I found a diary from my future self

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  • Опубліковано 30 вер 2024
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 157

  • @Nanuks_Fun_Zone
    @Nanuks_Fun_Zone 3 місяці тому +87

    so the only thing that survived the fire was this dudes Fallout Fanfiction?

  • @panserbjrn4804
    @panserbjrn4804 3 місяці тому +120

    To be honest, not a great story. I don’t know why they introduced the time-travelly diary entry just to do nothing with it. It’s gimmicky and disconnected from the story. If you were to remove the opening prologue, nothing would change.

    • @HiroshiMizushima
      @HiroshiMizushima 3 місяці тому +14

      Yeah, it made no sense. I was waiting for some sort of payoff but it quickly went into crazy eldritch nuclear monster town within minutes of the bombs going off. Like.. I dunno, I feel like that was *really* fast and there was no real lead-up to it.

    • @kamenwaticlients
      @kamenwaticlients 3 місяці тому +13

      Agreed. Also, “When you have to shoot, shoot, don’t talk!” One of my most disliked tropes of story writing. Also loosing the weapon and dropping the weapon and running away after using it once.

    • @michaelq92
      @michaelq92 3 місяці тому +4

      I don’t think it was on purpose but if you think about it he almost definitely caused the war by by using his future journal to rig the stock market then execute massive shorts against the Chinese in assumption of a war against them with Taiwan. Like If it’s like a double closed time loop were in each new iteration only has the last dairy before the previous’s death but it’s a weird self fulfilling prophecy where everything becomes more dangerous as the world teeters closer to destruction but he’s not sure if he’s causing it. Sometimes I miss quantum leap.

    • @panserbjrn4804
      @panserbjrn4804 3 місяці тому +8

      @@michaelq92yea, I think you’re definitely doing the heavy lifting for the author lol.
      The only issue with this is that the future diary doesn’t read as if he is already informed of the events of the future.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому

      ​@@michaelq92
      Reminds me of that RL Stine episode of The Nightmare Room Dear Diary I'm Dead.

  • @magickodaly_
    @magickodaly_ 3 місяці тому +29

    My new drinking game;
    take a shot every time “that’s when… I heard/saw it.” and see how many pastas you make it through before you’re on the floor

    • @adgato75
      @adgato75 2 місяці тому +1

      I used to donate $1 to charity every time i saw a pasta with "rules" or "i hunt" in the title. I'm homeless now.

  • @Blasfamous8
    @Blasfamous8 3 місяці тому +44

    Well written and beautifully narrated but the story itself felt extremely disjointed… it started with some time traveling type scenario and a storyline started that disappeared without intersecting with the rest of the story in any way at all. Then there was a doomsday apocalypse from global nuclear annihilation. Then there’s some sci fi ghoulish cosmic entity that appears for no reason and they die. No explanation, nothing threading the events together… it was more like a deeply unsatisfying vignette of three stories with no endings that bled into one another and abruptly ended.

    • @Cander617
      @Cander617 3 місяці тому

      True

    • @panserbjrn4804
      @panserbjrn4804 2 місяці тому

      @@Blasfamous8 couldn’t have said it better myself

  • @broadcastbard
    @broadcastbard 3 місяці тому +212

    It's nuts how every narrator remembers every detail of every conversations they've had in a day yet I forget if I've finished the last of a can of water a minute ago.

    • @BronzeDragon133
      @BronzeDragon133 3 місяці тому +11

      Yeah, I can't remember the task I did at 11 AM because it was one of the fifty.

    • @VictorRobotov00
      @VictorRobotov00 3 місяці тому +11

      Haha!
      Me, I’ll be explaining something or talking for a bit, or whatever, and then I’ll stop, think for a moment and say out loud “umm…I don’t know where I was going with this”. Then just walk off. Happens more often than I’d like to admit.

    • @iamjohnrobot
      @iamjohnrobot 3 місяці тому +18

      A can of water!? What is this world coming to

    • @pepito69
      @pepito69 3 місяці тому +13

      ​@@iamjohnrobothe meant a bag of water

    • @RiceCubeTech
      @RiceCubeTech 3 місяці тому +3

      @@pepito69he actually meant the toilet bowl full of water.

  • @AustinCDavis
    @AustinCDavis 3 місяці тому +46

    Why do some of the stories you choose start so promisingly then take an abrupt turn into nonsense? The whole war followed by the creepy guy following them was interesting, but then he shows up as some unexplained, unstoppable demon fire monster? What did that have to do with the war, and why was he picking on these people?

    • @pinatttt
      @pinatttt 3 місяці тому +14

      There is no explanation to how the journal time-traveled to his house either

    • @SirSipness
      @SirSipness 3 місяці тому +5

      Todd Howard: it just works guys

    • @lukepeverelle7707
      @lukepeverelle7707 3 місяці тому +10

      Fully agreed. What the hell was the point of that? I was hoping for some kind of story of attempting to survive in the fresh nuclear hellscape against fellow survivors, radiation, etc. but then it gets railroaded by some eldritch fire demon? Stupid ending. And the diary as a story device didn't even need to be there! If you cut that first but out and start with the road trip, nothing much changes.

    • @krystian9186
      @krystian9186 3 місяці тому +5

      @@pinatttt I'm pretty sure the story was just supposed to be the diary bit, and the time travel stuff was added later to meet Nosleep's stupid rules that the story cannot be easily disproven or that the main character needs to have a way to post his story. Saw this once already with a different story.

  • @duckduckduckduckduckduckdu2201
    @duckduckduckduckduckduckdu2201 3 місяці тому +61

    A bit unconventional but it would be cool if you did a video of your personal top 10 favorite stories you've covered, especially since you've been doing this for almost 15 years now

  • @Kristopher2022
    @Kristopher2022 3 місяці тому +51

    I've been listening to these for over a decade it's surreal

    • @DeanJMU
      @DeanJMU 3 місяці тому +4

      Shit makes me feel old

    • @ejae4063
      @ejae4063 3 місяці тому +3

      idk what id do if these guys ever stopped

    • @winstonwins1096
      @winstonwins1096 3 місяці тому +8

      With how terrible movies and shows have gotten these have become my main source of entertainment over the years. I would so much rather listen to a good story than watch any of the crap the Hollywood Disney Entertainment monopoly shovels out

    • @DylanZ1201
      @DylanZ1201 3 місяці тому +3

      I’ve been listening since I was a teen, now I’m almost 30 😢

  • @albister
    @albister 3 місяці тому +18

    Stephanie never learned stop, drop, and roll

    • @kevincaruthers5412
      @kevincaruthers5412 2 місяці тому +1

      That's what I thought!
      Probably wouldn't have worked. Magic fire and all that.
      But she should have at least tried it.

    • @albister
      @albister 2 місяці тому +1

      @kevincaruthers5412 if I fall out or off of anything extremely high up, I'm flapping my arms. You never know with magic

  • @DaveTexas
    @DaveTexas 3 місяці тому +4

    Why is this a time-traveling journal? What purpose does having this story come from someone’s journal that was found in the burned ruins of his house? It wasn’t even written like a journal entry. It’s nothing more than an alt-future story…and not even an interesting one.

  • @ListlessAnachronisms
    @ListlessAnachronisms 3 місяці тому +3

    Everything in this story felt disconnected. Almost laughable just how excruciatingly nonsensical this was.

  • @kamenwaticlients
    @kamenwaticlients 3 місяці тому +3

    Always remember, “When you have to shoot, shoot, don’t talk!” One of my most disliked tropes of story writing. Also loosing the weapon and dropping the weapon and running away after using it once.

  • @judgment5265
    @judgment5265 3 місяці тому +4

    The scariest part of this creepypasta was listening about the Chinese invasion of Taiwan…as a citizen of Taiwan. 💀

    • @YokaiX
      @YokaiX 3 місяці тому

      Russia failing in Ukraine has China thinking twice

    • @tradingsteve
      @tradingsteve 3 місяці тому

      Rip bud

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому +11

    This reminds me of The Nightmare Room Dear Diary I'm Dead by RL Stine.

  • @BronzeDragon133
    @BronzeDragon133 3 місяці тому +9

    I'm tired enough this evening that I read this as, "I found a diarrhea from my future self." From my future self, this would not surprise me.

  • @sighthoundlady15
    @sighthoundlady15 3 місяці тому +6

    Well that was horrible.

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor 3 місяці тому +7

    hello from vault 101

  • @roserussell7826
    @roserussell7826 3 місяці тому +3

    My immediate thought was of Randall Flagg, The Walking Dude.

  • @HiroshiMizushima
    @HiroshiMizushima 3 місяці тому +3

    I feel like anyone who has written over a thousand journals by the time they're 20 already has a serious problem, before we even get to anything else in the story. Hell, the "story" made it seem as if the guy had been writing this journal while all the chaos was happening. And who the hell feels the need to write down in minute detail how someone died?
    ...and let's be honest, he could've finished the monster off while it was on the ground. Never mind that it comes out of nowhere just to fulfill some strange need to even have a monster. I dunno, the whole thing just felt stilted and awkward to listen to. I kept waiting for some payoff.
    Creeps' narration was wonderful and that's why I kept listening but...

  • @jake199376
    @jake199376 3 місяці тому +4

    It’s basically the creepypasta version of the fallout video game series plot

  • @emilywillard5389
    @emilywillard5389 3 місяці тому +4

    I recently came across your channel Creeps and I have been obssessed ever since. Thank you for such great storytelling 😊 Also your voice is so calming! ❤

  • @youbetyourwrasse
    @youbetyourwrasse 3 місяці тому +2

    I found a Journal to my Furutre Self. It said "QUIT JOURNALING AND DO."

  • @kevincaruthers5412
    @kevincaruthers5412 2 місяці тому +2

    Ending doesn't fit the story.
    No hint of an explanation of how the diary got from the rocky cave at the end to the burned house at the beginning.
    More thought seemed to be given to the mechanics of being burned alive.
    Guy didn't even think to put a bullet in his girlfriend's head to save her from burning to death.
    Or dragging the guy's body away from the fragments of his skull so the worms would take longer to stitch him back together.
    (There is a reason (in folklore) you burn the body and then scatter the ashes into 7 different rivers.)
    .
    Post apocalypse stories can be done well.
    This is not one.

    • @kevincaruthers5412
      @kevincaruthers5412 2 місяці тому

      PS Just told my wife about this and we both agreed. If we were burning alive, we would be begging the other to end the torment.
      We also both agreed we would first; Stop Drop and Roll to see if we could put out the flames.

  • @lisasmith9536
    @lisasmith9536 3 місяці тому +3

    Love your voice creepsmcpasta. You always send me off to sleep. Keep up the good work ❤

  • @YuriSupporter
    @YuriSupporter 3 місяці тому +1

    At 130 mph for 20 minutes they should be out of range from even China’s 5MT nuclear warheads, how did the car got flipped

  • @Ashamanknight
    @Ashamanknight 3 місяці тому +2

    What was the point of the diary??

  • @DragonBorn-ij3wz
    @DragonBorn-ij3wz 3 місяці тому +1

    I kinda wish that the story would back and forth between the journe entrees and the guy reading them especially since the journey is from the future

  • @Dbldareu2
    @Dbldareu2 2 місяці тому +1

    Listen starting from 2:53. Trust me like you've trusted no one else before. I wish I had a future diary that told me that.

  • @zeyface6366
    @zeyface6366 3 місяці тому +1

    I usually never say things like this but that end monster was more hilarious than it was scary
    I like the narrations but he should really try to pick better stories than he often does

  • @birdyboy3483
    @birdyboy3483 3 місяці тому +2

    Sup

  • @lavasharkandboygirl9716
    @lavasharkandboygirl9716 3 місяці тому +1

    So the creature is a mimic from The Gas Station universe?

  • @MrTable678
    @MrTable678 3 місяці тому +3

    Fall asleep to this and ignore the hunger

  • @KingBullDogg
    @KingBullDogg 3 місяці тому +2

    Yo

  • @pk.002
    @pk.002 3 місяці тому +6

    Perfect timing, Creeps uploads a banger during my break. 👌

  • @starlightmoon950
    @starlightmoon950 3 місяці тому +1

    Now its summer holiday i can hear your story all day!!🎂👍

  • @danajones9631
    @danajones9631 3 місяці тому

    It left me wondering so you started reading the diary and I get it was intense but then did you realize you were just reading horrifying story that look like your handwriting but maybevit was coming and it was trying to warn you, interesting short, Thanks Creeps😳🤯

  • @cherub3624
    @cherub3624 Місяць тому

    Terrible. Could have been interesting with the plot just sticking to nuclear war but it had to inevitably turn into some try-hard random monster.

  • @Dr_1212
    @Dr_1212 3 місяці тому +1

    😈

  • @ScullyPop
    @ScullyPop 3 місяці тому +1

    Phenomenal reading channel.

  • @yo_its_rabbid
    @yo_its_rabbid 3 місяці тому

    creeps my man or somebody pls help me
    in search of the creepypasta of the boy who is raised as an android and is forced to read books to learn how to fix shit so his dad can pimp him to people for money but the boy becomes self aware please help

  • @khtauhidislam7505
    @khtauhidislam7505 3 місяці тому +1

  • @KingBullDogg
    @KingBullDogg 3 місяці тому +1

    Been here since 2011

  • @robinthespider9447
    @robinthespider9447 3 місяці тому +1

    It's wonderful to still be here after nearly 8 years.

  • @Zer0ne-Infinite
    @Zer0ne-Infinite 2 місяці тому

    Why didn't he just write down the football scores smh, you had one job

  • @arsacyclopentadiene6865
    @arsacyclopentadiene6865 3 місяці тому +1

    Damn

  • @RuthTurner-wv8go
    @RuthTurner-wv8go 2 місяці тому

    It was okay, good premise, but could have been a whole lot better

  • @NootOfRoses
    @NootOfRoses 3 місяці тому +1

    4/10

  • @sonic55193
    @sonic55193 23 дні тому

    "You're awake" - wakes up in fallout world*

  • @Drina00
    @Drina00 3 місяці тому

    pls dont turn this into a very bad but weirdly enjoyable anime

  • @Pabloworldwide
    @Pabloworldwide 3 місяці тому

    Thank you as always Creeps. Hope you are doing well.

  • @authorauthority7193
    @authorauthority7193 3 місяці тому

    Hey china cant invade! Thats nato's job!

  • @DIFFEARTH
    @DIFFEARTH 3 місяці тому

    Hello I've always been fascinated from your videos and stories that's why I decide to make my own creepypasta channel but I wanted an advice can you tell me on what volume is your speaking and back ground music? I appreciate if you answer thank you again for the amazing stories and inspiration ❤

    • @crytlmeen
      @crytlmeen 3 місяці тому

      ᒪᗰᗩO! 🙄He doesn’t engage with his audience at all

  • @doodleartlover
    @doodleartlover 3 місяці тому +1

    Awesome!

  • @aethersflamessv
    @aethersflamessv 3 місяці тому

    hearing this story as a Taiwanese person was 😰😨

  • @carloswalter7321
    @carloswalter7321 3 місяці тому

    I appreciate another great video! ❤

  • @Atomaurus
    @Atomaurus 3 місяці тому +5

    Got my popcorn ready

  • @nicholascuarenta8757
    @nicholascuarenta8757 3 місяці тому

    Hey creeps I’m a long time fan I’ve been watching your videos for honestly as long as you can remember I’m not sure what’s been going on but I’ve noticed you haven’t been posting very frequently I hope everything’s been okay and you keep up the good work these stories are a part of my daily life I just wanted to say it😅

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 3 місяці тому

    Damn CMP, that was one of the most horrifying stories I’ve heard in a long time! The realism of the whole thing was as if a nuclear weapon had indeed landed within a few hundred miles from them. And when he did see the man for the first time, I hadn’t quite made up my mind as to whether he was a total vision, or a paranormal entity. It hadn’t been long enough for radioactivity to affect the human body to such an extent, but if you’re already 9/10 of the way there, it’s just enough! And what he became was so incredibly well, scary, that I was just hoping that he’d find a way out. When he said that he indeed had a gun, I had a little hope. But he was not a good shot, and allowed his wife to be taken and had to watch her burn to death while still alive. I personally cannot imagine a worse scenario than that. To see the love of your life literally burn to death and to hear her screaming all the while, to me that is it’s very own Hell on earth. And he didn’t really seem to try to do as much as he could to help? Maybe I underestimated how hard he’d been struck. Or maybe he was making his way over, but it just drove me crazy knowing that all that time he hadn’t really done anything! I’m definitely getting too involved in this one! It’s pulling on my emotions too hard which makes it an excellent story. My praise to the author!

  • @skeekersh1179
    @skeekersh1179 2 місяці тому

    Disjointed story. And as an American this is a little too racist/anti-Chinese for me

    • @ICE-Rouge
      @ICE-Rouge 2 місяці тому +1

      Hate to burst your bubble but the threat of China on Taiwan is very much real.

  • @madsfeldborg5130
    @madsfeldborg5130 3 місяці тому

    So this just fallout. Got it.

  • @95mudshovel
    @95mudshovel 3 місяці тому

    I regret eating during this one.

  • @Goldwodka
    @Goldwodka 3 місяці тому

    Thank you soooo much!!!!!!

  • @sebastianacevedo9444
    @sebastianacevedo9444 3 місяці тому

    War. War never changes

  • @lee8
    @lee8 Місяць тому

    Love this one!!

  • @doinfine7279
    @doinfine7279 2 місяці тому

    6:06 ONE PIECE ref

  • @OIdPudding
    @OIdPudding Місяць тому

    can of water?

  • @nightmare4lol
    @nightmare4lol 3 місяці тому

    oh hey, caelid

  • @Mr-qh4km
    @Mr-qh4km 3 місяці тому

    I will always appreciate your vids creeps, they help me sleep like a baby!

  • @ravensthatflywiththenightm7319
    @ravensthatflywiththenightm7319 3 місяці тому

    Hi there. Is this channel open to submissions?

  • @lilfreshieBrat
    @lilfreshieBrat 3 місяці тому

    ❤❤❤❤❤💣❤❤❤❤❤

  • @-JA-
    @-JA- 3 місяці тому

    🖤👍

  • @victoredgefield141
    @victoredgefield141 3 місяці тому

    Magnificent ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ bravo to the author!

  • @narcissisticnihilist9718
    @narcissisticnihilist9718 3 місяці тому +1

    that was a great story, thank you

  • @stevenbuzinkai767
    @stevenbuzinkai767 3 місяці тому

    Good story. You are an excellent reader.

  • @nightmarefuel3004
    @nightmarefuel3004 3 місяці тому +1

    such a good story! good narration as always i love time travelish stories!

  • @dascooter8287
    @dascooter8287 3 місяці тому

    Excellent!

  • @thebernice6062
    @thebernice6062 3 місяці тому +1

    Meh... not that good. The USAF doesn't keep ICBMs in Arizona. Our missile wings are spread out around Minot AFB, ND, F.E. Warren AFB, WY, and Malmstrom AFB, MT. We don't really keep stockpiles in Arizona. The author is mixing up Arizona and New Mexico. Kirtland AFB and Sandia National Labs in Albuquerque is what he's thinking of. A warhead re-entering the atmosphere happens in the blink of an eye, there's no smoke trail to see.

  • @RiDankulous
    @RiDankulous 3 місяці тому +1

    I wish my 8 year old self got a diary from my future self that would say 'start a whole food plant based diet now! Life would be way better for at least 40 years of my life.

  • @hmantc712
    @hmantc712 3 місяці тому +3

    Awkward moment when me (Taiwanese) and my wife (Chinese) when we start the story

    • @xXJLNINJAXx
      @xXJLNINJAXx 3 місяці тому

      You guys live in murica?

    • @hmantc712
      @hmantc712 3 місяці тому

      @@xXJLNINJAXx yeah, we live at Cali

  • @aliceshannara3343
    @aliceshannara3343 3 місяці тому +4

    FIRST ONE HERE! Keep it up you MadLad!! Live for these pastas.

  • @5alpha23
    @5alpha23 3 місяці тому +1

    For a much better experience, only listen from 2:53 on!

  • @artist_thick4752
    @artist_thick4752 3 місяці тому +2

    I love the story RAAAAAAH💪💪💪

  • @kagevanwagoner
    @kagevanwagoner 3 місяці тому +1

    I needed this upload. Thank you! Truly, you’re saving people out here

  • @stonedjasonvoorhees5959
    @stonedjasonvoorhees5959 3 місяці тому +3

    I ain't no taco man that's for sure

    • @victoredgefield141
      @victoredgefield141 3 місяці тому

      Yes you are you are a taco and will be devoured. And pooped out.

  • @laiatezenas3300
    @laiatezenas3300 3 місяці тому

    It was an excellent story until the protagonist silently watched his gf burn alive (why didn't he try to help her? He had time to watch and threaten the other guy, but not to try and save her?) and then proceeeded to write in his journal.
    Did he stay there, in a destroyed tent, next to her charred corpse, to write in his journal?
    I'm so disappointed because the beginning was truly intriguing and promising.
    None the less, you narrated this short story very well! 🙏🏼👏🏼

  • @taylorfain6957
    @taylorfain6957 3 місяці тому

    Woooooh this is amazing. Round of applause for the author. 😊

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 3 місяці тому

    Whoop Whoop homies
    ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

  • @CatEnthusiast-gr3cv
    @CatEnthusiast-gr3cv 3 місяці тому

    Taiwan #1!

  • @LuisaD93
    @LuisaD93 3 місяці тому

    This was terrifying 😮

  • @raxxramiz3969
    @raxxramiz3969 3 місяці тому

    The music is too loud

  • @DatOneSwedishBoi69
    @DatOneSwedishBoi69 3 місяці тому

    Awesome job!