Hey guys! I thought I would add this comment in 2020 going over some of my general thoughts on this video in hindsight! As some have pointed out in the comments section, some of these entries can hardly be called ”plot twists” which is a criticism I absolutely get. Most of the entries for this list were simply chosen due to their comedic potential, though in hindsight, I definitely see that some of them may not be ”plot twists” in the general sense and I stretched the term rather thin for a few spots on the list, which was most likely not the best course of action to take. If I were to make a video like this today, I’d make sure to go out and find stories with clear-cut, defined plot twists to bring attention to. I also in hindsight feel I definitely could’ve presented myself a bit better in the video, by being calmer, as I nowadays don’t think some of the poor writing in these stories warranted such strong reactions; I feel some of my criticisms were slightly overblown. I played up some of my ”rage” for the video for comedic effect as well, just so that is clear. Obviously, my approach nowadays would be a lot different and I also urge any authors out there to keep writing and trying! Also, the author of Sonic.exe has in 2017 apologized for his initial rant regarding the story being deleted. I feel that'd be fair to point out. I don’t think someone ought to be judged forever for one bad day. Also, I am aware that Cleo is a real name; I just felt it was an interesting and obscure choice to name the character that, but apparently it’s a rather common name in America! I blame my Swedishness for that one... Just thought I ought to acknowledge these things in this little comment reflecting on this video and how some of my thoughts have evolved over time. Thank you for reading, and have a good day!
+Shifting Shadow (Originally Shadow Of Sans) No, here's the actual story Hoodo the Killer One time in a video he sang and killed everyone with his horrible singing voice. His channel was taken down because of all the deaths, but people recorded his singing before it was taken off and reposted it for others to die. The End of my trollpasta
I have a Creepypasta! One day a girl named Banana decided to be a killer so she shoved a nail into her forehead. Her mother told her father to get the gun and then the parents shot Banana. The end.
Right when you mentioned that the protagonist was pulled into the game in the Rayman creepypasta, the video started buffering. Apparently, even UA-cam can't believe how awful that was.
"I have absolutely no problem with rape being used in a story as long as it is executed well" probably one of the worst sounding things ever when taken out of context.
Guys, every Trollpasta in this list is in the "Pasta Trying To Be Good When It Sucks Enough To Be A Troll" category, meaning that they were written to be taken seriously. Just thought I'd let you know.
***** Ok, I can agree with this explanation. But I still can't believe that GTA pasta with president can be in any way serious. It literally scream trollpasta! No one simply can believe in twist like that.
I have a crappypasta: One time, I didn't eat a chicken nugget. Later that night, it came into my room and shot me to death with a knife, but then I had a spiritual battle with it and impaled it on a credenza.
I think the actual GOOD creepypastas shouldn't be referred to as creepypastas, because the name sounds just as silly as the fangirl's favorites such as Jeff the Killer, Eyeless Jack, etc. What I'm trying to say here is that Psychosis and Harbringer Experiment shouldn't be called creepypastas. They deserve better names than that.
Russian Sleep Experiment, too. My personal favourite... Happy Appy just deserves the title "Funnypasta" It is creepy in some places but the ending... It was darn hilarious.
Secret file letter:666 Oncee upon upon a a a time, my sister told me to wash the dishes, or they'll commme for me, I nver suspected a thinh, the dishes came in my room and killed me to death, until I was dead, I am currently dead and writing this The dishes were also hyper realistic
ShiningManHumz 16 here's my creepypasta: One day I is play FNaF. Freddy is jump through screen and eat my face. Blood everywhere. Herobrine fall out of sky and help Freddy. I die with diamond sword in face. The end.
One day my friend wrote a creepypasta, and he acted as if it was the best one EVER. He gets me excited. I run to his house, and here it is: sonic.the.slayer. one day I wanted to get a sonic hack. I got it but a skeleton popped out then I died. THAT WAS IT. I RAN HALF A MILE FOR THAT.
Bob Saget i got something better. One day i hyper realistically woke up from my hyper realistic bed and looked up and saw a hyper realistic ghost from my hyper realistic window and i hyper realistically punched it and hyper realistically bled and hyper realistically found out that it was just me on the mirror. I found out this is an actual story so go read that
So.... what exactly did "notifying the police" consist of? "Yeah. this guy played a game that made him shoot Obama, go an arrest him now please." "Cleo"? What kind of a name is that? Reminds me of Cleos Frey. Also, John Terry? The footballer?
your use of Gorillaz is one reason why I really appreciate your videos, and also the fact that you're absolutely hilarious in these types of videos 0w0
Funny thing about the Ben Drowned one, the wording in the creepypasta itself proves that Jadusable may or may not be dead after the last post. Remember the line "But I guess I'm the genius who chose to live in a single?" That would mean Jadusable never had a roommate. Meaning Ben was the one who posted Jadusable's final notes. Meaning that unoffical sequel was COMPLETELY POINTLESS.
I'd love to write a self insert horror fanfiction where the main character is perfect but slowly over time the supporting characters start to become self aware and sense that something is wrong with their world and that the protagonist is too unrealistic to exist. Then the focus shifts to them trying to escape their badly written hell.
This is exactly why I choose to read/listen to creepypasta's instead of creating them. I mean, don't get me wrong. Some of the well-known ones weren't that badly written. And let's be honest: they scared the heck out of me when I was a teen. But I KNOW I don't have the writing skill, nor enough knowledge of what's generally scary to contribute anything good to the community. Also, I'd have trouble thinking of any reason behind the actions of the antagonist. So no thanks: I'll just sit here, and maybe give the authors some advice on how to improve. If they haven't moved on and written something better already.
Even better is the ''Matthew Toren died by ?'' Who even wrote that? Did someone find the journal and feel the need to write what he thought Matthew said when the monster attacked him, along with the sound effects?
I love how you don't just rip at stories. You actually elaborate on why you believe they are bad stories. Also explaining that this is your opinion and everyone has their own before every video is nice.
Tbh I think that the red eye keyhole hotel creepypasta plot twist sucks. Like oh no she had red eyes and was looking right at me but who gives a shit because I'm just staying at the hotel for one night ooooooooh spooooopyyyy
I played a spooky Mario hack. I'm gonna go light myself on fire and jump off a bridge while screaming Tiptoe through the Tulips at the top of my lungs. See you guys in Hell.
Just wrote my first pasta. I took some of your advice Hoodo. Thank you very much! It's called 'Video drones' and it's currently on the creepypasta wiki.
"I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape in a story when it's executed well." What the media hears: "I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape."
I have a theory about the “play with me” ending that might make a bit more sense (emphasise on the might). The ghost at the end of the story isn’t Sally, but actually Marie (Sallys mother), who took her own life out of grief after her daughters death. When someone enters the house and approaches the vision of Sally, Marie’s ghost will kill them or drive them out, to make up for failing to protect her child when she was still alive I hope that makes sense
I'm actually fine with Play With me's plot twist. It's by no means the best plot twist ever, but I think it honestly fits because of how Ghosts in the stories are mainly spirits that have been killed so fast that they didn't see it coming so they believe they are still alive. They usually haunt people/places that they feel comfortable in/with: Sally was killed by her uncle so fast that she probably didn't even see it coming. Sally haunts her home, somewhere she felt comfortable in because her family and friends had lived there.
i think the greatest part of time travel journal, isn't the incoherent plot, the grammar errors or any of that. it's that the character took the time to write out his own death rattle as what ever was killing him.
#1 sounds like it was written by someone young or someone with English as a second language. Or both. Oh well, at least they're trying to write. I hope they practice and get better. All of these guys should. If they like writing, I hope they continue to pursue it and improve. Practice makes perfect. :3
I have been writing since I was in 8th grade, and though I have never written a creepypasta, I can say that I have improved since then. So keep writing and also read a lot. It will definitely help you improve. And to think, I started it all writing Kim Possible fanfiction.
Heres a creepypasta I once read: "Once upon a time I looked for a spyro bootleg game, then a game called spyro bootleg appeared in my mail, then I died." Seriously. Im not kidding, that was the whole creepypasta. Edit: pizza pasta put it in a box
+Bananawolf 64 Heres one I'll make for no apparent reason, once there was a guy named Gaye Wright, he tried to get revenant sub zero in mkx, by the time he had gotten to the fifth wave his hands had already become bloody pulps, in his rage he spend his college money (all of it.) buying a poorly made revenant sub zero costume, in the presidential meeting of whoever was a president, is a president or wants to be a president he appeared via his cloak and dagger he bought in a trade for a hat, then suddenly he held Obama hostage with his hales own pretty boys pistol gun, quickly thinking, Donald Trumps hair said in public chat: whoever kills revenant sub zero at the meeting gets 10 beta keys, suddenly, endless waves and hordes of toons rushing from their vps come and give the revenant sub zero guy a spanking, then they spam that they have 10 beta keys each on toonbook, suddenly an army of dedodated wams approach, in retaliation han solo appears and does the star wars kinect han solo dance.
do... was.... the last one.... was it a real attempt at something scary...? because, i mean, if it was, then it succeeded. im horrified to know that there is at least one person out there who thinks... that... was "scary"
I just love your reaction on 'Cleo the Killer' and 'BEN II' I agree that those stories made no sense, but I just laughed when you did these stories. Also, I hope you got your sanity back after making this video
Well in that 666 story you gotta remember that English aint exactly the Devil's original language. Latin has been going downhill though, about time he learns English. ...Im joking if y'all didnt notice. That was a terrible story.
"Sir, I've been sent to escort you to the lifeboats!" Alright, I'm waiting. *Waits.* What, no On Melancholy Hill references? *Opens case in video.* "Oh." Yes, finally!
dis is my totaly reel croopypasta.i receuntly foundd mah ploostashun 69 i nedded gemms fur it doe. i foundd i a old guy with some gemms on cragzlist. his picture was him holding a gemm called gta the mask of frddoy fazbear. i didnt remember that gamee but it had to be a rare gemm since he said it was the onleh one.. he only hedd one eye and he said deh gemm wuz cursed butt i didnt carre. so i went to his adress which was 101 fazbayur . i bought dah gemm and went homme to pley it. i luved seein dat old ploostashun logoo. everything seemed nurmul. but i guess itz cuz i never evur played da game befurr. boot whenn i got to the 6 mishun. froody jeff the killar and ben showed up all shooting my character repeatledy then i felt funny inside. like 666 beez stung me. then i saw my boddy on the ground and i knew that i was ded. but when i blinked and opened my eyes i was in the charcyters eyhz bein shot by froody jeff and ben. once i was able to run away from dem and i got to a compuder in da gemm so im typing my story on the game compuder. my adress is 666 runaway lane. find the game for my sake. i think if someone beats da game my soul will be released and i can move on with my lief. deh end
Hey guys! I thought I would add this comment in 2020 going over some of my general thoughts on this video in hindsight!
As some have pointed out in the comments section, some of these entries can hardly be called ”plot twists” which is a criticism I absolutely get.
Most of the entries for this list were simply chosen due to their comedic potential, though in hindsight, I definitely see that some of them may not be ”plot twists” in the general sense and I stretched the term rather thin for a few spots on the list, which was most likely not the best course of action to take.
If I were to make a video like this today, I’d make sure to go out and find stories with clear-cut, defined plot twists to bring attention to.
I also in hindsight feel I definitely could’ve presented myself a bit better in the video, by being calmer, as I nowadays don’t think some of the poor writing in these stories warranted such strong reactions; I feel some of my criticisms were slightly overblown. I played up some of my ”rage” for the video for comedic effect as well, just so that is clear. Obviously, my approach nowadays would be a lot different and I also urge any authors out there to keep writing and trying!
Also, the author of Sonic.exe has in 2017 apologized for his initial rant regarding the story being deleted. I feel that'd be fair to point out. I don’t think someone ought to be judged forever for one bad day.
Also, I am aware that Cleo is a real name; I just felt it was an interesting and obscure choice to name the character that, but apparently it’s a rather common name in America! I blame my Swedishness for that one...
Just thought I ought to acknowledge these things in this little comment reflecting on this video and how some of my thoughts have evolved over time. Thank you for reading, and have a good day!
The video is entertaining. That is all that matters to me.
Spectro Electro Hell yeah! ;)
@@HoodoHoodlumsRevenge Hoodo: *Answers my replies*
Happiness: *Up to eleven(trope version)*
Spectro Electro :)
this video is very entertaining....i would play pokemon showdown or some sonic games while listening to this
I am the author of Grand Theft Auto San Andreas Limited Edition and I am honored to have the shitty story I wrote when I was 12 on your video.
Major respect for handling it in a good way, man. At least it was able to entertain a fair share of people! Also, love your Lee profile picture.
Did you hear the bad creepypasta reading on MichealLeroi?
Sure did and laughed my ass off through every second.
***** Oh yes... It was definitely really bad. No offense taken. :)
Dashie's Old Music, You're shit is great
Hoodo the killer:
He recorded videos about creepypastas and suddenly went insane. The end.
He snapped and killed his haters.
+lily suessine And the Jeff fangirls
*****
lol
+RadSol and knuckles
+Shifting Shadow (Originally Shadow Of Sans) No, here's the actual story
Hoodo the Killer
One time in a video he sang and killed everyone with his horrible singing voice. His channel was taken down because of all the deaths, but people recorded his singing before it was taken off and reposted it for others to die.
The End of my trollpasta
I've seen better twists on a pretzel.
Yoooooooo
Whoop
Aaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy
*Insert crowd going "OOOHH" here.*
To be fair pretzel twists are the best
M. Night Shyamalan would be proud of these pastas.
I love your channel!
TarantulaColin Thanks spidey!
Dude Your vids are just plain............AWESOME
But what if he doesn't? ........... WAT A TWIIIIST
Hi lazy love your story readings
I have a Creepypasta!
One day a girl named Banana decided to be a killer so she shoved a nail into her forehead. Her mother told her father to get the gun and then the parents shot Banana. The end.
Bleeding Thorn that was so bad but I thought it was funny
4spooky6me, this is on a whole other level
9/11
12/10
Finally, a creepypasta with a happy ending.
Right when you mentioned that the protagonist was pulled into the game in the Rayman creepypasta, the video started buffering.
Apparently, even UA-cam can't believe how awful that was.
+Patrick Wilson They were obviously trying to save you...
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge Maybe UA-cam is helpful?
@@HoodoHoodlumsRevenge where are you??? you've been gone for 10 and a half months!
@@alexswin2.778give him some time for Pete’s sake
Let's play name the killers:
Jeff the killer
Jane the killer
Nina the killer
Cleo the killer
The hash shinging slasher
Ashely the killer
Rose the killer
Insanity the killer
Bella the killer
Chaos the killer
Emo the killer
cliche the plot killer
Killer the Killer.
Spider Doctor That's very funny. May I use this for a story?
"I have absolutely no problem with rape being used in a story as long as it is executed well" probably one of the worst sounding things ever when taken out of context.
Just take the “I have absolutely no problem with r@p3” out of context and we’ll have ourselves a problem
@@mancave10369 "As long as it is executed well" takes it to a whole new level
Linkara
Can we just say that the cult of X is the sonic.exe fandom?
YES LMAO
At least someone agrees with me.
yup
DucksAre SoGreat: FUCK YEAH!!! I LIVE FOR SHIT LIKE THAT!!!
That sounds more scary than the actual cult.
you forgot this: "hyper realistic blood"
I'm a sucker for HYPER REALISTIC BLOOD
The day of all this blood
+TheUndeadGamer JASON! MEDIEVAL CASTLES!!!
+bombah That's a cliche, not plot twist
Or..
*Bloodshot eyes*
Guys, every Trollpasta in this list is in the "Pasta Trying To Be Good When It Sucks Enough To Be A Troll" category, meaning that they were written to be taken seriously. Just thought I'd let you know.
I expected you to lose it at Clockwork again.
xD
Troll!! Hahahahaha
Trololololololol
***** Ok, I can agree with this explanation. But I still can't believe that GTA pasta with president can be in any way serious. It literally scream trollpasta! No one simply can believe in twist like that.
Evan Yeagy Clockwork _is_ 9/11
"goodbye crule world BANG BANG OH NO klaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa AHHHHH SHING", sounds like something you would read on one of those engrish t-shirts
agreed
It also sounds like something you'd see on one of those Indian Facebook memes
writes it on shirt] YOU CAN NOW BUY THEM
@*insert clever username* ADS SUCK. You're welcome I gave you a username
I'd wear that.
The author was gay the whole timeeeeeeeee!
Hahahahaha lol that's so funny
Plot Twist 8 months later
The Author is Actually a Furry
Iyomante WhOa
The author is actually [insert cringy creepypasta character]
Corefront Games OH MY GOOOOOOOD
I have a crappypasta:
One time, I didn't eat a chicken nugget. Later that night, it came into my room and shot me to death with a knife, but then I had a spiritual battle with it and impaled it on a credenza.
Gave me nightmares
i just shit myself
...oh god im sorry i was shot with pillow
Better story than Jeff the killer
+Chase Legoman
0/10 Too Much Grammatical Structure.
I think the actual GOOD creepypastas shouldn't be referred to as creepypastas, because the name sounds just as silly as the fangirl's favorites such as Jeff the Killer, Eyeless Jack, etc.
What I'm trying to say here is that Psychosis and Harbringer Experiment shouldn't be called creepypastas. They deserve better names than that.
That is... surprisingly true.
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge Glad you agree! I watch your videos every day. Stay awesome.
But... they're still creepypastas...
I've never thought about that before
Russian Sleep Experiment, too.
My personal favourite... Happy Appy just deserves the title "Funnypasta" It is creepy in some places but the ending... It was darn hilarious.
That last pasta was so bad, I thought i was gonna die by question mark
+Tamaki Suoh That comment made my day!!
That last pasta should be used as a means of torture for war criminals, it’ll break their minds
Secret file letter:666
Oncee upon upon a a a time, my sister told me to wash the dishes, or they'll commme for me, I nver suspected a thinh, the dishes came in my room and killed me to death, until I was dead, I am currently dead and writing this
The dishes were also hyper realistic
YEH ITS IS
I read this laughing so hard
Vous gets an nobels awerd four tis
010120101010101010102043954239574389742353q53/10 FUCKIN LOVED IT!
Anonymous AKA: Anonymous
_dude this was so spoopy I pooed my p a n t s_
that gta is hilarious also because obama wasn't the president when that game was made.
rubberstack exactly
Oh, hey. I'm alive. How quaint.
that picture hahahahaha
YAY you're not dead!
Yay you didn't die and I'm viewer 11
What's up man!😁
Kappa
HOW DARE YOU! MY MOTHER WAS KILLED BY A QUESTION MARK!
TRIGGERED
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hah!
HOW DARE YOU MY FATHER WAS KILLED BY AN UNORDINAL COMMECT
HOW DARE I MY MOTHER WAS KILLED BY BAD GRAMMAR
HOW DARE I AGAIN COUSE I WAS KILLED BY A TRUCK
I feel like Pasta's like Cleo the killer Or Poopsy should be under the category "Spooky Noodles"
BEN DROWNED OH I forgot about poopsy tbh
Scurry spaghetti
Tagliaterrors
Silly spaghetti?
Heck yeah.
I was playing call of duty then I seen........ SUPER HYPER REALISTIC BLOOD!!!!!!!
that is creepy crazy diamond 16
I don't even know anymore homestuck!!
ShiningManHumz 16 here's my creepypasta:
One day I is play FNaF. Freddy is jump through screen and eat my face. Blood everywhere. Herobrine fall out of sky and help Freddy. I die with diamond sword in face. The end.
ten out of fucking ten ;)
Must have some pretty good graphics
You forgot number zero "and then a skeleton popped out"
that's the best one though
That's a joke twist for trollpastas
Denny Truong Bruh that one is legendary.
A SKELETON WITH GUNS!!!!!
Reference to JonTron.
+Lego AndMoreLego I've got a BONE to pick with you! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Good to know Skype is multi-dimensional.
I thought that Skype call with an evil version of me with a beard was weird..
"You can only improve with every story you make."
Tell that to JCTheHyena :P
If you try.
If you genuinely try to improve. He doesn't bother.
Or don't. Not like he'd honestly listen.
He can't improve
Jc's right about one thing. I'm laughing like a hyena
Wha...Cleo...wha...Cleo the Killer? And I thought there were already enough Jeff ripoffs as it was.
ekbizin Jeff the Killer rip-offs are freakin' EVERYWHERE.
ekbizin EVERYWHERE
Dude How could she see without her eyes
Bullshit right there
And convinienty the woods are close to her house.....
ekbizin By the way... What kind of a nickname is that? (Random name) The Killer?! It's like parody of itself.
Don't worry, there'll be more.
I have a creepypasta!
‘I was playing Super Princess Peach and then Princess Peach broke through the screen and killed my dog.’
Did you mindbreak Peach for revenge ??
"Bigfoot's real and he tried to eat my ass."
This sounds like a fake animated story title
@@TetrisShark70 I'm giggling irl like a moron lol
@@luisalbertoarenasaraya4579 That is one hell of a cursed comment.
One day my friend wrote a creepypasta, and he acted as if it was the best one EVER. He gets me excited. I run to his house, and here it is: sonic.the.slayer. one day I wanted to get a sonic hack. I got it but a skeleton popped out then I died. THAT WAS IT. I RAN HALF A MILE FOR THAT.
+The gaming Cat Did you at least raid his fridge? If I ran half a mile to read THAT I'm making a sandwich...
No, but I did punch his nose.
yeh boi good job UNACTIVE
UNACTIVE I feel so sorry for you mate
Still better than Sonic.exe. XD
I have a creepy pasta ,,,,, ..boo.the end
Herald The Hobo Guy I cannot sleep now why did you post this
Bob Saget i got something better.
One day i hyper realistically woke up from my hyper realistic bed and looked up and saw a hyper realistic ghost from my hyper realistic window and i hyper realistically punched it and hyper realistically bled and hyper realistically found out that it was just me on the mirror.
I found out this is an actual story so go read that
i read that i laughed so hard on that story
i read that story on the creepypasta wiki
Herald The Hobo Guy AHHHH
oh noooooo I killed him
Plot twist! I'm a ghost and I died laughing while listening to you read the last story.
And I became skeleton and wrote this comment
Saaaame
So.... what exactly did "notifying the police" consist of? "Yeah. this guy played a game that made him shoot Obama, go an arrest him now please."
"Cleo"? What kind of a name is that? Reminds me of Cleos Frey.
Also, John Terry? The footballer?
Oh my God hahahahaha you're so right
My dog's name is Cleo (I took part in naming her because I loved Queen Cleopatra when I was little)
Bennings No mention of the Lum nonsense? Holy shit, that was way too weird.
+Bennings I was thinking about the fake psychic Miss Cleo. :)
Terry is quite the baller #swag #money #imapimp #marijuany
your use of Gorillaz is one reason why I really appreciate your videos, and also the fact that you're absolutely hilarious in these types of videos 0w0
8:11 - 8:20 What colour was that liquid again?
Jarate
Funny thing about the Ben Drowned one, the wording in the creepypasta itself proves that Jadusable may or may not be dead after the last post. Remember the line "But I guess I'm the genius who chose to live in a single?" That would mean Jadusable never had a roommate. Meaning Ben was the one who posted Jadusable's final notes. Meaning that unoffical sequel was COMPLETELY POINTLESS.
I'd love to write a self insert horror fanfiction where the main character is perfect but slowly over time the supporting characters start to become self aware and sense that something is wrong with their world and that the protagonist is too unrealistic to exist. Then the focus shifts to them trying to escape their badly written hell.
good idea
Are you still gonna write this fiction, OP?
This is exactly why I choose to read/listen to creepypasta's instead of creating them. I mean, don't get me wrong. Some of the well-known ones weren't that badly written. And let's be honest: they scared the heck out of me when I was a teen.
But I KNOW I don't have the writing skill, nor enough knowledge of what's generally scary to contribute anything good to the community. Also, I'd have trouble thinking of any reason behind the actions of the antagonist. So no thanks: I'll just sit here, and maybe give the authors some advice on how to improve. If they haven't moved on and written something better already.
Laughing and Eyeless Jack, Jeff the Killer, Ticci Toby and Sonic.EXE are well known, and written badly
How does one rips there own eyes out, and doesn't bleed out or go into shock?
+Envy Noson Magic.
When you're insane, you can just do things like that. Edgar Allen Poe cut off his own ear. Or was it Van Gogh? I can't remember.
Confetti
It was Van Gogh.
Waffles
Shenanigans
To be fair, the devil probably would use bad grammar. Because he's the devil.
Well 666 is supposed to represent imperfection, as an opposite to 333, which is considered the perfect number.
@@un-capital3666 Should've been 334 or 332.
That's a true imperfection.
@@5H4NKTH35HARK True, it makes my soul hurt
To me. The best plot twist is. "Suddenly...pineapples" (lol, if you get the reference) 😂
E.C.G Gaming/comedy lol
I am still depressed and this didn't help
😉
chuz whuz did this have to do with depression?
Hilda Santos It's a reference to an animation.
This does not help.
Cleo the killer.. nina the killer.. charlie the killer.. Kill me..
lol
Rox The Nightguard the killer
SmashNerd 3
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Kill Me The Killer
Fox DaGamer Bleach the killer xD
WTF IS WITH NUMBER 1? WTF? IM SO CONFUSED? WTF
yeah I don't get it either
Well I must try xD every thing COULD be understood u just have to try xD 😜
I'm guessing it was either wrote by a 10 year old or someone with a disability. I hope the writer wasn't dead fucking serious
+Brother James I don't know but damn its like WHAT THE FUCK who wrote this?
+Jayda Blevins it could be a troll though lol
"BANG BANG OH NO KLAAAAAAAAAAAAA AHHHHHHHHHHHKHHHHHHHHHHH SHING" fantastic
Even better is the ''Matthew Toren died by ?''
Who even wrote that? Did someone find the journal and feel the need to write what he thought Matthew said when the monster attacked him, along with the sound effects?
lol
+Ryuichi Naruhodo yes the monster felt the need to he also lost his calander which is why he couldn't get the exact dates
+Jorji Costava He was killed by native Cobrastan bears.
+Tony the electric ninja Oh hey man! I've seen you in the comments of another video.... Don't remember what video though....
I love how you don't just rip at stories. You actually elaborate on why you believe they are bad stories. Also explaining that this is your opinion and everyone has their own before every video is nice.
Yaaaay you're a Gorillaz fan. Subscribed for great content :) (Not just because of Gorillaz lol)
BTW your profile pic looks like 2D, intentional?
Very much intentional!
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge
Awesome!! ^^
ALLHAILLAVABOY Woooo Hoo
Wanna hear my plot twist? I died
Gasp dun dun dun!!
10/10 HHG
"Great ending 8/8 M8" IGN - 2016
Want to here my plot twist Bradley Smith? I was a spooped by a skelengton and died the end
Sixth grade girls after “writing a song”: OMG, I’m gonna grow up to be a pop star!!!
The song: 16:07
Tbh I think that the red eye keyhole hotel creepypasta plot twist sucks. Like oh no she had red eyes and was looking right at me but who gives a shit because I'm just staying at the hotel for one night ooooooooh spooooopyyyy
I played a spooky Mario hack. I'm gonna go light myself on fire and jump off a bridge while screaming Tiptoe through the Tulips at the top of my lungs. See you guys in Hell.
"I'm back!" I swear, his voice slid up an octave XD
How the fuck is the last one a creepypasta, it's more like a horrible comedy story😂
Just wrote my first pasta. I took some of your advice Hoodo. Thank you very much! It's called 'Video drones' and it's currently on the creepypasta wiki.
A golden liquid? Oh no, it's... LEMONADE!
***** And you ruined the joke... thanks
lemonades not yellow
It's jarate
"I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape in a story when it's executed well."
What the media hears: "I have absolutely no problem with murder or rape."
666.Exe Is A Trollpasta Right?
That Dude I thought it was. Mutahar even read it for his Trollpasta series
No 666.exe was made as an actual creepy pasta but it was so funny and awful that it was listed as a troll pasta same thing with jeff the killer
@@jaredjimenez10 Pretty much this. It was an honest attempt at writing a story when I was 12 years old and yeah you can see it didn't go very well lol
All of the stories in this video are. 🙃
I have a theory about the “play with me” ending that might make a bit more sense (emphasise on the might).
The ghost at the end of the story isn’t Sally, but actually Marie (Sallys mother), who took her own life out of grief after her daughters death. When someone enters the house and approaches the vision of Sally, Marie’s ghost will kill them or drive them out, to make up for failing to protect her child when she was still alive
I hope that makes sense
I'm sorry, but watching you rage is incredibly funny.
Suddenly, Pineapples? XD
15:17 Hello Ben II, or should I say, goodbye Ben II
I realized the Murdoc Niccals reference about halfway through the intro, and I flipped my shit. Nicely done.
I love this, your sarcastic attitude to these bad Creepypastas are hilarious. Instant sub!
Most of these just sound like bad self-insert fanfiction.
Some of them actually are.
+Waffle C That's most entry level creepypasta
+Waffle C SO TRUE
+Waffle C You should see half the crappypastas out there. I even read some of them on my channel.
+Waffle C That's because they are. Have you SEEN how many Jeff x Sue pastas there are!?
Are you sure that last one wasn't a trollpasta?
I am sure.
***** You're lying!, there is no way that is an actual creepypasta.
GrumpFan12 Someone wrote it. Someone wanted it to be taken seriously.
***** NO! ITS NOT TRUE! I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT! NIEN NIEN NIEN NIEN NIEN NIEN!!!!!!
*****
May he be missed. :(
I'm actually fine with Play With me's plot twist. It's by no means the best plot twist ever, but I think it honestly fits because of how Ghosts in the stories are mainly spirits that have been killed so fast that they didn't see it coming so they believe they are still alive. They usually haunt people/places that they feel comfortable in/with: Sally was killed by her uncle so fast that she probably didn't even see it coming. Sally haunts her home, somewhere she felt comfortable in because her family and friends had lived there.
"But than who was comment?!"
IS A SPOOKY SCARY GHOSTS
wooo
completyy orginal ending
likeded
+kimi giardina
AND THEN A SKELETON POPPED OUT
+kimi giardina It was- JOHN CENA!!
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge 3SPOOKY9ME
i think the greatest part of time travel journal, isn't the incoherent plot, the grammar errors or any of that. it's that the character took the time to write out his own death rattle as what ever was killing him.
OH MY GOD THE ENDING!!! I love On Melancholy Hill!!!!!
And Rhinestone Eyes is also amazing!!
Shyamalan: "WHAT A TWIST"
"A golden liquid."
You mean...
Apple juice?
No.
Pee
"AHHHHHHHHKHHHHH" is the way i wanna go.
#1 sounds like it was written by someone young or someone with English as a second language. Or both.
Oh well, at least they're trying to write. I hope they practice and get better. All of these guys should. If they like writing, I hope they continue to pursue it and improve. Practice makes perfect. :3
DarkVioletCloud "IF" is the key word
DarkVioletCloud Young, not english AND he/she probably took like five minutes to both think it over and write it.
I have been writing since I was in 8th grade, and though I have never written a creepypasta, I can say that I have improved since then. So keep writing and also read a lot. It will definitely help you improve.
And to think, I started it all writing Kim Possible fanfiction.
i JUST realized that intro was a reference to "Journey to Plastic Beach". Well played.
5:45 Rhinestone eyes by gorillaz. 19:43 is a reference to malohony hill also by gorillaz, I love your taste m8
Hoodo is love, Hoodo is life
Yes.
Yes
***** Hoodo is blood, blood is tasty. Therefore Hoodo is tasty. *bows*
has anyone told you that you sound kinda like you would be related to baumproductions?
Hmm... personally I don't hear it, but hey! Whatever floats your boat, man ;)
:)
HoodoHoodlumsRevenge is the song when you're playing Gta san andreas RhineStone Eyes?
SparkyBots 049 Hell yeah!
HoodoHoodlumsRevenge thanks it's my second favorite gorillaz song :)
I love that it pauses after each number.
Gives me time to think about humanity's extinction and how close it's getting.
I BLAME YOU FOR THIS WHOLE YEAR
The fact you used Mother 3 music in this video, it just makes me happy.
Are you a Mother fan?
Some of my favorite games! :)
One time I didn’t study for this big test at school, and I didn’t know the answers.
Then I got an A-
Aaaaaaaaaaa so scary noo
Oh god the end killed me, especially how you had to pitch the song for copyright lmao
666.exe was a troll pasta on some ordinary gamer
I still can't over the fact you high key recreated Noodle's fight on the boat lmaooo
I still come back to this video every once in a while.
wait is the "golden liquid" PISS?! U were probably thinking that when u said that
It's jar-based karate.
“I have no problem with rape and murder-“ VIDEO BUFFERS
Hoodo is based
Oh my god!! You're killing the pastas melancholy hill style!! You just earned yourself a sub my good friend.
you should make a video with blameitonJorge
Hey guys, We need to make creepypasta of this video!
+captn_ spark1 Best creepypasta 10/10
that melancholy hill ending skit was buetiful, i cried, and the sonic.exe came out my screen and said your next
Heres a creepypasta I once read: "Once upon a time I looked for a spyro bootleg game, then a game called spyro bootleg appeared in my mail, then I died." Seriously. Im not kidding, that was the whole creepypasta.
Edit: pizza pasta put it in a box
Was it a joke or something?
PikaMewTheGreat I dont know, thats all it said.
FUCKING BRILLIANT!
+Bananawolf 64 Heres one I'll make for no apparent reason, once there was a guy named Gaye Wright, he tried to get revenant sub zero in mkx, by the time he had gotten to the fifth wave his hands had already become bloody pulps, in his rage he spend his college money (all of it.) buying a poorly made revenant sub zero costume, in the presidential meeting of whoever was a president, is a president or wants to be a president he appeared via his cloak and dagger he bought in a trade for a hat, then suddenly he held Obama hostage with his hales own pretty boys pistol gun, quickly thinking, Donald Trumps hair said in public chat: whoever kills revenant sub zero at the meeting gets 10 beta keys, suddenly, endless waves and hordes of toons rushing from their vps come and give the revenant sub zero guy a spanking, then they spam that they have 10 beta keys each on toonbook, suddenly an army of dedodated wams approach, in retaliation han solo appears and does the star wars kinect han solo dance.
Dont you hate it when people have absurd names? that was the most fucking brainless thing ever. You deserve to present these things to fucking PHD's
do... was.... the last one.... was it a real attempt at something scary...? because, i mean, if it was, then it succeeded. im horrified to know that there is at least one person out there who thinks... that... was "scary"
I just love your reaction on 'Cleo the Killer' and 'BEN II' I agree that those stories made no sense, but I just laughed when you did these stories. Also, I hope you got your sanity back after making this video
the fact that clockwork is actually a well known creeppasta now is just-
5:44 pretty sure that's the Gorrilaz but what song is it?
+Traitor! Rhinestone Eyes my good sir
robotwarsfan03 Thank you my fine fellow
This is probably the nicest youtube comment chain i've ever seen.
Pls No We're not all violent swear-happy delinquents my fellow commenter ;)
Jimjamatic I notice. Thanks for being good sports, gentlemen. XD
I loved the "On Melancholy Hill" thingy at the end
BANG BANG OH NO klaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa AAAAAAAAAAAAkHHHHHHHHHHHH SHING
Well in that 666 story you gotta remember that English aint exactly the Devil's original language. Latin has been going downhill though, about time he learns English.
...Im joking if y'all didnt notice. That was a terrible story.
It took me a while to realize you put melancholy hill as the music for the ending skit and I love you for doing that
16:08 - 17:53 now that story deserved a sequel.
17:43 is my favorite part
Kenny Guffey me too
I'm assuming by some of the stuff in your video, and your profile pic, that you like the Gorillaz.
Yes. Yes I do.
*****
Ever noticed that my profile pic is Noodle?
I've yet to meet anyone who hasn't.
Dusk Ealain
Anyone who hasn't liked the Gorillaz, or noticed that my profile picture is noodle?
krookyj I actually didn't notice that XD
"Sir, I've been sent to escort you to the lifeboats!" Alright, I'm waiting. *Waits.* What, no On Melancholy Hill references? *Opens case in video.* "Oh." Yes, finally!
On number 1 i was literally, like literally, just...freakin' like; OMG WHAT IS THIS SHIT?! WHAT DID I JUST READ? WOW...JUST WOW..i'm done. XD
dis is my totaly reel croopypasta.i receuntly foundd mah ploostashun 69 i nedded gemms fur it doe. i foundd i a old guy with some gemms on cragzlist. his picture was him holding a gemm called gta the mask of frddoy fazbear. i didnt remember that gamee but it had to be a rare gemm since he said it was the onleh one.. he only hedd one eye and he said deh gemm wuz cursed butt i didnt carre. so i went to his adress which was 101 fazbayur . i bought dah gemm and went homme to pley it. i luved seein dat old ploostashun logoo. everything seemed nurmul. but i guess itz cuz i never evur played da game befurr. boot whenn i got to the 6 mishun. froody jeff the killar and ben showed up all shooting my character repeatledy then i felt funny inside. like 666 beez stung me. then i saw my boddy on the ground and i knew that i was ded. but when i blinked and opened my eyes i was in the charcyters eyhz bein shot by froody jeff and ben. once i was able to run away from dem and i got to a compuder in da gemm so im typing my story on the game compuder. my adress is 666 runaway lane. find the game for my sake. i think if someone beats da game my soul will be released and i can move on with my lief. deh end
10/10 2spooky4me
+(-Michael-) Link6456 omfg u reel bruh dat is sp00ky
needs more work with a spook from a skeleton and a spooky skeleton spook at the end
immutability making
You forgot the part where you were the devil's toy.
0/5