ITS AN ANIMATED SERIES? I WAS UNDER THE IMPRESSION IT WAS GONNA BE A WEBTOON WHAT. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. The start was slightly rough but its obvious how much your skill improved while making it near the end, Not to mention how good the fight scenes were.
Okay, so fisrt : 9 full minutes! I was ready for like 3 min episode top, just that, so cool. But also I like the characters and their dynamic already. From the shorts and this I'm leaning towards "mysterious former-vilain in their redemption arc" X "Way too candid for their own good (but also ulterior motives???)" and I'm hyped.
The color design is FANTASTIC in this!!! it's so long and high quality!! I loved the falling scene in front of the sunset--- that was gorgeous. I also loved the details of how you blurred background props like in the ship at the end. Overall the atmosphere was so fun and stylish!! i'll be sat for the next installment of Thyste
Not having seen your work on other platforms, but it is CRIMINAL that this isn't getting much attention. Considering how high-quality this is, I hope some more love will be coming your way!
Raena pushing back their hair is so interesting and fluid- I don’t tend to see animated characters have a specific motion they do in different ways very often. And I’m already in love with Roarke! Bubbly Criminal is my favorite archetype
Man Indie Animation as sure come a long way… Everyone that worked on this is amazing! You can tell from the animation you took your time with this! Can’t wait to see more 👏 👏
Oooo this was really fun! And your style translates really nicely to animation. Also love your style of character writing, both here and in Thunderstruck
Bro this is amazing! I love the character dynamics and especially the character design of pink (or was it purple? Idrr) this is underrated as hell! And everyone did such a good job of making this really come to life :)
This was absolutely amazing! How is this so underrated?? I absolutely love the characters, the story so far is really interesting and the animation is simply beautiful! I genuinely hope this will reach more people, as this masterpiece needs to be seen!!
EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS AMAZING!!! the action beats are great, the little asides, perfect amount of exposition, the details of characters’ subconscious gestures/habits, the voice acting, Roarke has a little keychain on her gun, 3:40 was INSANE, and I have to rewatch the intro for all the detail packed in!! How many episodes are planned for Thyste?
I love this art style, this animation, this sound design and character work! And I LOVE the way you've built these guys up. I am absolutely sharing this with everyone I know
I LOVE THIS OMG?!?! This style and design are amazing!!! Plus the pithy dialogue and the efficient story were so so enjoyable. Also Roarke’s va is so goood. Please continue this oh my gosh! 🫶💙
this is actually so awesome!!! i love how the story is conveyed well enough in only 9 minutes without any monologuing, it really keeps a good pace that a first episode really needs to keep the audience engaged and gets people asking questions that can be answered later in the series!!! the little bits of humour are very fitting as well plus, the worldbuilding, designs, and characters all seem SO cool and well put together, im really excited for the next episode =D
I love this so much, Reanas definitely my favourite character and i hope we get to see more of this. my only critique would be that the voice acting could be a bit more emotional sometimes but its really amazing and i love all the designs and the story so far
Wow I've never been THIS early to a new pilot but I'm invested!! I hope more people see this because this is incredible and definitely deserves more views So excited to see more :D
hi!! ive never seen your work before, this just came up on my recommended and I’m so glad it did the opening was really good, i really like the art style and it animated really well, the voice acting feels so real, the character designs are cool asf, and the plot/world building looks really interesting i really hope this becomes a series or a comic or something i enjoyed it :))
YOOO this is amazing!! Everything felt sooo put together! The writing felt really natural and also I loved Roarke's voice lol it was adorable. What a great pilot! 💖
Oh man I'm excited. The shot composition and fight choreography were great, the voice acting for Raena and Roarke help establish their characters, the music really fits the world we're being introduced to, and the writing has a lot to latch on to. (I'm curious about those two on the flagship that overheard Roarke, and what the internal politics are like that it was better for them to not interfere with that.) I'd also like to know who did the sound design (sfx) since it's not listed in the credits? Writer, director, and animator are already a lot of hats to wear, it'd be bonkers if you were doing the sfx on top of all that.
THAT WAS SO AMAZING :D i love the characters and their dynamic so much, also the world looks really cool!! And all that in just 9 minutes is genuinely astounding! Really hoping for this series to continue :)
This was great! I feel like the sound effects during action are a little too mild, but otherwise I loved the character writing and pacing Also Raena licking their own wound ew
First time I hear of this and I like it enough to share thoughts. It felt trivializing to just be able to destroy the whole megastructure. In general the plot moved quickly and was potentially because of this over the top. In general though it is great!
Oh this NEEDS more attention! I love the idea of this all, it’s amazing! The animation is beautiful and I adore the characters already GAAHH!! New special interest incoming istggg!!
LESGOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! incredible work mate, clear passion was put into this and it actually flows as a decentely paced short film, bit rushed, but good for an introduction of sorts!! keep it up!!
Critiques: 1. You can tell that the voice actoring was awkward, but tbh thats fine since its a small indie series and its ur first time, tho it did feel odd when all the characters just kept the same pitch/attitude of their voice from the beginning 2. The beginning was rough but the further we went thru the video, its becomes obvious how much work u've placed into it, good job 👍 Things I really liked about it: 1. The story clearly told us that Raena has a connection to Thystle while keeping it a mystery for later episodes 2. Roarke pretty much being the oposite of Raena was great tbh, one which has too much trust and cares a lot and one which has no trust and tries to pretend to not care while caring, I'm quite interested how their dynamic will play out 3. I like how Raena decided to destroy the prison while also telling Roarke to leave since it would be too dangerous for her by using an excuse like ur too weak, it really portrayed that Raena does care 4. I like the purple captain for no reason lmao, she seems fun My personal thoughts on the characters: Raena: A person who gives while expecting nothing in return (The ending made me think of that, it was cute when Raena got saved while thinking she would be abandoned) Roarke: Sorta like a friend that acts like a mother to u, tho I do think she got a hidden side since she clearly is involved in a criminal group Purple captain: Nothing juch tbh, not enough screentime for her yet for me to make a good opinion about her So in the words of a great magic franchise: "We will be watching your career with great interest"
i need another episode or i will explode. no but seriously this is amazing, the voice actiong is so good, the animation is crazy, and the story is hella intresting.
![THE EPILOGUE OF ENDINGS [PILOT]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/ha0SvMUpNRA/mqdefault.jpg)
Your style translates really well to animation. This was a great pilot episode. I hope there will be a part two.
Thanks!! And I already got the voices and boards for Ep2!
I love that those two people at the control panel didnt care about Roarke actually talking about blowing up the prison
they ain't paid enough to question their boss
ITS AN ANIMATED SERIES? I WAS UNDER THE IMPRESSION IT WAS GONNA BE A WEBTOON WHAT.
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.
The start was slightly rough but its obvious how much your skill improved while making it near the end, Not to mention how good the fight scenes were.
Haha thanks!! And very fair assessment- definitely gonna improve over the course of this series,, and super excited for the journey!!
RAENA LICKING OFF HER BLOOOOD!!! 😭😭😭
this is so awesome. it is so so inspiring to see people start up their own animated series
🏃♀️➡️🏃♀️➡️🏃♀️➡️🏃♀️➡️real picture of me running to send this to my friends
This was a good pilot. The action sequences were well executed. The character designs were simple but effective in establishing character
Okay, so fisrt : 9 full minutes! I was ready for like 3 min episode top, just that, so cool. But also I like the characters and their dynamic already. From the shorts and this I'm leaning towards "mysterious former-vilain in their redemption arc" X "Way too candid for their own good (but also ulterior motives???)" and I'm hyped.
heehee not far off at all >:))
when i saw the art artstyle i was like
I know what you are🤨
Reminds me of the comic thunderstuck
I wonder why…
This IS the author of Thunderstruck btw
@@AlexSmith-xb1gq Found out when i saw notfications on my phone to watch thier new thing.
The color design is FANTASTIC in this!!! it's so long and high quality!! I loved the falling scene in front of the sunset--- that was gorgeous. I also loved the details of how you blurred background props like in the ship at the end. Overall the atmosphere was so fun and stylish!! i'll be sat for the next installment of Thyste
Not having seen your work on other platforms, but it is CRIMINAL that this isn't getting much attention. Considering how high-quality this is, I hope some more love will be coming your way!
It's a really small channel and this is a recent video I'm sure it'll get more attention soon
the uprising of animated shows on youtube iss hereeeeeee without companys
Catching a bullet was badass!
this frame I'm dying 4:05 such a silly goober
I am so hooked on this worldbuilding- i love your style!!
Raena pushing back their hair is so interesting and fluid- I don’t tend to see animated characters have a specific motion they do in different ways very often. And I’m already in love with Roarke! Bubbly Criminal is my favorite archetype
DUDE HOW DOES THIS NOT ALREADY HAVE MILLIONS OF VIEWS?? AND YOU WERE THE ONLY ANIMATOR??
Man Indie Animation as sure come a long way…
Everyone that worked on this is amazing! You can tell from the animation you took your time with this! Can’t wait to see more 👏 👏
THIS IS SO COOOOOL!! I already love the character so much, in just nine mintues we can understand their dynamic and i cant wait to see more of it!!!!
Oooo this was really fun! And your style translates really nicely to animation. Also love your style of character writing, both here and in Thunderstruck
Thank you!!!
Bro this is amazing! I love the character dynamics and especially the character design of pink (or was it purple? Idrr) this is underrated as hell! And everyone did such a good job of making this really come to life :)
THIS IS SO UNDERRATED WTH
HOLY SHIT!!! THIS IS SERIOUSLY THE BEST FIRST EPISODEIVE EVER WATCHED. INCREDIBLE!!!
WHY ARE THEIR CONVERSATIONS SO CUTE??? 😆
This was absolutely amazing! How is this so underrated?? I absolutely love the characters, the story so far is really interesting and the animation is simply beautiful! I genuinely hope this will reach more people, as this masterpiece needs to be seen!!
This number 1 is the entire plot of the show 😂
Genuinely so excited, and this is beautiful 10/10 space shenanigans
I am so glad youtube recomendations showed me this!
only 5000 views? Bro this is so underrated you guys deserve at least 5 million for this 💀
This is the exact type of cartoon I’d make content on!!
THIS ACTUALLY GOES SO HARD WHAT, GOES TO SHOW YOU DONT NEED SOME FANCY STUFF TO CREATE SOMETHING GOOD
EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS AMAZING!!! the action beats are great, the little asides, perfect amount of exposition, the details of characters’ subconscious gestures/habits, the voice acting, Roarke has a little keychain on her gun, 3:40 was INSANE, and I have to rewatch the intro for all the detail packed in!! How many episodes are planned for Thyste?
OOOH THIS LOOKS SO COOL?? Your artstyle is really great for animation!!! Excited to see what adventures Roarke and Raena have ^^
You have NO idea ow pleased I am that this reached 10K views.
Ooooo I can't wait to see more of this, it looks so interesting!!! I love these character designs!!! :DD
Indie animation renaissance lets gooooooooo
All your characters just want VIOLENCE AND CHAOS AND ANARCHY!! LETS GO❤
I dont know why Raena licking their wound was so funny to me but dang was it! An amazing first episode, excited for more!
I love this art style, this animation, this sound design and character work! And I LOVE the way you've built these guys up. I am absolutely sharing this with everyone I know
This is actually really hype. I love the ways the characters move along with the mix of gags throughout.
ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE WORK!!!!
Amazing work! 7:53 is SUCH a cool shot??? so cinematic. It was quite easy to follow the action, and the main duo work really well together!
Came here from Thunderstruck. This was such a good pilot!! Hope to see more
I think i need merch with Raena... and a full series.
I am so invested in this story and their relationship and Raenas' backstory !!!!
This looks so good!! Excited to see where it leads
Flawless pilot. Really makes me wanna know what happens next
I LOVE THIS OMG?!?! This style and design are amazing!!! Plus the pithy dialogue and the efficient story were so so enjoyable. Also Roarke’s va is so goood. Please continue this oh my gosh! 🫶💙
this is actually so awesome!!! i love how the story is conveyed well enough in only 9 minutes without any monologuing, it really keeps a good pace that a first episode really needs to keep the audience engaged and gets people asking questions that can be answered later in the series!!! the little bits of humour are very fitting as well
plus, the worldbuilding, designs, and characters all seem SO cool and well put together, im really excited for the next episode =D
Yes yes yes yes! This is exactly what I want to watch!
This was a pretty good start, interested in seeing how this goes 👁️👁️
I love this so much, Reanas definitely my favourite character and i hope we get to see more of this. my only critique would be that the voice acting could be a bit more emotional sometimes but its really amazing and i love all the designs and the story so far
I did know you had a UA-cam channel until now, this is amazin
Animation is so hard to do, but even so with this sonewhat Stop-Motion webtoon, its still very smooth~
sometimes you can tell when something is going to be good
Looks interesting! I like it!
DUDE THIS IS WAS AMAZING!! THE PLOT, THE COLORS, THE ANIMATION
What a fantastic dynamic and so much information without being overload /o_o\ amazing!
THIS IS SO GOOD!! I LOVEEE THESE CHARACTERS SO FAR!!
Wow I've never been THIS early to a new pilot but I'm invested!!
I hope more people see this because this is incredible and definitely deserves more views
So excited to see more :D
hi!! ive never seen your work before, this just came up on my recommended and I’m so glad it did
the opening was really good, i really like the art style and it animated really well, the voice acting feels so real, the character designs are cool asf, and the plot/world building looks really interesting
i really hope this becomes a series or a comic or something i enjoyed it :))
YOOO this is amazing!! Everything felt sooo put together! The writing felt really natural and also I loved Roarke's voice lol it was adorable. What a great pilot! 💖
I've rewatched this so many times already ooh it's so good omg
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE
Oh man I'm excited. The shot composition and fight choreography were great, the voice acting for Raena and Roarke help establish their characters, the music really fits the world we're being introduced to, and the writing has a lot to latch on to. (I'm curious about those two on the flagship that overheard Roarke, and what the internal politics are like that it was better for them to not interfere with that.) I'd also like to know who did the sound design (sfx) since it's not listed in the credits? Writer, director, and animator are already a lot of hats to wear, it'd be bonkers if you were doing the sfx on top of all that.
Glad you enjoyed! And I did do the sfx and some of the composition like the theme song!
OH GOD THIS IS AMAZING, I"M SO EXCITED TO SEE WHERE THIS GOES
This is extremely impressive, thank you so much for making this!
I expecth greatness from this show good luck apleye
THAT WAS SO AMAZING :D i love the characters and their dynamic so much, also the world looks really cool!! And all that in just 9 minutes is genuinely astounding! Really hoping for this series to continue :)
Wooooow
I can’t wait for a second one and I love the setup
best thing since wolf 359, amazing 🔥
5:01 BOTTOM TEXT
This needs more views! Super awesome job broski, hopin for more!
THIS GOES SO HARD
This was great! I feel like the sound effects during action are a little too mild, but otherwise I loved the character writing and pacing
Also Raena licking their own wound ew
The intro is awesome! And the animation and characters are so fun!
First time I hear of this and I like it enough to share thoughts. It felt trivializing to just be able to destroy the whole megastructure. In general the plot moved quickly and was potentially because of this over the top. In general though it is great!
This is so fucking amazing, I love it already!!!!
I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS, I CAN'T WAIT BACKSTORY
This series is going to be legendary.
underrated much?? this is so cool omg
Eagerly awaiting episode 2!
woahhhh this is so cool!! I'm obsessed with the colors
absolutely love this, it looks so cool i’m so telling my friend about it, beautiful.
Oh this NEEDS more attention! I love the idea of this all, it’s amazing! The animation is beautiful and I adore the characters already GAAHH!! New special interest incoming istggg!!
wonderful art
Well done!
I loved it!! :D
This is SO COOL! Really excited to see where this goes, also, really inspiring! :)
Gives of very she ra vibes! Love it❤
So freaking good bro I’m jealous take my sub
oh my!! great first episode🥰 the wait was totally worth it 😁
OH MY GOD IT'S HERE AND IT'S SO GOOD!!!!!!! APLEYE I'M ONE OF YOUR BIGGEST FANS I LOVE YOUR ANIMATIONS!!
THANK YOU SM IM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!!!
this looks so cool! This is so underrated!!
THIS IS AWESOME OMG I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE ILL DEFINITELY BE WAITING FOR MORE EPS! 💜💜💜
So cool!
LESGOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! incredible work mate, clear passion was put into this and it actually flows as a decentely paced short film, bit rushed, but good for an introduction of sorts!! keep it up!!
The voice of raena? sounds familiar… well glad i found this masterpiece!
THIS IS SO COOL!
Critiques:
1. You can tell that the voice actoring was awkward, but tbh thats fine since its a small indie series and its ur first time, tho it did feel odd when all the characters just kept the same pitch/attitude of their voice from the beginning
2. The beginning was rough but the further we went thru the video, its becomes obvious how much work u've placed into it, good job 👍
Things I really liked about it:
1. The story clearly told us that Raena has a connection to Thystle while keeping it a mystery for later episodes
2. Roarke pretty much being the oposite of Raena was great tbh, one which has too much trust and cares a lot and one which has no trust and tries to pretend to not care while caring, I'm quite interested how their dynamic will play out
3. I like how Raena decided to destroy the prison while also telling Roarke to leave since it would be too dangerous for her by using an excuse like ur too weak, it really portrayed that Raena does care
4. I like the purple captain for no reason lmao, she seems fun
My personal thoughts on the characters:
Raena: A person who gives while expecting nothing in return (The ending made me think of that, it was cute when Raena got saved while thinking she would be abandoned)
Roarke: Sorta like a friend that acts like a mother to u, tho I do think she got a hidden side since she clearly is involved in a criminal group
Purple captain: Nothing juch tbh, not enough screentime for her yet for me to make a good opinion about her
So in the words of a great magic franchise: "We will be watching your career with great interest"
i need another episode or i will explode. no but seriously this is amazing, the voice actiong is so good, the animation is crazy, and the story is hella intresting.