I don't get nightmares that easy
+Alyssa Sanchez same lol
+Paintmotion The Pietato Queen do u like the rainbow factory
+Alyssa Sanchez yeah I like it but I personally like human(?) creepy pastas more.. Idk why though
+Paintmotion The Pietato Queen idk I love creepy pastas I just wanted to ask u
Oh id love to know how skittles are made now >:D
UNLESS THEY INVOLVE SCOOTALOO
Erin Cogan you mean chicken
Sonica The Cat 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
AND IT TASTE DELICIOUS!
A giraffe who eats a rainbow and has a Jamaican man milk it and boom *SKITTLES*
Rainbow Dash:Any final words
Scootaloo:Just plz dont vote for Donald Trump.
Rainbow Dash:Shit, already did, sorry.
gr8atstuff Gamer Nuuuuu!!!!
gr8atstuff Gamer lolololololol
gr8atstuff Gamer SO U WANT KILLARY CLINTON?!!!?!?!?!!!!???!??!!
HmMm hOw about raibOw DaSH aS prEsidEnt of ThE unItEd StAteS OF EMeRICa?? OwO
gr8atstuff Gamer Ouch
Dash: Any last words?
Scootaloo: You have beautiful eyes no homo
that rainbow dash voice sounds exactly like her
*Aurora falls and breaks her wings*
Me: "Dat crunch doe" 😂
RD: Any last words.
Me: Can you itch my back.
OMG Rainbow Dash's voice actor almost sounds exactly like the real deal!
Lost really sounds like her, huh?
@@raineblackstar3522 yup. :D
RD: “Any last Words?“
Scootaloo: “Feel the rainbow, Taste the rainbow” *Stuffs a hoof-full of skittles into RD’s face*
RD: Any last word
Me:let me guess I hate u
Scootaloo:...You have beautiful eyes
Me: wait what 😂worlds best last words
those weren't scootaloo's last words
" i am Hoot- Scootaloo"
Dootaloo = Skull Trumpet confirmed
***** XD
Why not inscribe certain words into the machine?
XD
Mang, I can't believe we're going to pony hell for nothing!
That's the best Rainbow Dash fan voice I've ever heard!!!!😨
"GET THE FUCK INTO THAT FIELD, OR I'LL FAIL YOU MYSELF!!!!" LOL😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I actually screamed with laughter
:3
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA best scene 2016 LOL IM WATCHING IN 2016
omg yes
lol
*the judges point they're hooves down*
Me:Nope
*flies to the east gate*
"Three hooves pointed down."
How can the hooves even point DOWN?
I think they moved downwards
@@rainbowrenegade1479 XD
Clench your fist into a ball. Flick your wrist down.
This was so damn good. Ive tried listening to any grimedark storys but never managed to listen to them all the way through. Finally been able to listen to this
RD:Any last words Scoot?Tell my mom... I-I, I ate the last cookie...
RD: WHAT THAT IS TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU’RE WORSE THAN ME!!!!!!!!!!! UGH! GIVE BACK THE COOKIES 🍪 BEFORE YOU DIE PLEASE!!
Does Scootaloo survive!?!?! You can't just leave us hanging like that..:-(
there's a sequel called "pegasus device", information of scootaloo's fate is explained (eventually)
Fearlessheartgirl Rulez u has rainbow kitty profile pic
I don't even remember my past, I don't remember who I used to be. I don't remember my friends of old, I don't remember my destiny. My mane is purple and my coat is orange, what I've become, I have no idea. I only know one simple thing, the name they gave me: Absentia -pegasus device by sylphstorm based of the sequel to this
Fortunately, yes
Rd: any last words;
Scootaloo:
Tell your my mum i love her!!!!!!!
On a binge of watching these readings atm. Super underrated concept that needs more attention
same lol
RD: any last words?
SL: tell everyone... to stop making the last word sene into funny memes
No
Everyone. The sequel is called Pegasus Device. Btw scoot-my-boots doesn’t die.
Is it an actual sequel or is it a fan made sequel. Because a lot of these more famous mlp creepypastas always have a lot of fan spin offs or sequels not made by the orginal author.
is even canon tho???
@@MichaelJones-rz5sw it's by the original author, and I actually find it better than the first, brings a lot more info on what's really going on
I watched Cupcakes right before this, and I suddenly don't feel sorry for Rainbow Dash anymore....
O_o
Dafuq? I still feel sorry for Rainbow Dash. Is that a bad thing?
Me too, yup
I feel bad because most of the creepypastas have RD being the one killed.
I love these creepy things. They may not be scary, but they are amazing
Im accualy so sorry for Scootalo,Her heart just got borken by the Pony she loved the most...AM I THE ONLYONE WHO CRYED?!;-;
I cried
"I'm hoot scootaloo!" 😂😂😂 and also did anyone else realise that some of this was used in rainbow dash presents? 😜😮
F
GET THE F*CK OUT ON THAT FIELD BEFORE I FAIL YOU MYSELF!!!!!! XD
I was laughing so hard😂😂😂
I read that as soon as he said that
shit, he means business
O frick
That Guy is Angry as Hitler realizing he is Going to lose The War
That fact that I didn't cry once during this… I don't know whether to be concerned or not.
neither did I
I didn't cry, but it made me sleep with a loaded Benelli M1014 and an Incendiary grenade.
At least you didn't smile and start laughing.... god, I must be so fucked in the head
+Scar I know I didn't
+Scar I did..... And my head twitched a tiny bit..... Also fucked in the head
This is why I study for all of my tests...
RD: any final words..?
Scoot: I like skitles , "taste rainbow"
RD: umm....yeah...no
LMAOO
Scoot: how dare you...
This has been by far my most favorite MLP fanfic and the actors were flawless and when Orion died I had actually almost cried I would recommend this to anyone wanting to get good feels and get a great story with amazing actors
I agree, it’s a really good fanfic! This is one of my favorites yet.