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  • @AlpherixYT
    @AlpherixYT 2 роки тому +213

    We all gonna make it Brahh, Inshallah we all pass by God's mercy

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 2 роки тому +209

    Thanks so much sir I was so worried about how I am going to revise unseen poetry because my school didn't bother teaching it, I'm sure lots of u guys would say the same

    • @Abdullah-cb4np
      @Abdullah-cb4np 2 роки тому +11

      Agreed

    • @mrquickogaming
      @mrquickogaming 2 роки тому +31

      same here, never taught unseen poetry and have never answered the 8 marker either

    • @billy.cannon
      @billy.cannon 2 роки тому +2

      yep

    • @raheemayub6238
      @raheemayub6238 2 роки тому +2

      true

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому +8

      Wtf is wrong with your school??? Not teaching half the marks? Sue the school bro

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 2 роки тому +77

    Wow for the first time sir is actually premiering at 11 most of u are probs still asleep lol

  • @WhosParx
    @WhosParx 2 роки тому +37

    If anyone thinks they might need this:
    25 Language Devices: Defined & Explained!
    1. Pathetic Fallacy
    Is when the weather or the atmosphere describes the mood.
    For example, when the weather is rainy people are sad and depressed
    2nd example, the dark night could symbolise something supernatural like 3AM Satan etc…
    2. Personification
    Is when a non-human is given human qualities.
    For example, the tree is waving to John as drives away.
    3. Simile
    When you are comparing two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’
    For example, his facial vision looked like a falcon’s eye
    4. Metaphor
    Is when you are comparing two things with is or are
    Example He is an orc
    5. Extended Metaphor
    Pick a metaphor and explain how --- > turn in to an extended metaphor
    Metaphor --- > Life is a rollercoaster. Now turning into extended metaphor add explanation so, Life is a rollercoaster you don’t know when you will be at the top or at the bottom, it will all happen in an instance, at the greatest heights you will be at the greatest heights and at times it will crash, but every day is never the same, just like in a turn in a Rolle coaster is never the same.
    6. Oxymoron
    2 opposite words side-by-side
    Example, the small giant
    7. Juxtaposition
    You explain an oxymoron.
    The small giant tip-toing trying to reach the top shelf, however, his small arms and puny fingers prevented him from grabbing the bar of jam.
    8. Symbolism
    Is when objects represent a meaning.
    For example, moon and the star represent Islam.
    2nd Example, if you get a priest you will think someone died.
    In Macbeth the dagger links to death.
    9. Semantic field
    Is where words are linked to an idea.
    For example, PPE, 2m and Hand Sanitiser, Head of Year link to COVID.
    10. Irony
    Is when events in the text surprises the characters. Something not expected!
    Mr Birling offering a 1000.
    Scrooge changing his nature.
    11. Rhetorical Question
    Question does not require an answer
    12. Hyperbole
    Is when you hype, when over-exaggerating.
    I am going to eat the whole restaurant.
    13. Assonance
    Is the repetition of the vowel sound.
    I am too cool for school. Oooooo
    14. Alliteration
    Words in a row begin with the same letter.
    15. Sibilance
    Is when words in a row have the s letter or the s sound
    Example: the snake was slowly hissing
    16. Euphemism
    Is when you say something in an indirect manner.
    He is not with us anymore.
    17. Emotive Language
    Is when the writer makes the reader feel emotional. By making them angry.
    18. Onomatopoeia
    Words describe the sound
    Boom bang skirr pop
    19. Ruel of 3 / Power of 3 / Triplets
    Words or phrases in a row describe something (3)
    The table is black, hard and wide
    20. Facts/ Stats
    Uses evidence to support their facts.
    50 % of the students prefer using email rather than social media .
    21. Plosive
    Reptation of harsh sound
    Words such as 'P' 'D' 'B'
    22. Zoomorphism
    Is when you give a person animal features.
    Example John barked at me / John shouted at me.
    23. Opinion
    24. Repetition
    Language Device and Structure.
    Is when the writer uses the words repletely to create an effect.
    Where is being repeated and why is that important
    25. Noun, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs
    Structure
    Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc..
    Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’
    Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘
    Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting
    Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’
    New character
    New setting
    Change in tone
    Short sentence - to build up tense
    Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative
    Short /long sentence - may show importance in both
    Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’
    Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending
    Juxtaposition
    Extended metaphor
    Pace
    List
    Pov
    Overall tone
    Chronogical order
    Climax
    Repetition
    Links
    Mood , pathetic fallacy

  • @JJ-cv4fm
    @JJ-cv4fm 2 роки тому +59

    Can't believe i'm on June already. 18 more days gooiiys!!! We can do it! Imagine life after 23rd June...

  • @mc.3103
    @mc.3103 2 роки тому +43

    According to Mr Salles, we don't need to talk about structure and form to get full marks for unseen poetry. He showed in the 2022 sample mark scheme for the top band that it doesn't say anything about language, structure and form like it does for earlier years like 2018 and 2017.

    • @alyshahkinsella
      @alyshahkinsella 2 роки тому

      So will we not get marks for structure and form??

    • @Ahmed-hi8ie
      @Ahmed-hi8ie 2 роки тому +2

      @@alyshahkinsella just watch the mr salles vid

    • @alyshahkinsella
      @alyshahkinsella 2 роки тому +2

      @@Ahmed-hi8ie It doesn't say, he just says that structure and form aren't needed

    • @shooosh8851
      @shooosh8851 2 роки тому

      @@alyshahkinsella i’m so lost now

    • @ck_lemon183
      @ck_lemon183 2 роки тому

      i guess just include form and structure to link it to a language point in a paragraph so that you make sure you have 3 lang paragraphs in case you dont get marks for structure and form but you still have it in there just in case yk

  • @nooriboxing
    @nooriboxing 2 роки тому +5

    I never thought I'd ever be subscribed to an English teachers channel

  • @Lemz2christ
    @Lemz2christ 2 роки тому +3

    Use Wilson aswell! W- What is the poem about? I- Idea L- langauage S- Structure O- Opinion N- Now plan

  • @arnoahmed9269
    @arnoahmed9269 2 роки тому +17

    Sir can you dive into more detail about the different language, structural and forms of the unseen poetries. The ones that we must know.
    I tried to search on youtube but there aren't any good ones.
    If you could do the top 10 or top 5 (type videos) for unseen poetry, it would be very helpful.
    Many thanks

    • @Fatima-gk3yv
      @Fatima-gk3yv 2 роки тому

      yesss and what the common purposes are of those

    • @Countdown420
      @Countdown420 Рік тому

      Cry about it😢, we are on the same boat

  • @Ami-gl9wx
    @Ami-gl9wx 2 роки тому +10

    honestly, i am so scared with english

  • @flako3500
    @flako3500 2 роки тому +3

    Just done the exams and im hella confident with what I wrote thanks bro for these tips

    • @dazbalz
      @dazbalz Рік тому

      what did u get?

  • @JDXtraction
    @JDXtraction 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks for the assistance this is the only subject I'm confident throughout my 5 year secondary school run.

  • @heathersisto1119
    @heathersisto1119 Рік тому +1

    Thank you Mr Everything English ...

  • @siddiqua_x
    @siddiqua_x 2 роки тому

    I came back here just to say thank you so much literally have saved my literature grade it was so helpful I even mentioned frued and his ID your ideas and what you taught helped me so much like I absolutely enjoyed learning about Macbeth with all your videos all of this very appreciated thank you so much

  • @user-qu1lw1sz9z
    @user-qu1lw1sz9z 2 роки тому +3

    Sir you're a legend

  • @itszakw2282
    @itszakw2282 2 роки тому +4

    Extremely Detailed. Fair Play G

  • @Slightly_Bedraggled
    @Slightly_Bedraggled 2 роки тому +9

    Does making reference to the Jacobean era count as context for the Macbeth question?

  • @xxwolf_gamezxx3358
    @xxwolf_gamezxx3358 2 роки тому +5

    Sir could you also talk about the great chain of being and the divine right of kings how god chooses who becomes the next king which in this case is Malcom. We also get hints that Malcom comes from the same generation as King James which could be interesting to talk about if you could please do?

    • @yxm1545
      @yxm1545 2 роки тому +1

      Mr salles has a video on themes where u could find a section on this

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому +1

      Any context point is fine. As long as you can write detail linked to the question.

  • @lesterthe1st635
    @lesterthe1st635 2 роки тому +4

  • @lawrencia5099
    @lawrencia5099 2 роки тому +12

    I’m so worried about Romeo and Juliet

  • @min-og1ft
    @min-og1ft 2 роки тому +9

    I thought they weren't marking us on form and structure in unseen poetry?

    • @nishisharma4096
      @nishisharma4096 2 роки тому

      In Mr Salles' video as well, he said that they are no longer marking us on that apparently

    • @yasinebounou1226
      @yasinebounou1226 2 роки тому +8

      Stop spreading this fake news, you will STILL get marks for commenting and analysing structure and form, but it isn't COMPULSORY For the top band. Listen to yourself it's a POEM you WILL GET MARKS FOR COMMENTING ON Poetic devices and structure, such as free verse , repetition etc.

  • @notme2472
    @notme2472 2 роки тому +3

    where is mr salles??

  • @lesterthe1st635
    @lesterthe1st635 2 роки тому +6

    we all got to get 9, around these parts at least a 9 B)

  • @isaacgreenholt580
    @isaacgreenholt580 2 роки тому

    how much would you be marked down if you named a technique wrong when analysing it in unseen poetry

  • @lauren5745
    @lauren5745 2 роки тому +2

    You saved me thx

  • @DKO2006
    @DKO2006 2 роки тому +2

    i was quite nervous cause i thought he wasnt going to make a lit paper 2 vid as he jumped to lang paper 2 instead

  • @user-xl9rn2ly4p
    @user-xl9rn2ly4p 2 роки тому +4

    can u do one paragraph on the extract and 3 on the whole play?

  • @AlpherixYT
    @AlpherixYT 2 роки тому +1

    Bro who else got the How Shakespeare presents fear in Macbeth because that was such a good question

    • @ilovejesus6740
      @ilovejesus6740 2 роки тому +3

      Such a terrible question 😕

    • @coraz01
      @coraz01 2 роки тому +1

      @@ilovejesus6740 ye

  • @jaredberlin4015
    @jaredberlin4015 2 роки тому +8

    PETAEWIL is a good method for top grades, point, evidence, technique, analysis, effect, wider purpose, another interpretation, link

    • @Yeet-kc2lt
      @Yeet-kc2lt 2 роки тому

      Where do you embed context?

    • @jaredberlin4015
      @jaredberlin4015 2 роки тому

      @@Yeet-kc2lt the W (wider purpose) is the context and can be linked to the effect and message from the playwright

    • @yasinebounou1226
      @yasinebounou1226 2 роки тому +1

      @@jaredberlin4015 Sometimes it can be hard to write about writers intentions and purposes as that usually comes in ur point. I think Pretzel is honestly the best, it allows you to analyse 2 effects which is plenty if u do at least 3 paragraphs with 2 effecys

    • @jaredberlin4015
      @jaredberlin4015 2 роки тому

      @@yasinebounou1226 yes of course everyone is different. Just for me personally petaewil works for me

    • @jaredberlin4015
      @jaredberlin4015 2 роки тому

      @@yasinebounou1226 I prefer to use two quotes in each paragraph that's why I don't use PRTEZEL for literature, I do use it for my language

  • @mariafaisal7670
    @mariafaisal7670 2 роки тому +2

    Could you please also give like 5 minutes for edexcel english literature because in our exam we do not have a text given before a shakespeare question. So how do we structure our essay? Thank you so much in advance. This will be very helpful for students like me who are confused. (*insert heart*)

  • @markpalmer1576
    @markpalmer1576 2 роки тому +1

    Could you do a video on The Merchant of Venice?

  • @stopme1520
    @stopme1520 2 роки тому +1

    how do we link a theme to the pretzel paragraphs in Macbeth including quotes in each paragraphs??

  • @bilkisali9284
    @bilkisali9284 2 роки тому

    Can you pls make a video on paper 2 language exam from question 1 to question 5. Thanks

  • @itsd3br33
    @itsd3br33 2 роки тому

    Thank you sir, may god bless you

  • @Black_VoidXx
    @Black_VoidXx 2 роки тому

    Your amazing! The be English teacher

  • @zeeabdelwahed6121
    @zeeabdelwahed6121 2 роки тому

    Life Saver!!

  • @jlp1379
    @jlp1379 2 роки тому

    I don’t understand what he means by form for the Macbeth part

  • @elvisokorie3189
    @elvisokorie3189 2 роки тому

    I know its a bit late but can you do top 5 quotations for Macbeth characters

  • @dhesiplayz
    @dhesiplayz 2 роки тому

    for the unseen poetry comparison do you need to use terminology?

  • @otty8530
    @otty8530 2 роки тому

    DANKE!

  • @amaara909
    @amaara909 2 роки тому

    How did people find it

  • @alyshahkinsella
    @alyshahkinsella 2 роки тому

    So should we or should we not talk about structure and form??

  • @lumosv1014
    @lumosv1014 2 роки тому +2

    Blank verse: Am I a joke to you?

  • @dailydoseofmemes8203
    @dailydoseofmemes8203 2 роки тому +1

    So we only use 4 quotes the entire essay?

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому

      And embed more for top band

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому

      @@itsme_tara29 embedding isnt worth it as you dont expand on those quotes. Not sure who told you that would help with top bands .

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому

      @@Ascension721 embedding proves points making it sound critical

  • @Holsybobsx
    @Holsybobsx 2 роки тому

    Thank you sm

  • @afsanam187
    @afsanam187 2 роки тому

    Will you be live the day before the exam?

  • @Fatima-gk3yv
    @Fatima-gk3yv 2 роки тому +1

    what is usually the purpose of enjambment? i'm lost on how to analyse that

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому +2

      Drags it on if it's about life its because they believe life drags on and we don't get moments to stop (punctuation)

    • @Fatima-gk3yv
      @Fatima-gk3yv 2 роки тому

      tysm

  • @IishaSDx
    @IishaSDx 2 роки тому

    Thank you

  • @mbplumbing4499
    @mbplumbing4499 2 роки тому +4

    Can someone tell me when the 2nd lit paper is? Is it the Wednesday coming up?

    • @assassinod9462
      @assassinod9462 2 роки тому

      yh

    • @mbplumbing4499
      @mbplumbing4499 2 роки тому

      @@assassinod9462 tnx man was worrying i lost my exam sheet

    • @assassinod9462
      @assassinod9462 2 роки тому

      I could tell u all the exams coming next week if u want well coming for me atleast

    • @mbplumbing4499
      @mbplumbing4499 2 роки тому

      @@assassinod9462 are u yr11? because i am yr10 and i am only doing my lit exams

    • @assassinod9462
      @assassinod9462 2 роки тому

      yh I am in yr 11

  • @nikhilsribaskaran1537
    @nikhilsribaskaran1537 2 роки тому

    can I talk about the same context point but word it differently for patriarchal society (I'm doing R&J)

  • @rengsayeed8530
    @rengsayeed8530 2 роки тому +1

    🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐

  • @zach-xi7dw
    @zach-xi7dw 2 роки тому

    i didnt write about the extract in my macbeth paper can I still get high marks/ grade 8 or 9?

    • @esthermay7066
      @esthermay7066 2 роки тому +1

      I do Romeo and Juliet but I don't think you can get that high of a grade if you didn't write about the extract. I might be wrong of course

  • @fishstring
    @fishstring 2 роки тому

    tysm

  • @revizionz8730
    @revizionz8730 2 роки тому +1

    sir, mr salles has said we wont be marked on structure??

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому

      U will be marked on it but it's not needed for top band

  • @kuchnnaahii9884
    @kuchnnaahii9884 2 роки тому +2

    sorry if you've already said this but approximately how many quotes should you memorise for Shakespeare to get a good grade.

    • @lucydavis9793
      @lucydavis9793 2 роки тому

      Hi, Mr Everything English has a video where he explains 10 quotes that are helpful to memorise for the Macbeth exam. I found it quite useful, I'd recommend it :) I have also heard Mr Salles say to memorise 8 quotes, so I'm sure anywhere between at least 8-10 is fine :)

  • @kizu5451
    @kizu5451 2 роки тому

    how can i analyse form, for example if the poem is a narrative

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому

      Enjombment stanza sizes cesura

  • @heathersisto1119
    @heathersisto1119 Рік тому +1

    It's my Birthday today and I spend part of the busy day with all of my adult twins children plus with every visit not as long as each would prefer but we all say we love you as often as possible togather to each other even when their birthday is all on the same day because they all were born in the same day ; all twelve of the are twins and different in their own ways to be themselves as the twins they arevto eaxhbirhervis always one is one in the same in conversation and everything we do which means when visiting one is visiting all at the same time
    So I won't be always known as the one who spends more time nostky with one twin verses one other or the others
    And they are all teaching me better english too and in their own same classroom too !
    As we always celebrate togatherness side by side inbetween studies too
    I give all my hugs and kisses with what I always say , always and forever my love to all of my twelve adult children plus
    Nickname some say like the book lady in the shoe , love that book I need to read it again it's been so many years since last time read it but not in today class
    As we say our love for each other as always for everyone everyday birthday that is their birthday and mine and including their Birthday to mine...
    🔊🎂🎉❤️💯🤗😘🤓😚😉🌝☺️😎🙂🤫😏😆😀🤭🙂...
    While I study this lesson before going to visit more while study breaks inbetwen and these lessons I learn so much English too
    all love our always and forever love as you for us , we for you with everyone of love fore each other as we usually say to one another always and forever love ...
    Now , I gotta study this lesson with all the lessons I learn
    Thank you with all our love to you and we know you for us , we in class as normal with all our love celebrating each other with our always and forever love...
    As I begin studies , Thank you , Mr English everything as we all always say inbetween sibling Nick names theybhsve for each other !
    A gain always learning with all our love , Thank you for all you do ! ...

  • @looiue548
    @looiue548 2 роки тому

    GREAT VID GL EVERYONE

  • @adamrazak6526
    @adamrazak6526 2 роки тому

    have u done this test yet

  • @noahkubrom592
    @noahkubrom592 2 роки тому

    Do u do OCR

  • @freddiecree9250
    @freddiecree9250 2 роки тому +1

    Hasn’t seen poetry been taken out for aqa

  • @briginshaw1
    @briginshaw1 2 роки тому

    Do you specifically have to mention form or structure to get full marks?

    • @revelry2133
      @revelry2133 2 роки тому +1

      U can still get good marks without it and u can easily talk about foreshadowing when it comes to most quotes in Macbeth

    • @briginshaw1
      @briginshaw1 2 роки тому

      @@revelry2133 so if I didn’t mention it in Jekyll and inspector could I get good/full marks

    • @revelry2133
      @revelry2133 2 роки тому

      @@briginshaw1 defo good

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому

      Nah. Its worth putting in if you can but not at all necessary for marks

  • @ibarbofn8604
    @ibarbofn8604 2 роки тому

    What does pretzel mean again

    • @divineiwuamadi1238
      @divineiwuamadi1238 2 роки тому

      PRTEZEL* means POINT.REFERENCE.TECHNIQUE.EXPLAIN.ZOOM.EFFECT.LINK

  • @144fpskaizy5
    @144fpskaizy5 2 роки тому

    Where did he get this paper from?

  • @theoneandonly9878
    @theoneandonly9878 2 роки тому +1

    In my literature paper 1 i only did 3 big paragraphs, with 1.)Extract 2.) whole text 3.) Whole text. Is it possible to get a 7 with that?

    • @itsme-jb9eb
      @itsme-jb9eb 2 роки тому

      yh defo i do that and haven't got below 24 (mostly i get 25, 26, 27). when i've done 4 paras i have got 27 and 28 a couple of times but i'm not doing that anymore because i just find it too hard to write enough and i know i rush stuff in the exam. i'm aiming for an 8 so hoping quality over quantity

  • @mei.6643
    @mei.6643 2 роки тому +3

    so scared for unseen poetry

    • @IishaSDx
      @IishaSDx 2 роки тому

      Whyy

    • @mei.6643
      @mei.6643 2 роки тому +3

      @@IishaSDx never really done it in school🥲

    • @IishaSDx
      @IishaSDx 2 роки тому +2

      @@mei.6643 same tbh but try and answer it like a normal language analysis question w structure etc it'll help a little bit!

    • @mei.6643
      @mei.6643 2 роки тому +2

      @@IishaSDx ouu okay thanksss!!

  • @br0wn585
    @br0wn585 2 роки тому

    Watching this at 11.30 cos I'm bored af

  • @LeVeMyAkZ
    @LeVeMyAkZ 2 роки тому

    Can someone answer my quesion, so for macbeth you do
    Extract (one point)
    Play(completely different point)
    Times 2

    • @ck_lemon183
      @ck_lemon183 2 роки тому +1

      yh

    • @itsme_tara29
      @itsme_tara29 2 роки тому

      You can do just 1 extract paragraph or one other part of play but u must do atleast one of both

  • @amaara909
    @amaara909 2 роки тому

    How did people find it