HOW TO OUTLINE A STORY? | WRITING TUTORIAL BY ANAKNIRIZAL (Demi)
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- Опубліковано 11 вер 2024
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Ate demi Pano po ba mag lagay Ng plot twist?
Ano din po ate demi Yung kaibahan Ng Nang sa Ng at raw sa daw
Ate Demi, pwede po ba kayo gumawa ng video about using the right words.
Ex: Ani Demi and aniya
sabi ni Demi & saad ni Demi
how to write a prolouge po ateee
Paano po kayo nakahanap ng readers nung nagsisimula pa lamang kayo? Sumali rin po ba kayo sa mga book club dati? Voting club?
Paano po magsulat ng tamang prologue at epilogue? Ang dami ko po kasing nababasa sa WP na yung prologue parang Chapter 1.
Para akong nag te-take ng online class every time na pinapanood ko si ate Demi
aww thanks! :D
X Chan sammeeee dami ko na download haahaha cute ni ate demi
Sameeee nag ta take down notes pa ako palagi! 😂
True! I learned alot from her... ♡
Ako din🤣
Just a Tip regarding Show don't Tell:
Show Emotions
Tell Feelings
Showing isn't always your go to. Sometimes you could easily express feelings by telling them.
Showing is better when you are describing something we cannot see; for example: Sadness, we don't know what sadness looks like. That's when showing really helps.
Telling is okay when you want clarity. "Her eyebrows furrowed in confusion." Creasing of brows doesn't necessarily tell us that the subject is confused therefore stating their confusion will make it easier to understand.
In short, know when to show and when to tell 😇
Yes! Exactly! That is the second thing i learned. This is just a tip i learned from myself. If your planning to.write a story i think its best if you go read stories to inspire you of teach yourself on how to make your story more reflective and dramatic and to make your english more deeper and meaningful.
For me, the hardest is actually starting the story..
Alam niyo yun? Yung alam mo na lahat ng mangyayari pero di mo alam kung paano gagawin/simulan yung Prologue??
Ify HAHAHAHA
pero di naman talaga need ang prologue...according sa ibang authors
Alliah Rubio true! Kaso feeling ko kasi empty yung simula Kaya parang gusto ko lagyan ng 'nakakaakit na simula' para di ma-bored yung readers :)))
SAME!!! NAKAKAIYAK
Ify
I just realized that most writers that are beginners need to go back to english class🤣. Thanks for sharing your tips ate demi😲
Hahahaha true ung tipo ang ganda sa utak ko pero pag nasulat ako sakit sa utak😂
I agree with you.😂
True but for me all you have to do is read lots of stories to make your story more dramatic or reflective and also to improve your english in writing your story.
Lmfao.
Legit HAHAHHA
After watching the vid. I realized that ate Demi is such a blessing! ❤️
I feel yah
Hello ate you know na i watch every single videos you upload for helping other writers to become successful? Tbh po it was a big help talaga. Naka finish ako ng story by your help and 150k views was already such a huge views for me on WATTPAD! Thank you so much talaga ate!
Congrats!!!
What is your username po ate? Gusto ko po sana maread story niyo hihi
Ano po name nyo sa wattpad?
@@notesdz AnakniRizal name niya sa wp! Recommend ko yung The Peculiar's Tale sobrang ganda. Tsaka yung Kahimanawari :)))
congratulations po hehe im an aspiring writer din hehe
My mom thought i was studying and i said "This is more helpful for me more than online classes"
truee
Ate Demi was my favorite author because she helped me alot. Hindi sya yung writer na mayabang and i love you for that. You're the best. Thank you po.
Suggestion: How to make a good conflict?
Kaniya: Bundok
Akin: Talampas na may paminsan-minsang lambak
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Saktong-sakto po ang paggawa niyo ng videooo! Thank You Ate Demiii
ay eto bet ko to. upppp
Same eto din struggle ko ij
nahihirapan ako ditoooooo
Yiit, support ko toh
Up
Ma-i-o-outline ko na rin yung upcoming story ko! Thank you ate demi🥺
walang anuman! best of luck :)
Bakit ganun? Pag-vlogs mo po talaga, hindi ako nabobored. Marami akong natututunan at minsan nag-iiba po yung pananaw ko sa buhay. Thank you ate demi! Labyuuu!
Sa tuwing nada-down ako Kasi diko matapos Ang story ko, palagi akong pumupunta ss channel na to. Thanks to ate Demi!
After watching this video, I just realize na Madami pa akong kailangang malaman para makasulat ng story. Thank you ate Demi!
Another one! Makakatulong talaga 'to sakin super, lalo na't nagsisimula palang akong magsulat ng story ko, thankyouuuu Ate Demiiii🥺❤️
yayy!
Honestly, ito palang yung naapanood kong outline na tagalog. I badly need this one dahil mas nagiging complex yung story kapag wala akong proper outline. TY OTOR!
Basta video ni Ate Demi, diretsong like na.
Nagaganahan ako magsulat
Napapatango at napapa "opo" talaga ako, Miss Demi. Thanks for this, Ate! 💙
Waaah! Magsastart na ako ng outline HAHAHAHAHA. Thank you, Ate Demi!
no problem! :D
sakin po para po ganahan akong gumawa nang story kailangan po maging productive ako, kailangan nasa tabi ko po lahat nang bagay na kailangan ko.
Kailangan nakapaligo na ako, may tea sa tabi ko or may foods and biscuits pero mostly kailangan ko po talaga inspiration. Sa Pinterest and Devianart po ako madalas nakakakuha ng inspiration, titingin po ako nang mga pictures tapos ayun na po.
Pero madalas din po sa nature, minsan iniisip ko may sarili akong treehouse at dun ko po ginagawa yung mga magical books ko, mga spells etc😅 Ayun lang po, share ko lang
Same roon sa dapat nakapaligo na hahaha.
Yung hindi naman ako writer, pero nandito lang talaga 'ko para mapanood si te Demdem 😄 but I'm sure marami na naman akong malalaman at matututunan through te Demdem's vlogs 😍❤️
Since bakasyon ngayon, pinlano kong magfocus sa pagsusulat and take the time to continue my passion. Pero nagkawriter's block ako kaya kailangan ko ng inspiration. Mabuti nalang at nahanp kita dito ate Demi. Ang laking tulong ng mga videos mo, sobrang helpful for aspiring writers like me. Pero napansin parang nagiging habit ko na na manood ng video mo at nagtetake down notes pa ako. Minsan nga akala ni Mama nag summer class ako kasi every day nakagawian ko na, after breakfast diretso na ako sa laptop to learn something new na naman from you. Thanks Teacher Demi haha. Ipasa mo sana ako sa subject na ito.
hi puwede pa-drop po ng username niyo hehe gusto ko po magbasa ng mga bagong stories
me rn: nakahinga ng maluwag kasi kahit papaano pasok naman ang on-going story ko sa 3 ACT STRUCTURE.
Ate demi thank you po ulit sa panibagong kaalaman. Sobrang magagamit ko po yan sa new story ko. Fighting ate!
Nagsisisi po ako kung bakit ngayon ko lang po natagpuan channel niyo, pero thankful na ko ngayon. SALAMAT PO SA KNOWLEDGE!
Sobra sobrang thankyou ate demi! Nag pop up nalg sakin na gsto ko mag sulag tpos pinanood ko na lahat ng writing tips mo po! Thankyou fav author!
Nung nagsisimula po kayo sa Wattpad, paano po kayo nakahanap ng readers? Sumali rin po ba kayo dati sa mga book club? Voting club?
"Let them(readers) discover you"
That is the second thing i learned. This is just a tip i learned from myself. If your planning to.write a story i think its best if you go read stories to inspire you of teach yourself on how to make your story more reflective and dramatic and to make your english more deeper and meaningful.
Dahil po sa mga advice niyo ay mahilig na akong magsulat.. At salamat sa pag inspire saming mga underrated writers...
Honestly, wala akong alam sa wattpad world. sayo ko lang nalaman lahat. matagal na rin akong nagsulat sa wattpad. Medyo marami rin akong realization sa mga lesson videos nyo at iaapply ko sa mga sinusulat ko in the future. God bless po.
One of mah fav writer🥺❤️ iloveyouuuuu
I tried so many times. Always block mental. It's not easier but also exciting. I hope this will help us and pursue in our dreams. #aspiringwriter
Kaya pala ang gaganda ng mga stories mo ate demi. Btw, nabasa ko na ata halos lahat ng stories mo haha. Favorite ko yung Ang Huling Binukot . Kala ko dati boring pero nung binasa ko ang ganda pala.
Ang mostly tinuturo ni Ate Demi, tinuturo sa english class namin ng paulit-ulit AHAHAHAJAHAHAHAHA
Thank you po Miss. Demi. Mas makakapag sulat na ako ng matiwasay.
This helps me alot. Thank you pooo
Ganito pala ang tamang pago-outline ng story. Yung sakin kasi naka-rumble, mula introduction at conflict. Medyo magulo nga po eh, parang nakasulat po kasi yung sakin by facts. But anyway. Thanks po
Wow! Sobrang dami kong natutunan. To be honest super hobby ko talaga ang pagsusulat. And now I realized na hindi nalang siya simpleng hobby lang. Nagsusulat na ako dahil ito ang gusto kong gawin sa buhay ko....
Sa lahat ng nabanggit mo from Act 1 to 3 nagawa ko naman siya.😊.Salamat sobrang laki ng naitulong nito para sa aking baguhan sa mundo ng writing... Godbless.
ANG GALING MO PO ATEEEEEEE. ICHECHECK KO PO TALAGA STORIES MO BUKASSSSSS. 'DI MO 'KO READER HUHU, NAKAKAPAGSISI
Ate Demi! Sana lahat ng authors katulad mo😊 Ang swerte namin at nakilala ka po namin. Stay awesome po! I'm your fan!
Nakita ko na si tropang "Show, Don't Tell", ma frend! 😹
Haha yess di pwede mawala si tropa xD
Matagal nakong naghahanap ng mga gantong uri ng video pero ngayon ko lang naintindihan❤️ Ate Demi is such a blessing✨
You're such my inspiration on doing my works in wattpad. I have now 1.70+K read and that is because u inspired me a lot. Thankyou ate demi ❤
Ni recommended lang saken ito by YT but masaya naman I really love of what she did it really helps for me And to other ppl more power ate!! :D
This video is already approximately 2 years old, but it still helped me organize the story idea that's left unfinished in my notes for months.
Thank you so so so much, ate Demiii!! Love lots
Thank you for this teacher Demi🥰🥰 patuloy parin akong manunuod sa channel mo about writing kahit nakapasa na yung on-going ko na story sa isang platform kahapon,,gusto ko pang madagdagan ang kaalaman ko through writing kaya thank you sa ganitong tutorial 🥰 God bless and more power
HALA GRABE, NGAYON KO LANG NAPANOOD VLOGS MO ATE, UNG SAYONG EXPLANATION PINAKA NAINTINDIHAN KO AND FEELING KO PINAKA MAKAKA TULONG SAKIN SA PAG GAWA KO NG STORY. SBRANG HELPFUL!!! ADD TO HEART!!! 🤧🥺❤️
Thank you!!
Thank you for giving tips on how to outline a story. Difficult part para sa akin ang pag-o-outline. Salamat po, Ate Dems!
Yes nahanap korin ang outline...👍👍
Ate demi is really a big help for some aspiring writers like mee
ang kyut ni ate demi, parang nag-r-report lang sa school, hihihi
Hala hindi pa po ba professional writer yung tawag sayo Ate Demi? Hihi ❤️
The way na mas naiintindihan ko pa yung mga sinasabi ni ate demi, at mas nae-enjoy ko pang makinig sa "lesson" niya and mag "take down" notes kesa sa mga tinuturo ng mga teachers ko😆🤭
Hi ate tagal ko na po pinapanood mga Vlog mo kaya Lalo po akong nai-inspire mag sulat ng kwentoo💖
Outline pala ung solution thank you talaga ate Demi♥️
Dahil sa imagination ko, napasulat ako ngayon ng isang kuwento sa wattpad and ate Demi's tutorial videos are so helpful and useful. Thank you po sa mga advice and tutorials niyo, sobrang laking tulong niyo po!!❤
Good luck sa iyong writing journey!
Thank you po ate demi! Ang dami ko pong natutunan sa inyo! Thank you po! Madami na po akong napanuod na videos nyo na tungkol sa writing skills! At lahat po yun ay nakatulong sakin! Thank you po ulit!
you're welcome!
Thank you so much po! Because of you po i noticed and realized my mistakes! Thanks so much po😭💗
You're welcome 😊
so ayon, rewatching ulit hahahaha pampagana ko 'to e hahaha
Sobrang galing ng explanation ate Demi and it is so helpful.
Nagsisisi talaga ako na sinimulan ko na agad yung story ko na di to napapanuod. Thank you po, ate Demi. This will be very useful in the future. And dahil din po sa writing tips niyo ay naayos ko na yung plots and happenings sa story ko. Hayst, kaya pala lagi ko nakakalimutan dati yung next event kasi di ko tine-take note. Very very thank you po, Ate demiii. Tingin ko mas mabilis ko na yun matatapos dahil sa inyo. ❤
Good luck!
@@TalesofDemi Thank you po! OmO
Gustong gusto ko po yung mga videos nyo po, Ate Demi!😍😍 Ang laking tulong po nito sa mga aspiring writers po, na mga sumusunod sa mga yapak nyo po😍😍. Thank you pooooo!
Buti Nakita ko to. Thank you ate Demi
mabuti meron nito. Nahihrapan talaga ako mag plan. parang online class lang ah haha
Super useful po talaga ng mga wtiting tips videos niya 😭 you're one of my inspiration na po sa pagsusulat. Sana magkaroon na ako ng book mo soon :((
Para akong nasa online class ate demi😍 dami kong natutunan sayo... love you ate demi❤❤
OMG! NOT BRAGGING BUT HALOS LAHAT NG TINURO MO PO AY NA-APPLY KO NA BAGO KO 'TO PINANOOD! I'M SO HAPPY, THANK YOU ATE DEM!
Thank you ate demi! may project kami na write a 10 page story at malaking tulong po talaga yung mga vids nyo lalo po na baguhan lang ako pero because of you, parang gusto ko na din talagang magsulat ng story hehe. It really helps po talagaa. God bless you, ate demi!!!
Naalala ko lang nasa Literature subject to namin hahahaha pero ngayon ko lang mas naintindihan dahil sa'yo ate Demi. Thank you po. :)
Ako na nahihirapan sa paggawa ng Prologue and epilogue, nandito na lahat ang kasagutan. Salamat po, ate demi
I realize that being an english teacher is the best friend of many authors
Takte ang galing! Grabe!!!!!!!😘 Thankyou po sa tutorial niyo 👌
You're welcome!
I'm really thankful that I discovered ate Demi 🖐, new subscriber here... You totally deserve my subscription 💖
I'm inlove at ate demi videos huhuhuh...
Hello ate Demi! thankyou for this sobrang nakakatulong at makabuluhan talaga mga uploads mo! nakakainspire sobra! magsusulat na talaga ako hahaha love you ate💛
Ate subrang thank you poo, na excite ako sa mga Outline na ni share mo kung pano gawin to. Sa Hell University nakita ko yung Three act nayan. So pagkatapus kong basahin yun ate na imagin ko kung pano gawin ito kaya subrang excited ako sa gagawin kupoo salamatt❤️ good bless.
Thank u ate demi ❤ sana talaga mag succsess ako sa gagawin kong story
Thanks for this ate, we actually studied that in English class, but I already forgot it, it's really good thing that you're always there for us ate💙
Im really looking forward sa mga tutorial vids mo ate demi lalo na ngayon na nagistart ako magsulat ng story🙆🏻🙈
Ako lang ba yung nanonood ng mga vlogs about how to write a story instead of 'actually' writing a story, it helps a lot though, I learned a loooot, thank youuu ate demi ❤
You're welcome!
napakahelpful ng mga videos mo ate demi salamat!
Aaaawww, baguhan lang po ako sa channel niyo ate demi kase naligaw ako dito dahil naghahanap po ako ng tips sa pagsusulat at pano mawawala yubg writer's block ko. Thankyou for motivating me po.♡︎
Thanks for watching!
Online class with ate Demi! Hihi really love your videos ate...madami ako natutunan while watching your videos about writing....and now i'm planning to write a story and apply the lessons i learn from you ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Thank you ate Demiiiiiiiiiii~~~
This is very helpful, thanks! I'm actually struggling in my story right now so this helped a lot
Kung ganito lang ang online school namin, hindi na ako mag-demand sa gadgets etc. HAHAHAHA
Edit: Nagsilbi tong motibasyon sakin para ituloy yung mga stories na tinigil ko. Thank youuuuu!!!!
alam mo ate, may narealize ako. Isa rin po akong baguhang writer and ang hindi ko alam ay inaaply ko po sa mga stories ko ang diniscuss niyo sa vid na to kaso hindi ko nga alam at ngayon ko lang narealize. HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA ang gulo po ba? Magulo namn talaga ahahahhhahah, Isang malaking tulong po sa aming mga aspiring writers ang mga vlogs niyo at i hope na magpatuloy lang po kayo sa pag-iinspire at pagse-share ng knowledge sa mga aspiring writers like me. Maraming salamat po!
Ate thank you po sa pagrecommend nito. Kasalukuyan po akong nasa stage na sinasabi nilang writer's block. Three days na po akong bakante sa pagsusulat haysss. Thanks po sa info ❤ ang dami ko na namang natutunan hihi 😊😊😊
You're wlcome!
Thank you for this ate Demi! Will be a big help.😭 I need to go back to the basics ahahaha.
MARAMING SALAMAT PO ATE DEMI ❤️
thanks for this ate demi! i am glad that you didn't mentioned any story bilang basis para hindi ma-spoiled ang readers. lodi!!!!!
You're welcome 😊
@@TalesofDemi (｡♡‿♡｡)
Thank you for teaching us and we have an idea to create a story or help us to pursue our started to making stories, although it's not easy to make. It's an achievement kapag nakatapos ka ng isang story at maiitawag mo na sa sarili na isa ka nang 'Author' or 'Writer'. #aspiringwriter
Kailangan na kailangan ko po 'to,, lalo na para hindi ako mawala sa istorya, thank you po ate demiii 💙
Thank you so much sa videos mo ate Dems!!! Mas naencourage at ginanahan akong isulat ang story ko. Great content po! Dami kong natutunan. Lovelots ate ❤
12:26 Ate demi: Parang Harry Potter 'to ah
Yess HAHAHAHHAA
Ate Demi! Please do an on the spot plotting a story po! ❤️✨🌻
I'll try :D
I love you, Ate Demiiii!!! OMG❤️✨
Thank You Ate Demi!!!❤ Malaki nagigibg tulong ng mga writing tutorial niyo sa pagsusulat ko ng story ko sa wattpad! I am sloly improving because of your videos. Natuto po ako dahil sa mga ganto niyo na vid! More tutorials to come! Please??? ❤😗
Accckkk may bagong video na naman! Rarami na talaga ang matututunan ko! Thank you for this video ate demii!❤🙂
Walang anuman! :D
This was very helpful po ate Demi. Thank you sa tutorial mo
newbie hir....ang galing ng teacher ko...parang nag aaral ako online may papel at ballpen p tlga ako😂😂😂
Thank youu so much! ❤ Grabe dami ko po natutuhan!❤💯
THANK YOUUUU POOO, nakatulong talaga 'to since action ang genre ko tapos ang 'raming twist. Drain utak ko pero thank you sa mga videos mo po Ate, nakakatulong❤️