Immortal Affliction - Rarity [Pony Infection AU] (Grimdark)
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- Опубліковано 10 вер 2024
- The first, but not last of its kind! A documentary style fanfiction brimming with frights!
"Immortal Affliction - Subject 1 - Rarity”
Written by Magpiepony
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Summary: The Reign of Friendship has ended, leaving a grieving Equestria to grapple with their loss. Rarity Belle, the successful 500+ year old fashionista, has been harboring a secret that could spell Equestria’s doom.
Audio Adaptation directed and produced by TheLostNarrator
Cast (In Alphabetical Order):
TheLostNarrator
@Magpiepony
@NeighratorPony
@ScribblerProductions101
Artist Credits (In Alphabetical Order):
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DariDraws - / dari_draws
MekBlueART - / mekblueart
Mochi_de_Llama - / mochi_de_llama
Nomad Flicker - @Nomad-Gamer
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Spencharly - @spencharly
Suni - / suniscathorsis
UrbanQhoul - / urbanqhoul
VladiVoices - @vladivoices
Xephina - @XephinaTheEleven
A special thanks to Catsmeat for their amazing horse-puns for months and days of the week!
Music provided by:
Myuu
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Empty Reflections (Slow Version) - ErikMMusic
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The Dark Somnium
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shine bright like a diamond. 💎
Shine bright like a diamond
Literally
Dude, that's messed up lol.
Too soon bro...😅
🎶MINE DIAMOOOOONDSSS 🎶
My favorite part of this was that Gentle Heart had no regret with anything she did. She genuinely tried to help Rarity as much as she could, even forging a signature. She was dedicated to what her job was.
Agreed with you. 👍
Poor Rarity she didn't deserve this, she is so kind hearted and so generous but not to be too soon or any thing but she is in peace in the heavens light above her soul with the lord of our God now and forevermore.
Rarity rest in peace my dearest friend, and may you find peace and happiness with your loved ones in heaven you deserved it .
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️🕊️
✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️✝️
💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
💎💎💎💎💎💎💎.
Sincerely yours the Gold Knight of Scorpio
♏🦂♦️♦️🏜️🏜️🏛️🏛️,
And my partners
Mu the Gold Knight of Aries
♈🐏✨✨🏔️🏔️🏛️🏛️.
And Aiolia the Gold Knight of Leo
♌🦁⚡⚡🌩️🌩️🏛️🏛️.
@@cameronsmith8917 We don't know if she's dead, or somehow still alive in that stone. This story is called IMMORTAL Affliction after all. I hope she is dead, because the alternative is so much worse.
@@cameronsmith8917Is your pony OC a religious priest in MLP? 😅
@@theemeraldking3251 I am a warrior of death in a good way, I maybe an autistic and especially a leukemia survivor for the past 23 years from now if ya know what I mean my friend, not to be rude or cause an argument or anything, but I don't get this emoji expression means (😂).
Sincerely yours the Gold Knight of Scorpio
♏🦂♦️♦️🏜️🏜️🏛️🏛️,
And my partners
Mu the Gold Knight of Aries
♈🐏✨✨🏔️🏔️🏛️🏛️.
And Aiolia the Gold Knight of Leo
♌🦁⚡⚡🌩️🌩️🏛️🏛️.
Listened to this again. Nurse Gentleheart got infected just from touching the stones on Rarity. And she sewed similar stone into countless dresses and sold them. Ponyville is going to become a crystal wasteland
An MLP infection AU indeed
It's a good thing I got a pickaxe.
Listening to this and reading this comm made me want to start thinking about what Ponyville would look like afterwards in the style of one of those Infection AUs
@@crossoverqueen1775 Well, Scibbler did start working on one herself
So I assume Ponyville would be overtaken with crystals similar to Rarity and the room she was kept inside
Crystal ponies
the dates are killing me 💀'foaluary' 'hoofsday' 'trotsday' 'STALLIONDAY' y'all were having too much fun coming up with these istg
The way they would fit right in to
Yeah 😂 it's good puns tho
well it is pony rhey can have thir own words it doesn't take me out of the scen in fact it draws me further into equstriea and it world
ikr
Maresday has a nice ring to it
Hayday isn't usually someone's favorite though
And don't get me started on leg day. It's just leg day
SPOILERS
"I just bought a PONY made of DIAMONDS, cause I'm RICH!"
I can't believe Handsome Jack was true villain all along. . .AGAIN.
🤣🤣🤣🤣 omg I need to play Borderlands 2 again
Filthy Rich lol
Rarity's body was mysteriously producing gems and the first thing she did was sow them into her dresses that she also SOLD!
She did believe it was a blessing and never knew that it was an affliction which could be spread and also be fatal
Guys, I just realised something.
Take a look at Rarity’s portfolio in 1:41 .
Rarity’s Birth was during 977, and her origins of saving Equestria which dates back to 1000, which mean she’d be around 23 years old then.
Fast forward, this case is recorded in **1523-4**, and Rarity is listed as a 546 year old, so we do the math (1523 - 1000 = 524, 523 + 23 = 546!!)
My theory is that after Twilight ascended to become a princess, Twilight did some funky magic, tying her (newfound) immortality with it as to keep her friends alive all this time; thus the seemingly immortal living, and from the looks of it they had NOT aged at all.
So, after Twilight died, there’s nothing to keep the source of eternal life flowing so the magic goes haywire and backfires. I’m guessing the spell involves a crystal, or are specifically tied to their cutie marks.
Anywho, Twilight clearly did not anticipate her own death so they probably never saw this coming (at least not this early on).
Now my question is: how did Twilight die? It could play a really big role as to why the spell decides to manifest in crystallised forms instead of eternal life, hmmm.
Outside of theories though, love how Rares just has a bunch of marriages that all ended with the stallion going bye bye ❤
🎉 This made my day! I'm so glad you riddled that out
@@Magpiepony GASP hiii!
you shall see me, the theorist who pays too much attention to details soon enough (once episode 2 of immortal affliction drops…)
@@Magpieponyoh my god we got a big reveal
Maybe the magic she tried was tied to a pony's wants or wishes. Twilight likely knew she would outlive her friends and wished that they could live as long as she could. This would explain why rarity would grow gems when she wished to have new ones
@@Magpiepony say did when twilight made her spell to keep her friends alive did it Inturn take away her life away like splitting her in half’s (kinda like how Voldemort did in Harry Potter only it literally makes you die faster)
So...Rarity bursts into gems meaning: Applejack roots in place and mutates into an apple tree; Rainbow Dash explodes into rainbows; Pinkie Pie confetties out as balloons (festively); Fluttershy lays out in a field and her shape dissipates into a flock of butterflies; and Twilight upon death warps out as raw magic?
Who knows. A roaming dashing rainbow and pink butterflies flittering like a school of fish close to land?
Or Pinkie could straight up turn into a piñata of herself😆 And I could even imagine Fluttershy turning into one giant mutated butterfly similar to Spiderlock, the alternate version of Fluttershy from My Little Amnesia🤔
The possibilities are endless.
twilight was already established to be dead from the start though
@@amaranthdahlia She is definitely patient zero.
@@amaranthdahlia That's what I was thinking: after she died she just dissipates into raw magic. And I saw someone else's comment wondering if Twilight's death creates the affliction in her friends and that got me thinking if Twilight's body started seeping raw magic after her death that she'd gravitate to her close friends first (rest of the mane 6).
Well, Rarity did say she wanted to be fabulous as a gem. So she got her wish.
Maybe then she'll learn the truth of that saying "be careful what you wish for." 🤔
There is Nothing she could do about it now tho since she petrified into a gemstone statue and possibly spreading it to all of her customers at her boutique
Gentle Heart was true to her profession through and through. Even going as far as to forge a signature just to help Rarity. Sure, she ended up getting fired for it, but she has my respect 🫡. I hope she managed to find some semblance of peace from this.
R.I.P Rarity, may your soul shine as brightly and as fabulously as the dresses you loved 😭💔 in the Elysium Fields.
Gentle Heart deserved better
@@daisyjoy242 Hopefully she'll be cured if there is a cure for this hellish affliction
As it happens, when Rarity said "DON'T GIVE ME THAT LOOK", my irl expression really was one of revulsion at what I was hearing lol
Wanna know whats worse then this?, the fact that she has unknowingly made dresses for an entire set of ponys within not just ponyville but equesteria and possibly gifts for many creature friends, if even one mate receives the gifts or buys those dresses and so much as touches it, then there is no amount of help for not only them, but everyone else they come in contact with too, if the liquid or so much as touching the pony or the gems can cause it to spread then celestia only knows what'll happen after that.o-o'
I didn't even think about that that's horrifying
Rarity was too careless
@@HeliatroCipherIndeed one way to say "beauty is deadly"
@@leonaise7546careless and grief stricken, if it was normal rarity then she probably would have suspected it as not normal, but by the time those onyx gemstones appeared on her back hoof, the illness most likely already warped her mind and manipulated it faster cuz she was grieving not just a princess but a friend as well.
I actually believe that, if Twilight made everypony immortal ( more than likely through a spell that depended on HER to keep stable ) her death deestabilized the spell and it's currently crumbling down in a mass domino effect.
There is no cure. There's only making sure the spell doesn't affect the newer generations if Equestria wants any chance at surviving.
Ofc. This doesn't affect the true immortals. Aka. Celestia, Luna, Discord and potentially Cadance and Flurry Heart.
(Edit, fixed my subject mix-up, sorry about that-)
"Subject 5 shows no deterioration compared to the others and continues to ask about the whereabouts of Subject 1..."
Oh no...
*Applejack, no...*
Same here. Now, I wonder who the other subjects are and how Sweetie Belle got affected... unless... oh my God... Rarity's dresses!
Good news: according to Scribbler while this video was being played live, she informed us that subject 5 is Applejack. Bad news is still the same tho
Worst news is if rarity and applejack are subjects, then it’s not hard to guess who the other 3 are 😰😰😰😰😰
🫢
@@o.r2308 Pinke Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy maybe?
I'm thinking Spike, he's a dragon (which would explain having no symptoms) and is in love with Rarity (which would explain the constant asking)
Sounds like the Elements are going crazy due to the absence of the Element of Magic. If so, there's gonna be more than just a crystallization outbreak.
MLP Gen 5 isn't just a time skip from Gen 4. It's the aftermath of an apocalypse.
@samuelbedsole5089 that would work so much better than them apparently making it to where everypony's magic getting taken then them at some point drifting apart. G5 had too many plot holes that's why I never bothered with it. I was going to at first.
@@TruffleAntylamon The movie wasn't as bad as the series after, the movie was interesting at least
Makes sense, Twilight and the Element of Magic are the conduit for the other five Elements, losing both means they're no longer focused and this is the result
The Magic within the Elements is starting to become unstable and this is certainly going REALLY wrong
*“Mama’s still pretty… right?”*
Someone made the reference
Trama in those words
Love a Lil miss rarity reference
LMR: *”Pain is subjective, darling…”*
"it's a name I haven't heard for a long time"
Nurse Red Heart’s realization with the dresses, actually broke me…I can hear her dread! Scribbler did a wonderful job voicing this
Okay, more theorizing:
Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are Subjects 3 and 4, particularly hard to restrain both of them given how fast RD is and Pinkie... *Being Pinkie.*
Fluttershy is subject 2, and DISCORD probably took her away. that's why her whereabouts are unknown and why nobody can find her.
and Applejack is subject 5, which honestly makes perfect sense beyond the potential shipping (lmao). Applejack has never come off as someone that would fight against authority unless absolutely necessary, and if she IS fearing sickness, like with the others, she WOULD more than likely willingly submit herself to medical intervention to keep her family safe.
What about Twilight?
@@speedtracker9556 twilight is dead she died when the story began in rarity interview the first one
@@ryanlozano9086
Ok, that's odd.
I love the fact that it was rarity’s gemstone talent that lead to an outbreak instead of it coming from the everfree forest for once. Also if this stemmed from her sadness and cutie mark, then did something similar happen to the rest of the mane six besides twilight do to her death?
21:34 Yo how did Mag *make those SOUNDS?* Holy crap that whole section was so eerie
Sounds like something out of a analog horror series, i made a comment on it
This immortal thing is something else I love It! It's like Rarity transforms and she does not like herself and it has an amazing epic on this storyline.
Rarity's VA did a phenomenal job, especially in the ending where the noises she made really sold the severity of her affliction
Her performance made me cringe, but in a good way lol, awesome video
I think what happened is Rarity became immortal, but she never became an alicorn, so over the years, her magic became stronger and stronger until her body couldn't take it, and this story happened. I just wonder how she became immortal, I think the most likely candidate is twilight, but if so, did she do it to her other friends so she wouldn't have to lose them? Does that mean subjects 2 - 5 are Appplejack, Rainbow, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Spike? If Twilight did make them immortal, it's also possible her death made the magic go haywire. I love it when a story leaves me with so many questions. Hopefully, this story continued. I can't wait to see where it could go!
Spike's a dragon, he's already gonna be EXTREMELY long lived so immortality may not be needed.
@ACastillo_ subject 5 didn't show any signs of the affliction, which is why I said spike.
Subject five must be Sweetie Belle.
@@ACastillo_ Like I said, it has to be Sweetie Belle!
@revaslatts4301 Why would sweetiebell be symptomless?
Although this would fall under "Body Horror", something about this story just doesn't feel like "horror" is the right word. To me, it's just sad and heartbreaking. Even if the condition can't be reversed, I wish there could at least be answers about what's going on. And the worst part is the feeling of not knowing whether or not Rarity is still alive within that stone, and if she is, whether or not she's aware that she's alive. And considering that this story is called IMMORTAL Affliction, I'm afraid that she just may be still alive in there.
This is some Made In Abyss type stuff...
*irumyuui flashbacks*
DAMN.
The most horrifying part was when Rarity was vomiting for OVER 12 MINUTES STRAIGHT. Hot damn. That's just... absolutely horrible. VA did a stellar job, well done!
For more actually. With that last image of her I'd say is until she was suffocated by the gems. Just imagining it is... jesus
Skaddo
For real, I actually paused the video when that segment started because the VA’s performance made me viscerally uncomfortable. Incredible work!
I completely agree, it sounded so real, I thought I wasn't gonna make it through that part, but I did
Lost, you did an awesome job!
Most disgusting world record ever.
A well worthy addition to the MLP infection trend! Such powerful performances by Magpie as the lovely Rarity, Scribbler as the dedicated Nurse Gentle Heart, Neighrator as the helpful Orderly, and Lost Narrator as a bone chilling narrator!
the fact that it starts off just like her cutie mark instead of some plant is GENIUS (gives room for more Ideas too), and having Rarity be the cause and patient is such a wave of fresh air! Every time I see Rarity in an infection AU (when she's included), it's never for anything really special.
This was Gorgeously written and preformed!❤❤❤❤❤❤
SCP + MLP = This Awesome Series
Rarity Is EVOLVING Into A 💎.
Her FINAL form 💎💎💎
Lol her rn:💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎
Gentle hearts exit interview gave me CHILLS and the realization that the blinged dresses were going to infect other ponies was an excellent touch. I’m so glad we got to hear your version of the infection AU it’s so good!!
This was great the part where rarity is just vomiting out gems really shook me to my core. I do have a theory on why this is happening. Everyone in this univeres is "immortal", and since Twilights friends are also "Immortal" pretty sure we can deduce that Twilight most likely made her friends immortal or hell maybe the entier ponie race. And this virus might just be nature correcting itself or maybe its some sort of foul play, who knows. But hey thats just a theroy, a MLP theroy thanks for reading.
i wanna give nurse gentle heart a hug, she really lived up to her name 💔
It took me a while to realize that this whole fanfiction is a reference to scp-009 and scp-409.
Don’t you mean the contagious crystal?
@@blazingeagle2820 I updated my comment.
If Rarity is that particular scp, then AJ will probably be scp - 805. If they keep going that route.
I really love this style! Really feels we found documents to a patient 0 case!
Big Lost projects are always such a treat because I can go to them fully blind.
that body horror art was sickening and incredible
I really enjoyed this. These are the types of stories that I like I think the most because there’s a level of body horror in here, and the eeriness that we see here really reminds me of the SCP foundation specially with the recordings and I just love how the sound is modified so it genuinely sounds like you’re listening to a recording it’s immersive.
I also found rarity’s attitude, extremely uncomfortable. I don’t know how else to explain it. Let’s just say that she’s concerned from what’s happening to her, but not in the way that you would think she seems more concerned with her aspect rather than “am I gonna die “ And the way that she disrespects the staff is really unnerving and again just adds to what I’ve mentioned before.
The Lost Narrator’s voice, as always makes it even more unnerving. Because there’s times where I find her voice relaxing and there’s others where I find it creepy which fits exactly here since it is a horror story and that’s what I love.
Overall, I really enjoyed this fic and it’s definitely gonna be one of those that I’m gonna be listening to over and over again.
I fear for fluttershy, she gonna produce silk all over her body followed by various changes related to the lifecycle of a caterpillar into butterfly
Eating furniture, fur feathers and skin peeling off and new joints forming via limbs breaking.
Or perhaps worse she might end up like SCP-439 the bone hive, kept barely alive to a colony of catterpillers using her as a nest and food source
So the fly but with fluttershy? Awesome
that is one way to become a gem pony, first pain then none. next is untold agony, now a world a shines like a freshly polished mirror
This was not only an Expertly written story (hats off to Mag) but also was so incredibly well performed. (Lost was a wonderful narrator as usual. And Scribbler gave us one of the most beautiful monologs I've ever heard) So I for one can't wait to see where this story goes. And hats off to everyone involved.
You didn't actually think that Lost and Mag were out of horror content after Sleep Experiment, did you?
Never in my mind lol
Loved the story! I loved the concept of the pony's cutie mark involved with there injury/disease/infection. quite the fascinating and interesting story, I do hope there is a part two, possibly about another pony's experience like apple jack or rainbow dash, like apple jack grows into a tree, or rainbow dash starts to get rainbow patches on her skin but more detail. Just my thoughts and possible future idea's.
Good gravy mackeroll and holy shit. I'm so freaked out. That part with the extended puking was the worst (best) part for me. That gives me something more than chills, I don't even know how to describe it. Imagining the horror of more and more sharp painful stuff ceaselessly spilling from your face and never getting a second to breathe, with the ever growing horror of just how much there could possibly be, probably growing in quantity at a rate far faster than you can physically get it out. As someone who does a decent amount of puking in their life, THAT'S HORRIFIC.
AMAZING WORK ALL!!!
Can we appreciate the time and effort TheLostNarrator puts in their videos for is to enjoy.
Good God the stuff involving her eye made me physically wince in pain. That was a horrid thing for Rarity to go through…
As a french person said:
"LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOO"
No matter how old I get, I love new grim darks
This is a great story! Pony infections are an absolute fave, and this is just amazing!!!
Great job to all of you!
🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 This is so very unique and very well written and said! It did scare me as much as the first one!
The effort TheLostNarrator put in their videos is insane huge props
I love the idea that infection was not too fatal at first but as the time pass by slowly killing its host good job 👍.
Production quality is impressive. The visual really adds to the story.
Hey, Lost! I want to thank you for being awesome! You're the first storyteller (and Scribbler too) who i started listening back in 2018 when i began learning English. Your impeccable voice acting deserves a praise! It's wonderful - Everypony sounds amazing in your voice! Im thankful that i had an opportunity to begin learning accents, pronunciations and funny words from you. You're more than awesome - you're amazing. And you gifted me amazing memories i won't ever be able to forget!
This is my favorite take on the infection AU by far.
Wow, I admit that documentary was really shocking and one of my favorites of this AU genre (which is currently gaining trend among MLP fics). I never thought the cutie marks would be anything more dangerous than a double-edged sword actually. 😬😬You really shined, #TheLostNarrator, I look forward to seeing the continuation of this docuseries-type series when possible. 👍👍
Wait if twilight died does that mean that she has become the source of the affliction? I believe this virus is magic based and it symptoms are based on the cutie mark.
Sweet Celestia! There’s not enough words to describe how much I love this infection AU!
Everything about this is great. I expecially love the visual effects and the directing overall. It's so phenomenal. Instead of just still frames of the documents, we float around them in different angles while slowly moving to show more of them.
The visuals for the recordings are my favorite. Getting different shots and different angles of this audio wave displaying device (I don't know what it's called and not even Google is helping that much) while also constantly moving around it.
I can't exactly find the word to describe it, but it feels "cinematic" in a way. Your editing skills have improved so much and I can't wait to see you improve more. I'm also excited to see if you'll try different styles in the future. Experimenting can be really helpful.
Truth be told, its actually an after effects template that I downloaded from a digital asset website and then edit it to how I see fit. I've started using them more and more because they can add a new layer to the visuals, especially since I wanted this series to feel more like a report was being presented to you instead of just a straight forward reading lol
Thank you though for the kind words! I appreciate that you enjoyed it!
15:27 you can actually hear the magic that is normally heard in the show! Great work on the small details!
LORRRRDDD everything about this is so well done. Hats off to Scribble the emotion in that last Gentle Heart interview hit so hard
i don't know how to put this into words, BUT I LOVED THIS!!! the effort that was put into this was incredible!!
rarity didn't deserve to go out like that though :(
Lost creating masterpiece again! OMAGAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
now rarity knows how bad immortality is (I love scribbler's voice in this one aaaaaa)
CRYSTAL APOCALYPSE, CRYSTAL APOCALYPSE COMIN!
Three words: WHAT. THE. FUCK?!?! Rarity just straight up became a gemstone! Good thing this AU is nothing like all the other infections out there with terrifying stretched limbs and faces or extremely gory content, but it’s still horrifying to say the least. Good work losty, I’m interested in seeing if there’s going to be a part two!
27:27 what makes it worse, i think, is that this was a biopsy. for those unaware, autopsies are when the patient is dead. biopsies are for when the patient is still alive. *Rarity is still alive.*
Absolutely flawless, Lost! I think this is one the best works put together by you and everyone. I can't wait for part 2!
The way this narration is set up is very reminiscent of the magnus archives and i am SO here for it, this was amazing
Another very marvelous and sensational reading Lost, I absolutely love it! Once again the voice acting and art are just ever so phenomenal and spectacular! Everyone did such a marvelous and fantastic job bringing this vid to life make no mistake about it, Truly outstanding and excellent work guys!!!👏👏👏
Jesus... I was expecting some sort of crystal zombie, but... wow, this feels so much worse, especially since Sweetie Belle got infected as well... Damn...
When we all thought they were out of stories to tell, they surprise us with another
They really captured Rarity's personality here, and the scene of gemstone Rarity regurgitating and the orderly losing his eye is just... I saw that in my nighmares. Sorry, "My Little Worms," you got dethroned - this is the number one best My Little Pony infection au. MAKE MORE, I BEG OF YOU!!!!
The fact that rarity doesn't feel any of this is even SCARRYER like, her eye is litiraly falling off, dangling down her eye socket and she literally dose not even knowtice, its like the crystal infection numbs all feelings of pain in her body or smth
This was an interesting story to listen to, especially seeing the art used for it. I was trying to guess what could be happening to Rarity and how this could spread
Now rarity is gemstone, however don't know why I have a feeling that the other's are probably worse then what rarity went through but possibly make it a series probably?
Lovely as always Lost! Great work :3
The voice acting is so spot on! The last recording gave me such chills. Great job!
Thank you again for letting me make art of this!! It came out beautifully
OMG YESS THE INFECTION AU IS HERE!!! I'M SO EXCITED. I KNOW THIS WILL BE GREAT ❤
I would love to hear about the other subjects. This story was AMAZING.
Considering the title and the little detail about Rarity's age. I think what happened was that Twillight somehow made her friends inmmortal to not lose them, ironically, Twillight somehow died. Condemning her friends to suffer what she feared to suffer at first.
Her friend's mourning combined with their inmortal spell, it untied this weird reaction on her bodies and Rarity was the first to colapse to this particular "affliction".
We'll have to see how it affects the rest of the mane six and if it bursts into a worst inffection!
Oh my gosh! I love this story! The progression of the virus, the observation, the narration, the art...its amazing!
Also judging by what others are saying in the comments, this immortal affliction sounds like a full on series! I just gotta see/hear more of it!
Also, lost narrator, you and the others are so amazing at bringing the stories to life! It always feels like im actually there...as a doctor or nurse reading over the logs or someone who somehow stumbled upon these logs! Its amazing!
LOST YOU CAME IN CLUTCH TODAY AT WORK TODAY. This Story was so good! Amazing writing Mag! Very clever with the world building details like the day n month names. LOST DUDE YOUR EDITNG FOR THIS STORY GAVE ME CHILLS. This entire project just amazing! Well done to everyone!! ❤️❤️
The horse puns for the days and the months were taken from SlaughterHorse 2, which is a mobile game lol But thank you though!
Oh snap really?!? I haven’t heard of that game in forever. You’ve now given me another thing to do at work! ✨✨
@@TakumoKun its on steam as well I think for the PC. Mag and I had a livestream of it back in August on my side channel, but yeah lol those came from the game. The developer (CatFood) really came up with some amazing puns for it!
Amazing as always! cant wait for the next one!
I can't wait to hear this marvelous piece of work!
If it was really an affliction, then where did it originally come from other than a gem? And were the other similar subjects could be Rarity's friends or who?
Anyways, this got me hooked into it and I'm loving it!!!😁😁😁
The latest content you’ve put out is simply amazing! Can’t wait for more Lost
And now i want a part 2 as this infection au really grabbed my attention in a matter of minutes
Everyone involved did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day Scribbler MagPie & Lost Narrator. Love you all.
The voice acting of Scribbler as Gentle Heart is phenomenal, it scratched at my brain in a way I cant explain.
And the style of this reading, the art and sound design is just *chef's kiss*.
Can't wait to see more of it, Magpie is so talented and so are you, Lost! Keep up at it!
I wonder if Twilight knew she could die one day, but she didnt know when she would die, so she made them immortal as long as she lived. So they could grow with her but die shortly after her own death? Because she wants to always have them with her in life and death?
Usually don't comment on stuff, but ive been binging these for the past week or so. Dont really know why, perhaps out of nostalgia because I was a huge MLP fan as a kid. Whatever the case, I wanted to point out a potential consequence that I'm not sure I've seen pointed out yet. If the doctor got infected by touching the gem growth on Rarity, is it possible that every dress adorned with these "naturally grown" gems could also have the potential to infect the customer who bought them? A horrifying thought. Great video!
I wonder if it's only contagious if you touch what's still "in" her?
The dotor already pointed that out to the hospital at the end of the story. That's how the over 200 ponies got infected.
@@flux9629 aw dang it. Thought I figured something out LMAO. Thanks for letting me know, usually I listen to this stuff while drawing and don't catch everything
Dude no joke I was creeped out by this. Well done lost this was really well done.
Never heard of an Infection AU but it will be very interesting to watch and enjoy :)
Rarity, you putting all those body stones on those dresses is like if I vomited, used said vomit to paint a picture, and then everyone near it starts gagging.
Miss Narrator. This work is a real gem of work (No pun intended). You and your work is something truly special. Thank you for the brilliant video and may the future of you & MagpiePony be brighter than the sun.
Hats off to not only the incredible writing, but also the incredible voice acting here 👏💜✨✨✨
I love this so much, I absolutely cannot wait for more!
Man I need Jesus this audio was fire PLZ MORE
This is genuinely horrifying and it's f****** amazing 🤩💜✨✨👌👏
I see that Rarity is 546 years old. Must be a secret alicorn or something. Damn
Or it’s an immortality spell gone wrong?
The audio and art/visuals look so good, great job everypony on this awesome video!
Ooh wicked! I hope we get to see the other "subjects" X3