Hi Lilie, thank you so much for your amazing videos. I was confused at first about how to prepare writing but your videos helped me a great deal!!! I got 7 in Writing (Overall 8)(my first time taking the test) because of you!💓 I can’t thank you enough!!!!!
The pie chart illustrates the allocation of fresh graduates in different sectors, who computed their degree in Anthropology. However, the given table gives the details of salary packages of anthropologists who have five year of experience. Overall, Majority of the graduates pursued full time work after passing out, while only few pupils could manage to study further along with a part-time job. After having experience of five years in the field, salaries of the freelance consultants and those employees who worked in Government sector were more than others comparatively. First having a myopic look on pie chart, more than half of the chart is cover by full time workers while the proportion of the part time workers was 15%.The percentages of unemployed and those students who did part time job along with post-grad were 12% and 5% respectively. Meanwhile, the graduates who went for post graduation and who are not made the same proportion 8% . Moving to the table , the graduates who were employees in government sector earned highest salaries. Around 50% of them earned more than 100000 dollars a month and proportion of those who made in the range of 75000 dollars and 99999 dollars was 30% while only 5% of the govt employees made below than 50000.Moreover, The second category who earned the highest were freelance consultants. One quarter of them are able to earn more than 75000 dollars and one quarter of them earned even more than 10000 dollars . Lastly , the employees of private companies, most of them earned in the range of 50000 to 74999 dollars while a little below than one third of them earned 10000 plus dollars .
It is apparent that they knew that you would do great job at explaining it to us, so they went on making these charts boldly, not being afraid no one will focus on the right thing. I mean, I would never come up with such writing even in a ten years. Simply amazing!
Hey, thank you so much Lilie, you made it easy for me to select the data and write the right information. I was so glad that I came across your video, it's been very useful.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of students in different types of work status after completing their Anthropology degree in a university, while the table provides details about the salary packages of Anthropologists who have 5-year experience.
At first it was hard to get used to understand the accent. But once I got used to, I understood that this vd was just as good as gold, unvaluable. I got everything on how to describe this kind of double charts.
Good afternoon Lilie! I'm Alex from India. I'm a huge fan of your videos as they are explained the way I wanted. Furthermore, I, too, had been spared a lot of time to learn writing skills from a scholastic video, but found none. Recently I found your videos, and they are exactly presented as I wanted and the way I understand. I would like to congratulate you for the efforts you put to make this possible and would like to express my deepest gratitude. I have a request. Could you please make separate videos for a Pie chart and a Table? Yes, I found one in a Mixed chart video, but it didn't serve my purpose. I apologize if it is too much to ask.
Wow, thank you. IELTS 17 just came out. The next video is going to be the hardest writing question in the book. Stay tuned. By the way, have you guys got the book?
Hi lilie, Thank you for sharing your wealth of knowledge with us. Thank you for that. and I just want to clarify something with the introduction part that we can use as below: could you please clarify the below to me please......🙂 "The pie chart illustrates the percentage of what one university's graduating anthropology students were employed after completing their undergraduate degree, while the table demonstrates the salaries of the anthropologists after five years".
I'm so happy that I've matched your channel, it's useful for getting experienced practice easily, this video especially is helpful. Yet I think this article is too long, 235 words, what do you think?
Thanks for sharing your writing and thoughts, which are all very practical. But i have concern about the experission in paragraph 2, where we use 'half of whom' to describe the highest range of salary. It is indeed half of 80%, but also 40% of this type of job, i feel i cannot figure it out clearly while writing.
Thanks for the videos you make to enable us get high bands in the IELTS exam. I noticed that the paragraphs usually starts at the beginning of the line instead of giving a gag into the line before starting to write. For example; "Overall, the majority of the graduates" Why not starting like this; "Overall, the majority of the graduates"
I turned the intro to passive. Pls tell me whether it's right or wrong.. The information about the income of Anthropology graduates who qualified from a particular university after a work experience of 5 years is depicted by rendered pie chart.
Overall, it is obvious that the majority of bachelor's degree students are full-timer after their graduation. While, anthropologists either running their own business or holding positions in the government are well-paid in comparison to those who are involved in private corporations. is it a good overall?
Hey Lilie, I've learnt that in the overview, we don't have to add any data, but I saw that you mentioned $75000 and the word "half of" in the overview. So does it matter to our overview? Are they also data or not? Thank you!
Here are some sample essays about one table: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/ If you have any *specific* questions about writing, feel free to ask. I will try my best to answer. Good luck on your test.
Could please help me I can't analysis data of table and chart,also question that is about 250words (question only-250) and I know that use. 5 parts to analysis the data please help I have paper in 3days
Hi, "half" is fine. It’s impossible to use words like most or minority in our overview if the figures are close to the middle. There’s no other way to talk about figures near 50%.
Yes, you can use %. Sorry, I don't understand your second question. I did mention the exact percentages in the pie chart except for 52%, which I replaced with "just over half".
@@nehahussain2471 I did. I included all the percentages in the pie chart. The only figure I omitted is the figure for the "not known" category. Please watch the video again or read the sample essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/destination-of-anthropology-graduates/
Hi Lilie, thank you so much for your amazing videos. I was confused at first about how to prepare writing but your videos helped me a great deal!!! I got 7 in Writing (Overall 8)(my first time taking the test) because of you!💓 I can’t thank you enough!!!!!
Wooow, those are really high scores, congratulations! What are your scores on the other sections?
The pie chart illustrates the allocation of fresh graduates in different sectors, who computed their degree in Anthropology. However, the given table gives the details of salary packages of anthropologists who have five year of experience.
Overall, Majority of the graduates pursued full time work after passing out, while only few pupils could manage to study further along with a part-time job. After having experience of five years in the field, salaries of the freelance consultants and those employees who worked in Government sector were more than others comparatively.
First having a myopic look on pie chart, more than half of the chart is cover by full time workers while the proportion of the part time workers was 15%.The percentages of unemployed and those students who did part time job along with post-grad were 12% and 5% respectively. Meanwhile, the graduates who went for post graduation and who are not made the same proportion 8% .
Moving to the table , the graduates who were employees in government sector earned highest salaries. Around 50% of them earned more than 100000 dollars a month and proportion of those who made in the range of 75000 dollars and 99999 dollars was 30% while only 5% of the govt employees made below than 50000.Moreover, The second category who earned the highest were freelance consultants. One quarter of them are able to earn more than 75000 dollars and one quarter of them earned even more than 10000 dollars . Lastly , the employees of private companies, most of them earned in the range of 50000 to 74999 dollars while a little below than one third of them earned 10000 plus dollars .
It is apparent that they knew that you would do great job at explaining it to us, so they went on making these charts boldly, not being afraid no one will focus on the right thing. I mean, I would never come up with such writing even in a ten years. Simply amazing!
Wowww, appreciate the kind words.😊💜
I'm glad I found your channel, my exam is in 10 days I hope your channel will save me...thank u, u are helping me a lot.
so how much band score you had get
how much band score you get
@@dynamite380 I've got 6.5.
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Hey, thank you so much Lilie, you made it easy for me to select the data and write the right information. I was so glad that I came across your video, it's been very useful.
I'm so glad to hear that!😊
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of students in different types of work status after completing their Anthropology degree in a university, while the table provides details about the salary packages of Anthropologists who have 5-year experience.
At first it was hard to get used to understand the accent. But once I got used to, I understood that this vd was just as good as gold, unvaluable. I got everything on how to describe this kind of double charts.
this is very helpful video for me because before, am not clearly understand about task 1 💐
I can't thank you enough. You are a great teacher. You make the learning process quite easy.
Wow, thank you!😊
Hey Lilie , I learned a lot from your channel ,and got an overall 7 band score . Thanks a lot !.....
That's amazing! How much did you score on the writing test?
@@LilieIELTS 6.5 , and the mistake that I have done is not managing the time. I spent 25 min on task 1 and left with 35 min for task 2 😐
Thanks! I was so confused when I saw this mixed chart in the Cambridge IELTS Book, but you explained it so wonderfully that it has become really easy.
Glad it was helpful!😊
Thank you for your amazing videos. I was confused about how to prepare writing but your videos me a lot
Happy to hear that!😊😊♥
Good afternoon Lilie! I'm Alex from India. I'm a huge fan of your videos as they are explained the way I wanted. Furthermore, I, too, had been spared a lot of time to learn writing skills from a scholastic video, but found none. Recently I found your videos, and they are exactly presented as I wanted and the way I understand. I would like to congratulate you for the efforts you put to make this possible and would like to express my deepest gratitude. I have a request. Could you please make separate videos for a Pie chart and a Table? Yes, I found one in a Mixed chart video, but it didn't serve my purpose. I apologize if it is too much to ask.
Thanks for the kind words and video ideas. The next video will be about a table.
Really your ideas are far exceptional than the traditional ones.
Love you
Wow, thank you. IELTS 17 just came out. The next video is going to be the hardest writing question in the book. Stay tuned. By the way, have you guys got the book?
@@LilieIELTS Nope!
Please upload those vedios quickly,my exam is knocking at the door
@@LilieIELTS ielts 17 academic?
Where did you get it from?
I guess it's not available in India yet
@@freya9751 I bought it in China.
you'r my best ielts teacher ever❤❤❤
😊Hope u pass the exam soon.
Am I the only one who didn't understand the table????? The pie chart was easy to understand but I'm struggling to understand the table
Me too 😂
The explanation also seemed messy to me
Yes i do,
What help do you need?
Me also
Im too
The best writing channneeellllll🙂🙂🙂
Thanks for great tips for such pie chart & table ,you really made things so easy.
Appreciate the kind words.😊
Thanks lilie ..i will definetly come back to comment here after receiving my desire band scores❤
I'm waiting for your good news😊
This video really helps to understand two different graphs👍
Thank you for your help
This was best video I saw on this topic!
I really appreciate your teaching
Very helpful
best videos ever found on yt
Thank you for your help. I checked and that essay is hardly a 6. Wish you could provide a better version
Hi lilie, Thank you for sharing your wealth of knowledge with us. Thank you for that. and I just want to clarify something with the introduction part that we can use as below: could you please clarify the below to me please......🙂
"The pie chart illustrates the percentage of what one university's graduating anthropology students were employed after completing their undergraduate degree, while the table demonstrates the salaries of the anthropologists after five years".
Hi, I don't think your text about the pie chart works.
@@LilieIELTS Thank you for the clarification Lilie....
appreciate your effort and thank you
Awww, thanks for the nice remarks.
Again thank you miss❤️
Kindly make some videos on reading strategies as well.
You are doing great job
I'm so happy that I've matched your channel, it's useful for getting experienced practice easily, this video especially is helpful. Yet I think this article is too long, 235 words, what do you think?
Glad you found the channel. Yes, it's a bit long. These charts just have way too many data points.
Thank you very much. Please do more videos
Thanks for sharing your writing and thoughts, which are all very practical. But i have concern about the experission in paragraph 2, where we use 'half of whom' to describe the highest range of salary. It is indeed half of 80%, but also 40% of this type of job, i feel i cannot figure it out clearly while writing.
I hope everything I learnt comes handy today. You're amazing! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the kind words. 😊
Thanks for the videos you make to enable us get high bands in the IELTS exam.
I noticed that the paragraphs usually starts at the beginning of the line instead of giving a gag into the line before starting to write. For example;
"Overall, the majority of the graduates"
Why not starting like this;
"Overall, the majority of the graduates"
You're welcome. It doesn't matter. Both are correct.
what is the difference you are writing the same sentences?
So grateful
Appreciable effort !!
You made it look so easy
thanks for the kind words!😊😊
@@LilieIELTS no worries, my test is next month. I'm struggling with writing task 1 but your videos have been a tremendous help.
academic book 14 page 93😃 thank you I've got ideas from you💝💗
You're welcome 😊
very helpful videos easy to follow and understand...keep up the good work
Glad to hear that!💜
Best content as well as good mentor ❣️ Take love from Bangladesh
Thank you. I'll take it. 😊
Thanks for the explanation
You're such a sweetheart, u explain much well than other teachers available in UA-cam, sending love 💕💕💕💕
thank u for the sweet words!🙂
It's very helpful. Thanks!
Glad it was helpful!😊 And thanks for watching.
very helpful. please do on writing task 2
I don’t understand the second chart
You are the best!
Thanks!😊💜💜💜
I really appreciate your teaching however sometimes it is in difficult terms and words.
comprehensive and very informative👌👌👏👏
Glad you think so!😊
Great work, why the word "Anthropology" the first letter written in capital " in the introduction"
Thanks dear
Can u create a video on the two same chart in task one
I turned the intro to passive. Pls tell me whether it's right or wrong..
The information about the income of Anthropology graduates who qualified from a particular university after a work experience of 5 years is depicted by rendered pie chart.
love it
Thank you❤
You're welcome. 😊
Overall, it is obvious that the majority of bachelor's degree students are full-timer after their graduation. While, anthropologists either running their own business or holding positions in the government are well-paid in comparison to those who are involved in private corporations.
is it a good overall?
I always follow your writing sample and fond of your writing style.
But, i Couldn't find any of your task 2 sample😢😢
Love and respect🌹❤️🙏🇧🇩
Thank you for your love and support. Check out my writing blog. It has what you're looking for. 😊
www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Fantastic 🌿🍀
Thank you! Cheers!💜😊
great content keep it up my exam date is 11 aug everyone please pray for me
All the best✊
thank you
Welcome!
Let me put it in simple words: G E N I O U S🤯
Hey Lilie, I've learnt that in the overview, we don't have to add any data, but I saw that you mentioned $75000 and the word "half of" in the overview. So does it matter to our overview? Are they also data or not? Thank you!
nice
I'm having a problem with one table...it would be great if you help me to just differentiate the figures
Here are some sample essays about one table: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/
If you have any *specific* questions about writing, feel free to ask. I will try my best to answer. Good luck on your test.
Could please help me I can't analysis data of table and chart,also question that is about 250words (question only-250) and I know that use. 5 parts to analysis the data please help I have paper in 3days
Hi, I shared how to analyze data in this video: ua-cam.com/video/qFk0pyVs9tE/v-deo.html
Great approach. What score can be received for this write up, in your opinion ?
Hi, I think it deserves at least a 7.5. 😊
Is it correct to include the numbers in overview paragraph?
How many words are there in this report you've written ?
Why did u wrote " half of whom" if there was 40%
where is the conslusion???????
In task 1 ?????
You don't need to write a conclusion in writing task 1
We can write up to maximum 170 words
You have 240+
How many words should a writing task 1 have? How many word are in your description?
Can we use alumni istead of graduates?
Based on what rule or clue you used the past?
Please read the question again. It uses the simple past "did".
@@LilieIELTS alriso if I didn't see year's I check the tense of the introduction
Yes, exactly.
Hlo Lilie we can write numerical terms in Overall.
hi, in your overview paragraph you included the number $75000. Aren't we supposed to omit numbers in overview paragraphs?
This number represents a particular category not a figure (like the percentages indicated for each category) so we can include it in the overview.
are we allowed to write no.s in the overview?
No but words like "majority" or "half" are fine.
I wrote this one, but after reading your sample essay, I realise my essay is just a shit.
Lillie do you have website or channel like this to learn ielts in speaking?
Sorry, I don't. But I'm going to create Shorts on speaking.
Can I use meanwhile instead of while in introduction???
Yes.
I haven't understood how you grouped the the data in the table
Where exactly do you have trouble understanding?
But aren’t we supposed to exclude numbers in the overview? That will deduct marks.
Hi, "half" is fine. It’s impossible to use words like most or minority in our overview if the figures are close to the middle. There’s no other way to talk about figures near 50%.
hi, do u teach ielts writing?? i have got 6 only, but i need a band 7 in writing.
Sorry, I don't sell anything yet, but feel free to check out my writing blog: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Can we really put $75000 in an overview? I was taught that we weren't allowed to include numbers or figures in overview.
In this chart, $75000 is actually a character used to describe a group of data, it happens to be a figure.
tomorrow is my exam. please, pray for me .
Good but fastest explanation it's hard to catch up and understand. Make it slow please!
Today is my exam ❤
How did it go?
Hi, why cant we write 'percent' like this: % ?. and why didnt you mention the exact percentage given in the pie-chart?
Yes, you can use %.
Sorry, I don't understand your second question. I did mention the exact percentages in the pie chart except for 52%, which I replaced with "just over half".
@@LilieIELTS I meant to say why didnt you put the percentages for the rest of them like 18% and 5% and so on..
@@nehahussain2471 I did. I included all the percentages in the pie chart. The only figure I omitted is the figure for the "not known" category. Please watch the video again or read the sample essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/destination-of-anthropology-graduates/
@@LilieIELTS okay thanks a lot! the video did help me in organizing the way to write
hi is ielts for british council and idp the same??
Yes.
Please do slow down when talking
The speed is too fast...Can you slow it down?
Sure. I think I don't talk that fast in my latest videos. Check them out.
today i have my test
Best luck with your test!✊
Anthropologist isn't a job?
Do we want to mention anthropologist who found job?
Yes, you need to mention "found jobs" in your introduction. Once you've established the context, you don't have to mention it again and again.
Your a good teacher but your a bit fast😢
don't mention numbers in the overview
"Half" is fine.
Lillyy was a little girl, i found this lillyy
You talk too fast. Good explanation but it's too quick
Could you Please slowly talk..😢😢
Good video though you are too fast
Yeah I know. Sorry about that.
not such a good vedio
Not Recomended, Not Clear, Confusing one,
Thank you ma'am , you helped me a lot 🤎 my exam is tomorrow wish me luck ~~🤎
All the luck in the world, all wished for you.😊😊😊