I can't recall the exact thing but it read something like this: "it is thought that encouraging reading of story books in children is better than they having to spend much time watching television or playing video games." To what extent do u agree or disagree?
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So I have my exam in few weeks and I have been so worried about bar graphs but after watching this video I understand everything. I can’t believe it’s this simple. God bless you🙏
Thanks a million for your guidance, Lilie. Your video popped up while I was struggling to paraphrase and avoid repetition while writing task 1. Your writing style is coherent and well-structured. Look forwards to your next wonderful videos ^^ Super duper ~
Girl,you just did my day. thats a real great idea to write bodyies and then overview. Cuz i really struggled when i was done with overall i couldnt really come up with 2 bodies as i gave all info in overall. THX
You are the first UA-camr that let me have the desire to comment, your video is so helpful, basically answered all the questions I have for task 1 for now. Thank you for the kindly sharing!🌟
Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please
Overview: Overall, it is evident that in four out of the five cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart), visiting a café for coffee or tea was the most popular activity among residents. Adelaide is the exception, where buying instant coffee was slightly more popular than visiting cafés. In contrast, buying fresh coffee was the least popular option across all the cities.
Mam Thankyou very much actually I suffed from same kind like I describe all the figure in detail but when I watch this video regarding my mistake Now I feel really good again thank you Mam for giving good solution.
@@LilieIELTSmam just I have one doubt about introduction like in introduction line" in five cities in Australia" is it correct line OR" in five cities of Australia" is correct line I am so confuse please let me know about this enquiry
I am not well prepared diagram nd map 😢 i only focus on graph😢 Hope i got desirable band. If i get my band i will give you thank you bottom of my heart❤
In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?
But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.
First of all, thank you so much for such informative videos, they are just excellent. What i am struggling to find is standard sample. Can you kindly suggest me a book where i can find all the samples (let's say for bar chart at least 5) for all types of criteria's of writing task 1?
Hey Lilie, I have came across of various videos so far. However, I came to acknowledge that you are really azaming in relative to the contents u describe. Thank you so much for such an wonderful idea's, I do have exam on 24 december L,R,W. Thanks a lot.😇
Please Score it. "The given bar chart illustrates a survey report from the last four weeks that reveals the proportion of city residents who have buying and drinking habits of coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in Australia. Overall, this survey occurred under three categories, where fresh coffee buyers were in the last place in all cities. Instant coffee buyers were in the second position, and the first category includes the personnel who went to a café in all areas except in Adelaide. Firstly, it is essential to note that the majority of people (from 55% to 64%) were likely to take coffee and tea by going to a café in four cities. Only almost 50% of residents of Adelaide used to go to cafés in the last four weeks. On the other hand, only 34% to 44% of personnel went to buy fresh coffee, whereas city-wise proportions were 44% in Sydney, 42.5% in Melbourne, almost 35% in both Brisbane and Adelaide, and last but not least 38% in Hobart. The remaining category who bought instant coffee were high in Hobart (near about 55%). In Adelaide, it occupied 50% of residents and took over the other two categories. In other cities, it remained in the second position in the last month, and the proportion was between 45% and 52.5%."
I do really love your content as it helps me a lot. But Do you have any books or blogs that have some sources of vocabulary for presenting the ideas in writing?? because i dont have much high-level academic structure
I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated
I was busy with the challenge. The first sentence in the third paragraph compares Adelaide to the other four cities: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/ No, you shouldn't use 'level off' and 'fluctuate' for a chart that doesn't show trends. dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/level-off
Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph? Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%. I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply
Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please
@@LilieIELTS okay... Then could you do me a favour, or evaluate my writing or discuss graphs with me? I am a good learner and would not take much of your tym.. If you could do a friendly favour or a favour for sake of humanity? 😔
Sorry, I don't proofread essays. But if you have any *specific* questions about writing, you can leave a comment on UA-cam or on my blog. I'll do my best to answer. 😊
Hi Lilie, I want to say a big thank you for helping in my IELTS preparation.Your content is great. I got an overall score of 7.5 L8 R7 W7 S8.
Wowww, you did an amazing job. Wish you a bright future ahead.💜 Do U mind sharing your task 2 question here?
I can't recall the exact thing but it read something like this: "it is thought that encouraging reading of story books in children is better than they having to spend much time watching television or playing video games."
To what extent do u agree or disagree?
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@@LilieIELTS I have scored a total of band 8😄! (S 8, L 8.5, R 8.5, W 7)
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So I have my exam in few weeks and I have been so worried about bar graphs but after watching this video I understand everything. I can’t believe it’s this simple. God bless you🙏
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Thanks a million for your guidance, Lilie. Your video popped up while I was struggling to paraphrase and avoid repetition while writing task 1. Your writing style is coherent and well-structured. Look forwards to your next wonderful videos ^^
Super duper ~
Thanks for the kind words!
Girl,you just did my day. thats a real great idea to write bodyies and then overview. Cuz i really struggled when i was done with overall i couldnt really come up with 2 bodies as i gave all info in overall. THX
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You are the first UA-camr that let me have the desire to comment, your video is so helpful, basically answered all the questions I have for task 1 for now. Thank you for the kindly sharing!🌟
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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest
And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced???
In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare????
Please reply please
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Overview: Overall, it is evident that in four out of the five cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart), visiting a café for coffee or tea was the most popular activity among residents. Adelaide is the exception, where buying instant coffee was slightly more popular than visiting cafés. In contrast, buying fresh coffee was the least popular option across all the cities.
I cannot resist to watch your videos and taking down the notes. Thanks a lot ❤😘
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I have a problem with how to understand the graph.. When I see that question I become confused what should I write about this 😢😢😢
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Mam Thankyou very much actually I suffed from same kind like I describe all the figure in detail but when I watch this video regarding my mistake Now I feel really good again thank you Mam for giving good solution.
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@@LilieIELTSmam just I have one doubt about introduction like in introduction line" in five cities in Australia" is it correct line OR" in five cities of Australia" is correct line I am so confuse please let me know about this enquiry
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Can’t we use last month instead of last for weeks? because we know that a month usually consist 4 week.
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My basics English is not so good its my humble request please provide general structures for every type of chart in easy words
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Do we use present simple if the chart doesn t mention year or time?😢
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I am not well prepared diagram nd map 😢 i only focus on graph😢 Hope i got desirable band. If i get my band i will give you thank you bottom of my heart❤
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Can we use approximately with the numbers such 64, 62 and 55 respectively????
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Could I know we can use only past tense for describing?
Yes, that's exactly what I did.
In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?
But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.
@@LilieIELTS yep, your latter sentence is what I wanna say--- 'least common' :) thanks for your reply 🙏
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First of all, thank you so much for such informative videos, they are just excellent. What i am struggling to find is standard sample. Can you kindly suggest me a book where i can find all the samples (let's say for bar chart at least 5) for all types of criteria's of writing task 1?
You can read sample essays on my site 😊 ieltsessaybank.com
Hey Lilie, I have came across of various videos so far. However, I came to acknowledge that you are really azaming in relative to the contents u describe. Thank you so much for such an wonderful idea's, I do have exam on 24 december L,R,W. Thanks a lot.😇
Thanks for the kind words. Best luck with your exam!✊
Thank you for the great content!!!
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Please Score it.
"The given bar chart illustrates a survey report from the last four weeks that reveals the proportion of city residents who have buying and drinking habits of coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in Australia.
Overall, this survey occurred under three categories, where fresh coffee buyers were in the last place in all cities. Instant coffee buyers were in the second position, and the first category includes the personnel who went to a café in all areas except in Adelaide.
Firstly, it is essential to note that the majority of people (from 55% to 64%) were likely to take coffee and tea by going to a café in four cities. Only almost 50% of residents of Adelaide used to go to cafés in the last four weeks.
On the other hand, only 34% to 44% of personnel went to buy fresh coffee, whereas city-wise proportions were 44% in Sydney, 42.5% in Melbourne, almost 35% in both Brisbane and Adelaide, and last but not least 38% in Hobart.
The remaining category who bought instant coffee were high in Hobart (near about 55%). In Adelaide, it occupied 50% of residents and took over the other two categories. In other cities, it remained in the second position in the last month, and the proportion was between 45% and 52.5%."
I do really love your content as it helps me a lot. But Do you have any books or blogs that have some sources of vocabulary for presenting the ideas in writing?? because i dont have much high-level academic structure
Check out my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
thanks for the wonderful explanation.
Glad you liked it
Amazing content. Keep it up👍
Thank you! Will do!💜
can we use (less likely than )in task 1 ?or is it less than more appropriate?? ---------fresh coffee section...
"Less likely than" is a type of language used in statistics, so it's actually very good for task 1.
That was helpful. Thank you!
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Hi Lilie, i have a question, can i replace result(s) with outcome? And of course, THANK YOU for your helpful videos!!!
Yes, 'outcomes' works.
Yours videos are really helpful
Glad you like them!😊
Hiii. Id have a question. Should we also spell out the number in percentage under 10? Thank you.
No, we don't need to.
Thanks very much.
Should we use connecting word more often . Is it necessary ???
using linking words is not the only way to create flow.
@@LilieIELTS ok
I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated
I was busy with the challenge. The first sentence in the third paragraph compares Adelaide to the other four cities: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
No, you shouldn't use 'level off' and 'fluctuate' for a chart that doesn't show trends.
dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/level-off
@@LilieIELTSi just saw your reply thanks a lot and waiting for the next challenge since it was impossible for me to participate in the first one
5:02...shouldn't we add comma before respectively?
Hi, the comma before "respectively" is optional.
@@LilieIELTS thanks...tomorrow is my exam...i hope i'll get atleast 7 but i haven't practiced much rather i used to read your essays on ur website
@@gurkaran9871 Best of luck ✊and don't forget to come back and share your score here.
@@LilieIELTS sure
Mam i don't know how to present data like at 23% by 50% and exam is comming please help
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Amazing lecture but the minimum word limit is 150 words and this is short by 20-30 words. Anyways quality is excellent.🔥
Hi, it's 167 words. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
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Can we use reserach instead survey?
No.
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Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph?
Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%.
I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply
Hi, I don't think you can. To fluctuate means to change continually. However, those percentages don't change. They're just different from each other.
Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest
And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced???
In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare????
Please reply please
What about instant coffee you did not mention
I believe I mentioned it.
Mam but it's still less than 150 words how to write more than that
Hi, the essay is 167 words long. You can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/
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Mam how we can use connectors and synonymous in writing
I'll try to explain a little bit the use of connectors in the next video.
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how much band for this report essay ?
Hi, this essay was improved by native speakers. I think it deserves at least an 8. Do you agree?😊
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@@LilieIELTS okay... Then could you do me a favour, or evaluate my writing or discuss graphs with me? I am a good learner and would not take much of your tym.. If you could do a friendly favour or a favour for sake of humanity? 😔
Sorry, I don't proofread essays. But if you have any *specific* questions about writing, you can leave a comment on UA-cam or on my blog. I'll do my best to answer. 😊
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