Breathe slam poem

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  • Опубліковано 18 жов 2024
  • Shannon McMullen performing 'Breathe' at York College of Pennsylvania's Open Mic Night

КОМЕНТАРІ • 21

  • @julchen418
    @julchen418 7 років тому

    2 years later and I still keep coming back here when I feel like giving up or quitting or when I'm just having a bad day. You save me every time.

  • @Marshmellow7777777
    @Marshmellow7777777 10 років тому

    Absolutely amazingly beautiful

  • @dannisaur13
    @dannisaur13 9 років тому

    I still watch this on rough nights. I have never once not gotten the chills. This was the greatest present I have ever received. And nowadays it reminds me where I came from and our friendship. I love you so much twinny !

  • @danalynn9401
    @danalynn9401 10 років тому +3

    I'm sobbing. Holy shit that was fucking beautiful.

  • @sportygrl4lifexo
    @sportygrl4lifexo 12 років тому

    Just .... UGH ... Beautiful

  • @storresrhs6
    @storresrhs6 12 років тому

    So beautiful.

  • @julchen418
    @julchen418 9 років тому

    Thank you for this.

  • @KiranamiSan
    @KiranamiSan 11 років тому

    this was absolutely amazing. my eyes started to tear up. thank you so much

  • @animeloverr1234
    @animeloverr1234 10 років тому +4

    This was fucking beautiful. Thank you.

  • @awkwardgirl69
    @awkwardgirl69 11 років тому

    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL

  • @lakotaloves2jump
    @lakotaloves2jump 10 років тому

    this is perfect

  • @dreamerduck1
    @dreamerduck1 11 років тому

    AMAZING

  • @xcrossmyheartlovex
    @xcrossmyheartlovex 11 років тому

    I frickin' love you. You're so amazing.

  • @ThatpanMr
    @ThatpanMr 11 років тому

    that was amazing. I don't know how you do it

  • @leapxbeforexyouxlook
    @leapxbeforexyouxlook  11 років тому

    Thank you :)

  • @Andresfin
    @Andresfin 9 років тому

    I love you
    Just breathe

  • @digipals9105
    @digipals9105 8 років тому +4

    she seemed so distantly broken
    haunted shadows lurk in dark corners
    waiting for the slight curve of her smile
    or the first sign of happiness to attack
    crashing her world down around her.
    I offer my hand to pull her out of the familiar rubble,
    scooping her up in my arms searching for safe ground,
    where suicide bombers of depression wont be able to touch her.
    Fear raged through her body like feaver and overdeosed world
    spinning colours bluring, and behind hazy eyes, shallow breath
    digging graves into the hollows of the chambers of the heart.
    she is limp against my body and i know that standing will not be easy,
    but i am strong enough for you to lean on,
    the backbone that will keep you upright.
    For i am one of the few parts of yourself that you love,
    and i have never needed you more.
    screaming ambulance arrives and paramedics flush your veins
    full of IV bags with hope,
    clearing the poison from your system left behind my the
    touch of demons.
    we have only been friends for a year,
    but i have known you my entire life.
    small girl, curly hair, chiped nail polish and black eye makeup,
    i can instantly recognise you,
    as myself.
    brought together by chance, in a classroom used as a saftey
    base from lifes game of tag that kept hitting us
    about ready to quit when we were offered the
    chance to love ourselves in eachother,
    and through that discovery this game became
    so much easier to play once we could double team it.
    quickly developed love, you do not find in romantic relationships
    a comfort that lies soley in the unbreakable bond of twins.
    spilled secrets over steaming mugs of peppermint tea
    late night talks and comfort food binges.
    we no longer had to speak, we told stories with our eyes,
    and painted murals with mascara tracks, and crimson tears washed down
    the drains from our wrists.
    our weakest moments hidden careully by long sleves and bracelts.
    the truth kept behind stained bandages.
    tucked away in bottom draws
    quietly stuffing our dirty secrets into our laundry.
    Red lipstick hearts on mirrors, and xes on the backs of our hands
    marking us dicounted, damaged goods.
    retuned over, and over, and over again until
    insecurity was definate and hope was a far off dream.
    so we streatched our clipped wings,
    no longer able to fly,
    so we simply had learn to break the fall,
    so we tightend the screws on pencil sharpeners,
    so the blade couldnt be extracted in a moment of weakness.
    then poured our hearts and souls into glasses
    and toasted to our futures.
    i want to wrap you in laughter
    and sing to you the soundtrack of the best memories we have.
    you deserve this happiness my darling,
    and tonight, you are alive,
    and you are beautiful even if you dont want to be,
    so take my hand, and close your eyes.
    shh,please listen, i love you, just breathe.

  • @TheIMISSDADDY
    @TheIMISSDADDY 11 років тому

    I would've started sobbing a quarter way through.

  • @bmouth159
    @bmouth159 10 років тому

    you seem so mad. it really comes through in your tone. You have to love yourself first, it isnt always easy but we have to. this poem really says that.

  • @julchen418
    @julchen418 7 років тому

    2 years later and I still keep coming back here when I feel like giving up or quitting or when I'm just having a bad day. You save me every time.

    • @leapxbeforexyouxlook
      @leapxbeforexyouxlook  7 років тому

      I'm so glad you can find some comfort in my words. I wish you all the best. ♡