While I appreciate the effort, your section on Rebirth and making your way to the ruins is lacking too much, saying "the path on the left" for someone unfamiliar with the region is too abstract, it might make sense to you, but to someone who's not explored the region significantly it is of no help. You should take some orientation footage, showing your character moving from Rebirth to the path with a high altitude view. yes its holding someone's hand, but that's the point of this vid, no? The remaining info was pretty good, thank you for that.
Thank you very much for the advice mate :) I will definitely consider it in future vids for clearer guidance, I will give it some more time over short and snappy. May even do a remake, still learning :)
This was really good, well done, for trying!
Thanks tons :)
While I appreciate the effort, your section on Rebirth and making your way to the ruins is lacking too much, saying "the path on the left" for someone unfamiliar with the region is too abstract, it might make sense to you, but to someone who's not explored the region significantly it is of no help. You should take some orientation footage, showing your character moving from Rebirth to the path with a high altitude view. yes its holding someone's hand, but that's the point of this vid, no? The remaining info was pretty good, thank you for that.
Thank you very much for the advice mate :) I will definitely consider it in future vids for clearer guidance, I will give it some more time over short and snappy. May even do a remake, still learning :)