This video was such a banger. What I found interesting is placing your rhymes on beat at the right time so it flows smoothly and hits hard more. For me personally, I write the lyrics first and when I rap them on a beat, it mostly fits perfectly when it comes to making my songs.
Thanks for all these informations. The 3rd part was interesting for me, since it seems to me it's difficult to be balanced between repetition and variations. I was wondering if you think that writing a flow / a rythm on paper with your greed before writing the lyrics could help improve the flow ? Or maybe scatting without writing the rythm is more effective ?
You nailed it! Good catch! I made it so I could breakdown some of his raps from that song without getting stuck by copyright 😂. Here's the video 👉ua-cam.com/video/Bwny_6B9grU/v-deo.htmlsi=jGJCuqdUl-Ox_FCG ✌😎 - Cole Mize
I'm the same way Nathan. I don't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming typically. The solution is in this video when I say not to let rhymes take top priority. Make sure your rhymes are supporting the direction that you're trying to take your message. This means that you may have to switch a rhyme scheme sooner that you wanted such as 2 bars instead of a 4 bar rhyme scheme. This also my mean that you need to juggle more rhyme at once instead of only rhyming with your end rhyme which will give you more rhyming potential and you will be less boxed lyrically which means your message is much less likely to get compromised. I hope that helps ✌😎 - Cole Mize
here's something quick I came up with.... (This has nothing to do with Cole, but a quick glance over would be appreciated 😅) "Heartless Harlot" by Demigod Duncan (165-ish bpm metal/rap beat, motivational instrumental type of thing) "you're nothing to me." Each time uttered, instant frostbite. Steel-toed boots took flight, aimed with Ferocious Spite! Struck my Skull with HATE, laying there Petrified! The Qualms rarely quelled, my thoughts tranquilized! Finger in my face, fury-fueled Yells, I Felt Fossilized! Self-preservation compromised, the Fairytale Fantasy Fails! Downshifted and derailed. soul sidestepped, and straight up Impaled! Now I'm sitting paralyzed... clipping my nails... ...'Til my fingers bleed... .............wishing to regroup. I was drained of everything, then given the boot. I was dismantled and duped... nothing makes sense! My neurotransmitters spent, Stuck in a Loop! Forced to consider, self love or self-respect. Faceless mirrors, make me dumbfounded and bitter! Absolute soul-splitter. One-sided arguments, were all canon events! not speaking up, my biggest regret. Now I sit and reflect, trying not to project, none of my needs were met! But these unknown emotions are quicker! Vehement voice full of vigor, trying to traverse all these triggers... of the nonstop neglect! Anxiety and anger, anytime anyone tries approaching me. 'Cause it wasn't just Dessy, who unfortunately, slowly and subtly Verbally BEAT the Bubbly Personality Out of ME! ...I crave to express my energetic ADHD, But now I'm just a shell, of who I used to be. (I like alliteration 😅... if you couldn't tell lol)
@@ColeMizeStudios I am making a song, just to force you to have to try to get the entendre and rhymes. I Really Really tried for this. I think you might like it. 0 cuss words. I'm not putting any cuss words in my music anymore, but big reason is, so I don't rely on them to make corny schemes. Take them out the equation, haha. Much Love and Respect
Hey cole here this is a song that I rewrite verse: i know that I'm a nameless compared to these mance, in the hip-hop scene, i gonna be cautious cus my pages will lead into a madness, i can be careless with my choices, i'm a genius like Kendrick Lamar but i'm movin like chessboard, but the midnight viewin' board to seein' the pieces that can be poisonous, against the ruthless "
Hey Junior, the way that you structured your lyrics in the comments makes it tricky for me to guess how you structured your bars. Can you respond with your lyrics again so that each line are the lyrics that go into each bar? for example I read you're lyrics carefully, I'm talking line upon line/ But due to it's lack of structure, I couldn't tell how you were tryin' to rhyme/
@@ColeMizeStudios Okay verse: i know that I'm a nameless compared to these mance, / In the hip-hop scene, / I gonna be cautious cus my pages will lead into a madness,/ i can be careless with my choices, / i'm a genius like Kendrick Lamar but i'm movin like chessboard, / but the midnight viewin' board to see the pieces that can be poisonous, /against the ruthless
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This video was such a banger. What I found interesting is placing your rhymes on beat at the right time so it flows smoothly and hits hard more. For me personally, I write the lyrics first and when I rap them on a beat, it mostly fits perfectly when it comes to making my songs.
Brother you are awesome... You are teaching exactly that what we want
Banger video Cole! You keep out doing yourself!
Always sharing great stuff. Thanks man. Peace ✌️
That outro beat go crazy
Thanks for all these informations. The 3rd part was interesting for me, since it seems to me it's difficult to be balanced between repetition and variations. I was wondering if you think that writing a flow / a rythm on paper with your greed before writing the lyrics could help improve the flow ? Or maybe scatting without writing the rythm is more effective ?
Always a good day when Master Cole drops some knowledge! Thank you!
Thanks MG! I appreciate the support bro! Thank you as well! 🙏 ✌😎 - Cole Mize
as always , helpfull😊😊
My pleasure! I'm glad his was helpful! ✌😎 - Cole Mize
Can you do a video about melodic flow or melody in general?
How come I didn't see this before 😮??!!
I'm not sure, did it not show up in your feed or something?
5:45 EMINEM LOL
NAILED IT! 😂✌😎 - Cole Mize
Did you base your beat off of “all girls are the same” by juice?
You nailed it! Good catch! I made it so I could breakdown some of his raps from that song without getting stuck by copyright 😂. Here's the video 👉ua-cam.com/video/Bwny_6B9grU/v-deo.htmlsi=jGJCuqdUl-Ox_FCG ✌😎 - Cole Mize
Thatz em lol
Sir lots of love for you from India 🇮🇳 because I learned lots of skills from your videos. 🫶
I'm really happy to hear that! Thanks for rockin' with me! Much love to India from The States! ✌😎 - Cole Mize
@ means a lot sir. ♥️
These north Indians are everywhere
I don’t mind using rhyme schemes but if the meaning gets lost it annoys me and puts me off. So what’s a solution for this Cole?
I'm the same way Nathan. I don't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming typically. The solution is in this video when I say not to let rhymes take top priority. Make sure your rhymes are supporting the direction that you're trying to take your message. This means that you may have to switch a rhyme scheme sooner that you wanted such as 2 bars instead of a 4 bar rhyme scheme. This also my mean that you need to juggle more rhyme at once instead of only rhyming with your end rhyme which will give you more rhyming potential and you will be less boxed lyrically which means your message is much less likely to get compromised. I hope that helps ✌😎 - Cole Mize
@@ColeMizeStudios nice one appreciate it & thanks getting back to me. Keep up the good work. 🫡👊🏾
💎💎💎
🙏 ✌😎 - Cole Mize
Can’t download the bar sheets bro
Copy and paste the link to them and I'll check it out
here's something quick I came up with....
(This has nothing to do with Cole, but a quick glance over would be appreciated 😅)
"Heartless Harlot" by Demigod Duncan (165-ish bpm metal/rap beat, motivational instrumental type of thing)
"you're nothing to me."
Each time uttered, instant frostbite.
Steel-toed boots took flight, aimed with Ferocious Spite!
Struck my Skull with HATE, laying there Petrified!
The Qualms rarely quelled, my thoughts tranquilized!
Finger in my face, fury-fueled Yells, I Felt Fossilized!
Self-preservation compromised,
the Fairytale Fantasy Fails! Downshifted and derailed.
soul sidestepped, and straight up Impaled!
Now I'm sitting paralyzed...
clipping my nails...
...'Til my fingers bleed...
.............wishing to regroup.
I was drained of everything, then given the boot.
I was dismantled and duped... nothing makes sense!
My neurotransmitters spent, Stuck in a Loop!
Forced to consider, self love or self-respect.
Faceless mirrors, make me dumbfounded and bitter!
Absolute soul-splitter.
One-sided arguments, were all canon events!
not speaking up, my biggest regret.
Now I sit and reflect, trying not to project,
none of my needs were met!
But these unknown emotions are quicker!
Vehement voice full of vigor,
trying to traverse all these triggers... of the nonstop neglect!
Anxiety and anger, anytime anyone tries approaching me.
'Cause it wasn't just Dessy, who unfortunately, slowly and subtly
Verbally BEAT the Bubbly Personality Out of ME!
...I crave to express my energetic ADHD,
But now I'm just a shell, of who I used to be.
(I like alliteration 😅... if you couldn't tell lol)
❤❤
🙏👊
@@ColeMizeStudios I am making a song, just to force you to have to try to get the entendre and rhymes. I Really Really tried for this. I think you might like it. 0 cuss words. I'm not putting any cuss words in my music anymore, but big reason is, so I don't rely on them to make corny schemes. Take them out the equation, haha.
Much Love and Respect
Hey cole here this is a song that I rewrite verse: i know that I'm a nameless compared to these mance, in the hip-hop scene, i gonna be cautious cus my pages will lead into a madness, i can be careless with my choices, i'm a genius like Kendrick Lamar but i'm movin like chessboard, but the midnight viewin' board to seein' the pieces that can be poisonous, against the ruthless "
It's cool. It just makes no sense cause the flow you chose. Try not being so lyrical.
Hey Junior, the way that you structured your lyrics in the comments makes it tricky for me to guess how you structured your bars. Can you respond with your lyrics again so that each line are the lyrics that go into each bar? for example
I read you're lyrics carefully, I'm talking line upon line/
But due to it's lack of structure, I couldn't tell how you were tryin' to rhyme/
@@ColeMizeStudios Okay verse: i know that I'm a nameless compared to these mance, /
In the hip-hop scene, /
I gonna be cautious cus my pages will lead into a madness,/
i can be careless with my choices,
/ i'm a genius like Kendrick Lamar but i'm movin like chessboard,
/ but the midnight viewin' board to see the pieces that can be poisonous,
/against the ruthless
Eminem
Nailed it! Great catch Warren! ✌😎 - Cole Mize
I would love to rate my my lyrics man
Thanks! Check our my music review service 👉 colemizestudios.com/music-reviews ✌😎 - Cole Mize
Always sharing great stuff. Thanks man. Peace ✌️
My pleasure! Thanks for rockin' with me! Much respect! ✌😎 - Cole Mize