Second Verse, Worse Than The First! | A Review of 'This Is Why I Hate You' by Onision
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- Why does he hate everyone? Because he's a tremendous douche-canoe!
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This book is a pizza cutter
All edge
No point
THIS MADE ME W HE E Z E
I just choked on my tea. Thanks.
that's a good one lmao
ayyyyyy
This is
My 3 most favorite comment
Of all time
im pretty sure you subjecting yourself to another onision book counts as self harm. are you ok? do you need to talk? we're worried about you bro
R/killmenow is just him after posting the video
I am near the end of the video I couldn't agree more.
I am having a drink in his honor. I applaud his bravery to suffer for us like this
Agreed my dude
I have to skip a section of the video because when he read some of the section of the book, I cringe. I don't even own the book (Thank you angle), but I can feel his pain. Thank you for reviewing this book to us. I am now on my way to the liquor store and get myself whiskey, beer and find one of my friends to hang out with. I need to forget this story asap.
Onion: Commit yourself to silence. You most likely have nothing of value to say anyway.
Me: *Uno reverse card*
👍
I mean you're not wrong
Onion: ur ugly stupid and egotistical
Commentator: no u
Onion: *anger*
Got em.
Oh that's hot. That's a hot comment.
*Do* *it* *again*
I saw a book review about this book that said “Not the softest toilet paper I’ve bought but got the job done” and I’m screaming.
Whhyyyyy isn’t this comment more popular XD
😆😂🤣
Omg I love thattty
Damn that's funny!!
Why would you use this as toilet paper? There's already shit on the pages.
as a female, if a guy just snaps another guy's arm with a straight face, not a hint of guilt or some kind of resistance, how am i supposed to know he wouldn't hurt me in the blink of an eye? a major red flag imo
Nonono, you’re supposed to swoon and tell him all about how heroic he is and how much you needed him to save you!
What you dont trust Onion Boy?
As a human, if a guy just snaps another guy's arm with a straight face, not a hint of guilt or some restraint, I'd be scared shitless too
@@bardolomaios2g301 But Arthur is so cool and charismatic. You have to love him, he's the protagonist.
@@bardolomaios2g301 Yeah, he's the badass and cool hero we needed!
He said nine to seventeen kicks because those are the ages he likes his partners to be it was clear all along.
Oof
DEAD XD
“We got em boys.”
Foreshadowing to deepen the lore
Truly a literary genius...
Burn....🌋
Arthur's redeeming quality: he died.
Lmao
thanks for the spoiler! jk
Tuberculosis is serious business. R.I.P Arthur.
hAvE fAiTh ArThUr
One of the few spoilers that actually made me smile
A really good point that should be repeated to writers over and over: the problem is not that your character wants to hurt rapists, the problem is the only reason you wrote rape is to give your character an excuse to hurt someone.
Seymour Plank He uses that rape as a plot device and uses it very gratuitously. It serves no purpose than to make us root for Arthur because “hur dur he killed bad man”
To add to that; You are not a good person if you prioritize hurting perpetrators over taking care of victims.
amen! This could have also been so interesting, he could feel guilt after losing control and you could explore both of there mental journeys but instead its just power fantasy plot device to save the damsel in distress, truly awful
Yeah, that's a very good point. If he wrote about sexual assault but made his main character part of the victim's support system rather than her white knight, that would put the power in the victim's hands rather than in some random jackass' hands. But Onion Boy has to be the hero so of course he'd never let that happen...
55:04: No. 'Consenting Adult' cannot do anything. Consent isnt a 'magical thing' that makes everything ok (widespread misunderstanding about Consent there).
"butterflies, creatures whose literal core design exists to scare away predators" Onision is scared of butterflies confirmed
ilikemoths Moths are better anyways.
You gotta admit though, butterflies are pretty scary. I mean did you know that some of those bastards are carnivores!? Don't even get me started on those beady eyes.
@@watermelononachair1076 Fun fact: butterflys sometimes drink human blood. 😊
@@helena_8478 Thanks, Because butterflies weren't horrifying enough. It's not like they're often associated with death, and show up in my nightmares every night. Now I gotta think about count butterfly over here?!
@@watermelononachair1076 You are welcome! :)
Another fun fact : in Slavic mythology if you wanted to kill a vampire you would have too kill their butterfly.
Vampire - bat thing only bat is butterfly.
Onision: "Stop talking, you likely have nothing of value to say"
Also Onision: *writes 2 books, makes 8 youtube channels*
He wrote 3 books.
Katherine Bui he’s on book four now, I believe! He posts it to his Patreon, chapter by chapter, like the bad fanfic it is.
@@enjoyerofnonsense3392 How do you know this?
Katherine Bui I saw how he raged at the one fan who withdrew a $2 pledge, figured I would repeat that action and see what happens! Plus, I’ve always wanted to read his “books” for myself. Even these in depth reviews, I still love to make myself suffer directly.
@@enjoyerofnonsense3392 I applaud you for all the pain that you had to go through. Oinision's books are very difficult person to read.
bad writing aside, the way he arbitrarily assigns sexual assault and trauma history to his female characters just so he can become the hero is so disgusting. His female characters are just bags of trauma who onision is there to save and rescue. It's so disturbing. He has such a savior complex and a fantasy of rescuing the poor maiden that he had to include it in both of his books. And I'm not going to say James or Arthur because let's be real- it's Onision. It's so transparent and telling. He's gross and creepy.
Oh come this like saying George RR Martin is a pervert for writing in rape scenes
Does RR Martin write about rape so that he can feed his own ego as a savior and god to women he "rescues"? Are female characters in his books merely there so that a psychopath can be their knight in shining armour? I feel like you purposefully missed her point
"bags of trauma" is so spot on. they're just vaguely woman-shaped objects to be saved and to lavish attention on greggy wegg.
@@dersuddeutschesumpf5444 GRRM uses rape in ways that are boring and cliche, BUT it isn't the be all and end all of his female characters, and you don't get the sense that GRRM had one hand down his pants when writing about it. The presence of rape also (to GRRM's credit) is usually served to further the victim's story rather than a male character somewhere in her life.
Onision's use of assault is very VERY telling - it creates a female character that is at once broken, and sexually available. Her story of assault centres the boy who is special enough to love her (soiled and worthless as she is), and special enough to save her, while she has zero agency of her own - The fantasy of the nastiest kind of dude.
@Alex Beyer I know what you're talking about!! My mom's a nurse and she told me about it before.. I'm pretty suee its just called the "Hero Complex" or "Hero Syndrome", somebody who purposefully creates a desperate situation so that they can save the day.... but I could be wrong.
me: mom can i go see Joker?
mom: we have Joker at home
Joker at home:
Yess
YESSSSS
Onision is the Joker. He's just the bad one, Jared Leto.
He’s the joker but the r is silent
@@sammcneillmckinnell5003 onision is WAY WORSE. Jared Leto had a bad role and acted like a dick, yeah, but what's onions excuse? Plus, onion also has counts of child neglect, environmental neglect, manipulation, worst and worst things
The fact it is over hour long is really satisfing to see
the first book is foreshadowing the new zealand shooting
thats why he's shit talking everyone because the guy "stole his idea" i bet he thinks
The fact that you have Neopolitan as a profile picture makes this really satisfying to see.
After my like, you have 666 likes on your comment.😶
it amazes me how his books make all the wattpad fanfictions written by 12 year olds look like Les Misérables in comparison
There's the 69th like.
my old wattpad youtuber crackfics are better than this shit-
i SUCK at writing, and i sucked at writing even worse when I was 14. AND YET. MY HOMESTUCK FANFIC LOOKS BETTER SOMEHOW.
At least with the 12 year olds there 12 and there not hurting anyone meanwhile with Oninsion he is not 12 and is a terrible person.
@@jessehunter362 _homestuck?_
He complains about vegetarians, even after they gave him his BODDDAAAAAAAAAAY?
That is his vegetarian BODDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Vegan? Bro no...
Lmao! Well they sure took it right back 🤣
Vegetarians gave him his body?? Lol
@@kaylakthulhu8623 🤣🤣🤣
"Look! I ran out of yellow tabs!"
He was so sweet and innocent before he read Empress Theresa
Every time I watch these I have to think back to the 13 different packs
As Strange Æons would say "Yes girl, yes! Chop those onions!"
I see you're a person of culture as well.
I want to see a support group for all youtubers who tried to read Onion's "books". Hilarity will ensue
How did both of us come across these two channels both talking about Onion Man's garbage book
@@arctodus1 UA-cam recommendations
@@arctodus1 ah I see you know about noodle leg boi
"It comes off a little rapey"
A good summary of Onion Boy as a person
Edit: I am glad so many people like my shitty joke lol
Mira King Add an 's to the it and remove "comes off a little" from that sentence and bingo
Deadass
I love how this labels onision as “it” which isn’t wrong at all
High key
Seriously, he's as bad as Logan Paul, I think.
Why is Onision so attracted to school shootings?
*RED FLAG* *RED FLAG* 🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩
@@oopsalltes2 Honestly, if I ever heard that was something he thought about doing I wouldn't be surprised. I feel like the thought of going to jail is something that keeps him from doing more awful things than he already is.
Because the school shooting got assaulted so he needs to save the school shooting
****this is joke, I’m just making reference to Greg’s HORRIBLE portrayal of women through sexual assault, trauma, and their strange attraction to the main character of their respective story.
Gracious Rosebud I CANT 😂😂😂
Cause he obviously wished he would've been able to do it himself.
On today's episode of "Things and Concepts Greg Doesn't Understand!":
-Nihilism
-Authority
-Responsibility
-Free Will
-Creativity
-Sports
-Relationships
-Basic Human Interaction
-Basic Human Emotional Responses
-Basic Human Decency
-The Military
-What It Means To Be Part Of The Military
-Military Service
-The UCMJ
-The Severity Of Sexual Assault
-The Severity Of School Shootings
-Intimacy
-Having Sex
-The Value Of Having Sex
-Intimidation
-Fashion
-Butterflies
-Human Anatomy
-Self-Awareness
-Respect
-Hypocrisy
-Weakness
-Main Characters With No Weaknesses
-Compassion
-Empathy
-The Difficulty Of Dealing With Suicidal Thoughts
-Cops
-Religion
-Being Likeable
-The Fact That Calling Yourself "An Alpha" Does Not In Fact Make You An Alpha
-The Fact That Calling Yourself "An Alpha" Does Not In Fact Make You Look Or Sound Cool
-How To Write A Fucking Book
You can fill a Wikipedia with all the shit normal humans get, but onion boy doesn't understand.
40:44: No, not fine, duh.
54:48: Haha, no. Consent aint a magical thing after all.
Its no magic that makes everything in the
world fine and dand..y.
-How being gay works
@@somerandomgoblin2583 I was just about to say that. And also
- how hard it is to be gay and how fucking tired we are of either being objectified or hated by most
Where’s MY boy who will sweep me off my feet and force me to discard my personality and dress like a goth 😍
@@aurydoesstuffs sorry ate it all
@@punchyboi6915 that explains a lot lol
Why do I feel like that story that “happened in his real life” never really went that way, only in his mind? Cause we all know that he made up Skye and Shiloh still keeping in contact with him and wanting him back. He’s so pathetic. 😆
@@Tina_Bo_Binaaa he probably got his ass kicked by some chad in school and based Jhon on him
It might be Onision! As long as you are younger than 18 I think he will be interested, and he sure fits what you're looking for.
The exact moment after he said "trauma sex" i got an ad for emotional support animals and it felt like it wasn't coincidence
We're going to need that emotional support pet after this book >_>
Oh god
@@AzulS4444 I needed one as soon as I saw this was another Onision book leading me down the rabbit hole
^When deep state surveillance is actually a blessing.
40:11
"John, you ready to hurt?" just makes him sound like the world's friendliest dominatrix.
Someone write a short story about the world’s friendliest dominatrix, please. I am already very invested in this character who hasn’t been spun into existence.
I’m with Lauren
I'm with Lemon and Lauren
Hmmm, i could attempt to write a short story like that but i've got no clue where to put it up for everyone to read. I'm already getting numerous ideas. Not sure how "hardcore" would be too hardcore though.
I think that's one side quest on the Yakuza franchise
Maybe it's stupid, but it's been a hard week and Krimson's little 'you matter' rant made me smile
:)
Fun fact: Onision didn't spend that long in the military, in fact he stripped down naked and ran around pretending to be crazy in order to get kicked out. That succeeded.
So, like Klinger from MASH but with none of the charm...? Haha!
The best part is that if he would have even given a shit, he would basically be the elite of the elite.
Yes he did go to the highest class of Air Force, forgot what of the top of my head.
I am not sure if I should laugh or cry because I can not and will not imagine Onision as a full fledged elite soldier.
Really? HOLY SHIT LMAO
What do you mean "pretending" to be crazy? The guy's clearly off his rocker.
Did he ever stop?
YES DADDY HIT ME WITH AN HOUR LONG BOOK REVIEW
@@helena_5456 yeah I am definitely guilty of a crush too xD
Honestly what a cute guyyyh
Whats all this water on the floor, wait....
@@DannyGruesome Noah's finna need another arc.
all yall need jesus
Onion doesn’t use editors because his ego wouldn’t allow it.
You mean he can’t afford it😂
@@Moogle96 fans offered. He refused
Legit.
*onision uses onion attack* it’s super affective
@@boobookitty3029 Onision's biological cells are made up of that poison onion.
"Verbal communication is key to committing genocide" sounds like a loading screen tip.
This would definitely be a true tip in Elden Ring.
*change culture sound effect*
OH MY FUCKING GOD 💀💀💀
It's like the kind of thing you'd see in a sequel to Spec Ops: The Line
@@beewitha50cal Or Metal Gear Solid 5, since language is a theme in that game.
r/iamverybadass + r/iamverysmart =
onision
+r/iam14andthisverydeep
Throw in a dash of r/thathappened and r/niceguys
Really I think r/iamverysmart and r/iam14andthisisdeep are the core characteristics of his being.
Onison, Razorfist, Count Dankula, Roosh V, Milo Yiannopoulos and I could go on and on and on. They're all sentient trash masquerading as people.
@@Falxifer95 Wait, what's wrong with Count Dankula?
the book is slightly, SLIGHTLY better if you imagine every character being played by Greg in wigs.
That is actually fairly entertaining, thank you
Oh, that's something Aeons mentioned when talking about the first book
@@WillieManga yea, and its a really good idea
That’s more or less the basis of all of his “comedy” videos
I see you are an aeons fan as well
calls his new girlfriend booty
*onionboi approves*
having other people equally objectify her
*onionboi doesnt approve*
That's what Greg does xD. it's fine for him to be racist, it's fine for him to think of women as nothing more than sex objects etc. But god forbid someone else do it LOL.
Theory: The reason there's a school shooting is that this takes place in the same universe as Stones to Abbigale and Onision wants to pitch his own Cinematic Universe to Universal.
That's my theory. They're in the same universe and the same event which was hinted by the Mr. Hanson but it's still so clumsy i can't blame anyone for not picking up on it
@@DrCandyStriper This is still less embarrassing than the Dark Universe. Not sure how much of an accomplishment that is.
@@DrCandyStriper I was waiting for news that the school had burned down, actually. Definitely a "same town, different me" kind of thing.
In what I read it's not unusual for authors to insert tiny (or blatant) bits that suggest all these stories take place in the same universe; so I am used to it. It does not work when the setup is genre-crossing, of course.
54:48: Haha, no.
Consenting adults can also not just
do everything and anything.
Consent aint a magical thing after all.
Its no magic that makes everything in the
world fine and dandy.
ah yes and the "school shooting cinematic universe" is something that they will undoubtedly find works well with the brand they are going for...
Ah yes! Onision treating women as traumatized, adoring pieces of property is his signature. His whole sexuality is taking advantage of mentally unstable or downtrodden women.
Good thing people outgrow Onision faster than he outgrows himself.
Large Rooster “women,” as if Greg’s sexuality isn’t consisted of underaged girls and whatever laney is
Oh yeah - it's like his weird/sick fetish. It says a lot about a person when they're a famous UA-cam personality in this age and they have to go the self-publishing route for their books
Tis is sooo true and it makes me want to vomit
Yeah, that's called being a narcissist and a manipulator. Comes with free emotional and physical abuse.
In his third book, Reapers Creek, Onision calls his main character (who is named Daniel) Greg 3 times.
Really? That's hysterical.
There's a 3rd book?? I'm torn between wanting KrimsonRogue to review it and not wanting him to damage himself further, lol
@@DestinyKiller oh yeah. this one is about a magic rock in the head of a kid with rather destructive thoughts. Also the main character kills god.
@Dumbass uwu i read it with my own two eyes. 10/10 can confirm. the exact instances are
Chapter One: Stepdad says "Hi Greg"
Chapter Three: Classmate says "Hi Greg and (whatever his sisters name is)"
Chapter Ten: His mom wakes him up by shouting "Greg wake up" or something like that.
@@Jogjosmowwdkfs Oh ffs, I really hope KR takes another one for the team, lol
Did the man accidentally submit his Death Note fanfic instead of an actual story?
I haven’t seen the show in years but who would be Arthur? Light?
End Cat no. He would be the guy in the very beginning. The first victim of Light
@Professional Dragon Tamer thank you.
Wait. What if the Death Note Netflix Adaptation was secretly written by Onision? It would make so much sense as to why it’s so shit.
@@thaddeuskyle572 wow, that have to be the truth
“This is the equivalent of a seven year old playing pretend”
*PLEASE APOLOGIZE TO SEVEN YEAR OLDS THEY ARE NOT AS CRINGY AS THIS*
At least seven year olds TRY to have fun and be nice to each other!
And at least most 7-year-olds like to be heroes WITH their friends.
As a person who was once seven...some of them are indeed cringy, just not on this level lol
looks at my younger sibling....
At least a 7 year old playing pretend is sweet and fun to watch...this is just...awful
It's funny the Mr. Hansen is a recurring character, considering who's currently looking into him.
Why did my brain just spit out Charles Manson instead of Chris Hansen?
Charles “The Hansen” Manson
That is pretty great. Chris got a reference in Onion's books. That's amazing.
Poetic justice
@@KlNGMAKER Charles Dwayne "The Rock" "The Hanson" Manson Johnson
I'm legitimately writing a Papa John x Barack Obama fanfiction right now and it manages to somehow be better than anything Onision will ever write.
Ophelia Everything when you finish that please let me know where to read it
That sounds more realistic than Onision being a military badass who has multiple women fawning over him
i've read smut fanfictions of donald trump that made me feel less sick then reading this book
I’m sorry, a what?
That bar is so low it’s on the other side of the planet. Enjoy making your stories that are better than Gregory Dementia Raven Way’s!
This book would be leagues better if after "commit yourself to silence," the entire rest of the book was just blank pages.
That would be an ingenious.
That would be badass. So badass that Onionson would never have thought it.
That's such a good idea, especially because he contradicts the "talking=bad" claim later on
That, would be profound.
To bad Greg isn’t that smart
"If you told someone you weren't dating that a guy grabbed your hips..."
*flashback to Strange Aeons video*
*H E T O U C H E D M Y **_H I P_*
thanks for the laugh:)
Fear not, female specimen. *I shall D I S P O S E of him*
@@slevinchannel7589 wow ok point me to the guy who asked
@@slevinchannel7589 polygamy isn’t haram building and monogamy is far from natural
@@ReplyGuy22345 Uhm ok?
Thats both objectively wrong, but ok?
Book title should’ve been called “It’s not a phase, mom!”
i bet his mom could not go on without hoping that it is...
Apparently it's not a phase, that dude's 30+ years old. When will he grow up?
@@iliveonatropicalisland6086 Thank u, I was about to say that😐
please search Cherdley's video "it's not a phase" it is sooo good.
Lol 😂
"It seems the only way Onision is able to attract women is after some form of intense emotional trauma."
Boy if that aint the truth lol
Not true. Sometimes he lures in fan girls who are to young and naive to know better with you tube fame, isolates them from everyone else, and then has them groom other girls into his harem/cult.
It's scary how accurate that is. And yet, in spite of it, people still follow him. His following has definitely dwindled, right? But he's still given far more power than he deserves!
The man insists he's not a sociopath or a narcissist, and then exhibits behaviour in line with sociopaths and narcissists. Isolating, gas-lighting, abusing with ultimatums and endless verbal abuse when he isn't obeyed...
Can a man like that ever change for the better? In couples therapy, therapists will refuse to deal with an abusive partner because they'll never follow the steps, and will instead turn a safe space into a means of demeaning and abusing their beleaguered partner even further.
If Arthur hates jocks and hates authority, then why did he join the military?
computerworm42 so he can say he is a “veteran” when really he was dishonorably discharged
@@avavavaa i don't think it was a dishonorable discharge but it was one step above
Because onision is a contradiction machine
It wasn't a dishonorable discharge, he got a general discharge because it seems he refused to kill a rabbit
@@trato-jm3fx I don't understand why the rabbit story comes up when I search it up tho, did he censor others on purpose?
Onision is more than toxic. He is _radioactive._ In fact, I'm willing to say he's the _elephant's foot_ of society.
He is Chernobyl incarnate
Radiation and elephant feet do not want to be affiliated with Greg
Whats elephants foot?
@@sollumi3014 The melted core of Chernobyl. So radioactive that it fried the RC robot that photographed it.
"NOW HE'S RADIOACTIVE!!! THAT CAN'T BE GOOD!"
I'm Onision, I am.
Onision I am, I am.
I am the narcissistic edgelord next door.
Fear me, I've gouged out eyes before!
AWEtistic bro I was literally singing Henry VIII in my head as I was opening UA-cam
This was beautiful 👌
*gouged
Damn samayam, you diddly darn done good bro
SECOND VERSE! Same as the first! A whole lot louder and a whole lot WORSE!
Tab Legend:
Blue- Bad Character Moments
Green- Bad World and Story Building
Orange- Pure Cringe
Pink- Bad Lines
Yellow- Bad Writing Mistakes
Thank you
The Camel Channel you’re welcome
Thank you mister
Spaghetti Man you’re welcome
He put an orange tab on the cover of the book, he’s the messiah
Just a word on onision's military career... He got a general discharge (one step above dishonorable discharge), he got an Article 15 for having a mental breakdown and walking into his Sergeant's office completely naked to remind them that he was "a human being and not a robot", AND he never went on deployment. He might be a veteran, but he is NOT a war veteran. He deserves about as much respect for serving as an IRS agent. Both have worked for the government and were never putting their life on the line.
GOOD, I wouldn't trust that man with a butter knife, never mind him being with me in a battle.
@@kylamamber9080 i don't trust him with a spoon.
Didn’t he drop out of training?
@@hughjazz350 He did drop out of training because he refused to kill a rabbit because.....he's vegetarian
From what I heard, during the Physical training he’d frequently collapse during the runs and then when he was made to do exercises as punishment, which is common for every soldier going through training, he’d bitch and moan about being singled out and how everyone is out to get him.
Things I have learned of the Onion by hearing about these books:
-He was an emo tough-guy-wannabe in HS.
-He's never really fought anyone and has no clues how they work
-He has a R**e fantasy
-He got bullied to all hell in HS
-He never socially interacted in HS
-He can NEVER claim insanity in court due to these books; while he does have horrid terroristic thoughts, he actually reflects on them in the books, showing he is capable of sound judgment. (I love this one the most)
I heard someone say before that crazy is not understanding realistic moral boundaries, while evil is just not caring about it.
@@WillieManga that sounds like crap
@@WillieManga That's definitely a massive simplification, but it's the jist of it, aye
Most people Blame parents, I will blame bullies. Holy shit, way to make piss smell worse, you pricks.
If my not boyfriend broke someones' arm for touching me, I would change my name and move to another state because he's obviously deranged and probably would kill me. I would also get a restraining order for good measure as well.
Same. I would be terrified for my own safety and the safeties of those around me.
My thoughts exactly. It shows how little onision understands women. Most of us would be scared for our lives.
My God, yes.
I think it's actually interesting. Because there are women that actually likes that. And those types of women often ends up in a police station to cry about their abusive boyfriend and the police officer looking like "Told you so."
Syndra TheDarkSovereign police officer don’t do told you so. Women who like that usually learn that from their fathers who are likely aggressive.
I grew up with a father who was ALWAYS angry and ALWAYS over protective to the extreme. I grew up thinking that was the normal man, even if I didn’t like it.
But I matured and learned and realise that’s only a percentage of men (albeit still large) and not all men.
As a Navy vet, I find Greg's delusional depiction of the military very interesting, and it shows how narcissistic and unable to cope with reality he truly is. I watched the stream Krimson mentioned, and from what I gathered, Greg just couldn't handle some very basic things about life in the military. For example, getting screamed at and made fun of is one of the very core parts of basic training. It's supposed to break you down, so they can build you back up (which some people may have valid arguments against that method, but it works). Greg is too high and mighty to take any shit from a drill instructor, so I bet he did not have a fun time in basic.
The idea that Arthur wouldn't get in trouble for all the fights he gets in is absurd. Even minor fist fights in the military carry swift and sometimes heavy handed punishments. They will give you a second chance and sometimes maybe a third for very minor incidents, but the shit described in this "book" he would have been sent to Ft. Levinworth for sure, which is military prison. Trust me, you don't ever want to end up there. You spend all day doing manual labor breaking large rocks into smaller rocks with a pickax. I'd rather be in San Quentin.
Apparently Greg thinks that all military members need to be "viscous killers," despite the fact that the majority of military personnel have non-combative jobs, especially the Air Force. I was an electrician who worked on F-18 jets, so I barely trained at all with any weapons, they trained me how to fix airplanes and that was it! The people who need to be killers are infantry and special forces, which Greg would never have lasted to become any sort of spec ops anyways. He could barely handle regular basic for fuck's sake.
Ugh, I need to stop rambling. Love the video Krimson!
Thank you for service
I was an Army Brat who did a lot of off-the-books office work (5th Sig DCSPER), out in Mannheim, where the prisoners were lucky, if they could get warm water. Not much in the way of manual labor, though.
I mean, I hate the concept of military and hate everything about it. But even I can see the bullshit that Greg put because he can't see far than his nose
Also, I have a lot of military friends and everyone, including the airforce service men, have told me airforce is the easiest basic training out of all of them. Haha
It may be rambling, but it offers an insightful perspective that many of us here don't and may never have. Thank you!
"He's a bad guy because he objectifies Arthur's gf"
*Gasp* What monster would objectify Booty like that??????
*flex tape can’t fix that*
@@unfortunateanchor1717 *flex tape can fix anything*
@@georgebailey8809 Not Onion Boy's personality
@@Christoph-ce4hj But with enough, it sure as hell can cover the blemishes.
Ala, Mummification
I am an Editor. Straight up. I’m paid for it. It’s my 9 to 5 job. I am positive the content Krimson has just put himself through is giving me heart palpitations.
None of this is edge. Krimson, if you have a PO Box I will send you liquor.
Lol
I agree, he put himself through so much pain. Poor guy, please send him the liquor, he needs it after this
I would like to hear the thoughts of an editor about onision's books. They look incredibly bad, but what is you insight?
@lyndz t can we set up a gofundme to supply this beautiful man a holiday for his service to the internet horde?
@@ZelphTheWebmancer you likely wouldn’t be able to get a result because every single editor that so much as glances at Onion’s books would either die on the spot from brain damage or run screaming for the hills
His history of using vulnerable women and teenage girls for his own desires even leaks into his writing.
@@sirenissinen6783 I am pretty sure Onison has never read a book
@@kiraveritas164 ÄÄHÄHÄÄÄ YOU GOT ME THERE
"Dude, stop with the religon bashing" -Me, an atheist
@Lonely Pluto ??
@@suppasitsup a cookie for your words
🍪
@@olivierluisin1790 Thank you, I love these
@@suppasitsup your welcome
I’m an atheist with a chip on my shoulder and even I was like dude chill we get it
Arthur: Language sucks because people use it to be racist.
Also Arthur: Proceeds to call everyone who likes sports insects and says they deserve a painful death. (Using Language)
The "sexism bad" moments are also really hypocritical considering what Greg is like irl 😬
@@errortryagainlater4240 And considering what Arthur is like. It's a deep flaw of Greg's that he is so terrified of self-reflection that he genuinely can't tell when he's doing (or as a writer, pretending to do) the things he condemns others for.
"This has the psychological depth of a damn floor"-KrimsonRogue
Perfection.
I'll have you know my floor is deep AF boi.
Damp
Damp*
The teacher being named Mr. Hansen is hilarious in light of recent events.
what?
@@cly_ Chris Hansen (a guy well known for exposing predators and also being a meme) started investigating Onision for reason I am not entirely sure of.
He foresaw his own downfall.
This, apparently, didn't age well.
Pretty Birdie Hansen- top ten anime betrayals
Oh my god, when he broke the dude's arm, Onision literally pulled that from Naruto. Sasuke did that in season one. Im not even shocked anymore, Im waiting for the protagonist to dye his hair red and black, ride a motorcycle, wield a gun and say something along the lines of: *"Nothing personal, kid."*
Hunter X
Shadow is more likeable than Greg. Greg can’t even afford a motorcycle 😂
Cora Swan
Shadow gladly matured from his edge, learned to move on, and ready to help his friends.
Onion is STILL that “2005 edgy emo school shooter trench coat wearing badass Sasuke-esque” person he wishes to be but only ends up being the person that exists to be made fun of.
*personnel
See in Shadow The Hedgehog it was justified why he was being so edgy. Dude woke up with extensive amnesia, then found out he might not even be the real article, and even after an unknown amount of time still can't piece his history together, and everyone is claiming to know who he really is from all sides and want him to do stuff for them before they reveal it to him. Of course he'd be unstable after that.
@@Spiderwebs_69 saskue fucking awesome don't do him dirty like that
That paragraph of him saying he fantasizes about a terrorist attack shows how shitty he is as a person. “Those tiny insects” have things called goals. And relationships. And lives. Things Greg clearly lacks
Yea it’s honestly astounding how little in terms of goals or long term planning Greg has. Like in literally none of his books do his characters have any sort of aspirations or dreams they want to fulfill. His wants and needs are entirely animalistic “I want gf to have the sex with,” “I want to be violent against people who are mean to me.”
Like this becomes especially glaring in his third book where he is a literal god and all his ideas boil down to the most surface level shit ever to the point of hilarity.
Honestly would be quite pitiable if he wasn’t such a horrible person.
He's clearly the type who tortured animals as a kid.
Omg brady, didn't expect to see you here
@@Xehanort10he did kill his pet turtle.
*Says people should be silent because they say racist and misogynistic things*
*Later goes on to call a poc girl booty, then is bummed he has to call her by her name like she's a human being*
Okay Greg.
seriously though. greg's treatment of women, especially poc women, in real life & in his books, is disgusting and frankly disturbing.
@@Derpdart56
Lol i forgot about that
@@Derpdart56 nah nah
Go ceasing to exist groomer
Not sure if you know this but Greg is full on racist and pretty blatant about it. It turned into a bit of a controversy during his picture judging stage when he spoke shit about women with more natural hairstyles that weren't painfully straight and outright said he knew better.
Only that was kind of eclipsed by the whole "Judging the photos of underage girls and blatantly lying about body positivity when he routinely mocked them" bit.
@@imo7522 But he obviously doesn't. He's not even virtue-signalling he's pretty overtly racist. It's kinda a thing with emo and goth types, look how much they used to shit on rap.
You know how in highschool there was that kid who hurt insects and said he wanted to join the army?
Same energy
No?
The interaction between Arthur and Ashley at around the 25 minute mark is a textbook example of an abusive relationship.
Arthur tries to control who Ashley can spend her personal time with. When she refuses and prioritizes something other than what Arthur thinks is important (him), he throws an overblown tantrum and storms away. Then, to regain his affection, Ashley is required to perform an act of contrition to "prove herself" to him.
This is abuse. If your SO treats you like this, they are toxic and you deserve better.
Yep. Basically every single thing done there is a major nope.
1. If your partner treats or expresses blandly negative opinions of your friends, like calling them "loser idiots."
2. If your partner tries to get you to stop hanging out with your friends (or family, or basically anybody).
3. If your partner acts out/throws a tantrum/whatever when you have your own opinions or don't immediately comply with their demands
4. If your partner wants you to "prove yourself" to them, especially in the context of the above them throwing a hissy fit over you not blindly obeying their petty wishes.
Of course, these do have caveats, or minor variations that aren't necessarily a problem:
1 and 2. If your friends or anyone you hang out with is genuinely a problem, it's understandable for a partner to have concerns about them, but they shouldn't be just insulting them. If your partner perceives some of these people as legitimately dangerous to you, it's okay for them to raise these concerns with you.
3. While throwing a fit over it is almost always going to be a bad sign, it is a good thing to trust your partner (you should be able to do that, of course) and that means sometimes you won't have complete information, and should trust them enough to defer to them in situations where you can't talk out what's going on prior. Basically, you're a team, not competing players.
4. Obviously negotiation and compromise over contrary opinions or desires is normal, and in some cases, it's reasonable for parties in a relationship to make clear requirements for the relationship to continue. Even from early on as non-negotiable elements, the most common of which would be about things like cheating, or violence. Also, I generally hold that the idea that you shouldn't change for people to be nonsense, and that while obviously you shouldn't change contrary to your will, it's normal to be willing to change at least somewhat for someone you care about, but it should always be voluntary, and positively-motivated.
It's the pattern displayed in all his relationships thus far. I would type "lol" but this isn't a laughing matter :(
I think I remember watching a video about Onision that went over this, like he and his wife/girlfriend (Honestly don't know or care) decided to get a third person into their relationship, yadda yadda, the new girl 'did' something that annoyed Onionboy and he wanted some sort of contribution from her, don't quote me, last time I watched anything about him was years ago but I somewhat remember hearing something about this.
Think Repzion made it, not sure.
@Sabersage Ronin She smoked a weed.
Like with his exes, notably Billie who he told to get a tramp stamp of “I’M A LIAR”, shave her head, let them chain her to a wall, etc in order to be forgiven.
You can, and should, disregard Onion’s actual military service. He uses it to fuel his narcissism so any respect he would deserve is null and void.
I agree, but I do suggest not using "narcissism" as a shorthand for self-obsession! NPD is real, and perpetuating the stereotypes really should be avoided, if it can be!
@@threebirdsinatrenchcoat I generally agree, but can't narcissism be used in that sense as well, similarly to how someone can feel depressed without being diagnosed with clinical depression?
He also demanded that people thank him for his "service" then went onto completely shit on the military.
exactly, he’s a narcissist and wanted to use it to get something. Someone who wants to serve does it out of love for their country.
@@threebirdsinatrenchcoat
But the definition of "narcissism" is accurate to Greg.
Medical definition:
"Narcissistic personality disorder - one of several types of personality disorders - is a mental condition in which people have an inflated sense of their own importance, a deep need for excessive attention and admiration, troubled relationships, and a lack of empathy for others. But behind this mask of extreme confidence lies a fragile self-esteem that's vulnerable to the slightest criticism."
Common use definition:
"Narcissism is a self-centered personality style characterized as having an excessive interest in one's physical appearance and an excessive pre-occupation with one's own needs, often at the expense of others."
I don't get the point of your post.
"With only half my strength, i could snap his neck."
YOU FOOL! I'M ONLY USING HALF OF MY FULL POWER! YOU DON'T STAND A CHANCE!
Ethan Harris it’s only two percent of my power scoob
YOU'RE PUSHING YOUR LUCK SCOOB!!!!
...Don't do shaggy like this.
Emo Oofers the power meme didnt start with shaggy my dude
@@miag5988 its every overdone anime trope
"Because men and women can't just be friends."
I unfortunately have witnessed many people that firmly believe that they can't, that sexual/romantic urges will _always_ overwrite it and when they see a man and woman that _are_ just friends, they assume one of them is gay.
It's more the exception than the rule though; generally one has feelings for the other and its mainly men with the unrequited love for the woman.
"unrequited love" mostly it's just a crush at best.
But no, men and women can absolutely be friends, legitimately.
Shockingly men (and women) are people, and can form social bonds for purposes other than reproduction.
I know, men... people, radical idea, but it's true.
@@seigeengine I never said they couldn't; I have female friends who I'd never cross the line with, they are like sisters to me. My point is that, GENERALLY, one is attracted to the other and it's normally men. If you can show me where I said "men and women can't be friends", I'd appreciate it.
@The Confusing Riddle lool how??
That's always annoying, especially if it's a case where I knew a girl as a friend before dating someone, then they get suspicious and jealous.
...I'm just realizing how toxic my last few girlfriends have been, holy shit.
Why does everything Onision writes come across as horrifying fetish material?
...You know, that's a simple answer, but somehow also the most horrifying one.
Because it is...
Oh honey this would be used as nothing more than a meme on fetlife
You've made me a more critical reader and I hate everything I read now.
Lol, sorry. XD
May I introduce you too the series I'm reading right now?
It's called oathbringer and is written by Brandon Sanderson. If you enjoy fantasy overall you'll most certainly enjoy these books.
Oh or "the name of the wind" written by Patrick Rothfuss, also very nice!
Both books introduce magical systems that i didn't see until then and I highly recommend both of them!
Thankfully I'm too dumb for that. I'll be like OHHH IS THAT A LONG LOST SIBLING TROPE?! SIGN ME THE FUCK UP!!!
In all seriousness I like clichés and tropes as long as they are used sparingly or integrated into a better story that paints a more complex picture.
Or I'm in a great mood and it's a fun story, then I don't care 😂
I spent a few years doing amateur editing online and yes, can confirm, it does start making you hate a lot of books. There's a freaking lot of bad writing out there, and you start noticing all of it.
If you find a cure...let me know.
@jbaum566 YES I LOVE THE STORMLIGHT ARCHIVE BOOKS I WOULD LITERALLY RECOMMEND THEM TO EVERY SINGLE PERSON (I am autistic and brandon sanderson books are my special interest) 😂
"Commit yourself to silence". Take your own advice, Onision.
i love how that statement is not only fucking retarded but also completely hypocritical
I'm torn... If I like your comment. It will no longer be liked by 69 people. So I'll just write that I agree.
@@notfreeman6809 but doesn't that make your response hypocritical also ? Let's all randomly get hypocritical by never shutting up !
@@marionmetathink3234 No, i think that talking is necessary so saying *"I think that shutting up the whole goddamned species because one could use it to plan a genocide or some shit like that is retarded"* is not hypocritical on my part
and dont worry now you can like
Roses are red
Violets are violet
Greg/Onision Should sometimes be quiet.
if a guy breaks another guy's arm for you in a situation like that, you gotta run. that's a bad lifetime movie waiting to happen.
I know, right? No one wants to be in a bad lifetime movie.
Are there good lifetime movies?
@@hollieginoza7935 I've seen 1
@@dcarter020809 Huh. They do exist.
@@hollieginoza7935 no, no there arent
Onision: *makes another book*
"Everyone disliked that"
"This does not spark joy"
Wait, thats illegal
😞 *VILIFIED*
"You're monstrous behavior has caused you to now be vilified by the Reading Community."
*you cannot fast travel while enemies are nearby*
Onision: **writes another shitty book**
"Stop! You have violated the law!"
17:06 The way you said "Fuck you, Greg" puts chills down my spine. It's spoken so calmly but with so much vitriol.
I don't blame him. Dude really said he likes to imagine millions of innocent people being killed in a sports stadium all because he simply doesn't like sports. Disgusting.
@@Christian-97 Greg really chose to be an angsty 14 year old
I think that's the correct response to such a disgusting display of bitterness and heartlesness
You know, this book is actually incredible when used as insight into a narcissist's mind. It's terrible Wattpad cringe, but it shows plainly exactly what type of person he is.
He's absolutely not self aware and that's so laughable...
On Wattpad are really good books, so don’t label everything on Wattpad as „cringy“. There are some bad books, I get that, but not all of them are. Not meant to be mean or so, but I had the urge to correct, that Wattpad is not so bad.
His books make half the stories on wattpad look good and actually publishable
to paraphrase oscar wilde, a man’s true nature is best seen when he puts on a mask
Katy Brown
That's a belief i actually have with all bad books. Even though it is hard to read BAD books, it also helps you delve into the author's mindset and helps you grow as a writer. Its a subversion of learning history about failures and improving from them.
#StopOnision
Do not go to Onisions channel, even negative engagement helps boost his channel in the feed and could potentially make him money. However I encourage you all to watch videos like this and hit the like and comment. We want these and others like this to be boosted and to receive any earnings available. If you believe in free speech this should be important to you! Don’t feed the beast .... let it starve!
I hate Onion. But I don't see what it has to do with free speech....? He can't do anything about what we say except for copyright strike and typically that doesn't work for long.
So much yes!
I did go to his channel to report a few of his videos for sexual content.
“Verbal communication causes genocide” but also, “I’ve fantasized about a massive weapon going off in the middle of a sporting event.” So is genocide bad or not??
I guess it depends on onionboy's mood
Genocide is horribly wrong, but not when it happens to people Onision dislikes!
Which is pretty much everyone who doesn't assimilate into his cult.
I'm wondering out of curiosity. Does onion king actually want a bomb to go off in a place like a football stadium?
@@__lemonade Psychopathic, even?
@@__lemonade So, this is me being a smart ass and flaunting my genocides studies but the argument is more nuanced depending on how one defines genocide. There is the original definition written y the guy who created the study named Raphael Lemkin, the UN's definition (which is the official legal definition but many argue has great flaws), genocide researcher Martin Shaw's definition (my personal favorite though I disagree with some of his conclusions) and many more.
One thing that is debated is the idea of a persecuted group. Traditionally, you are right, and both Lemkin and the UN have those as the standard. However, many have pointed to Stalin's killing of political enemies as a genocide against a political group or Khemar Rouges horrible attempt to wipe out the "rich" class. So in this case then yes, Onion has fantasized about genocide.
However, there is also the idea of intent (well there are more ideas, but this post is already kind of pedantic) and that is where I would argue the bombing a stadium of sports fans is a mass killing and not a genocide. Now, if he wants to pursue the death of all sports fans beyond this one bombing or at least subjugate them so that they lose their identity as "sports fan" then Onion would, in fact, be what in the genocide academia would call a génocider.
PS: So your argument is totally valid, and I hope it came across that I'm showing off my brain muscles and perhaps starting a conversation and not me talking (writing?) down to you.
Speaking for us writers, we do not accept onision.
Speaking for us goths, we do not accept onision.
Speaking for us clowns, we do not accept onision.
The gothic, story telling clown society has spoken. Lol
@@fuzzyapplepie6940 You don't mess with the gothic storytelling clown society (GSCG). Onion boi will be hearing from our CEO.
@@echodeclown1598 Clowniest Ever Officer?
As a member of the GSCS I agree with these statements
Side note, the Bananas do not accept Onision, not even as chopped up meat bites.
He always writes, "should of" instead of SHOULD *HAVE*
Retro Playground I'm a fairly laid back human but *that* "could/should/would of" *BULLSHIT* makes me want to punch faces, it's fucking ridiculous
Retro Playground You're kidding me. I'm absolutely floored by this revelation. That is one of my biggest grammar pet peeves My 8 year old knows not to do that. How could that moron actually go through life with even a modicum of the arrogance that he has in abundance.
I think this is what happens when people only learn their language by speaking or hearing others speak instead of READING. Things poorly articulated or poorly listened to lead to misunderstandings like could OF, taking things for GRANITE, and BONE APPLE TEA... aaaaall of which are easily and properly learned through through the written word.
What a piece of shit
Should've would also be acceptable
So I was talking to my husband “Wallet” the other day...
You're profile picture makes that so much better
Hahahha
Nice
Lol
I read this comment to my brother, and his Dr.Pepper came out of his nose. lmao
“Verbal communication is key to committing genocide” *types 150 + pages of complete nonsense*
So can we consider Onision's books in the same level as the holocaust?
Zelph The Webmancer *And Onision’s channel.* All he does is verbally communicate about his opinions. His opinions alone commit the same level of genocide to his view count lol..
That was the whole point of the book, obviously it went over your head but I don't blame you.
You need a very high IQ, indestructible plot armor, and be a total badass sex god (or a psychopath) to understand just how deep and meta this book truly is.
Greg is this generation's Edgar Allen Poopy Poo Poop.
@@ZelphTheWebmancer LMAO 🤣
I don't know after listening to Onision talk for a couple of minutes, I feel like murdering every onion I can find.
As someone who studies politics and just life of the early 20th century, COMMUNICATION IS WHAT STOPS GENOCIDE. Saying that talking is what leads to trouble is insane, the people who take over countries and commit genocide want people to not talk and that’s the issue.
I'm pretty sure people are still just as capable of committing genocide without verbalizing it. Onision does not have any idea what he talks about. But onision talking about stuff he doesn't understand is his trademark.
Heck, that was one of the main points in 1984. Newspeak, as I believe it was called, was designed to limit how effectively people could communicate.
For real - he's just looking at it as "Bully says mean thing so fight happens" when in reality, the facets of war and genocide are FAR different from that
When Strange Æons made a review, Greg was livid, but he never made a response to you. Me thinks he gets an inferiority complex if girls aren’t instantly drawn to him and sees him as a God, so he gets extremely butt-hurt if they criticise him. He’s such a narcissistic man-child and I have so much respect for you and Æons for making it through these “books”.
If Greg was a Disney villain he'd be Gaston. An arrogant narcissist who wants everyone to love him as much as he loves himself and tries to force any woman not interested in him to love him by any means necessary.
@@Xehanort10 That... is a good comparison.
Except Gaston is more likable than Onion Soup.
@@DrZuluGaming true to that
DrZulu Gaming at least Gaston has some sort of charisma while Onionman is just.....
it's pretty simple: Onion boy is such a mysoginistic asshole that he views every single woman as a piece of meat and nothing more. His books are the proof: none of the women in it have anything remotely close to a personality. They're just a myriad of traumas shapen like a female person to our boy in shining armor to rescue
Therefore, being a mysoginistic idiot, he can't bear to see someone "inferior" to him (cause lets be honest, he sees women as inferior) criticizing what he does. He needs to feel 24/7 as the big bad Alpha male, and no woman can dare to question his almighty persona
Describing Onision as "Dwight from The Office but with none of the charm" is so absolutely perfect
The_Echo heh 911
@Techno Flare
What?
Poke Emblem originally the likes on the comment were 911
Bears.... beets.... underage girls
26:22 I hate that I know damn well Greg *LITERALLY* told one of his past girlfriends to dress like a goth to prove to him she cares about him and not just her friends. Wow Greg, and you had to include that in one a book by you (aka literally proving you are in no doubt a sociopath)
ohhhh you've got to be kidding me
UncomfortablyGay TM I’m not kidding, around the time I did watch him he uploaded a video talking about every girl he’s been with. If you have trouble finding it, well good luck going threw his videos about the same god damn topic just for views...
I look forward to the fourth book where not onision tells his girlfriend to chain herself to a basement wall and shave her head.
WhiskeyHound don’t give him any ideas-
@@irlw0rm Well he's already done it in real life, so it's only a matter of time until it shows up in a book.
i have really bad intrusive thoughts, and i hate how Onision glamorizes it. he makes it seems like it’s so edgy and emo when really it’s just turning yourself against your own thoughts. it’s horrible, and to write a character with intrusive thoughts is ok, but this is just disgusting.
I can relate on the bad intrusive thoughts and you have my sympathies.
(coming from someone else with bad intrusive thoughts) In order for thoughts to be intrusive thoughts, they have to be thoughts that you don't enjoy having and probably don't agree with. If Onision was trying to portray intrusive thoughts he did a piss poor job because Arthur gets off on all the violence he imagined
@@hex0578 aaaaaand this is how I realize I have intrusive thoughts (or at least had). thank you hex
@@kitkitkatkit stay strong, intrusive thoughts can be super rough sometimes 🙏 just remember that you're not a bad person for them and they don't reflect who you actually are in the slightest
@@hex0578 oh my god I'm glad to see other people with intrusive thoughts. It's most distressing because some days, they'll force themselves into my head every 10-30 seconds (especially if it's an after image of something gross/disgusting I just saw), and it constantly interrupts my creative thinking process, the one thing that can most effectively stave off my anxiety. I feel like I can't think sometimes, or that it ruins the cool stories I'm thinking about, it's awful. Sometimes it even makes it hard to eat.
Honestly the way he includes rape, molestation, and school shootings makes me cringe into another dimension. He handles it so poorly and quite frankly it makes me a little mad. Actually, no, it makes me really mad. In both of his books he uses it as a tool to either make the main charater (an obvious self insert) look super badass or get laid.
this is what happens when people with 0 awareness of the world write stories.
They don't understand the first thing about these serious topics. They don't understand WHY they are serious, but they are able to see that other people view them as serious topics.
So they insert these "serious topics" into their stories because they also heard that bad things happening to characters makes them develop, or something.
Well, what's the worst thing that can happen? Right, rape.
But since all their knowledge of the subject comes from horror films and Wikipedia (actually probably not even that, just the dictionary), the result is insulting to everyone who actually lives in the world instead of above it in some metaphorical ivory tower.
I take comfort in the fact that these books have the ultimate cultural relevance of a bad fanfiction. There really is worse stuff to be mad about, like the fact that the guy made any money out of these, proving once again that there's no ethical consumption under capitalism.
@@Nerobyrne lol, I hope you are being paid enough to be this mad. Be a good bourgeoisie, go buy yourself a happy meal and an iphone.
@@cerebrustusbordungolski7183 Be a good peasant and wash my car.
@@Nerobyrne I would, but I fear I'm retarded, fine gentleman.
Should have named it "The Incel Handbook"
Also treating the Air Force like the Marine Corp is hilarious. If this happened in *any* branch he would have been court marshalled and given a dishonorable discharge at the minimum.
Im glad i wasn't the only one to notice on how he's trying to compare the air force to the marines. I had to read it again just to see if i read it right.
@@liquidanimations3397 A lot of what he described sounded super similar to the bit of it I experienced when I enlisted. While I didn't claim a title and make it all the way through I did remember the treatment. He is basically describing what they show in the youtube videos and barely even that. There was no drill instructors kicking people, there was no physical violence. Just a lot of yelling and a lot of running.
He's no incel. The guy had kids.
Albrecht von Stollen um. his content. it’s def. incel material even if he has kids.
Well he did fake a breakdown to get an early discharge from the Air force, so...
lol, Onision is definitely NOT an alpha. He can't even hang around other men let alone be a leader.
@Altoid Bazingá Yet he'll never have enough self-awareness to understand this and change it.
Also, Alpha do not really exist in nature. The guy that claimed to discover them has retracted his statement.
@@Grim_Sister This!
It makes all these alpha guys look so stupid lol
when you watch adamruinseverything and think he is right lmao (referring to the two comments above)
Phoenix 👌
I’m not surprised that he brags about not needing an editor; he also bragged about not needing an attorney in court
What was he in court for? Also major red flag when you have the same behaviour as Charles Manson...
@@purrgundy search up some of the crap he’s pulled or tried to pull, The Right Opinion also has a 3 part series on him, That will be MORE then enough to explain why he went to court
*flashes back to The Big Lebowski*
8-year olds, Dude
@@purrgundy He filed a protection case against a commentary channel for saying mean things about him, then dismissed the case himself after one court section.
Theres speculation Onion-man just filed the case to force the commentary channel to waste money as retaliation for reporting on him, which didn't fucking work because the commentary channel set up a GoFundMe for the lawyer fees and almost immediately got the money lmfao
@@purrgundy aside from the time when he was sentenced by his county, he took Repzion to court because repzion was pretty much exposing him.
Arthur's view on language just makes me think:
Arthur: *hits bong* What if we didn't live in a society
You fool! We live in a society!
Language is, like, the most important human invention. Without it we wouldn't have anything related to technology, arts, science or civilization in general.
“More whining, more whining, more whining, oh look, the book’s done”
You also described catcher in the rye just now.
"Do you pick up girls at funerals?" Don't give him ideas!!!!!!!
Don't worry, onion boy is so thcikheaded and stubborn, that if you wanted ti give him new ideas, you would need a
professional construction/demolition/mining crew to break through his thick head
Raiden 1732 r/murderedbywords
...which leads me to a question: live ones?
Sorry, I could not help myself. Though I would not be surprised if he goes one day this last step into completely monstous...
Well... at least he's not at the morgue
@@Raiden-zi5lc or use 100 sticks of TNT
So Austin has to be the most badass character ever. Not only did he survive a knife straight through his brain he also managed to kill the ultimate badass Arthur while he was blind. All hail Austin the second coming of Jesus Christ. Even Shaggy at 100% power would be scared of him.
Austin, the true Alpha Male, Reaper of Swines
He's also a rapist. But it's weird to see Arthur being killed
he tried to rape a girl ?
Really says a lot abt onion boy that he has a fantasy where a LESBIAN, a Woman who Loves WOMEN, loves him lmfao leave the lesbians out of your garbage fantasies onion
Loved this review dude, I could listen to you talk abt books all day 🐇❤️
Thorium Knight I CANT BREATHE
That's actually the least insane thing since people who are into men AND women exist.
Nerobyrne nobody is denying that, but lesbians are women who are into women so therefore they wouldn’t want to date Greg, who is a man.
@@sofiawilliams4089 I don't get it she's not a lesbian though ...
@@sofiawilliams4089 no I'm talking about the person in the book ^.^
26:19 Onision actually did this "dress emo to make it up to me" thing to his girlfriend, the entire scene is taken from his past. His books provide so much insight into how he thinks and it's pretty disturbing.
I remember hearing about that, Honestly i wouldn't be surprised if this 'book' is just his biography (with some selective changes) but with the names changed around.
I mean, the cover gives it away, he casts himself as the model of the main character, Arthur is CLEARLY a self insert, and it's something I did when i was writing fanfics when i was 12-13 and all edgy and shit.
@@Danny191 the fucked thing: it is. The whole combat boot scene was 100% real, so I can imagine most of it is.
Agree! It’s mostly his real life and then just how he feels he comes off. Or who he wishes he was. His characters are like him but a bit more accepted in the end of his “narratives”.
@@finnbenham I had no idea that part was true!
I find it funny as in the last book he said something along the lines of every character being onison just in a whig. I wonder if onison wishes there where multiple versions of him physically existing so he can fuck himself in a different whig.
As a member of the military, I can say signing up for the military doesn’t make you an instant bad ass.
As another member, bct should crush that feeling instantly
I would argue it elevates you a tiny bit. Like maybe an 1/8th of an inch. But only if you actually go to sea or spend time in the sandbox. But thats when you actually take a little bit of the risk for your country. But badass, no.
Didn't onion boy here flunk basic training for not killing a rabbit?
Onision joined the air force, did very well (physically) in basic training, and though he didn't complete it, he did go through some amount of special forces training (S.E.R.E training, I believe it's called). But even though he did very well physically, he was *not at all* mentally equipped to be part of any branch of the military; not even close. He refused to shoot a rabbit as part of his training, he uploaded a video of himself in uniform (while he was still in the military) performing a "song" that's sole purpose was to bash the military (which is illegal), and skews the facts about his discharge to make it sound a whole lot more honorable than it actually was.
But to me, the worst thing about his military past is that despite never actually seeing any combat or anything, he still says "I'm a veteran, and you should be thanking me for my service". Sure, he is **technically** a veteran, but he is not a veteran of war (despite trying to make it seem that way). He may have gone through the training, but I don't think he did anything to actually serve his country; he *trained* to serve his country, but was discharged (not a fully honorable discharge mind you) before actually doing much of anything.
He's such just a piece of shit. My grandfather served in the US army corps of engineers in WWII, designing and building bridges for allied forces to use to pass through terrain that would otherwise be impossible to traverse; he was, and still is an absolute hero. A few years ago, he gave me his corps of engineers ring. I have never taken it off; it's my most prized possession in the world, and I would absolutely love to punch onision in the fucking face with it.
Sorry, this comment is way too long. I just hate that guy so goddamn much.
@@calvinlee8103 if it makes you feel any better, at Least he's getting his comeuppance
Can we all just take a moment to appreciate how much of a hero Krimson is, he wanted, SO BADLY, to stop reading the book, but he kept reading so that no one else would have to.
Not all heroes wear capes
Some review books
25:43
Arthur was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which he was really happy about. A lot of preps stared at him. He put up his middle finger at them.
>Arthur Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and his quest against the preps
God, I feel aged at this reference.
hahahahalaksldjajhksakjajdksdj oh my god
i really needed this comment today
This is my edgy smash bros pallet swap
That rape part got real, i really respect Krimson here because hes not playing it up and told it how it was. i already had a low opinion of Onision but this just blows me away.
@Floaroma 44 I don't know about rape fetishist, although I see where youre coming from trying to chain women in the basement or what have you. I think that onision knows rape victims and is trying so fucking desperately to convey emotion or relate while trying to make himself look good at the same time. He's super gross nonetheless.
@Floaroma 44 yesss omg you're so right. He thinks he's some magical sex god lmfao. It's both sad and entertaining.
@Feli Aslan Snaps for the insightful sister.
“Not even the fun type of narcissist where you just like looking at yourself in the mirror”
I’m that type, god damn I love my face
Alexander Daevus I know the feeling my man
@@ReedBoi-tv2se same except im ugly as fack
I just like making funny faces in the mirror it's so fun.
@@theshamanofenterprise7408 and just looking at the characteristics of your own face is entertaining in general.😄
12:27 - 'Sure dad tell me how religion brings you comfort, you know there are atheists billionaires who have accomplished things'
1: Religion does bring comfort, that's arguably one of the main ways it propagates.
2: Atheist millionaires did not get their money from their religious views.
3: Religious millionaires absolutely exist.
4: It is possible to be an atheist millionaire and still be a terrible person.
5: 'Accomplishing things' looks different person to person. Marrying someone you love and raising three children is something many people would consider an accomplishment over 'just having a lot of money'.
This one passage is fractally wrong. It is as wrong as it is possible to be. I cannot grasp the sheer ineptitude of anyone who thinks like this.
His idea of "achievement" is just material gain and nothing else, tbh.
3. I think in his "galaxy brain. smart man" posturing Grego/Arthur forgot about one of the biggest and wealthiestr organizations in the world...which actually solely deals with religion. The Catholic Church. I mean, the higher ups weae signets and golden chains and live in palaces and travel in limousines and have servants. and even the more regular priests...I'm saying this as someone living in a catholic country have like housekeepers to cook and clean for them. and they always drive quite good cars. and it tends to happen that each priest within the parish has his own one.
The worst part (and I see this argument often outside of Onionchild) to me is that people say religion brings one comfort like it's some sort of horrible downside. It's one of the most baffling arguments I've ever seen.
...I'm sorry: He didn't NUMBER the pages? What??
Who the F*** writes a book and doesn't number the pages?? Even comic books number pages! College essays number pages. GRADE SCHOOLS NUMBER PAGES!!!
I mean, who the fuck writes a book which includes dating someone with the same name as their daughter and they decide to have said character gang raped.
thats some red flags right there
@@jamestor6700 EXCUSE ME, WHAT?!
@@AllyGatorAnimator he did that in this book I believe his the main characters "girlfriend" has the same name as his daughter
@@jamestor6700 I'm so glad I just smoked a blunt. It's helping me hold down my dinner from last night after reading that.
God help us...........
@@jamestor6700 The Onion boy has a child?