Maybe people who don't think the video was helpful, the video was confusing, or a number of other reasons, disliked this. I am not one of the people who disliked it, but I'm just saying that people probably have a reason for doing that. And no, no one is a moron, Motasem Akasha. :)
Maybe it was a person who was fed up with what often seems like arbitrary rules for the English language, specifically writing in a college class. I thought the first example he used was a perfectly worded sentence, made sense and was a great example of a good sentence however because this guy with the sweater on says it lacks parallelism, you can't use it. I thought what he changed it to, sincerely and passionately, was completely unnecessary and made the sentence boring, using two "ly" adverbs so close to each other in the sentence BUT now it has PaRaLlElIsM so it works.
Excellent video. I played it to my college composition class. However, we're also trying to avoid comma splices in our essays, and your excellent video contains a comma splice: "University students use the internet to research essay topics, [sic] business people use it to hold video conferences."
I enjoyed your presentation of parallel structure. I also liked the way you are seen along with the content. You have a stress free atmosphere for learning. Thank you.
This is my problem.Until I catch it . TY. I have some difficulty to decide a suitable other option . Yet ,my passive knowledge base should be adequate. Thanks so much. Your information is spot on n precise.
Can I use this for "Internet is used to research essay topics by student , to hold conferences by business people and to deliver assignment by teacher." for the last example
“Children use computers to play video games, business people use them to advertise products, students use them to research secondary sources and it is used by teachers to deliver homework assignments.” i am wondering if this sentence is a comma splice, because four independent clauses are connected with commas.
Good question, but no, this is not a comma splice because of the "and" before the final clause. This is a series of clauses, much like how you can write a series of words or phrases. Hope that helps!
Odd question; you know when you said "under the sofa," as the fix? What if he was looking IN the sofa itself, meaning he pulled the cushions etc. would it be better to fully explain that? I just figured since the original sentence said "in the bedroom, in the sofa," it meant he looked in the sofa, not necessarily under it. Sorry, weird question.
Not a weird question at all. But yes, you would have to specify "in the sofa" to make three parallel phrases in that sentence: in his bedroom, in the sofa and on the kitchen counter. It is possible to use a single preposition (in) with multiple nouns in a list as long as all of the nouns share that one preposition. For example, he looked in the fridge, the sofa, and the cupboard.
Wow,thank you so much. I learned a lot from your videos. I especially loved the examples AND being able to go to your website and practice. There needs to be more people like you (or you need a bigger push) if I know anyone struggling i'm sending them here. Thank you.
Finally a source with related material! I've been searching for hours for grammar information. Yet, 90% of what I find is: "You are a noun." "The dog is a noun." I'm sure the ESL students are happy with 90% of the content.
Nice grammar clips...many people are visual learners, so this is great.
+Shiv Kumar Visual learner right here, it's great when pointed out and it makes more sense to me. :)
Nah, "he spoke sincerely and with passion" creates a bigger impact than "he spoke sincerely and passionately."
Who dislikes and educational content video?...
Awesome video!!
Thank you.
yeah... who?!! This video is amazing!!!
Maybe people who don't think the video was helpful, the video was confusing, or a number of other reasons, disliked this. I am not one of the people who disliked it, but I'm just saying that people probably have a reason for doing that. And no, no one is a moron, Motasem Akasha. :)
People who didn't find the video helpful.
Maybe it was a person who was fed up with what often seems like arbitrary rules for the English language, specifically writing in a college class. I thought the first example he used was a perfectly worded sentence, made sense and was a great example of a good sentence however because this guy with the sweater on says it lacks parallelism, you can't use it. I thought what he changed it to, sincerely and passionately, was completely unnecessary and made the sentence boring, using two "ly" adverbs so close to each other in the sentence BUT now it has PaRaLlElIsM so it works.
So simple, clear, and helpful.
You are an amazing teacher! Thanks.
Thanks.
My students did pararellism a lot. This video helps me to make them aware of it. Thank you Shaun.
What you are sharing is very helpful to students like me. Thanks a lot.
you remind of Auggie from Covert Affairs
You should be playing 2k19 lmaoo
Wtf 😂
Agent play 2k not watch communications videos lol
Facts
I just clicked on this video from my college english class and Agent commented wtf lmao.
Excellent video. I played it to my college composition class. However, we're also trying to avoid comma splices in our essays, and your excellent video contains a comma splice: "University students use the internet to research essay topics, [sic] business people use it to hold video conferences."
This video cleared my concept, Thanks a lot for this informative video.
It helped me a lot in understanding modifiers
I’m a mature student studying higher English, your videos are fantastic… now I need to get back to my essay 😬
Man, you are so calm while teach, I liked it.
Passionately. Yes ! Under the sofa. Did you say with sincerity for a noun? I can't get to the links+ exercises.thanks! I prefer the quick videos.
I'm sharing this with my students. Great work.
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I enjoyed your presentation of parallel structure. I also liked the way you are seen along with the content. You have a stress free atmosphere for learning. Thank you.
Kelly,
Thank you for your comment.
oh tnx really, im from Morocco just 3:36mn but it was very helpful than 4h in my class ❤
thank you so much u helped me for my exam lmao
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You're an amazing teacher . Thank you
This is my problem.Until I catch it . TY. I have some difficulty to decide a suitable other option . Yet ,my passive knowledge base should be adequate. Thanks so much. Your information is spot on n precise.
this really helped me in my second term exam thanx
Every time I have a question about any topic I search for information here. Thank you! You give excellent examples.
Easily explained. Well done! Thank you.
Such calmness 🌝
Loved this. Will use with my students. However, I can not access the link for the exercise? Where can I find it?
Can the links be upated? The videos are extremely helpful, but they contain dead exercise links.
Man this helped me get an a in my latest homework!!!! THANKS MAN!!!! YOUR AWESOME!!!!!
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Can I use this for "Internet is used to research essay topics by student ,
to hold conferences by business people
and to deliver assignment by teacher." for the last example
Yes, that is parallel.
Your video was useful. It is easy to understand. Thanks
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very clear explanation
I've never noticed this before; thank you for teaching me this!
Great vid, you're a great teacher
So helpful. Thanks
Thank you.
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Thank you! You made quick work of intelligently explaining parallel structure.
I'm working on a test; so I can edit papers online.
i have a better understanding of this now..... thanks
Unable to get the practice from the link in description.
Thank you very much. This video is a lifesaver.
That was sooo helpful. Thank you so much
I now have a better understanding of this. Thanks!!
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“Children use computers to play video games, business people use them to advertise products, students use them to research secondary sources and it is used by teachers to deliver homework assignments.” i am wondering if this sentence is a comma splice, because four independent clauses are connected with commas.
Good question, but no, this is not a comma splice because of the "and" before the final clause. This is a series of clauses, much like how you can write a series of words or phrases. Hope that helps!
Where is the link for the exrcise?
The link for additional exercises doesn't work.
It's amazing video! many thxs.
what on that site do i klick for the exerzises?
Thanks for your help!
Thank you.
Odd question; you know when you said "under the sofa," as the fix? What if he was looking IN the sofa itself, meaning he pulled the cushions etc. would it be better to fully explain that? I just figured since the original sentence said "in the bedroom, in the sofa," it meant he looked in the sofa, not necessarily under it. Sorry, weird question.
Not a weird question at all. But yes, you would have to specify "in the sofa" to make three parallel phrases in that sentence: in his bedroom, in the sofa and on the kitchen counter. It is possible to use a single preposition (in) with multiple nouns in a list as long as all of the nouns share that one preposition. For example, he looked in the fridge, the sofa, and the cupboard.
Wow,thank you so much. I learned a lot from your videos. I especially loved the examples AND being able to go to your website and practice. There needs to be more people like you (or you need a bigger push) if I know anyone struggling i'm sending them here. Thank you.
so happy i got the one he said pause right!!!
can you add a video about faulty coordination and subordination?
Thank you
I have an exam about this topic tomorrow, and it really helped me. Thank you for posting this. 😳
Amazing explanation...
Finally a source with related material! I've been searching for hours for grammar information. Yet, 90% of what I find is: "You are a noun." "The dog is a noun." I'm sure the ESL students are happy with 90% of the content.
Thanks sir!
Thank you for this
wow thank you sooo much.... you got my like...! just what I was looking for...
Great video, thanks a lot !
Thank you!
Thank you! I have a lesson about this and now I know how to explain it. :D
I love this, it is very complete thanks :)
I loved your explanation!! Thank you a lot!
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Sir,please clarify my doubt."The lunch is at 1.a.m.(I mean in the afternoon).can I use 1 a.m. In the above sentence in stead of p.m.P Siva Rao,India.
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Pretty helpful video, thank you.
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The link isn't working
WOW .. Loved it.
Thank u very much teacher that 's really helpful❤
Great info
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Thanks for watching!
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i didn't find the exercice
So much better than 950 views.
Very useful
Thank you for giving us inputs like these.
Really helpful!
Thanks!! I'm finally understanding :-)
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so clear so interesting
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Thank you so much!! I needed this for our exam tomorrow. I understood this more easily than our english teacher 😂
Can you please tell me how to write coordinate sentence the first one wish support topic sentence. I have exam next week. Thank u
All of these videos are so helpful. Thank you.
Turn to 1.25 speed :D
The last example of internet has a run-on mistake right?
I've learned more information from these videos, than I have listening to my own professors.
Loved it
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thanks it helps