Study Time #9: English Language Paper 2, Question 5

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  • @mkaif6446
    @mkaif6446 3 роки тому +644

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      @Bibbaro0 3 роки тому +52

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      @anstinantony4779 3 роки тому +15

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    • @Bibbaro0
      @Bibbaro0 3 роки тому +7

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      @anstinantony4779 3 роки тому +4

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      @Bibbaro0 3 роки тому +6

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    @DSGDolphin 3 роки тому +155

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    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  3 роки тому +22

      You’re welcome

    • @itzevan3168
      @itzevan3168 2 роки тому +6

      how much did Mr everything English help for you and what grade did you finally get?

    • @DSGDolphin
      @DSGDolphin 2 роки тому +2

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    • @DSGDolphin
      @DSGDolphin 2 роки тому +1

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    • @dapo7930
      @dapo7930 2 роки тому +7

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  • @emilyjeffri
    @emilyjeffri 3 роки тому +92

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  • @LeviParsons31
    @LeviParsons31 3 роки тому +90

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      @aqeel6440 2 роки тому +15

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    • @mirshathmohamed2814
      @mirshathmohamed2814 Рік тому

      What grades did you get in your final GCSE?

    • @LeviParsons31
      @LeviParsons31 Рік тому +5

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    • @Napoloen08
      @Napoloen08 Рік тому +1

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    @blankpain1581 2 роки тому +20

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  • @PA5S
    @PA5S 2 роки тому +27

    2 hour until exam. This really helped.

  • @illiagorenkov7491
    @illiagorenkov7491 5 місяців тому +3

    I just want to say the huge thank you for this video. Im not fluent english speaker and Im still learning the language. But I got 32/40 for this question on my mocks. Its my biggest reason to be proud at the moment

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Рік тому +10

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  • @m0nsoon660
    @m0nsoon660 3 роки тому +19

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  • @bo-katankryze4486
    @bo-katankryze4486 3 роки тому +18

    I got 27/40 right after watching this last minute ,thank you so much, I had to watch this again for my mocks

  • @tremexslayze8538
    @tremexslayze8538 3 роки тому +104

    Me: doing this question tomorrow, allowed a plan.
    Me: watchs guide for grade 9 hoping for a 4 👀🤞😭

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 роки тому +10

      I forgot my plan for the test, i failed 100%

    • @Nayvixs
      @Nayvixs 3 роки тому +2

      @@tremexslayze8538 unlucky, did you?

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 роки тому

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    • @Nayvixs
      @Nayvixs 3 роки тому +5

      @@tremexslayze8538 Bro, I feel bad for you. Don't worry if you practise an essay once a week you will do well.

    • @tremexslayze8538
      @tremexslayze8538 3 роки тому +1

      @@Nayvixs bro wdym i only got couple weeks of school n did most of my english n got no mores tbf

  • @coffee________
    @coffee________ 2 роки тому +27

    This really did help, I have my mock for paper 2 tomorrow, I hope it goes well. Wish me luck!!

    • @coffee________
      @coffee________ 2 роки тому +2

      @@walterwhite59499 Honestly? It went pretty okay, it wasn't as intense as paper 1. I'm just waiting for my results now. I got a 7 last time, I have no idea what I'll get this time...I just hope it's at least a 5 😂

    • @aliakram478
      @aliakram478 2 роки тому

      @@coffee________ lol i got a 4 in paper 1 and 7 in papper 2

    • @coffee________
      @coffee________ 2 роки тому +1

      @@aliakram478 Woah that's a big jump, well done! I got the same as last time, I got a 7 again which i wasn't really pleased about as I expected higher but at least I'm consistent.

    • @aliakram478
      @aliakram478 2 роки тому

      @@coffee________ nice

    • @rydondeznuts1455
      @rydondeznuts1455 2 роки тому

      @@coffee________ what was your question 5 bro

  • @kaik0567
    @kaik0567 2 роки тому +17

    extremely helpful and I feel really good and confident for my mock exam tomorrow

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    @SCMcDonLon Місяць тому

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  • @aminabegum5674
    @aminabegum5674 3 роки тому +16

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  • @Sadera23
    @Sadera23 3 роки тому +26

    your videos are too sick, got me 34/40 on this question on my last mock, got another one soon

  • @shaaravguha3760
    @shaaravguha3760 2 роки тому +7

    These videos have helped me produce the most useful/concentrated notes ever; before this I've only been able to get 8s and 7s, but I'm gonna try for a 9.

    • @xoxox3658
      @xoxox3658 2 роки тому +3

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    @tkmobz7337 3 роки тому +15

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    @madiha6282 3 роки тому +10

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  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Рік тому +1

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  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Рік тому +1

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    @gennybetwana9620 2 роки тому +3

    I am very much avisual learner so this video has been very helpful for me. The expkanations are simple but clear so thanks

  • @anonymooseuser2150
    @anonymooseuser2150 3 роки тому +14

    Thank you sir! I was able to get 37/40 with your videos

  • @theboredreaper5902
    @theboredreaper5902 3 роки тому +20

    This looks quite handy, I've got my final assessment that goes towards my final gcse English lang grade coming up in a month and a bit and I'm currently sitting on a 7 /A thanks for the great video this structure you layed out could really help me push for a 8-9

  • @wooshpush8469
    @wooshpush8469 2 роки тому +1

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    • @tiaislam645
      @tiaislam645 2 роки тому +1

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  • @lollipop1185
    @lollipop1185 2 роки тому +9

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    @Feral2k4 3 роки тому +24

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    • @MrEverythingEnglish
      @MrEverythingEnglish  3 роки тому +9

      Thank you 👊

    • @Feral2k4
      @Feral2k4 3 роки тому +2

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    • @leticiastar30
      @leticiastar30 2 роки тому +1

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    @isabellewrightson5845 2 роки тому +3

    i went from a 3 to 6 from this thank you so much omg

  • @q415y6
    @q415y6 Рік тому +1

    Beautiful stuff, really helped me understand all the techniques and I learnt a lot of new Paragraph structures!

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    @rohan_n23 3 роки тому +13

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    @yajatmahalingam8723 3 роки тому +2

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    @heathersisto1119 Рік тому +1

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  • @MM-lr5hv
    @MM-lr5hv Рік тому +1

    Yep getting there, understood, you are definitely good, following, hopeful, many thanks 🙏 ❤

  • @somyagarg2811
    @somyagarg2811 3 роки тому +39

    We did this question as a mock and somebody wrote about cats.

  • @aerz8420
    @aerz8420 3 роки тому +7

    Found it useful to generate more ideas and having a clear plan

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    @afghancook3146 Рік тому +1

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    @MZ-hs8od 2 роки тому +1

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  • @jessica8615
    @jessica8615 3 роки тому +2

    so helpful. imma recommend this channel to my teacher!!

  • @BeaconofMotivation-1
    @BeaconofMotivation-1 2 роки тому +2

    ‘All sport should be fun, fair and open to everyone. These days, sport seems to
    be more about money, corruption and winning at any cost.’
    Write an article for a newspaper in which you explain your point of view on this
    statement.
    (24 marks for content and organisation
    16 marks for technical accuracy)
    [40 marks]
    You are advised to plan your answer to Question 5 before you start to write.
    Can you tell me what plan would you use please.

    • @OrangeDude7
      @OrangeDude7 2 роки тому +2

      its pretty easy when you label each word out
      fun - people having a good time
      fair - equality and respect
      open - no matter ur background
      money - some can't afford - people just see it as buisness
      corruption - not really sure for this one ( lead people to depression and poverty?)
      winning at any cost - no sportsmanship, people would cheat and get away with it just to win

    • @BeaconofMotivation-1
      @BeaconofMotivation-1 2 роки тому

      thank you

  • @Ali-ye4nv
    @Ali-ye4nv 2 роки тому +3

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  • @dani_e_t2138
    @dani_e_t2138 Рік тому +1

    they should ask us: which player is better Messi or Ronaldo. I will get 41 out of 40 if that was the case.

  • @alij1272
    @alij1272 2 роки тому +3

    brilliant. I learned, soo much from you sir. Thank you! ;D

  • @Blessingstevens06
    @Blessingstevens06 2 роки тому +1

    when writing about how cars are safer you can also use statistics

  • @zaheer6435
    @zaheer6435 2 роки тому +1

    He makes it look so easy. Thanks for the help

  • @sullymlg9785
    @sullymlg9785 Рік тому

    Hey we have mock exams in our school and have just done the first section of the exam you've linked in the description. Think question 5 will be the one you've linked LOL. Congrats on 100k, you've 100% deserved it man.

  • @Jessieberryy
    @Jessieberryy Рік тому +1

    Legend. Mock tomorrow :)

  • @medhesshsureshkaran2269
    @medhesshsureshkaran2269 2 роки тому +3

    I had a pratice test on this and got a grade 7, this video really helped me thanks bro

  • @sweet.8
    @sweet.8 3 роки тому +1

    You're the best explain paper 2 question 5.

    • @yeahitsmeex7542
      @yeahitsmeex7542 3 роки тому

      You know how u planned for not banning cars ,are you supposed to start with the word convenient twice for the second paragraph when u plan do we do the same begin convenient and think of other ideas or start a fresh new idea to plan for your second paragraph please reply

  • @ameliamorton-peel2357
    @ameliamorton-peel2357 3 роки тому +9

    Got my assessment tomorrow on this so let’s hope this sticks in my head

  • @Nayvixs
    @Nayvixs 3 роки тому +3

    I really wish you were my teacher! Best help I have had.

  • @emilinthomas9499
    @emilinthomas9499 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks this helped a lot ill update what I got in my mock!

  • @rihana6787
    @rihana6787 3 роки тому +2

    i finish this question in 20 mins. should i write more paragraphs or spend more time on other questions?

  • @uhmkiki1057
    @uhmkiki1057 2 роки тому +2

    this is so useful for my exam tomorrow!!! thank you, your videos are great keep going :)

  • @myleshayhurst7526
    @myleshayhurst7526 3 роки тому +1

    close to taking mr salles glory

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      @roma7823 3 роки тому

      he’s surpassed mr salles glory by loads

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    @discobutterfly 3 роки тому +1

    Very engaging and clear.

  • @covenantezeh
    @covenantezeh Рік тому +2

    I though you said we should not go against the question

  • @freyatebbutt9844
    @freyatebbutt9844 Рік тому +1

    Thank you very much - extremely helpful!

  • @arsenal192
    @arsenal192 2 роки тому +4

    Who else is here before the mock exan 🙂

  • @thesimple1818
    @thesimple1818 2 роки тому +2

    I always get stuck on writing intros. I don't know what to put in the intro, or how to make it compelling. do you have any advice on how to write a quick effective intro?

    • @FlawlessPlayZzz
      @FlawlessPlayZzz 2 роки тому

      You don’t get marks for the into or conclusion so it doesn’t matter. If u do it say “I believe that so and so is the correct way for the society due to the beneficial”…….. just like 1 or 2 sentences

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 3 роки тому +3

    Very beneficial channel, thanks 😊

  • @abusyofficial
    @abusyofficial 2 роки тому +2

    very useful sir thanks a lot

  • @ivvister2303
    @ivvister2303 3 роки тому +1

    here before my english language PPE mock tomorrow , 18th march 2021

  • @alfieluke7339
    @alfieluke7339 Рік тому

    you saved my grades brother- predicted a 4 and got a 7!

  • @MentalMax9
    @MentalMax9 3 роки тому +1

    Brilliant video! I'm feeling very euphoric and will definitely subscribe.

  • @burakasik3937
    @burakasik3937 3 роки тому +2

    cramming for my TAG tomorrow

  • @Adil_67x
    @Adil_67x 3 роки тому +2

    Can you please make a video on writing a speech??

  • @mrfreerunners1
    @mrfreerunners1 2 роки тому +1

    as aqua have released advance info about P2 Q5 being article, can you do a video solely on that ?

  • @rajansinghbhamra9445
    @rajansinghbhamra9445 2 роки тому

    thanks mr eveything English best english teacher out there. In the essay do you have to say why the cars are a bad thing as well

  • @annoymuss
    @annoymuss 8 місяців тому

    Just got my Mock results and was close to a grade 4 how can i secure a grade 7 in the next mocks?. BTW your videos actually helped me because i used your structure in every question in paper 2

  • @joshwalker6584
    @joshwalker6584 3 роки тому +1

    I’ve just had this question as an article and I have realised that I didn’t completely stick to the statement given and it only vaguely links to my answer will this affect my grade or am I ok?

  • @qasimpatel2647
    @qasimpatel2647 3 роки тому +1

    This is the same question coming up on my exam tomorrow 😃

  • @Abc78633
    @Abc78633 Рік тому +1

    Can you do a counter arguement then disprove the arguement?

  • @hypxrfishy
    @hypxrfishy 2 роки тому +1

    i got grade 6 or 7 by using this structure only in paragraph 1 and some around my letter.

  • @mkfitnessandyoga5030
    @mkfitnessandyoga5030 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you. This was super helpful especially that my Paper 2 exam is coming up. 👌

  • @aleenalailla04
    @aleenalailla04 3 роки тому +2

    firsttt 💕

  • @inori_yuziriha
    @inori_yuziriha Рік тому +1

    AQA loves cars XD

  • @mohammedkahir5540
    @mohammedkahir5540 3 роки тому +1

    i get most of it but dont understand how we write a one line paragraph because the marks are for varied length paragraphs, you said 4 main paragraphs? pls reply asap as exam tomorrow thanks:)

  • @nightskorpion1336
    @nightskorpion1336 10 місяців тому

    Well done sir

  • @oliviadixon5777
    @oliviadixon5777 3 роки тому +1

    thankyou this is actually so much more useful than anything ive seen

  • @legendaryfight1846
    @legendaryfight1846 Рік тому

    You saved my life!

  • @zg1161
    @zg1161 3 роки тому

    What’s the difference between conclusion and the main paragraphs because your basically writing your opinion on the paragraphs

  • @rohaankhan8469
    @rohaankhan8469 3 роки тому +2

    would have loved if you did this video last week! I got a grade 6

  • @thinktalk9250
    @thinktalk9250 3 роки тому +2

    thanks it was useful

  • @HH-zr1iu
    @HH-zr1iu 3 роки тому +4

    great vid - just what i needed

  • @dhanushparthiban9803
    @dhanushparthiban9803 3 роки тому +2

    cyamooooon

  • @aliadnan7661
    @aliadnan7661 3 роки тому

    Sir you are the best. Your videos have great content and you always have some parts of humour. Thanks for all your time and energy you put in making these videos. Xx

  • @peaceadeoye247
    @peaceadeoye247 Рік тому +1

    Thank you so much

  • @noahsamuel9780
    @noahsamuel9780 2 роки тому +1

    Hey guys I’ve got English mock today wish me luck going for that grade 7 or 8

  • @bigman-qd6zi
    @bigman-qd6zi Рік тому

    i thought you said to lean with whatever side the questions on because it already provides the reasons

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 3 роки тому +2

    Could you maybe provide an example of what an intro would be like please?

  • @funminiyisekoni2926
    @funminiyisekoni2926 2 роки тому +2

    Does this apply to Edexcel exam board

    • @BladeConnors
      @BladeConnors 2 роки тому

      i think so i am doing edexel the examiners arnt going to harsh this year

  • @jackoman-xg5dv
    @jackoman-xg5dv Рік тому

    Should i still spend 10 mins on the one line paragraphs or allocate some of that time to other paragraphs

  • @zevistimo
    @zevistimo 3 роки тому +1

    So for the one liners, do you do the same thing you would do for the main paragraphs?

  • @ManpreetKaur-kg2gn
    @ManpreetKaur-kg2gn 2 роки тому

    Hello thank you so much this video really helped me

  • @prod.byMali
    @prod.byMali Рік тому

    idk why but "it is almost like imaging a world without water" made me laugh 💀