A Step By Step Guide To Writing A PRTEZEL Paragraph For English Literature

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  • @amaara909
    @amaara909 2 роки тому +490

    In’sha’Allah we all do well💕💕

  • @arsonfly252
    @arsonfly252 2 роки тому +69

    the answer in full:
    Mr Birling in Act One of An Inspector Calls during his conversation with Gerald and Eric, displays patriarchal qualities. He believes that as a rich, capitalist man, he is extremely powerful, if not untouchable. This comes to light when Mr Birling explains how the Titanic is "unsinkable, absolutely unsinkable". The use of symbolism displays the power of Mr Birling, because this ship was no ordinary ship, it symbolised wealth, capitalism and progress; everything which makes Mr Birling powerful. Therefore, it appears that like the ship, Mr Birling also believes, his power can never be touched, can never sink. Furthermore, the repetition of "unsinkable" displays how certain Mr Birling is in his beliefs. He says it twice, almost back-to-back, which signifies a sense of emphasis, for him, this ship represents everything he believes. As a result, Mr Birling makes himself synonymous with the ship. If the ship cannot be defeated, neither can he.

    • @KrisPaterson
      @KrisPaterson 2 роки тому

      How many paragraphs should we do

    • @leonburnside2531
      @leonburnside2531 2 роки тому +1

      @@KrisPaterson 4 min

    • @ayako9649
      @ayako9649 11 місяців тому

      thank you!

    • @user-ie1gu8xw6x
      @user-ie1gu8xw6x 7 місяців тому

    • @Shadowisdonut
      @Shadowisdonut 3 місяці тому +5

      The quote also uses dramatic irony bc the audience knows the titanic sank so it makes mr.Birling look like a idoit

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 2 роки тому +90

    This legend is the main reason why I am gonna smash my literature exam

  • @dantheman6279
    @dantheman6279 2 роки тому +60

    I really wished I found you before language paper 1, you are really useful, thank you.

    • @bethanyadams
      @bethanyadams 2 роки тому +2

      same, been watching no stop for the last 2 days

  • @lloydlovesme7111
    @lloydlovesme7111 2 роки тому +45

    Timestamps for those who want to know how sir writes his paragraphs:
    Point - 2:12
    Reference + Technique + Effect of Technique - 8:15
    Zoom in + Effect of Zoom in + Link back - 15:08

  • @humaidabdul7314
    @humaidabdul7314 2 роки тому +68

    I don’t think he’s going to do Power and Conflict,but he is a great teacher.

    • @shahzarbukhlaw5963
      @shahzarbukhlaw5963 2 роки тому +18

      @Abigail X yh except for some schools cough cough - mine, its soo dumb of them

    • @ajeahsamp9425
      @ajeahsamp9425 2 роки тому +1

      that exam is after the holidays- he'll probably do it then

    • @user-gc6tv1bh1v
      @user-gc6tv1bh1v 2 роки тому +1

      @blue shot not for me I’m doing paper 1 AIC and Romeo and Juliet

    • @amaka.06
      @amaka.06 2 роки тому +2

      Sadly I’m still doing poems I’m doing love and relationships

    • @unicornpet2225
      @unicornpet2225 Рік тому +1

      @@shahzarbukhlaw5963 samee

  • @mahirmahadi5118
    @mahirmahadi5118 2 роки тому +4

    the effect /connection between the titanic and Mr Birling was absolutely Brilliant

  • @safwaanrahman9671
    @safwaanrahman9671 2 роки тому +29

    Thanks sir. I finally regained my knowledge of English lit. I believe that I can finally smash this. As long as i stay positive, which I am now!😄

  • @williamchen1767
    @williamchen1767 Місяць тому

    THis guy is the goat of english gcse thank you so much you are the reason why all of us are doing so well
    You definetly deserve more subs
    keep up the good work
    😁

  • @eesarehman5848
    @eesarehman5848 2 роки тому +22

    Thanks sir! Your tips are so much help! Thanks for this and inshallah we will smash this exam. Peace

  • @JosephSeabourne
    @JosephSeabourne 2 роки тому +8

    This is really helpful, thank you! And oh I miss an inspector calls… my school chose to drop it. I actually understood that text. Now i’ve got to work with bloody jekyll 😭

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 2 роки тому +3

      thats a big L my school dropped jekyll thank goodness cuz that story i dont even knw where i am half the time

    • @bethaniie_
      @bethaniie_ 4 місяці тому +1

      omggg I'd have gone mental, I love inspector calls so much lol

  • @abdikadirali3325
    @abdikadirali3325 2 роки тому +3

    Thank you so much Mr earthing english, you are helpful I wish you all the best my friend.

  • @nathankaiser2511
    @nathankaiser2511 Рік тому +5

    Thank you good teacher, brilliant analysis, with deep understanding Amen ❤❤❤

  • @alemi3d
    @alemi3d 2 роки тому +7

    People, theres something I dont understand: is Literature paper 1 (the one that is tomorrow) going to consist of two essay questions or one. (I am doing An Inspector calls and Macbeth)

    • @amberh5
      @amberh5 2 роки тому +4

      Which exam board do you do?

  • @edanoneill3706
    @edanoneill3706 2 роки тому +16

    Do we only need to mention context and priestleys ideology in a couple of the paragraphs? Because my English teacher says that you should always talk about the context and what priestley believes/thinks in every paragraph

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому +7

      You dont need to include context every paragraph. Just a few times in the entire thing should be adequate (excluding 'sprinkling' AO3 references in, you should do that where possible).

  • @pavnasipudi1777
    @pavnasipudi1777 2 роки тому +1

    mr everything english solves all my life problems

  • @nabiha6738
    @nabiha6738 2 роки тому +2

    youre making so many resources for us honestly tysmmmm

  • @blakelam4251
    @blakelam4251 10 місяців тому +3

    Thank you so much this really helped out!
    I am currently year 10 and I am preparing for my first mock exam.
    This really helped me out as I was clueless about structuring my answers, but this guide me right through it.
    I really hope I can get a 9 on this first mock
    Thank You SOOOOOOOOOOO Much!

  • @aliajmal7638
    @aliajmal7638 2 роки тому +3

    "I feel like SaltBae,"
    man i love this guy

  • @faizan7343
    @faizan7343 Рік тому +2

    Watching this 7 hours b4 my test. dw guys im only lowering the grade boundaries.

  • @AlpherixYT
    @AlpherixYT 2 роки тому +8

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    • @a_fazl113
      @a_fazl113 2 роки тому +7

      No

    • @fatmaasifawan5974
      @fatmaasifawan5974 2 роки тому +1

      Lmao

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      @MI-lo2hj 2 роки тому +1

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      @AlpherixYT 2 роки тому

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      @MI-lo2hj 2 роки тому

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  • @hideakitempest6141
    @hideakitempest6141 2 роки тому +6

    Hey Mr english everything, by using PRTEZEL can I still embed by quote (basically the reference) into my point?

  • @art4artssake352
    @art4artssake352 2 роки тому +1

    Absolutely superb modelling!

  • @adamkenealy2413
    @adamkenealy2413 2 роки тому +23

    Just to let everyone know since 2017 the only characters that haven't come up is the Inspector and Gerald so I would advise you to revise both of them as normally you can pick between 2 questions one is normally a character question and one is usually a theme question.

    • @THENEWFOOTBALLSHOW
      @THENEWFOOTBALLSHOW 2 роки тому +2

      oh damn

    • @adamkenealy2413
      @adamkenealy2413 2 роки тому +1

      @@bibinjoshua5852 no aqa

    • @poppybell9238
      @poppybell9238 2 роки тому

      Lots of people say Gerald was 2021

    • @gcserevision6869
      @gcserevision6869 2 роки тому +2

      @@bibinjoshua5852 for edexcel, eric hasnt come up yet, neither has sheila, but she came up as a joint question with gerald once, so im predicting it is going to be eric.

    • @issysomething1077
      @issysomething1077 2 роки тому

      What exam board? I’m doing Eduqas

  • @asavtripple6
    @asavtripple6 2 роки тому +7

    so does that mean as long as we use structual features, add contex, and have a good point and building this with a prtzel paragraph we can get a grade 9?

    • @JJ-fw7cy
      @JJ-fw7cy 2 роки тому +3

      Essentially 😆😆

    • @jdstop593
      @jdstop593 2 роки тому +2

      A strong pass maybe not a 9

    • @notmoaath
      @notmoaath 2 роки тому +1

      easier said than done pal

    • @unicornpet2225
      @unicornpet2225 Рік тому

      @@jdstop593 so a grade 3-4 then?

    • @jdstop593
      @jdstop593 Рік тому +1

      @@unicornpet2225 yeah I used this method in my English and got a 5 I was predicted A 1 too

  • @OrangeDude7
    @OrangeDude7 2 роки тому +5

    when you say you show the examiner your knowledge of the play as you state 'in act 1' , could that be replaced without the act and scene number like Before the inspector arrives, Mr Birling ... or At the start of the play, Mr Birling ...

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому +1

      You could do that, but it won't be as concise and you may not get as many AO1 marks

    • @Dee-ux4vq
      @Dee-ux4vq 2 роки тому

      @@Ascension721 so how would I make it concise whilst showing I know the text and order of the text?

  • @ibtesham2559
    @ibtesham2559 2 роки тому +5

    When you write a paragraph from the given extract, do you have to also write where the part you are talking about is from?

    • @rajeemmiah8397
      @rajeemmiah8397 2 роки тому +1

      Check out here 4:34

    • @ibtesham2559
      @ibtesham2559 2 роки тому

      @@rajeemmiah8397 Thanks

    • @kay-mk2sl
      @kay-mk2sl 2 роки тому +1

      they will normally tell you where the extract is from

    • @fzn7887
      @fzn7887 2 роки тому +1

      its best if u can yes

  • @salmakadous8204
    @salmakadous8204 2 роки тому

    He is a life saver tbh!

  • @dukr22
    @dukr22 2 роки тому +2

    Today I'm have my English literature exam and I hope everyone is doing well. I'm confident about this. We can do this.

  • @maxs3785
    @maxs3785 2 роки тому +4

    If you could do a video on power and conflict that would be nice

  • @lawrencia5099
    @lawrencia5099 2 роки тому +17

    Timing is the only issue for me

    • @aliyahelahi7885
      @aliyahelahi7885 2 роки тому +4

      omg same!! I take so long . It’s mainly for subjects like history, English and re

    • @cloydxx
      @cloydxx 2 роки тому

      Then ask the teacher for extra time? Personally when I was in school the teachers knew in English exams I would write a lot if am given more time and so I had extra time, I still do now in college

    • @teamghozts2963
      @teamghozts2963 2 роки тому

      you Don't need medical proof

  • @ayeshahaque8155
    @ayeshahaque8155 2 роки тому

    Mr Everything English the 🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐

  • @mkdonalds7824
    @mkdonalds7824 3 місяці тому +1

    Jazakallah khair

  • @nomsadube3232
    @nomsadube3232 Рік тому

    Wow you are such an eye opener ....thank you

  • @jamiewalker5272
    @jamiewalker5272 2 роки тому +1

    Mreverythingenglish 🐐🐐

  • @user-wf6iy5wc1w
    @user-wf6iy5wc1w 3 місяці тому +1

    doesnt pearson recoomend pee?..cause in da txt book itself...but pretzel works for lit further

  • @ehsanahmad6147
    @ehsanahmad6147 2 роки тому +2

    can you please do dr Jekyll and Hyde and Lord of the flies

  • @henrybright6894
    @henrybright6894 2 роки тому +2

    Can someone explain to me how to write a perfect introduction? As I can't use PRTEZEL for it.

    • @unknownperson4335
      @unknownperson4335 2 роки тому +1

      I dont know how to write a perfect introduction but all you have to do is summarise your main points into kinda one whole. So that everytime u write a new paragraph it helps you link back to your main original point and acts as a guide so you don't start talking about random things and itt ensures that all your points in your paragraphs are interlinked. But it only needs to be 2-3 sentences and you don't even need to write one necessarily but it can help you :)

  • @lisicblondon
    @lisicblondon Рік тому +1

    Hi Mr , can you please teacher more about how We write effects?

  • @cw4490
    @cw4490 2 роки тому +1

    You look fit in your 2019 videos

  • @SabaAsad
    @SabaAsad Рік тому +1

    Can we use this technique in paper 1 question 2,3&4???? I mean in all?

  • @alessiaazzopardi2043
    @alessiaazzopardi2043 2 роки тому +1

    Hi sir, would you still talk about technique and explain it in an evaluation question, or would you do something different?

  • @spiced1296
    @spiced1296 2 роки тому +2

    Can you use this for power and conflict?

  • @jevyeboi2546
    @jevyeboi2546 Рік тому

    ma'shallah bruva 💪

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 3 місяці тому

    10:00 effect =describe technique

  • @ttv_totemic9605
    @ttv_totemic9605 2 роки тому +1

    thank you for everything

  • @Ahmed22212
    @Ahmed22212 Рік тому

    thank you for this please make more video on Macbeth and Christmas Carrol

  • @UnbeatenPlayzMinecraftandmore
    @UnbeatenPlayzMinecraftandmore 2 роки тому +2

    Thank you!!

  • @FC-kl2pm
    @FC-kl2pm 2 роки тому

    Your point you make about making a pointing in the paragraph, can we apply this to English language?

  • @a2j951
    @a2j951 2 роки тому +1

    how many quotes should we aim for in a essay?

  • @sanjayneminathan8433
    @sanjayneminathan8433 2 роки тому +1

    Love your vidoes sir , also can u use this for OCR

  • @lilyeveritt9798
    @lilyeveritt9798 2 роки тому +1

    love u king

  • @sahil_edits0
    @sahil_edits0 3 місяці тому

    thank you very much

  • @contrate3104
    @contrate3104 2 роки тому +1

    Please do power and conflict :)

  • @hb_gamer0759
    @hb_gamer0759 2 роки тому

    Should this structure be used the same for Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde paragraphs? As those questions are more "how far do you agree", so would this structure still be applicable?

    • @hb_gamer0759
      @hb_gamer0759 2 роки тому

      and would this work for power and conflict poetry too?

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 2 роки тому

      @@hb_gamer0759 i think its essentially the same thing. you agree and then make your point and develop it using pretzel but im not too sure

  • @ultimaterevision437
    @ultimaterevision437 2 роки тому +1

    SIR PLEASE PREDICT AN INSPECTOR CALLS AND CHRISTMAS CAROL!!!???? PLEASE

  • @vekyyshi
    @vekyyshi 2 роки тому

    8:02 LOL, thank you for this video sir

  • @jjackson2983
    @jjackson2983 2 роки тому +1

    Sir could you please do important Lord of the Flies quotes.

  • @ok3503
    @ok3503 2 роки тому +2

    what bout the context ?

    • @bobstar2176
      @bobstar2176 2 роки тому

      He talked about the titanic being a powerful wealthy ship at the time

  • @assassinod9462
    @assassinod9462 2 роки тому +3

    Forgot to mention context lol

    • @joshquinn4964
      @joshquinn4964 2 роки тому

      The context was that the Titanic was seen as powerful and a ship for the wealthy.

    • @Ascension721
      @Ascension721 2 роки тому

      Titanic was the context.

    • @assassinod9462
      @assassinod9462 2 роки тому

      oh yh thx

  • @isaacng4734
    @isaacng4734 2 роки тому

    Sir's the goat

  • @ItzSlashyyy
    @ItzSlashyyy 2 роки тому +1

    how do i revise poetry?

  • @geekygirl0333
    @geekygirl0333 2 роки тому +1

    How many of these paragraphs would be needed for a grade 9 on AQA? Thanks!!

    • @p2trappy990
      @p2trappy990 2 роки тому +3

      3

    • @Yasin_2312
      @Yasin_2312 2 роки тому +4

      I advise, that you do 2 para for the Extract you’ll be given, then 3 para on this

  • @broccoli513
    @broccoli513 2 роки тому +1

    i feel like a PRTEZEL 'paragraph' will take up a whole page tho, like it defo wont be paragraph size, is that allowed?...to not write in paragraphs?

    • @abdirahmaanibrahim869
      @abdirahmaanibrahim869 2 роки тому

      the paragraphs can be as long as you want im pretty sure however you must be aware of timing

  • @Countdown420
    @Countdown420 2 роки тому +2

    Thx

  • @oluwatominiogunnorin5899
    @oluwatominiogunnorin5899 2 роки тому +1

    Can you please do this for A Christmas carol in your livestream?

  • @dubzy8195
    @dubzy8195 2 роки тому

    Sir what about the structure for english lit is it the same do you do PRTEZEL.

  • @shirshir516
    @shirshir516 Рік тому

    Hi Mr. Everything English could you please put some context videos on UA-cam is really difficult to understand please sir

  • @shakerkdkdkd12
    @shakerkdkdkd12 2 роки тому +1

    Can I use this for Edexcel

  • @lcole55
    @lcole55 2 роки тому

    How many lines for this prtzel para, btw your great

  • @etiosaoviawe8306
    @etiosaoviawe8306 2 роки тому

    Good evening Mr Everything, do I need to write a thesis statement for eng literature.

  • @javed8778
    @javed8778 2 роки тому +2

    damn bro we have like 50 minutes and a prtezel takes like more than 10 mins i feel like ima flop dis

  • @midknight365
    @midknight365 2 роки тому

    man said PRTEZEL is the structure I created lol its been used before this dude was even born i think haha

  • @corners1733
    @corners1733 Рік тому

    Nice

  • @bigchunguscricket4526
    @bigchunguscricket4526 2 роки тому

    Can you maybe give advice for the OCR exam

  • @Damianmackin
    @Damianmackin 2 роки тому +1

    sp mistake 3:51 character

  • @undisputedstreamer8429
    @undisputedstreamer8429 2 роки тому +4

    Where is the priest gang?
    Comment below.

  • @revizionz8730
    @revizionz8730 2 роки тому

    can you please do a structure paragraph for us
    this would e very helpful

  • @knowntoache
    @knowntoache 2 роки тому +2

    Point
    Reference
    Technique
    Explain
    Zoom in
    Explain
    Link !

  • @papagunse9852
    @papagunse9852 7 місяців тому

    could this structure be used for an eduqas 40 marker?

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 3 місяці тому

    zoom in to a different technique

  • @fatmaasifawan5974
    @fatmaasifawan5974 2 роки тому +1

    Can you do of mice and men

  • @wilson4198
    @wilson4198 2 роки тому

    sir, don't you need tow quotes per paragraph???

  • @erkanfnr
    @erkanfnr 2 роки тому +1

    how many prtezels? 3 or 4

    • @ese9010
      @ese9010 2 роки тому

      He said you get 45 mins of writing and 10 min per paragraph, so 4

  • @NitinSingh-zm4lj
    @NitinSingh-zm4lj 2 роки тому

    Thanks

  • @nigelsanthosh4084
    @nigelsanthosh4084 2 роки тому

    what about a thesis statement

  • @Gu66y453
    @Gu66y453 2 роки тому

    can it be used for edexel

  • @abdinboni1797
    @abdinboni1797 2 роки тому

    chheers sir

  • @turanjakhobi3417
    @turanjakhobi3417 2 роки тому

    is paper 1 inspector calls and a christmas carol?

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 3 місяці тому

    2:00

  • @abdulqayum2635
    @abdulqayum2635 2 роки тому +1

    sir ur best friends with Mr bruff init or is it bigman salles

    • @shooosh8851
      @shooosh8851 2 роки тому +1

      haha

    • @Patrick-ds8od
      @Patrick-ds8od 2 роки тому

      Salles > bruff

    • @shooosh8851
      @shooosh8851 2 роки тому +1

      @@Patrick-ds8od no it’s everything english, mr bluff> mr salles

    • @abdulqayum2635
      @abdulqayum2635 2 роки тому

      @@shooosh8851 yhh but mr everything english .. damnnn woo.. lmaoo

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 3 місяці тому

    a point ending

  • @AkxashPlayz
    @AkxashPlayz 2 роки тому

    What about the audience

  • @Extremedulla
    @Extremedulla 10 місяців тому

    Got mocks todayyy😅😅

  • @anastasiamwansa3981
    @anastasiamwansa3981 Рік тому

    Can this be used for poetry?

  • @yaridiqbal2193
    @yaridiqbal2193 2 роки тому

    7:59 I feel like salt bay😅

  • @fatzzzx792
    @fatzzzx792 Рік тому

    mocks tomorrow 💀💀

  • @Sean-rawlins
    @Sean-rawlins 3 місяці тому

    describe zoom

  • @MREVERYTHINGEXPERIMENTS
    @MREVERYTHINGEXPERIMENTS 2 роки тому

    #MREVERYTHINGEXPERIMENTS

  • @lokielegend715
    @lokielegend715 2 роки тому

    @ Marlone New