5 different ways to describe trends - ielts writing task 1 mixed charts (table and pie charts)
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In this video, I use mixed charts in ielts writing task 1 to share with you guys five different ways to describe trends.
Here's the mixed charts used in this video:
The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 introductory paragraph
04:12 overview paragraph
05:22 details paragraph 1 - table
07:49 5 ways to describe trends
08:08 details paragraph 2 - pie charts
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You're amazing, Lilie! Your explanations are so useful and clear, and it's even more amazing that you provide them for free. Thank you so much!
The thing,I liked about her is she also gives advice on grammar which is the additional thing to learn.I have watched 4-5 of your videos.It made me worth it.I changed my writing score from 6 to 7 in just 2 days.
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U teach very well
Because of you i am understanding everything about task 1.
The table illustrate the amount of money where it was spent by police in 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain while the pie charts depict the percentage of this spent on each category.
Overall, the majority of money was spent on salaries and the budget increased within one year.
It is clear that 75% of money spent to salaries in 2017 whereas this percentage decreased to 69% in 2018. Budget which was allocated to buildings and transport remained at the same level at 17%. Also, there was a sharp increase in the category of techonology from 8% to 14%.
In 2017, the total amount of money used by police was 304.7 millions of pound and this rate went up to almost 319 millions of pound in 2018. Moreover, national government category almost stayed the same throughout the year. However, local taxes experienced a sharp increase. In 2017, 91.2m pound allocated for local taxes and this money increased to 102.3m pound in 2018. Finally, other sources such as grants saw a slight increase by half millions of pound between 2017 and 2018.
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keep create content.your videos are fantastic thank you so much
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I just found your channel this morning, this question got me confused.
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Hey, I have my exam tomorrow.Did you do well in your exam? I am too nervous.
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Simple video with super explanation. So easy to understand thank you mam🙏
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There's a superfluous technic used. That's taking the table for a paragraph and the pie chart for another paragraph.
But the issue im almost considering is the fast nature. Please can you help us take it normal so that we crap the excellent styles I see you possessing? You have an incredible performance
Thanks a lot
You are very helpful dear Sister.
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Very easy and convenient way of teaching 👍
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Hello ma'am
Can I use inflow and outflow of budget fund ??
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Hi Lilie what's the difference between proportion and percentage in terms of usage.
I can practice ieltsistning also with you 😂😂 in this video
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very helpful. Thank you
Glad it was helpful!😊
@@LilieIELTS Please make more videos.. Love from bangladesh
Please make a video of task 1 line graph ( consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015)
The table and the pie charts provide information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table illustrates the sources of funds and the pie charts give details about expenditures.
Overall, the total police budget increased from £304.7 million to £318.6 million and the national government being the biggest contributor in both years. The highest expenditure was on officers and staff salaries although it was decreased by 6% in 2018.
The National Government was given 175.5 million and 177.8 million in 2017 and 2018 respectively. The second majority of funds were received by local taxes which were amounted to 91.2 million in 2017 and 102.3 million in 2018. Other sources granted 38 million in 2017 and increased by 0.5 million in 2018.
75% of money in 2017 and 69% in 2018 was spent on staff salaries and 17% of money was accounted for buildings and transport which remains unchanged in both years. Expenditure on technology was 8% in 2017 and nearly doubled in 2018 in to 14%.
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The table illustrates the amount of money which spent on different kind of sources in one area of Britian between 2017 and 2018 while the pie charts depict how this money was spent.
Overall, the total amount of money which allocated to different sources increased in one-year period and salaries comprised of most of the spent.
First, national government spent 175.5m$ in 2017 and this increased to 177.8m$ in 2018. Moreover, local taxes experienced the biggest rise among others from 91.2m$ to 102.3m$. Police budget which 38m$ allocated to other sources such as grants also had a slight increase from 38m$ to 38.5m$. Also, the total amount of police budget saw a significant increase between 2017 and 2018, from 304.7m$ to 318.6m$.
Officers and staff salaries consisted of most of the money in both years and in 2017, the percentage for salaries was 75% wherease this rate declined to 69% in 2018. Finally, building and transport remained constant while technology category saw an increase from 8% to 14%.
excellent vedio
So informative and precise. Kindly touch the listening & Speaking tasks too thanks though/
Appreciate the kind words!😊
Useful video. Take love ❤️ from Bangladesh 😍 Thanks Lilie
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Very clear, concise and smart guide. Your channel should be the one-stop-channel for ielts writing :D (Task 1 especially :'))
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@@LilieIELTS you will get only 6, because you didn't add any linking words.Also you are going to details information rather than make it short.
@@apurbadebnath4342 The word "this" will be also counted as a linking word too.
Overall, the total police budget increased, with the national government being the biggest funder in both years.
Best channel that is straight to the point.
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Most welcome and thank you too.😊
Well,I am intersted in your lessons.But only 4 days I have to take the exam IELTS .
Best of luck!✊
Your are best
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The table and pie charts provide information about police budget for the years 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table represents the source of money while the chart illustrates how this money is distributed. Overall, the majority of this budget’s source is provided by National Government, whereas the most significant part of this money is spent on officers' and staff's salaries on both years.
The total funds rose from $304.7M to $318.6M within a huge contribution of National Government with amount of $175.5M and $177.8M respectively. The largest growth between years 2017-18 in these sources of funding is local taxes which increased by $11.1M and went up from $91.2M to $102.3M.
The budget’s funds were spent primarily on salaries which slightly declined from 75% to 69%. Technology expenditures barely increased about 6% while buildings and transportation funds stayed at the same level of 17% between 2017 and 2018.
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Hi how are you sister. I have to say a bunch of thanks for you. Because you taught so well. I have a question for you: what band did you take from IELTS Writing
Appreciate the kind words. My most recent score is 8977.
I love you sis ❤
Hi sister, in the detailed paragraph 2 you have used: the proportion decreased from 75% of the total to 69%. Have you used 'total' as the total amount was given in the table or can we use percentage points instead of the total?
Here is a way to use 'percentage points': the proportion decreased by 6 percentage points from 75% of the total to 69%.
Is it okay to write t304.7 like this? Or in stead of writing t, total should be used?
Hi, that's not a "t". That's the pound sign: £304.7 million. The font I used in the video makes "£" look like a "t". Sorry about that.
Thank you Lilie for this video .... by the way can you do a small favour please ... there is no video about two part essay types in your playlist .
Book 15 ... Test 1 ...task 2 ..i am really struggling for making structure for this type of essays.
Hi, hope this sample essay helps: www.ieltsessaybank.com/owning-a-home/
And here're some more essays of this type: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/double-question/
@@LilieIELTS Thank You so Much Lilie 💟
I started from today see ur videos and started preparation for exam
All the best✊
various different approach will help us to cope with anxiety, or lack of idea.
Good point!😊
Hi why did you use t3million and other digits?
What does it mean?
Can you please tell
It isn't 't'...it's '£'. The font makes '£' looks like 't'.
Need more videos of essays and task 1
Hi, you may find my writing blog helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/
Lilie～一直在听你的podcast，希望可以一直更新，从喜马拉雅找到B站再找到这里，太感谢你啦！
没想到在这能遇到国内的同胞。谢谢一直以来的支持。
@@LilieIELTS 感谢Lilie陪伴了我学英语的道路，我一直在国内上学，以前英文写作一直都是背模板，从听到你讲作文之后，我才开始真正不害怕写作这件事，每天都会听你的podcast学习，打开了新的大门，谢谢Lilie～
The bar chart illustrate the proportion of American people who consumed fast food in restaurants in 2003 and 2013. Overall, people in USA ate fast food either everyday or never in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, majority of people preferred to eat fast food once a week or once or twice a month.
It can be seen that, not even 5% of people in USA did not eat junk food everyday in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, same trend can be seen for the people who never tried eating fast food at below 5 percent except in 2003. Notably, about 15% of people consumed fast food in 2006 and 2013 whereas in 2003, this rate decreased to approximately 13% in 2003.
On the other hand, majority of people preffered consuming fast food once a week at just over 30 percent in 2003 and 2006 except in 2013 at about 27%. In addition, 30% of people who had habit going to fast food restaurants in 2003 decreased 5% in 2006 and again in 2013, this rate had its peak level at almost 35%.
I hope this gets at least 6.5
Hi. if i write 130 words in writing task 1, but i write everything in the correct order, how many score can i get?
Depends on how you write
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Welcome! Thanks for watching.😊
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In terms of ecpenditure, salaries remained the primary source
Hai Sister Can We make introduction like this👇
The table illustrates how much money allotted for the police department in particular area of England and the pie chart shows where the money is spent in the year 2017 and 2018
I hope you will have a lesson about the line graph in 10:11 of the video.
Does this help? 😊 www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-graph-below-gives-information-from-a-2008-report/
From where we could buy cambridge book 17... I am going to attend the test on 11 th of august
Hi, I'm not sure how you can buy it in your country. I bought it in China.
Hie l have it in my laptop l can send it to you on email or something
Can we use "At the beginning " and "Moving further" in 1st and 2nd paragraph resp ... ???
Can you provide example sentences? How are you going to use them exactly?
@@LilieIELTS like " To begin with, china has the world largest population out of four given country.."
And "Moving further,Nepal has the least number of people " .
Like this ... Can we use in beginning of 1st and 2nd paragraph??
@@Desync_pxl I think they work. But note that you used "to begin with" in your example, not "at the beginning". "At the beginning" doesn't work.
@@LilieIELTS sry that was a typing error....and thanks for your help
...i really do appreciate ...
if I would be explaining a table, I would just tell the number of rows and columns of table will mention the headings in table and simply describe what's written in it other than describing what increased and what decreased. And about the pie chart, I would have described the colors of each part while mentioning it's name.😭😭 I really need to practice more than I thought to understand the concept in details.
Yeah, task 1 is hard
Hello, sister, can you please make the video about Reading.
Perhaps in the future.😊
Mam I am watching your video but actually I am getting many problems with the ilets task 1 or 2 and I am preparing for ilets pleas mam give me some suggestion how to I improve my score
Could you be specific about the problems you have?
@@LilieIELTS yes , actually I'm getting problems related to subject verb agreement and. As I told you making complex sentence so I humble request to you if anything could be possible for you to do my writing task much better what I can do for better writing
Hi, I think as long as you leave 2-3 minutes to check your essay, you can definitely eliminate all your subject-verb agreement problems. In regards to your second question, you don't need to write super complex sentences. In fact, I always try to avoid writing very long sentences. Just write two simple clauses and link them with cohesive devices. Hope this helps.
@@LilieIELTS mam I like your video of writing but if do use simple sentences in writing task 2 of ilets would I get 6 or 7 band I heard that if you use complex sentence then your will get 8 band in ilets . And second thing is whatever I am writing is it correct or wrong now
Hi, I didn't mean that you should write simple sentences. I mean, you can form complex sentences simply by joining two simple sentences with a linking word.
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is it too long for task 1?😆
It's only 183 words: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-table-and-charts-below-give-information-on-the-police-budget-for-2017-and-2018-in-one-area-of-britain/
i would watch it even at 0.25x speed
hey, do not you mind checking my essays cause i am having really difficulties so you help will be appreciated
btw u r doing an excellant job
Thank u so much medam i hv my exam on jan 14th pls add me in ur duas😢
Best luck!✊
explantion was good and i really taught too much of this video. but i really dont like how you pronounce some words... nice job
Try to speak little bite low.
Sorry about that.
@@LilieIELTS could you please check my writing tasks?
I wanna connect with you. If you don't mind love your content my exam is on 11 aug following you only no others channel. Moreover, I want you chip in me my writing module. Please if it is possible, I have little bite confusion so to clear that I need your support and I hope will understand that.
Sorry, I don't sell anything yet. Besides, I probably wouldn't do an amazing job checking your essays. My essays are so good because they were improved by native speakers. If you have any specific questions, please ask here. I'll do my best to answer.
Also, wishing you all the best on your test!
The table and the pie charts provide information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table illustrates the sources of funds and the pie charts give details about expenditures.
Overall, the total police budget increased from £304.7 million to £318.6 million and the national government being the biggest contributor in both years. The highest expenditure was on officers and staff salaries although it was decreased by 6% in 2018.
The National Government was given 175.5 million and 177.8 million in 2017 and 2018 respectively. The second majority of funds were received by local taxes which were amounted to 91.2 million in 2017 and 102.3 million in 2018. Other sources granted 38 million in 2017 and increased by 0.5 million in 2018.
75% of money in 2017 and 69% in 2018 was spent on staff salaries and 17% of money was accounted for buildings and transport which remains unchanged in both years. Expenditure on technology was 8% in 2017 and nearly doubled in 2018 in to 14%.