The only constructive criticism is perhaps have the protagonist sand outside for a bit longer before encountering the flood to further build up the atmosphere that part of the story was a bit rushed in my opinion
You have a serious talent for story telling my dude. Your what ifs are what brought be to your channel, but these original stories are just as fantastic.
I really loved this. The tension you built was immaculate. One peice of criticism I can provide is I believe ONI is commonly pronounced like the mythical creature (oh-knee) in the Halo universe. It wasn't a huge issue, I'm sure people say it that way in universe, but it stuck out to me. Keep up the great work, this was a lot of fun to listen to.
Shit bro, I loved it, that long introduction helped immensly to build a lot of tention towards the climax, and the way you narrated it was perfect. Sick is all I can tell.
For something you say is a little out of your depth I think you did pretty damn good. My only criticism (which is really just a personal gripe) Is I prefer fan-made stories to be fitted into the actual canon timeline, it makes it more enjoyable to me as it in a way adds to the lore. As we know only one Infested Covenant Cruiser showed up at earth, and Hawaii and most of the world were spared. However I think as a "what-if" scenario this is incredibly reasonable, the flood could've sent any number of ships elsewhere on the planet. Good work! One last thing I wanted to add: I think it would be an awesome addition to add an audio clip to back up select lines. For example when the Initial screech goes off to signal the flood attacking, the violence occurring outside, and the protagonist's co-worker getting infected, etc. All of the audio could be easily sourced from the games.
This is great. Just like all of your other works, aside from small things, there's really nothing wrong with what you have, still waiting on Rookie as a Spartan-IV, though.
The Great Schism would have started Much Sooner. The Only Reason it had not begun earlier was due to Truth, Mercy, and Regret grtting ahold of the Information and Sanitizing it before the Elites saw it. The Elites on such a Ship would have known the Significance of their Discovery, and would have figured out what the Raw Data had meant due to their having Significantly Better Training than the Jackals in the Storyline had. Truth, Mercy, and Regret were Terrified of any Knowledge Elites ever gaining access to the Unsanitized Version of the Luminary Readings, as it would Shatter the Facade of the Covenant that Cloister had so carefully built over the Millennia it had existed. It would also have likely led tk the Elites gaining access to Information that led them Straight to Cloister Itself, ending the Prophets' Multi-millenial Scheme to wipe out the Galaxy so they could take it over. Some factions among the Elites would have certainly Helped Humanity from Early in the War, giving us the Technology and/or Knowledge to Fight Back Effectively and Defeat the Covenant. It is even possible Atriox could have helped us if it had served his interests, but That would almost Certainly gone Terribly Wrong at some point when we were no longer useful to him, though it might have made his Banished easier to beat (we would have known Far More about him, his Unique Technologies etc.) In the End, it is truly up to whomever makes the Video how it goes. Reclaimer Gaming and Installation 00 are the only ones who could do this "What If" any Justice anyways, so we'll only know if one of them does so.
Ready to hear this but dude I want you to know that to may not always be around to support you but I want you to know I believe in you and your channel dude you can make there dude I'm praying for you and your success dude. You got this.
Perfect timing this for recommendated after Halloween I still think with the flood Spartans now canon in infinite I worry one day in real life the first planet to find real “aliens” will be the flood destroyer and hunger of worlds
"big aligator guys" I love this line purely because why would any of humanity other than those in the UNSC know what an Elite is nevermind knowing them as Sangheili.
The only constructive criticism is perhaps have the protagonist sand outside for a bit longer before encountering the flood to further build up the atmosphere that part of the story was a bit rushed in my opinion
Best Halo creepy pasta i've heard in a long while, voice acting would be nice. Other than that absolute perfection
You have a serious talent for story telling my dude. Your what ifs are what brought be to your channel, but these original stories are just as fantastic.
That was a great story in my opinion. You show how scary the flood can be if we were to encounter one in real life. Can’t wait for more vids like this
I really loved this. The tension you built was immaculate.
One peice of criticism I can provide is I believe ONI is commonly pronounced like the mythical creature (oh-knee) in the Halo universe. It wasn't a huge issue, I'm sure people say it that way in universe, but it stuck out to me.
Keep up the great work, this was a lot of fun to listen to.
Shit bro, I loved it, that long introduction helped immensly to build a lot of tention towards the climax, and the way you narrated it was perfect. Sick is all I can tell.
Human-forerunner tech interaction without the covenant, in earth, makes halo more mysterious and interesting.
Well, surely an underrated story
It was fascinating and kept me tuned until the end
You have done a pretty good job, mate👍
Awesome video. Keep up the great work, Reclaimer.
You did great, you should make more on Halloween times!
Welcome back my Brother I hope the Halloween spoils were great and the Bussy was fine!!!!!
Thank for the Video:)
26:27 WHY'D YOU SHOOT THE ELTITE BRO
This just made my evening very entertaining. Well done man, keep up the awesome work
holy hell… this was, beautiful. I’ll be honest it just was, the inclusion of BB and the name drop of Roland, just wow… amazing work, beautiful
We've been blessed yet again!
You should make a version of this that can be continued and make a series of this flood horror
That storytelling... Another me? Another of humanities monsters... Another child turned weapon, broke free of its masters chains?
Another... Spartan?
For something you say is a little out of your depth I think you did pretty damn good. My only criticism (which is really just a personal gripe) Is I prefer fan-made stories to be fitted into the actual canon timeline, it makes it more enjoyable to me as it in a way adds to the lore. As we know only one Infested Covenant Cruiser showed up at earth, and Hawaii and most of the world were spared. However I think as a "what-if" scenario this is incredibly reasonable, the flood could've sent any number of ships elsewhere on the planet. Good work!
One last thing I wanted to add: I think it would be an awesome addition to add an audio clip to back up select lines. For example when the Initial screech goes off to signal the flood attacking, the violence occurring outside, and the protagonist's co-worker getting infected, etc. All of the audio could be easily sourced from the games.
Gotta enjoy the Halo CE library suite playing throughout the video it really fits with the Flood.
This is great. Just like all of your other works, aside from small things, there's really nothing wrong with what you have, still waiting on Rookie as a Spartan-IV, though.
Dang…. A Roland origin story
Interesting what if idea. But what if it was an elite exploration ship that discovered humanity?
The Great Schism would have started Much Sooner. The Only Reason it had not begun earlier was due to Truth, Mercy, and Regret grtting ahold of the Information and Sanitizing it before the Elites saw it. The Elites on such a Ship would have known the Significance of their Discovery, and would have figured out what the Raw Data had meant due to their having Significantly Better Training than the Jackals in the Storyline had. Truth, Mercy, and Regret were Terrified of any Knowledge Elites ever gaining access to the Unsanitized Version of the Luminary Readings, as it would Shatter the Facade of the Covenant that Cloister had so carefully built over the Millennia it had existed. It would also have likely led tk the Elites gaining access to Information that led them Straight to Cloister Itself, ending the Prophets' Multi-millenial Scheme to wipe out the Galaxy so they could take it over. Some factions among the Elites would have certainly Helped Humanity from Early in the War, giving us the Technology and/or Knowledge to Fight Back Effectively and Defeat the Covenant. It is even possible Atriox could have helped us if it had served his interests, but That would almost Certainly gone Terribly Wrong at some point when we were no longer useful to him, though it might have made his Banished easier to beat (we would have known Far More about him, his Unique Technologies etc.)
In the End, it is truly up to whomever makes the Video how it goes. Reclaimer Gaming and Installation 00 are the only ones who could do this "What If" any Justice anyways, so we'll only know if one of them does so.
Another amazing video, keep up the good work man.
lol a tank pure form in the thumbnail
Here's to hoping the flood return in halo infinite
According to halo lore there was no flood infection in Hawaii only East Africa as far as Earth goes.
I know I said this already but
Reclaimer Gamer if you're reading this you are still forgiven for the long absence👍
Bro just made my day interesting
I need you to apply as a writter for 343 please .
Maybe one day
It sounds like he actually appreciates Halo so they wouldn't hire him
This was really bone chilling story I’ve ever heard all year and plus I’m also in Hawaii which got me to have nightmares but awesome story
What is the background music in the beginning, its so good!
Ready to hear this but dude I want you to know that to may not always be around to support you but I want you to know I believe in you and your channel dude you can make there dude I'm praying for you and your success dude. You got this.
Appreciated my man. much love
“Oh-In-Eye”
Wow this was super well made watched the entire video and I was so entertained 🤫
Either way the protagonist was gonna have his mind messed with. ONI is basically the flood
Perfect timing this for recommendated after Halloween I still think with the flood Spartans now canon in infinite I worry one day in real life the first planet to find real “aliens” will be the flood destroyer and hunger of worlds
I would like to see a part 2
When is what if Jorge Part 3 coming out
I will be writing this on the close future
i just found this and love it
halo creepypastas are so god damn rare
how could he not be infected by the spore that is the green fog tho? XD
Should start charging for using Bikes Lanes.
More halo creepy pastas please
This is cool
"big aligator guys" I love this line purely because why would any of humanity other than those in the UNSC know what an Elite is nevermind knowing them as Sangheili.
Nice !
That was good dude
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